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Gargantas open in the skies above the floating continent of the Darkfangs and hollows of all assorted classes pour into the world of the living attacking the city. Soon a barrier rises over and around the Darkfang’s floating continent barring the hollows entry. Swarms of hollows unleash Ceros attempting to weaken the barrier. Kia sits atop a mountain watching this and his eyes glow blood red.\n\n“AIZEN!” Kia screams as his spirit pressure rises causing rock slides and cave ins all throughout the mountain he stands on. “You son of a…”\n\nKia floats into the air and darts at one of the Gargantas. He draws his Zanpakuto cutting down any hollow in his path as he enters a Garganta to travel to Hueco Mundo and on to the palace of Las Noches.\n\n\tIn the ancient tower of the alphas on the Darkfang’s floating continent the alphas of the wolf packs meet in a large stone room with a large round smooth stone table in the center of the room. Around the table are 8 large padded stone chairs. In the giant fireplace a large fire like a bonfire blazes. At points in the stone walls lights made to look like torches hang and a large chandelier with lights made to look like candles hangs down above the large table. Smaller stone tables line either side of the room with assorted finger food, coffee, tea and little bottles of water. Seven large wolves sit around the large table arguing, the alphas of packs of the wolf nation.\n\n “Quit your bitching all of you!” Cries Stancor, the alpha of the Nightfangs. “We’re all being hit hard by the hollows! None of us have the numbers to keep them out of our lands, most of us are lucky we have the numbers to keep them out of our cities!”\n\n“Oh please!” Cries Borkang, the alpha of the Sharpclaw pack. “Your pack’s city in inside a mountain your great great grandfather had dug out! All you had to do was close your dome, shutters and set your auto defenses to hollows! We all know it the going gets too rough you can sink your mountain into the ground!”\n\nA large round wolf who’s been eating like a pig spits food everywhere as he chuckles at the others.\n\n“And what’s so damn funny Draux of the Tubbypaws?!” Stancor demands.\n\n“That’s Ironpaws!” Draux cries. “And it’s funny you think anything can protect us. If Aizen shifted his sight to the packs it doesn’t matter where you go to hide. I don’t even see the point in this little meeting but who knows maybe if we could set up shop in the wilds of this floating continent of the Darkfangs we could be protected by the technology they have.”\n\nA female wolf sitting with a female on either side of her growls her disgust.\n\n“Cowards!” The female wolf cries. “You men become more the cowards each generation! It’s a wonder how you remain alphas when you hide in a hole every time something goes wrong! Or worse, you eat nonstop until you weigh a ton!”\n\n“HOW DARE YOU?!” Stancor cries as he stands and places a hand on the hilt of his sword. “You think just because you’ve been without a man for so long and had Markus grant you the right to rule your pack yourself that I’ll allow you to speak to me like that?! You and your Amazon pack will pay for your disrespect Jestine!”\n\nJestine laughs as she rises from her chair. She reaches back gripping the spear on her back. The two women next to her rise with her one putting a hand on the hilt of her sword the other having knives shoot out of each shirt sleeve into her hands. Just as the women move to meet the male in battle a jet black demon like wolf walks into the room carrying a folder case.\n\n“ENOUGH ALL OF YOU!” His voice thunders as he sits taking folders out of the case. “All of you be seated and let’s get this meeting going. I have reports from your lieutenants and see your situations are grave so I’ve already dispatched aid to each of your grounds. You’re packs will be transported here for the time being, in return your warrior classes will join with our ranks in the defense of the floating continent. If anyone has an issue with this speak up now.”\n\nJestine rises and bows her head to this wolf respectfully.\n\n“Thank you Lord Markus.” Jestine says. “I know we of the combined forces of the Icepaws are honored by your generosity. You’re the only man at this table who has ever aided us when we’re in need and shown us the respect due. Our Amazons are at your command as always.”\n\nThe door to the room swings open and a lot chuckle can be heard. A voice rings into the room.\n\n“My my Jestine Markus hasn’t even been the supreme alpha for a year and already you suck his dick like the whore you are.” The voice says as the figure the voice belongs to steps into the light showing himself to be a large powerful looking gray wolf dressed in jeans, t-shirt, a black leather tunic over his t-shirt and a long black hooded cloak.\n\n“SHANKILL!!” Jestine screams as she draws her spear lunging at the new comer. “MURDER! YOU KILLED MY MATE!”\n\nMarkus quickly draws his sword but it’s only the hilt, a bladeless sword. The room grows dark as he flicks his wrist sending out a rope of energy from the hilt of the bladeless sword. The energy rope wraps itself around Jestine’s waist pulling her back as Shankill flash steps to one side. As Justine is pulled back her spear comes apart in two places the center falling to the floor. Shankill stands leaning on a wall holding a large scythe glowing with black energy wearing a hollow mask. He runs his hand down his face causing the mask to disappear.\n\n“Foolish woman, an attack on me is an attack on the Drago Relar pack!” Shankill says smirking. “My pack will devour every Icepaw that lives!”\n\n“Enough Shankill!” Markus cries. “You and your pack where banished. You have no right to war with any pack of this nation. You so much as touch another Icepaw again and you declare war with the whole nation! Now, EXPLAIN YOURSELF! Why are you here?”