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Lgnoto owner of Steven
BataBunny22 owner of Michael
Me owner of story", "writing": "\t“Where is he? He's thirty minutes late,” muttered a slender white bunny.\n\n\tMichael was standing in front of his favorite Italian restaurant, waiting for his boyfriend to show up. The bunny was wearing the regular fashion of the day, a t-shirt, and jeans. He had one golden hoop at the tip of his right ear. His boyfriend, Steven, had had some homework to finish up before their date, but it didn't explain why he was late now. Michael checked his watch again impatiently. He heard a flapping of wings above him, and grinned slightly. The golden owl landed right next to the bunny wearing the same clothes, and pulled Michael into a deep kiss. The pair broke apart, and looked lovingly at each other. \n\n\t“You're late.”\n\n\tThe owl laughed. “Yeah, quite a pile of homework tonight. I thought of you every minute though.” \n\n\tMichael was softened by the statement, and kissed his love again, as his stomach growled. \n\n\t“Well, I've been keeping you waiting long enough, let's go eat,” laughed Steven hearing the bunny's stomach. \n\n\tThe pair walked into the restaurant, and were seated immediately at a booth. The booth was slightly secluded, obscured by plants and walls from mostly every other table. They both sat on the same side, Steven wrapped his wing around the smaller bunny, as Michael told him about his day. \n\n\t“... and my professor was a jackass today, assigned us three chapters worth of problems to do for homework,” sighed Michael. \n\n\tSteven just tightened his wing around his love and nuzzled him. \n\n\t“I'll help you if you need, math isn't that bad.”\n\n\tBoth chuckled as the waitress came up and took their orders. She gave the pair a look over, and just smiled, asking for their drinks. They both ordered Dr. Pepper, and she bustled off to put in the order. \n\n\t“So how was your day baby?” Asked Michael. \n\n\t“Busy as usual. Worked all day, but I'm liking this part so much more.” \n\n\tMichael grinned and snuggled into the owl's soft feathers hidden under his t-shirt. The waitress came back a few minutes later with their drinks. Both ordered their meal and went back to snuggling with each other in their secluded booth. The snuggling quickly turned into a serious make-out session, with only breaks to take a full breath before diving in again. Both hurriedly broke apart chuckling, and blushing nervously as the waitress appeared again with their food. The pair ate their food in silence, sneakily picking off each other's plate and giggling when caught. They quickly finished up their meal, and payed the check, leaving the waitress a big tip for her kindness, and for putting up with the make-out. \n\n\t“So what would you like to do for tonight?” Asked Michael. \n\n\t“How does a nice night at home sound to you?”\n\n\t“I think it sounds perfect, as long as it's with you,” said Michael, giving Steven a kiss on the cheek.\n\n\tTheir shared apartment was only a few blocks away. They walked, muttering sweet things to each other, holding hands, and pressing tight together. They reached the building, and began laborious climb up to their eighth floor apartment. \n\n\t“When do you think they'll finally put an elevator in this place?” Puffed Steven rounding the sixth floor stairway. \n\n\t“I wouldn't let you use it anyway, need to keep the belly trimmed,” snickered Michael, turning back and poking Steven's thin belly. \n\n\tThey panted up the last few steps and stepped out into their corridor. Michael made it to the door first, and unlocked it. He glanced back at Steven, who seemed to be hanging back intentionally. Steven motioned for him to look inside. Looking into their living room, the bunny let out a gasp. Candles were flaming all over the room, a sweet scent in the air. He stared back at Steven his mouth wide open.\n\n\t“Homework wasn't the only thing keeping me,” said Steven with a chuckle. \n\n\tSteven strode forward and took Michael in his wing, nuzzling his feathered cheek against the bunny's and walked him into the apartment. There were flower petals layered out along the couch and floor, spreading a flowery scent. Steven led Michael to the couch, and laid down with the bunny on top of him. Michael started gently kissing the owl under him. Steven's hands quickly found their way up the bunny's shirt, rubbing his back and chest. Michael broke away just long enough to pull his t-shirt off before diving onto Steven's mouth again. Steven started to work on Michael's belt and pants slipping a claw in to rub at the bunny's growing erection. Michael stood up breaking the kiss and dropped his pants. Steven could feel his own tent after looking at his lover.\n\n\t“Wanna take care of me baby?”\n\n\tMichael grinned in response and fell to Steven's crotch. Expertly undoing the belt and button, springing Steven's 6 in cock free from its confines. Taking the entire shaft as he had many times before, lubing it up for the real fun. Steven felt the pleasure immediately spread throughout his body, and his cock harden all the more. Moaning out loudly, Steven gently placed a hand on Michael's head forcing a bit more cock in. The bunny moaned from the gentle push, vibrating the owl cock in his mouth, making Steven moan even more. After a time of blow job and lubing, Michael found his way back to Steven's lips. Kissing his love deeply, he broke.\n\n\t“I'm ready for you lovely,” Michael whispered. \n\n\tWith the prompt, Steven kissed the bunny again, and pushed his way into the waiting hole. Michael moaned loudly into the kiss as the owl's cock entered his ass. The pair broke apart again, panting heavily. Steven began to pound the bunny butt harder, answering Miachael's unspoken wish. \n\n\t“Like it baby?” Panted Steven. \n\n\tMichael just answered with a great groan of pleasure from the pounding he was receiving. Steven sped up the pace again, causing the bunny to collapse on top of him. The owl wrapped both arms around the bunny, keeping his close to pound his ass. After half an hour of pounding at the bunny's ass, Steven could feel the pressure building up in his cock. \n\n\t“Love, it's almost time, you ready?”\n\n\t“I've been ready for the last 10 minutes,” whispered Michael. \n\n\tWith the encouragement, Steven pounded the last few thrusts, and sprayed his load deep down into Michael. The bunny moaned loudly at the warmth filling him up, and sprayed his own load all over Steven's shirt and face. Sprays kept coming from both cock, filling up Michael's ass till it leaked, and coating Steven in a layer of cum. After both orgasms had calmed down, both went to work on cleaning Steven up, frenching the cum every so often. Finally, after cleaning up Steven as much as possible, Michael snuggled into Steven, still sitting on the owl's cock. \n\n\t“I want to sleep here tonight.” \n\n\tSteven snickered, “Looks like I don't have much of a choice now do I?”\n\n\tMichael shook is head and snuggled is head into the owl's plumage.\n\n\t“I love you Michael.”\n\n\t“I love you too Steven.” \n\n\t\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "\t“Where is he? He's thirty minutes late,” muttered a slender white bunny.

