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He tries out a new technique to break his student out of his depression and deals with an accident. Things get interesting, and intimate, from there : )\n\nSorry for using \"Feverfew\", it sounds bad, it's a cliche, but it is named for what it does so I used i t.\n\nEnjoy, or don't, either way, you can't un-read it if you read it.\ncomments welcomed and encouraged. Characters used without permission, obviously.", "description_bbcode_parsed": "A story for Deadpegasus Took much longer than it should have, as all my stories end up doing.

Splinter takes Raphael out for some physical therapy in the form of a sparring match. He tries out a new technique to break his student out of his depression and deals with an accident. Things get interesting, and intimate, from there : )

Sorry for using "Feverfew", it sounds bad, it's a cliche, but it is named for what it does so I used i t.

Enjoy, or don't, either way, you can't un-read it if you read it.
comments welcomed and encouraged. Characters used without permission, obviously.", "writing": "TMNT - Sparring Love\nby tannim\nDecember 1, 2009\n\n\tSplinter nudged his student in the back \"Straighten up, Raphael. You must remain ready and loose for that defensive position. You are about to receive a heavy downward blow from from Donatello's Bo. Your body must catch it and roll back and redirect it back at him.\"\n\n\t\"Yes, Sensei.\" Raphael muttered while holding both sai's at his side.\n\n\tIn front of him, Donatello waited, leaning on his bo. Raphael was really off his game lately and had been knocked down by the staff easily the past three attacks. Ever since Raphael had gotten beaten by a simple foot soldier robot he'd been a wimp. It hadn't even been his fault, though the turtle seemed unable to accept that. The gas in the chamber had seriously sapped his strength. The others had been able to beat their opponents, but THEY had had gas masks on and their muscles hadn't turned to jello due to lack of oxygen and toxic gas.\n\n\tDonatello straightened up himself at a nod from Master Splinter and raised his bo. The weapon's heavy wooden length held in the middle at first as Don rushed his brother. He swung left first, which Raph managed to defend as usual. Donatello stepped back as he turned and brought the right end down, then jerked up as Raphael caught it in the gap of his left sai. A quick jerk down disarmed the turtle and a simple kick knocked him down from there.\n\n\tSplinter shook his head, it was not the first time a turtle had lost his confidence, he knew it wouldn't be the last. Each time it happened though, they became useless in combat until they got it back. The rat helped his student up and sat him down before turning to Donatello.\n\n\t\"Thank you, you and the others will have to go out tonight without Raphael.\" He looked at his beaten student and back. \"For a few days perhaps. We shall see how he handles some private training.\"\n\n\t\"Yes, Sensei.\" Donatello replied.\n\n\t\"We shall train in the woods just outside the city.\" Splinter paused, then added. \"You should still have the sewer tunnels to get there marked.\"\n\n\t\"We all know the way by now.\"\n\n\tThe turtle hurried away to tell the others while Splinter gathered supplies from the kitchen and his den. When he had a good sized pack he came back to find Raphael thrusting his sai's at a training dummy. The dummy was bouncing hard as it was struck, which meant he was simply hitting it instead of attacking it in any meaningful or skillful way.\n\n\t\"Raphael!\" The rat called sharply.\n\n\t\"Yes, Ma... Ooomf!\" Raph grunted and caught the heavy pack that had been tossed to him. \"What is IN this thing?\"\n\n\t\"Everything we will need for the training. Come, we must hurry to get you back to yourself.\" Splinter didn't wait for his student to answer him. He simply hurried away. Raphael had to struggle to get it on and follow at the same time. Like the others, he knew where they were going. But he hadn't had to stay there long himself. The last time had been when Michelangelo had been lost for love to some hologram of Shredder's design. The thing had nearly brainwashed him with it's hypnotic eyes and voice. Raph shook his head and muttered to himself. \"Did I really become THAT bad?\"\n\n*****\n\n\tRaphael looked around the glade. It was a pleasant day. Cloudy, but dry. The clouds kept the weather cool. Trees were all around with a sewer exit heading to see along a cliff at the end of the glade. The grass and plants were maintained by the city's park and forestry department to make sure access to the sewer was possible. The trees were all in good shape, and provided complete protection from anything but wild animals spying on them. All in all, it was a very peaceful and pretty place.\n\n\tSplinter lead the way through it into the woods for several yards. The place he chose to stop wasn't very big, but it had a big fallen tree trunk with a gap under it and trees on either side. It smelled of dirt and nature. Thankfully it smelled of nothing else as he crawled in. The gap had been dug out overtime by animals who had briefly inhabited it. If it rained though, it would get very damp but Splinter didn't seem worried so Raphael didn't worry about it. He shrugged off the pack and set it on a raised bit of dry roots in the back. While he rubbed his shoulders where the straps had dig in a bit around the edges of his shell he turned back to the rat. \"What is IN this, master?\"\n\n\tThe rat set down his walking stick and stretched before turning and answering. \"Supplies. Some towels, some food, some weights, which you will be wearing.\"\n\n\t\"Weights?