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, Mia finally confronts her parents, but when they aren't impressed by her size, she has to resort to drastic measures to get their attention.", "writing": "Mia's Revenge: Chapter 9\n\n© 2018 Jack Doe. Mia and Jill belong to their creator. Do not distribute without all copyright notices and disclaimers intact.\n\nWriting this story does not constitute endorsement of the events depicted herein by the author. Readers are explicitly discouraged from engaging in any activities that are illegal or harmful to themselves or others.\n\nThe wail of emergency sirens filled the air, alerting residents to stay in their homes and get someplace safe and protected.\nNow almost as tall as three football fields stacked end-to-end, the giant wolfess stomped down the road towards her parents' home. It was surreal, seeing the houses down so far, as if she was in a plane looking down on the city from high above. The 2-story houses below her were now only came up to her ankles, and having only one good eye made judging distances difficult. Nevertheless, Mia was on a mission.\n\"When I get hold of those two, I'll-I'll-\"\nMia snarled in frustration, still unsure of how she was going to make her parents pay for the misery she'd suffered.\n\"I know better from Jill-I can't just go straight into fucking them.\"\nShe scoffed and looked at her enormous cock. Just the tip was over a foot in diameter and quickly expanded to over 13 feet. Her knot when it was inflated was as wide as a semi-trailer is long. She shook her head. No, trying to fuck her parents would do nothing but squish them. She wanted them to suffer. \nShe turned into her parents' neighborhood-the best part of town. Of course, when she lived with them, they lived on the other side of the railroad tracks, where trying to avoid getting raped or shot was just a daily fact of life. \nMaybe I should have let them rape me, Mia thought. Then I'd at least be used to it by the time Jill got her claws on me.\nThe houses here were huge-some even 20,000 square feet. It made Mia's blood boil to see how her parents had benefited at her expense. They didn't deserve to live here. Nobody did, and with footpads 50 feet in diameter, Mia was uniquely equipped to effect the residents' speedy eviction.\nShe grinned wolfishly and began stomping down the road, taking out two 50-foot-wide swathes where she deliberately scuffed her feet and ripped the enormous mansions in two.\nShe came to a stop at her parents' house, sited at the end of a cul-de-sac at the top of a hill. Of course, Mia hadn't lost all her social graces. She knew it was polite to knock. Stooping over and peering under the porch with her good eye, Mia carefully maneuvered her 6'-tall fingertip towards the door and tapped it gently.\nThe door slammed to the ground inside.\n\"Hello?\" Mia said, her voice blowing through the house like a hurricane.\nHer parents cautiously poked their heads out the front door and gasped.\n\"Hello, Mother. Hello, Father,\" the enormous wolfess said. Her words hinted at a boiling pool of malice barely concealed beneath her superficially pleasant tone.\n\"What do you want?\" her mother demanded, looking up at her indignantly. \"If you're here for money…\"\n\"Is that Mia?\" her father asked, stepping out and looking up at her. \"We told you before: you need to stop pissing Jill off and be a good wife. Now what do you want? Spit it out! You're interrupting the news.\"\nThe 800-foot-tall wolfess stood dumbfounded, her mouth agape. She started to say something and then closed her mouth. How was it possible that her parents should shut her down when she was over 100 times their size?!\nGet it together! You've fought through hell and back for this chance! she scolded herself. \n\"Wow, somebody actually knows my name!\" the said finally. \"It's actually good to hear it said, given in the last five years, I've been called every expletive and most recently, 'giant wolf-creature.'\"\n\"So, you came to throw a temper tantrum? Is that it?\" her mother asked, crossing her arms over her chest. \"Well, go take your tantrum somewhere else. You're making a scene.\"\nMia's jaw snapped shut furiously. \n\"You're fucking unbelievable, you know that? For five years, I have begged you for help because Jill was violently raping me. All this time, I thought it was just a case of 'out of sight, out of mind,' but now here we all are-in person-and all you care about is that I'm making a scene? Hello?! I'm 800 feet tall. I am the fucking news, and I've been making a scene for fifty miles! Do you have any idea what I went through to get here? Have a look, you egotistical bitch!