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Karma’s a bitch, and so are you.”\nThe line went dead.\nSnapping and lashing out her tail to bludgeon Mia’s corpse in retaliation, Jill took a breath, picked up her severed cock-head, and began stomping to the door. The loss of blood began to make her feel light-headed, but she knew that she needed medical help if she was going to survive. She stumbled out the door.\n“If I have to do this myself, then fine. I will fucking end that dispatcher when I get done!” she snapped as she began to flap her wings.\nBut after only a couple of flaps that didn’t even get her off the ground, she stopped, panting. The exertion was way too much for her, considering how much blood she’d lost. A flicker of panic crossed her mind, and for half a second, she actually entertained the possibility that she wouldn’t survive this ordeal. Shaking the doubt out of her mind, she took a few deep breaths and made for her car. The fact that she was naked as the day she was born and covered in blood—hers and Mia’s—didn’t register to her at all. She started the car and quickly pulled out of the driveway, nearly hitting a car driving down the road.\n“Move it, fuck-face!” she yelled, raising her fist angrily as she stomped on the gas.\nThe car roared to life and began speeding down the street, honking almost continuously as she swerved around the parked cars that hadn’t yet left to take their owners to work. A fur yanked her baby carriage back just in time to avoid getting completely taken out as Jill sped by.\nThe light turned red ahead of her, and a car in front of her came to a stop.\n“Move the fuck out of the way!” Jill yelled.\nJust then, a pang of blinding pain shot through her cock, and she squeezed her eyes closed and gritted her teeth. Her car veered off the road onto the sidewalk, went around the driver who had stopped, and careened into the intersection. 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Mia stirred, opened her eyes, and snarled. She sat up, but too late. Jill’s claw slashed through her neck, and she gasped as she brought her paws to her throat, spurting blood between her fingers. She began to wheeze, her head no longer getting the oxygen it desperately needed, and blood trickled down into her lungs. Her eyes bulged as she began to drown in her own blood.
Jill watched her warily, and as soon as the wolfess expired, Jill got up, her chest heaving from exertion.
“Fucking cunt; you couldn’t even revolt successfully,” she snarled.
Standing over Mia’s fresh corpse, she let out the biggest shit she could muster and started to top it off with piss when she suddenly screamed in pain. The piss burned her cock where its head had been severed, and she suddenly remembered that she was bleeding profusely. Her revenge on Mia’s rotting carcass would have to wait.
She picked up the phone and quickly dialed 911.
“Hey, you need to get out here and—” she began.
“We don’t take calls from this number,” the operator interrupted, hanging up.
“Fucking tit-pussy,” Jill snarled, redialing the number.
“Listen, you piece of shit, I’ll waive the bribe, but you need to get an ambulance up here right now!”
“Sorry, lady, but a bribe’s a bribe. Karma’s a bitch, and so are you.”
The line went dead.
Snapping and lashing out her tail to bludgeon Mia’s corpse in retaliation, Jill took a breath, picked up her severed cock-head, and began stomping to the door. The loss of blood began to make her feel light-headed, but she knew that she needed medical help if she was going to survive. She stumbled out the door.
“If I have to do this myself, then fine. I will fucking end that dispatcher when I get done!” she snapped as she began to flap her wings.
But after only a couple of flaps that didn’t even get her off the ground, she stopped, panting. The exertion was way too much for her, considering how much blood she’d lost. A flicker of panic crossed her mind, and for half a second, she actually entertained the possibility that she wouldn’t survive this ordeal. Shaking the doubt out of her mind, she took a few deep breaths and made for her car. The fact that she was naked as the day she was born and covered in blood—hers and Mia’s—didn’t register to her at all. She started the car and quickly pulled out of the driveway, nearly hitting a car driving down the road.
“Move it, fuck-face!” she yelled, raising her fist angrily as she stomped on the gas.
The car roared to life and began speeding down the street, honking almost continuously as she swerved around the parked cars that hadn’t yet left to take their owners to work. A fur yanked her baby carriage back just in time to avoid getting completely taken out as Jill sped by.
The light turned red ahead of her, and a car in front of her came to a stop.
“Move the fuck out of the way!” Jill yelled.
