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I'm so sorry for not posting for quite a while. My real life took some really bad turns and so I didn't had the power to keep writing. However, now I'm finally ok and it feels really good to write again.\n\nAs always, I would appreciate if you leave a comment with some feedback. Only then I’m able to improve!\n\n**Spoilers ahead!** Read this after you read the story!\nIf you decided to don’t read further… here is a little explanation.\nMax looks up and he sees a old friend of him, dying very painfully right Infront of him.\nYou can check out my new story (Insert Title here) by clicking on [url=https://inkbunny.net/s/1910407]this link to Inkbunny.[/url]\n", "description_bbcode_parsed": "I'm back!
I'm finally back.... I'm so sorry for not posting for quite a while. My real life took some really bad turns and so I didn't had the power to keep writing. However, now I'm finally ok and it feels really good to write again.

As always, I would appreciate if you leave a comment with some feedback. Only then I’m able to improve!

**Spoilers ahead!** Read this after you read the story!
If you decided to don’t read further… here is a little explanation.
Max looks up and he sees a old friend of him, dying very painfully right Infront of him.
You can check out my new story (Insert Title here) by clicking on this link to Inkbunny.
", "writing": "[b][center]Mission failed! Part 2[/center][/b]\n\n\n“…….M…….Ma…….MAX!!” a voice shouted and suddenly somebody slapped me very hard. I blinked and saw Mike. “Mike” I said week. “Fuck what did they done to you?” Mike asked shocked. I wanted to answer but I was too weak. The whole room seemed to spin around me and I couldn’t clear my head. I noticed that I laid on top of Mike. He had turned my head to stabilize my breathing. His arms were wrapped around me to further warm and protect me. “Fuck! We need to get the hell out of here” I said and Mike genitally stroke my fur. “Relax Max…. I’m here with you and we are both going to make it” Mike said in an attempt to comfort me. Mike begun to stroke my fur and after a few minutes, I was calm and I could think clearly. “They…...they fisted my ass until I broke. Mike I…..I can’t control my bowels anymore. You need to let me down” I said. “Fuck….. OK…. It’s fine Max we just need to reposition ourselves” Mike said and so he did. “I’m really sorry if that happens” I said blushing. “Don’t worry, everything is fine” Mike said. We sat like that for about an hour. Then suddenly, the door opened and a big, fat and gross looking pig entered the room. Behind him was a racoon that looked just as evil. “Not good” I whispered to Mike. “So…. who is ready for some simple questions” the pig said with an grunting laugh. Mike quickly shoved me under his body and he shielded me with it. I looked surprised at his face from under his body. “Thank you for choosing your little friend. Now piss off or you get hurt, too” the racoon said laughing. “FUCK” whispered Mike but he didn’t move. “As you wish” the pig said and I heard a very high-pitched noise from a taser. They hit Mike very hard with it and after a few seconds his muscles begun to fail and he collapsed on top of me. I could smell the burned skin and fur. They kicked him off me and the pig begun to pick me up. I was too weak to fight it and the pig was too big as well. The pig threw me on his shoulder and I could see Mike slowly getting back on his feet. The pig went for the door and I saw Mike saying something to me. I could read from his lips “I’m sorry Max”. I wanted to reply but the door to Mike was closed. We went through several corridors until the raccoon opened another door. There was a hook on the ceiling and I saw several torture instruments. “Fuck” I thought when I realised what was about to happen. They cuffed my hands together and they hug me up like some slaughtered animal. My breath intensified and the other two begun to grin dangerously. “So…. why don’t we talk a little bit…. Like why did you tried to kill our leader? Who gave you two the job? Who is your boss?” the raccoon asked me. I was trained to withstand interrogation and so I remained silent. “Well… you asked for it” the pig said laughing. He grabbed something out of my sight and suddenly a heavy electrical shock hit my back. I screamed out loud and my fingers and toes curled up. The shock disappeared and I gasped for air. While panting I raised my head and I looked at the two in hate. “Hey look… they are trained to resist us… I think it is hopeless to torture him. Let us just kill him. We rip off his head and show it to his big friend. Maybe this will loosen his tongue” the pig said. My eyes widened in shock but I quickly went back into my silent form. They both went for the table out of my sight but they came back. I saw huge knifes in their hands. I closed my eyes “even if the kill me. I will always be loyal to the agency” I told myself. Then I felt a terrible pain. One of them had stabbed me with their knife. I screamed and I lost blood quickly. He slowly pulled out his knife from the side of my body. Then the next stab in my belly. The pain was unbelievable and my fur slowly turned into red. Another stab… and another…. And another! I realised that they weren't kidding. They really tried to kill me. My screams filled the room and blood begun to drip on the floor. \n“I’m going to kill you all” I screamed but they didn’t stopped. About half a minute later and I was practically dead. I couldn’t move my body, my body was completely relaxed and unresponsive. I couldn’t hear anything, except a loud beeping noise. I looked up into the light. Everything was blurry but I still felt each stab. Finally, they stopped. Every little breath was unbelievably difficult and I thought that every breath was my last one. I slowly began to fade and I would probably leave this world forever…. \nMike walked up and down in his room, breaking his head for an escape plan. Suddenly he heard steps and he quickly turned towards