\"\n\"Language, young lady!\" her father scolded, but he was interrupted as she reached down, snatched them both up, and shoved them down towards the gaping hole in her side.\n\"This one came from a fucking missile that hit me and exploded. And this\"-she swung them wildly through the air to see her other side-\"this came from a car-door that drove itself into me when a city exploded all around me!\"-her voice got louder and angrier the more she talked as she whipped them around to see her broken paw-\"This came from a tank mortar bashing my paw on the outskirts of this very town. I came all this way to find you two, but I guess that even being 800 feet tall isn't enough for you to pay attention to your fucking daughter, is it? What do I have to do to get your attention? Huh? I've already destroyed two cities and took on the fucking army and won! What else do you want?\"\n\"Slow down and quit being hysterical,\" her father said, ignoring her question. \"You're making your mother and me nauseous with all this whipping around!\"\nMia's eye twitched, and she shook with fury. But in the haze of her anger, she spied her parents' neighbor's house.\n\"You like the Smiths, don't you?\" she asked abruptly, a cruel smile spreading over the wolfess's almost 100-foot-wide face.\n\"Yes,\" her father said. \"They're nice furs, and their kids are very well-behaved.\"\n\"You could learn a thing or two from them,\" her mother added, glancing at Mia's enormous teeth. \"Mia, dear, have you been brushing?\" she asked. \"You want to keep a nice, clean mouth for Jill.\"\n\"JILL IS FUCKING DEAD!\" Mia screamed. \"I FUCKED HER UNTIL SHE EXPLODED! DO YOU HEAR ME? DEAD!\"\nFire blazed in the wolfess's good eye, but she forced herself to calm down. She didn't want to kill her parents-not yet-not until they finally realized the error of their ways. Wincing, she transferred them from her good paw into her broken one, holding them between her thumb and index finger; that didn't hurt too badly.\n\"You wretched daughter!\" her father yelled. \"The only thing you were ever good for was making us rich, and now you went and killed the fur who could do it!\"\n\"Oh, you made that perfectly clear,\" Mia roared. \"My whole life, you told me how worthless I was, and you took every bit of happiness from me! I finally had a chance at a happy life, and you went out of your way to make sure that couldn't happen! What did I ever do to you?\"\n\"Life is just hard sometimes, dear,\" her mother said condescendingly. \"You don't have to understand these things, but it's for the best!\"\n\"Bullshit!\" Mia snorted, fuming. \nShe took a breath and recomposed herself. \"Your beloved dragon-child benefactor is no more,\" she said, her voice suddenly calm. \"I finally took care of her, with absolutely no thanks to you. But let's invite the Smiths out. I would hate for you to be out here without your friends and their well-behaved kids.\"\n\"N-no, that's-\" her father protested, but he was interrupted by the crash of the Smiths' roof being torn off. \"Damn it, Mia! Quit making a scene!\"\n\"Language, Jeremy,\" Mia's mother scolded him.\n\"Come out and play,\" Mia sing-songed, reaching down to pluck up the two parents. \"You must be Mr. and Mrs. Smith,\" she said, pleasantly bowing her head. \"I'm Jeremy and Nora's daughter.\"\nThe Smiths exchanged nervous glances. \"D-daughter?\" the husband asked, his complexion pale. \"We didn't know they had a daughter.\" By the time he finished speaking, his voice was little more than a squeak.\n\"They don't talk about me much,\" Mia replied, glaring at her parents. \"But they have great things to say about you! How are your kids?\"\n\"They're fine,\" Mrs. Smith replied hastily. \"They-they're fine, and we'd like them to stay that way.\"\nMia pouted. \"Aww, is it because I'm 800 feet tall that everybody thinks I'm a monster?\"\n\"You ate a handful of schoolkids!\" protested Mr. Smith-Mr. Squeaky, Mia had just dubbed him.\nMia shrugged. \"Only one. They weren't very filling.\" She shook her head, her dangling eye whipping around and making her hiss in pain. \"That's beside the point though. Come, come, let's see the little tykes. Francis, Stella!\" she called, \"Come out and play!\"\nThe front door of the mansion opened, and two tiny heads poked out.\n\"Whoa!\" Francis gasped, staring up at Mia in awe. \"It's her! The one from the news!\"\n\"Francis, get inside!\" Mrs. Squeaky yelped in terror, seeing the look Mia gave them. \"Get inside this instant!\"\n\"But Mom!\" the young fur protested, walking out onto the driveway, \"This is awesome! She's even bigger in person! Stella, come look at this!