\tMichael was standing in front of his favorite Italian restaurant, waiting for his boyfriend to show up. The bunny was wearing the regular fashion of the day, a t-shirt, and jeans. He had one golden hoop at the tip of his right ear. His boyfriend, Steven, had had some homework to finish up before their date, but it didn't explain why he was late now. Michael checked his watch again impatiently. He heard a flapping of wings above him, and grinned slightly. The golden owl landed right next to the bunny wearing the same clothes, and pulled Michael into a deep kiss. The pair broke apart, and looked lovingly at each other.

\t“You're late.”

\tThe owl laughed. “Yeah, quite a pile of homework tonight. I thought of you every minute though.”

\tMichael was softened by the statement, and kissed his love again, as his stomach growled.

\t“Well, I've been keeping you waiting long enough, let's go eat,” laughed Steven hearing the bunny's stomach.  

\tThe pair walked into the restaurant, and were seated immediately at a booth. The booth was slightly secluded, obscured by plants and walls from mostly every other table. They both sat on the same side, Steven wrapped his wing around the smaller bunny, as Michael told him about his day.

\t“... and my professor was a jackass today, assigned us three chapters worth of problems to do for homework,” sighed Michael.

\tSteven just tightened his wing around his love and nuzzled him.

\t“I'll help you if you need, math isn't that bad.”

\tBoth chuckled as the waitress came up and took their orders. She gave the pair a look over, and just smiled, asking for their drinks. They both ordered Dr. Pepper, and she bustled off to put in the order.

\t“So how was your day baby?” Asked Michael.

\t“Busy as usual. Worked all day, but I'm liking this part so much more.”