the door. The pig opened the door and Mike saw me on his should. He gasped for air, when he saw, that almost my entire fur was covered in blood. “Here’s your buddy… you might want to patch him up. We don’t want that he dies don’t we?” the pig said with a horrible laughter. He threw my body to the ground and the racon behind him threw 2 medic bags in the room. They left the room and closed the door behind them. Mike dashed forward and went on his knees right in front of me. He saw that I was barely breathing and his eyes widened, when he saw all the stab wounds. “I can do that” Mike said to himself and he quickly began to open the medic bags. He found a complete set of equipment for everything… except…”Blood. He needs blood so badly” Mike thought. “Fuck it I need to hurry” said Mike and he quickly carried me into a halfway clean corner. He found some sanitisers in the bags and he quickly began to work. “Narcotics, scalpel, a nose tube set?... IV kit oh and saline bags, catheter set, bandages…. Well that’s a lot actually. “Fuck I need to hurry” Mike said. Before Mike became my spotter, Mike were a combat medic for the agency. He was an expert in medicine and he patched my ass up, more often than I like to admit. “Suddenly the door was opened and Mike turned around. “Stop right there! Don’t come closer” Mike said loud and he shielded me. To his surprise, she actually stopped. “Mike shut up! You are going to blow my cover” she whispered to him. Mike was surprised that she knew his name. “I’m an agent form the Agency, too. How is Max?” she asked friendly and worried. Mike was confused, but he decided to trust her. “He needs blood… very soon. I don’t think that he is going to make it without it” said Mike. “Mhhh…. What’s his blood type?” she asked. “A+” Mike replied. “I see what I can get here” she said and she quickly left the room. Mike begun to clean my wounds and he begun to stitch them up. A few minutes later the door opened yet again and Mike looked up. “I got some blood for him” the woman said. Mike quickly got up and he turned around. “Catch” she said and she threw the blood bag to Mike. He caught it and he begun to read the label. It was A+ blood… at least on the label. “If you were really on our side… why didn’t you prevent this?” Mike said and he turned towards her. “I didn’t knew anything about it. They did this to Max without my permission. I saved him. They wanted to kill him but I stopped that and I ordered them to give you the medic bags” she said. Mike still had some issues but that was enough for the moment. He quickly began to insert the needle into my arm and blood begun to drip into my body. “We have to get out of here” Mike said after a little while. “I’m working on a plan but that takes some time….I’m sorry” she said. Of cause Mike new that she couldn’t just let us free because of her cover. “There must be a way” Mike said. “There is one… and I’m trying to find it” she said. “....fine” Mike said and he continued his surgery. She looked a bit sick… it seemed like it was her first live surgery. Mike didn’t felt disturbed and mostly he didn’t cared for her. After a while she noticed that all the blood from the bag was now in my body. “Can you give me the empty bag?.... And please before a throw up” she said. “Sick from a bit of flesh?” Mike joked but he threw the empty bag to her. “You could say that… I’m going to destroy the evidence… and I’m trying to get you two a little brake. However, I can’t guarantee for anything” she said. Mike nodded and she left the room. It took Mike another 5 hours before I was fixed. “Fuck me…. I’m done” Mike said exhausted. “He threw his gloves onto the trash pile and looked down on me. I had a tube sticking out of my nose that made me breath. He grabbed a Stethoscope and listened. He closed his eyes in relief when he heard my heartbeat. “All Right… you are alive. I did it…. Now you only need to wake up from the narcotics that I gave you” Mike whispered. “At least both of us can now relax” Mike said with a weak smile. He carefully put me on his lap to keep my body warm. Mike gave me the drugs, that should wake me up soon. He listened for my heartbeat and my breathing. From time to time, he turned the ventilator off that made me breath. After another 2 hours he finally heard that I could breathe on my own. “the tubes should stay…. If he stops breathing it is easier to just turn the machine back on instead of inserting the tube again…… And I think we only got one set Tubes... so it must stay anyways” Mike thought. Slowly he got tired. He rubbed his eyes but at the same moment, he heard something…. Something like a whimper. He waited and then he heard it again! He looked down at me and he saw how I slowly opened my eyes. I felt horrible… something awful stuck in my nose and throat and I couldn’t move my body. “Max you are awake!” Mike said happy. He slowly begun to pull out the tube. Slowly it slid out of my nose and I began to cough and gag. “It’s ok Max” he tried to calm me. Mike had to pin me down but he managed to remove the tube out of my nose. I slowly begun to relax and I looked around. “I’m still alive?” I asked weekly. “Yes you are” Mike said with a smile and he stroke my head. “Try to sleep Max… We’ll need it” Mike said and with that we slowly went into sleep. The next day I looked at my body. There were many blank spots in my fur now. Mike had to cut my fur away on certain points but hell… I’m still alive. “OK… do you have a plan?” I asked Mike. “No… unfortunately not” Mike replied. “Dam” I said and I thought about our situation. Suddenly we heard steps. “Lay down Max!” Mike whispered to me. I quickly laid down and pretended to be asleep. “Well… since your friend is dead we have to take you” the woman's voice said. “Shouldn’t we check if he’s actually dead?” the racoon said. “Fuck” I thought. “No… I’ll get rid of him later” she said. I opened my eyes just a tiny bit and I could see her shoes. “You two! Get him and I take the medic bags” she commanded. She went for the