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I got this idea from watching the episode, where Dawn's Pachirisu takes too much electricy due to.... I believe a thunderbolt from Zapdos, causing it to get a fever.  note: whene electric pokémon store up too much electricity, it'll make them sick... hell, it almost killed Pikachu in the premier episode to Hoenn.  Well, during her travels through Unova as a pokémon coordinator (so glad the contests are no longer in game now), Pachirisu gets sick like this again.... and to make matters worse, the weather isn't so great.  So while Dawn goes to get medicine for Pachirisu, our hero finds some interesting bedside manner...", "writing": "[center]Black/White Thunder\nBy Dr.?\n[/center]\n\nPage 1:\nSetting: forest, inside of a log cabin.\nDawn has a worried expression on her face. “Man, this one is worse than last time.” she says while attending to her Pachirisu.\nPachirisu lays in a small bed with a blue cover over his body, yet his head, paws and feet are shown as his tail is exposed between his feet. “Pachi pa…” he gives a weak response.\n\t“Save your strength, Pachirisu.” Dawn says and places a cold compress on Pachirisu’s forehead. “I’m so glad that I remembered how to deal with this situation from Brock.”\nPachirisu’s eyes are closed and his face has a painful expression as blue static electricy comes from the yellow circles on his cheeks.\nPage 2:\n[i]Man, this is bad.[/i] Dawn thought. [i]That sudden rainstorm caused by those bi-horned zebras, making it rain… the lightning bolt striking Pachirisu like that and the downpour only made things worse. I’m glad I managed to find this cabin to get you out of the rain.[/i]\n\t“Chi paaa…” Pachirisu groans.\n\t“Soldier on, Pachirisu.” Dawn said. “I’ll do my best to break this fever of yours.”\n\t“Paaa…”\n\t[i]Out in a cabin in the middle of nowhere and miles away from Nurse Joy, this really is the pits.[/i] Dawn thought. She then sits on the floor with her knees together and shins apart, giving a slight peek of her black panties. “We went through a lot of tough scrapes, so I’m sure this’ll only make you stronger in the end, Pachirisu.”\n\tPachirisu turns his head to look at Dawn. [i]I hope you’re right about this.[/i] he thought.\n\t“You’re the only one of my Pokémon that isn’t out for the count, so I have to keep you healthy.”\nPage 3:\nNarration Box: Two days have passed and Pachirisu’s fever only got worse. And to further salt her wounds, Dawn ran out of curatives to nurse him back to health.\nThe third panel should show Pachirisu painfully discharging blue electricity from its small body.\nNarration Box: Pachirisu’s fate appears dire.\nDawn heads for the door, but looks back. “I know that leaving you is wrong, but I won’t risk your health in taking you with me.” she says. “Hold tight, little guy. I’ll be back as soon as I can.” and off Dawns runs to get medicine.\n\nPage 4:\nPachirisu lies in bed on top of the cover, looking at the small table in the room which has a bowl of broth on it. [i]I have to stay strong…[/i] he thought. He then hops out of bed to the floor, but upon landing, Pachirisu discharges blue electricity. After the discharge, he is face down on the floor and crawling towards the table. “I gotta eat.” he says.\nPage 5:\nInches away from the table, Pachirisu discharges blue electricity again, but this causes the bowl of broth to fall off of the table and spills onto the floor. [i]So much for eating…[/i] he thought. Suddenly, Pachirisu looks over to the window and notices the back of a small pokémon sitting there, which is all black except for the small bit of yellow at the base of the tail. “I guess you’re going to take me away and end my suffering.” Pachirisu says. “I won’t fight, I will go peacefully…”\n\t“You’re funny and cute, I like that.” this pokémon says. Afterwards, it turns around. “I think I will keep you company for a while.”\nPage 6:\n“What are you?” Pachirisu asks.\n\t“I’m Emolga.” the pokémon answers while opening its arms, revealing the inside of its cape-like membranes. Soon after, the Emolga jumps from the windowsill and glides towards Pachirisu, landing next to him.\n\t“Please tell me you’re an angel…” Pachirisu says while Emolga rolls him onto his back.\n\t“You need a better pick-up line than that.”\nEmolga presses her cheek next to Pachirisu’s, letting the yellow circles touch, and is jolted back a bit from the blue static bolts. “My, my, that’s quite the voltage you have.” Emolga says. “I like guys with ‘shocking personalities’, hee hee.”