\n\n“For the same reason all the other alphas are here.” Shankill says. “The hollow attacks but it seems like us Drago Relars are as well off as the Darkfangs. We seem to be the only ones with the high numbers of warriors with special powers and the technology to back them up.”\n\n“Hmph!” Markus says. “Technology YOU STOLE from the Darkfangs. You also used rogue vampires drain blood knowledge of biochemical weapons of mass destruction from the humans then used them to steal the vampire clans’ technology. If that wasn’t enough you tied them out and watched the morning sun burn them to ashes when you had no more use for them.” Markus’ eyes tint red with his anger as he goes on. “Your crimes of forcing lesser packs to join yours under penalty of death, mass murder and use of weapons of mass destruction warrant death. Your head would be on a pike outside this tower if not for some the majority of the wolf nation alphas granting you mercy.”\n\nShankill laughs as he walks to the table. He grabs Draux of the Ironpaws by the back of the neck and tosses him aside taking his chair. Shankill uses his scythe to push all the food in front of him to the floor than puts his feet up on the table laying his scythe across his lap. Draux growls furiously but Stancor of the Nightfangs grabs both his shoulders holding him back. Jestine glares at Shankill with murderous rage in her eyes and growls. Markus lays a hand gently on Jestine’s shoulder.\n\n“Be still my child.” Markus says calmly before fixing a hatful glare on Shankill.\n\n“It’s not about how I got everything It’s that I have it.” Shankill says. “Besides, did you bother telling them about your dirty little secret? That Vasta Lorde demon nephew of yours that was supposed to be put to death since he couldn’t be controlled.”\n\nAll the alphas in the room gasp and Jestine shrugs Markus’ hand off her shoulder.\n\n“What’s the meaning of this Markus?!” Jestine cries. “Is what he says true? Does that demon still live?”\n\n“Of course he does.” Shankill says. “You all decreed as a nation the demon was to die but can you blame him? The creature is his blood so he tried to domesticate him, make him into a wolf by removing his past memories but the plan fell apart and now he’s free. No need to worry, he went to Las Noches.”\n\nMore gasps come from the alphas as Shankill laughs. Markus’ glare becomes a look of sheer sadness as he lowers his head.\n\n“Markus,” Shankill laughs. “You brand me a criminal for what I’ve done but because you couldn’t act before many lives were lost and now many more may be lost if he’s going to join Aizen again. All that blood is on your hands.”\n\n“What do you want Shankill?” Markus asks.\n\n“An alliance.” Shankill says. “We fight together, drop your rules of war honor crap and launch an all out assault on Las Noches. Separately we don’t have the power to do it but together you and I could do something.”\n\n“And what’s on your mind for this little attack?” Markus asks.\n\nBefore Shankill can respond Valos comes rushing in.\n\n“Father! I mean Lord Markus!” Valos cries. “Reports are coming in from all lands in or under the protection of the wolf nation, the hollows have pulled out and all Gargontas have closed!”\n\n“What?!” Markus cries. “Computer, show us the current reports on the hollow attacks!”\n\nA large holographic screen appears above the center of the large stone table. In different sections it shows all the lands that where under attack but the hollows pour back into the Gargontas. After the last of the hollows leave this world all the Gargontas close.\n\n“Hmm.” Shankill ponders. “Why would Aizen call off an attack like this? He could have crushed most of the other packs, I don’t get it.”\n\n“Alright packs, your people should be here soon so I’m calling a 24 hour recess.” Markus says. “Shankill, we need to talk but keep in mind I’m not going to entertain use of ANY kind of weapon of mass destruction on Hueco Mundo!”\n\n\tKia enters the palace of Las Notches and walks the halls to the throne room. Most arrancars and hollows step way out of his way but a few weaker ones seeking to make a name for themselves step in his path causing Kia to slash them to bits or to blast them with Ceros. Soon Kia steps into the throne room and slowly walks to the stairs leading to the level of Aizen’s throne.\n\n“AIZEN!” Kia screams. “The Darkfangs are MINE to destroy.”\n\nAs Kia takes the first step he places his hand on the hilt of his Zanpakuto. Aizen just sits in his throne watching Kia climb the stairs his bitch curl of doom as always hanging down the center of his forehead. Soon Kia reaches the top standing before Aizen’s throne looking at Aizen who looks back at him and doesn’t stand. The wolf feels something is really wrong.\n\n“Aizen, answer me NOW!” Kia demands as he draws his sword.\n\nAizen again just looks at him. Then his whole being flickers showing it’s a hologram and disappears.\n\n“What the hell!?” Kia demands.\n\nA voice rings from the shadows.\n\n“I’m surprised Kia, after all it was your design.” The voice says. “An almost perfect holographic image but it never could hold around anything with high spirit pressure.”\n\n“Show yourself!” Kia demands. “Come out where I can see you!”\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "\tHours after Kia left the hospital and before a search team could be assembled the attacks begin.  Gargantas open in the skies above the floating continent of the Darkfangs and hollows of all assorted classes pour into the world of the living attacking the city. Soon a barrier rises over and around the Darkfang’s floating continent barring the hollows entry. Swarms of hollows unleash Ceros attempting to weaken the barrier. Kia sits atop a mountain watching this and his eyes glow blood red.

