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She hated walking at \n\nnight but there wasn't much choice in the world and she had no \n\nhorse to ride. she gripped the handle of her sword \n\nreassuringly knowing that a member of the feline military would \n\nlove to catch a tender fox maiden alone and do things \n\nto her before he killed her. She wasn't far from her home now but \n\nher senses were primed as she heard a noise behind \n\nher. Miriana spun around drawing her sword from beneath her cloak \n\nand brought it to bear on a feline soldier he \n\nstumbled back a bit.\n\n\t\"What the hell? You maidens are not supposed to wield weapons, \n\nyour laws forbid it.\" Miriana smiled a little\n\n\t\"That's true but then again what am I supposed to do, submit \n\nto your perverted whims?\" she snarled\n\n\t\"Watch where you aim your sword bitch or I'll be forced to \n\nkill you.\"\n\n\t\"You're welcome to try it bastard.\" The feline drew his sword \n\nand charged Miriana expecting an easy kill but \n\nMiriana knew how to use a sword and easily parried his attack. She \n\nside stepped then brought her sword down in a \n\nback handed swing be-heading the feline soldier spraying his blood \n\nover the soft white snow. Miriana wiped her sword \n\nclean on his tunic the took his sword from his hand. \"Thanks I \n\ncould always use another sword.\" She spat on the \n\nsoldiers body and continued on home.\n\n\tWhen she entered her home she built a fire and began to \n\nprepare herself dinner. Miriana hated living alone but \n\nthe males were scared of her a fox maiden who was as skilled as \n\nthey were with a sword. She sat down to her lonely \n\ntable and ate her meal. She looked out the window with a sigh. It \n\nhad been to long a winter for her taste and they were \n\nlosing the war against the felines it seemed. How else would that \n\nsoldier have been able to get far enough in to attack \n\nher on her way home. She needed to inform the village elders of \n\nthis but how, they would know she had battled. They \n\nhated the fact that she was able to battle it went against \n\ntradition of the males protecting the females, but she had little \n\nchoice, she trembled at the thought of her punishment. She would be \n\nwhipped in a humiliating public display and her \n\nsword taken from her. but it didn't matter, the village elders \n\ndidn't know she always kept her enemies weapons for just \n\nthis type of thing. No what concerned her most was she was not yet \n\nfully healed from her last punishment and now she \n\nlooked at another. Miriana shuddered. `Perhaps they will show \n\nmercy for a time.' Then she snorted in disbelief \"Yeah \n\nright!\" She muttered out loud as she got up from her table and \n\nwent to her bedroom. She stripped her cloak off and \n\nhung it by the fire to dry as she slipped naked beneath the rough \n\ncovers and curled up tightly. Trying not to think of \n\nwhat she would face tomorrow, but she had to tell someone and there \n\nwas no male she trusted enough to be her \n\nmessenger. Miriana whimpered in advance thought of the pain and \n\nhumiliation she would face before she slipped into \n\nan uneasy sleep.\n\n\tShe awoke to the sounds of birds outside her windows and \n\ncrawled out of bed. She built another fire and \n\nwrapped herself in her cloak. She looked at the felines sword and \n\ndecided to take that one instead of the one she had \n\nused to kill him. She sheathed the felines sword at her hip as she \n\ncooked her breakfast, then she headed into the village. \n\nShe walked past the remains of the soldier who had challenged her \n\nthe previous night. She looked at the body then spat \n\non his body once more before continuing on.\n\n\tWhen she arrived at the village she swallowed hard as she \n\nheaded for the elders council chambers, she \n\napproached the building with a feeling of dread knotting in her \n\nstomach but they must know, she straightened herself \n\nand walked meekly as maidens were supposed to as she entered the \n\nbuilding. The members of the council were \n\ndiscussing something when she heard the word feline in their \n\nconversation, `Could they already know, am I saved from a \n\nwhipping?' she asked herself as she sat silently with the other \n\nmaidens listening with intense concentration to the elders\n\n\t\"Yes there were several raids by feline soldiers last night \n\nthey killed many of our soldiers before they were \n\nstopped but one escaped and ran north.\" One stated, Miriana's blood \n\nfroze in her veins her home was to the north of the \n\nvillage.\n\n\t\"Well did he get away or was he caught later on?\" Another \n\nelder demanded.\n\n\t\"I'm afraid I don't know. But there is one here who lives to \n\nthe north perhaps she saw something.\" Miriana \n\nswallowed hard as the elder called out \"Maiden Miriana please come \n\nforward.