\n\t“Not funny, I’m suffering here.” Pachirisu says.\nPage 7:\nEmolga’s paw runs down Pachirisu’s belly. “Now how about you whip out your lightning rod…” it says.\n\t“Light—Wait, you’re a…” Pachirisu trails off.\n\t“Yah, and I’m a bit lonely, too.” Emolga answers.\n\t[i]At least Emolga’s a girl…[/i] Pachirisu thought.\n\tEmolga hold Pachirisu’s dick in her paw. “Found it.” she says with a giggle. “Now, relax.” and then Emolga starts sucking on Pachirisu’s white, furry balls. Moments later, Emolga starts licking the shaft as the yellow circles on her cheeks give off yellow static bolts.\nPage 8:\nEmolga has straddled Pachirisu and his dick rubs between her white labia. “Enough teasing, it’s time for the main event.” she announces.\n\t“While I’m in pain…” Pachirisu trails off.\n\t“You’ll be fine.” And Emolga takes her seat, letting Pachirisu penetrate her pussy. But almost instantly, Pachirisu discharges blue electricity from his body, which Emolga catches the effects of. “Whoa, what a rush…” Emolga is a bit light-headed.\n\t“Um…” Pachirisu trailed off.\n\t“You aren’t done, but you can keep up the voltage.” Emolga said in a seductive tone.\n\t“Oh…” Pachirisu moaned.\nPage 9:\nEmolga continues riding cowgirl on Pachirisu. Minutes into her riding, Emolga lifts her arms into the air, fully extending the cape-like membranes attached to her arms as yellow static bolts come from the circles on her cheeks. “Yes, give me all of your voltage.” Emolga moans in pleasure. “Don’t hold back!”\n\t[i]Is she really getting this much of a kick out of me?[/i] Pachirisu though, and then his body discharges blue electricity, further exciting and pleasuring Emolga.\nMeanwhile, Dawn is walking across the plains en route to the forest. She is holding a small paper bag with a red cross on the front of it. “Well, I had to let everyone except Piplup stay at the Pokémon center, but I can’t let Piplup out of the ball for the moment.” she said to herself. “I think I like the Joys with the Audino over the Joys with the Chansey or Blissey… and I managed to get the pokédex upgrade too.” Moments later, as Dawn looks towards the forest, she notices blue electricity shooting up from the trees alongside yellow electricity. “So much for resting, something has found Pachirisu all alone.” And Dawn runs towards the cabin in the forest. “Feet, don’t fail me now!”\nPage 10:\nEmolga is reverse cowgirl on Pachirisu, and hugging his tail. “Come one, don’t be shy now.” she says.\n\t“I just wanna get better…” Pachirisu groans.\n\t“I guess I have to try harder at helping you forget your woes, cutie.” Emolga then squeezes Pachirisu’s tail, causing his back to arch as his body discharges more blue electricity to further excite Emolga. However, what Emolga doesn’t realize is that the last discharge returned Pachirisu to normal health. Seconds later, Pachirisu sits up and grabs Emolga from behind, which surprises her. “Hold nothing back, huh?” Pachirisu says with a rapeface. “Well, get a load of this.”\nPage 11:\nDawn is ducking down for cover as a bolt of blue electricity shoots through the window of the door in front of her. [i]Holy shit, that was close.[/i] she thought.\n\tInside, Emolga was standing on the floor and wobbling around with spirals for eyes. “Too… much… voltage…” she trails off.\n\tBlue static bolts were coming from the circles of Pachirisu’s cheeks. “You said keep up the voltage.” he said.\n\t“Whoa…”\n\tA premier ball is flying through the air, “GOTCHA!” is yelled.\n\tThe premier ball hits Emolga in the back of her head opening up and she is converted into the white light being sucked into the ball. “Oh crap.” Emolga says as the premier ball falls to the ground.\n+The last panel of the page should have Dawn crouching on her knees picking up Pachirisu, giving a slight peek of her black panties while in the background, the premier ball is on the floor wobbling in place.\nPage 12:\nNarration Box: Afterwhile…\nEmolga is standing on the floor with Dawn sitting nearby holding her pokédex. The pokédex is relaying information to Dawn: “Emolga, the Sky Squirrel Pokémon. Emolga leap from their treetop homes and glide using their cape-like membranes, releasing stored electricity in the process.”\n\t“Not bad info,” Dawn said, “but it forgot one thing… Emolga is soooo cuuuuute!”