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One of the nurses stops what she’s doing seeing the boy is awake. \n“Doctor!” The nurse cries. \n\nBefore she can finish her sentence the boy leaps out of his bed as his eyes slowly become back and lifeless, a hole slowly appears. A midnight blue bone like substance pours from the hole in his chest slowly covering as he roars like a beast. The nurse screams as the hollowfied bone like clawed hand of the boy grabs her throat. The echo of one possessed by a hollow comes from the boy’s lips as he speaks. \n\n“Where am I, woman?!” The boy demands with a hiss. \n\n“Zekill STOP!” The doctor cries. “Everything is alright son. Let me call your uncle.”\n\nThe boy laughs as he wrenches the nurse in his grasp snapping her neck. He drops the woman’s corpse to the floor. \n\n“Zekill isn’t here right now doctor!” The boy says. “You may address me as Vasta Lorde!”\n\n“You’re his hollow!” The doctor cries as he backs away in fear.\n\n“Bingo!” The hollow exclaims as he Sonedos directly in front of the doctor. \n\nThe claw like hand slides into the doctor’s chest and rips his heart out. The hollow’s mask opens at his mouth as the doctor hits the floor dead. The fangs descend and drain the blood from the heart. The hollow tosses the heart aside as the other nurses watch this in horror.\n\n“Who’s next?” The hollow asks as a smirk appears on the mask.\n\nFootsteps echo from outside the sickbay and an older wolf of about 18 to 19 enters the room. He speaks coldly to the hollow.\n\n“I see you don’t know when you’re not wanted!” The older wolf says looking at the hollow coldly.\n\n“Valos!” The hollow hisses as he glares at the older boy. “I’ll grind you into dust! It’s because of you I no longer possess the spirit of the Dark Knight!”\n\n“Fool.” Valos says coldly. “The spirit was a demon using you for your potential. I thought you were better than that.”\n\n“I don’t need him to kill you ASS!” The hollow screams.\n\nThe hollow holds out his hand as a jet black samurai sword appears from black flames.\n\n“Rend and tare, Morte!” The hollow cries out.\n\nThe samurai sword transforms into a large broadsword. An aura of death surrounds the blade and the hollow’s spiritual takes on the aspect of death.\n\nValos draws his blade pointing it at the hollow. His spiritual pressure rises becoming dense like a massive weight in the air. The elements of the underworld gather in the form of the dark crystals of earth, fire, wind and water.\n\n“Declare!” Valos cries out then mumbles something under his breath.\nHis swifts his wrist pointing the blade to the side as the blade glows changing form into a pole with a scythe blade on one end. He spins the scythe in all directions as dark elemental energies gather around the blades. The rage of the dog demon faintly gathers around him in the form of hell fire as he howls.\n\nThe hollow laughs at Valos. “It’s not enough, cousin!” The hollow says. “Call up the power of a hundred dog demons and it will never close the gap between our powers. You were lucky in out last battle, I was weakened! I see you haven’t picked up any new tricks since taking command of the Darkfang High Guard.”\n\n“Shut up and fight hollow.” Valos says as he moves in to attack.\nValos’ blade passes right through the hollow as it strikes but he recovers too late, the image of the hollow disappears and the hollow’s blade plunges into Valos’ back coming out his chest. The hollow pulls back the blade as the aura of the blade infects Valos’ flesh. Valos drops to his knees as blood pours from the rotting wound.\n\n“Damn it!” The hollow says sarcastically as he laughs. “I seem to have missed your soul chain, how clumsy of me. Don’t worry; I won’t miss it this time.”\n\nThe hollows blade goes up then comes down for the final strike but a voice rings out.\n\n“Bakudo number 73, Tozansho.” The voice says as a spell ignites as blue energy. It extends upward from four points and creates an inverted pyramid that solidifies into a barrier around Valos and the surviving nurses. The hollow’s blade hits the barrier and bounces off.\n\nA taller older wolf walks into the room leaning on a wolf headed cane. He smiles at everyone in the room, even the hollow.\n\n“It seems I showed up in the nick of time.” The wolf says.\n\n“Father!” Valos cries with relief. “Thank the goddess you’re here!”\n\n“Uncle Markus.” The hollow says. “Once again you interfere in my plans. Give me the weakling piece of trash and I’ll be on my way.”\n\n“I don’t think so.” Markus says. “Why don’t you let my nephew go and return to the prison in his soul or will I have to force you back myself?”