\"\nAn even younger fur stepped out behind her big brother, looking up at Mia with far less enthusiasm and much more trepidation.\n\"Kids, please!\" Mrs. Squeaky cried. \"Do as I say and get inside!\"\n\"But Mom, you get to ride around in her hand!\" Francis said, stepping out to the street and craning his neck to look up at Mia. \"I wanna ride in her hand, too!\"\nMia grinned. These brats don't obey half as well as I do-er, did!\n\"No! Please, please, don't hurt my babies!\" Mrs. Squeaky begged, bursting into tears. \"Please, they're innocent! They haven't done anything!\"\n\"You know, I was young and innocent once,\" Mia recollected. \"I had a girlfriend, and I thought we were going to be married.\" She sighed, thinking sadly of Kara. \"But my parents took out a restraining order against her and forced me to marry a monster, who raped me every day with her saw-tooth dick and pissed and shat all over me.\" She shook her head and lowered her hand containing the Smiths to the ground, looking like she was going to let them go.\nInstead, she said, \"Climb on, kids,\" smiling sweetly. \"Careful, now. Francis, help your sister.\"\nFrancis's face lit up, and he scrambled up onto one of Mia's claws, then bent down to help his sister get her footing, and the two carefully picked their way down to the wolfess's enormous palm.\n\"Wow!\" Francis cried in delight, \"You're like a huge, living jungle gym!\"\n\"I am, aren't I?\" Mia asked, raising her hand to eye level and grinning toothily at them. \"And you're like a tiny snack!\"\nThe Smiths shrieked in horror as Mia flung the cubs into her mouth and slowly closed her sharp teeth down on them. Her first chew decapitated Francis, his little head popping off his body as the wolfess's teeth cut him in two. Blood spurted from his neck, and a look of bewildered terror permanently etched itself on his face. \nIt took a few chews for her to actually get Stella. The young fur was agile and dodged her teeth a few times, but Mia's tongue was agiler, flicked her into the air, and guided her, screaming in terror, into the crevice between Mia's teeth.\nWith a chomp, Stella was no more, replaced by a bloody splatter between Mia's teeth.\n\"You monster! What did they ever do to you?\" Mrs. Smith bawled. \"They were innocent furs with bright futures! They were good kids, and we loved them!\" She sobbed uncontrollably as Mr. Smith freed his hands to comfort her numbly, too shocked himself to react.\n\"Life is just hard sometimes,\" Mia said coldly. \"You don't have to understand these things, but it's for the best,\" she mocked, enunciating deliberately. \"Isn't that right, Mother?\"\n\"Mia!\" her parents gasped breathlessly.\n\"Sound familiar?\" the wolfess growled, cocking her head. \"Have I finally gotten your attention, then? It only took five years and eating your neighbor's children, but I finally did it!\"\n\"My babies! Oh, my poor babies!\" Mrs. Smith shrieked. \"How could you? Why? Why?!\"\n\"Aww,\" Mia pouted again. \"What kind of monster would I be if I took a mother's children from her? That's awfully mean, isn't it?\" She almost looked sorry. \"But I'm no monster! Go and join your kids!\" she spat, tossing the Smiths into her mouth and angrily chewing them up, smacking loudly. \"Look, Mom and Dad, I'm chewing with my mouth open!\" she sneered.\nMia's sudden surge of anger and violence made her start growing again. Buildings collapsed around her ankles as her feet swelled in proportion to her height. Her parents looked on, aghast and suddenly realizing that they were in a very dangerous spot. For the first time, they were actually afraid she might hurt them, too.\n\"Mia! Please, we're sorry!\" they began to beg over the deafening crash of buildings. \n\"Oh, now you're sorry?\" Mia scoffed. \"No, you're not! You just want me to let you go. You don't care about me! I'll prove it!\"\nTaking a deep breath and grasping her bad eye in her hand, she ripped it off with a blood-curdling shriek.\n\"See?!\" she screamed through the pain as she shoved the blinded eyeball at them. It was bleeding, gouged all over, and covered in dirt and shrapnel.\n\"You don't care that this hurts me! You just want to save your own fucking skin!\"\nShe threw her eyeball into her mouth and began chewing it as noisily and sloppily as she could, moving her parents down to mouth level so she could shower them with bits of flying eyeball and spittle. Snarling and gnashing her teeth as the agonized pain of her severed eye continued, she chewed the filthy thing into mush and swallowed it.\n\"Mia, please!