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"writing": "[center]~Note: this takes place in it’s own universe completely separate from McInTots or “Into A Tizzy”~\n\nIsabelle Lisa McIntosh and Taylor Ryan McIntosh\n\nin\n\nUnexpecttraction, Vol. 3\n\nChapter 2\n\nNerves\n\nby the kzx[/center]\n\n Soon, there were no sounds of showering anywhere in the McIntosh household; only the sounds of rummaging and general movement in the two bathrooms could be heard. Izzy slipped out of her parents’ bedroom, carrying all her bath stuff and wearing only a towel, still dripping some. She ran to her room to get her clothes, hoping to avoid running into Tay, but he was nowhere to be seen or heard. ‘He might already be downstairs; don’t keep him waiting!’ she thought.\n\n Tay was already out of the shower, clothed, downstairs. He had felt a swishy-swashy feeling inside him; probably nerves. As he waited in the living room, he still wished he had cologne or something. At the bottom, he located his and Izzy’s coats in the entry closet. He imagined putting his coat on and handing Izzy’s hers, like a married couple. Tay smiled and closed his eyes, swooning over the idea. \n Mittens… where were his mittens? It’s cold as a bugger outside! He reached in his coat pocket and found them immediately, sighing.\n\n Izzy was standing in her parents’ still steamy bathroom, fully clothed, looking in the large mirror, trying to look her best. She grabbed her glasses. Ack, too foggy… Squinting, she tried to see.\n “The mirror is foggy, too…” she said outloud, quickly wondering why she did.\n\n “Oh, man… oh, man…” Tay muttered to himself, unable to sit still. He paced. Maybe pacing would cause sweating… “I can’t sit still! I’m gonna sweat either way!” Tay said, panicking. He’d never been nervous about seeing his sister before; this was crazy! He heard a noise near the stairs. The well-dressed dingo boy ran over and stood near the stairs. He looked up and his heart fluttered.\n\n Izzy was in a fix. Her shoes didn’t want to fit on her feet! ‘Are my feet bigger for some reason?!’ she thought, attempting to hammer them on with her fists. Why was this… oh…\n “Heh… I’m an idiot…” she said, switching them around so that the left went on the left foot, right on the right foot. She sighed nervously into her paw; she was such a bundle of nerves! It was only Tay… “But… it IS only Tay…” she said, smiling and giggling.\n\n Soon, Tay realized he had heard something else; it wasn’t what he was expecting. ‘She must be still getting ready.’ he thought, ‘Girls do that, don’t they?’ He turned, paws in pockets, nervous. ‘Boy,’ he thought, ‘that’s the word of the night, huh? ‘Nerves,’ hehehe…’ Then, he heard it, like a song.\n “Tay?” It was his sister’s voice. His heart raced and he turned to look up the stairs and there she was: Isabelle Lisa McIntosh, Tay’s twin sister, dressed up in a light blue blouse, pink skirt that ended just at her knees, hair up in a ponytail, just like it was back on their first day in the jacuzzi… with a bright pink bow on the side. She also wore a some pink lipstick and wore her cute little black and pink shoes. She was absolute perfection and made Tay’s heart melt. Her glasses were perfectly cleaned and the rims were shining, reflecting the stairway’s golden light.\n\n “Tay?” Izzy said gently, coming around the corner landing of the stairs and looking down, seeing him handsomely waiting near the base of the stairs, smiling up at her. He was wearing a black shirt with dark gray pants and black shoes that may have had some shine to them. She remembered this outfit; Mummy bought it all for him when they went to a dignitary’s dinner party one time downtown and it was the only time Tay ever wore it. Luckily, it all still fit him perfectly. He had his hair parted a bit, but still messed up as, hey, it was Tay, afterall. \n She felt giddy at how adorable the dingo boy was. When Izzy got to the bottom, Tay approached her gentleman-like and took her paw in his, raising it to his lips and kissing it, gently letting it back down. Izzy was blushing so much, she wasn’t sure if it matched her lipstick or not. \n “Y’know, I don’t like girls who wear make-up or lipstick,” Tay started, making Izzy flush with embarrassment, “but it looks beautiful on you, my love.” Izzy swooned at her boyfriend.\n “Thank you, Tay.” she said, admiring how grown-up he was trying to be. “You know, Tay, you don’t have to be all… grown-up for me; just be yourself. That’s who I fell in love with, right?” she said. Tay’s eyebrows twinged.