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She's clearly stressed about something. When there's a knock on the door. The next moment she hears Spike yell, \"Fluttershy is here\".\n\n\tTwilight hides the letter and composes herself. Then Fluttershy walks in and says, \"I'm sorry to interrupt\" Twilight shakes her head and says, \"Your always welcome here. Is there a reason or did you just come to see me\", ending with a big smile. Hoping for the second.\n\n\tFluttershy shuffles some dust around with her hoof before saying, \"I'm sure you've already heard\" Twilight shakes her head and says, \"I haven't heard anything\". Fluttershy sighs and says, \"Rainbow Dash's brother is here\". Twilight smiles and says, \"Oh? He is”, clearly focused on something else. Fluttershy then nods and says, \"Bye, I need to get back home\" Twilight asks, “Is that all?” Fluttershy is gone before she finishes the last sentence” Twilight walks out and takes off flying. Spike runs after her yelling, \"Hey\", and flapping his arms to get her attention.\n\nApplejack\n\n\tBig Mac walks into Applejack's room. She quickly sits up and says, \"Big Mac\" He bows her head and says, \"Sis we have sex. Why are you embarrassed that you where hoofing your pussy?\" Applejack stands and says, \"I don't know. I never see you doing anything?\" He rolls his eyes and says, \"That's how this all started. You walked in when you first went into heat and caught me playing with my dick. You asked what that was and After trying to hide it unsuccessfully I let you see it. Which lead to you smelling it then sucking it. Then I took your virginity a few days later after you wanted more\" She blushes and says, \"Yeah I remember the good ole days\"\n\n\tApplejack laughs and says, \"It's amazing that Granny Smith ain't caught us.\" Big Mac replies, with a simple, \"Yep\" Then they hear, \"Caught you doing what?\" Applejack panics and says, \"Skipping out on chores\" She's replied with, \"You better not be skipping chores. Now go out there and get busy\" Applejack bows her head and says, \"Yes gran\" she then leaves and says, \"Talk outside\", to Big Mac\n\n\tUnder a golden apple tree in the orchard. Applejack says, \"OK so why did you come in my room?\" Big Mac shrugs. Applejack smiles and says, \"Oh I know that look. The drug has worn off but here I'll get into the mood\" Big Mac raises his eyebrows alert and says, \"What drug?\" Applejack replies panicked, \"Nothing\" Big Mac walks up to her and says, \"What drug?\" Applejack replies, \"Please Big Mac this is private\" Big Mac is mad and says, \"I thought something was strange. First Twilight having a cock and now your doing drugs. What kind of mess have you got yourself into?\" Applejack replies, \"Now wait. I ain't doing no drugs that make you loopy. It's a thing for Twilight. For some reason\" She then remembered She promised Twilight she wouldn't tell a sole. So she stops talking. Big Mac motions her on but Applejack shakes her head and leaves.\n\nPinky Pie\n\n\tPinky Pie walks into Sweet Apple Acres and walks up to Big Mac who's staring off into space. Pinky Pie since something is wrong and blows a party favor in his ear screaming, \"Surprise\". Then fire works go off. \n\n\tThat knocks Big Mac out of his trance. He jumps then sees Pinky Pie standing smiling. He nods and says, \"Hello. Applejack ran off\" Pinky Pie looks at him odd and says, \"Why are you sad.\" She pulls out her party cannon and sends party confetti everywhere.\n\n\tShe then smiles and says, \"Did that cheer you up?\" Big Mac sighs and says, \"No, but is there something you want me to tell Applejack\" Pinky leans in to his ear and screams, \"Actually I came for you\" She then jumps up and throws confetti, screaming, \"I'm in heat\" Big mac laughs and says, \"Your the only mare that gets happy over that\" Pinky smiles and says, \"Yeah because I get your big Big Mac cock in me.\n\n\tShe looks between his legs and days, \"Why ain't it dropped yet?\" Big Mac sighs and says, \"Sorry Pinky I know you need me right now but I'm busy\". He then throws a bale of hay into the barn. Pinky pie walks away concerned before turning around and throwing a pie at him. He gets angry and screams, \"PINKY I KNOW YOUR IN HEAT! BUT STOP!\" Pinky gets mad and says, \"I'm just trying to make you happy\" Big Mac on his last leaf says, \"Applejack and Twilight are doing drugs\" Pinky Pie blinks and says, \"Damn my Pinky pussy is tingling but friends comes first. Then she takes off running.\n\n\tA second later she runs back and says, \"Where is she at?\" Big Mac shrugs. Pinky stands up and says, \"My Pinky since tells me over here\". \n\n\tHe then hears her soft moaning. He walks over and sees her rubbing her pussy on a rock smiling with her eyes closed. \n\n\tHe clears his throat and says, \"Pinky\" Pinky stands up, \"Friends first. Friends before the burning lust that wants a cock that's coming from receiver\" Big Mac gives her a odd look at the name but sighs when she leaves.\n\nApplejack\n\n\tApplejack runs up to the castle of friendship and knocks on the door. Spike opens the door and says, \"Twilight left without me\". Applejack looks around and says, \"Dang I need her\" Spike says, \"Follow me we need to talk\"\n\n\tSpike walks her out into the garden and takes a deep breath before saying, \"If you need to talk remember it don't make you a bad pony to admit to a problem. It makes you a bigger pony instead”\n\n\tApplejack is confused and says, \"What in sand hills are you talking about Spike?\" Spike bows his head and says, \"It's a long hard road but the sooner you two get help the better. I'm really concerned\" Applejack having no idea what he's talking about nods and leaves. Spike is really concerned about the way Twilight and Applejack are sneaking around.\n\nLightening Bolt\n\n\tTwilight knocks on Rainbow Dash's door. Lightening Bolt answers it. He smiles and says, \"Hey Twilight\" Twilight walks in and says, \"Hey\", smiling He nods and says, \"Rainbow Dash went to help Fluttershy with something. She was well\" Twilight jumps to the reason she came and says, \"Why are you here?\" He shrugs and says, \"To see my little sister\"\n\n\tTwilight welcomes herself in and shuts the door. She then says, \"I got a letter from queen of Zebraland. They asked how you where doing after you where struck and to tell you your stationed here because you need to prepare for the storm\" He Sighs and says, \"It ruffled some feathers nothing more. They grounded me as a precaution. I decided to come here to relax with my sister.\" Twilight nods and says, \"What is this storm. All I know is they said they need many strong and able male ponies. \"\n\n\tHe shrugs and says, \"I don't know why they said male because we got plenty mares helping us there\" Twilight shrugs and says, \"I've been experimenting with a formula that will make females temporarily male. So I can use that\" Lightning Bolt laughs and says, \"Really?\" Got it working?\" Twilight nods and says, \"Yes but one consequence\", she pauses for a minute, \"It makes the girl unbelievably. Um ... eager\" Lightening Bolt laughs and says, \"Oh so it makes you all basically preteen colts\" Twilight is confused and says, \"What?\" Lightening Bolt replies, \"That's how we all are except at that age we don't know what we have. Now, If a adult would get those hormones they would never leave the house. They'd be mating with anything and everything they can find\" Twilight laughs and says, \"Please don't tell any pony OK?\" He nods and says, \"As long as you keep this storm secret as long as possible\" Twilight looks around and says, \"Ponies needs to know what's coming\". He says, \"Me and rainbow alone can do this. We don't need a bunch of colts. But keep doing what the royals said to make them happy and let me worry about this\" After some hesitation Twilight nods and says, \"When the storm gets close I'm going public\" Lightening Bolt nods and says, \"It won't get close\"\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Chapter 4