\" her mother screamed, turning her head away and throwing up. \"We weren't the best parents! We admit it! We're sorry! But what do you hope to achieve?!\"\n\"You have to be reasonable!\" her father chimed in, his chest heaving where he'd already vomited. \"We can't undo anything that's been done! What do you want? Do you want us to go back into a time machine and not marry you off to Jill? We can't do that! All we can do is forgive and move forward!\"\nA deep, ominous rumbling started in Mia's gut and spread to her chest. \"Ha. Haha! HAHAHA!\" she laughed. A wicked grin traced over the wolfess's face as she transferred them back to her good hand. \"You actually expect me to forgive you for what you've done, when only minutes ago you were still ignoring me? Wow.\" \nShe shook her head, and for once, her eyeball didn't tug on her optic nerve and cause excruciating pain.\n\"You two are so full of shit that my eyes are-well, eye is-turning brown, and I'm taller than the Eiffel Tower! I always knew that you were awful parents! I might have even called you shitty parents before in a moment of weakness.\" She laughed again, her voice now jovial. \"Goodbye, Mother. Goodbye, Father. It's time you put your bodies where your words are.\"\nWith that, she squatted down and shoved her parents up her ass, making sure to push them good and deep up inside the brown, sticky mess she felt against her fingers. They wriggled a little bit but then held still.\nShe stood up and sighed. Her parents were no more. They'd been taught a painful lesson, and while Mia wished they were big enough for her to fuck properly, to let them feel how miserable life had been for her, she consoled herself that at least they were at this very moment dying of suffocation inside a log of her shit.\nThe wolfess felt herself growing again and gasped as she doubled in height, her feet growing to 130 feet in diameter.\n\"Oof,\" Mia groaned. \"That's some growth spurt!\"\nShe held her stomach and groaned. The sudden size increase made her bowels gurgle and slosh, and she quickly squatted again, aiming her ass at her parents' fancy house.\n\"You love that house so much? Here, go live in it!\"\nShe strained and shoved out a tower of shit 400 feet tall, landing it on top of the house. The building crumpled under the weight. The shit-log perched there on its end for just a second before falling over, crushing the Smith house, the one on the far side of it, and all the houses behind them.\nMia stood and turned to the pile of shit that used to be her parents' house.\n\"And there you have it,\" she snarled. \"You raised me in a shithole, and you died in one. Good riddance, you assholes!\"\nShe stomped on the pile, gritting her teeth and clenching her fists. Still not satisfied, she stomped it again, feeling it ooze between her toes.\n\"Fuck you, Mom and Dad!\" she screamed.\nShe turned and began to walk back down the road, but a sudden pain in her chest made her double over.\n\"Ow!\" she cried, clutching her chest, her breathing labored.\nHer chest felt unnervingly squishy, like fluid was building up under the skin.\n\"Th-that damn mortar,\" she panted, her chest heaving painfully. \"That was it, wasn't it?\" She shook her head angrily. \"N-no! It's not fair!\" \nTears came to her good eye and streamed from her eye-socket. \n\"My whole fucking life, I just wanted something good! What did I do to deserve all this? I was a good fur: kind to others, polite to my awful parents, made good grades…it's so unfair!\"\nShe sat down where she was, crushing half the neighborhood and sighing miserably.\n\"I just wanted a family-a loving family!\" she said numbly. \"I wanted to find someone who actually cared about me!\" \nKara's face flashed into her mind. \n\"Oh, Kara…\"\nShe blinked, and tears began to stream down her face. \n\"You found me, Kara… We were going to be so happy together. We were going to adopt some cubs and give them a good life, too! There was going to be so much love in our house…\"\nClenching her fists in anger, she swung her arm and cleared a quarter-mile semicircle around her.\n\"But then they took you away! And Jill…\"\nShe trailed off, sobbing. She couldn't bear to say it.\n\"I'm sorry, Kara,\" she cried, burying her face in her paws. \"I-I just…\"\nThe wound in her chest jolted her sharply. She gritted her teeth in pain and anger at unfairness of it all.\nFuck it. If I'm gonna die, I'm taking this cruel world with me! The whole fucking planet!", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Mia's Revenge: Chapter 9

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The wail of emergency sirens filled the air, alerting residents to stay in their homes and get someplace safe and protected.
