[MLP OCs] Imperfect Chaos
by @silvergunner
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As the Sun rose over ponyville, at the edge of the town laid the orchards surrounding Sweet Apple Acres. Hidden within one of the largest trees was a quite rustic treehouse that was home to a very special Stallion. That Stallion’s name was Speedy, and as slept through his normal wakeup time he had no idea how special that day would be to him both then and in the future.

Over two hours after he was supposed to get up, the sound of letters dropped against the door by a certain grey mail-mare woke him suddenly. He looked at his clock and gasped in shock that he was late. He forced himself out of bed, determined to get out of the treehouse as fast as possible. That day he was supposed to be on a date with his beloved girlfriend, the yellow Cutie Mark Crusader known as Apple Bloom, and getting there in time was an upmost priority.

He managed to get his things together and chucked them in his messenger bag. He downed a glass of orange juice as fast as he could to quench his thirst then got out of the house as fast as possible. With no time to use the ladder he made a leap of faith off the platform and dropped down several metres to the ground. Thankfully it was autumn and a pile of dead leaves was there to cushion his fall. He shook his way out of them and dashed towards Sweet Apple Acres as quickly as he could. He had missed out all of his morning routines, including dealing with the aftermath of the night before.

Apple Bloom was important to him to a point where a date with her was a priority. They had been boyfriend and girlfriend for over a year at this point, and were even talking about marriage in the near future. Speedy was saving up his wages as a courier to buy his girlfriend an engagement ring, and wanted nothing more to spend as much time with her as possible both before and after he was able to offer her the ring. His close friend Silver Shadow had given him advice on how to progress things, and they seemed to be working.

By the time he had reached the edge of Sweet Apple Acres he was clutching his loins in discomfort. He and his friend Silver had drank a lot of non-alcoholic cider the night before after Silver had come home incredibly depressed and Speedy had stayed up comforting him. Silver was a bat-pony and was feared by a lot of Ponyville even though he was a nice guy and generally harmless. Silver thought he was the embodiment of bad luck and Speedy had convinced him otherwise many times.

Speedy didn’t believe Silver was bad luck because the two of them had only had good times together. In the recent past, Speedy had saved Speedy from certain death after he flew down to knock him out of the way of a landslide, then protected him from bullies by using fighting techniques previously unseen in Ponyville. Speedy was so grateful for Silver’s help, he let the bat-pony move into his treehouse home with him, thus saving him from homelessness. Both of them were now best friends, with both ponies helping each other out in any way they could. Silver had even encouraged Speedy to take the young blue stallion’s relationship with his girlfriend all the way.

These thoughts in Speedy’s mind were interrupted by the increasing discomfort within him. At this point his bladder was bulging beyond normal capacity. He needed to find somewhere to pee before he wet himself. Looking around from side to side for somewhere to pee, he noticed the back of the main barn had nopony nearby and was at least partially hidden from sight by several carts nearby. Taking a deep breath, he wandered over towards it as quickly as he could, trying not to be seen by anyone who could have been lurking nearby.

He put his saddle bag down a few metres away from himself, then moved a hand down to his loins. Rubbing his sheath a little, his thick black pony cock emerged from it and grew to a good percentage of his full length. Speedy was far more endowed than many other stallions in Ponyville after all, and as he felt it extend to near full thickness he stood back a little from the wall and gripped his member with one hoof. He breathed out deeply as he let go of his discomfort.

His pee shot out of the tip of his cock with immense force and splattered against the side of the barn. He let out a sigh of relief and closed his eyes as he felt his bladder empty steadily, and the noise of his urine splattering against the wall and soaking both it and the ground below it was music to his ears considering his desperation just a few moments before.

Suddenly though the noise of his hot golden liquids splashing against the wall ended, even though he felt himself continuing to pee. He opened his eyes and looked down and saw a strange sight. Big McIntosh was lying down below him, face up with the lower half of his body facing Speedy. Speedy’s stream was now firing straight at the bigger pony’s body, splattering against Mac’s chest and lower body. Mac looked up and grinned at Speedy. “Eyup Speedy, you’ve certainly been saving up a lot inside you” he chuckled.

