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In a daze between consciousness and unconsciousness from the drugs the doctor pumped him with to keep him sedated. As the effects of these drugs slowly become useless words come to him in fragments as unknown people speak around him. He can barely make out what’s said.\n\t\n“I don’t know sir.” Says the voice of a woman. “I can’t get a clear scan….” Jumbled words are said then words he makes out. “He shouldn’t remember…”\n\n“hmm.” Says the voice of a man. “Treat any wounds and keep him sedated.” More jumbled words are said by both the woman and the man, than the man speaks. “If that’s your report I’ll add it to my report and file it with Lord Markus.”\n\nThe words come clearer as Kia opens his eyes. He sees them, the nurse talking to a solder. Just as he starts to wonder why a crushing pain courses through Kia’s head, he screams. The nurse comes running over shocked.\n\n“How can this be?” The nurse cries. “That IV is pumping enough drugs in him to sedate someone 100 times his body mass.”\n\nThe nurse reaches to push the call button but Kia’s hand grabs her wrist. He looks at her with black lifeless eyes\n\n“Kyoka.” Kia says as he raises his hand.\nqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq\n\n\n\nThe solder pulls his sidearm pointing it at Kia. The boy smirks at the solder as people start screaming and the sounds of rubble crashing down as heard. Soon the wall starts to crumble as a sword flies through it. It slashes the solder at the waist as it floats to rest in Kia’s hand. The nurse screams as the solder’s body falls to the ground in two pieces. Kia laughs enjoying the nurse’s fear.\n\n“Howl, Kyoka!” Kia cries. \n\nAn infernal rises up around the boy engulfing everything in the room. The nurse screams in agony as the flames consume her.\n\n\n\tAero sits waiting in a simple office in the academy. Remembering the form and power displayed by his friend he shudders.\n\n“He looked like one of those Vasta Lorde hollows in our text books.” Aero thought to himself.\n\nJust then the door opens and a wolf walks in with a smile.\n\n“Good day young Aero. I’m Nix Boodpaw.” `Nix says. “I understand you’re part of the class Kia’s in.”\n\nAero stands out of respect for the Darkfang prince and bows his head.\n\n“Yes Lord Nix.” Aero says. “Kia saved the lives of everyone in our class.”\n\n“Just Nix please, Aero” Nix says as he pulls something from his coat. ”Tell me, did he look like this when he saves your class?”\n\nHe unfolds the paper and shows it to Aero, it’s a photo of Kia fully hollowfied. Aero nods.\n\n“Yeah, that’s how he looked.” Aero says. “Is he alright? Is he safe?”\n\nBefore Nix can respond they hear an explosion and a very high spirit power. Aero looks in the direction of the blast and narrows his eyes.\n\n“That’s Kia’s spirit pressure!” Aero cries.\n\nNix looks at him wondering how the hell he can recognize it as twisted as it is…\n\n\n\tThe young mouse boy with a sword strapped to his side walks through the park near the hospital to the gym to practice with his sword more. The left side of the hospital building explodes and flames shoot shot out. He too feel the spirit pressure but hears a scream.\n\n“HELP! HELP!” The voice cries.\n\nThe mouse boy runs over only to be stopped by rubble fallen from the hospital.\n\n“Hey!” The mouse cries. “I’m here, am I too late? Make noise so I can find you.”\n\n“Darick?!” The voice cries. “Darick Centry?! It’s Aiden from class.”\n\n“It’s me Aiden buddy .” Darick says. “It’s going to be alright…”\n\n\nBefore Darick can finish he sees flaming rubble starting to fall. He draws his sword holding it in both hands blade pointing to the sky.\n\n“Freeze all things in your path, Korinoburando!” Darick cries.\n\nDarick starts twirling his blade around as snow and ice storm around him soon covering him from sight. Soon rescue worker arrive seeing the falling rubble and this storm of coldness before them. A layer of ice freezes over the rubble Aiden is buried under as Darick floats up spinning a bo staff above his head. He swipes the staff at the falling flaming rubble.\n\n“Kori Nami!” Darick cries out as a wave of ice blasts from his staff freezing the falling flaming rubble\n\nThe mouse boy points at the rubble as a ball of red spirit energy gathers at the tip of his finger and grows.\n\n“Oh dear goddess it’s a Cero!” One of the rescue workers cries as the rest of the worker push on lookers back. “TAKE COVER NOW! That kid’s going to fire it!”\n\nSeeing the on lookers are safe Darick releases his Cero reducing the frozen rubble to dust and rain. He drops down in front of the rubble Aiden is buried under glancing back at the rescue workers.\n\n“Get them back farther!” Darick cries as his staff returns to blade form and he sheaths it.\n\nAs Darick’s paw goes to his face the workers quickly back the people up much more. The mouse boy’s paw swipes down his face forming a white hollow mask with red and blue marks all over it.\n\n“Aiden!” Darick yells in the voice of a hollow possessed being. “Brace yourself! I’m going to get you out now!”\n\nThe mouse drives his hand into the rubble ripping pieces off then starts punching it as he goes deeper and deeper into it. Soon the rubble collapses behind him and all watching go silent. Just as the rescue workers start thinking Darick is buried under tons or rubble everything starts to shake. A Cero blasts out of the top of the rubble followed by Darick carrying the white furred fox boy Aiden. The mouse boy does a flip in the air landing in front of the rescue workers.\n\n“Thank you Darick.” Aiden says as Darick sets him down.\n\n“Take care of him.” Darick says. “I’m going up there.”\n\n“You can’t!” A rescue worker says as others take Aiden off for treatment. “Lord Markus wouldn’t want you putting yourself at risk! You must stay back and let the stealth force investigate.”\n\n“My friend is up there!” Darick says as he disappears.\n\n\n\tKia stands in his burned out room on the mostly burned out ninth floor of the hospital as he laughs. In his hand he holds his Zanpakuto Kyoka, a scythe with a curved blade on each end a flame dances around the wolf boy and his two bladed scythe like an aura.\n\n“So, they thought to keep me by stealing my memories.” The wolf boy says with a laugh. “The fools! They will BURN for this! COME AND FACE YOUR DESTRUCTION!”", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "\tKia lies in the high security wing of the medical bay back in the forest city. In a daze between consciousness and unconsciousness from the drugs the doctor pumped him with to keep him sedated. As the effects of these drugs slowly become useless words come to him in fragments as unknown people speak around him. He can barely make out what’s said.
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“I don’t know sir.” Says the voice of a woman. “I can’t get a clear scan….” Jumbled words are said then words he makes out. “He shouldn’t remember…”