Now almost as tall as three football fields stacked end-to-end, the giant wolfess stomped down the road towards her parents' home. It was surreal, seeing the houses down so far, as if she was in a plane looking down on the city from high above. The 2-story houses below her were now only came up to her ankles, and having only one good eye made judging distances difficult. Nevertheless, Mia was on a mission.
"When I get hold of those two, I'll-I'll-"
Mia snarled in frustration, still unsure of how she was going to make her parents pay for the misery she'd suffered.
"I know better from Jill-I can't just go straight into fucking them."
She scoffed and looked at her enormous cock. Just the tip was over a foot in diameter and quickly expanded to over 13 feet. Her knot when it was inflated was as wide as a semi-trailer is long. She shook her head. No, trying to fuck her parents would do nothing but squish them. She wanted them to suffer.
She turned into her parents' neighborhood-the best part of town. Of course, when she lived with them, they lived on the other side of the railroad tracks, where trying to avoid getting raped or shot was just a daily fact of life.
Maybe I should have let them rape me, Mia thought. Then I'd at least be used to it by the time Jill got her claws on me.
The houses here were huge-some even 20,000 square feet. It made Mia's blood boil to see how her parents had benefited at her expense. They didn't deserve to live here. Nobody did, and with footpads 50 feet in diameter, Mia was uniquely equipped to effect the residents' speedy eviction.
She grinned wolfishly and began stomping down the road, taking out two 50-foot-wide swathes where she deliberately scuffed her feet and ripped the enormous mansions in two.
She came to a stop at her parents' house, sited at the end of a cul-de-sac at the top of a hill. Of course, Mia hadn't lost all her social graces. She knew it was polite to knock. Stooping over and peering under the porch with her good eye, Mia carefully maneuvered her 6'-tall fingertip towards the door and tapped it gently.
The door slammed to the ground inside.
"Hello?" Mia said, her voice blowing through the house like a hurricane.
Her parents cautiously poked their heads out the front door and gasped.
"Hello, Mother. Hello, Father," the enormous wolfess said. Her words hinted at a boiling pool of malice barely concealed beneath her superficially pleasant tone.
"What do you want?" her mother demanded, looking up at her indignantly. "If you're here for money…"
"Is that Mia?" her father asked, stepping out and looking up at her. "We told you before: you need to stop pissing Jill off and be a good wife. Now what do you want? Spit it out! You're interrupting the news."
The 800-foot-tall wolfess stood dumbfounded, her mouth agape. She started to say something and then closed her mouth. How was it possible that her parents should shut her down when she was over 100 times their size?!
Get it together! You've fought through hell and back for this chance! she scolded herself.
"Wow, somebody actually knows my name!" the said finally. "It's actually good to hear it said, given in the last five years, I've been called every expletive and most recently, 'giant wolf-creature.'"
"So, you came to throw a temper tantrum? Is that it?" her mother asked, crossing her arms over her chest. "Well, go take your tantrum somewhere else. You're making a scene."
Mia's jaw snapped shut furiously.
