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His belly shook with every move he did and it was adorable. Soon after though my room started to shake and I felt like my life was in danger.\n\nI roared, “ stop dancing you fat ass, you’re causing an earthquake.”\n\nThe jovial raccoon stopped dancing but still had an annoying grin on his face.\nJust to be mean I asked, “ so Albert, whose the lucky guy?” \nThe grin soon turned into a smirk and Albert answered, “ well Magnus, for your information I’m going to dinner with the beautiful Beverly.”\n\n“ You mean Beverly, the fox Beverly?”\n“ Yup that’s the one.” Said Albert.\n“ Well I’m sorry to say this but you’re gonna get played. That vixen uses people. I remember she stood me up for a date too.”\n“ Well Beverly’s not like that, maybe she just doesn’t like FAT tigers!”\n“ Whoa, well look who's talking, you're fatter than me!\"\n\" I didn't come here to argue but to ask for some help with getting ready for the date.\"\n\" Pshhh no way man its your date, you get ready for it yourself\" \n\nI sounded like a jerk but in actuality i was jealous that albert had a date. I mean Albert is a such a kind and gullible coon. I just didn't want him to get hurt by Beverly because it would hurt me too. I remember one time I convinced Albert that I was sick with the flu and he ended up taking care of me the whole day. \nWhen I finally told him i was pulling his chain he said, \"Oh thank god you were only joking, i would feel miserable if anything happened to you.\"right then and there something in my heart started to have feelings for Albert.\nAnyways back to the story. \nAlbert started to beg me for my help but with a stern voice i said, \"NO! Now get out of my room, can't you see I'm trying to get some sleep!\" Albert turned around and headed for the door. He slouched his back with his head facing the floor and his right hand on the back of his head. His limp tail dragging on the floor with every step he took. I could hear him snivel quietly. With whatever composure he had left, Albert uttered, \" Ok thanks anyways (sniffle) I'll let you get back to sleep.\" the tone in his voice was dejected, unlike before. I couldn't stand seeing albert like this, even though i was the one who caused it. I'd forgotten how sensitive Albert could be. He has a very low self esteem and me being mean to him was not helping. So I said in a nonthreatening tone, \"Ok, Ok, I'll help you get ready for the date jeez.\" Without warning Albert jumped on me giving me the most warm hearted embrace i've ever gotten from him. He lied on top of me, sandwiching me between him and the mattress of the bed. Even though Albert was heavier than me, I felt comfortable supporting his weight atop me. I was surprised that the bed was sturdy enough to hold both us heavy weights, but i could care less because at the moment i was in bliss. My heart began to beat rapidly and so loudly that i was wondering if albert could feel it with his head on my chest. Albert posted himself up with both hands on my chest. With direct eye contact, Albert said, \n\n\" Thanks for helping me out. Your my best friend.\"\n\" Jeez what a big baby. I'm your only friend.\" I said with a smile.\nAlbert smiled back and asked, \" Do you always sleep in tighty whites?\"\nin surprise, I forgot I only had briefs on and said, \" yeah. got a problem with that?\"\n\" Well I don't care but i was trying to figure out what was jabbing my butt. And if you only have briefs on then you must have a hard on right now?\"\nMy face turned red with embarrassment and I turned my head to break eye contact. \n\" Uhm, well it must be morning wood.\" I said to not look like a pervert or something.\n\" Well its already late in the afternoon?\" Albert questioning my alibi.\n\" Well then it must be afternoon wood, and plus I'm really sensitive down there and you sitting on my crotch isn't helping.\" I said in a serious voice.\n\" hahaha your too funny magnus, well ill be waiting for you in my room, just come over whenever your ready to help me get ready.\" \n\nWith that Albert headed to the door. Before albert was able to shut my door i noticed that he too had something protruding out of his basket ball shorts. It may have been my imagination but I could have sworn he had a boner too. I only caught a glimpse of the hard on so I waved the idea off as my imagination. With that I noticed my raging erection had subsided and managed to get dress. When I got to Albert's room I noticed his door was shut. Living with him all this time i've never seen his door closed. I knocked on the door waiting for a response. Albert said, \" hold on i'll be ready in a minute.\" With an intrest on what he was doing I put my ear to the door and let my keen sense of hearing take control. I could hear a fapping noise and Albert breathing really hard. These were all signs of jacking off and the sexual lust inside of me decided to open the door. I jumped in and shouted, \" AHAH, I caught you..... what the hell are you doing?\" Albert was holding a dumbbell and was shaking it vigorously. Just the very motion he did looked like he was giving a handjob. \n\n\" yeah i think this is kinda embarrassing but it totally works out the arms.\" flexing his arms showing the nonexistant muscles he thought he had. \n\" muscles... right,\" i said sarcastically. \n\" anyway lets get you ready for that date.\"\n\nAfter choosing the right attire and putting on the most smelliest of colognes, Albert was ready. \n_____________________\n\nThe digital clock read 8:00 P.M. It had been an hour since Albert left for his date with Beverly. I couldn't get the notion out of my head that Beverly was gonna stand Albert up. I tried to convince myself that if he was stood up, he would be home by now. It was already quarter past eight and still no Albert. With good intentions, I left the apartment in search for my friend.\nThe air was humid. The night sky darkened by dense rainclouds. I finally reached the restaurant where the date were to take place, I was drenched in sweat. Sitting on a bench near the entryway of the restaurant was a familiar figure. It was Albert. He was as still as a statue. His sight fixated on the bare concrete in front of him. Both his forearms rested on his knees. His right hand clenched around a dozen white roses. The situation looked like a scene out of a romantic tragedy. Where the groom is left at the alter to contemplate the reasons why his bride was nowhere to be found. I looked at my watch and it was a quarter till nine. Albert had waited nearly two hours for Beverly. I closed the gap between us until we were only a footstep apart. The raccoon didn't even notice I was hovering above him. I broke the silence.\n\n\" So, you got stood up by beverly?\"\n\nAlbert knowing the sound of my voice responded with a sigh. His sight still focused on the ground and he just nodded his head up and down in acknowledgement. I was ready to say the \"I told you so\" but this was not the appropriate time for that. Using my heart instead of my head I broke the silence once more.\n\n\" Albert, will you go out with me?\"\n\nThe words just slipped out of my mouth without thinking. I can't believe I just asked out my friend. He must think im some kind of idiot. The image of our friendship being destroyed was the only thing I was thinking. I really liked Albert and my heart felt the same. I hope Albert still wants to be friends after what I said. The silence felt like an eternity. My heart ached with shame and guilt with every second that passed. I snapped back into reality once I felt Albert grab my paw. He pulled me in closer, forcing me to bend over to him. He finally took his gaze off the the ground and we both made direct eye contact. \n\nHand in hand. Eye to eye. Time has stopped. The distance between us starts to diminish and soon it has become non existant. I close my eyes. My heart beating fast and slow, wild and calm, all at the same time. I feel the sensitive touch between our connected lips. \n\nThe sensation only lasted for an instant but the memory of a first kiss lasts forever. We separated from the kiss and lept into an awkward pause between us. Once again we were eye to eye, but soon broken with the smile of the coon.\n\n\" Let's go home.\" whispered the Albert.\n\nI smiled back and nodded. Hand in hand we walked back home.\n\nthe beginning of a relationship.\nmight continue it.\nsry if the storys short. \n\n \n \n\n\n\n\n\n \n\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "\tI love to sleep but apparently my roommate doesn’t care about that since he just barged into my room shouting, “ I’ve got a date!” The raccoon was beaming with joy while doing some weird celebration dance. His belly shook with every move he did and it was adorable. Soon after though my room started to shake and I felt like my life was in danger.