“Mac, why are you letting me pee over you?” Speedy gasped. He tried to stop the stream but was unable to due to the pressure within his bladder, and he involuntarily continued soaking Mac.

“Because it feels real nice, splashing over my body” Big McIntosh chuckled. Speedy looked down and saw that his hot stream was now splashing against Mac’s big black stallion member. It was steadily stiffening and getting larger and larger, living up to the reputation that the big red stallion had built up amongst the mares in Ponyville, as well as a few stallions as well. “You’re definitely getting my hard, pissing over my cock” he added.

Speedy gazed at Mac’s enlarging cock, he realised just how turned on the huge stallion was. “I guess that me peeing on your cock is your ultimate fantasy?” the young blue stallion asked, blushing a little.

“Nope. You pissing on my butt is” Mac chuckled. He rolled around so he was on all fours and stuck his flank up in the air. Speedy’s golden stream splashed against Mac’s juicy red butt, pouring down over his rear entrance and his cutie mark, before dripping down onto his ballsack.

By the time Speedy’s bladder was empty and the last few squirts of his urine had splashed over Mac’s rear, he felt himself rock hard. “You know Mac, your fantasy may be having me pee over your butt, but i’d rather slide my cock inside your butt like we used to...” he commented, remembering his past encounters with Mac. Before he and Apple Bloom had become a couple, Speedy and Big McIntosh were friends with benefits and had several times. However things got complicated and they eventually separated but remained friends. 

“Eyup, go for it” Big McIntosh chuckled. He wiggled his butt in invitation to Speedy, and his thick hard stallion cock swung from side to side below him. He too remembered all the fun times he and Speedy had together sexually, and missed them very much. Although he and Speedy now had female partners, he sometimes fantasised about his former partner coming back for one more round of sexual fun with him...

“Lets do it” Speedy smiled. He planted his hooves on Mac’s hips and pushed down to lift himself into the air. He shoved his cock forwards underneath Mac’s ballsack, and let some of his own urine pour over it to give some lubrication. Pulling himself back again, he adjusted his hips until the tip of his stallion member was poking against Mac’s backside. Taking a deep breath, he thrusted his hips forward.

Both stallions let out a gasp of surprise as the first six or seven inches of the young blue stallions thick black cock slid into Mac’s butt. Speedy enjoyed the feeling of Mac’s butt around his large cock, while Mac gasped in pleasure at his favourite young stallion penetrating him for the first time in far too long. Neither of them had had sex with each other since Speedy and Apple Bloom had become a couple, and as Speedy began thrusting in and out of Big Mcintosh, both of them realised just how much they had missed it.

As Speedy pushed inch after inch of his penis into Mac, he let out light moans of pleasure. Like before it was quite difficult to push into Mac’s incredibly tight butt, even with the lubrication that the urine that had dripped over his cock had given him. “So, why did you want me to fuck you today Mac?” Speedy asked his friend and partner.

“I’ve had dreams about you for over a month, especially ones about you pissing over me then fucking me for over a month” Mac replied. “When I heard you peeing against the barn I thought i’d come and check. Then I decided to seize the opportunity and see how you react” he chuckled. “Looks like I got the reaction I wanted” he added.

“Glad to be of service Mac” Speedy breathed out. At this point more than half of his long and thick cock was sliding in and out of Mac’s backside, and on looking down below he could see Mac himself was at full length and his member bouncing from side to side with the impact of Speedy’s thrusts into Big McIntosh’s butt. Speedy continued to buttfuck the larger stallion at a greater speed, both of them moaning in pleasure as he did so.

Soon it was too much for both of them. Mac let out a loud groan of pleasure as the sensations of Speedy shoving almost all of his young stallion cock into him drove him beyond his limits. As his climax exploded within him, a surge of pleasure went down his spine as his twenty four inch cock below him shook. Suddenly he began blasting wad after wad of his thick pony semen out of his member and against the barn wall. Mac’s balls emptied and almost a gallon of hot white cum splattered all over the ground and barn.

At the same time Mac reached his climax, Speedy’s limitations were also close to the very limits. Feeling Mac orgasm below him he shoved the last few inches of his twenty eight inch stallion member into his friend as he let out a loud moan of orgasm. Pleasure surged down his spine as he blasted his hot pony semen deep into Mac’s butt. He leaned down and wrapped his front hooves around Mac’s body, pulling him close as he emptied his balls into his friend’s big juicy red butt.