\" Miriana swallowed hard as she rose and \n\nwalked to the front of the room. \"Well what brought you here today \n\nMaiden Miriana?\" Miriana pulled her cloak back \n\nrevealing the felines sword strapped to her hip her eyes on the \n\nfloor as gasps sounded at a armed maiden. \"Was this a \n\nfeline soldiers sword Maiden Miriana?\" she nodded as the elder \n\nreached out and drew the sword from the scabbard. \"I \n\nsee tell me Maiden Miriana, were you as I suspect responsible for \n\nthe death of the feline soldier?\" Again Miriana \n\nnodded in silence the elder sighed .\"Tell me Maiden Miriana have \n\nyou learned no lessons from your various public \n\npunishments?\" Miriana shook her head as the elder looked at her. \n\n\"Show us your back Maiden Miriana.\" She \n\nswallowed and removed her cloak turning to face the audience the \n\nelder sighed again. \"Maiden Miriana your wounds \n\nare not yet healed from your last whipping will you ever learn \n\nthat maidens are not supposed to fight?\" Miriana shook \n\nher head. \"Why?\" he asked Miriana kept her eyes on the floor as \n\nshe answered\n\n\t\"Because elder I live alone and have no male to protect me \n\nfrom harm.\" The elder nodded a single maiden was \n\nnot easily found in this village. \"Why have you not told us this \n\nbefore Maiden Miriana?\" Miriana looked at the floor \n\nand shrugged. \"Were you aware Maiden Miriana that if you had told \n\nus this before you would have spared yourself all \n\nthe pain and humiliations.\" To the shock of all there she nodded \n\nher head. \"You were aware of this and you never said \n\nanything, why?\" Miriana spoke softly\n\n\t\"Because elder I didn't wish to be an exception to our \n\ntraditions.\" She stated meekly the elder touched her shoulder \n\ntenderly.\n\n\t\"I realize that Maiden Miriana tell me why are you alone?\" \n\nMiriana looked at the floor and shrugged before answering.\n\n\t\"Most of the males either fear me or dislike me it seems \n\nelder, so I am not alone by choice.\" The elder looked at her down \n\nbowed head and humble demeanor this maiden was all she should be \n\nand more why should the males fear or dislike her so?\n\n\t\"Look at me Maiden Miriana please.\" She shuddered.\n\n\t\"But elder I am a maiden and I am not allowed to cast my eyes \n\nupon you.\"\n\n\t\"Ahh but when we ask you to you are allowed Maiden Miriana so \n\nplease let me see you.\" Miriana slowly looked up at the elder \n\nbefore her he was barely older than she and he was handsome.\n\n\t\"I see not why a male should dislike you Maiden Miriana. Tell \n\nme why they would.\" Miriana shrugged.\n\n\t\"I do not know perhaps it is because I can use a sword when \n\nmaidens are not supposed to elder.\" He looked at her softly.\n\n\t\"Replace your cloak Maiden Miriana there will be no \n\npunishment for you as you are alone but tell me who taught you to \n\nuse a sword?\" Miriana looked down\n\n\t\"I trained myself more or less sir. I was near a battle and \n\nfound a sword so I picked it up when a feline soldier approached \n\nme and laughed. at first I was fearful as I should be but then he \n\ndescribed what he was going to do to me in detail. I got angry and \n\nattacked him. He was surprised to see a maiden challenge him and \n\nthat surprise was his worst mistake. I ran him through with the \n\nsword and told him none shall ever take those liberties with my \n\nbody as he died.\" The elder nodded in understanding\n\n\t\"He was going to rape you?\" he asked.\n\n\t\"Not just rape me elder he was going to torture me to death \n\nwhile raping me making certain that...\" She broke off as tears \n\nfilled her eyes to her surprise he took her into his arms.\n\n\t\"It's all right Maiden Miriana he didn't and you are safe was \n\nthis sword from another who was going to rape you?\" Miriana nodded \n\nas her tears flowed. \"Come with me Maiden Miriana.\" Miriana \n\nfollowed the elder as he nodded to the council. \"you have my vote \n\nalready I will return later on.\" The rest of the elders nodded as \n\nhe left they left the room \"My name is Fenris Persyel, what is \n\nyour full name Maiden Miriana?\" she swallowed hard before \n\nreplying.\n\n\t\"Miriana Kitaren elder.\" He smiled at her\n\n\t\"You may call me Fenris may I call you by Miriana?\" she \n\nnodded at him.\n\n\t\"It would be an honor eld.. I mean Fenris.\" He smiled at her \n\nonce more.\n\n\t\"Do you know why I wished your company Miriana?\" she shook \n\nher head meekly \"You fascinate me you are a combination of a \n\ntraditional fox-maiden and a warrior. I see no reason for any one \n\nto dislike you or fear you.\" Miriana smiled. \"Do you wish to live \n\nalone Miriana with no male to protect you.\" Miriana stumbled a \n\nlittle at his comment \"Of course I realize you do not need the \n\nprotection as any other fox-maid but still if it came to it don't \n\nyou want a male to battle at your side?