Just then, a pang of blinding pain shot through her cock, and she squeezed her eyes closed and gritted her teeth. Her car veered off the road onto the sidewalk, went around the driver who had stopped, and careened into the intersection. Fortunately for her, the oncoming traffic hadn’t started to move, yet, and she opened her eyes just in time to swerve back into her lane, narrowly missing an entire row of cars. Honks resounded through the morning air as the drivers protested her erratic driving.
Jill’s car flew over a hill, all four tires coming off the ground as she hit 60 in a 30 zone. As her car slammed back onto the ground, another wave of pain stabbed her prick as it lay spurting blood onto the seat between her legs. She nearly blacked out, going completely up on the sidewalk and hitting trash can after trash can and taking out a mailbox as furs out for their morning strolls leapt out of the way.
“Ungh,” Jill groaned, her eyes bleary with exhaustion and pain as she swerved back into the road, taking off her driver-side mirror on a parked car as she did.
Without stopping for the next intersection, she swerved and turned to go up the ramp onto the highway. Already doing 80 in a 60 zone, her foot stomped harder onto the accelerator as she whipped across four lanes of traffic.
Immediately in front of her was the first traffic jam of the morning. She screamed half-heartedly in frustration—she hated traffic, even on a day when she wasn’t bleeding out through her dick—and swerved onto the left shoulder, passing nearly-parked cars doing 110 and still accelerating.
Her dick suddenly felt like it was on fire, and Jill screamed in agony. The pain was indescribable, and she instinctively yanked the wheel, side-swiping over 20 cars before finally getting back on the shoulder. Her breathing came in ragged, panting gasps as sweat poured down her face.
The signs rushed by her too fast; which one was the exit for the hospital? She couldn’t remember. She couldn’t…
Blue sign. Big H.
She swerved to the right, plowing into four lanes of stopped cars. Her airbag deployed, and she was thrown from the car, flinging blood as she landed right on top of a car full of mice going to daycare with their mother.
Bruised everywhere and with at least two broken ribs, Jill rolled off the car and began wobbling through the gridlock towards the exit, clutching the severed tip of her penis with both hands.
“Just…got to…make it…half…mile…” she muttered.
“Where the hell do you think you’re going?” someone demanded. “You stay right there until the police come and deal with you for all this damage, you crazy bitch!”
Jill didn’t even look at him as she lashed her tail out, hit him in the chest, and sent him flying. She didn’t have the energy or wherewithal to cuss him out.
She made it to the exit ramp and stumbled, leaning heavily on the guardrail as she tried to get the world to stop spinning. Her cock screamed in pain, and her bruised ribs made it hard to breathe—something she very much needed to do if she was going to stay conscious. Onlookers took pictures, called 911, or both as she staggered down the ramp.
She staggered across the frontage road, cars coming to a screeching stop and slamming into each other to avoid hitting her, her chest heaving and making her wince with every breath. She could see the hospital—it wasn’t far away now—and she summoned every ounce of energy she had to keep shuffling that way.
She made it to the parking lot when another awful pang shot through her, this time hitting her ribs, collar bone, and prick all at once. It hurt so badly that it took her breath completely away, and she collapsed on the ground, silently screaming in agony until the pain passed. She began to feel alternately hot and cold as shock began to set in.
No…fucking…cunt… I will survive!
The thought of Mia beating her pissed her off, and with an angry snarl, she got back to her feet. More determined than ever, she shuffled forward as fast as she could make herself go.
“Move!” she snapped as she came to the injured and ill getting out of their cars. “Out of my way!”
She shoved a four-year-old whose arm was broken at a nasty angle. He fell down and landed on his broken arm, screaming in pain as Jill shoved forward.
She made it to the porte-cochere. She was only feet away!
A sudden pang, worse than any before it, stopped her in her tracks. Her heart felt like it would explode, and her cock felt like a hundred flaming-hot arrows had been shot into it. She fell to the ground, and her already-broken ribs dug into her lung, puncturing it. Her eyes bulged, and she vomited on the pavement. The pain hurt so badly that she lost control of her bowels and bladder, soiling herself and splattering wet chunks of shit between her legs. Her vision began to go dark and close in. She shook her head, desperately clinging to life as her body went into shock and uncontrollable shudders wracked her body.
Fuck…you…Cunt…
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