\" He opened the pack, there were indeed some large beach towels in there. He dug past them and found some beef jerky, and a lot of rice noodles and seasonings. There was a small tea pot and a pack of tea, and finally, he pulled out the weights. They were long ankle and wrist weights. Ten pounds each, with two sets for each ankle and wrist. He lifted them out one at a time and set them out.\n\n\t\"Eighty Pounds?\" The turtle sounding rather surprised.\n\n\t\"Forty for now. If you need the rest, then you may put them on as needed.\" Splinter stretched again and then, removed his kimono. \"We will fight bare. Nothing will be hidden. No weapons other than those you have as your body. That includes taking off your band, the weights however, stay on.\"\n\n\tRaphael paused with one arm, already weighted, reaching towards the next weight. His eyes were on his sensei. He hadn't seen Splinter naked too often. The rat was handsome. The rat was lightly muscled, at least, he looked lightly muscled... The rat... had a quite large pair of balls hanging low between his legs dragging a soft looking sheath down with it. His master seemed unconcerned with his nudity. Raph looked away before he could feel things that would make him embarrassed and awkwardly lifted the weighted arm up to take off his head band.\n\n\tMoving the weighted arm and the naked arm felt weird. Kind of fun, but weird. His left arm felt like it was moving in slow motion with the weight on it but he managed to take his headband off anyway. His arm dropped a lot faster than he had expected and slapped into the roots. The turtle shook his head thinking to himself 'I really am off my game...'\n\n\tHe set the band down next to the towels and realized, that he really DID feel naked without it. It was such a small bit of cloth, and even wearing the weight, it had made him feel like himself. The turtle looked down at his muscular legs and arms. At his shell and groin. They were usually exposed but somehow taking that little length of cloth off made him feel naked. His thoughts were interrupted by Splinter's voice. \n\n\t\"Come, Raphael, let's get started.\" Raph saw splinter in the entryway. His torso through, just his very shapely ass and tail... and the back of his thighs and legs and feet visible.\n\n\t\"Yes, Master Splinter!\" He turned to put the rest on, not thinking about much else on purpose.\n\n\tOutside, he stood on the soft grass opposite his sensei. They weights drug him down, making his arms feel like lead. Ten pounds hadn't seemed like much at the time. But he found every movement felt sluggish now. He felt like he had... when he'd been beaten. Splinter charged at him suddenly. Punching forward at his chest.\n\n\tAs a turtle, that wouldn't have done much even if it connected, but he felt he had to try to block it anyway. The rat's hand slammed into his shell, making him grunt back with Raphael's hands just too slow to move in time. Splinter pulled back at the impact and used the force of his punch to push him into a spin to bring his tail around. Thick rat tail smacked hard against the back of Raph's shell making the turtle stumble forward.\n\n\tRaphael had forgotten how fast his master could be. The attack was sudden, without warning or threat. He watched his his attacker stop and step back. A deep breath and Raph raised his hands again.\n\n\tSplinter shook his tail subtly behind him. He'd forgotten why he'd avoided using the tail slap against his students while sparring, now he recalled as his tail stung from the impact. Still, he had to be thorough. He called out. \"Raphael. Your body is slowed. You must use it more wisely. Since you cannot attack as fast as normal you must move differently to make it seem like you are moving faster. You see me coming.\" And he darted out towards the turtle and saw the hands come up.\n\n\tHe stopped and stepped back. \"THINK, Raphael. Your hands are slower. So are your legs. You must use both together. When I come push backwards to put more distance between our impact. Gravity still works at the same speed. You can drop to your knees out of the way.\"\n\n\tHis student tried again as Splinter's smaller body shot forward. He punched towards the same spot and was pleased to see Raphael pushing and leaning back at the same time. His hands managed to block the punch but again Splinter used the force of his punch to push himself away in a spin and bring his tail down. Though he tried to swing it lighter to reduce the stinging. He clipped Raph's neck with the very tip, leaving a welt, and stepped away again.\n\n\t\"You know you must anticipate! You learned one movement. You must think further ahead to the next. ADAPT.\" The rat said firmly, breathing a bit heavily. His nudity was drawing his student's gaze and slowing the thoughts about the sparring match. The distraction was helping he decided. Though Raphael still wasn't fighting too well he wasn't looking as vague or depressed about the fighting skills. Instead, he was looking a bit flustered.\n\n\tRaph and his brothers had fought bare many times. They had fought bare with Splinter many times as well... they had not fought bare with him since they had reached a certain age, however. He'd tried to keep his body from them so they would focus on their training. They thought nothing of each other's exposed penis and testicles... but they all basically looked the same. His body however, looked much different. Even his genitals.\n\n\tThe rat darted forward again this time running with his legs a bit wider, making sure his heavy scrotum swung visibly and did a high kick to Raphael's face. He was pleased that his son blocked the kick, and reached out to squeeze the teen's soft scrotum and give it a light tug. The tug was followed with a roll back and a swipe of his feet that brought Raph's legs out from under him.\n\n\tSplinter stepped back and shook his head. The look on his son's face was of surprise. Not that he had been knocked down, but that ", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "TMNT - Sparring Love
by tannim
December 1, 2009

