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His vision clears and sees the other wolf across the way drawing his sword. Being confused by the intense rage he feels and afraid of it. \n\n“Declare!” The wolf across the way cries out and mumbles something under his breath.\n\nHis blade starts to glow and is engulfed with and starts glowing with the power of the four elements of the world. He sees himself point at the other wolf but his hand is not his hand as he looks at it. It’s a white and dark blue bone like claws much sharper then his own. Red energy gathers at his finger tip and turns black bursting into black flames. The energy fires at the other wolf but he manages to dodge it as he moves in quickly to attack. His other arm comes up and he grips a double bladed scythe. As he slashes over and over at his attacker he’s blocked causing him to roar loudly in rage. The weapons of the two weapons clang over and over again as the two seem to fight each other without mercy. Soon the attacker’s knee comes up driven into his gut causing him to double over in pain. As he sees himself holding his cracked bone covered chest he sees his reflection in his attacker’s eyes, he’s a demon, a hollow monster with empty eyes. His attacker’s charged blade is driven his chest and electricity surges through him. He screams from pain and fear.\n\n\tThe boy awakens screaming in terror and curls up in a ball holding his chest still feeling the pain. Running steps echo through the hall and the boy’s door by an old man.\n\n“Kyle!” The old man cries looking worried. “Are you alright son?”\n\nThe boy looks up at the old man as sweat pours down his face.\n\n“I’m alright father, just another bad dream.” The boy says. “And how many times do I have to tell you, CALL ME KIA!”\n\n“These dreams come too often.” The old man says. “I am worried about you my son.”\n“This one was worse than the others father.” Kia says. “I could feel the pain of being stabbed this time and I felt the rage worse than ever. I could even see myself reflected in his eyes… I was a hollow, a soulless demon!”\n\nA look of fear comes over Kia face as tears start to fall. The old man sits by Kia and puts an arm over his shoulder.\n\n“It’s alright my son. You’re no hollow or demon.” The old man says with a look of worry on his face. “Now, do you wish to stay home today or go to school?”\n\n“Father, you know I can’t stay home.” Kia says. “I’ve got a test in math, a huge test for advanced placement in self defense training and a big presentation in English class. I don’t get another chance until next year to prove myself for advanced placement in self defense and I’ll lose a lot of points for not doing the presentation for my English class.”\n\nThe old man sighs and shakes his head looking disgusted.\n\n“I should never have signed off on you taking such advanced classes.” The old man says. “You work way too hard for someone your age and miss out on so much.”\n\n“We’ve been over this father, I’m only taking two advanced classes and the English class is only tenth grade level.” Kia says. “I’d still be in choir if my voice wasn’t cracking. Now, can I please have some privacy so I can get ready for school?”\n\nWith a nod the old man turns walking out of the room and closing the door. Kia walks over and slides the lock. \n\nAt 13 years old Kia is for the most part is pretty mature mentally. He focuses on his studies to a point while still finding time to have a personal life. He tends to keep some people at a distance and has few friends. He finds himself attracted to guys and tells no one his secret. He’s never been attracted to girls but not for lack of girls being attracted to him. So many guys he finds attractive in his classes but none he’d out right hit on for fear of outing himself before the whole school. So, he relies on porn and imagination as any other teen his age would.\n\nAs per his morning ritual Kia turns to walk into his bathroom he pushes his underwear down letting them drop to the floor. His body of wolf fur gleaming like is average but nice with a respectable sized sheath and set of balls for someone his age hanging between his legs. He walks into the bathroom opening the clear glass door to the shower turning on the water and sets the temperature to a comfortable level as he steps under the stream. Grabbing his black scrubby shower sponge and a bottle of blue body wash he squirts some of the soap on it then starts scrubbing his fur slowly. The scent of ocean water in the wind rises up as the shower sponge slowly coats his fur in soap suds from head to toe. The soap suds are soon rinsed off the young wolf’s body and taking up a bottle of conditioner squirting a huge glob in his hands he rubs it in his fur all over himself. As his hands hit his sheath with the glob of conditioner it sends a shudder of pleasure through his body swelling it causing the red tip to peek out a little. He lets out a quiet moan of pleasure using the slick conditioner to rub and stoke his sheath slowly. Remembering his nightmare jars him from his pleasure killing his mood causing him to finish his fur treatment rinsing himself off and turning off the water. He dries himself off and goes to his closet. He pulls out a black t-shirt and blue jeans. Going to his dresser he gets underwear and socks than dresses himself. He runs a comb through his hair, using an ocean smelling deodorant and spraying a little cologne in his fur. On his way out of his room he grabs his black hoody and book bag heading off to the kitchen. After a breakfast of cereal he puts his hoody on and grabs his book bag rushing out the door for his walk to school.", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "The wind blows across the burning field as he becomes aware. His vision clears and sees the other wolf across the way drawing his sword. Being confused by the intense rage he feels and afraid of it.

“Declare!” The wolf across the way cries out and mumbles something under his breath.

His blade starts to glow and is engulfed with and starts glowing with the power of the four elements of the world. He sees himself point at the other wolf but his hand is not his hand as he looks at it. It’s a white and dark blue bone like claws much sharper then his own. Red energy gathers at his finger tip and turns black bursting into black flames. The energy fires at the other wolf but he manages to dodge it as he moves in quickly to attack. His other arm comes up and he grips a double bladed scythe. As he slashes over and over at his attacker he’s blocked causing him to roar loudly in rage. The weapons of the two weapons clang over and over again as the two seem to fight each other without mercy. Soon the attacker’s knee comes up driven into his gut causing him to double over in pain. As he sees himself holding his cracked bone covered chest he sees his reflection in his attacker’s eyes, he’s a demon, a hollow monster with empty eyes. His attacker’s charged blade is driven his chest and electricity surges through him. He screams from pain and fear.

\tThe boy awakens screaming in terror and curls up in a ball holding his chest still feeling the pain. Running steps echo through the hall and the boy’s door by an old man.

“Kyle!” The old man cries looking worried. “Are you alright son?”

The boy looks up at the old man as sweat pours down his face.

“I’m alright father, just another bad dream.” The boy says. “And how many times do I have to tell you, CALL ME KIA!”

“These dreams come too often.” The old man says. “I am worried about you my son.”
“This one was worse than the others father.” Kia says.  “I could feel the pain of being stabbed this time and I felt the rage worse than ever. I could even see myself reflected in his eyes… I was a hollow, a soulless demon!”

A look of fear comes over Kia face as tears start to fall. The old man sits by Kia and puts an arm over his shoulder.

“It’s alright my son. You’re no hollow or demon.” The old man says with a look of worry on his face. “Now, do you wish to stay home today or go to school?”

“Father, you know I can’t stay home.” Kia says. “I’ve got a test in math, a huge test for advanced placement in self defense training and a big presentation in English class. I don’t get another chance until next year to prove myself for advanced placement in self defense and I’ll lose a lot of points for not doing the presentation for my English class.”

The old man sighs and shakes his head looking disgusted.

“I should never have signed off on you taking such advanced classes.” The old man says. “You work way too hard for someone your age and miss out on so much.”

“We’ve been over this father, I’m only taking two advanced classes and the English class is only tenth grade level.” Kia says. “I’d still be in choir if my voice wasn’t cracking. Now, can I please have some privacy so I can get ready for school?”

With a nod the old man turns walking out of the room and closing the door. Kia walks over and slides the lock.

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