corner. Suddenly I saw how she dropped her holster with her pistol and her keys! She didn’t seem to notice it and she just grabbed the bags. “Fatal mistake” I thought. They left the room with Mike and I quickly got up. I sneaked my way to the corner and I picked her holster and the keys up. I quickly ejected the magazine. “10 Bullets” I said and I put it back in. I put the safety off and slowly made my way to the door. My leg was still injured and I hobbled. I slowly unlocked the door and I aimed towards the corridor. “No suppressor…. If I shoot, I’ll probably alert everybody” I thought myself. I sneaked further and I carefully looked at every door that I passed. “Hey did you watched to game yesterday?” I suddenly heard a voice. “No man… I was on duty” another one said. I quickly duck behind a shelf and they came closer. When they almost passed me, I jumped in front of them and pointed my gun at them. “Hands up or I’ll put you down” I said almost calm. They both jumped but fortune for me, both had their fingers off their trigger. “Fuck” The left one said and both surrendered. “On your knees” I said. The went on their knees and I walked behind them. I noticed that one of them had a suppressor on his pistol. “Hey… apparently it’s Christmas” I thought and I quickly grabbed it out of his holster. Now I had two pistols aimed on their head. “Please don’t kill us” the left one begged. “Sorry guys… wrong job” I said and I pulled the trigger. The bullet penetrated through his head and he was dead before he hit the ground. “No……” the other one tried to scream but a second bullet silenced him. Blood quickly began to ooze off her heads but I just turned around and moved on. I holstered the gun without a suppressor while placing both hands on the gun with suppressor. Suddenly I heard screaming from a nearby door. It was Mike. I quickly got to the door and unlocked it. I went inside and quickly shut it behind me. The pig and racoon turned around. I saw that they were smiling until they saw me. Before they could draw their guns, I put a hole in their chests. They screamed in pain and I slowly walked to them. “Hello Fuckhead… told you I would kill you both” I said to the pig beneath me. I got so angry at the pig that I began to stomp his head with my feet. I brutally stomped on his head till his skull broke and it drove itself into his brain. A lake of blood quickly formed under his head and I took a few steps back. The racoon whimpered in fear and pain. He begged for his live but I just slowly made my way to him. “Wouldn’t it be funnier for me to let you bleed out slowly?” I asked him from above. “Please” he begged. “Like you had mercy with me?... no way” I said and I crushed his skull, too. I looked at Mike and he looked a bit scared. “Fuck you can get really angry… remind me not to piss you off” Mike said. “How are you?” I asked but I instantly noticed that his legs were in a really strange form. “These fuckers broke my legs” Mike said with clenched teeth. “Ok no problem. You just have to use me” I said. Mike nodded and I helped him getting up. I wrapped one arm around him to stabilize him. One arm I needed for my gun. “Where did you got a gun?” Mike asked surprised. “The woman lost her in our cell” I said. “Oh yeah.. About that” Mike begun but in this moment the door got opened and I immediately aimed to the door. The woman entered the room and was shocked when I pointed a gun at her. “NO STOP” Mike said and I almost pulled the trigger. “Max relax I’m on your side” she said and I was surprised that she knew my name. Mike quickly began to explain and I lower the pistol. “Your gear is not far.. I can show you the way” she said. Mike and I nodded and we quickly begun to walk through the corridor. I gave her, her own pistol back. “Thanks” she said. “I didn’t use the gun fortunately” I said. She nodded and opened a door. It was clearly some kind of armoury and I saw our equipment. I quickly walked over and begun to put on my combat suit, my vest and my other equipment. I looked up and saw a metal support splint. I quickly grabbed 2 of them and walked over to Mike. “I’m sorry Mike… this will hurt a lot” I said. “Fu….. ok do it” said Mike and he laid himself down onto the floor. I began to move his legs straight and he was already really grunting in pain. I put the splints on his legs but I didn’t activated them just yet. “I really wish that I had some painkillers for you but you have to stay strong now” I said and I felt so bad for him. He nodded. “Take a deep breath” I said. He did and I covered his mouth and nose. I clicked on the button and both splints begun to stretch out his leg. He immediately began to scream and shrug in pain. I tried my best to hold him still and to muffle his screams. It was very painful because his legs were stretched. The splint would replace his broken bones from outside but for that the splint needed to extend a little bit. After about a minute it stopped. His eyes where full of tears, he was panting very hard and he still was in great pain. “I’m sorry Mike” I said again but I turned him on his back. I felt his pulse and it was very strong. “I’m ok” Mike said and with my help, he could stand up again. “Fuck” he said but now he could walk without me. I began to help him dress up, too and we grabbed out weapons. “Ok but without something special, you won’t make it out alive” she said. “What do you mean by that?” I asked. “There are tons of guards outside. You will never make it pass them all if you don’t take a super drug. The super drug will make you almost invincible… we developed it here. I’ll get the super drug, you need to take care of your target” she said. “Alright we need to hurry up or someone will notice that guards are missing” I said. Both nodded and we split up. Mike and I went to the right, she went to the left. Our eye HUDs told us that our signal was still jammed but the basics still worked. We now had our equipment and we were confident now. Fortunately, we found the office of our target. “Ok on 