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The hollow awakens with a smirk. It's been five or six months since the hollow found and ordered Zekill to buy this castle. The hollow sits in the lab working to find a way to restore the control the Darkfangs stole from him when he notices a shadow streak by the window. Rudbornn Chelute appears in the lab with a group of Calaveras and a strange emo dressed girl with yellow eyes.\n\n“What is the meaning of this?” The hollow demands. “How dare you come into my lab?!”\n\n“Silence!” The girl says. “Are coming here is all apart of Lord Aizen's plans. He had many plans and I was charged with handling you should you fail in your task.”\n\n“Fail in my task?!” The hollow growls. “I've failed in nothing. I'm laying low as I was commanded to.”\n\n“You've lost control!” The girl cries. “Some how the Darkfangs have disrupted your control over this body! You're hold over this body is slipping, before long you'll be repressed.”\n\n“How do you know my condition?!” The hollow demands.\n\n“That doesn't matter.” The girls says. “What does matter is you have a chance to discard this shell and have the powers you where born with. As such I've been charged with naming you hollow. You're name will be Kia, yes Kia.”\n\n“I understand and I'll comply with our lord.” Kia says. “I am Kia, Kia Moonfang.”\n\n“Very well, Kia Moonfang.” The girl says. “ Szayelaporro Granz awaits you in his new lab.”\n\n“He was killed by that soul reaper.” Kia says. “I saw it with my own eyes.”\n\n“There are things in the world of the living that are wondrous Kia.” The girl says. “One of those things has empowered us to restore a great many of the Espada. My father is next to be restored.”\n\n“Who is your father?” Kia asks.\n\n“That's not important.” The girl says. “What's important is you are brought to Szayelaporro's lab at once.”\n\nThe all leave the castle, the newly named Kia locking the doors tightly behind them.\n\n They soon arrive at the lab of Szayelaporro at Los Noches palace. The boy enters the lab alone knowing he will either be free for all time or he will die. After knowing the most painful hours of his life Kia is freed from the shell that is Zekill given his own shell, becoming a young wolf with green eyes and silk like fur. Zekill is left laying on the table alive but unresponsive. Szayelaporro looks the boy over.\n\n“hmm, Interesting.” Szayelaporro says. “I wonder if he's out because or because he can't handle you're loss. I didn't really matter, he's outlived his usefulness and is to be destroyed. A shame really, I wouldn't mind the time to study him.”\n\nSzayelaporro reaches out starting to form a cero but Kia grabs his wrist.\n\n“No!” Kia says. “I want him alive!”\n\n“What?!” Szayelaporro cries. “Lord Aizen clearly said Zekill is to be destroyed! Now get your paws off me!”\n\nSzayelaporro takes a swing at Kia trying to punch him but the young wolf moves so fast to dodge it stuns the Espada. Next thing Szayelaporro knows Kia's knee is planted in his chest causing him to drop to his knees. With a spin kick Kia sends him flying through the doors of the lab breaking them to pieces. Kia comes walking out slowly with an evil smirk on his face.\n\n“I said alive fool!” Kia says. “You dare question me? You forget even when I was Zekill's hollow I was ALWAYS more powerful than you.”\n\n“How dare you?!” Szayelaporro demands. “Kill him!”\n\nA large group of Fraccion appear around Kia and attack the Calaveras. Kia lunges at Rudbornn Chelute taking his Zanpakuto with easy before he can draw it.\n\n“Go ahead, give the release command!” Kia says. “I'll use it to cut out your tongue before you can finish speaking it.” Kia sees the emo girl put her hand on her Zanpakuto. “It would be a shame if I had to destroy you Ms. Schiffer, I don't think Ulquiorra would be pleased with me for killing his daughter so I think you should just sit still.”\n\nThe emo girl's eyes widen with shock at this than she leans on the wall waching.\n\n“I surrender!” Rudbornn says as the Calaveras throw down all weapons. “The Calaveras are yours to command Lord Kia.”\n\n“No!” Kia says. “The Calaveras belong to Las Noches and are to defend the palace which means you're Lady Tier Harribel's to command.” Kia stands and glared down at Szayelaporro reaching his hand out to offer him help up. “Szayelaporro, where do you stand?!\n\n“I'll follow you of course if you want.” Szayelaporro says. “Can't be any worse than dieing for lord Aizen.”\n\n“Very good.” Kia says. “I have a man I want you to work with, a scientist like yourself who got his hands on something I want to make use of but first I must send a message to the Darkfangs and Zekill will be my notepad.”\n\nKia goes into the lab than comes back out pushing Zekill's bed and holding his Zanpakuto. Using his wolf claws Kia rips open Zekil's shirt and scratches deep into his chest:\n\n_________________________________________\n\nThe monster is freed. Darkfang Forest will burn.\n\nKia Moonfang.\n\n_________________________________________\n\n Everyone watches in horror as Kia raises up Zekill's sword and stabs it into his chest between the threat and his signature. The emo girl turns her back knowing for the first time what she's done in obeying Lord Aizen. She sees a monster has truly been free, one that Lord Aizen himself may not be able to control. This monster's brutality may bring about the end of all hollows once and for all. Kia was calling to her.\n\n“Ms. Schiffer?” Kia asks. “Are you paying attention? I require a task from you.”\n\n“I..I'm sorry Lord Kia.” Ms. Schiffer. “What do you need me to do?”\n\n“I want you to take this into Darkfang Forest bed and all.” Kia says. “Drop by the fountain in the center of town than hurry back.”\n\n“Yes Lord Kia.” Ms. Schiffer says as he grabs up the bed. “I'll return as quickly as I can.”\n\nIn a flash the emo girl is gone doing Kia's bidding. Kia starts laughing like crazy glancing around.\n\n“Now, let the games begin.” Kia says. “Soon there peaceful world will be shattered, blood and destruction will rain down as never before. I'll turn every life in that forest into the Hogyoku, retake my old dark powers and take my rightful place at the head of the wolf nation. No one will stop me!”\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "
Lord Aizen's Orders