\" Miriana sighed\n\n\t\"Of course I would like a mate who would be glad to have me \n\njoin him in battle, but I do not see that happening any time soon \n\nFenris.\" He stopped and looked at her.\n\n\t\"I do not fear nor dislike you I find it odd but I would find \n\nit an honor to battle at your side.\" Miriana blushed as he lifted \n\nher chin to look into her eyes. \"How many summers are you \n\nMiriana?\" she looked into his eyes startled by what she saw there. \n\nThere was no judgment but open honest admiration.\n\n\t\"Merely 19 Fenris.\" He smiled at her \n\n\t\"I myself am only 22 summers Miriana and I am not mated to \n\nanyone I would be most honored if you would consider me for a \n\nmate.\" Miriana couldn't believe what she was hearing from this \n\nelder. He was interested in her.\n\n\t\"But why me? I mean surely as an elder you have your choice \n\nof any single maiden in the village.\" Fenris smiled before \n\nanswering her.\n\n\t\"This is true Miriana. but you knew as a single maiden \n\ndefending herself were exempt from the public humiliation and \n\nwhipping, but instead you chose to receive your punishments Why?\" \n\nMiriana shrugged.\n\n\t\"I don't know maybe I deserved them in some way.\" Fenris \n\nshook his head\n\n\t\"I don't believe that for an instant Miriana.\" She shrugged \n\nagain. \"Please Miriana consider me as your mate.\" He added.\n\n\t\"I have been since you asked me too Fenris.\" She confessed to \n\nhim he looked into her eyes and saw adoration radiating from them. \n\nMiriana blushed as he held her close for a moment.\n\n\t\"Come with me Miriana please.\" She looked at the elder and \n\nnodded her assent. He smiled and gestured to an open cafe‚. They \n\nsat down and ate lunch together talking lively drawing looks of \n\nshock from everyone around them at the maiden talking so freely \n\nwith an elder. When the meal was over they left and walked down to \n\nthe river side. As they sat there a feline scout broke cover and \n\ntried to run away but Miriana and Fenris gave chase they were \n\nnearly with him when he rounded a corner they followed and ran \n\ninto a small group of feline warriors.\n\n\t\"Well, well what do we have here but a tender young fox-\n\nmaid.\" He sniggered \"Kill the male.\" He ordered and Miriana drew \n\nher sword.\n\n\t\"Make one move and it will be your last.\" She snarled as \n\nFenris drew his sword at her side. He leaned over to her, not \n\ntaking his eyes off the enemy.\n\n\t\"Looks like I get to battle alongside of you sooner than I \n\nhad thought.\" Miriana smiled at his comment but was waiting as one \n\nof the felines advanced he took a swing at her expecting a amateur \n\nattempt to fight from her but was shocked as she easily blocked \n\nhis swing and quickly followed with a swing of her own slicing his \n\nthroat. The feline dropped his sword and grabbed his throat as he \n\ncollapsed. She scooped up the sword and stood ready.\n\n\t\"Any one else?\" the remaining five charged and Miriana used \n\nboth swords with the skill of a seasoned warrior as she cut and \n\nslashed the enemies around her while Fenris ran a feline through \n\nand grabbed up the enemy sword as well, the felines were easily \n\ndefeated by the two. After the battle Miriana and Fenris stood \n\npanting covered with sweat and the blood of their enemies she \n\nturned to Fenris. \"I would be honored to accept you as my mate \n\nFenris.\" He smiled at her\n\n\t\"Nothing like a battle to make a maiden think huh.\" He took \n\nMiriana in his arms and kissed her gently. Miriana's pulse raced \n\nthis was her first kiss and it was better than anything she had \n\never imagined they fell to the ground her pulse racing harder as \n\nshe felt his penis hardening as the kiss broke.\n\n\t\"You may take me if you wish but be gentle.\" She whispered in \n\nhis ear. Fenris looked at her lovingly as she reached for him \n\n\"Please Fenris oh Please.\" Her hand closed on him as she fumbled \n\nto free him he slid her cloak open and unfastened her tunic \n\nexposing her breasts and he began to kiss them lightly as her hand \n\nstroked him. He reached down and touched her tender sex making her \n\ngasp at the touch she guided him to her \"Please be gentle.\" He \n\nsmiled at her.\n\n\t\"I will Miriana I promise.\" He slid into her vagina causing \n\nher to gasp as she arced her back whimpering he moved slowly then \n\nkissed her again deeper as he began to work himself back and forth \n\nin her body her back was constantly arced from the pleasure as he \n\nwas preparing to cum.\n\n\t\"Please Fenris cum inside of me I am yours.\" His crescendo \n\nincreased as he released into her causing a long moan to escape \n\nfrom her lips. He rolled to the side laying beside his mate he \n\nleaned up on his elbow looking into her eyes he touched her cheek.\n\n\t\"And I am yours my love forever.\" \n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "\tThe weather was cold as snow fell through the night air as