“AIZEN!” Kia screams as his spirit pressure rises causing rock slides and cave ins all throughout the mountain he stands on. “You son of a…”

Kia floats into the air and darts at one of the Gargantas. He draws his Zanpakuto cutting down any hollow in his path as he enters a Garganta to travel to Hueco Mundo and on to the palace of Las Noches.

\tIn the ancient tower of the alphas on the Darkfang’s floating continent the alphas of the wolf packs meet in a large stone room with a large round smooth stone table in the center of the room. Around the table are 8 large padded stone chairs. In the giant fireplace a large fire like a bonfire blazes. At points in the stone walls lights made to look like torches hang and a large chandelier with lights made to look like candles hangs down above the large table. Smaller stone tables line either side of the room with assorted finger food, coffee, tea and little bottles of water. Seven large wolves sit around the large table arguing, the alphas of packs of the wolf nation.

 “Quit your bitching all of you!” Cries Stancor, the alpha of the Nightfangs. “We’re all being hit hard by the hollows! None of us have the numbers to keep them out of our lands, most of us are lucky we have the numbers to keep them out of our cities!”

“Oh please!” Cries Borkang, the alpha of the Sharpclaw pack. “Your pack’s city in inside a mountain your great great grandfather had dug out! All you had to do was close your dome, shutters and set your auto defenses to hollows! We all know it the going gets too rough you can sink your mountain into the ground!”

