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Also in the comic another character that is only mentioned in this story.\nhttps://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=1329179", "description_bbcode_parsed": "I put a few jokes in this one

First Angie makes Kit go home and get a shower before going back to her parent's house with Vicky.

Then Mike and Josh pick on Chase

finally Beth Vicky, and Kit go home with Jessy.

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edit it before posting so lots of typoes)
Here's the link. Also in the comic another character that is only mentioned in this story.
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Kit is expecting something bad or a break up because “We need to talk” never ends good. She sits down in the chair beside Angie, holding in tears and says, “OK”. Angie replies, “I was told I need to be in the hospital a bit more because they thought they noticed an increase of white blood cells which can be a sign of infection setting in. So, they got me on antibiotics and want to observe me for a few days. I just called Vicky to see if you could stay with her because you’re going to have one bad back ache if you keep sleeping in that recliner”. \n\n\tKit interrupts, “I already have one” as she’s happy this isn’t a breakup talk. Angie continues without a beat. “Vicky says mom, I mean your mom”. She stops and laughs and says, “Damn painkillers”. Kit didn’t notice it as Angie goes on. “Has something her and your dad needs to say. Vicky wants to take this moment to come out to her. I think this will be a good time for you too. You’re going to have to tell her some time”. Kit nods and says, “When is she going?” She doesn’t want to, but knows Angie is right because she’s wanting to go home sometime again. If they see her and Angie getting too close, they’ll know. She thinks it’s best to go on and come out. Kit sighs and says, “What about Chase and Mike?” Angie replies, “Who knows? They go home every month anyway”.\n\n\tKit smiles again and says, “Are you going to be OK Angie?” Angie replies, “Yes”. Kit sighs and says, “I’ve been saving some cash. I guess I can use it to for my train ticket”. Angie relies, “Beth is taking you”. Kit nods and says, “What about Jessy?” Angie replies, “She’s going with y’all. Beth is just dropping her off at home. She needs to mend some fences with her mom. Come to find out, they had a big fight before she left. She’ll still be living with us and will be returning with you when y’all come home but they need to get along”.\n\n\tKit nods and says, “Guess I’ll catch the bus and go home” not wanting to ride the bus. Angie laughs and says, “Oh, first thing when you get to our home pack, get a shower, you stink”. Kit rolls her eyes and says, “Yeah, I’ll call you when I get there”. The sound makes her feel weird. As she walks out of the hospital room.\n\nBeth and Vicky\n\tBeth is packing a duffle bag as Vicky is packing a suit case. Beth shakes her head and says, “Vicky, we’re going home for a couple of days, not a year”. Vicky replies, “I just want to be sure”. Beth, “Sure of what?” Vicky replies, “You never know. What if the creek goes up? It happens a lot. If it does, it’ll go over the bridge and we won’t be able to get out of the holler”. Beth laughs and says, “The what?” Vicky has an innocent confused face, and says, “Holler”. Beth laughs and says, “You mean hollow?” Vicky nods and says, “Yeah that’s what I said.” Beth shakes her head laughing and says, “You're cute”.\n\n\tVicky walks down the hall to check on Jessy’s packing, still not sure what that was about. She walks upstairs to Jessy’s room and says, “Hey, how’s packing?” Jessy points to a grocery bag full of clothes and says, “Done”. Vicky rolls her eyes and says, “Hey Jessy, is there anything wrong with how I talk?” Jessy laughs and says, “What? The fact you, your sister, and brothers talk with way too dominate of an ‘a’? or something else?” Vicky says, “Beth was laughing at me when I said the holler.” Jessy shrugs and says, “What’s wrong with it? That’s the place’s name”. \n\n\tShe perks up and says, “Oh, you know what would be cute? Wear a brown cowboy hat with cowboy boots. You’d look cute as hell. And maybe you’ll get laid by Beth”. Vicky gets up and says, “It’s none of your business what me and Beth do”. Jessy laughs and says, “Then tone it down a notch when your fucking. I can hear you coming all the way up here, with my ear buds in”. Vicky snarls and says, “How do you know it’s me? And that was just one night. Don’t act like it happens a lot”. Jessy laughs and says, “'Oh Beth. Yes, Beth!', what is she doing, calling out her name when masturbating?”\n\n\tVicky flips her off and says, “I think we’re about ready to go”. Vicky shakes her head and leaves. Jessy is laughing on her bed. She’s a nervous wreck about going home, but won’t tell no one.\n\nWhen pigs fly\n\n\tJosh looks at Chase smiling and says, ‘Oh, Chase. Remember when you said you’d call Heather when pigs fly?” Chase shrugs and says, “Yeah”. Josh grins, “Well there a article on this web site that says, ‘A pig just got his pilot license’”. He stops and laughs, “So now he’s going to fly. A pig is flying”. Chase rolls his eyes and says, “No, they have to fly by their own power”. Mike walks out naked drying his hair and says, “No Chase, you said. The saying goes 'when pigs fly', not 'when pigs fly on its own power'”. Chase shakes his head and says, “Mike, seriously. I’m happy you’ve accepted being out, but you don’t need to run around naked”. Mike frowns and says, “Chase, I Always did this. Now that I’m out, you're noticing. So is someone needing to do the same?” Chase frowns and says, “Mike, put some pants on damn it.” Mike grins and says, “Jealous?” Chase frowns and says, “No, I’m big down there too. I don’t care about that”. \n\n\tJosh raises his iPad and says, “Speaking of cock fights look what’s on PPV tonight” as he showed a picture of two boxers that are chickens is on the screen.