Twilight

\tTwilight is looking over a letter with her books and papers scattered everywhere. She's clearly stressed about something. When there's a knock on the door. The next moment she hears Spike yell, "Fluttershy is here".

\tTwilight hides the letter and composes herself. Then Fluttershy walks in and says, "I'm sorry to interrupt" Twilight shakes her head and says, "Your always welcome here. Is there a reason or did you just come to see me", ending with a big smile. Hoping for the second.

\tFluttershy shuffles some dust around with her hoof before saying, "I'm sure you've already heard" Twilight shakes her head and says, "I haven't heard anything". Fluttershy sighs and says, "Rainbow Dash's brother is here". Twilight smiles and says, "Oh? He is”, clearly focused on something else.  Fluttershy then nods and says, "Bye, I need to get back home" Twilight asks, “Is that all?” Fluttershy is gone before she finishes the last sentence” Twilight walks out and takes off flying. Spike runs after her yelling, "Hey", and flapping his arms to get her attention.

Applejack

\tBig Mac walks into Applejack's room. She quickly sits up and says, "Big Mac" He bows her head and says, "Sis we have sex. Why are you embarrassed that you where hoofing your pussy?" Applejack stands and says, "I don't know. I never see you doing anything?" He rolls his eyes and says, "That's how this all started. You walked in when you first went into heat and caught me playing with my dick. You asked what that was and After trying to hide it unsuccessfully I let you see it. Which lead to you smelling it then sucking it. Then I took your virginity a few days later after you wanted more" She blushes and says, "Yeah I remember the good ole days"

\tApplejack laughs and says, "It's amazing that Granny Smith ain't caught us." Big Mac replies, with a simple, "Yep" Then they hear, "Caught you doing what?" Applejack panics and says, "Skipping out on chores" She's replied with, "You better not be skipping chores. Now go out there and get busy" Applejack bows her head and says, "Yes gran" she then leaves and says, "Talk outside", to Big Mac

\tUnder a golden apple tree in the orchard. Applejack says, "OK so why did you come in my room?" Big Mac shrugs. Applejack smiles and says, "Oh I know that look. The drug has worn off but here I'll get into the mood" Big Mac raises his eyebrows alert and says, "What drug?" Applejack replies panicked, "Nothing" Big Mac walks up to her and says, "What drug?" Applejack replies, "Please Big Mac this is private" Big Mac is mad and says, "I thought something was strange. First Twilight having a cock and now your doing drugs. What kind of mess have you got yourself into?" Applejack replies, "Now wait. I ain't doing no drugs that make you loopy. It's a thing for Twilight. For some reason" She then remembered She promised Twilight she wouldn't tell a sole. So she stops talking. Big Mac motions her on but Applejack shakes her head and leaves.