\n “Sure, I guess.” he said, seeming to relax some. Izzy grabbed her coat and put it on.\n “Let’s go have some fun!” she said.\n\n The twins began walking to the nearest monorail station, just outside of the nearby mall two blocks away. They threw on their mittens and beanies to shield from the biting cold. At least there was no wind. Stepping through the silent, snow-covered streets, Izzy couldn’t help but wrap her arms around Tay’s arm, laying her head on his shoulder.\n “This snow is so beautiful…” Izzy said, looking at how the powdery white twinkled in the passing lights.\n “Do… you care if I’m… lame?” Tay asked. Izzy’s ears perked under her beanie. She lifted her head a bit, looking at him.\n “What do you mean?”\n “Well… you said the snow is so beautiful…” Tay started, sounding nervous.\n “Yeah…”\n “Well… I was gonna say ‘no, you are.’” Tay turned away from Izzy, blushing too hard. Izzy felt like it was the most adorable thing ever. She smiled, turning his head to face her.\n “Tay, you can be as lame as you like. That was very sweet.” she said, smiling. Tay smiled back. The lights of the station came into view along with the busy nightlife along Thomas Rd and the twins eased up on clinging to each other now that they were more visible to people.\n “Got your pass, right?” Izzy asked Tay as they approached the monorail station just across the street from JustMart in the mall parking lot. Tay nodded.\n “I made absolutely sure not to forget that.” he said, looking ahead. Izzy looked at her brother hard. He was a lot better recently in ways he’d always been lacking. Maybe he’s really not so dumb; maybe he’s just… silly. Izzy smiled.\n\n The twins made it up to the station and into the train with no one recognizing either of them. They didn’t see anyone they knew or anyone they’d ever seen before. So far, the night was a success. \n On the train, conversation was small and dealt mainly with what they saw as the city moved past them. The snowy caps of all the trees and buildings, the piercing array of lights in the midst of a calm winter. They'd been on this trip many times before growing up, but now it was as if every single little thing was important to look at in new light.\n Tay looked over at his sister, who stared out the window of the train. The profile of her beautiful face accented by her glasses and beanie, mouth open in a smile as she admired the view outside, was so perfect. He wanted to make some noise to make her turn to look at him, that gorgeous face and those eyes... those pretty green eyes... He had the same eyes, of course, but his weren't pretty; of course not!\n\n As she looked out, Izzy’s breath fogged up the chilly window with every breath, something she was sometimes self-conscious about as it was, I dunno, weird to breath a lot. 'Well, not unless you're having sex...' she thought, squirming a little in her seat. She thought about her brother, her lover seated right next to her. His face, Tay's face. She had a strong need to look at it, look at him, look at those eyes. She turned to her brothern who was already looking. There it is.\n\n 'There it is.' Tay thought as his sister turned to him, smiling. He smiled back.\n\n \"So, what movie should we see?\" Izzy started, settling fully into her seat, paws in her lap. Tay thought for a minute.\n \"I think the trip got me all jumbled up.\" He said, digging out his phone. \"I don't even know what's out.\"\n \"Well, it's late January, so most movie will have been out a while since Christmas.\" Izzy said, leaning back. She put her paws in her jacket pockets and looked up, kicking her feet a bit.\n “Ahh… here’s one I wanted to see: [i]Blood of the Sinister Walrus![/i]” Tay said, excitedly looking at his phone. Izzy gave him a dreadful look.\n “Tay… no… we’re on a date; that’s not a date movie.”\n “People go to scary movies on dates all the time!”\n “Not that kind of scary movie! It’s supposedly so bad on gore, it almost got a higher rating!” Izzy exclaimed.\n “Whoa, really?!” Tay said, an excited look on his face, turning to his sister with a big grin. Izzy grabbed the phone partially still in Tay’s mittens, looking at it.\n “It’s rated R, Tay! We couldn’t even try to get in!” she said. Tay shrugged.\n “We could sneak in…” the dingo boy said. Izzy became exasperated, leaning back again.\n “You don’t sneak into a movie on your first date, Tay; that could screw everything up.”\n “But, it looks so cool and scary!”