\tNight falls once again and Zekill sleeps as he must giving up control. The hollow awakens with a smirk. It's been five or six months since the hollow found and ordered Zekill to buy this castle. The hollow sits in the lab working to find a way to restore the control the Darkfangs stole from him when he notices a shadow streak by the window. Rudbornn Chelute appears in the lab with a group of Calaveras and a strange emo dressed girl with yellow eyes.

“What is the meaning of this?” The hollow demands. “How dare you come into my lab?!”

“Silence!” The girl says. “Are coming here is all apart of Lord Aizen's plans. He had many plans and I was charged with handling you should you fail in your task.”

“Fail in my task?!” The hollow growls. “I've failed in nothing. I'm laying low as I was commanded to.”

“You've lost control!” The girl cries. “Some how the Darkfangs have disrupted your control over this body! You're hold over this body is slipping, before long you'll be repressed.”

“How do you know my condition?!” The hollow demands.

“That doesn't matter.” The girls says. “What does matter is you have a chance to discard this shell and have the powers you where born with. As such I've been charged with naming you hollow. You're name will be Kia, yes Kia.”

“I understand and I'll comply with our lord.” Kia says. “I am Kia, Kia Moonfang.”

“Very well, Kia Moonfang.” The girl says. “ Szayelaporro Granz awaits you in his new lab.”

“He was killed by that soul reaper.” Kia says. “I saw it with my own eyes.”

“There are things in the world of the living that are wondrous Kia.” The girl says. “One of those things has empowered us to restore a great many of the Espada. My father is next to be restored.”

“Who is your father?” Kia asks.

“That's not important.” The girl says. “What's important is you are brought to Szayelaporro's lab at once.”

The all leave the castle, the newly named Kia locking the doors tightly behind them.