“hmm.” Says the voice of a man. “Treat any wounds and keep him sedated.” More jumbled words are said by both the woman and the man, than the man speaks. “If that’s your report I’ll add it to my report and file it with Lord Markus.”

The words come clearer as Kia opens his eyes. He sees them, the nurse talking to a solder. Just as he starts to wonder why a crushing pain courses through Kia’s head, he screams. The nurse comes running over shocked.

“How can this be?” The nurse cries. “That IV is pumping enough drugs in him to sedate someone 100 times his body mass.”

The nurse reaches to push the call button but Kia’s hand grabs her wrist. He looks at her with black lifeless eyes

“Kyoka.” Kia says as he raises his hand.
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The solder pulls his sidearm pointing it at Kia. The boy smirks at the solder as people start screaming and the sounds of rubble crashing down as heard. Soon the wall starts to crumble as a sword flies through it. It slashes the solder at the waist as it floats to rest in Kia’s hand. The nurse screams as the solder’s body falls to the ground in two pieces. Kia laughs enjoying the nurse’s fear.

“Howl, Kyoka!” Kia cries.

An infernal rises up around the boy engulfing everything in the room. The nurse screams in agony as the flames consume her.


\tAero sits waiting in a simple office in the academy. Remembering the form and power displayed by his friend he shudders.