\n “Tay, no. That’s not a scary movie; it’s, like, gore pornogra– gorenography, Tay!”\n “Whoa, does that mean it’s, like, got boobies in it n stuff?” Tay asked, excited again. Izzy gave him a stern, serious look, pointing at her chest.\n “These are the only ‘boobies’ you need to worry about.” She said, a smile escaping her face. The two shared a laugh. “Anyway, we dont HAVE to see a movie.”\n “Yes, we DO have to cus thats what adults do on dates.”\n “Is it cus of what you’ve seen on TV and movies?” Izzy asked, sitting sideways now.\n “Yes, I’m an expert!”\n “Mister Never-been-on-a-date-before is an expert, I see…”\n “Hey… what?”\n “Soooooome expert…” Izzy said sarcastically.\n “Maybe I’m a expert in things that have never happened!”\n “I’m pretty sure people DO go to movies on dates, it’s that they probably don’t ALWAYS go.”\n “They ALWAYS go on TV and movies, so must be true!” Tay said, looking back at his phone.\n “We’ll just see what’s playing in Rivertown.” Izzy said just as a familiar adult voice hit her ears.\n “Why, if it ain’t the little McIntosh twins!” The twins turned to see Mrs. Talfur, a marmoset with big, poofy hair and a big, fluffy jacket, approach them from another car. The twins looked up at her, Tay pocketing his phone.\n “Hi, Mrs. Talfur!” Izzy said, waving. \n “Hello, Isabelle!” the lady said, sitting across from the kids. Tay looked strangely at her.\n “Who’s this?” he said, rudely pointing. Izzy lowered his paw.\n “This is Mrs. Talfur, a friend of Mum and Dad’s, remember? She–”\n “Oh, yeah, Mrs. Talfur…” Tay trailed off. Izzy and Mrs. Talfur chuckled.\n “So, you two are looking nicely dressed!” she said. Izzy looked around at her and Tay, having forgotten how well they looked. She smiled.\n “Yeah, we’re out for a good time in Rivertown!” the dingo girl said.\n “Isabelle, you are particularly beautiful.”\n “Hehe, thank you, ma’am.” Izzy said, blushing.\n “What’s the occasion, dear, just for a night out?” the marmoset women asked, big smile. Izzy thought quickly for a reason.\n “Well… maybe I’ll meet a boy!” she said, looking away to Tay, who instantly looked annoyed and bothered. She tried to give him a knowing look, but it didn’t seem to take.\n “Well, deary, you might actually catch one looking that pretty!” Mrs. Talfur said, “Y’know, I have this wonderful grandson about your age. He’s also a marmoset, and very handsome. I could introduce you–” Mrs. Talfur was cut off by Tay, standing suddenly.\n “She’s not for sale!” he said, angerly. Mrs. Talfur looked at his weirdly.\n “Haha, I’m not trying to buy you sister, Taylor.” she chuckled. Izzy’s heart fluttered at Tay’s defensive behavior. Was he defending her as a brother, or as a lover?\n “Tay, it’s okay.” Izzy said, pulling at his jacket. Mrs. Talfur stood up, smiling.\n “It was just a suggestion, love.”\n “Sorry, he gets defensive of his sister.” Izzy said, smiling big.\n \"Perfectly understandable, my dear. I have a brother, too. He would do the same whenever a boy even talked to me, hahaha.\" Mrs. Talfur and Izzy laughed. Tay relaxed and finally sat back down, slumped in his seat, looking away. \"Well, I'll leave you two to your night out. Say hi to your mom and dad for me! Bye!”\n “Bye, Mrs. Talfur!” Izzy said, waving as the marmoset lady left for the next car. Izzy turned to her brother. \"Tay... I know you wanna defend and protect me... that was just a cover up; I’m not REALLY hoping to meet a boy.” she said to an almost unmoving Tay. “It’s sweet, but no more close calls, okay?\"\n \"No strange marmalade boy is gonna get MY Izzy.\" Tay said, hugging himself.\n \"‘Marmoset,’ Tay. And dont worry; my heart belongs to you.\" Izzy said, holding Tay’s paw. She squeezed and he squeezed back, looking at her and sitting up. The two smiled and looked around the car, swooping back to each other for a quick kiss.",
"writing_bbcode_parsed": "~Note: this takes place in it’s own universe completely separate from McInTots or “Into A Tizzy”~
Isabelle Lisa McIntosh and Taylor Ryan McIntosh
in
Unexpecttraction, Vol. 3
Chapter 2
Nerves
by the kzx
Soon, there were no sounds of showering anywhere in the McIntosh household; only the sounds of rummaging and general movement in the two bathrooms could be heard. Izzy slipped out of her parents’ bedroom, carrying all her bath stuff and wearing only a towel, still dripping some. She ran to her room to get her clothes, hoping to avoid running into Tay, but he was nowhere to be seen or heard. ‘He might already be downstairs; don’t keep him waiting!’ she thought.