Miriana padded along shivering lightly as she headed

for her home her long red hair hanging down behind her as she

pulled her cloak tighter about her. She hated walking at

night but there wasn't much choice in the world and she had no

horse to ride. she gripped the handle of her sword

reassuringly knowing that a member of the feline military would

love to catch a tender fox maiden alone and do things

to her before he killed her. She wasn't far from her home now but

her senses were primed as she heard a noise behind

her. Miriana spun around drawing her sword from beneath her cloak

and brought it to bear on a feline soldier he

stumbled back a bit.

\t"What the hell? You maidens are not supposed to wield weapons,

your laws forbid it." Miriana smiled a little

\t"That's true but then again what am I supposed to do, submit

to your perverted whims?" she snarled

\t"Watch where you aim your sword bitch or I'll be forced to

kill you."

\t"You're welcome to try it bastard." The feline drew his sword

and charged Miriana expecting an easy kill but

Miriana knew how to use a sword and easily parried his attack. She

side stepped then brought her sword down in a

back handed swing be-heading the feline soldier spraying his blood

over the soft white snow. Miriana wiped her sword

clean on his tunic the took his sword from his hand. "Thanks I

could always use another sword." She spat on the

soldiers body and continued on home.

\tWhen she entered her home she built a fire and began to

prepare herself dinner. Miriana hated living alone but

the males were scared of her a fox maiden who was as skilled as

they were with a sword. She sat down to her lonely

table and ate her meal. She looked out the window with a sigh. It

had been to long a winter for her taste and they were

losing the war against the felines it seemed. How else would that

soldier have been able to get far enough in to attack

her on her way home. She needed to inform the village elders of

this but how, they would know she had battled. They

hated the fact that she was able to battle it went against

tradition of the males protecting the females, but she had little

choice, she trembled at the thought of her punishment. She would be

whipped in a humiliating public display and her

sword taken from her. but it didn't matter, the village elders

didn't know she always kept her enemies weapons for just

this type of thing. No what concerned her most was she was not yet

fully healed from her last punishment and now she

looked at another. Miriana shuddered. `Perhaps they will show

mercy for a time.' Then she snorted in disbelief "Yeah

right!" She muttered out loud as she got up from her table and

went to her bedroom. She stripped her cloak off and

hung it by the fire to dry as she slipped naked beneath the rough

covers and curled up tightly. Trying not to think of

what she would face tomorrow, but she had to tell someone and there

was no male she trusted enough to be her

messenger. Miriana whimpered in advance thought of the pain and

humiliation she would face before she slipped into

an uneasy sleep.

\tShe awoke to the sounds of birds outside her windows and

crawled out of bed. She built another fire and

wrapped herself in her cloak. She looked at the felines sword and

decided to take that one instead of the one she had

used to kill him. She sheathed the felines sword at her hip as she

cooked her breakfast, then she headed into the village.

She walked past the remains of the soldier who had challenged her

the previous night. She looked at the body then spat

on his body once more before continuing on.

