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"writing": " Chapter 3\n\tSuko feared the return of Kanto, a return which would probably entail Earth’s destruction, or simply his death. If Kanto did not see all earthlings dead, it would be proof that Suko did not use those powers. Would Kanto somehow take away his powers to prevent Suko from defending himself? Or does he lack that ability? Suko hoped for the latter. \n\tSuko’s friendship with Trevor, and the happiness that helping others implied, made Suko realize that revenge was never a good idea. Whatever negative tendencies earthlings have, Suko thought, were counterbalanced by positive aspects. This was reflected in Trevor’s pure affection for Suko, simply due to the fact that Suko rescued Trevor. \n\tAfter the week elapsed, Kanto did return. Suko had taken Trevor to a trip to the Appalachians. Suko and Trevor admired the scenery together, and played hide and seek in the woods. The pines were as tall as the eye could see, and Suko took Trevor to the tip of one. The mountains looked like a green ocean, mottled here and there by the shadows of the clouds. Trevor then noticed a white point of light that was getting bigger and bigger, until it was right above them. The light disappeared, and revealed the disk ship. \n\t“Hi, Suko, it’s been a while! At least from your point of view, hahaha!” Kanto said after emerging from the ship, his green cap dangling with each “ha.”\n\t“Who is this, Suko?” Trevor sensed danger from Kanto, and hid behind Suko.\n\t“I see that you have not killed all earthlings as you promised.” Kanto snickered. “But I congratulate you on two things. Number one, you managed to inspire a sense of protection on that little lamb.”\n\t“You are a cynic.” Suko frowned. \n\t“You promised to kill all the earthlings?” Trevor said, now somewhat uneasy around Suko. Suko did not respond to this, instead addressing Kanto: “I changed my mind about that.”\n\t“Aw Suko! Why? I gave you power, I gave you abilities which no earthling ever dreamt of possessing. Why do you repay me this way?”\n\t“You did not give me anything. You merely facilitated the development of these. I know this because I merely followed your instructions.”\n\t“Suko, I’m scared…” Trevor began to cry, and wet his pants.\n\t“You should be, little one…” Kanto responded, “since you have in front of your eyes the one who demolished all of those buildings in your city, the one who killed many animals there, and the one who destroyed those helicopters!” Trevor gasped and looked at Suko surprised. “I gave him the ability to throw fire, and to essentially control that element to his will. Or, like he astutely pointed out, he developed this ability with my help.”\n\t“Trevor… I…” Suko tried to approach Trevor, who was now crying and was trying to get away from Suko. “I hate you! You killed a lot of people!” Trevor threw a rock in Suko’s direction, which did not hit him. “Why did you do it? You are evil! I’m not your friend anymore!” And threw another rock at Suko, which hit him in the forehead. Suko began to bleed, and to tear up. “I’m sorry, Trevor.” Suko looked down. Then Suko looked into Trevor’s blue, teary eyes, which wanted to kill Suko by just looking at him. “I… I changed my views after meeting you. You made me happy.” Suko tried to approach Trevor, but Trevor threw another rock at Suko, hitting Suko in the belly. “Shut up, evil liar!”\n\tKanto laughed at this spectacle, and it was a maniacal laugh. He enjoyed looking at friends fighting. “Suko… Since you are now useless to me, and you are a potential threat to my plans, I will eliminate you.” Kanto then produced what appeared to be a metallic wand of some kind. He pointed it at Suko, and after pressing a button, a light green beam of light was shot and hit Suko. Suko fell backwards and hit his back with the ground. Kanto shot more beams at Suko while he laughed maniacally, and Suko dodged them by rolling to the side. Suko threw a fire ball to Kanto, but Kanto destroyed it with his green beam, leaving behind only sparks. \nSuko then sprang forward in his fireball form, and Kanto shot another beam. This time Suko was making headway towards Kanto, but the beam was strong enough to keep Suko at bay. Suko then managed to break the beam and punch Kanto in the face. The pain was so intense that Kanto dropped his beam wand. \n“No!” Kanto screamed as he tried to fly downwards and recover it, but Suko surpassed him in speed and punched him again. One time, Kanto was punched to the stomach, another to the face, and the last was a kick on the crotch area, which made Kanto tear up. \n“I want you to leave this planet alone, and never come back because it will be worse for you.” Suko smiled confidently. Kanto growled, and got back to his ship. Then, through a microphone, he said “I will come back Suko. We, the ultraterrestrials, will grow in number and will take back that which is ours. We will never let this incident slip.” \n“We’ll see about that.” Suko said. \n“Oh, I almost forgot.” The microphone voice was then followed by the edge of the disk glowing, and producing a horizontal beam. Suko avoided this, but it hit Trevor, cutting him in half. Trevor’s blood was all over the area. This incensed Suko, “How dare you!!” Suko tried to fireball the ship, but this one disappeared as rapidly as it always did, leaving behind a streak of smoke. \nSuko got down to see Trevor, who was in the last throes of his life. “Suko…”\n“Trevor, this is my fault! I am sorry! Please don’t die!” Suko couldn’t hold the tears back. “Please, forgive me for what I did. If I hadn’t been selfish, none of this would’ve happened!”\n“Ah…” And that was the last of Trevor. “Trevor!!!” Suko held Trevor’s upper body half tightly, with more blood coming out of the bottom of the cut body. Suko screamed as hard as he could, then became a fireball and began to crash into the trees. His anger was incontrollable. The emotion was so intense, that the fire grew into a column that reached the exosphere, and then, it rapidly dissipated, just as Trevor’s life did. \n\n",
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\tSuko feared the return of Kanto, a return which would probably entail Earth’s destruction, or simply his death. If Kanto did not see all earthlings dead, it would be proof that Suko did not use those powers. Would Kanto somehow take away his powers to prevent Suko from defending himself? Or does he lack that ability? Suko hoped for the latter.