Tay was already out of the shower, clothed, downstairs. He had felt a swishy-swashy feeling inside him; probably nerves. As he waited in the living room, he still wished he had cologne or something. At the bottom, he located his and Izzy’s coats in the entry closet. He imagined putting his coat on and handing Izzy’s hers, like a married couple. Tay smiled and closed his eyes, swooning over the idea.
Mittens… where were his mittens? It’s cold as a bugger outside! He reached in his coat pocket and found them immediately, sighing.
Izzy was standing in her parents’ still steamy bathroom, fully clothed, looking in the large mirror, trying to look her best. She grabbed her glasses. Ack, too foggy… Squinting, she tried to see.
“The mirror is foggy, too…” she said outloud, quickly wondering why she did.
“Oh, man… oh, man…” Tay muttered to himself, unable to sit still. He paced. Maybe pacing would cause sweating… “I can’t sit still! I’m gonna sweat either way!” Tay said, panicking. He’d never been nervous about seeing his sister before; this was crazy! He heard a noise near the stairs. The well-dressed dingo boy ran over and stood near the stairs. He looked up and his heart fluttered.
Izzy was in a fix. Her shoes didn’t want to fit on her feet! ‘Are my feet bigger for some reason?!’ she thought, attempting to hammer them on with her fists. Why was this… oh…
“Heh… I’m an idiot…” she said, switching them around so that the left went on the left foot, right on the right foot. She sighed nervously into her paw; she was such a bundle of nerves! It was only Tay… “But… it IS only Tay…” she said, smiling and giggling.
Soon, Tay realized he had heard something else; it wasn’t what he was expecting. ‘She must be still getting ready.’ he thought, ‘Girls do that, don’t they?’ He turned, paws in pockets, nervous. ‘Boy,’ he thought, ‘that’s the word of the night, huh? ‘Nerves,’ hehehe…’ Then, he heard it, like a song.
“Tay?” It was his sister’s voice. His heart raced and he turned to look up the stairs and there she was: Isabelle Lisa McIntosh, Tay’s twin sister, dressed up in a light blue blouse, pink skirt that ended just at her knees, hair up in a ponytail, just like it was back on their first day in the jacuzzi… with a bright pink bow on the side. She also wore a some pink lipstick and wore her cute little black and pink shoes. She was absolute perfection and made Tay’s heart melt. Her glasses were perfectly cleaned and the rims were shining, reflecting the stairway’s golden light.
“Tay?” Izzy said gently, coming around the corner landing of the stairs and looking down, seeing him handsomely waiting near the base of the stairs, smiling up at her. He was wearing a black shirt with dark gray pants and black shoes that may have had some shine to them. She remembered this outfit; Mummy bought it all for him when they went to a dignitary’s dinner party one time downtown and it was the only time Tay ever wore it. Luckily, it all still fit him perfectly. He had his hair parted a bit, but still messed up as, hey, it was Tay, afterall.
She felt giddy at how adorable the dingo boy was. When Izzy got to the bottom, Tay approached her gentleman-like and took her paw in his, raising it to his lips and kissing it, gently letting it back down. Izzy was blushing so much, she wasn’t sure if it matched her lipstick or not.
“Y’know, I don’t like girls who wear make-up or lipstick,” Tay started, making Izzy flush with embarrassment, “but it looks beautiful on you, my love.” Izzy swooned at her boyfriend.