\n\tMike sits down and puts on some boxers and pants and says, “Well, I got to get to work”. Josh laughs and says, “Dude, it’s Sunday.” Mike frowns and says, “I have work to do and so does Chase”. Chase looks up and says, “OK suck up. I know you like getting the brownie points from the boss but I could care less”.\n\n\tMike leans down and says, “Angie says their releasing her from the hospital tonight. We need to go pick up her because the other girls are going back home”. Chase is confused and asks, “Why?” Mike clears his throat and says, “Angie needs the time for something” looking at Chase frustrated.\nKit on the road \n\n\tBeth pulls out of her driveway, Vicky riding shotgun, and Kit and Jessy in the back. Jessy looks at Kit and asks, “So, are you nervous about going home?” Kit shrugs and replies, “No, not really. Are you?” Jessy laughs and says, “Me? No, but if I was, it’s because me and mom got into a huge fight before I left and I sort of just left after she sent me to my room. I snuck out the window”.\n\n\tBeth looking in the rear-view mirror says, “Jessy, why did you do that? I bet your mom was a nervous wreck”. Jessy smiles and says, “That was the point. The bitch embarrassed me in front of my boyfriend”. Kit frowns and says, “What did she do?” Jessy gasps and says, “Me and him where about to have sex. We were kissing and I had my shirt off. I was still wearing my bra by the way. Then the bitch came in and screamed at me saying I was way to young for sex. Hell, Angie started younger than me. I started fucking when I was twelve. She started at ten”. \n\n\tBeth shakes her head and says, “Why so early?” Kit sighs and says, “We have a person that hires girls to help him with the farm. You know, doing basic chores. He’ll hire us starting at nine”. Beth replies, “Kit, that’s illegal”. Kit shrugs and says, “No, that’s nothing. He’ll give you bonus if you do things with him. Like let him jack off to you while you undress and masturbate. Or If you’re really needing money let him touch you. Even more have sex”. \n\n\tBeth shakes her head and says, “That dirty man”. Vicky shrugs and says, “Beth, you know I did it with him once. I was needing two hundred dollars so I let him stick his hands down my pants and play with my pussy”. Beth groans as Vicky then says, “Once, I was going to be really late on my car insurance. Even though I was sixteen and usually he just ignores us then. He took me to the barn and we had sex. he paid my back payment in full. I went home and gave him head and he got me a month ahead”.\n\n\tBeth replies, “Vicky, honey, that’s blackmail”. Vicky replies, “Beth sweaty, the sex is just for extra money, not our paycheck. Also, if we want, we can do Kit’s way and just work overtime. It pays as much as sex with him. He’s not really that bad of a person”. \n\n\tKit sighs and says, “Vicky, actually I need to tell you something. I always said I never did anything with him. But one time, I needed fifty bucks fast and he didn’t have any extra chores. So, I lifted my shirt and let him suck my nipples”. Beth groans, “This old pervert was treating you all like whores and you’re not even mad about it?” \n\n\tVicky replies, “Beth, honey bun”, Each time they use a pet name they look at Jessy to see her expression and smiles. Vicky continues, “Old man Johnson was in his twenties. His parents just died when he was seventeen and left him the farm, so he hires people for help”. Beth, with a confused look asked, “Why do you call him old man Johnson then?” Kit laughs and says, “Because he always wears bib overalls. Even when he was in school. So everyone started saying he dressed like an old man”. Vicky continues, “So people started calling him old man Johnson.” Beth replies, “That still don’t change the fact he was asking for money in exchange of sexual favors”.\n\n\tThey’re on the interstate leaving the city when Vicky smiles and says, “So how many times has my little Alley cat left the town?” Beth shrugs and says, “When I was little we went to the beach”. Jessy interrupts and says, “A cat family and water? That’s always good”. Beth groans and says, “That’s prejudice. Cats don’t hate water”. Vicky laughs and says, “You sure hate getting showers by yourself”. Beth growls and says, “That’s because so many things can go wrong in there. What if I slipped? I’d be in there for a long time, unconscious. And if I’m alone, it could be days. Hell, there’s even a chance I could drown. Tf I get a bath, what if I fall asleep and slide down with my head under water I could drown too”. Vicky is laughing and says, “One, in the shower you have that mat that grips your feet when you’re standing. I’ve never heard of someone drowning in a shower or bath that sounds more like fear of water”.\n\n\tBeth groans, “I don’t have aquaphobia. I’m just careful. If no one is around I have a sit bath”. Jessy laughs, “Don’t have ak-wa phobia, but know its name”. Beth rolls her eyes, “No it’s aquaphobia and I know that because I had to learn all the names of phobias when I was studying to get my doctorate”. Jessy replies, “You were getting what?” Beth sighs, “My doctorate. I’m a doctor”. Jessy laughs, “Doctor Cat sounds like a TV show”. Beth sighs, “It is a TV show, and by the way. If a real doctor would do half that stuff he does he’d lose his license”. Jessy replies, “The stuff he does?” Beth replies, “OK when he electrocuted that guy to get him over a fear of electricity would of most likely put him into a catatonic state that he’d had to be hospitalized over”. Jessy interrupts by laughing, “A cat a whata?” Beth sighs getting frustrated, “Catatonic”. \n\n\tVicky knows Beth’s getting aggravated and says, “Beth, look at the mountains”. Beth is speechless and says, “Damn”. Vicky looks back at Jessy and says, “Won’t you listen to your music, Jessy?\" ", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Chapter 6
Kit and Angie talk

