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If she could use the queen’s momentary lapse in awareness, there might be a chance of turning everything around. Twilight crept steadily over to Princess Cadance, moving softly so as not to arouse the changeling’s attention. Approaching the alicorn, Twilight ignited her horn and readied herself to melt away the viscous substance at Cadance’s hooves.\n\nSuddenly, as if from nowhere, a black blur flung itself at her side. The impact was swift and brutal, sending the little mare flying. Picking herself up from the hard ground, Twilight gazed up at the sable form of Queen Chrysalis as the monarch grinned down at her. \"Did you really think I would allow you to sabotage me so easily, Twilight?\" she asked mockingly, flashing her sabre teeth. Twilight’s only answer was a dazed groan as she weakly pulled herself up. Chrysalis couldn’t help but let out a cruel cackle at the sight of her foe, the shaky little mare that had dared to oppose her.\n\n\"What a foolish little creature you are.\" the queen continued \"In fact, I think I’ll make an example of you\". Twilight gritted her teeth and desperately fired of a scorching beam. Chrysalis, amused, let loose a beam of her own. The changeling’s magic was as strong as she had feared, her own beam collapsing beneath the immense pressure of the queen’s. With a few final sparks, Twilight’s horn gave out, allowing the violent green beam to enter her horn. It was as if every nerve in her body was on fire. The little mare buckled in agony, letting out a pained scream. As she fell, the queen terminated her spell, ending the pain as swiftly as it had began. Now subdued, Twilight lay curled in a quivering heap.\n\nChrysalis peered over her trembling quarry, a charcoal-coloured cloud in the little mare’s blurred vision. As her senses returned, Twilight stared groggily up at the changeling, awaiting the inevitable. \"Oh Twilight\" the queen taunted with an air of false compassion \"That looked painful. I hope you aren’t hurt. That would be such a tragedy\". With a strong black hoof, Chrysalis gently lifted Twilight’s face until their eyes met. \"Don’t worry, little pony\" she went on \"I can take all your pain away. In fact, I’ll make sure you never feel pain again\". With that, Chrysalis ignited her great gnarled horn. Twilight knew what was coming, but she didn’t care anymore. She could barely process the thought before the queen’s magic descended.\n\nThe spell was blinding, filling her vision with a violent radioactive green. A powerful force descended over her, smothering her mind beneath a thick haze and sapping away her energy. A great numbness flooded over the little mare, leaving her conscious mind adrift. It was as if her body had abandoned her and her soul was floating in a great sea of calm. Chrysalis was right about one thing. The pain, along with every other sensation, had faded entirely. It was quite pleasant really. Twilight watched as the green and white lights danced in the darkness before her mind’s eye, allowing herself to drift away on the steady waters of perfect tranquillity. For Twilight, nothing mattered anymore. Nothing except this peace.\n\nIn reality, meanwhile, Chrysalis allowed the light of her horn to fade, admiring her work. Twilight Sparkle’s once defiant face was now blank, her wide eyes filled with a sickly green glow. Amused, the queen let out another long cackle and turned to her startled audience. The ponies looked on, paralysed with shock, until Cadance forced herself to speak. \"Twilight!\" she cried out before words failed her entirely. The exclamation roused Twilight’s friends into a state of agitation. \"Hey!\" yelled Applejack \"What d’you think yer doin’ to ahr friend?\". Bolstered by the earth pony’s courage, Rainbow Dash came forward, pointing her hoof aggressively. \"Yeah!\" she cried, advancing somewhat \"We’re not gonna let you hurt her, you nasty old…\".\n\nThe Pegasus was cut off by a green bolt from the changeling’s horn, which shot through her like an electric current. She hit the ground forcefully, paralysed from the attack. Grinning, Chrysalis began to speak. \"Oh, Twilight here is fine.\" she explained, stroking her new servant’s mane \"All I’ve done is alter her mind. She simply recognises that I am her master. Now she belongs to me and shall obey my every command without question\". As she spoke, the queen turned her attention to the unicorn, still curled up on the ground. \"Rise, my faithful student!\" Chrysalis ordered. The mesmerised mare picked herself up and stood to attention, staring vacantly at nothing in particular. \"Good girl.\" the queen purred softly.\n\nChrysalis took in the reactions of her onlookers; a mix of fear and anticipation. She could almost taste their discomfort in the air. It was delicious! The queen gave another laugh, this time a muted chuckle to herself. Then, an idea struck her. \"Such obedience deserves a reward\" she declared, half to the gathered ponies and half to her new servant \"and I know just the thing. Oh Shining dear! Come to me!\". With those words, the entranced stallion broke into a gallop, stopping just short of his queen. To Chrysalis, he seemed quite like an eager dog. \"Oh Shining\" said the changeling silkily \"Won’t you give your sister her reward\".\n\nShining nodded obediently and trotted over to the spellbound mare. Then his member came free from it’s sheath and he mounted her. 