\n\n“You take me for a fool Markus?” The hollow laughs. “It’s forbidden for you to interfere in a struggle between hollow and soul reaper. Only he and I can determine the outcome, he let his guard down and so I am free. He’ll never have the will as long as despair and loneliness exist in his heart.”\n\n“Despair and loneliness in his heart?” Markus asks. “Explain this hollow, AT ONCE!”\n\n“If you insist.” The hollow says with a smile on the mask. “He’s not the average hollow mask wearing soul reaper. As long as great despair and loneliness in his heart and soul it’ll always grant me the power to take him whenever I please. Only one thing can drain this from him, acceptance and love. The acceptance of himself and to know the love of a strong friendship that may turn into more. Only through those will he discover the will to battle me back forever. He’ll never find these because he’ll NEVER accept the person he is.”\n\n“What must he accept about himself?” Markus asks.\n\n“You’ll learn in due time Darkfang alpha.” The hollow says. “Know this now, the time is soon at hand. Lord Aizen will soon be freed and his army will destroy the world of the living! I’ll personally bring them here to destroy your pack and I’ll place your head on a pike in my master’s throne room!”\n\n“You think I’ll let you bring him back?” Markus asks calmly. “You won’t be leaving this sickbay in this state.”\n\n“I hate to burst your bubble uncle.” The hollow says as he thrusts his arm to one side mumbling under his breath. A white piece of cloth slowly slithers out of the hollow’s arm. “Sentan Hakuja!” The cloth coils around the hollow, tightens and with a white flash it’s gone with the hollow.\n\nMoments later the hollow appears below a floating island in a strange land. The hollow slowly starts to rise from the ground and Sonedos away from the floating island appearing miles away standing in mid air. He slashes the air before him; a black opens like a mouth opening to yawn forming a Garganta. The hollow floats in and into Wakomondo.\n\n\tWith the Garganta closing behind him he soon floats into the Menos forest finding a tall, skinny hollow without a mask. The creature has the number 62 tattooed to the side of its face.\n\n“Mornero.” The hollow says facing the creature.\n\n“My lord!” Mornero says. “It’s good you’ve returned home. Should I summon the rest of your Fraccion?”\n\n“I don’t require all the Fraccion to carry out my mission.” The hollow says. “I do however require you to take a risk.”\n\n“Of course my lord,” Mornero says, “I will destroy at your command.”\n\n“Very good,” The hollow says, “but I have something more in mind. The Darkfangs have disrupted my hold over Zekill by removing the spirit of the Dark Knight. I can only take control when he sleeps it seems.” The hollow breaks off a piece of his hollowfication and hands it to Mornero. “It’s going to take some time but I require you to find black diamond and crystal to encase this in. When our master commands it you will come to the world of the living and use this on Zekill to restore me to my full control. This is a great risk, if Zekill discovers the secret to push me back Lord Aizen will lose a valued solder.”\n\n“I understand lord.” Mornero says, “I will be ready to act on command.”\n\n“I knew I could count on you Mornero.” The hollow says, “I must return to the world of the living before the little fool gains control. Let Zekill enjoy control while he can, when I return we’ll destroy the Darkfangs and place Markus’ head on a pike in Lord Aizen’s throne room.”\n\nThe hollow slashes the air with his blade, the Garganta opens again and he hovers in.\n\n\tThe hollow enters the world of the living and in the middle of a long abandoned city as his hollowfication slowly starts cracking. \n“Damn!” The hollow says, “He’s already breaking through, I thought I had more time.” He looks around eyeing a castle carved out of the mountainside above the city. “This will do, I only hope he’ll use it.”\n\nThe hollowfication crumbles to dust as he falls to the ground. As the dust of the hollowfication clears the 13 year old boy Zekill lays there in hospital patient garb passed out.", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "\tHis ice blue eyes slowly open to a male doctor and female nurses busy around the sick bay, a boy thirteen years old named Zekill, a hybrid vampire lycan taken in by his wolf family, The Darkfangs, kept in the pack’s sickbay after being beaten to an inch of his life to anger the pack leader. One of the nurses stops what she’s doing seeing the boy is awake.
“Doctor!” The nurse cries.