3” I said and I stopped at the left side of the door. “I’ll go first… 1….2…..3!” I said and I breached through the door. I saw out target and within a millisecond, our eye HUD told us that it was our target. My pistol and Mike’s rifle begun to riddle him with holes. His body collapsed and blood begun to ooze into the carpet around him. We slowly walked over to his corpse behind his desk and looked at his dead body. “Kill confirmed” I said and put another hole into his head. Mike and I reloaded our guns and went on. When we left the room, we almost collided with her. “Here I have the syringe… but it is only one” she said and she gave me a syringe. “Ok… he is dead... “ I said to her. “Good… now… to leave this facility, you need to run across a very large open area. After that there is a waterfall, Max you are an otter, you need to help Mike with the swimming” she said. “Sure” I said. “Ok… now there is only one problem” I said. She looked at the ground. “Yes I know” she said and she sat down. I got my pistol out and pointed it directly at her knee. “I’m sorry” I said. “I know… just do it” she said shivering. I pulled the trigger and me shoot destroyed her left knee. She screamed in pain and tried to cover the hole. Blood quickly was all over her hands but she would survive it. I quickly injected myself with his drug and I gasped for air. The effect kicked in immediately. My heart rate went up really quick and everything seemed to happen in slow motion. Something seemed to move through my entire body and my mind was strangely clear. “Max are you ok?” Mike asked my worried but I just looked at him. He shrugged a bit when he noticed how weird my eyes looked. “Run!” I just yelled and I tried to drag him. “Ouch Max I can’t run!” Mike said painfully. “That’s no problem” I said quickly and Mike yelped when I began to carry him on my back. “What the?” Mike asked because normally I wouldn't be able to do this. I didn’t answered and just started to run away. When we came around a corner, we saw 5 guards. They must have heard her scream. They shrugged but before they could do anything, I gave them a hole in each of their heads. This drug completely stabilized my aim somehow. My reflexes where so fast, that they had no chance. “What the?” Mike asked again and he looked horrified at me. I saw a big door and assumed, that this was our exit. I began to run even faster and used my shoulder to breach through that door. About 20 guards looked surprised at me. I could see the dark sky with the moon. It was a big yard. I quickly aimed with my pistol and took out a few of the guards. A clicking sound remembered me that I hadn’t enough ammo for all of them, so I quickly ducked behind some cover. I quickly reloaded but now they had enough time to react. “SOUND THE ALARM!” one of them screamed to the others and he did. A loud siren told me, that the alarm was on and now we were in deep shit. I quickly grabbed the rifle from Mike and I quickly got out of my cover. They were already aiming at me but I was so fast, that they were all dead before they could shoot us. “What the hell?” Mike asked again. But I just gave him his rifle back and kept running. “Watch out Max! They got snipers on the towers” Mike yelled at me. I stopped and quickly grabbed my sniper rifle. Everything happened in slow motion and I aimed my sniper rifle at one of them. “Wind, Distance, height difference” I said inside my head and I just needed a second to adjust my sniper. I pulled the trigger and I could see through my scope, how the inside of his head sprayed all over the wall behind him. I quickly reloaded my sniper and aimed for the next one. Another headshot later I lowered my rifle and continued to run. Mike didn’t found the right words to even describe what just happened. Finally…. I could see the waterfall! “There it is” I said to Mike. “Max your heart rate is very critical! You’re going to die to a heart attack if you keep this up” Mike said alarming. “Fuck that” I said and just kept running. “This time, I’ll save you!” I said to Mike and I was almost there. “Hold your breath and hold on to me” I screamed to Mike. He did and I just jumped off the cliff and down the waterfall. It felt like minutes and I was just keep falling. Then we hit the water surface. Though all the weight and with Mike on my shoulder I injured myself pretty hard but I didn’t felt the pain. I immediately begun to swim with my hands, feet’s and my tale. I didn’t noticed that I was losing blood and I just kept swimming. Finally, I could see on my eye HUD that the jammer was gone and he finally had a connection to HQ. I resurfaced and gasped for air. “Agent blue come in!” I heard in my head. “This is agent blue, we need an emergency evac immediately! The target is dead but we are both heavily injured” I said. “Roger help is on the way! The location for the extraction is now marked on your eye HUD” HQ said. “Roger blue out” I said. “Did you heard that Mike? There are coming to get us out of here” I said to Mike. “Max you are losing blood!” Mike yelled at me when he noticed it. “We need to make it to the EP” I said and we just kept swimming. The flow of the water was with us and so we made it. I pulled us out of the water and laid down on my back. I tried to get some air… but I couldn’t. Suddenly “WARNING! HEART FAILURE IMINIT!” Got displayed on my eye HUD. Suddenly my whole body caught on fire or at least it felt like that. My lungs, chest and everything begun to burn and I couldn’t breathe anymore. I opened my mouth but nothing happens. I was drowning somehow. “MAX” Mike yelled and his face appeared over me. I couldn’t answer, I couldn’t scream or do anything.\nAnd then my eye HUD showed:\n\nHeart failure!\nHeart failure!\nHeart failure!\nHeart failure!\nHeart failure!\nHeart failure!\n\nI was dying and suddenly I fell… fell down an endless black and kept falling. Unable to move or do anything else. \n***Waring. The following text could be disturbing for some people!.... but if you read to this point, you can probebly go on anyways... (Brutal)****\nRead the Description from IB if you don’t want to read it.