\tKit sits up and stretches, smiling. She’s happy to see Angie propped up, watching her show. Kit smiles and says, “I think this is the first time I’m happy to see that damn show”. Angie looks at her without moving her head and says, “It’s just too sophisticated for you”.

\tThe wolf is knitting a sweater when the sheep comes in naked and says, “It’s freaking cold, how could you?” The wolf replies, “You got drunk and passed out. Some like to draw on some people forehead, others do other mean stuff. I’m nice I shaved you and knitting you a sweater”.

\tKit raises an eye brow and says, “How does this show stay on air? And that’s not the first time they used that joke”. As Angie laughs while holding her side, Kit sighs and says, “At least you ain’t passed out from loss of blood”.

\tThe show ends and Angie turns off the TV before saying, “Kit, we need to talk”. Kit is expecting something bad or a break up because “We need to talk” never ends good. She sits down in the chair beside Angie, holding in tears and says, “OK”. Angie replies, “I was told I need to be in the hospital a bit more because they thought they noticed an increase of white blood cells which can be a sign of infection setting in. So, they got me on antibiotics and want to observe me for a few days. I just called Vicky to see if you could stay with her because you’re going to have one bad back ache if you keep sleeping in that recliner”.

\tKit interrupts, “I already have one” as she’s happy this isn’t a breakup talk. Angie continues without a beat. “Vicky says mom, I mean your mom”. She stops and laughs and says, “Damn painkillers”. Kit didn’t notice it as Angie goes on. “Has something her and your dad needs to say. Vicky wants to take this moment to come out to her. I think this will be a good time for you too. You’re going to have to tell her some time”. Kit nods and says, “When is she going?” She doesn’t want to, but knows Angie is right because she’s wanting to go home sometime again. If they see her and Angie getting too close, they’ll know. She thinks it’s best to go on and come out. Kit sighs and says, “What about Chase and Mike?” Angie replies, “Who knows? They go home every month anyway”.

