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It's about two teens who discover their relationship has more to it than they thought but during their first night out they run into some racism.
This is MUCH darker than my usual stuff. You have been warned.", "writing": "Hallowed Hearts by: Pent Ghelsburg\n\nDisclaimer: All characters in this story are fictional. Any similarity to persons real or fake is purely coincidental. This story contains elements of blood, violence, and death. You have been warned.\n\n\tThe age of consistency had come to past. The violent civil wars that plagued the country side over the past century had finally come to an end. But who decides, the verdict and nature of that end? History has taught us time and time again that it is the victor who writes the books and tells the story. The conflict had come to define an era and to many to think of a world without the ongoing strife seemed all too alien.\n\t\n\tBut in furry society this was not the case. The humans had come out on top and the anthropomorphous part of the world was left in the shadows. Formerly “animal friendly” governments were replaced with autocratic and often racist dictatorships. In the realm of Dystopia this was also the case. A sprawling community nestled alongside the often calm backdrop of the vast mountain range that defined the region. \n\n\tThe town was a diverse one beset by a variety of critters but the mass majority were ones akin to the often frigid climate. One such family was a nest of Arctic hares. The colony was fairly large as herds of the lapin breed were not uncommon. The litter was one with 4 children of varying ages, though mostly female. The one who broke that trend happened to be the oldest, Matt. At 14 years of age the boy was no longer just a child instead dealing with the onset of puberty and the difficulties that came with it.\n\n\tLike most of his breed his fur adorned a pitch white tone, save for his ears and tail which were tipped with cones of black. Already in 9th grade the teen wasn't exactly the runt of his class. Sprawling and strong, the rabbit was rather tone and many girls found him to be eye candy. But what he did not tell his fellow classmates was that he did not fancy those of the opposite gender. Even despite that though, he did not act on his feelings as he feared for his own popularity.\n\t\n\tOne day at school he was approached by an older friend. Evan was someone that Matt had looked up to for some time. Even was an academic who aspired to ace all of his courses and was on track for graduating near the top of his class. The human child came from an upper class family whom loathed the fact that Evan hung out with Matt. The father especially constantly brow beat him on a regular basis about how he shouldn't mingle with a lesser species.\n\n\tMatt went about their relationship like it was nothing out of the ordinary. When they hung out they were nothing short of an eye sore to many spectators. The two walked side by side from class to class whenever they could, they were rather close. Secretly the rabbit harbored more than just companionship. Inside the teen labored the beating of a passionate pup. Today was the day, he told himself, that he'd finally ask the other boy out.\n\n\tIt was a long day at school fraught with the difficulties of boredom and the monotony of every day simplicity. The rabbit had long sought for the end of school, like many other kids. He was a bit nervous since he had decided that today was the day he'd finally ask Evan out. Once the bell rang the rabbit hopped as quickly as he could and rushed to the front of the school where he waited for the target of his star crossed affection.\n\n\tIt wasn't long until the jet black hair boy appeared from the set of double doors that guarded the entrance to the facility. His glasses rested softly over his nose as his vision was far from perfect. But the often nerdish complex put off by Evan didn't seem to deter Matt at all. Once the human spotted his lapin friend, Evan approached him post haste. Of the two the human was slightly taller and wore longer length khaki slacks.\n\n\tBoth were forced to wear the same school uniform but Matt often opted to wear shorts while Evan preferred wearing the longer pants. \n\n“Hey, what's up?” The human boy spoke first.\n\n“Nothing much. How was your day?” The rabbit's tail flinched behind him.\n\n“It was alright, nothing special I suppose.” Evan remarked with an almost bored look on his face.\n\n“I was thinking maybe we could hang out and go to the movies.” Matt suggested a bit nervous about his friends response.\n\n“Sure...I don't see why not. I don't have any plans.” The older boy was a bit flattered by the invitation.\n\n“Really? Are you sure you want to?” The lapin was in a state of disbelief.\n\n“Yeah, we could go see the latest Marvel flick.” The human already had a film in mind.\n\n“Sweet, that sounds good. It's the one with Thor right?” The cub wasn't much into super heroes but had heard about it.\n\n\tThe taller boy nodded before pulling out a smart phone to check on the times. After done checking he verified that a show was fairly soon. He showed his friend who smiled at the coincidence. Neither had access to a vehicle yet so instead they opted for their bikes. The rack was free of traffic by this point so accessing their transport was fairly simple. The trip was far from long as the local mall was but a short travel from the school.\n\n\tThe marketing ploy was rather subtle but the aim was to attract more of the younger crowd. It was quite convenient for a hangout much to the dismay of the older patrons. However by the time Matt and Evan arrived it was far too early for the adult crowd to be present since many work places had yet to let out on a normal schedule. At the entrance of the mall the pair parked and locked their bikes so that they could make their way to the theater.\n\n“Thanks for treating me. Let me cover the popcorn and soda.” Evan suggested in order to make it feel like more of an even contribution.\n\n\tThe rabbit picked a honey covered carrot treat while the human selected a more simple delicacy. Once this routine was done all that was left was filing into the theater. Once inside the pair could make out that many of the patrons happened to be furries a coincidence that Evan wasn't expecting but didn't pay much attention to. The rows had already filed out and many seats were occupied but fortunately there was a few vacancies. The friends made their way to the second row and shuffled their way near the middle.\n\n\tThe rabbit felt a bit nervous once they settled in. Some butterflies riled in his stomach once they were in their seats. The various ads that showed on the screen provided some wayward distraction. But soon enough his worries were placed. Evan guided over his right hand and gently placed it holding the younger boys paw. It surprised Matt but made him feel warm inside as he looked over to see Evan smiling at him.\n\n\tIt seemed there was not as much to worry about as the rabbit might have thought. The two met in a tender gaze into each others eyes. No words were shared between the two and instead they continued in awkward silently, drifting towards each other as their noses met. The coolness of the lapins nose was an alien feeling to the human but he was not adverse to it. Eventually their lips met in a soft kiss but it was not very long. The sound of previews interrupted their sudden bout of passion with loud noises of distress and cries of terror.\n\n\tFirst thinking it was previews, the boys turned their head to see chaos. Screams were overheard. Loud and boistress as the crowd began to panic. The awestruck sense of what was going on began to fill the room. Sirens began to sound as the fire alarm alerted and the sprinklers overheard went into full gear. People began to bolt for the door, first thinking that protocol called for a quick exit. By this point a fire had begun to spread near the door and was quickly expanding.\n\n\tSmoke began to billow as many began to cough and choke. The boys thought for the worse, their hands quickly tied together not letting go. The power soon went as some of the fire was capitulated by the oil on the screen quickly consuming the curtains and wood beneath it. There was very little time to react and the doors had already been locked despite people screaming and crying to get out from the inside. It seemed it was the end...\n\n\tThe night had passed, the media had come and congregated around the desecration that was once a theater. The press churned on about how it was targeted for\t being furry friendly. The fire department had responded in due time to the fiery destruction at the site but for many it was too late. Ambulances came and took away the wounded and tended to other casualties. Evan and Matt were found later in the rescue efforts. The two still hand and hand locked tightly in tow despite being unconscious for some time.\n\n\tLike many others they were rushed to the hospital. It was unclear if many would survive but ethics and the Hippocratic oath called for action. Once they arrived they were rushed to the ER. Finally separated at the limb the pair was at least put in the same room. Nurses and doctors quickly tended to them hoping for the best. Their parents showed shortly after being notified by the police that the boys were involved.\n\n\tDespite their differences in race the duos parentage had little issue with each other. Both had suspected something more was between them than just friendship. It bothered neither of them and they had been in clandestine contact about the issue for some time. But this was an issue that would have to be confronted some other time. Each group of parents stepped to their son's side doing the same that their sons had to recently been torn from doing. Holding hands....and hoping for the best.", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Hallowed Hearts by: Pent Ghelsburg