\tWhen she arrived at the village she swallowed hard as she

headed for the elders council chambers, she

approached the building with a feeling of dread knotting in her

stomach but they must know, she straightened herself

and walked meekly as maidens were supposed to as she entered the

building. The members of the council were

discussing something when she heard the word feline in their

conversation, `Could they already know, am I saved from a

whipping?' she asked herself as she sat silently with the other

maidens listening with intense concentration to the elders

\t"Yes there were several raids by feline soldiers last night

they killed many of our soldiers before they were

stopped but one escaped and ran north." One stated, Miriana's blood

froze in her veins her home was to the north of the

village.

\t"Well did he get away or was he caught later on?" Another

elder demanded.

\t"I'm afraid I don't know. But there is one here who lives to

the north perhaps she saw something." Miriana

swallowed hard as the elder called out "Maiden Miriana please come

forward." Miriana swallowed hard as she rose and

walked to the front of the room. "Well what brought you here today

Maiden Miriana?" Miriana pulled her cloak back

revealing the felines sword strapped to her hip her eyes on the

floor as gasps sounded at a armed maiden. "Was this a

feline soldiers sword Maiden Miriana?" she nodded as the elder

reached out and drew the sword from the scabbard. "I

see tell me Maiden Miriana, were you as I suspect responsible for

the death of the feline soldier?" Again Miriana

nodded in silence the elder sighed ."Tell me Maiden Miriana have

you learned no lessons from your various public

punishments?" Miriana shook her head as the elder looked at her.

"Show us your back Maiden Miriana." She

swallowed and removed her cloak turning to face the audience the

elder sighed again. "Maiden Miriana your wounds

are not yet healed from your last whipping will you ever learn

that maidens are not supposed to fight?" Miriana shook

her head. "Why?" he asked Miriana kept her eyes on the floor as

she answered

\t"Because elder I live alone and have no male to protect me

from harm." The elder nodded a single maiden was

not easily found in this village. "Why have you not told us this

before Maiden Miriana?" Miriana looked at the floor

and shrugged. "Were you aware Maiden Miriana that if you had told

us this before you would have spared yourself all

the pain and humiliations." To the shock of all there she nodded

her head. "You were aware of this and you never said

anything, why?" Miriana spoke softly

\t"Because elder I didn't wish to be an exception to our

traditions." She stated meekly the elder touched her shoulder

tenderly.

\t"I realize that Maiden Miriana tell me why are you alone?"

Miriana looked at the floor and shrugged before answering.

\t"Most of the males either fear me or dislike me it seems

elder, so I am not alone by choice." The elder looked at her down

bowed head and humble demeanor this maiden was all she should be

and more why should the males fear or dislike her so?

\t"Look at me Maiden Miriana please." She shuddered.

\t"But elder I am a maiden and I am not allowed to cast my eyes

upon you."

\t"Ahh but when we ask you to you are allowed Maiden Miriana so

please let me see you." Miriana slowly looked up at the elder

before her he was barely older than she and he was handsome.

\t"I see not why a male should dislike you Maiden Miriana. Tell

me why they would." Miriana shrugged.

\t"I do not know perhaps it is because I can use a sword when

maidens are not supposed to elder." He looked at her softly.

\t"Replace your cloak Maiden Miriana there will be no

punishment for you as you are alone but tell me who taught you to

use a sword?" Miriana looked down

\t"I trained myself more or less sir. I was near a battle and

found a sword so I picked it up when a feline soldier approached

me and laughed. at first I was fearful as I should be but then he

described what he was going to do to me in detail. I got angry and

attacked him. He was surprised to see a maiden challenge him and

that surprise was his worst mistake. I ran him through with the

sword and told him none shall ever take those liberties with my

body as he died." The elder nodded in understanding

\t"He was going to rape you?" he asked.

\t"Not just rape me elder he was going to torture me to death

while raping me making certain that..." She broke off as tears

filled her eyes to her surprise he took her into his arms.

\t"It's all right Maiden Miriana he didn't and you are safe was

this sword from another who was going to rape you?" Miriana nodded

as her tears flowed. "Come with me Maiden Miriana." Miriana

followed the elder as he nodded to the council. "you have my vote

already I will return later on." The rest of the elders nodded as

he left they left the room "My name is Fenris Persyel, what is

your full name Maiden Miriana?" she swallowed hard before

replying.

\t"Miriana Kitaren elder." He smiled at her

\t"You may call me Fenris may I call you by Miriana?" she

nodded at him.

\t"It would be an honor eld.. I mean Fenris." He smiled at her

once more.