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The young mare found herself jostled by her brother’s sheer strength, carried along by the impact upon her nethers and the motion between her legs.\n\nIn her ocean of peace, Twilight could feel a ripple. Some deeper part of her brain, a more animalistic portion, was giving off a dull hum and a redness that almost distracted from the dancing colours. It was an odd sensation, a stir upon the waters, but not an unwelcome one. For a moment, her minds eye strayed from the light, into the primitive depths. She saw something moving in the feral redness, something that seemed far more solid, more real than anything around her. Suddenly, the hum was a scream and a sense of wrongness filled her. The distressed mare curled up into a distressed ball. Scared and hurt, she allowed herself to sink deeper beneath the water. Anything to escape the screaming.\n\nWhen her imaginary eyes reopened, they stayed fixed firmly upon the greenish glow. Very little remained of the awful redness, but the soft motion was there. A part of that animalistic red was still around her, the dull humming taking a more comprehensible form. It was a faint feeling of stimulation, something moving within her groin. She wouldn’t move her ethereal head again, for fear of the red, but allowed the sensation to fill her. She knew what the humming was now. It was purring. It was the approving reaction of her bestial biology. Whatever was happening to her, the animal inside her was loving it. Deep within the tranquil sea, Twilight Sparkle embraced her instincts as she sank ever further into the wonderous trance.\n\nOn the outside, however, the mesmerised mare had taken notice of her partner and had begun to cooperate. As the great phallus pressed into her, she shoved herself back, pressing her flanks back against her brother’s pumping hips. Coming together with a primal energy, the siblings pressed on with a primal energy. Shining trembled with a visible strain and with a great thrust came a thundering climax. Twilight buckled, the breath forced from her throat. Finally, the stallion withdrew his penis, brining with it a visible trail of semen. The pair slowed, pulling away from each other for a moment.\n\nThe gathered throng looked on, paralysed with a cocktail of conflicting emotions. Chrysalis, meanwhile, was ecstatic, letting off a joyous squeal. \"Oh bravo! Bravo!\" she called out with a sort-of childlike glee. It was as if she were a completely different mare. \"Oh, that was perfect!\" she cried \"Another round! Another round!\". With that, the siblings pulled together again. Shining’s great shaft slid back into his sister’s slit and the animalistic coitus began afresh.\n\nThis pattern would continue for a fair while, to the immense displeasure of Twilight’s friends. Cadance in particular was almost in tears, but she couldn’t bring herself to look away. Time after time, she watched as her fiancé plunged into his younger sister’s folds, silently cursing the wretched changeling that had made it happen. Whenever the couple showed a sign of stopping, Chrysalis would order them to resume. When the queen finally permitted them to stop, the pair where howling and panting like dogs, utterly smeared in each other’s fluids. Semen spilled from between Twilight’s legs and forming a distinct bulge against her abdomen. The thick substance dripped from Shining’s loins, clinging to his soaked fur.\n\n\"Alright, I th-think that will suffice.\" the queen declared, seeming almost drunk now. By that point, several drones had made their way to great hall and were looking on curiously. Chrysalis turned to them, grinning broadly. \"By the stars, that was delicious!\" she muttered to herself, swaying somewhat \"Yes, I think I’ll keep you two\". Then she turned to the soldiers and gestured to the five smaller mares. \"Take these five to the caves and interrogate them.\" she commanded \"After they’ve told you everything, send them to the feeding chambers\". The drones gave a salute and herded the struggling ponies over to the corridor. The queen waved mockingly as the crowd disappeared behind the massive double doors.\n\nThen, there was only Chrysalis and Cadance, alone with the mindless siblings in the great hall. Chrysalis stalked over to her captive, sabre teeth on full display. She circled the princess like a wolf hunting a deer.\n\n\"Now then\" the queen wondered aloud \"What shall I do with you?\". \n\n---\n\nWritten by OtherFritz from Derpibooru\n[url=https://derpibooru.org/1800014#comment_7379692][Source][/url]", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "It hadn’t been an especially good day for Twilight Sparkle. Indeed, when a malicious shapeshifter brainwashes your brother, kidnaps his fiancé, traps you in a cave and organises a swarm of changelings to subjugate your entire species, it tends to put a damper on one’s mood. Thus, when she found herself and her friends shepherded to the grand hall by an escort of changeling guards, Twilight was in decidedly low spirits, which the changeling queen’s smug face and self-congratulatory taunting did little to improve. Still, she could do nothing but look on meekly. The young mare knew that, with the power of her brother’s love, Chrysalis was perfectly capable of reducing her to ash at the first sign of resistance.

