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As he was walking slowly he noticed a small baby bird sitting on thr ground under a small bush looking all helpless and chirping nervously.\n\n\"Hey little guy....Why are you down here on the ground instead of in your nest,and where's your parents?\n\nUnknown to the brave hedgehog, high in the tree above him was a sleeping creature with giant black and red coils but the upper body of a hedgehog. This gorgeous creature was a large,fully-grown Naga that went by the name of Shadow. While he was sleeping his ears starts to twitch as his supper hearing picked up the sound of the noisy blue speed demon beneath him. He lifted his large head sleepily from his red painted coils and looked down from his tree to see who was there. To his surprise he caught the sight of a blue hedgehog happily chatting to a baby bird.\n\n\"Come on, I'm sure your parents are around here somewhere,let's see if we can find them.\nShadow watched the hedgehog and licked his lips slowly.\n\n\"Oh boy a Ssssssnack how fortunate for me.\"Shadow said with an evil smirk.\n\nSonic took the baby bird on his shoulder and started to look through the trees to find the bird's nest and parents, in the shadows of the trees Shadow watched the hedgehog curicously. Sonic scanned through the trees and spotted a nest with two chattering parent birds looking for their third chick. Sonic smiles and looked at the baby bird on his shoulder.\n\n\"Are thoughs your parents little one?\"\n\nThe baby bird chirped and nodded,sonic smiled at him and started to climb the tree to reach the nest.Once sonic reached the nest the baby bird jumped off his shoulder and into it's nest, the parent birds cheaped with joy and thanked sonic by nuzzling his hand and with that done the mother bird sat on the three babies happy that her baby was back where he belongs.\nSonic smiled and climbed down from the tree, to continue his peaceful walk. As sonic walked back through the dark trees he heard something large move through the tree branches and low voied hisses,he looked around and started to get scared.\n\n\"H-how's there?\"\n\nHe continued to walk and hear the coils of the large naga moving through the dark trees,he got very frightened and started to run through the jungle only to be stopped by the feel of a coil wrapped around his arm,sonic noticed the lonely coil restricting his running,sonic paniced and tried to pull the tail tip off, not knowing that the naga was lowering himself down behind him.Shadow Grabbed sonic's shoulders and quickly wrapped his huge coils around sonic pinning his arms to his sides and pulling him up into the tree.Sonic was pulled into the tree and sat on a branch facing the large naga male.Shadow smiles evilly and wraps the tail tip around sonic's neck and squeezed tight,sonic slowly began to reduce his breathing and knew he had to find a way to deal with this creature before it was to late and he was not prepared to give up yet and so started to plead.\n\n\"P-please,....don't hurt me!\".\n\n\"Silence Prey~!\".He said as the powerful coils got tighter around the little hedgehog's body.\n\nSoon after the tighten sonic started to cry because he knew this was it for him, he really didn't want to die by the coils of this creature, he knew he needed a way to deal with the naga.\n\n\"It'sssss sssso convenient that you came walking through my jungle,your just the right size for a snack and i haven't eaten in weeksss.\"\n\nSonic struggled a breath \"P-please.....d-don't..eat me!.\"\n\n\"Awww,lissssten to you,if i let go every animal that begged me not to eat it,i wouldn't eat anthing,would i little one?\"\nShadow's coils tightened again causing the little blue speed demon to choke and go red in the face from the blood.\n\"Please....I'll do anything....I promise....Please,please,please!.\"\n\nBut Shadow wasn't listening, he coiled around sonic tighter almost enough to crush the boy's bones,he got behind his choking prey and held his coils around the boy's throat while his un-hooked his jaw to get ready to comsume the boy,as he started to lower sonic made a last bitter attemp to plead the naga.\n\n\"I PROMISE TO SERVE YOU,I'LL BE YOUR SLAVE!!!!\"Sonic screamed and cried from the top of his sore lungs.\nShadow was almost about to ingulp the boy's head before he stopped and pulled back looking at the helpless hedgehog.\n\n\"I'll be your personal slave,i can get you food,anything you want i promise if you just don't eat me.\"\n\n\"Damn.\" He said with a kinda surprised tone.\"For Ssssuch a little creature,you ssure do have a big mouth.\"He uncoiled the hedgehog's neck a little but not to much.\n\n\"I just don't want to be eaten....I promise,i'll do anything and whatever you want.\"\n\n\"Hmmmm?...If i let you go,you must promise not to run away from me little one because if you do i will comsume your whole being,got that?!\"\n\nShadow then re-squeezed the hedgehog to prove his point to the max.\n\n\"Ahhhhh....y-yes, i promise!, I do,I do!!.\"He just managed to say.\n\nShadow looked at him and smiled a little,he started to uncoil his tail from sonic's neck earning him a large gasp,cough and pant from the little hedgehog,Shadow could only chuckle at this because he found pain funny,using the tip of his tail he wrapped it around sonic's ankle and started to pull himslef and sonic futher into the large jungle tree.", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Sonic the hedgehog was walking happily through a large jungle looking at all the beautiful trees and enjoying the stunning views. As he was walking slowly he noticed a small baby bird sitting on thr ground under a small bush looking all helpless and chirping nervously.