As their orgasms faded away, Speedy slowly pulled his thick black pony cock out of Mac, a few inches at a time. It popped free as a torrent of semen poured out behind it, and quite a bit of his hot thick pony sperm splattered against’s Mac’s backside as Speedy’s cock wobbled as it came out. It covered the bigger pony’s Flank and ran down his cutie mark.

Speedy stood there gasping for breath as Mac laid on the ground in the pool of his own cum below him, recovering from the impact of his orgasm. Speedy was attracted to Mac in a way he hadn’t been in a long time. He walked around and kissed the bigger pony on the cheek. “I love you M...” he started, before he was cut off suddenly by the sound of another pony clearing their throat.

He turned to the side and saw to his shock that Apple Bloom was watching them both. “So, my boyfriend decided it would be good to have some sneaky sex with my older brother, ey?” she asked in her country pony accent. She looked slightly furious at them both as she said this.

“I’m sorry Apple Bloom” Speedy started. “The thing is, myself and Mac...” he began.

“No excuses” Apple Bloom said, cutting him off. “The question is... why didn’t you invite me to join in with you?” she asked them seductively.

Speedy and Mac looked at each other and blushed. “Well, the thing is...” Speedy started. He tried to come up with an excuse that didn’t involve implicating himself or placing the blame on Big Mcintosh, but failed. Suddenly a thought came to mind - Apple Bloom wasn’t unhappy he and Mac had sex, but was unhappy because she didn’t get to join in. “...we’re not finished, and theres room for one more” he suggested with a sly grin.

Apple Bloom looked at Speedy, then at Mac, then at Speedy again. “Okay, but you’ve better give me the best fucking i’ve ever had, Speedy” she commented.

“Oh, i’m sure Speedy here can deliver that” Big McIntosh smiled. “I mean, judging by how he’s managed to perform with me just now” he added.

“Thats good to hear” Apple Bloom smiled. She walked over towards Speedy and prodded at his cock. “Its no doubt you wanted to fuck my boyfriend rather than go that far with me, Mac”  she added. “Especially as you’re a size queen Mac, and considering how huge Speedy is” she chuckled.

“Wait... you and your brother have had sex too, Apple Bloom?” Speedy asked them both with a surprised expression on his face.

“Well, sorta” Mac said. “Ever since Apple Bloom was younger, she’s given me blowjobs whenever she’s felt horny. You were the first to take her virginity in both of her holes Speedy, and since the first time you had sex with her she’s wanted nobody else but you” he’s chuckled.

“So... you aren’t too angry I had sex with your brother before I got with you, both back then and just now?” Speedy asked Apple Bloom.

“Of course not, i’m happy to share you with my brother... on condition you can deliver the hard fucking you normally give me” Apple Bloom smiled. “Now Speedy, how about you sit against the barn wall so we can get into our favourite position?” she asked him.

“Certainly” Speedy smiled. He walked over to a part of the barn wall that was at least relatively clean and sat back against it. He thick black cock was already stiffening, still covered in his own cum after he had blown so much of it into Big McIntosh.

Apple Bloom walked over towards Speedy and prodded his cock. “Looks like you’re quite messy and could do with cleaning it before you shove it into me” she commented. “Just as well I know just the thing...” she commented. She turned around and shoved her butt backwards. She hovered over him so her pink pony pussy was hovering just a few inches above him, then let out a sigh of relief.

Pee started shooting out from the urethra between her vaginal lips and began splashing against Speedy’s big black cock and ballsack. Speedy gasped at he felt his girlfriend’s urine splatter against his cock, but for some reason didn’t feel reviled by it. Instead he found it felt rather nice, and quite a turn on as well. As her stream splattered against his member and washed away the cum sticking to it, he felt it rise and thicken to its full potential, twenty eight inches long and nearly four inches thick. After she had finished emptying her bladder against his cock and ballsack, she let out a sigh of relief. “I needed that... just like how I need your thick hard cock inside my pussy right now, Speedy” she demanded of him.