“He looked like one of those Vasta Lorde hollows in our text books.” Aero thought to himself.

Just then the door opens and a wolf walks in with a smile.

“Good day young Aero. I’m Nix Boodpaw.” `Nix says. “I understand you’re part of the class Kia’s in.”

Aero stands out of respect for the Darkfang prince and bows his head.

“Yes Lord Nix.” Aero says. “Kia saved the lives of everyone in our class.”

“Just Nix please, Aero” Nix says as he pulls something from his coat. ”Tell me, did he look like this when he saves your class?”

He unfolds the paper and shows it to Aero, it’s a photo of Kia fully hollowfied. Aero nods.

“Yeah, that’s how he looked.” Aero says. “Is he alright? Is he safe?”

Before Nix can respond they hear an explosion and a very high spirit power. Aero looks in the direction of the blast and narrows his eyes.

“That’s Kia’s spirit pressure!” Aero cries.

Nix looks at him wondering how the hell he can recognize it as twisted as it is…


\tThe young mouse boy with a sword strapped to his side walks through the park near the hospital to the gym to practice with his sword more. The left side of the hospital building explodes and flames shoot shot out. He too feel the spirit pressure but hears a scream.

“HELP! HELP!” The voice cries.

The mouse boy runs over only to be stopped by rubble fallen from the hospital.

“Hey!” The mouse cries.  “I’m here, am I too late? Make noise so I can find you.”

“Darick?!” The voice cries. “Darick Centry?! It’s Aiden from class.”

“It’s me Aiden buddy .” Darick says. “It’s going to be alright…”


Before Darick can finish he sees flaming rubble starting to fall. He draws his sword holding it in both hands blade pointing to the sky.

“Freeze all things in your path, Korinoburando!” Darick cries.

Darick starts twirling his blade around as snow and ice storm around him soon covering him from sight. Soon rescue worker arrive seeing the falling rubble and this storm of coldness before them. A layer of ice freezes over the rubble Aiden is buried under as Darick floats up spinning a bo staff above his head. He swipes the staff at the falling flaming rubble.

“Kori Nami!” Darick cries out as a wave of ice blasts from his staff freezing the falling flaming rubble

The mouse boy points at the rubble as a ball of red spirit energy gathers at the tip of his finger and grows.

“Oh dear goddess it’s a Cero!” One of the rescue workers cries as the rest of the worker push on lookers back. “TAKE COVER NOW! That kid’s going to fire it!”

Seeing the on lookers are safe Darick releases his Cero reducing the frozen rubble to dust and rain. He drops down in front of the rubble Aiden is buried under glancing back at the rescue workers.

“Get them back farther!” Darick cries as his staff returns to blade form and he sheaths it.

As Darick’s paw goes to his face the workers quickly back the people up much more. The mouse boy’s paw swipes down his face forming a white hollow mask with red and blue marks all over it.

“Aiden!” Darick yells in the voice of a hollow possessed being. “Brace yourself! I’m going to get you out now!”

The mouse drives his hand into the rubble ripping pieces off then starts punching it as he goes deeper and deeper into it. Soon the rubble collapses behind him and all watching go silent. Just as the rescue workers start thinking Darick is buried under tons or rubble everything starts to shake. A Cero blasts out of the top of the rubble followed by Darick carrying the white furred fox boy Aiden. The mouse boy does a flip in the air landing in front of the rescue workers.

“Thank you Darick.” Aiden says as Darick sets him down.

“Take care of him.” Darick says. “I’m going up there.”

“You can’t!” A rescue worker says as others take Aiden off for treatment. “Lord Markus wouldn’t want you putting yourself at risk! You must stay back and let the stealth force investigate.”

“My friend is up there!” Darick says as he disappears.


\tKia stands in his burned out room on the mostly burned out ninth floor of the hospital as he laughs.  In his hand he holds his Zanpakuto Kyoka, a scythe with a curved blade on each end a flame dances around the wolf boy and his two bladed scythe like an aura.

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