\n\tDawn goes on a cute rant, confusing Emolga. “What a weird ass girl.” Emolga says and begins to run off. But before getting too far, Dawn grabs her by the tail. “Hey…”\n\tDawn is holding Emolga upside down. “Just my luck, you’re a girl squirrel.” Dawn says with a bit of an evil look. Emolga is soon sat on the bed next to Pachirisu. “And with this in the know, I have plans for you two… plans indeed.”\n\t“She has plans for us?” Emolga asks Pachirisu, slightly worried.\n\t“Oh, I think you’ll like Dawn’s plans…” Pachirisu tells Emolga with a sly look on his face.\n+in the bottom right corner of the page, write “End of Story”\nPage 13:\nSetting: Night at a Pokémon Center.\nDawn holds the door to a room slightly open as Emolga and Pachirisu begin walking through single file. Once Emolga is in the room and before Pachirisu can enter, Dawn closes the door on him and Pachirisu is wondering why. Dawn kneels down to rub Pachirisu on the forehead between his ears, as it telling him something. Afterwards, Pachirisu is let into the room and Dawn closes the door behind him.\nPage 14:\nInside the room, Emolga sits on the lower of the two bunk beds as Pachirisu approaches her. Emolga hops off of the bed and the two rub noses.\n+In panel 3, the view is directly behind Emolga. Pachirisu is standing with his back against the bed with his eyes closed, arms at his sides, and is moaning as Emolga is on all fours in front of him with her head between Pachirisu’s legs. Emolga’s tail is between her feet; in panel 4, the view is directly behind Pachirisu. This time, Emolga is standing against the bed with her eyes half open, and has yellow static bolts coming from the circles on her cheeks. Her left paw is on Pachirisu’s head between his ears while her right arm rests at her side and she is moaning as Pachirisu’s head is between her legs. Pachirisu’s tail is curled to the side and we should see his balls.\nPage 15:\n+Panel one should show Emolga on all fours on the bed, looking over her shoulder and sticking her rear end towards the readers.\nPachirisu approaches Emolga from behind as she is wagging her tail. Emolga is soon mounted as Pachirisu’s paws rest on Emolga’s hips, and doggy style sex soon occurs. During this, the two discharge electricity from their bodies; yellow electricy from Emolga and blue electricity from Pachirisu.\nPage 16:\nThe two now lay sideways on the bed having sex, the circles on Emolga’s left cheek and Pachirisu’s right cheek are touching while the other cheeks emit static bolts of electricity (once again, yellow for Emolga and blue for Pachirisu). Pachirisu then has Emolga on her back and is holding one of her legs up. A blush runs across Emolga’s face as her body discharges yellow electricity. They switch to the wheel barrel position; Emolga’s paws are on the bed pushing up from her arms, and Pachirisu holds Emolga by her legs while thrusting into her as blue electricity discharges from his body.\n\nPage 17:\nOutside of the room, Dawn sits in a chair near the door (the door has a window on it) with her legs open, giving the readers an upskirt shot of her black panties while reading the PALcomic, Huckleberry’s Hijink. [i]I think I will check on those two.[/i] she thought, and then looks through the window inside the room. Seconds later, Dawn walks away from the door with a shocked look on her face and sits back in her chair. [i]Form like that is crazy outside of porn. Lemme read some more about Huckleberry…[/i]\nThe following paragraph describes what is happening in the last panel of this page: Inside of the room, Emolga and Pachirisu are upside-down on the bed. As Emolga is doing a handstand, Pachirisu is holding onto her and Emolga has her legs wrapped around Pachirisu’s waist. Their tails are straight up in the air and are touching. “The mating variation of Emolga’s attack, Acrobatics: A flying type attack displaying aerial prowess… ” an excerpt from Dawn’s Pokédex.\nPage 18: \nPachirisu and Emolga have returned to doggy style sex, and their cheeks are pressed together again, emitting more static bolts from the touching circles. Moments later, the two switch to missionary with their eyes closed tightly. Then, with one last thrust, Pachirisu and Emolga discharge electricity from their bodies, reaching their climax.\nFinal Page:\nThe pin-up page should show Pachirisu and Emolga lying on the bed with their eyes closed as they worn out from the sex. Emolga lies on her back with open arms, showing her cape-like membranes and Pachirisu lies on top of Emolga. In the lower right corner of the page, write “Fin.”\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "
Black/White Thunder
By Dr.?