“Thank you, Tay.” she said, admiring how grown-up he was trying to be. “You know, Tay, you don’t have to be all… grown-up for me; just be yourself. That’s who I fell in love with, right?” she said. Tay’s eyebrows twinged.
“Sure, I guess.” he said, seeming to relax some. Izzy grabbed her coat and put it on.
“Let’s go have some fun!” she said.
The twins began walking to the nearest monorail station, just outside of the nearby mall two blocks away. They threw on their mittens and beanies to shield from the biting cold. At least there was no wind. Stepping through the silent, snow-covered streets, Izzy couldn’t help but wrap her arms around Tay’s arm, laying her head on his shoulder.
“This snow is so beautiful…” Izzy said, looking at how the powdery white twinkled in the passing lights.
“Do… you care if I’m… lame?” Tay asked. Izzy’s ears perked under her beanie. She lifted her head a bit, looking at him.
“What do you mean?”
“Well… you said the snow is so beautiful…” Tay started, sounding nervous.
“Yeah…”
“Well… I was gonna say ‘no, you are.’” Tay turned away from Izzy, blushing too hard. Izzy felt like it was the most adorable thing ever. She smiled, turning his head to face her.
“Tay, you can be as lame as you like. That was very sweet.” she said, smiling. Tay smiled back. The lights of the station came into view along with the busy nightlife along Thomas Rd and the twins eased up on clinging to each other now that they were more visible to people.
“Got your pass, right?” Izzy asked Tay as they approached the monorail station just across the street from JustMart in the mall parking lot. Tay nodded.
“I made absolutely sure not to forget that.” he said, looking ahead. Izzy looked at her brother hard. He was a lot better recently in ways he’d always been lacking. Maybe he’s really not so dumb; maybe he’s just… silly. Izzy smiled.
The twins made it up to the station and into the train with no one recognizing either of them. They didn’t see anyone they knew or anyone they’d ever seen before. So far, the night was a success.
On the train, conversation was small and dealt mainly with what they saw as the city moved past them. The snowy caps of all the trees and buildings, the piercing array of lights in the midst of a calm winter. They'd been on this trip many times before growing up, but now it was as if every single little thing was important to look at in new light.
Tay looked over at his sister, who stared out the window of the train. The profile of her beautiful face accented by her glasses and beanie, mouth open in a smile as she admired the view outside, was so perfect. He wanted to make some noise to make her turn to look at him, that gorgeous face and those eyes... those pretty green eyes... He had the same eyes, of course, but his weren't pretty; of course not!
As she looked out, Izzy’s breath fogged up the chilly window with every breath, something she was sometimes self-conscious about as it was, I dunno, weird to breath a lot. 'Well, not unless you're having sex...' she thought, squirming a little in her seat. She thought about her brother, her lover seated right next to her. His face, Tay's face. She had a strong need to look at it, look at him, look at those eyes. She turned to her brothern who was already looking. There it is.
'There it is.' Tay thought as his sister turned to him, smiling. He smiled back.
"So, what movie should we see?" Izzy started, settling fully into her seat, paws in her lap. Tay thought for a minute.
"I think the trip got me all jumbled up." He said, digging out his phone. "I don't even know what's out."
"Well, it's late January, so most movie will have been out a while since Christmas." Izzy said, leaning back. She put her paws in her jacket pockets and looked up, kicking her feet a bit.
“Ahh… here’s one I wanted to see: Blood of the Sinister Walrus!” Tay said, excitedly looking at his phone. Izzy gave him a dreadful look.
“Tay… no… we’re on a date; that’s not a date movie.”
“People go to scary movies on dates all the time!”
“Not that kind of scary movie! It’s supposedly so bad on gore, it almost got a higher rating!” Izzy exclaimed.
“Whoa, really?!” Tay said, an excited look on his face, turning to his sister with a big grin. Izzy grabbed the phone partially still in Tay’s mittens, looking at it.
“It’s rated R, Tay! We couldn’t even try to get in!” she said. Tay shrugged.
“We could sneak in…” the dingo boy said. Izzy became exasperated, leaning back again.