\tSuko’s friendship with Trevor, and the happiness that helping others implied, made Suko realize that revenge was never a good idea. Whatever negative tendencies earthlings have, Suko thought, were counterbalanced by positive aspects. This was reflected in Trevor’s pure affection for Suko, simply due to the fact that Suko rescued Trevor.
\tAfter the week elapsed, Kanto did return. Suko had taken Trevor to a trip to the Appalachians. Suko and Trevor admired the scenery together, and played hide and seek in the woods. The pines were as tall as the eye could see, and Suko took Trevor to the tip of one. The mountains looked like a green ocean, mottled here and there by the shadows of the clouds. Trevor then noticed a white point of light that was getting bigger and bigger, until it was right above them. The light disappeared, and revealed the disk ship.
\t“Hi, Suko, it’s been a while! At least from your point of view, hahaha!” Kanto said after emerging from the ship, his green cap dangling with each “ha.”
\t“Who is this, Suko?” Trevor sensed danger from Kanto, and hid behind Suko.
\t“I see that you have not killed all earthlings as you promised.” Kanto snickered. “But I congratulate you on two things. Number one, you managed to inspire a sense of protection on that little lamb.”
\t“You are a cynic.” Suko frowned.
\t“You promised to kill all the earthlings?” Trevor said, now somewhat uneasy around Suko. Suko did not respond to this, instead addressing Kanto: “I changed my mind about that.”
\t“Aw Suko! Why? I gave you power, I gave you abilities which no earthling ever dreamt of possessing. Why do you repay me this way?”
\t“You did not give me anything. You merely facilitated the development of these. I know this because I merely followed your instructions.”
\t“Suko, I’m scared…” Trevor began to cry, and wet his pants.
\t“You should be, little one…” Kanto responded, “since you have in front of your eyes the one who demolished all of those buildings in your city, the one who killed many animals there, and the one who destroyed those helicopters!” Trevor gasped and looked at Suko surprised. “I gave him the ability to throw fire, and to essentially control that element to his will. Or, like he astutely pointed out, he developed this ability with my help.”
\t“Trevor… I…” Suko tried to approach Trevor, who was now crying and was trying to get away from Suko. “I hate you! You killed a lot of people!” Trevor threw a rock in Suko’s direction, which did not hit him. “Why did you do it? You are evil! I’m not your friend anymore!” And threw another rock at Suko, which hit him in the forehead. Suko began to bleed, and to tear up. “I’m sorry, Trevor.” Suko looked down. Then Suko looked into Trevor’s blue, teary eyes, which wanted to kill Suko by just looking at him. “I… I changed my views after meeting you. You made me happy.” Suko tried to approach Trevor, but Trevor threw another rock at Suko, hitting Suko in the belly. “Shut up, evil liar!”
\tKanto laughed at this spectacle, and it was a maniacal laugh. He enjoyed looking at friends fighting. “Suko… Since you are now useless to me, and you are a potential threat to my plans, I will eliminate you.” Kanto then produced what appeared to be a metallic wand of some kind. He pointed it at Suko, and after pressing a button, a light green beam of light was shot and hit Suko. Suko fell backwards and hit his back with the ground. Kanto shot more beams at Suko while he laughed maniacally, and Suko dodged them by rolling to the side. Suko threw a fire ball to Kanto, but Kanto destroyed it with his green beam, leaving behind only sparks.
Suko then sprang forward in his fireball form, and Kanto shot another beam. This time Suko was making headway towards Kanto, but the beam was strong enough to keep Suko at bay. Suko then managed to break the beam and punch Kanto in the face. The pain was so intense that Kanto dropped his beam wand.
“No!” Kanto screamed as he tried to fly downwards and recover it, but Suko surpassed him in speed and punched him again. One time, Kanto was punched to the stomach, another to the face, and the last was a kick on the crotch area, which made Kanto tear up.
“I want you to leave this planet alone, and never come back because it will be worse for you.” Suko smiled confidently. Kanto growled, and got back to his ship. Then, through a microphone, he said “I will come back Suko. We, the ultraterrestrials, will grow in number and will take back that which is ours. We will never let this incident slip.”
“We’ll see about that.” Suko said.
“Oh, I almost forgot.” The microphone voice was then followed by the edge of the disk glowing, and producing a horizontal beam. Suko avoided this, but it hit Trevor, cutting him in half. Trevor’s blood was all over the area. This incensed Suko, “How dare you!!” Suko tried to fireball the ship, but this one disappeared as rapidly as it always did, leaving behind a streak of smoke.
Suko got down to see Trevor, who was in the last throes of his life. “Suko…”
“Trevor, this is my fault! I am sorry! Please don’t die!” Suko couldn’t hold the tears back. “Please, forgive me for what I did. If I hadn’t been selfish, none of this would’ve happened!”
“Ah…” And that was the last of Trevor. “Trevor!!!” Suko held Trevor’s upper body half tightly, with more blood coming out of the bottom of the cut body. Suko screamed as hard as he could, then became a fireball and began to crash into the trees. His anger was incontrollable. The emotion was so intense, that the fire grew into a column that reached the exosphere, and then, it rapidly dissipated, just as Trevor’s life did.
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