Before she can finish her sentence the boy leaps out of his bed as his eyes slowly become back and lifeless, a hole slowly appears. A midnight blue bone like substance pours from the hole in his chest slowly covering as he roars like a beast. The nurse screams as the hollowfied bone like clawed hand of the boy grabs her throat. The echo of one possessed by a hollow comes from the boy’s lips as he speaks.

“Where am I, woman?!” The boy demands with a hiss.

“Zekill STOP!” The doctor cries. “Everything is alright son. Let me call your uncle.”

The boy laughs as he wrenches the nurse in his grasp snapping her neck. He drops the woman’s corpse to the floor.

“Zekill isn’t here right now doctor!” The boy says. “You may address me as Vasta Lorde!”

“You’re his hollow!” The doctor cries as he backs away in fear.

“Bingo!” The hollow exclaims as he Sonedos directly in front of the doctor.

The claw like hand slides into the doctor’s chest and rips his heart out. The hollow’s mask opens at his mouth as the doctor hits the floor dead. The fangs descend and drain the blood from the heart. The hollow tosses the heart aside as the other nurses watch this in horror.

“Who’s next?” The hollow asks as a smirk appears on the mask.

Footsteps echo from outside the sickbay and an older wolf of about 18 to 19 enters the room. He speaks coldly to the hollow.

“I see you don’t know when you’re not wanted!” The older wolf says looking at the hollow coldly.

“Valos!” The hollow hisses as he glares at the older boy. “I’ll grind you into dust! It’s because of you I no longer possess the spirit of the Dark Knight!”

“Fool.” Valos says coldly. “The spirit was a demon using you for your potential. I thought you were better than that.”

“I don’t need him to kill you ASS!” The hollow screams.

The hollow holds out his hand as a jet black samurai sword appears from black flames.

“Rend and tare, Morte!” The hollow cries out.

The samurai sword transforms into a large broadsword. An aura of death surrounds the blade and the hollow’s spiritual takes on the aspect of death.

Valos draws his blade pointing it at the hollow. His spiritual pressure rises becoming dense like a massive weight in the air. The elements of the underworld gather in the form of the dark crystals of earth, fire, wind and water.

“Declare!” Valos cries out then mumbles something under his breath.
His swifts his wrist pointing the blade to the side as the blade glows changing form into a pole with a scythe blade on one end. He spins the scythe in all directions as dark elemental energies gather around the blades. The rage of the dog demon faintly gathers around him in the form of hell fire as he howls.

The hollow laughs at Valos. “It’s not enough, cousin!” The hollow says. “Call up the power of a hundred dog demons and it will never close the gap between our powers. You were lucky in out last battle, I was weakened! I see you haven’t picked up any new tricks since taking command of the Darkfang High Guard.”

“Shut up and fight hollow.” Valos says as he moves in to attack.
Valos’ blade passes right through the hollow as it strikes but he recovers too late, the image of the hollow disappears and the hollow’s blade plunges into Valos’ back coming out his chest. The hollow pulls back the blade as the aura of the blade infects Valos’ flesh. Valos drops to his knees as blood pours from the rotting wound.

“Damn it!” The hollow says sarcastically as he laughs. “I seem to have missed your soul chain, how clumsy of me. Don’t worry; I won’t miss it this time.”

The hollows blade goes up then comes down for the final strike but a voice rings out.

“Bakudo number 73, Tozansho.” The voice says as a spell ignites as blue energy. It extends upward from four points and creates an inverted pyramid that solidifies into a barrier around Valos and the surviving nurses. The hollow’s blade hits the barrier and bounces off.

A taller older wolf walks into the room leaning on a wolf headed cane. He smiles at everyone in the room, even the hollow.

“It seems I showed up in the nick of time.” The wolf says.

“Father!” Valos cries with relief. “Thank the goddess you’re here!”

“Uncle Markus.” The hollow says. “Once again you interfere in my plans. Give me the weakling piece of trash and I’ll be on my way.”

“I don’t think so.” Markus says. “Why don’t you let my nephew go and return to the prison in his soul or will I have to force you back myself?”