Page 1:
Setting: forest, inside of a log cabin.
Dawn has a worried expression on her face.  “Man, this one is worse than last time.” she says while attending to her Pachirisu.
Pachirisu lays in a small bed with a blue cover over his body, yet his head, paws and feet are shown as his tail is exposed between his feet.  “Pachi pa…” he gives a weak response.
\t“Save your strength, Pachirisu.” Dawn says and places a cold compress on Pachirisu’s forehead.  “I’m so glad that I remembered how to deal with this situation from Brock.”
Pachirisu’s eyes are closed and his face has a painful expression as blue static electricy comes from the yellow circles on his cheeks.
Page 2:
Man, this is bad. Dawn thought.  That sudden rainstorm caused by those bi-horned zebras, making it rain… the lightning bolt striking Pachirisu like that and the downpour only made things worse.  I’m glad I managed to find this cabin to get you out of the rain.
\t“Chi paaa…” Pachirisu groans.
\t“Soldier on, Pachirisu.” Dawn said.  “I’ll do my best to break this fever of yours.”
\t“Paaa…”
\tOut in a cabin in the middle of nowhere and miles away from Nurse Joy, this really is the pits. Dawn thought.  She then sits on the floor with her knees together and shins apart, giving a slight peek of her black panties.  “We went through a lot of tough scrapes, so I’m sure this’ll only make you stronger in the end, Pachirisu.”
\tPachirisu turns his head to look at Dawn.  I hope you’re right about this. he thought.
\t“You’re the only one of my Pokémon that isn’t out for the count, so I have to keep you healthy.”
Page 3:
Narration Box: Two days have passed and Pachirisu’s fever only got worse.  And to further salt her wounds, Dawn ran out of curatives to nurse him back to health.
The third panel should show Pachirisu painfully discharging blue electricity from its small body.
Narration Box: Pachirisu’s fate appears dire.
Dawn heads for the door, but looks back.  “I know that leaving you is wrong, but I won’t risk your health in taking you with me.” she says.  “Hold tight, little guy.  I’ll be back as soon as I can.” and off Dawns runs to get medicine.

Page 4:
Pachirisu lies in bed on top of the cover, looking at the small table in the room which has a bowl of broth on it.  I have to stay strong… he thought.  He then hops out of bed to the floor, but upon landing, Pachirisu discharges blue electricity.  After the discharge, he is face down on the floor and crawling towards the table.  “I gotta eat.” he says.
Page 5:
Inches away from the table, Pachirisu discharges blue electricity again, but this causes the bowl of broth to fall off of the table and spills onto the floor.  So much for eating… he thought.  Suddenly, Pachirisu looks over to the window and notices the back of a small pokémon sitting there, which is all black except for the small bit of yellow at the base of the tail.  “I guess you’re going to take me away and end my suffering.” Pachirisu says.  “I won’t fight, I will go peacefully…”
\t“You’re funny and cute, I like that.” this pokémon says.  Afterwards, it turns around.  “I think I will keep you company for a while.”
Page 6:
“What are you?” Pachirisu asks.
\t“I’m Emolga.” the pokémon answers while opening its arms, revealing the inside of its cape-like membranes.  Soon after, the Emolga jumps from the windowsill and glides towards Pachirisu, landing next to him.
\t“Please tell me you’re an angel…” Pachirisu says while Emolga rolls him onto his back.
\t“You need a better pick-up line than that.”
Emolga presses her cheek next to Pachirisu’s, letting the yellow circles touch, and is jolted back a bit from the blue static bolts.  “My, my, that’s quite the voltage you have.” Emolga says.  “I like guys with ‘shocking personalities’, hee hee.”
\t“Not funny, I’m suffering here.” Pachirisu says.