"Hey little guy....Why are you down here on the ground instead of in your nest,and where's your parents?

Unknown to the brave hedgehog, high in the tree above him was a sleeping creature with giant black and red coils but the upper body of a hedgehog. This gorgeous creature was a large,fully-grown Naga that went by the name of Shadow. While he was sleeping his ears starts to twitch as his supper hearing picked up the sound of the noisy blue speed demon beneath him. He lifted his large head sleepily from his red painted coils and looked down from his tree to see who was there. To his surprise he caught the sight of a blue hedgehog happily chatting to a baby bird.

"Come on, I'm sure your parents are around here somewhere,let's see if we can find them.
Shadow watched the hedgehog and licked his lips slowly.

"Oh boy a Ssssssnack how fortunate for me."Shadow said with an evil smirk.

Sonic took the baby bird on his shoulder and started to look through the trees to find the bird's nest and parents, in the shadows of the trees Shadow watched the hedgehog curicously. Sonic scanned through the trees and spotted a nest with two chattering parent birds looking for their third chick. Sonic smiles and looked at the baby bird on his shoulder.

"Are thoughs your parents little one?"

The baby bird chirped and nodded,sonic smiled at him and started to climb the tree to reach the nest.Once sonic reached the nest  the baby bird jumped off his shoulder and into it's nest, the parent birds cheaped with joy and thanked sonic by nuzzling his hand and with that done the mother bird sat on the three babies happy that her baby was back where he belongs.
Sonic smiled and climbed down from the tree, to continue his peaceful walk. As sonic walked back through the dark trees he heard something large move through the tree branches and low voied hisses,he looked around and started to get scared.

"H-how's there?"

He continued to walk and hear the coils of the large naga moving through the dark trees,he got very frightened and started to run through the jungle only to be stopped by the feel of a coil wrapped around his arm,sonic noticed the lonely coil restricting his running,sonic paniced and tried to pull the tail tip off, not knowing that the naga was lowering himself down behind him.Shadow Grabbed sonic's shoulders and quickly wrapped his huge coils around sonic pinning his arms to his sides and pulling him up into the tree.Sonic was pulled into the tree and sat on a branch facing the large naga male.Shadow smiles evilly and wraps the tail tip around sonic's neck and squeezed tight,sonic slowly began to reduce his breathing and knew he had to find a way to deal with this creature before it was to late and he was not prepared to give up yet and so started to plead.

"P-please,....don't hurt me!".

"Silence Prey~!".He said as the powerful coils got tighter around the little hedgehog's body.

Soon after the tighten sonic started to cry because he knew this was it for him, he really didn't want to die by the coils of this creature, he knew he needed a way to deal with the naga.

"It'sssss sssso convenient that you came walking through my jungle,your just the right size for a snack and i haven't eaten in weeksss."

Sonic struggled a breath "P-please.....d-don't..eat me!."

"Awww,lissssten to you,if i let go every animal that begged me not to eat it,i wouldn't eat anthing,would i little one?"
Shadow's coils tightened again causing the little blue speed demon to choke and go red in the face from the blood.
"Please....I'll do anything....I promise....Please,please,please!."

But Shadow wasn't listening, he coiled around sonic tighter almost enough to crush the boy's bones,he got behind his choking prey and held his coils around the boy's throat while his un-hooked his jaw to get ready to comsume the boy,as he started to lower sonic made a last bitter attemp to plead the naga.

"I PROMISE TO SERVE YOU,I'LL BE YOUR SLAVE!!!!"Sonic screamed and cried from the top of his sore lungs.
Shadow was almost about to ingulp the boy's head before he stopped and pulled back looking at the helpless hedgehog.

"I'll be your personal slave,i can get you food,anything you want i promise if you just don't eat me."

"Damn." He said with a kinda surprised tone."For Ssssuch a little creature,you ssure do have a big mouth."He uncoiled the hedgehog's neck a little but not to much.

"I just don't want to be eaten....I promise,i'll do anything and whatever you want."

"Hmmmm?...If i let you go,you must promise not to run away from me little one because if you do i will comsume your whole being,got that?!"

Shadow then re-squeezed the hedgehog to prove his point to the max.

"Ahhhhh....y-yes, i promise!, I do,I do!!."He just managed to say.

Shadow looked at him and smiled a little,he started to uncoil his tail from sonic's neck earning him a large gasp,cough and pant from the little hedgehog,Shadow could only chuckle at this because he found pain funny,using the tip of his tail he wrapped it around sonic's ankle and started to pull himslef and sonic futher into the large jungle tree.", "pools_count": 1, "title": "Naga Sonadow ch1", "deleted": "f", "public": "t", "mimetype": "text/rtf", "pagecount": "1", "rating_id": "0", "rating_name": "General", "ratings": [], "submission_type_id": "12", "type_name": "Writing - Document", "guest_block": "t", "friends_only": "f", "comments_count": "1", "views": "492" }