"You're fucking unbelievable, you know that? For five years, I have begged you for help because Jill was violently raping me. All this time, I thought it was just a case of 'out of sight, out of mind,' but now here we all are-in person-and all you care about is that I'm making a scene? Hello?! I'm 800 feet tall. I am the fucking news, and I've been making a scene for fifty miles! Do you have any idea what I went through to get here? Have a look, you egotistical bitch!"
"Language, young lady!" her father scolded, but he was interrupted as she reached down, snatched them both up, and shoved them down towards the gaping hole in her side.
"This one came from a fucking missile that hit me and exploded. And this"-she swung them wildly through the air to see her other side-"this came from a car-door that drove itself into me when a city exploded all around me!"-her voice got louder and angrier the more she talked as she whipped them around to see her broken paw-"This came from a tank mortar bashing my paw on the outskirts of this very town. I came all this way to find you two, but I guess that even being 800 feet tall isn't enough for you to pay attention to your fucking daughter, is it? What do I have to do to get your attention? Huh? I've already destroyed two cities and took on the fucking army and won! What else do you want?"
"Slow down and quit being hysterical," her father said, ignoring her question. "You're making your mother and me nauseous with all this whipping around!"
Mia's eye twitched, and she shook with fury. But in the haze of her anger, she spied her parents' neighbor's house.
"You like the Smiths, don't you?" she asked abruptly, a cruel smile spreading over the wolfess's almost 100-foot-wide face.
"Yes," her father said. "They're nice furs, and their kids are very well-behaved."
"You could learn a thing or two from them," her mother added, glancing at Mia's enormous teeth. "Mia, dear, have you been brushing?" she asked. "You want to keep a nice, clean mouth for Jill."
"JILL IS FUCKING DEAD!" Mia screamed. "I FUCKED HER UNTIL SHE EXPLODED! DO YOU HEAR ME? DEAD!"
Fire blazed in the wolfess's good eye, but she forced herself to calm down. She didn't want to kill her parents-not yet-not until they finally realized the error of their ways. Wincing, she transferred them from her good paw into her broken one, holding them between her thumb and index finger; that didn't hurt too badly.
"You wretched daughter!" her father yelled. "The only thing you were ever good for was making us rich, and now you went and killed the fur who could do it!"
"Oh, you made that perfectly clear," Mia roared. "My whole life, you told me how worthless I was, and you took every bit of happiness from me! I finally had a chance at a happy life, and you went out of your way to make sure that couldn't happen! What did I ever do to you?"
"Life is just hard sometimes, dear," her mother said condescendingly. "You don't have to understand these things, but it's for the best!"
"Bullshit!" Mia snorted, fuming.
She took a breath and recomposed herself. "Your beloved dragon-child benefactor is no more," she said, her voice suddenly calm. "I finally took care of her, with absolutely no thanks to you. But let's invite the Smiths out. I would hate for you to be out here without your friends and their well-behaved kids."
"N-no, that's-" her father protested, but he was interrupted by the crash of the Smiths' roof being torn off. "Damn it, Mia! Quit making a scene!"
"Language, Jeremy," Mia's mother scolded him.
"Come out and play," Mia sing-songed, reaching down to pluck up the two parents. "You must be Mr. and Mrs. Smith," she said, pleasantly bowing her head. "I'm Jeremy and Nora's daughter."
The Smiths exchanged nervous glances. "D-daughter?" the husband asked, his complexion pale. "We didn't know they had a daughter." By the time he finished speaking, his voice was little more than a squeak.
"They don't talk about me much," Mia replied, glaring at her parents. "But they have great things to say about you! How are your kids?"
"They're fine," Mrs. Smith replied hastily. "They-they're fine, and we'd like them to stay that way."
Mia pouted. "Aww, is it because I'm 800 feet tall that everybody thinks I'm a monster?"
"You ate a handful of schoolkids!" protested Mr. Smith-Mr. Squeaky, Mia had just dubbed him.
Mia shrugged. "Only one. They weren't very filling." She shook her head, her dangling eye whipping around and making her hiss in pain. "That's beside the point though. Come, come, let's see the little tykes. Francis, Stella!" she called, "Come out and play!"
The front door of the mansion opened, and two tiny heads poked out.
"Whoa!" Francis gasped, staring up at Mia in awe. "It's her! The one from the news!"