“You don’t sneak into a movie on your first date, Tay; that could screw everything up.”
“But, it looks so cool and scary!”
“Tay, no. That’s not a scary movie; it’s, like, gore pornogra– gorenography, Tay!”
“Whoa, does that mean it’s, like, got boobies in it n stuff?” Tay asked, excited again. Izzy gave him a stern, serious look, pointing at her chest.
“These are the only ‘boobies’ you need to worry about.” She said, a smile escaping her face. The two shared a laugh. “Anyway, we dont HAVE to see a movie.”
“Yes, we DO have to cus thats what adults do on dates.”
“Is it cus of what you’ve seen on TV and movies?” Izzy asked, sitting sideways now.
“Yes, I’m an expert!”
“Mister Never-been-on-a-date-before is an expert, I see…”
“Hey… what?”
“Soooooome expert…” Izzy said sarcastically.
“Maybe I’m a expert in things that have never happened!”
“I’m pretty sure people DO go to movies on dates, it’s that they probably don’t ALWAYS go.”
“They ALWAYS go on TV and movies, so must be true!” Tay said, looking back at his phone.
“We’ll just see what’s playing in Rivertown.” Izzy said just as a familiar adult voice hit her ears.
“Why, if it ain’t the little McIntosh twins!” The twins turned to see Mrs. Talfur, a marmoset with big, poofy hair and a big, fluffy jacket, approach them from another car. The twins looked up at her, Tay pocketing his phone.
“Hi, Mrs. Talfur!” Izzy said, waving.
“Hello, Isabelle!” the lady said, sitting across from the kids. Tay looked strangely at her.
“Who’s this?” he said, rudely pointing. Izzy lowered his paw.
“This is Mrs. Talfur, a friend of Mum and Dad’s, remember? She–”
“Oh, yeah, Mrs. Talfur…” Tay trailed off. Izzy and Mrs. Talfur chuckled.
“So, you two are looking nicely dressed!” she said. Izzy looked around at her and Tay, having forgotten how well they looked. She smiled.
“Yeah, we’re out for a good time in Rivertown!” the dingo girl said.
“Isabelle, you are particularly beautiful.”
“Hehe, thank you, ma’am.” Izzy said, blushing.
“What’s the occasion, dear, just for a night out?” the marmoset women asked, big smile. Izzy thought quickly for a reason.
“Well… maybe I’ll meet a boy!” she said, looking away to Tay, who instantly looked annoyed and bothered. She tried to give him a knowing look, but it didn’t seem to take.
“Well, deary, you might actually catch one looking that pretty!” Mrs. Talfur said, “Y’know, I have this wonderful grandson about your age. He’s also a marmoset, and very handsome. I could introduce you–” Mrs. Talfur was cut off by Tay, standing suddenly.
“She’s not for sale!” he said, angerly. Mrs. Talfur looked at his weirdly.
“Haha, I’m not trying to buy you sister, Taylor.” she chuckled. Izzy’s heart fluttered at Tay’s defensive behavior. Was he defending her as a brother, or as a lover?
“Tay, it’s okay.” Izzy said, pulling at his jacket. Mrs. Talfur stood up, smiling.
“It was just a suggestion, love.”
“Sorry, he gets defensive of his sister.” Izzy said, smiling big.
"Perfectly understandable, my dear. I have a brother, too. He would do the same whenever a boy even talked to me, hahaha." Mrs. Talfur and Izzy laughed. Tay relaxed and finally sat back down, slumped in his seat, looking away. "Well, I'll leave you two to your night out. Say hi to your mom and dad for me! Bye!”
“Bye, Mrs. Talfur!” Izzy said, waving as the marmoset lady left for the next car. Izzy turned to her brother. "Tay... I know you wanna defend and protect me... that was just a cover up; I’m not REALLY hoping to meet a boy.” she said to an almost unmoving Tay. “It’s sweet, but no more close calls, okay?"
"No strange marmalade boy is gonna get MY Izzy." Tay said, hugging himself.
"‘Marmoset,’ Tay. And dont worry; my heart belongs to you." Izzy said, holding Tay’s paw. She squeezed and he squeezed back, looking at her and sitting up. The two smiled and looked around the car, swooping back to each other for a quick kiss.",
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