\tMichael grinned and snuggled into the owl's soft feathers hidden under his t-shirt. The waitress came back a few minutes later with their drinks. Both ordered their meal and went back to snuggling with each other in their secluded booth. The snuggling quickly turned into a serious make-out session, with only breaks to take a full breath before diving in again. Both hurriedly broke apart chuckling, and blushing nervously as the waitress appeared again with their food. The pair ate their food in silence, sneakily picking off each other's plate and giggling when caught. They quickly finished up their meal, and payed the check, leaving the waitress a big tip for her kindness, and for putting up with the make-out.

\t“So what would you like to do for tonight?” Asked Michael.

\t“How does a nice night at home sound to you?”

\t“I think it sounds perfect, as long as it's with you,” said Michael, giving Steven a kiss on the cheek.

\tTheir shared apartment was only a few blocks away. They walked, muttering sweet things to each other, holding hands, and pressing tight together. They reached the building, and began laborious climb up to their eighth floor apartment.

\t“When do you think they'll finally put an elevator in this place?” Puffed Steven rounding the sixth floor stairway.

\t“I wouldn't let you use it anyway, need to keep the belly trimmed,” snickered Michael, turning back and poking Steven's thin belly.

\tThey panted up the last few steps and stepped out into their corridor. Michael made it to the door first, and unlocked it. He glanced back at Steven, who seemed to be hanging back intentionally. Steven motioned for him to look inside. Looking into their living room, the bunny let out a gasp. Candles were flaming all over the room, a sweet scent in the air. He stared back at Steven his mouth wide open.

\t“Homework wasn't the only thing keeping me,” said Steven with a chuckle.

\tSteven strode forward and took Michael in his wing, nuzzling his feathered cheek against the bunny's and walked him into the apartment. There were flower petals layered out along the couch and floor, spreading a flowery scent. Steven led Michael to the couch, and laid down with the bunny on top of him. Michael started gently kissing the owl under him. Steven's hands quickly found their way up the bunny's shirt, rubbing his back and chest. Michael broke away just long enough to pull his t-shirt off before diving onto Steven's mouth again. Steven started to work on Michael's belt and pants slipping a claw in to rub at the bunny's growing erection. Michael stood up breaking the kiss and dropped his pants. Steven could feel his own tent after looking at his lover.

\t“Wanna take care of me baby?”

\tMichael grinned in response and fell to Steven's crotch. Expertly undoing the belt and button, springing Steven's 6 in cock free from its confines. Taking the entire shaft as he had many times before, lubing it up for the real fun. Steven felt the pleasure immediately spread throughout his body, and his cock harden all the more. Moaning out loudly, Steven gently placed a hand on Michael's head forcing a bit more cock in. The bunny moaned from the gentle push, vibrating the owl cock in his mouth, making Steven moan even more. After a time of blow job and lubing, Michael found his way back to Steven's lips. Kissing his love deeply, he broke.

\t“I'm ready for you lovely,” Michael whispered.

\tWith the prompt, Steven kissed the bunny again, and pushed his way into the waiting hole. Michael moaned loudly into the kiss as the owl's cock entered his ass. The pair broke apart again, panting heavily. Steven began to pound the bunny butt harder, answering Miachael's unspoken wish.

\t“Like it baby?” Panted Steven.

\tMichael just answered with a great groan of pleasure from the pounding he was receiving. Steven sped up the pace again, causing the bunny to collapse on top of him. The owl wrapped both arms around the bunny, keeping his close to pound his ass. After half an hour of pounding at the bunny's ass, Steven could feel the pressure building up in his cock.

\t“Love, it's almost time, you ready?”

\t“I've been ready for the last 10 minutes,” whispered Michael.

\tWith the encouragement, Steven pounded the last few thrusts, and sprayed his load deep down into Michael. The bunny moaned loudly at the warmth filling him up, and sprayed his own load all over Steven's shirt and face. Sprays kept coming from both cock, filling up Michael's ass till it leaked, and coating Steven in a layer of cum. After both orgasms had calmed down, both went to work on cleaning Steven up, frenching the cum every so often. Finally, after cleaning up Steven as much as possible, Michael snuggled into Steven, still sitting on the owl's cock.

\t“I want to sleep here tonight.”

\tSteven snickered, “Looks like I don't have much of a choice now do I?”

\tMichael shook is head and snuggled is head into the owl's plumage.

\t“I love you Michael.”

\t“I love you too Steven.”  

\t

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