“I need to fuck your pussy right now too...” Speedy replied with a grin on his face. In response, Applejack looked behind at him and winked, before lowering herself downwards slowly. In response Speedy gripped her ample yellow buttcheeks and helped lower her downwards until she was balancing with the tip of Speedy’s cock, slick with her urine, prodding against her vaginal entrance. “I love you Apple Bloom” Speedy said, before pulling her downwards onto him.

Both of them gasped as Speedy’s rock hard cock penetrated Apple Bloom’s tight pretty pink pony pussy. Neither of them never got tired of the feeling of their bodies connecting, with Apple Bloom being a serious size queen who loved that Speedy had a biggest cock than any pony around, while Speedy was enjoying the feeling of his member being inside the pony that he loved more than any other in the entire world.

Apple Bloom began moving herself up and down slowly, her butt moving up and down in front of Speedy as her tight cunt slid over his member back and forth. Speedy loved fucking Apple Bloom in a reverse cowgirl position, be it either in her pussy or her butt. He did whatever she wanted, as he loved her more than anything and wanted to please her in any way he could. He began thrusting his hips up and down to meet Apple Bloom’s movements, his thick black cock sliding in and out of her at a steadily increasing speed with more and more inches of his member sliding into her by the minute.

As he watched the young couple fucking in front of him, Mac felt himself getting turned on as well. Although he enjoyed getting buttfucked by Speedy, there was one other thing he used to enjoy doing with the young stallion. He walked over to one side of Speedy and prodded his long stallion cock against the young blue stallion’s face. Speedy knew what Mac wanted and was more than happy to do it for him. He opened his mouth and felt Big McIntosh slide the first few inches of his rock hard stallion cock into it. Speedy began sucking away at the huge red stallion as he continued thrusting up and down into the young yellow mare in front of him. All three of them were moaning as they continued to have sex in that unusual but incredibly fun position.

They went harder and harder and faster and faster. Apple Bloom began sliding down and down even further, her vagina getting stretched to the maximum as Speedy struggled to fit his large black erection into her. Suddenly Mac pushed his hips forward and Speedy felt his mouth filled to the brim with hot thick stallion cock. At the same time he thrusted up while pulling Apple Bloom downwards. The last few inches of his twenty eight inch cock slid into Apple Bloom. She felt her cervix open up within her as her boyfriend’s cock pushed straight into her womb, stretching her in a way that seemed almost impossible.

The pleasure for all of them was too much, and at the same time all three of them orgasmed in an epic manner. Mac let out a loud moan as pleasure surged down his spine, and the second load of the day flowed out of his balls, through his cock, and directly into Speedy’s mouth. The young blue stallion felt his mouth fill with Mac’s hot pony semen as he reached his orgasm himself. His thick black stallion cock pumped his cum deep into Apple Bloom’s tight womb as the yellow mare herself screamed in happiness as pleasure washed through them. Although they had orgasmed less than twenty minutes before, both stallions were able to ejaculate an above average amount of cum. Apple Bloom’s womb was bloating from Speedy’s load, and cum was spilling out from the sides of Speedy’s mouth due to the amount of it that Mac’s cock was pumping in.

They stayed in position for a few moments following their orgasms, before pulling away from each other slowly once they had recovered enough energy to move. Apple Bloom lifted herself off Speedy completely, and as the young blue stallion’s cock popped free of the young yellow mare’s vagina, a torrent of semen poured out of it. Likewise when Mac pulled his cock out of Speedy’s mouth cum dripped out of it. Speedy savoured the taste of Mac’s cum before swallowing it, while Apple Bloom moved a hoof down to her cunt and scooped up a wad of it before moving it to her mouth and tasting Speedy’s seed. “You know you two are the tastiest stallions i’ve ever met” she chuckled.

“I can agree with that, considering what Mac just did to me” Speedy chuckled. “Plus you taste pretty damn good when i’m licking you out too, Apple Bloom” he commented.

“Well next time you’ve better do that to me first” Apple Bloom replied. She then got on the floor next to Speedy and kissed him passionately on the cheek. “I love you, Speedy” she whispered into his ear.

Speedy smiled and wrapped an arm around his girlfriend. “I love you too, Apple Bloom” he said before returning the kiss.