\tSplinter nudged his student in the back "Straighten up, Raphael.  You must remain ready and loose for that defensive position.  You are about to receive a heavy downward blow from from Donatello's Bo. Your body must catch it and roll back and redirect it back at him."

\t"Yes, Sensei." Raphael muttered while holding both sai's at his side.

\tIn front of him, Donatello waited, leaning on his bo.  Raphael was really off his game lately and had been knocked down by the staff easily the past three attacks.  Ever since Raphael had gotten beaten by a simple foot soldier robot he'd been a wimp.  It hadn't even been his fault, though the turtle seemed unable to accept that.  The gas in the chamber had seriously sapped his strength.  The others had been able to beat their opponents, but THEY had had gas masks on and their muscles hadn't turned to jello due to lack of oxygen and toxic gas.

\tDonatello straightened up himself at a nod from Master Splinter and raised his bo.  The weapon's heavy wooden length held in the middle at first as Don rushed his brother.  He swung left first, which Raph managed to defend as usual.  Donatello stepped back as he turned and brought the right end down, then jerked up as Raphael caught it in the gap of his left sai.  A quick jerk down disarmed the turtle and a simple kick knocked him down from there.

\tSplinter shook his head, it was not the first time a turtle had lost his confidence, he knew it wouldn't be the last.  Each time it happened though, they became useless in combat until they got it back.  The rat helped his student up and sat him down before turning to Donatello.

\t"Thank you, you and the others will have to go out tonight without Raphael."  He looked at his beaten student and back.  "For a few days perhaps.  We shall see how he handles some private training."

\t"Yes, Sensei." Donatello replied.

\t"We shall train in the woods just outside the city."  Splinter paused, then added.  "You should still have the sewer tunnels to get there marked."

\t"We all know the way by now."

\tThe turtle hurried away to tell the others while Splinter gathered supplies from the kitchen and his den.  When he had a good sized pack he came back to find Raphael thrusting his sai's at a training dummy.   The dummy was bouncing hard as it was struck, which meant he was simply hitting it instead of attacking it in any meaningful or skillful way.

\t"Raphael!" The rat called sharply.

\t"Yes, Ma... Ooomf!" Raph grunted and caught the heavy pack that had been tossed to him.  "What is IN this thing?"

\t"Everything we will need for the training.  Come, we must hurry to get you back to yourself."  Splinter didn't wait for his student to answer him.  He simply hurried away.  Raphael had to struggle to get it on and follow at the same time.  Like the others, he knew where they were going. But he hadn't had to stay there long himself.  The last time had been when Michelangelo had been lost for love to some hologram of Shredder's design.  The thing had nearly brainwashed him with it's hypnotic eyes and voice.  Raph shook his head and muttered to himself.  "Did I really become THAT bad?"

*****

\tRaphael looked around the glade.  It was a pleasant day.  Cloudy, but dry.  The clouds kept the weather cool.  Trees were all around with a sewer exit heading to see along a cliff at the end of the glade.  The grass and plants were maintained by the city's park and forestry department to make sure access to the sewer was possible.  The trees were all in good shape, and provided complete protection from anything but wild animals spying on them.  All in all, it was a very peaceful and pretty place.

\tSplinter lead the way through it into the woods for several yards.  The place he chose to stop wasn't very big, but it had a big fallen tree trunk with a gap under it and trees on either side.  It smelled of dirt and nature.  Thankfully it smelled of nothing else as he crawled in.  The gap had been dug out overtime by animals who had briefly inhabited it.  If it rained though, it would get very damp but Splinter didn't seem worried so Raphael didn't worry about it.  He shrugged off the pack and set it on a raised bit of dry roots in the back.  While he rubbed his shoulders where the straps had dig in a bit around the edges of his shell he turned back to the rat.  "What is IN this, master?"

\tThe rat set down his walking stick and stretched before turning and answering.  "Supplies.  Some towels, some food, some weights, which you will be wearing."

\t"Weights?" He opened the pack, there were indeed some large beach towels in there.  He dug past them and found some beef jerky, and a lot of rice noodles and seasonings.  There was a small tea pot and a pack of tea, and finally, he pulled out the weights.  They were long ankle and wrist weights.  Ten pounds each, with two sets for each ankle and wrist.   He lifted them out one at a time and set them out.