“You take me for a fool Markus?” The hollow laughs. “It’s forbidden for you to interfere in a struggle between hollow and soul reaper. Only he and I can determine the outcome, he let his guard down and so I am free. He’ll never have the will as long as despair and loneliness exist in his heart.”

“Despair and loneliness in his heart?” Markus asks. “Explain this hollow, AT ONCE!”

“If you insist.” The hollow says with a smile on the mask. “He’s not the average hollow mask wearing soul reaper. As long as great despair and loneliness in his heart and soul it’ll always grant me the power to take him whenever I please. Only one thing can drain this from him, acceptance and love. The acceptance of himself and to know the love of a strong friendship that may turn into more. Only through those will he discover the will to battle me back forever. He’ll never find these because he’ll NEVER accept the person he is.”

“What must he accept about himself?” Markus asks.

“You’ll learn in due time Darkfang alpha.” The hollow says. “Know this now, the time is soon at hand. Lord Aizen will soon be freed and his army will destroy the world of the living! I’ll personally bring them here to destroy your pack and I’ll place your head on a pike in my master’s throne room!”

“You think I’ll let you bring him back?” Markus asks calmly. “You won’t be leaving this sickbay in this state.”

“I hate to burst your bubble uncle.” The hollow says as he thrusts his arm to one side mumbling under his breath. A white piece of cloth slowly slithers out of the hollow’s arm. “Sentan Hakuja!” The cloth coils around the hollow, tightens and with a white flash it’s gone with the hollow.

Moments later the hollow appears below a floating island in a strange land. The hollow slowly starts to rise from the ground and Sonedos away from the floating island appearing miles away standing in mid air. He slashes the air before him; a black opens like a mouth opening to yawn forming a Garganta. The hollow floats in and into Wakomondo.

\tWith the Garganta closing behind him he soon floats into the Menos forest finding a tall, skinny hollow without a mask. The creature has the number 62 tattooed to the side of its face.

“Mornero.” The hollow says facing the creature.

“My lord!” Mornero says. “It’s good you’ve returned home. Should I summon the rest of your Fraccion?”

“I don’t require all the Fraccion to carry out my mission.” The hollow says. “I do however require you to take a risk.”

“Of course my lord,” Mornero says, “I will destroy at your command.”

“Very good,” The hollow says, “but I have something more in mind. The Darkfangs have disrupted my hold over Zekill by removing the spirit of the Dark Knight. I can only take control when he sleeps it seems.” The hollow breaks off a piece of his hollowfication and hands it to Mornero. “It’s going to take some time but I require you to find black diamond and crystal to encase this in. When our master commands it you will come to the world of the living and use this on Zekill to restore me to my full control. This is a great risk, if Zekill discovers the secret to push me back Lord Aizen will lose a valued solder.”

“I understand lord.” Mornero says, “I will be ready to act on command.”

“I knew I could count on you Mornero.” The hollow says, “I must return to the world of the living before the little fool gains control. Let Zekill enjoy control while he can, when I return we’ll destroy the Darkfangs and place Markus’ head on a pike in Lord Aizen’s throne room.”

The hollow slashes the air with his blade, the Garganta opens again and he hovers in.

\tThe hollow enters the world of the living and in the middle of a long abandoned city as his hollowfication slowly starts cracking.
“Damn!” The hollow says, “He’s already breaking through, I thought I had more time.” He looks around eyeing a castle carved out of the mountainside above the city. “This will do, I only hope he’ll use it.”

The hollowfication crumbles to dust as he falls to the ground. As the dust of the hollowfication clears the 13 year old boy Zekill lays there in hospital patient garb passed out.", "pools_count": 1, "title": "1 - Awaking", "deleted": "f", "public": "t", "mimetype": "application/msword", "pagecount": "1", "rating_id": "2", "rating_name": "Adult", "ratings": [ { "content_tag_id": "3", "name": "Violence", "description": "Mild violence", "rating_id": "1" }, { "content_tag_id": "5", "name": "Strong Violence", "description": "Strong violence, blood, serious injury or death", "rating_id": "2" } ], "submission_type_id": "12", "type_name": "Writing - Document", "guest_block": "f", "friends_only": "f", "comments_count": "0", "views": "66" }