Pinky Pie

\tPinky Pie walks into Sweet Apple Acres and walks up to Big Mac who's staring off into space. Pinky Pie since something is wrong and blows a party favor in his ear screaming, "Surprise". Then fire works go off.

\tThat knocks Big Mac out of his trance. He jumps then sees Pinky Pie standing smiling. He nods and says, "Hello. Applejack ran off" Pinky Pie looks at him odd and says, "Why are you sad." She pulls out her party cannon and sends party confetti everywhere.

\tShe then smiles and says, "Did that cheer you up?" Big Mac sighs and says, "No, but is there something you want me to tell Applejack" Pinky leans in to his ear and screams, "Actually I came for you" She then jumps up and throws confetti, screaming, "I'm in heat" Big mac laughs and says, "Your the only mare that gets happy over that" Pinky smiles and says, "Yeah because I get your big Big Mac cock in me.

\tShe looks between his legs and days, "Why ain't it dropped yet?" Big Mac sighs and says, "Sorry Pinky I know you need me right now but I'm busy". He then throws a bale of hay into the barn. Pinky pie walks away concerned before turning around and throwing a pie at him. He gets angry and screams, "PINKY I KNOW YOUR IN HEAT! BUT STOP!" Pinky gets mad and says, "I'm just trying to make you happy" Big Mac on his last leaf says, "Applejack and Twilight are doing drugs" Pinky Pie blinks and says, "Damn my Pinky pussy is tingling but friends comes first. Then she takes off running.

\tA second later she runs back and says, "Where is she at?" Big Mac shrugs. Pinky stands up and says, "My Pinky since tells me over here".

\tHe then hears her soft moaning. He walks over and sees her rubbing her pussy on a rock smiling with her eyes closed.

\tHe clears his throat and says, "Pinky" Pinky stands up, "Friends first. Friends before the burning lust that wants a cock that's coming from receiver" Big Mac gives her a odd look at the name but sighs when she leaves.

Applejack

\tApplejack runs up to the castle of friendship and knocks on the door. Spike opens the door and says, "Twilight left without me". Applejack looks around and says, "Dang I need her" Spike says, "Follow me we need to talk"

\tSpike walks her out into the garden and takes a deep breath before saying, "If you need to talk remember it don't make you a bad pony to admit to a problem. It makes you a bigger pony instead”

\tApplejack is confused and says, "What in sand hills are you talking about Spike?" Spike bows his head and says, "It's a long hard road but the sooner you two get help the better. I'm really concerned" Applejack having no idea what he's talking about nods and leaves. Spike is really concerned about the way Twilight and Applejack are sneaking around.

Lightening Bolt

\tTwilight knocks on Rainbow Dash's door. Lightening Bolt answers it. He smiles and says, "Hey Twilight" Twilight walks in and says, "Hey", smiling He nods and says, "Rainbow Dash went to help Fluttershy with something. She was well" Twilight jumps to the reason she came and says, "Why are you here?" He shrugs and says, "To see my little sister"

\tTwilight welcomes herself in and shuts the door. She then says, "I got a letter from queen of Zebraland. They asked how you where doing after you where struck and to tell you your stationed here because you need to prepare for the storm" He Sighs and says, "It ruffled some feathers nothing more. They grounded me as a precaution. I decided to come here to relax with my sister." Twilight nods and says, "What is this storm. All I know is they said they need many strong and able male ponies. "

\tHe shrugs and says, "I don't know why they said male because we got plenty mares helping us there" Twilight shrugs and says, "I've been experimenting with a formula that will make females temporarily male. So I can use that" Lightning Bolt laughs and says, "Really?" Got it working?" Twilight nods and says, "Yes but one consequence", she pauses for a minute, "It makes the girl unbelievably. Um ... eager" Lightening Bolt laughs and says, "Oh so it makes you all basically preteen colts" Twilight is confused and says, "What?" Lightening Bolt replies, "That's how we all are except at that age we don't know what we have. Now, If a adult would get those hormones they would never leave the house. They'd be mating with anything and everything they can find" Twilight laughs and says, "Please don't tell any pony OK?" He nods and says, "As long as you keep this storm secret as long as possible" Twilight looks around and says, "Ponies needs to know what's coming". He says, "Me and rainbow alone can do this. We don't need a bunch of colts. But keep doing what the royals said to make them happy and let me worry about this" After some hesitation Twilight nods and says, "When the storm gets close I'm going public" Lightening Bolt nods and says, "It won't get close"

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