\t"Eighty Pounds?" The turtle sounding rather surprised.

\t"Forty for now.  If you need the rest, then you may put them on as needed." Splinter stretched again and then, removed his kimono.  "We will fight bare.  Nothing will be hidden.  No weapons other than those you have as your body.  That includes taking off your band, the weights however, stay on."

\tRaphael paused with one arm, already weighted, reaching towards the next weight.  His eyes were on his sensei.  He hadn't seen Splinter naked too often.  The rat was handsome.  The rat was lightly muscled, at least, he looked lightly muscled... The rat... had a quite large pair of balls hanging low between his legs dragging a soft looking sheath down with it.  His master seemed unconcerned with his nudity.  Raph looked away before he could feel things that would make him embarrassed and awkwardly lifted the weighted arm up to take off his head band.

\tMoving the weighted arm and the naked arm felt weird. Kind of fun, but weird.  His left arm felt like it was moving in slow motion with the weight on it but he managed to take his headband off anyway.  His arm dropped a lot faster than he had expected and slapped into the roots.  The turtle shook his head thinking to himself 'I really am off my game...'

\tHe set the band down next to the towels and realized, that he really DID feel naked without it.  It was such a small bit of cloth, and even wearing the weight, it had made him feel like himself.  The turtle looked down at his muscular legs and arms.  At his shell and groin.  They were usually exposed but somehow taking that little length of cloth off made him feel naked.  His thoughts were interrupted by Splinter's voice.

\t"Come, Raphael, let's get started." Raph saw splinter in the entryway.  His torso through, just his very shapely ass and tail... and the back of his thighs and legs and feet visible.

\t"Yes, Master Splinter!" He turned to put the rest on, not thinking about much else on purpose.

\tOutside, he stood on the soft grass opposite his sensei.  They weights drug him down, making his arms feel like lead.  Ten pounds hadn't seemed like much at the time.  But he found every movement felt sluggish now.  He felt like he had... when he'd been beaten.  Splinter charged at him suddenly.  Punching forward at his chest.

\tAs a turtle, that wouldn't have done much even if it connected, but he felt he had to try to block it anyway.  The rat's hand slammed into his shell, making him grunt back with Raphael's hands just too slow to move in time.  Splinter pulled back at the impact and used the force of his punch to push him into a spin to bring his tail around.  Thick rat tail smacked hard against the back of Raph's shell making the turtle stumble forward.

\tRaphael had forgotten how fast his master could be.  The attack was sudden, without warning or threat.  He watched his his attacker stop and step back.  A deep breath and Raph raised his hands again.

\tSplinter shook his tail subtly behind him.  He'd forgotten why he'd avoided using the tail slap against his students while sparring, now he recalled as his tail stung from the impact.  Still, he had to be thorough.  He called out.  "Raphael.  Your body is slowed.  You must use it more wisely.  Since you cannot attack as fast as normal you must move differently to make it seem like you are moving faster.  You see me coming." And he darted out towards the turtle and saw the hands come up.

\tHe stopped and stepped back.  "THINK, Raphael.  Your hands are slower.  So are your legs.  You must use both together.  When I come push backwards to put more distance between our impact.  Gravity still works at the same speed.  You can drop to your knees out of the way."

\tHis student tried again as Splinter's smaller body shot forward.  He punched towards the same spot and was pleased to see Raphael pushing and leaning back at the same time.  His hands managed to block the punch but again Splinter used the force of his punch to push himself away in a spin and bring his tail down.  Though he tried to swing it lighter to reduce the stinging. He clipped Raph's neck with the very tip, leaving a welt, and stepped away again.

\t"You know you must anticipate!  You learned one movement.  You must think further ahead to the next.  ADAPT."  The rat said firmly, breathing a bit heavily.  His nudity was drawing his student's gaze and slowing the thoughts about the sparring match.  The distraction was helping he decided.  Though Raphael still wasn't fighting too well he wasn't looking as vague or depressed about the fighting skills.  Instead, he was looking a bit flustered.

\tRaph and his brothers had fought bare many times.  They had fought bare with Splinter many times as well... they had not fought bare with him since they had reached a certain age, however.  He'd tried to keep his body from them so they would focus on their training.  They thought nothing of each other's exposed penis and testicles... but they all basically looked the same.  His body however, looked much different.  Even his genitals.

\tThe rat darted forward again this time running with his legs a bit wider, making sure his heavy scrotum swung visibly and did a high kick to Raphael's face.  He was pleased that his son blocked the kick, and reached out to squeeze the teen's soft scrotum and give it a light tug.  The tug was followed with a roll back and a swipe of his feet that brought Raph's legs out from under him.

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