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Emolga’s paw runs down Pachirisu’s belly.  “Now how about you whip out your lightning rod…” it says.
\t“Light—Wait, you’re a…” Pachirisu trails off.
\t“Yah, and I’m a bit lonely, too.” Emolga answers.
\tAt least Emolga’s a girl… Pachirisu thought.
\tEmolga hold Pachirisu’s dick in her paw.  “Found it.” she says with a giggle.  “Now, relax.” and then Emolga starts sucking on Pachirisu’s white, furry balls.  Moments later, Emolga starts licking the shaft as the yellow circles on her cheeks give off yellow static bolts.
Page 8:
Emolga has straddled Pachirisu and his dick rubs between her white labia.  “Enough teasing, it’s time for the main event.” she announces.
\t“While I’m in pain…” Pachirisu trails off.
\t“You’ll be fine.” And Emolga takes her seat, letting Pachirisu penetrate her pussy.  But almost instantly, Pachirisu discharges blue electricity from his body, which Emolga catches the effects of.  “Whoa, what a rush…” Emolga is a bit light-headed.
\t“Um…” Pachirisu trailed off.
\t“You aren’t done, but you can keep up the voltage.” Emolga said in a seductive tone.
\t“Oh…” Pachirisu moaned.
Page 9:
Emolga continues riding cowgirl on Pachirisu.  Minutes into her riding, Emolga lifts her arms into the air, fully extending the cape-like membranes attached to her arms as yellow static bolts come from the circles on her cheeks.  “Yes, give me all of your voltage.” Emolga moans in pleasure.  “Don’t hold back!”
\tIs she really getting this much of a kick out of me? Pachirisu though, and then his body discharges blue electricity, further exciting and pleasuring Emolga.
Meanwhile, Dawn is walking across the plains en route to the forest.  She is holding a small paper bag with a red cross on the front of it.  “Well, I had to let everyone except Piplup stay at the Pokémon center, but I can’t let Piplup out of the ball for the moment.” she said to herself.  “I think I like the Joys with the Audino over the Joys with the Chansey or Blissey… and I managed to get the pokédex upgrade too.”  Moments later, as Dawn looks towards the forest, she notices blue electricity shooting up from the trees alongside yellow electricity.  “So much for resting, something has found Pachirisu all alone.” And Dawn runs towards the cabin in the forest.  “Feet, don’t fail me now!”
Page 10:
Emolga is reverse cowgirl on Pachirisu, and hugging his tail.  “Come one, don’t be shy now.” she says.
\t“I just wanna get better…” Pachirisu groans.
\t“I guess I have to try harder at helping you forget your woes, cutie.”  Emolga then squeezes Pachirisu’s tail, causing his back to arch as his body discharges more blue electricity to further excite Emolga.  However, what Emolga doesn’t realize is that the last discharge returned Pachirisu to normal health.  Seconds later, Pachirisu sits up and grabs Emolga from behind, which surprises her.  “Hold nothing back, huh?” Pachirisu says with a rapeface.  “Well, get a load of this.”
Page 11:
Dawn is ducking down for cover as a bolt of blue electricity shoots through the window of the door in front of her.  Holy shit, that was close. she thought.
\tInside, Emolga was standing on the floor and wobbling around with spirals for eyes.  “Too… much… voltage…” she trails off.
\tBlue static bolts were coming from the circles of Pachirisu’s cheeks.  “You said keep up the voltage.” he said.
\t“Whoa…”
\tA premier ball is flying through the air, “GOTCHA!” is yelled.
\tThe premier ball hits Emolga in the back of her head opening up and she is converted into the white light being sucked into the ball.  “Oh crap.” Emolga says as the premier ball falls to the ground.
+The last panel of the page should have Dawn crouching on her knees picking up Pachirisu, giving a slight peek of her black panties while in the background, the premier ball is on the floor wobbling in place.
Page 12:
Narration Box: Afterwhile…
Emolga is standing on the floor with Dawn sitting nearby holding her pokédex.  The pokédex is relaying information to Dawn: “Emolga, the Sky Squirrel Pokémon.  Emolga leap from their treetop homes and glide using their cape-like membranes, releasing stored electricity in the process.”
\t“Not bad info,” Dawn said, “but it forgot one thing… Emolga is soooo cuuuuute!”