"Francis, get inside!" Mrs. Squeaky yelped in terror, seeing the look Mia gave them. "Get inside this instant!"
"But Mom!" the young fur protested, walking out onto the driveway, "This is awesome! She's even bigger in person! Stella, come look at this!"
An even younger fur stepped out behind her big brother, looking up at Mia with far less enthusiasm and much more trepidation.
"Kids, please!" Mrs. Squeaky cried. "Do as I say and get inside!"
"But Mom, you get to ride around in her hand!" Francis said, stepping out to the street and craning his neck to look up at Mia. "I wanna ride in her hand, too!"
Mia grinned. These brats don't obey half as well as I do-er, did!
"No! Please, please, don't hurt my babies!" Mrs. Squeaky begged, bursting into tears. "Please, they're innocent! They haven't done anything!"
"You know, I was young and innocent once," Mia recollected. "I had a girlfriend, and I thought we were going to be married." She sighed, thinking sadly of Kara. "But my parents took out a restraining order against her and forced me to marry a monster, who raped me every day with her saw-tooth dick and pissed and shat all over me." She shook her head and lowered her hand containing the Smiths to the ground, looking like she was going to let them go.
Instead, she said, "Climb on, kids," smiling sweetly. "Careful, now. Francis, help your sister."
Francis's face lit up, and he scrambled up onto one of Mia's claws, then bent down to help his sister get her footing, and the two carefully picked their way down to the wolfess's enormous palm.
"Wow!" Francis cried in delight, "You're like a huge, living jungle gym!"
"I am, aren't I?" Mia asked, raising her hand to eye level and grinning toothily at them. "And you're like a tiny snack!"
The Smiths shrieked in horror as Mia flung the cubs into her mouth and slowly closed her sharp teeth down on them. Her first chew decapitated Francis, his little head popping off his body as the wolfess's teeth cut him in two. Blood spurted from his neck, and a look of bewildered terror permanently etched itself on his face.
It took a few chews for her to actually get Stella. The young fur was agile and dodged her teeth a few times, but Mia's tongue was agiler, flicked her into the air, and guided her, screaming in terror, into the crevice between Mia's teeth.
With a chomp, Stella was no more, replaced by a bloody splatter between Mia's teeth.
"You monster! What did they ever do to you?" Mrs. Smith bawled. "They were innocent furs with bright futures! They were good kids, and we loved them!" She sobbed uncontrollably as Mr. Smith freed his hands to comfort her numbly, too shocked himself to react.
"Life is just hard sometimes," Mia said coldly. "You don't have to understand these things, but it's for the best," she mocked, enunciating deliberately. "Isn't that right, Mother?"
"Mia!" her parents gasped breathlessly.
"Sound familiar?" the wolfess growled, cocking her head. "Have I finally gotten your attention, then? It only took five years and eating your neighbor's children, but I finally did it!"
"My babies! Oh, my poor babies!" Mrs. Smith shrieked. "How could you? Why? Why?!"
"Aww," Mia pouted again. "What kind of monster would I be if I took a mother's children from her? That's awfully mean, isn't it?" She almost looked sorry. "But I'm no monster! Go and join your kids!" she spat, tossing the Smiths into her mouth and angrily chewing them up, smacking loudly. "Look, Mom and Dad, I'm chewing with my mouth open!" she sneered.
Mia's sudden surge of anger and violence made her start growing again. Buildings collapsed around her ankles as her feet swelled in proportion to her height. Her parents looked on, aghast and suddenly realizing that they were in a very dangerous spot. For the first time, they were actually afraid she might hurt them, too.
"Mia! Please, we're sorry!" they began to beg over the deafening crash of buildings.
"Oh, now you're sorry?" Mia scoffed. "No, you're not! You just want me to let you go. You don't care about me! I'll prove it!"
Taking a deep breath and grasping her bad eye in her hand, she ripped it off with a blood-curdling shriek.
"See?!" she screamed through the pain as she shoved the blinded eyeball at them. It was bleeding, gouged all over, and covered in dirt and shrapnel.
"You don't care that this hurts me! You just want to save your own fucking skin!"