\n\nSuddenly I hit a black ground and my paralyse was gone. It was a completely black room but I could still saw my body. I turned around and got on all fours with my face pointing to the ground. I panted very hard and tried to shake of this awful feeling. “Are those Feet’s?” I asked myself when I noticed something right before me. It looked like someone was standing right in front of me. I raised my head to look who it was but… I saw something terrible. It was a red fox but half of his flesh was burning away. I could see his empty eyehole and his skull burning. His fur was on fire and his flesh melted right in front of my eyes. His blood was boiling by the heat of the fire and it came closer to me. The thing was still alive!!!! \nA screamed as loud as I could and I drew my pistol. I aimed at the head of the thing and pulled the trigger.\n\n\n\n***You can continue to read here!***\n\nI jumped out of my sleep with a scream. An alarm began to beep from my watch and I had some incredible headaches. My boyfriend woke up and he grabbed a syringe from his nightstand. He connected the needle with the syringe and he quickly turned towards me. He took of the safety cap off and he inserted the syringe in my left arm.\n\nThe end of the Prologue of Insert Title here!\n\nYes Mission failed was only the prologue of another story! Check out the other story on my IB profile and thanks for reading.\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "
Mission failed! Part 2



“…….M…….Ma…….MAX!!” a voice shouted and suddenly somebody slapped me very hard. I blinked and saw Mike. “Mike” I said week. “Fuck what did they done to you?” Mike asked shocked. I wanted to answer but I was too weak. The whole room seemed to spin around me and I couldn’t clear my head. I noticed that I laid on top of Mike. He had turned my head to stabilize my breathing. His arms were wrapped around me to further warm and protect me. “Fuck! We need to get the hell out of here” I said and Mike genitally stroke my fur. “Relax Max…. I’m here with you and we are both going to make it” Mike said in an attempt to comfort me. Mike begun to stroke my fur and after a few minutes, I was calm and I could think clearly. “They…...they fisted my ass until I broke. Mike I…..I can’t control my bowels anymore. You need to let me down” I said. “Fuck….. OK…. It’s fine Max we just need to reposition ourselves” Mike said and so he did. “I’m really sorry if that happens” I said blushing. “Don’t worry, everything is fine” Mike said. We sat like that for about an hour. Then suddenly, the door opened and a big, fat and gross looking pig entered the room. Behind him was a racoon that looked just as evil. “Not good” I whispered to Mike. “So…. who is ready for some simple questions” the pig said with an grunting laugh. Mike quickly shoved me under his body and he shielded me with it. I looked surprised at his face from under his body. “Thank you for choosing your little friend. Now piss off or you get hurt, too” the racoon said laughing. “FUCK” whispered Mike but he didn’t move. “As you wish” the pig said and I heard a very high-pitched noise from a taser. They hit Mike very hard with it and after a few seconds his muscles begun to fail and he collapsed on top of me. I could smell the burned skin and fur. They kicked him off me and the pig begun to pick me up. I was too weak to fight it and the pig was too big as well. The pig threw me on his shoulder and I could see Mike slowly getting back on his feet. The pig went for the door and I saw Mike saying something to me. I could read from his lips “I’m sorry Max”. I wanted to reply but the door to Mike was closed. We went through several corridors until the raccoon opened another door. There was a hook on the ceiling and I saw several torture instruments. “Fuck” I thought when I realised what was about to happen. They cuffed my hands together and they hug me up like some slaughtered animal. My breath intensified and the other two begun to grin dangerously. “So…. why don’t we talk a little bit…. Like why did you tried to kill our leader? Who gave you two the job? Who is your boss?” the raccoon asked me. I was trained to withstand interrogation and so I remained silent. “Well… you asked for it” the pig said laughing. He grabbed something out of my sight and suddenly a heavy electrical shock hit my back. I screamed out loud and my fingers and toes curled up. The shock disappeared and I gasped for air. While panting I raised my head and I looked at the two in hate. “Hey look… they are trained to resist us… I think it is hopeless to torture him. Let us just kill him. We rip off his head and show it to his big friend. Maybe this will loosen his tongue” the pig said. My eyes widened in shock but I quickly went back into my silent form. They both went for the table out of my sight but they came back. I saw huge knifes in their hands. I closed my eyes “even if the kill me. I will always be loyal to the agency” I told myself. Then I felt a terrible pain. One of them had stabbed me with their knife. I screamed and I lost blood quickly. He slowly pulled out his knife from the side of my body. Then the next stab in my belly. The pain was unbelievable and my fur slowly turned into red. Another stab… and another…. And another! I realised that they weren't kidding. They really tried to kill me. My screams filled the room and blood begun to drip on the floor.
“I’m going to kill you all” I screamed but they didn’t stopped. About half a minute later and I was practically dead. I couldn’t move my body, my body was completely relaxed and unresponsive. I couldn’t hear anything, except a loud beeping noise. I looked up into the light. Everything was blurry but I still felt each stab. Finally, they stopped. Every little breath was unbelievably difficult and I thought that every breath was my last one. I slowly began to fade and I would probably leave this world forever….