\tDawn goes on a cute rant, confusing Emolga.  “What a weird ass girl.” Emolga says and begins to run off.  But before getting too far, Dawn grabs her by the tail. “Hey…”
\tDawn is holding Emolga upside down.  “Just my luck, you’re a girl squirrel.” Dawn says with a bit of an evil look.  Emolga is soon sat on the bed next to Pachirisu.  “And with this in the know, I have plans for you two… plans indeed.”
\t“She has plans for us?” Emolga asks Pachirisu, slightly worried.
\t“Oh, I think you’ll like Dawn’s plans…” Pachirisu tells Emolga with a sly look on his face.
+in the bottom right corner of the page, write “End of Story”
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Setting: Night at a Pokémon Center.
Dawn holds the door to a room slightly open as Emolga and Pachirisu begin walking through single file.  Once Emolga is in the room and before Pachirisu can enter, Dawn closes the door on him and Pachirisu is wondering why.  Dawn kneels down to rub Pachirisu on the forehead between his ears, as it telling him something.  Afterwards, Pachirisu is let into the room and Dawn closes the door behind him.
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Inside the room, Emolga sits on the lower of the two bunk beds as Pachirisu approaches her.  Emolga hops off of the bed and the two rub noses.
+In panel 3, the view is directly behind Emolga.  Pachirisu is standing with his back against the bed with his eyes closed, arms at his sides, and is moaning as Emolga is on all fours in front of him with her head between Pachirisu’s legs.  Emolga’s tail is between her feet; in panel 4, the view is directly behind Pachirisu.  This time, Emolga is standing against the bed with her eyes half open, and has yellow static bolts coming from the circles on her cheeks.  Her left paw is on Pachirisu’s head between his ears while her right arm rests at her side and she is moaning as Pachirisu’s head is between her legs.  Pachirisu’s tail is curled to the side and we should see his balls.
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+Panel one should show Emolga on all fours on the bed, looking over her shoulder and sticking her rear end towards the readers.
Pachirisu approaches Emolga from behind as she is wagging her tail.  Emolga is soon mounted as Pachirisu’s paws rest on Emolga’s hips, and doggy style sex soon occurs.  During this, the two discharge electricity from their bodies; yellow electricy from Emolga and blue electricity from Pachirisu.
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The two now lay sideways on the bed having sex, the circles on Emolga’s left cheek and Pachirisu’s right cheek are touching while the other cheeks emit static bolts of electricity (once again, yellow for Emolga and blue for Pachirisu).  Pachirisu then has Emolga on her back and is holding one of her legs up.  A blush runs across Emolga’s face as her body discharges yellow electricity.  They switch to the wheel barrel position; Emolga’s paws are on the bed pushing up from her arms, and Pachirisu holds Emolga by her legs while thrusting into her as blue electricity discharges from his body.

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Outside of the room, Dawn sits in a chair near the door (the door has a window on it) with her legs open, giving the readers an upskirt shot of her black panties while reading the PALcomic, Huckleberry’s Hijink.  I think I will check on those two. she thought, and then looks through the window inside the room.  Seconds later, Dawn walks away from the door with a shocked look on her face and sits back in her chair.  Form like that is crazy outside of porn.  Lemme read some more about Huckleberry…
The following paragraph describes what is happening in the last panel of this page:  Inside of the room, Emolga and Pachirisu are upside-down on the bed. As Emolga is doing a handstand, Pachirisu is holding onto her and Emolga has her legs wrapped around Pachirisu’s waist.  Their tails are straight up in the air and are touching.  “The mating variation of Emolga’s attack, Acrobatics:  A flying type attack displaying aerial prowess… ” an excerpt from Dawn’s Pokédex.
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Pachirisu and Emolga have returned to doggy style sex, and their cheeks are pressed together again, emitting more static bolts from the touching circles.  Moments later, the two switch to missionary with their eyes closed tightly.  Then, with one last thrust, Pachirisu and Emolga discharge electricity from their bodies, reaching their climax.
Final Page:
The pin-up page should show Pachirisu and Emolga lying on the bed with their eyes closed as they worn out from the sex. Emolga lies on her back with open arms, showing her cape-like membranes and Pachirisu lies on top of Emolga.  In the lower right corner of the page, write “Fin.”
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