 They soon arrive at the lab of Szayelaporro at Los Noches palace. The boy enters the lab alone knowing he will either be free for all time or he will die. After knowing the most painful hours of his life Kia is freed from the shell that is Zekill given his own shell, becoming a young wolf with green eyes and silk like fur. Zekill is left laying on the table alive but unresponsive. Szayelaporro looks the boy over.

“hmm, Interesting.” Szayelaporro says. “I wonder if he's out because or because he can't handle you're loss. I didn't really matter, he's outlived his usefulness and is to be destroyed. A shame really, I wouldn't mind the time to study him.”

Szayelaporro reaches out starting to form a cero but Kia grabs his wrist.

“No!” Kia says. “I want him alive!”

“What?!” Szayelaporro cries. “Lord Aizen clearly said Zekill is to be destroyed! Now get your paws off me!”

Szayelaporro takes a swing at Kia trying to punch him but the young wolf moves so fast to dodge it stuns the Espada. Next thing Szayelaporro knows Kia's knee is planted in his chest causing him to drop to his knees. With a spin kick Kia sends him flying through the doors of the lab breaking them to pieces. Kia comes walking out slowly with an evil smirk on his face.

“I said alive fool!” Kia says. “You dare question me? You forget even when I was Zekill's hollow I was ALWAYS more powerful than you.”

“How dare you?!” Szayelaporro demands. “Kill him!”

A large group of Fraccion appear around Kia and attack the Calaveras. Kia lunges at Rudbornn Chelute taking his Zanpakuto with easy before he can draw it.

“Go ahead, give the release command!” Kia says. “I'll use it to cut out your tongue before you can finish speaking it.” Kia sees the emo girl put her hand on her Zanpakuto. “It would be a shame if I had to destroy you Ms. Schiffer, I don't think Ulquiorra would be pleased with me for killing his daughter so I think you should just sit still.”

The emo girl's eyes widen with shock at this than she leans on the wall waching.

“I surrender!” Rudbornn says as the Calaveras throw down all weapons. “The Calaveras are yours to command Lord Kia.”

“No!” Kia says. “The Calaveras belong to Las Noches and are to defend the palace which means you're Lady Tier Harribel's to command.” Kia stands and glared down at Szayelaporro reaching his hand out to offer him help up. “Szayelaporro, where do you stand?!

“I'll follow you of course if you want.” Szayelaporro says. “Can't be any worse than dieing for lord Aizen.”

“Very good.” Kia says. “I have a man I want you to work with, a scientist like yourself who got his hands on something I want to make use of but first I must send a message to the Darkfangs and Zekill will be my notepad.”

Kia goes into the lab than comes back out pushing Zekill's bed and holding his Zanpakuto. Using his wolf claws Kia rips open Zekil's shirt and scratches deep into his chest:

_________________________________________

The monster is freed. Darkfang Forest will burn.

Kia Moonfang.

_________________________________________

 Everyone watches in horror as Kia raises up Zekill's sword and stabs it into his chest between the threat and his signature. The emo girl turns her back knowing for the first time what she's done in obeying Lord Aizen. She sees a monster has truly been free, one that Lord Aizen himself may not be able to control. This monster's brutality may bring about the end of all hollows once and for all. Kia was calling to her.

“Ms. Schiffer?” Kia asks. “Are you paying attention? I require a task from you.”

“I..I'm sorry Lord Kia.” Ms. Schiffer. “What do you need me to do?”

“I want you to take this into Darkfang Forest bed and all.” Kia says. “Drop by the fountain in the center of town than hurry back.”

“Yes Lord Kia.” Ms. Schiffer says as he grabs up the bed. “I'll return as quickly as I can.”

In a flash the emo girl is gone doing Kia's bidding. Kia starts laughing like crazy glancing around.

“Now, let the games begin.” Kia says. “Soon there peaceful world will be shattered, blood and destruction will rain down as never before. I'll turn every life in that forest into the Hogyoku, retake my old dark powers and take my rightful place at the head of the wolf nation. No one will stop me!”

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