A large round wolf who’s been eating like a pig spits food everywhere as he chuckles at the others.

“And what’s so damn funny Draux of the Tubbypaws?!” Stancor demands.

“That’s Ironpaws!” Draux cries. “And it’s funny you think anything can protect us. If Aizen shifted his sight to the packs it doesn’t matter where you go to hide. I don’t even see the point in this little meeting but who knows maybe if we could set up shop in the wilds of this floating continent of the Darkfangs we could be protected by the technology they have.”

A female wolf sitting with a female on either side of her growls her disgust.

“Cowards!” The female wolf cries. “You men become more the cowards each generation! It’s a wonder how you remain alphas when you hide in a hole every time something goes wrong! Or worse, you eat nonstop until you weigh a ton!”

“HOW DARE YOU?!” Stancor cries as he stands and places a hand on the hilt of his sword. “You think just because you’ve been without a man for so long and had Markus grant you the right to rule your pack yourself that I’ll allow you to speak to me like that?! You and your Amazon pack will pay for your disrespect Jestine!”

Jestine laughs as she rises from her chair. She reaches back gripping the spear on her back. The two women next to her rise with her one putting a hand on the hilt of her sword the other having knives shoot out of each shirt sleeve into her hands. Just as the women move to meet the male in battle a jet black demon like wolf walks into the room carrying a folder case.

“ENOUGH ALL OF YOU!” His voice thunders as he sits taking folders out of the case. “All of you be seated and let’s get this meeting going. I have reports from your lieutenants and see your situations are grave so I’ve already dispatched aid to each of your grounds. You’re packs will be transported here for the time being, in return your warrior classes will join with our ranks in the defense of the floating continent. If anyone has an issue with this speak up now.”

Jestine rises and bows her head to this wolf respectfully.

“Thank you Lord Markus.” Jestine says. “I know we of the combined forces of the Icepaws are honored by your generosity. You’re the only man at this table who has ever aided us when we’re in need and shown us the respect due. Our Amazons are at your command as always.”

The door to the room swings open and a lot chuckle can be heard. A voice rings into the room.

“My my Jestine Markus hasn’t even been the supreme alpha for a year and already you suck his dick like the whore you are.” The voice says as the figure the voice belongs to steps into the light showing himself to be a large powerful looking gray wolf dressed in jeans, t-shirt, a black leather tunic over his t-shirt and a long black hooded cloak.

“SHANKILL!!” Jestine screams as she draws her spear lunging at the new comer. “MURDER! YOU KILLED MY MATE!”

Markus quickly draws his sword but it’s only the hilt, a bladeless sword. The room grows dark as he flicks his wrist sending out a rope of energy from the hilt of the bladeless sword. The energy rope wraps itself around Jestine’s waist pulling her back as Shankill flash steps to one side. As Justine is pulled back her spear comes apart in two places the center falling to the floor. Shankill stands leaning on a wall holding a large scythe glowing with black energy wearing a hollow mask. He runs his hand down his face causing the mask to disappear.

“Foolish woman, an attack on me is an attack on the Drago Relar pack!” Shankill says smirking. “My pack will devour every Icepaw that lives!”

“Enough Shankill!” Markus cries. “You and your pack where banished. You have no right to war with any pack of this nation. You so much as touch another Icepaw again and you declare war with the whole nation! Now, EXPLAIN YOURSELF! Why are you here?”

“For the same reason all the other alphas are here.” Shankill says. “The hollow attacks but it seems like us Drago Relars are as well off as the Darkfangs. We seem to be the only ones with the high numbers of warriors with special powers and the technology to back them up.”

“Hmph!” Markus says. “Technology YOU STOLE from the Darkfangs. You also used rogue vampires drain blood knowledge of biochemical weapons of mass destruction from the humans then used them to steal the vampire clans’ technology. If that wasn’t enough you tied them out and watched the morning sun burn them to ashes when you had no more use for them.” Markus’ eyes tint red with his anger as he goes on. “Your crimes of forcing lesser packs to join yours under penalty of death, mass murder and use of weapons of mass destruction warrant death. Your head would be on a pike outside this tower if not for some the majority of the wolf nation alphas granting you mercy.”