I roared, “ stop dancing you fat ass, you’re causing an earthquake.”

The jovial raccoon stopped dancing but still had an annoying grin on his face.
Just to be mean I asked, “ so Albert, whose the lucky guy?”
The grin soon turned into a smirk and Albert answered, “ well Magnus, for your information I’m going to dinner with the beautiful Beverly.”

“ You mean Beverly, the fox Beverly?”
“ Yup that’s the one.” Said Albert.
“ Well I’m sorry to say this but you’re gonna get played. That vixen uses people. I remember she stood me up for a date too.”
“ Well Beverly’s not like that, maybe she just doesn’t like FAT tigers!”
“ Whoa, well look who's talking, you're fatter than me!"
" I didn't come here to argue but to ask for some help with getting ready for the date."
" Pshhh no way man its your date, you get ready for it yourself"

I sounded like a jerk but in actuality i was jealous that albert had a date. I mean Albert is a such a kind and gullible coon. I just didn't want him to get hurt by Beverly because it would hurt me too. I remember one time I convinced Albert that I was sick with the flu and he ended up taking care of me the whole day.
When I finally told him i was pulling his chain he said, "Oh thank god you were only joking, i would feel miserable if anything happened to you."right then and there something in my heart started to have feelings for Albert.
Anyways back to the story.
Albert started to beg me for my help but with a stern voice i said, "NO! Now get out of my room, can't you see I'm trying to get some sleep!" Albert turned around and headed for the door. He slouched his back with his head facing the floor and his right hand on the back of his head. His limp tail dragging on the floor with every step he took. I could hear him snivel quietly. With whatever composure he had left, Albert uttered, " Ok thanks anyways (sniffle) I'll let you get back to sleep." the tone in his voice was dejected, unlike before. I couldn't stand seeing albert like this, even though i was the one who caused it. I'd forgotten how sensitive Albert could be. He has a very low self esteem and me being mean to him was not helping. So I said in a nonthreatening tone, "Ok, Ok, I'll help you get ready for the date jeez." Without warning Albert jumped on me giving me the most warm hearted embrace i've ever gotten from him. He lied on top of me, sandwiching me between him and the mattress of the bed. Even though Albert was heavier than me, I felt comfortable supporting his weight atop me. I was surprised that the bed was sturdy enough to hold both us heavy weights, but i could care less because at the moment i was in bliss. My heart began to beat rapidly and so loudly that i was wondering if albert could feel it with his head on my chest. Albert posted himself up with both hands on my chest. With direct eye contact, Albert said,