\tKit smiles again and says, “Are you going to be OK Angie?” Angie replies, “Yes”. Kit sighs and says, “I’ve been saving some cash. I guess I can use it to for my train ticket”. Angie relies, “Beth is taking you”. Kit nods and says, “What about Jessy?” Angie replies, “She’s going with y’all. Beth is just dropping her off at home. She needs to mend some fences with her mom. Come to find out, they had a big fight before she left. She’ll still be living with us and will be returning with you when y’all come home but they need to get along”.

\tKit nods and says, “Guess I’ll catch the bus and go home” not wanting to ride the bus. Angie laughs and says, “Oh, first thing when you get to our home  pack, get a shower, you stink”. Kit rolls her eyes and says, “Yeah, I’ll call you when I get there”. The sound makes her feel weird. As she walks out of the hospital room.

Beth and Vicky
\tBeth is packing a duffle bag as Vicky is packing a suit case. Beth shakes her head and says, “Vicky, we’re going home for a couple of days, not a year”. Vicky replies, “I just want to be sure”. Beth, “Sure of what?” Vicky replies, “You never know. What if the creek goes up? It happens a lot. If it does, it’ll go over the bridge and we won’t be able to get out of the holler”. Beth laughs and says, “The what?” Vicky has an innocent confused face, and says, “Holler”. Beth laughs and says, “You mean hollow?” Vicky nods and says, “Yeah that’s what I said.” Beth shakes her head laughing and says, “You're cute”.

\tVicky walks down the hall to check on Jessy’s packing, still not sure what that was about. She walks upstairs to Jessy’s room and says, “Hey, how’s packing?” Jessy points to a grocery bag full of clothes and says, “Done”. Vicky rolls her eyes and says, “Hey Jessy, is there anything wrong with how I talk?”  Jessy laughs and says, “What? The fact you, your sister, and brothers talk with way too dominate of an ‘a’? or something else?” Vicky says, “Beth was laughing at me when I said the holler.” Jessy shrugs and says, “What’s wrong with it? That’s the place’s name”.

\tShe perks up and says, “Oh, you know what would be cute? Wear a brown cowboy hat with cowboy boots. You’d look cute as hell. And maybe you’ll get laid by Beth”. Vicky gets up and says, “It’s none of your business what me and Beth do”. Jessy laughs and says, “Then tone it down a notch when your fucking. I can hear you coming all the way up here, with my ear buds in”. Vicky snarls and says, “How do you know it’s me? And that was just one night. Don’t act like it happens a lot”. Jessy laughs and says, “'Oh Beth. Yes, Beth!', what is she doing, calling out her name when masturbating?”

\tVicky flips her off and says, “I think we’re about ready to go”. Vicky shakes her head and leaves. Jessy is laughing on her bed. She’s a nervous wreck about going home, but won’t tell no one.

When pigs fly

\tJosh looks at Chase smiling and says, ‘Oh, Chase. Remember when you said you’d call Heather when pigs fly?” Chase shrugs and says, “Yeah”. Josh grins, “Well there a article on this web site that says, ‘A pig just got his pilot license’”. He stops and laughs, “So now he’s going to fly. A pig is flying”. Chase rolls his eyes and says, “No, they have to fly by their own power”. Mike walks out naked drying his hair and says, “No Chase, you said. The saying goes 'when pigs fly', not 'when pigs fly on its own power'”. Chase shakes his head and says, “Mike, seriously. I’m happy you’ve accepted being out, but you don’t need to run around naked”. Mike frowns and says, “Chase, I Always did this. Now that I’m out, you're noticing. So is someone needing to do the same?” Chase frowns and says, “Mike, put some pants on damn it.” Mike grins and says, “Jealous?” Chase frowns and says, “No, I’m big down there too. I don’t care about that”.

\tJosh raises his iPad and says, “Speaking of cock fights look what’s on PPV tonight” as he showed a picture of two boxers that are chickens is on the screen.
\tMike sits down and puts on some boxers and pants and says, “Well, I got to get to work”. Josh laughs and says, “Dude, it’s Sunday.” Mike frowns and says, “I have work to do and so does Chase”. Chase looks up and says, “OK suck up. I know you like getting the brownie points from the boss but I could care less”.

\tMike leans down and says, “Angie says their releasing her from the hospital tonight. We need to go pick up her because the other girls are going back home”. Chase is confused and asks, “Why?” Mike clears his throat and says, “Angie needs the time for something” looking at Chase frustrated.
Kit on the road

\tBeth pulls out of her driveway, Vicky riding shotgun, and Kit and Jessy in the back. Jessy looks at Kit and asks, “So, are you nervous about going home?” Kit shrugs and replies, “No, not really. Are you?” Jessy laughs and says, “Me? No, but if I was, it’s because me and mom got into a huge fight before I left and I sort of just left after she sent me to my room. I snuck out the window”.