Mike walked up and down in his room, breaking his head for an escape plan. Suddenly he heard steps and he quickly turned towards the door. The pig opened the door and Mike saw me on his should. He gasped for air, when he saw, that almost my entire fur was covered in blood. “Here’s your buddy… you might want to patch him up. We don’t want that he dies don’t we?” the pig said with a horrible laughter. He threw my body to the ground and the racon behind him threw 2 medic bags in the room. They left the room and closed the door behind them. Mike dashed forward and went on his knees right in front of me. He saw that I was barely breathing and his eyes widened, when he saw all the stab wounds. “I can do that” Mike said to himself and he quickly began to open the medic bags. He found a complete set of equipment for everything… except…”Blood. He needs blood so badly” Mike thought. “Fuck it I need to hurry” said Mike and he quickly carried me into a halfway clean corner. He found some sanitisers in the bags and he quickly began to work. “Narcotics, scalpel, a nose tube set?... IV kit oh and saline bags, catheter set, bandages…. Well that’s a lot actually. “Fuck I need to hurry” Mike said. Before Mike became my spotter, Mike were a combat medic for the agency. He was an expert in medicine and he patched my ass up, more often than I like to admit. “Suddenly the door was opened and Mike turned around. “Stop right there! Don’t come closer” Mike said loud and he shielded me. To his surprise, she actually stopped. “Mike shut up! You are going to blow my cover” she whispered to him. Mike was surprised that she knew his name. “I’m an agent form the Agency, too. How is Max?” she asked friendly and worried. Mike was confused, but he decided to trust her. “He needs blood… very soon. I don’t think that he is going to make it without it” said Mike. “Mhhh…. What’s his blood type?” she asked. “A+” Mike replied. “I see what I can get here” she said and she quickly left the room. Mike begun to clean my wounds and he begun to stitch them up. A few minutes later the door opened yet again and Mike looked up. “I got some blood for him” the woman said. Mike quickly got up and he turned around. “Catch” she said and she threw the blood bag to Mike. He caught it and he begun to read the label. It was A+ blood… at least on the label. “If you were really on our side… why didn’t you prevent this?” Mike said and he turned towards her. “I didn’t knew anything about it. They did this to Max without my permission. I saved him. They wanted to kill him but I stopped that and I ordered them to give you the medic bags” she said. Mike still had some issues but that was enough for the moment. He quickly began to insert the needle into my arm and blood begun to drip into my body. “We have to get out of here” Mike said after a little while. “I’m working on a plan but that takes some time….I’m sorry” she said. Of cause Mike new that she couldn’t just let us free because of her cover. “There must be a way” Mike said. “There is one… and I’m trying to find it” she said. “....fine” Mike said and he continued his surgery. She looked a bit sick… it seemed like it was her first live surgery. Mike didn’t felt disturbed and mostly he didn’t cared for her. After a while she noticed that all the blood from the bag was now in my body. “Can you give me the empty bag?.... And please before a throw up” she said. “Sick from a bit of flesh?” Mike joked but he threw the empty bag to her. “You could say that… I’m going to destroy the evidence… and I’m trying to get you two a little brake. However, I can’t guarantee for anything” she said. Mike nodded and she left the room. It took Mike another 5 hours before I was fixed. “Fuck me…. I’m done” Mike said exhausted. “He threw his gloves onto the trash pile and looked down on me. I had a tube sticking out of my nose that made me breath. He grabbed a Stethoscope and listened. He closed his eyes in relief when he heard my heartbeat. “All Right… you are alive. I did it…. Now you only need to wake up from the narcotics that I gave you” Mike whispered. “At least both of us can now relax” Mike said with a weak smile. He carefully put me on his lap to keep my body warm. Mike gave me the drugs, that should wake me up soon. He listened for my heartbeat and my breathing. From time to time, he turned the ventilator off that made me breath. After another 2 hours he finally heard that I could breathe on my own. “the tubes should stay…. If he stops breathing it is easier to just turn the machine back on instead of inserting the tube again…… And I think we only got one set Tubes... so it must stay anyways” Mike thought. Slowly he got tired. He rubbed his eyes but at the same moment, he heard something…. Something like a whimper. He waited and then he heard it again! He looked down at me and he saw how I slowly opened my eyes. I felt horrible… something awful stuck in my nose and throat and I couldn’t move my body. “Max you are awake!” Mike said happy. He slowly begun to pull out the tube. Slowly it slid out of my nose and I began to cough and gag. “It’s ok Max” he tried to calm me. Mike had to pin me down but he managed to remove the tube out of my nose. I slowly begun to relax and I looked around. “I’m still alive?” I asked weekly. “Yes you are” Mike said with a smile and he stroke my head. “Try to sleep Max… We’ll need it” Mike said and with that we slowly went into sleep. The next day I looked at my body. There were many blank spots in my fur now. Mike had to cut my fur away on certain points but hell… I’m still alive. “OK… do you have a plan?” I asked Mike. “No… unfortunately not” Mike replied. “Dam” I said and I thought about our situation. Suddenly we heard steps. “Lay down Max!” Mike whispered to me. I quickly laid down and pretended to be asleep. “Well… since your friend is dead we have to take you” the woman's voice said. “Shouldn’t we check if he’s actually dead?” the racoon said. “Fuck” I thought. “No… I’ll get rid of him later” she said. I opened my eyes just a tiny bit and I could see her shoes. “You two! Get him and I take the medic bags” she commanded. She went for the corner. Suddenly I saw how she dropped her holster with her pistol and her keys! She didn’t seem to notice it and she just grabbed the bags. “Fatal mistake” I thought. They left the room with Mike and I quickly got up. I sneaked my way to the corner and I picked her holster and the keys up. I quickly ejected the magazine. “10 Bullets” I said and I put it back in. I put the safety off and slowly made my way to the door. My