Disclaimer: All characters in this story are fictional. Any similarity to persons real or fake is purely coincidental. This story contains elements of blood, violence, and death. You have been warned.

\tThe age of consistency had come to past. The violent civil wars that plagued the country side over the past century had finally come to an end. But who decides, the verdict and nature of that end? History has taught us time and time again that it is the victor who writes the books and tells the story.  The conflict had come to define an era and to many to think of a world without the ongoing strife seemed all too alien.
\t
\tBut in furry society this was not the case. The humans had come out on top and the anthropomorphous part of the world was left in the shadows. Formerly “animal friendly” governments were replaced with autocratic and often racist dictatorships. In the realm of Dystopia this was also the case. A sprawling community nestled alongside the often calm backdrop of the vast mountain range that defined the region.

\tThe town was a diverse one beset by a variety of critters but the mass majority were ones akin to the often frigid climate. One such family was a nest of Arctic hares. The colony was fairly large as herds of the lapin breed were not uncommon. The litter was one with 4 children of varying ages, though mostly female. The one who broke that trend happened to be the oldest, Matt. At 14 years of age the boy was no longer just a child instead dealing with the onset of puberty and the difficulties that came with it.

\tLike most of his breed his fur adorned a pitch white tone, save for his ears and tail which were tipped with cones of black. Already in 9th grade the teen wasn't exactly the runt of his class. Sprawling and strong, the rabbit was rather tone and many girls found him to be eye candy. But what he did not tell his fellow classmates was that he did not fancy those of the opposite gender. Even despite that though, he did not act on his feelings as he feared for his own popularity.
\t
\tOne day at school he was approached by an older friend. Evan was someone that Matt had looked up to for some time. Even was an academic who aspired to ace all of his courses and was on track for graduating near the top of his class. The human child came from an upper class family whom loathed the fact that Evan hung out with Matt. The father especially constantly brow beat him on a regular basis about how he shouldn't mingle with a lesser species.