\tBeth looking in the rear-view mirror says, “Jessy, why did you do that? I bet your mom was a nervous wreck”. Jessy smiles and says, “That was the point. The bitch embarrassed me in front of my boyfriend”. Kit frowns and says, “What did she do?” Jessy gasps and says, “Me and him where about to have sex. We were kissing and I had my shirt off. I was still wearing my bra by the way. Then the bitch came in and screamed at me saying I was way to young for sex. Hell, Angie started younger than me. I started fucking when I was twelve. She started at ten”.

\tBeth shakes her head and says, “Why so early?” Kit sighs and says, “We have a person that hires girls to help him with the farm. You know, doing basic chores. He’ll hire us starting at nine”. Beth replies, “Kit, that’s illegal”. Kit shrugs and says, “No, that’s nothing. He’ll give you bonus if you do things with him.  Like let him jack off to you while you undress and masturbate. Or If you’re really needing money let him touch you. Even more have sex”.

\tBeth shakes her head and says, “That dirty man”. Vicky shrugs and says, “Beth, you know I did it with him once. I was needing two hundred dollars so I let him stick his hands down my pants and play with my pussy”. Beth groans as Vicky then says, “Once, I was going to be really late on my car insurance. Even though I was sixteen and usually he just ignores us then. He took me to the barn and we had sex. he paid my back payment in full. I went home and gave him head and he got me a month ahead”.

\tBeth replies, “Vicky, honey, that’s blackmail”. Vicky replies, “Beth sweaty, the sex is just for extra money, not our paycheck. Also, if we want, we can do Kit’s way and just work overtime. It pays as much as sex with him. He’s not really that bad of a person”.

\tKit sighs and says, “Vicky, actually I need to tell you something. I always said I never did anything with him. But one time, I needed fifty bucks fast and he didn’t have any extra chores. So, I lifted my shirt and let him suck my nipples”. Beth groans, “This old pervert was treating you all like whores and you’re not even mad about it?”

\tVicky replies, “Beth, honey bun”, Each time they use a pet name they look at Jessy to see her expression and smiles. Vicky continues, “Old man Johnson was in his twenties. His parents just died when he was seventeen and left him the farm, so he hires people for help”. Beth, with a confused look asked, “Why do you call him old man Johnson then?” Kit laughs and says, “Because he always wears bib overalls. Even when he was in school. So everyone started saying he dressed like an old man”. Vicky continues, “So people started calling him old man Johnson.” Beth replies, “That still don’t change the fact he was asking for money in exchange of sexual favors”.

\tThey’re on the interstate leaving the city when Vicky smiles and says, “So how many times has my little Alley cat left the town?” Beth shrugs and says, “When I was little we went to the beach”. Jessy interrupts and says, “A cat family and water? That’s always good”. Beth groans and says, “That’s prejudice. Cats don’t hate water”. Vicky laughs and says, “You sure hate getting showers by yourself”. Beth growls and says, “That’s because so many things can go wrong in there. What if I slipped? I’d be in there for a long time, unconscious. And if I’m alone, it could be days. Hell, there’s even a chance I could drown. Tf I get a bath, what if I fall asleep and slide down with my head under water I could drown too”. Vicky is laughing and says, “One, in the shower you have that mat that grips your feet when you’re standing. I’ve never heard of someone drowning in a shower or bath that sounds more like fear of water”.

\tBeth groans, “I don’t have aquaphobia. I’m just careful. If no one is around I have a sit bath”. Jessy laughs, “Don’t have ak-wa phobia, but know its name”. Beth rolls her eyes, “No it’s aquaphobia and I know that because I had to learn all the names of phobias when I was studying to get my doctorate”. Jessy replies, “You were getting what?” Beth sighs, “My doctorate. I’m a doctor”. Jessy laughs, “Doctor Cat sounds like a TV show”. Beth sighs, “It is a TV show, and by the way. If a real doctor would do half that stuff he does he’d lose his license”. Jessy replies, “The stuff he does?” Beth replies, “OK when he electrocuted that guy to get him over a fear of electricity would of most likely put him into a catatonic state that he’d had to be hospitalized over”. Jessy interrupts by laughing, “A cat a whata?” Beth sighs getting frustrated, “Catatonic”.

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