Shankill laughs as he walks to the table. He grabs Draux of the Ironpaws by the back of the neck and tosses him aside taking his chair. Shankill uses his scythe to push all the food in front of him to the floor than puts his feet up on the table laying his scythe across his lap. Draux growls furiously but Stancor of the Nightfangs grabs both his shoulders holding him back. Jestine glares at Shankill with murderous rage in her eyes and growls. Markus lays a hand gently on Jestine’s shoulder.

“Be still my child.” Markus says calmly before fixing a hatful glare on Shankill.

“It’s not about how I got everything It’s that I have it.” Shankill says. “Besides, did you bother telling them about your dirty little secret? That Vasta Lorde demon nephew of yours that was supposed to be put to death since he couldn’t be controlled.”

All the alphas in the room gasp and Jestine shrugs Markus’ hand off her shoulder.

“What’s the meaning of this Markus?!” Jestine cries. “Is what he says true? Does that demon still live?”

“Of course he does.” Shankill says. “You all decreed as a nation the demon was to die but can you blame him? The creature is his blood so he tried to domesticate him, make him into a wolf by removing his past memories but the plan fell apart and now he’s free. No need to worry, he went to Las Noches.”

More gasps come from the alphas as Shankill laughs.  Markus’ glare becomes a look of sheer sadness as he lowers his head.

“Markus,” Shankill laughs. “You brand me a criminal for what I’ve done but because you couldn’t act before many lives were lost and now many more may be lost if he’s going to join Aizen again. All that blood is on your hands.”

“What do you want Shankill?” Markus asks.

“An alliance.” Shankill says. “We fight together, drop your rules of war honor crap and launch an all out assault on Las Noches. Separately we don’t have the power to do it but together you and I could do something.”

“And what’s on your mind for this little attack?” Markus asks.

Before Shankill can respond Valos comes rushing in.

“Father! I mean Lord Markus!” Valos cries. “Reports are coming in from all lands in or under the protection of the wolf nation, the hollows have pulled out and all Gargontas have closed!”

“What?!” Markus cries. “Computer, show us the current reports on the hollow attacks!”

A large holographic screen appears above the center of the large stone table. In different sections it shows all the lands that where under attack but the hollows pour back into the Gargontas. After the last of the hollows leave this world all the Gargontas close.

“Hmm.” Shankill ponders. “Why would Aizen call off an attack like this? He could have crushed most of the other packs, I don’t get it.”

“Alright packs, your people should be here soon so I’m calling a 24 hour recess.” Markus says. “Shankill, we need to talk but keep in mind I’m not going to entertain use of ANY kind of weapon of mass destruction on Hueco Mundo!”

\tKia enters the palace of Las Notches and walks the halls to the throne room. Most arrancars and hollows step way out of his way but a few weaker ones seeking to make a name for themselves step in his path causing Kia to slash them to bits or to blast them with Ceros. Soon Kia steps into the throne room and slowly walks to the stairs leading to the level of Aizen’s throne.

“AIZEN!” Kia screams. “The Darkfangs are MINE to destroy.”

As Kia takes the first step he places his hand on the hilt of his Zanpakuto. Aizen just sits in his throne watching Kia climb the stairs his bitch curl of doom as always hanging down the center of his forehead. Soon Kia reaches the top standing before Aizen’s throne looking at Aizen who looks back at him and doesn’t stand. The wolf feels something is really wrong.

“Aizen, answer me NOW!” Kia demands as he draws his sword.

Aizen again just looks at him. Then his whole being flickers showing it’s a hologram and disappears.

“What the hell!?” Kia demands.

A voice rings from the shadows.

“I’m surprised Kia, after all it was your design.” The voice says. “An almost perfect holographic image but it never could hold around anything with high spirit pressure.”

“Show yourself!” Kia demands. “Come out where I can see you!”

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