\t"Do you know why I wished your company Miriana?" she shook

her head meekly "You fascinate me you are a combination of a

traditional fox-maiden and a warrior. I see no reason for any one

to dislike you or fear you." Miriana smiled. "Do you wish to live

alone Miriana with no male to protect you." Miriana stumbled a

little at his comment "Of course I realize you do not need the

protection as any other fox-maid but still if it came to it don't

you want a male to battle at your side?" Miriana sighed

\t"Of course I would like a mate who would be glad to have me

join him in battle, but I do not see that happening any time soon

Fenris." He stopped and looked at her.

\t"I do not fear nor dislike you I find it odd but I would find

it an honor to battle at your side." Miriana blushed as he lifted

her chin to look into her eyes. "How many summers are you

Miriana?" she looked into his eyes startled by what she saw there.

There was no judgment but open honest admiration.

\t"Merely 19 Fenris." He smiled at her

\t"I myself am only 22 summers Miriana and I am not mated to

anyone I would be most honored if you would consider me for a

mate." Miriana couldn't believe what she was hearing from this

elder. He was interested in her.

\t"But why me? I mean surely as an elder you have your choice

of any single maiden in the village." Fenris smiled before

answering her.

\t"This is true Miriana. but you knew as a single maiden

defending herself were exempt from the public humiliation and

whipping, but instead you chose to receive your punishments Why?"

Miriana shrugged.

\t"I don't know maybe I deserved them in some way." Fenris

shook his head

\t"I don't believe that for an instant Miriana." She shrugged

again. "Please Miriana consider me as your mate." He added.

\t"I have been since you asked me too Fenris." She confessed to

him he looked into her eyes and saw adoration radiating from them.

Miriana blushed as he held her close for a moment.

\t"Come with me Miriana please." She looked at the elder and

nodded her assent. He smiled and gestured to an open cafe‚. They

sat down and ate lunch together talking lively drawing looks of

shock from everyone around them at the maiden talking so freely

with an elder. When the meal was over they left and walked down to

the river side. As they sat there a feline scout broke cover and

tried to run away but Miriana and Fenris gave chase they were

nearly with him when he rounded a corner they followed and ran

into a small group of feline warriors.

\t"Well, well what do we have here but a tender young fox-

maid." He sniggered "Kill the male." He ordered and Miriana drew

her sword.

\t"Make one move and it will be your last." She snarled as

Fenris drew his sword at her side. He leaned over to her, not

taking his eyes off the enemy.

\t"Looks like I get to battle alongside of you sooner than I

had thought." Miriana smiled at his comment but was waiting as one

of the felines advanced he took a swing at her expecting a amateur

attempt to fight from her but was shocked as she easily blocked

his swing and quickly followed with a swing of her own slicing his

throat. The feline dropped his sword and grabbed his throat as he

collapsed. She scooped up the sword and stood ready.

\t"Any one else?" the remaining five charged and Miriana used

both swords with the skill of a seasoned warrior as she cut and

slashed the enemies around her while Fenris ran a feline through

and grabbed up the enemy sword as well, the felines were easily

defeated by the two. After the battle Miriana and Fenris stood

panting covered with sweat and the blood of their enemies she

turned to Fenris. "I would be honored to accept you as my mate

Fenris." He smiled at her

\t"Nothing like a battle to make a maiden think huh." He took

Miriana in his arms and kissed her gently. Miriana's pulse raced

this was her first kiss and it was better than anything she had

ever imagined they fell to the ground her pulse racing harder as

she felt his penis hardening as the kiss broke.

\t"You may take me if you wish but be gentle." She whispered in

his ear. Fenris looked at her lovingly as she reached for him

"Please Fenris oh Please." Her hand closed on him as she fumbled

to free him he slid her cloak open and unfastened her tunic

exposing her breasts and he began to kiss them lightly as her hand

stroked him. He reached down and touched her tender sex making her

gasp at the touch she guided him to her "Please be gentle." He

smiled at her.

\t"I will Miriana I promise." He slid into her vagina causing

her to gasp as she arced her back whimpering he moved slowly then

kissed her again deeper as he began to work himself back and forth

in her body her back was constantly arced from the pleasure as he

was preparing to cum.

\t"Please Fenris cum inside of me I am yours." His crescendo

increased as he released into her causing a long moan to escape

from her lips. He rolled to the side laying beside his mate he

leaned up on his elbow looking into her eyes he touched her cheek.

\t"And I am yours my love forever."

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