Then, the queen turned to the window behind her, looking over her handiwork with cruel relish. She was singing to herself, lost in her own little world of savage fantasies. For Twilight, it was almost a miracle. In that moment, the tension was paralysing as the unicorn weighed her options. If she could use the queen’s momentary lapse in awareness, there might be a chance of turning everything around. Twilight crept steadily over to Princess Cadance, moving softly so as not to arouse the changeling’s attention. Approaching the alicorn, Twilight ignited her horn and readied herself to melt away the viscous substance at Cadance’s hooves.

Suddenly, as if from nowhere, a black blur flung itself at her side. The impact was swift and brutal, sending the little mare flying. Picking herself up from the hard ground, Twilight gazed up at the sable form of Queen Chrysalis as the monarch grinned down at her. "Did you really think I would allow you to sabotage me so easily, Twilight?" she asked mockingly, flashing her sabre teeth. Twilight’s only answer was a dazed groan as she weakly pulled herself up. Chrysalis couldn’t help but let out a cruel cackle at the sight of her foe, the shaky little mare that had dared to oppose her.

"What a foolish little creature you are." the queen continued "In fact, I think I’ll make an example of you". Twilight gritted her teeth and desperately fired of a scorching beam. Chrysalis, amused, let loose a beam of her own. The changeling’s magic was as strong as she had feared, her own beam collapsing beneath the immense pressure of the queen’s. With a few final sparks, Twilight’s horn gave out, allowing the violent green beam to enter her horn. It was as if every nerve in her body was on fire. The little mare buckled in agony, letting out a pained scream. As she fell, the queen terminated her spell, ending the pain as swiftly as it had began. Now subdued, Twilight lay curled in a quivering heap.

Chrysalis peered over her trembling quarry, a charcoal-coloured cloud in the little mare’s blurred vision. As her senses returned, Twilight stared groggily up at the changeling, awaiting the inevitable. "Oh Twilight" the queen taunted with an air of false compassion "That looked painful. I hope you aren’t hurt. That would be such a tragedy". With a strong black hoof, Chrysalis gently lifted Twilight’s face until their eyes met. "Don’t worry, little pony" she went on "I can take all your pain away. In fact, I’ll make sure you never feel pain again". With that, Chrysalis ignited her great gnarled horn. Twilight knew what was coming, but she didn’t care anymore. She could barely process the thought before the queen’s magic descended.

The spell was blinding, filling her vision with a violent radioactive green. A powerful force descended over her, smothering her mind beneath a thick haze and sapping away her energy. A great numbness flooded over the little mare, leaving her conscious mind adrift. It was as if her body had abandoned her and her soul was floating in a great sea of calm. Chrysalis was right about one thing. The pain, along with every other sensation, had faded entirely. It was quite pleasant really. Twilight watched as the green and white lights danced in the darkness before her mind’s eye, allowing herself to drift away on the steady waters of perfect tranquillity. For Twilight, nothing mattered anymore. Nothing except this peace.

In reality, meanwhile, Chrysalis allowed the light of her horn to fade, admiring her work. Twilight Sparkle’s once defiant face was now blank, her wide eyes filled with a sickly green glow. Amused, the queen let out another long cackle and turned to her startled audience. The ponies looked on, paralysed with shock, until Cadance forced herself to speak. "Twilight!" she cried out before words failed her entirely. The exclamation roused Twilight’s friends into a state of agitation. "Hey!" yelled Applejack "What d’you think yer doin’ to ahr friend?". Bolstered by the earth pony’s courage, Rainbow Dash came forward, pointing her hoof aggressively. "Yeah!" she cried, advancing somewhat "We’re not gonna let you hurt her, you nasty old…".

The Pegasus was cut off by a green bolt from the changeling’s horn, which shot through her like an electric current. She hit the ground forcefully, paralysed from the attack. Grinning, Chrysalis began to speak. "Oh, Twilight here is fine." she explained, stroking her new servant’s mane "All I’ve done is alter her mind. She simply recognises that I am her master. Now she belongs to me and shall obey my every command without question". As she spoke, the queen turned her attention to the unicorn, still curled up on the ground. "Rise, my faithful student!" Chrysalis ordered. The mesmerised mare picked herself up and stood to attention, staring vacantly at nothing in particular. "Good girl." the queen purred softly.

Chrysalis took in the reactions of her onlookers; a mix of fear and anticipation. She could almost taste their discomfort in the air. It was delicious! The queen gave another laugh, this time a muted chuckle to herself. Then, an idea struck her. "Such obedience deserves a reward" she declared, half to the gathered ponies and half to her new servant "and I know just the thing. Oh Shining dear! Come to me!". With those words, the entranced stallion broke into a gallop, stopping just short of his queen. To Chrysalis, he seemed quite like an eager dog. "Oh Shining" said the changeling silkily "Won’t you give your sister her reward".