She threw her eyeball into her mouth and began chewing it as noisily and sloppily as she could, moving her parents down to mouth level so she could shower them with bits of flying eyeball and spittle. Snarling and gnashing her teeth as the agonized pain of her severed eye continued, she chewed the filthy thing into mush and swallowed it.
"Mia, please!" her mother screamed, turning her head away and throwing up. "We weren't the best parents! We admit it! We're sorry! But what do you hope to achieve?!"
"You have to be reasonable!" her father chimed in, his chest heaving where he'd already vomited. "We can't undo anything that's been done! What do you want? Do you want us to go back into a time machine and not marry you off to Jill? We can't do that! All we can do is forgive and move forward!"
A deep, ominous rumbling started in Mia's gut and spread to her chest. "Ha. Haha! HAHAHA!" she laughed. A wicked grin traced over the wolfess's face as she transferred them back to her good hand. "You actually expect me to forgive you for what you've done, when only minutes ago you were still ignoring me? Wow."
She shook her head, and for once, her eyeball didn't tug on her optic nerve and cause excruciating pain.
"You two are so full of shit that my eyes are-well, eye is-turning brown, and I'm taller than the Eiffel Tower! I always knew that you were awful parents! I might have even called you shitty parents before in a moment of weakness." She laughed again, her voice now jovial. "Goodbye, Mother. Goodbye, Father. It's time you put your bodies where your words are."
With that, she squatted down and shoved her parents up her ass, making sure to push them good and deep up inside the brown, sticky mess she felt against her fingers. They wriggled a little bit but then held still.
She stood up and sighed. Her parents were no more. They'd been taught a painful lesson, and while Mia wished they were big enough for her to fuck properly, to let them feel how miserable life had been for her, she consoled herself that at least they were at this very moment dying of suffocation inside a log of her shit.
The wolfess felt herself growing again and gasped as she doubled in height, her feet growing to 130 feet in diameter.
"Oof," Mia groaned. "That's some growth spurt!"
She held her stomach and groaned. The sudden size increase made her bowels gurgle and slosh, and she quickly squatted again, aiming her ass at her parents' fancy house.
"You love that house so much? Here, go live in it!"
She strained and shoved out a tower of shit 400 feet tall, landing it on top of the house. The building crumpled under the weight. The shit-log perched there on its end for just a second before falling over, crushing the Smith house, the one on the far side of it, and all the houses behind them.
Mia stood and turned to the pile of shit that used to be her parents' house.
"And there you have it," she snarled. "You raised me in a shithole, and you died in one. Good riddance, you assholes!"
She stomped on the pile, gritting her teeth and clenching her fists. Still not satisfied, she stomped it again, feeling it ooze between her toes.
"Fuck you, Mom and Dad!" she screamed.
She turned and began to walk back down the road, but a sudden pain in her chest made her double over.
"Ow!" she cried, clutching her chest, her breathing labored.
Her chest felt unnervingly squishy, like fluid was building up under the skin.
"Th-that damn mortar," she panted, her chest heaving painfully. "That was it, wasn't it?" She shook her head angrily. "N-no! It's not fair!"
Tears came to her good eye and streamed from her eye-socket.
"My whole fucking life, I just wanted something good! What did I do to deserve all this? I was a good fur: kind to others, polite to my awful parents, made good grades…it's so unfair!"
She sat down where she was, crushing half the neighborhood and sighing miserably.
"I just wanted a family-a loving family!" she said numbly. "I wanted to find someone who actually cared about me!"
Kara's face flashed into her mind.
"Oh, Kara…"
She blinked, and tears began to stream down her face.
"You found me, Kara… We were going to be so happy together. We were going to adopt some cubs and give them a good life, too! There was going to be so much love in our house…"
Clenching her fists in anger, she swung her arm and cleared a quarter-mile semicircle around her.
"But then they took you away! And Jill…"
She trailed off, sobbing. She couldn't bear to say it.
"I'm sorry, Kara," she cried, burying her face in her paws. "I-I just…"
The wound in her chest jolted her sharply. She gritted her teeth in pain and anger at unfairness of it all.
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