See Part 2: https://inkbunny.net/s/3353093
This is the final product of a two-item polished piece commission by Dimalad!
Story below, and then some author notes:
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Story Start
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BRAAP! Gurgle... squeeeeze~
Twilight wrinkled her nose in disgust, recoiling a little as the walls of Discord's stomach compressed even more tightly and affectionately around her melting body. It didn't hurt; Twilight had quickly discovered that she wasn't going to need to worry about pain inside of the draconequis. But it still felt violating, like Discord was hugging her himself. She sighed. He probably was.
Her lower half had started to dissolve in earnest, softening into goo and bones that were already being slowly sucked down into Discord's intestines. It felt... strange. Not bad, but strange. Like being stretched. But she had bigger distractions to take her mind off of that.
"Rarity, just..." Twilight started, but trailed off. Rarity was thrashing above her, screaming threats at the top of her lungs.
For a moment, Twilight felt a pang of sympathy. Rarity didn't deal well with humiliation. Or messes. Or being trapped. Or, Twilight mused, being slowly dissolved into goo. For most of her friends this would be at worst violating, irritating. Heck, Pinkie Pie was probably enjoying it. But for Rarity this was the height of indignity, painless or not. It didn't matter that it wouldn't hurt for her hair to slowly separate, her body to soften and mix with gastric juices, her remains pumping through Discord's bowels. Just seeing it happen would be bad enough for her. In fact-
*Whomp!*
A particularly heavy kick from Rarity caused Discord to chuckle and release some air, which caused Rarity to shift and inadvertently slam her butt right down onto Twilight's face. Okay, sympathy over. The unicorn was not helping.
"Rarity", Twilight began carefully, "I have some of the most powerful magic in Equestria at my disposal, and I have tried all of it, and if I can't get out of Discord's stomach, then kicking him will not-" Celestia above, she wasn't listening. "RARITY IF YOU KICK HIM THAT MAKES HIM-"
*Buuurp!*
They were really pressed against each other now. Twilight breathed in very deeply to calm herself, and then regretted it immediately as acidic steam filled her nostrils and made her cough. It didn't hurt. It just...
"It's fine." Twilight thought to herself. "It's OK, we're going to get reformed later, and I'm not going to say anything that I regret. Rarity is my friend. I'm just going to cast a sphere of silence and Celestia damn all of us, send me to the fucking moon, my horn is melting, I can't cast. Fuck. No. It's OK. She's still my friend. My stupid, stubborn friend who freaks out because her mane gets gross, and-"
"You know," Discord's thoughts interjected, "some ponies would say that thinking bad things about our friends is just the same as saying them."
"...Discord, please shut up."
"I'm only saying~ Are you really being a good friend right now?"
Twilight breathed deeply and then noticed there wasn't any breathable air for her to take in, just caustic gasses that were slowly softening her lungs with every breath, dissolving her from the inside out. When had the air run out? Why hadn't she noticed? And how was Rarity still screaming threats?
"Don't worry dear, I'll make sure you're around for everything~" Discord teased. "Why, if you went unconscious just from running out of air, you'd miss out on so much fun!"
Twilight scowled. Yeah, figures.
A loud slurp from above indicated that Discord had started on his next meal. At least he wouldn't be able to burp now... until the third pony got pushed in and then he'd tighten down even further. Rarity was still kicking. Every time she slammed a hoof into the side of the stomach, her body shifted on top of Twilight. This was not going to stop if another pony joined the mix, but by that time Twilight's body would be more digested, so... Twilight instinctively started doing the math, even half liquefied she couldn't stop herself from calculating. But it turned out that Rarity could stop her. The increasingly colorful threats were making it impossible for Twilight to focus.
Twilight did a much lighter math problem on how long it would take for her to lose patience and snap at her friend, and she didn't like the answer she came up with. Resigned, she focused her thoughts upwards again.
"Hey Discord, let's make a deal," she thought. "Cast a silence sphere in here and you can keep me as pudge for a full day."
She could practically hear Discord laughing inside of her mind. "A full day!? How generous! How about a week?"
Twilight shook her head as best as she could with it pressed between a butt and a stomach wall. "Out of the question. Three days?"
"Hmm...", Discord mused. "It would be nice to have some one-on-one time with you. You know, I've been meaning to catch up with you, dear, it's been ages! But for such short time? And I thought we were friends, Twilight! We have such fascinating conversations about magic, and in three days I'd barely get another chance to let you experience a digestion from my stomach's point of view. And it is your bad temper that's the risk here, it's not me who's going to-"
"Discord, you know, there is a fine line between being annoying and an asshole."
Surprisingly, that seemed to actually get through. Discord paused, clearly embarrassed at the rebuke. His thoughts stammered for a second as he searched for a way to save face.
"Okay... fair," Discord finally replied, a bit more serious. "Maybe I did take things a little far. How about this? Two days, and silence affects everything but my body." He shifted back into his more jovial tone. "It's so interesting being liquefied, you don't want to miss the way that sounds, right?"
Twilight did in fact want to miss that, but her student brain took over before her temper could react. "You mean selective silence? How would that... work? Is that a 'you' thing or a-"
Discord chuckled in her mind. "I'll take that as a 'yes'! And it is a 'me' thing, but it's also possible for unicorns. You have several fundamental misunderstandings about-" He cut himself off. "Look at you distracting me when I should be attending just to Applejack! Well we'll talk about all that later; for now you have other things to focus on~"
Rarity's shouting went completely silent and was replaced by increasingly frequent gurgles. With the noise gone, Twilight was struck by how much of her was now in two places. Her entire lower half was being slurped along the guts beneath her, parts of it mixing in with Rainbow's goop. She fidgeted a little at the awkwardness of the strange, intimate contact. It felt like the intestines were pulling her out of herself. She expected that they were; the walls were siphoning out her nutrients and consciousness bit by bit until only waste would remain. Rarity was still flailing above her, but by now both of the ponies were soft enough that it didn't feel that bad. Discord's stomach walls were now completely engrossed in massaging her, mixing her body, squeezing and releasing her with wet glorps. Twilight could swear that they had gotten louder.
She took another deep breath of acidic gasses and squirmed a little as bits of her organs started to drip down into the goop below. It tickled a little, made her feel sluggish, like she was trapped in goo. Like she was goo. The stomach walls responded eagerly to her movement, squashing against her again, and again, and again. She could feel Rarity's font hooves start to mix into her.
Another gulp from below and another big glob of Twilight was sucked down. As her consciousness began to collect inside the stored nutrients and mingle with Discord's cells, a strange, almost disorienting feeling of absorbing herself was beginning to surface. She sighed, and tried her best to think about selective spells.
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Art/Author Notes
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Both of these pieces have been a ton of fun to work on. I'll upload a more detailed breakdown of some progress shots and process separately since I think it'll be a useful tool to let fluffers know what my commission process is like, but the short version is that we did a lot of stream sessions, bounced ideas off of each other, and it was just a really collaborative experience <3
Similar to part #2, a big focus was giving each pony their own experiences and reaction :3 The accompanying thought-bubble animation plays with that idea a little bit more, but I love when a piece has a lot of different details and things going on that a viewer can notice and focus on.
Finally, I do want to mention as well, while I don't know what the full details are I know that Dimalad is planning on getting some extra writing done around these pictures with some really talented writers, and whenever I see any of their pieces go up I'll link them at the top as well <3 So if you like the premise but wanted to hear from another pony's perspective... check back, or pay attention to Dimalad's page/likes, there might be more stuff coming at some point. Ow<
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