Shining nodded obediently and trotted over to the spellbound mare. Then his member came free from it’s sheath and he mounted her. At the sight of Chrysalis’ display, a gasp could be heard from Princess Cadance. "Oh come now princess" the queen scolded mockingly "There’s no need to be so judgemental. You are the princess of love, aren’t you?". With a self-satisfied grin, Chrysalis returned her gaze to the fornicating siblings before her. Shining had started up with a sort of mechanical back-and-forth, a regular thrusting and retraction. Chrysalis was, for her part, unimpressed.

"Come on, put some passion into it!" she called out, now somewhat irritated. The stallion took a moment to process the instruction, halting mid-penetration, and began again. His new approach was far more active, practically throwing himself upon his sister. Shining’s engorged phallus plunged deep, probing Twilight’s canal with visible force. The young mare found herself jostled by her brother’s sheer strength, carried along by the impact upon her nethers and the motion between her legs.

In her ocean of peace, Twilight could feel a ripple. Some deeper part of her brain, a more animalistic portion, was giving off a dull hum and a redness that almost distracted from the dancing colours. It was an odd sensation, a stir upon the waters, but not an unwelcome one. For a moment, her minds eye strayed from the light, into the primitive depths. She saw something moving in the feral redness, something that seemed far more solid, more real than anything around her. Suddenly, the hum was a scream and a sense of wrongness filled her. The distressed mare curled up into a distressed ball. Scared and hurt, she allowed herself to sink deeper beneath the water. Anything to escape the screaming.

When her imaginary eyes reopened, they stayed fixed firmly upon the greenish glow. Very little remained of the awful redness, but the soft motion was there. A part of that animalistic red was still around her, the dull humming taking a more comprehensible form. It was a faint feeling of stimulation, something moving within her groin. She wouldn’t move her ethereal head again, for fear of the red, but allowed the sensation to fill her. She knew what the humming was now. It was purring. It was the approving reaction of her bestial biology. Whatever was happening to her, the animal inside her was loving it. Deep within the tranquil sea, Twilight Sparkle embraced her instincts as she sank ever further into the wonderous trance.

On the outside, however, the mesmerised mare had taken notice of her partner and had begun to cooperate. As the great phallus pressed into her, she shoved herself back, pressing her flanks back against her brother’s pumping hips. Coming together with a primal energy, the siblings pressed on with a primal energy. Shining trembled with a visible strain and with a great thrust came a thundering climax. Twilight buckled, the breath forced from her throat. Finally, the stallion withdrew his penis, brining with it a visible trail of semen. The pair slowed, pulling away from each other for a moment.

The gathered throng looked on, paralysed with a cocktail of conflicting emotions. Chrysalis, meanwhile, was ecstatic, letting off a joyous squeal. "Oh bravo! Bravo!" she called out with a sort-of childlike glee. It was as if she were a completely different mare. "Oh, that was perfect!" she cried "Another round! Another round!". With that, the siblings pulled together again. Shining’s great shaft slid back into his sister’s slit and the animalistic coitus began afresh.

This pattern would continue for a fair while, to the immense displeasure of Twilight’s friends. Cadance in particular was almost in tears, but she couldn’t bring herself to look away. Time after time, she watched as her fiancé plunged into his younger sister’s folds, silently cursing the wretched changeling that had made it happen. Whenever the couple showed a sign of stopping, Chrysalis would order them to resume. When the queen finally permitted them to stop, the pair where howling and panting like dogs, utterly smeared in each other’s fluids. Semen spilled from between Twilight’s legs and forming a distinct bulge against her abdomen. The thick substance dripped from Shining’s loins, clinging to his soaked fur.

"Alright, I th-think that will suffice." the queen declared, seeming almost drunk now. By that point, several drones had made their way to great hall and were looking on curiously. Chrysalis turned to them, grinning broadly. "By the stars, that was delicious!" she muttered to herself, swaying somewhat "Yes, I think I’ll keep you two". Then she turned to the soldiers and gestured to the five smaller mares. "Take these five to the caves and interrogate them." she commanded "After they’ve told you everything, send them to the feeding chambers". The drones gave a salute and herded the struggling ponies over to the corridor. The queen waved mockingly as the crowd disappeared behind the massive double doors.

Then, there was only Chrysalis and Cadance, alone with the mindless siblings in the great hall. Chrysalis stalked over to her captive, sabre teeth on full display. She circled the princess like a wolf hunting a deer.

"Now then" the queen wondered aloud "What shall I do with you?".

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Written by OtherFritz from Derpibooru
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