leg was still injured and I hobbled. I slowly unlocked the door and I aimed towards the corridor. “No suppressor…. If I shoot, I’ll probably alert everybody” I thought myself. I sneaked further and I carefully looked at every door that I passed. “Hey did you watched to game yesterday?” I suddenly heard a voice. “No man… I was on duty” another one said. I quickly duck behind a shelf and they came closer. When they almost passed me, I jumped in front of them and pointed my gun at them. “Hands up or I’ll put you down” I said almost calm. They both jumped but fortune for me, both had their fingers off their trigger. “Fuck” The left one said and both surrendered. “On your knees” I said. The went on their knees and I walked behind them. I noticed that one of them had a suppressor on his pistol. “Hey… apparently it’s Christmas” I thought and I quickly grabbed it out of his holster. Now I had two pistols aimed on their head. “Please don’t kill us” the left one begged. “Sorry guys… wrong job” I said and I pulled the trigger. The bullet penetrated through his head and he was dead before he hit the ground. “No……” the other one tried to scream but a second bullet silenced him. Blood quickly began to ooze off her heads but I just turned around and moved on. I holstered the gun without a suppressor while placing both hands on the gun with suppressor. Suddenly I heard screaming from a nearby door. It was Mike. I quickly got to the door and unlocked it. I went inside and quickly shut it behind me. The pig and racoon turned around. I saw that they were smiling until they saw me. Before they could draw their guns, I put a hole in their chests. They screamed in pain and I slowly walked to them. “Hello Fuckhead… told you I would kill you both” I said to the pig beneath me. I got so angry at the pig that I began to stomp his head with my feet. I brutally stomped on his head till his skull broke and it drove itself into his brain. A lake of blood quickly formed under his head and I took a few steps back. The racoon whimpered in fear and pain. He begged for his live but I just slowly made my way to him. “Wouldn’t it be funnier for me to let you bleed out slowly?” I asked him from above. “Please” he begged. “Like you had mercy with me?... no way” I said and I crushed his skull, too. I looked at Mike and he looked a bit scared. “Fuck you can get really angry… remind me not to piss you off” Mike said. “How are you?” I asked but I instantly noticed that his legs were in a really strange form. “These fuckers broke my legs” Mike said with clenched teeth. “Ok no problem. You just have to use me” I said. Mike nodded and I helped him getting up. I wrapped one arm around him to stabilize him. One arm I needed for my gun. “Where did you got a gun?” Mike asked surprised. “The woman lost her in our cell” I said. “Oh yeah.. About that” Mike begun but in this moment the door got opened and I immediately aimed to the door. The woman entered the room and was shocked when I pointed a gun at her. “NO STOP” Mike said and I almost pulled the trigger. “Max relax I’m on your side” she said and I was surprised that she knew my name. Mike quickly began to explain and I lower the pistol. “Your gear is not far.. I can show you the way” she said. Mike and I nodded and we quickly begun to walk through the corridor. I gave her, her own pistol back. “Thanks” she said. “I didn’t use the gun fortunately” I said. She nodded and opened a door. It was clearly some kind of armoury and I saw our equipment. I quickly walked over and begun to put on my combat suit, my vest and my other equipment. I looked up and saw a metal support splint. I quickly grabbed 2 of them and walked over to Mike. “I’m sorry Mike… this will hurt a lot” I said. “Fu….. ok do it” said Mike and he laid himself down onto the floor. I began to move his legs straight and he was already really grunting in pain. I put the splints on his legs but I didn’t activated them just yet. “I really wish that I had some painkillers for you but you have to stay strong now” I said and I felt so bad for him. He nodded. “Take a deep breath” I said. He did and I covered his mouth and nose. I clicked on the button and both splints begun to stretch out his leg. He immediately began to scream and shrug in pain. I tried my best to hold him still and to muffle his screams. It was very painful because his legs were stretched. The splint would replace his broken bones from outside but for that the splint needed to extend a little bit. After about a minute it stopped. His eyes where full of tears, he was panting very hard and he still was in great pain. “I’m sorry Mike” I said again but I turned him on his back. I felt his pulse and it was very strong. “I’m ok” Mike said and with my help, he could stand up again. “Fuck” he said but now he could walk without me. I began to help him dress up, too and we grabbed out weapons. “Ok but without something special, you won’t make it out alive” she said. “What do you mean by that?” I asked. “There are tons of guards outside. You will never make it pass them all if you don’t take a super drug. The super drug will make you almost invincible… we developed it here. I’ll get the super drug, you need to take care of your target” she said. “Alright we need to hurry up or someone will notice that guards are missing” I said. Both nodded and we split up. Mike and I went to the right, she went to the left. Our eye HUDs told us that our signal was still jammed but the basics still worked. We now had our equipment and we were confident now. Fortunately, we found the office of our target. “Ok on 3” I said and I stopped at the left side of the door. “I’ll go first… 1….2…..3!” I said and I breached through the door. I saw out target and within a millisecond, our eye HUD told us that it was our target. My pistol and Mike’s rifle begun to riddle him with holes. His body collapsed and blood begun to ooze into the carpet around him. We slowly walked over to his corpse behind his desk and looked at his dead body. “Kill confirmed” I said and put another hole into his head. Mike and I reloaded our guns and went on. When we left the room, we almost collided with her. “Here I have the syringe… but it is only one” she said and she gave me a syringe. “Ok… he is dead... “ I said to her. “Good… now… to leave this facility, you need to run across a very large open area. After that there is a waterfall, Max you are an otter, you need to help Mike with the swimming” she said. “Sure” I said. “Ok… now there is only one problem” I said. She looked at the ground. “Yes I know” she