\tMatt went about their relationship like it was nothing out of the ordinary. When they hung out they were nothing short of an eye sore to many spectators. The two walked side by side from class to class whenever they could, they were rather close. Secretly the rabbit harbored more than just companionship. Inside the teen labored the beating of a passionate pup. Today was the day, he told himself, that he'd finally ask the other boy out.

\tIt was a long day at school fraught with the difficulties of boredom and the monotony of every day simplicity. The rabbit had long sought for the end of school, like many other kids. He was a bit nervous since he had decided that today was the day he'd finally ask Evan out. Once the bell rang the rabbit hopped as quickly as he could and rushed to the front of the school where he waited for the target of his star crossed affection.

\tIt wasn't long until the jet black hair boy appeared from the set of double doors that guarded the entrance to the facility. His glasses rested softly over his nose as his vision was far from perfect. But the often nerdish complex put off by Evan didn't seem to deter Matt at all. Once the human spotted his lapin friend, Evan approached him post haste. Of the two the human was slightly taller and wore longer length khaki slacks.

\tBoth were forced to wear the same school uniform but Matt often opted to wear shorts while Evan preferred wearing the longer pants.

“Hey, what's up?” The human boy spoke first.

“Nothing much. How was your day?” The rabbit's tail flinched behind him.

“It was alright, nothing special I suppose.” Evan remarked with an almost bored look on his face.

“I was thinking maybe we could hang out and go to the movies.” Matt suggested a bit nervous about his friends response.

“Sure...I don't see why not. I don't have any plans.” The older boy was a bit flattered by the invitation.

“Really? Are you sure you want to?” The lapin was in a state of disbelief.

“Yeah, we could go see the latest Marvel flick.” The human already had a film in mind.

“Sweet, that sounds good. It's the one with Thor right?” The cub wasn't much into super heroes but had heard about it.

\tThe taller boy nodded before pulling out a smart phone to check on the times. After done checking he verified that a show was fairly soon. He showed his friend who smiled at the coincidence. Neither had access to a vehicle yet so instead they opted for their bikes. The rack was free of traffic by this point so accessing their transport was fairly simple. The trip was far from long as the local mall was but a short travel from the school.

\tThe marketing ploy was rather subtle but the aim was to attract more of the younger crowd. It was quite convenient for a hangout much to the dismay of the older patrons. However by the time Matt and Evan arrived it was far too early for the adult crowd to be present since many work places had yet to let out on a normal schedule. At the entrance of the mall the pair parked and locked their bikes so that they could make their way to the theater.

“Thanks for treating me. Let me cover the popcorn and soda.” Evan suggested in order to make it feel like more of an even contribution.

\tThe rabbit picked a honey covered carrot treat while the human selected a more simple delicacy. Once this routine was done all that was left was filing into the theater. Once inside the pair could make out that many of the patrons happened to be furries a coincidence that Evan wasn't expecting but didn't pay much attention to. The rows had already filed out and many seats were occupied but fortunately there was a few vacancies. The friends made their way to the second row and shuffled their way near the middle.

\tThe rabbit felt a bit nervous once they settled in. Some butterflies riled in his stomach once they were in their seats. The various ads that showed on the screen provided some wayward distraction. But soon enough his worries were placed. Evan guided over his right hand and gently placed it holding the younger boys paw. It surprised Matt but made him feel warm inside as he looked over to see Evan smiling at him.

\tIt seemed there was not as much to worry about as the rabbit might have thought. The two met in a tender gaze into each others eyes. No words were shared between the two and instead they continued in awkward silently, drifting towards each other as their noses met. The coolness of the lapins nose was an alien feeling to the human but he was not adverse to it. Eventually their lips met in a soft kiss but it was not very long. The sound of previews interrupted their sudden bout of passion with loud noises of distress and cries of terror.

\tFirst thinking it was previews, the boys turned their head to see chaos. Screams were overheard. Loud and boistress as the crowd began to panic. The awestruck sense of what was going on began to fill the room. Sirens began to sound as the fire alarm alerted and the sprinklers overheard went into full gear. People began to bolt for the door, first thinking that protocol called for a quick exit. By this point a fire had begun to spread near the door and was quickly expanding.

\tSmoke began to billow as many began to cough and choke. The boys thought for the worse, their hands quickly tied together not letting go. The power soon went as some of the fire was capitulated by the oil on the screen quickly consuming the curtains and wood beneath it. There was very little time to react and the doors had already been locked despite people screaming and crying to get out from the inside. It seemed it was the end...

\tThe night had passed, the media had come and congregated around the desecration that was once a theater. The press churned on about how it was targeted for\t being furry friendly. The fire department had responded in due time to the fiery destruction at the site but for many it was too late. Ambulances came and took away the wounded and tended to other casualties. Evan and Matt were found later in the rescue efforts. The two still hand and hand locked tightly in tow despite being unconscious for some time.

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