While watching the young couple kissing below him, Mac thought about what had happened that day. He had let Speedy pee over him, then he had been buttfucked, and finally he had been sucked off by his young friend while his friend had fucked Mac’s little sister. However now another feeling was come to mind. He hadn’t emptied his bladder all day either, and although he could have held on a little longer, considering what they had done in the past half hour he had another idea...

As Apple Bloom continued kissing her boyfriend, she suddenly felt a warm liquid splash against her chest. She looked up to see Mac’s long cock spraying urine over both her and Speedy. Like the two stallions though, she felt the sensation was quite nice and she continued hugging and kissing Speedy as her brother continued pissing over them both. Speedy was enjoying it too and pulled himself closer to Apple Bloom as his larger friend emptied his bladder over him. By the time Big McIntosh had finished peeing over him and Apple Bloom, they were completely soaked just as Mac had been thirty minutes before.

Now relieved of his discomfort, Mac sat down on the other side of Speedy and started hugging him too. The three laid there happily, having enjoyed the sexual fun they had together that morning. Eventually they all got up and decided to clean themselves up. Thankfully McIntosh had gotten the outdoor shower in a nearby barn working again earlier that week, and the three washed then rinsed themselves off in the shower together so the stains and smell of their fluids were replaced with the smell of blueberry muffins. Derpy Hooves’ idea to market a shower gel with her favourite scent in association with the local spa had paid off, and both Speedy and Apple Bloom were particular fans of it.

The three of them sat outside the farm house and had a lunch of apple pie and apple cider together and talked happily. Then it was time for Speedy and Apple Bloom’s date. They left Mac to it and headed off. Although their original plan was to an activity that would have been quite exciting, instead they decided to just sit in the orchards together all afternoon and enjoy their time together. They sat and kissed and talked and hugged until the sun began to set below the horizon.

As they watched the sun set, Apple Bloom climbed on top of Speedy. “Will you make love with me once more before the sun goes down?” she asked him.

“I’ll make love with you whenever you want, Apple Bloom” Speedy smiled. “What do you want this time?” he asked her.

“Maybe you can lick my pretty pink pony cunt for me? You did say you enjoyed doing it after we were having that threesome earlier...” she asked him.

“I’d love to do it to you” Speedy nodded happily.

In response to this, Apple Bloom climbed over him face down and turned herself around. She shoved her backside up against Speedy’s chin while her own face brushed against Speedy’s sheath. Taking the initiative, Speedy stuck his tongue out and the tip of it contacted Apple Bloom’s labia. She gasped and spread her legs wide so Speedy could see her pink vulva open up before him. He didn’t think twice before shoving his tongue forward and licking away. He smiled as he tasted his girlfriend’s beautiful juices running all over his tongue.

In response to Speedy making her moan in light pleasure from licking her, Apple Bloom thought it would be fun to return the favour. She grabbed his cock with one hoof, feeling it quite hard, figuring that Speedy was undoubtably turned on by the sight, scent and taste of her own pretty pink pony pussy. She kissed his shaft gently before licking up and down it with her tongue, covering her boyfriend’s member with her saliva.

Speedy moaned gently as he enjoyed the feeling of Apple Bloom’s warm wet tongue on his member. He shoved his tongue forwards and it slid into Apple Bloom’s vagina, stimulating her inner walls with his slick tongue. However although he was enjoying the sensation of licking his girlfriend while she was licking him, she was putting her body weight directly on top of his bladder and he needed to pee again. He remembered how Apple Bloom hadn’t been bothered by the warm and wet fun the three of them had earlier, and a smirk crossed his face.

Apple Bloom suddenly saw a blast of pee surge out of Speedy’s cock. Closing her mouth she giggled as she saw it shoot several feet in the air before falling onto the ground. She gripped his thick member with both of her hooves and moved it around, watching his pee stream sway from side to side in the air. She did this while he continued peeing, giggling between moans as he continued to lick her. When his cock stopped spraying golden liquid everywhere, she rubbed the tip clean with one hoof then took his tip into her mouth.