" Thanks for helping me out. Your my best friend."
" Jeez what a big baby. I'm your only friend." I said with a smile.
Albert smiled back and asked, " Do you always sleep in tighty whites?"
in surprise, I forgot I only had briefs on and said, " yeah. got a problem with that?"
" Well I don't care but i was trying to figure out what was jabbing my butt. And if you only have briefs on then you must have a hard on right now?"
My face turned red with embarrassment and I turned my head to break eye contact.
" Uhm, well it must be morning wood." I said to not look like a pervert or something.
" Well its already late in the afternoon?" Albert questioning my alibi.
" Well then it must be afternoon wood, and plus I'm really sensitive down there and you sitting on my crotch isn't helping." I said in a serious voice.
" hahaha your too funny magnus, well ill be waiting for you in my room, just come over whenever your ready to help me get ready."

With that Albert headed to the door. Before albert was able to shut my door i noticed that he too had something protruding out of his basket ball shorts. It may have been my imagination but I could have sworn he had a boner too. I only caught a glimpse of the hard on so I waved the idea off as my imagination. With that I noticed my raging erection had subsided and managed to get dress. When I got to Albert's room I noticed his door was shut. Living with him all this time i've never seen his door closed. I knocked on the door waiting for a response. Albert said, " hold on i'll be ready in a minute." With an intrest on what he was doing I put my ear to the door and let my keen sense of hearing take control. I could hear a fapping noise and Albert breathing really hard. These were all signs of jacking off and the sexual lust inside of me decided to open the door. I jumped in and shouted, " AHAH, I caught you..... what the hell are you doing?" Albert was holding a dumbbell and was shaking it vigorously. Just the very motion he did looked like he was giving a handjob.

" yeah i think this is kinda embarrassing but it totally works out the arms." flexing his arms showing the nonexistant muscles he thought he had.
" muscles... right," i said sarcastically.
" anyway lets get you ready for that date."

After choosing the right attire and putting on the most smelliest of colognes, Albert was ready.
_____________________

The digital clock read 8:00 P.M. It had been an hour since Albert left for his date with Beverly. I couldn't get the notion out of my head that Beverly was gonna stand Albert up. I tried to convince myself that if he was stood up, he would be home by now. It was already quarter past eight and still no Albert. With good intentions, I left the apartment in search for my friend.
The air was humid. The night sky darkened by dense rainclouds. I finally reached the restaurant where the date were to take place, I was drenched in sweat. Sitting on a bench near the entryway of the restaurant was a familiar figure. It was Albert. He was as still as a statue. His sight fixated on the bare concrete in front of him. Both his forearms rested on his knees. His right hand clenched around a dozen white roses. The situation looked like a scene out of a romantic tragedy. Where the groom is left at the alter to contemplate the reasons why his bride was nowhere to be found. I looked at my watch and it was a quarter till nine. Albert had waited nearly two hours for Beverly. I closed the gap between us until we were only a footstep apart. The raccoon didn't even notice I was hovering above him. I broke the silence.

" So, you got stood up by beverly?"

Albert knowing the sound of my voice responded with a sigh. His sight still focused on the ground and he just nodded his head up and down in acknowledgement. I was ready to say the "I told you so" but this was not the appropriate time for that. Using my heart instead of my head I broke the silence once more.

" Albert, will you go out with me?"

The words just slipped out of my mouth without thinking. I can't believe I just asked out my friend. He must think im some kind of idiot. The image of our friendship being destroyed was the only thing I was thinking. I really liked Albert and my heart felt the same. I hope Albert still wants to be friends after what I said. The silence felt like an eternity. My heart ached with shame and guilt with every second that passed. I snapped back into reality once I felt Albert grab my paw. He pulled me in closer, forcing me to bend over to him. He finally took his gaze off the the ground and we both made direct eye contact.

Hand in hand. Eye to eye. Time has stopped. The distance between us starts to diminish and soon it has become non existant. I close my eyes. My heart beating fast and slow, wild and calm, all at the same time. I feel the sensitive touch between our connected lips.

The sensation only lasted for an instant but the memory of a first kiss lasts forever. We separated from the kiss and lept into an awkward pause between us. Once again we were eye to eye, but soon broken with the smile of the coon.

" Let's go home." whispered the Albert.

I smiled back and nodded. Hand in hand we walked back home.

the beginning of a relationship.
might continue it.
sry if the storys short.  

 
 





 


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