said and she sat down. I got my pistol out and pointed it directly at her knee. “I’m sorry” I said. “I know… just do it” she said shivering. I pulled the trigger and me shoot destroyed her left knee. She screamed in pain and tried to cover the hole. Blood quickly was all over her hands but she would survive it. I quickly injected myself with his drug and I gasped for air. The effect kicked in immediately. My heart rate went up really quick and everything seemed to happen in slow motion. Something seemed to move through my entire body and my mind was strangely clear. “Max are you ok?” Mike asked my worried but I just looked at him. He shrugged a bit when he noticed how weird my eyes looked. “Run!” I just yelled and I tried to drag him. “Ouch Max I can’t run!” Mike said painfully. “That’s no problem” I said quickly and Mike yelped when I began to carry him on my back. “What the?” Mike asked because normally I wouldn't be able to do this. I didn’t answered and just started to run away. When we came around a corner, we saw 5 guards. They must have heard her scream. They shrugged but before they could do anything, I gave them a hole in each of their heads. This drug completely stabilized my aim somehow. My reflexes where so fast, that they had no chance. “What the?” Mike asked again and he looked horrified at me. I saw a big door and assumed, that this was our exit. I began to run even faster and used my shoulder to breach through that door. About 20 guards looked surprised at me. I could see the dark sky with the moon. It was a big yard. I quickly aimed with my pistol and took out a few of the guards. A clicking sound remembered me that I hadn’t enough ammo for all of them, so I quickly ducked behind some cover. I quickly reloaded but now they had enough time to react. “SOUND THE ALARM!” one of them screamed to the others and he did. A loud siren told me, that the alarm was on and now we were in deep shit. I quickly grabbed the rifle from Mike and I quickly got out of my cover. They were already aiming at me but I was so fast, that they were all dead before they could shoot us. “What the hell?” Mike asked again. But I just gave him his rifle back and kept running. “Watch out Max! They got snipers on the towers” Mike yelled at me. I stopped and quickly grabbed my sniper rifle. Everything happened in slow motion and I aimed my sniper rifle at one of them. “Wind, Distance, height difference” I said inside my head and I just needed a second to adjust my sniper. I pulled the trigger and I could see through my scope, how the inside of his head sprayed all over the wall behind him. I quickly reloaded my sniper and aimed for the next one. Another headshot later I lowered my rifle and continued to run. Mike didn’t found the right words to even describe what just happened. Finally…. I could see the waterfall! “There it is” I said to Mike. “Max your heart rate is very critical! You’re going to die to a heart attack if you keep this up” Mike said alarming. “Fuck that” I said and just kept running. “This time, I’ll save you!” I said to Mike and I was almost there. “Hold your breath and hold on to me” I screamed to Mike. He did and I just jumped off the cliff and down the waterfall. It felt like minutes and I was just keep falling. Then we hit the water surface. Though all the weight and with Mike on my shoulder I injured myself pretty hard but I didn’t felt the pain. I immediately begun to swim with my hands, feet’s and my tale. I didn’t noticed that I was losing blood and I just kept swimming. Finally, I could see on my eye HUD that the jammer was gone and he finally had a connection to HQ. I resurfaced and gasped for air. “Agent blue come in!” I heard in my head. “This is agent blue, we need an emergency evac immediately! The target is dead but we are both heavily injured” I said. “Roger help is on the way! The location for the extraction is now marked on your eye HUD” HQ said. “Roger blue out” I said. “Did you heard that Mike? There are coming to get us out of here” I said to Mike. “Max you are losing blood!” Mike yelled at me when he noticed it. “We need to make it to the EP” I said and we just kept swimming. The flow of the water was with us and so we made it. I pulled us out of the water and laid down on my back. I tried to get some air… but I couldn’t. Suddenly “WARNING! HEART FAILURE IMINIT!” Got displayed on my eye HUD. Suddenly my whole body caught on fire or at least it felt like that. My lungs, chest and everything begun to burn and I couldn’t breathe anymore. I opened my mouth but nothing happens. I was drowning somehow. “MAX” Mike yelled and his face appeared over me. I couldn’t answer, I couldn’t scream or do anything.
And then my eye HUD showed:

Heart failure!
Heart failure!
Heart failure!
Heart failure!
Heart failure!
Heart failure!

I was dying and suddenly I fell… fell down an endless black and kept falling. Unable to move or do anything else.
***Waring. The following text could be disturbing for some people!.... but if you read to this point, you can probebly go on anyways... (Brutal)****
Read the Description from IB if you don’t want to read it.

Suddenly I hit a black ground and my paralyse was gone. It was a completely black room but I could still saw my body. I turned around and got on all fours with my face pointing to the ground. I panted very hard and tried to shake of this awful feeling. “Are those Feet’s?” I asked myself when I noticed something right before me. It looked like someone was standing right in front of me. I raised my head to look who it was but… I saw something terrible. It was a red fox but half of his flesh was burning away. I could see his empty eyehole and his skull burning. His fur was on fire and his flesh melted right in front of my eyes. His blood was boiling by the heat of the fire and it came closer to me. The thing was still alive!!!!
A screamed as loud as I could and I drew my pistol. I aimed at the head of the thing and pulled the trigger.



***You can continue to read here!***

I jumped out of my sleep with a scream. An alarm began to beep from my watch and I had some incredible headaches. My boyfriend woke up and he grabbed a syringe from his nightstand. He connected the needle with the syringe and he quickly turned towards me. He took of the safety cap off and he inserted the syringe in my left arm.

The end of the Prologue of Insert Title here!

Yes Mission failed was only the prologue of another story! Check out the other story on my IB profile and thanks for reading.
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