Speedy let out a moan of pleasure as Apple Bloom started sucking his cock gently. He always enjoyed his girlfriend’s blowjobs, and after feeling the relief of emptying his bladder it felt even better than normal. He pushed his head forward and started licking deeper and deeper inside Apple Bloom’s vagina. As he did, he made sure to bump his chin against her, knowing as he did it was bumping against her clitoris. She loved having her clit played with, and Speedy was always eager to do that for her.

They continued sucking and licking away until both of them could take no more. Both of them moaned in pleasure as they climaxed with their mouths over each other’s sensitive parts. Speedy felt Apple Bloom’s delicious fluids pour into his mouth, while Apple Bloom felt her boyfriend’s hot thick semen pump into her mouth. When both had taken a mouthful they pulled away, with Apple Bloom watching Speedy’s cock blast out his semen like a cum volcano, while Speedy enjoyed the feeling of his girlfriend’s warm vaginal juices seeping out and soaking his chest. Both swallowed each other’s fluids together after savouring the taste for half a minute.

Apple Bloom then turned around so she was face to face with Speedy, and the two kissed each other passionately as the sun finally sank below the horizon and the moon rose above Equestria. They loved each other more than anything, and they wanted that evening to last forever.

The two of them remained there for a few more minutes before deciding to go home for the night. Speedy walked Apple Bloom back to the farm house gate. The two gazed into each other’s eyes before having one last goodnight kiss. “I love you Apple Bloom” Speedy smiled.

“I love you too, Speedy” Apple Bloom replied and kissed him again. She walked back into the farm house as Speedy watched her.

Once she had gone into the farm house, Speedy took in a deep breath. He was thinking about what had happened that day between himself, Apple Bloom, and Big McIntosh. Although it had been the greatest day he had experienced in a long time, he couldn’t help but feel quite weird about everything that had happened. Especially them peeing over each other... These thoughts continued flowing through his head as he headed away from the house and towards the treehouse hidden within the orchards close to Ponyville.

As he climbed up the ladder of the huge oak tree up towards the platform where the treehouse was, he wondered about where he would go with Apple Bloom now. As he got to the platform, he heard piano music coming from within. He took in a deep breath then opened the door and walked inside.

Within the treehouse he could see in a corner of the room his friend and housemate Silver was sat playing piano like he normally did on quiet days. On hearing Speedy walk in, he suddenly stopped the song he was playing and turned to face him. “Speedy! I’d knew you’d come!” he declared to the young blue stallion. “Welcome back to the treehouse!” he added, spreading his arms wide in emphasis.

“Nice to be home again” Speedy said. He dropped his bag next to the door then sat down on a beanbag. “I’ve had quite a day...” he added.

“So i’m guessing your date with Apple Bloom went well?” the bat-pony asked the young blue stallion. “Get any hot sex from her?” he asked with a grin on his face.

“Well, not just her” Speedy said, rubbing his head. “I had to stop by the barn to pee first, and Mac spotted me. He... laid in front of me so I pissed over him, then I got to buttfuck him” Speedy breathed. “Apple Bloom then appeared, she peed on my cock, then I had vaginal sex with her while I sucked off Mac. Then later on me and Apple Bloom licked and sucked each other in the fields” he explained exhaustively.

“Well, quite the adventure you’ve had today... typical of you Speedy” Silver grinned, scratching his bat-pony ears. “You’ve never mentioned that watersports kink before. How did you find it?” he asked.

“It was weird but really fun. I feel like it was a bad thing though... not to mention fucking my girlfriend’s brother felt bad too even though she agreed to it...” Speedy said, a worried expression on his face.

“Hey, theres nothing to worry about” Silver replied. “You’ve not hurt anyone, both your partners enjoyed it too, and they are fine with the love triangle arrangement” he said. “Just think of the positive impact - you’ll had a great day with two ponies you love, right?” he asked.

“You’re right, Silver” Speedy nodded. He walked over and hugged the bat-pony. “Those worries of mine are nothing more than obsolete?” he asked.

“Definitely” Silver replied, before patting Speed on the head with his hoof. He stood there smiling and thinking of how proud he was of his younger friend. Speedy was doing everything he could to make his friends happy, and that was all that mattered in the end to the two friends and everyone else in the world that they loved.

- The End -