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Hope you guys enjoy it though ^_^", "description_bbcode_parsed": "A story written because I'm a bit depressed right now. Hope you guys enjoy it though ^_^", "writing": "\tPlot-A love square between Sonic,Shadow, Silver, and Mephiles. Follow them as each must decide on who they love, and weather or not they will let jealousy take over their lives. \n\nShadow's POV \n\tI don't know if many have ever felt what it was like being with a cold body, but I have. Mephiles body was always like whenever I was with him. He felt so cold and distant from me no matter how many times we made 'love' together. Though I don't know if I could call it making love, since it felt more like he just did it out of lust. \n\tBut Sonic's body was so different. It was warm, and has a sense of passion to it that I hadn't felt from anyone in a long time. \n\t He wrapped his hands around my back gently, carefully putting me into a comfortable position. \n\tI won't deny that when we first met, I hated it when he touched me, but not anymore.\n\t“You sure you're up to this. You look really tired.”\n\t“Y-yeah, I'm fine. Go ahead.”\n\tSonic smiled gently, and slowly inserted himself into me. It defiantly hurt, like it always did. But he was gentle, never going too fast or too deep unless I wanted him too. \n\tHe pressed his lips against my neck, and slowly began to move up against me. His soft moans entered my ears, causing myself to get turned on.\n\t“Shadow, c-can I g-go a bit faster?” I nodded and Sonic smiled. \n\tSoon his body went faster against mine, and his voice grew a bit louder. The deeper her went, the tighter my hands grabbed onto his back. \n\tAt first it was really painful, but like always, my body got use to it and it began to felt good. \n\t“Ahhh~” I hated it when he managed to get me to shout out like that, but Sonic was very skilled at finding my sensitive spot. And whenever he did that, he made sure to always go there. “C-can y-you not ahhh...do that?!”\n\t“S-sorry. C-can't help it.”\n\tI glared at him, but Sonic wasn't threatened by me. Instead he kissed me tenderly, sending a wave of pleasure throughout my entire body.\n\t It was his kisses that I longed and loved the most. I closed my eyes and inserted my tongue into his mouth, causing both of us to moan. \t\n\tAs we did that, Sonic began to move fast into me. He parted from my lips and put his face back into my neck. It took me a moment to realize that our bodies were tensing up against each other. \n\tSonic bit into my neck, clearly trying to stop himself from moaning. It didn't work, and in just a few seconds, I was lucky enough to here his wonderful voice in my ear. yelling out my name. \n\tIt felt like his cock had grown inside me, and it was harder for my body to take it in. Still, it was pleasurable, so much that I wrapped my legs along his waste. That position always made it easier for the one on top. \n\t“Ahhh~Shadow...I~I'm close...”\n\t“M-me too.”\n\tSonic's speed increased. I couldn't help but begin to moan along with him. In an instant, I felt us both cum at the same time. Sonic quickly kissed me before he came, and we ended up yelling into each other's mouth. \n\tWhen we finally were finished, Sonic parted from me and laid his head into the pillow panting. We still held each other tightly, but I could hear small whimpers coming from him. \n\tLike always after doing this, we both realized our horrible mistakes. \n\n\nSilver's Pov \n\tI don't know why Shadow told Mephiles. It would've been better if he said nothing to him, then he wouldn't have to go through this. But after Sonic and him found out what I'd seen, I guessed he became guilty. \n\tThe words filthy, loathing,bastard, and lies kept coming into my ears, most of them being said by Mephiles. I guess I couldn't really have blamed him much. He loves Shadow more then anything, and this was truly the ultimate betrayal. Shadow was surprisingly calm though, only yelling whenever there was some crash. \n\tAs I kept listening, I heard Sonic come in. He stayed against the wall as I just stared at the ceiling. \n\t“Silver,” he said cooly.\n\t“Yes?” I asked, not even looking up to him. \n\t“We need to talk.”\n\t“There's nothing to talk about. I get why you did it. I deserved it.”\n\t“How can you say that?!” he said, finally breaking his calmness. \n\tI sat halfway up from the couch, and looked to him. “I forgive you Sonic, and Shadow. I don't blame you for what you did. After all, you've always had feelings for each other right?”\n\t“Well yes but-”\n\tI laid back down. “Don't worry. Things will be fine. Mephiles and Shadow will make up soon like they always do. “\n\tHe was silent for a moment. I just kicked my feet up and down, still trying to here everything Shadow and Mephiles were saying. \n\t“This isn't like you Silver....”\n\tI pulled my head up back to him. “What do you mean?”\n\t“Usually if something like this happened, you'd get all emotional and we'd be fighting like they are. Why aren't you like that?”\n\tI sat up, and put my knees to my face, still looking at Sonic. He couldn't do the same however, which did hurt me a little. \n\t“I don't know really. Maybe because I always suspected you guys were attracted to each other.”\nI tilted my head and smiled. “But it's alright. We can make it through this, can't we?”\n\tSonic didn't answer my question, which caused my heart to almost stop. “Silver....I don't think we can.” My eyes widened. “The truth is, I've always loved Shadow even before you and I met. But when I learned he went with Mephiles, I felt like my life was almost over.”\n\t“Are you saying I was a rebound?”\n\t“K-kind off. But don't get me wrong, I do care for you...” He looked back to me.“I'm sorry Silver...I didn't mean to lead you on these past six months.”\n\tShouldn't I have been crying when hearing him say that, or at least go into a fit a range? That would've been the right reaction, yet I was just silent. “Silver?” he asked concernedly. I didn't answer back, but instead stood up and headed to the door.\n\t“I-I need to go out for a while Sonic....I-I'll be back later.”\n\t“Silver! Wait! I-I didn't say that I didn't love you.”\n\t“Bye...”\n\t“Silver!” But I ran out before he could finish. \n\n\n\tI was defiantly growing up. I didn't cry, or let my anger get to me at all. Blaze would've been so proud. However, that was just a lie. I was crying now, screaming into the ground like I'd just lost everything; which maybe I really did. \n\tI could hear things break around me because of my powers, and glass cracked from the lamps in the street. “Dammit... Dammit.... Dammit! Dammit! Dammit! Why?! Why did you do this to me?! To us?!”\n\tI kept repeating the same things over to myself, hoping that Sonic would come to me and hold me tightly, telling me that it was all just a cruel joke. \n\tBut he didn't come, and I knew he wasn't going to.\n\t I had lost something that I thought was great, and I wasn't ever going to get it back. \n\t", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "\tPlot-A love square between Sonic,Shadow, Silver, and Mephiles. Follow them as each must decide on who they love, and weather or not they will let jealousy take over their lives.

Shadow's POV
\tI don't know if many have ever felt what it was like being with a cold body, but I have. Mephiles body was always like whenever I was with him. He felt so cold and distant from me no matter how many times we made 'love' together. Though I don't know if I could call it making love, since it felt more like he just did it out of lust.
\tBut Sonic's body was so different. It was warm, and has a sense of passion to it that I hadn't felt from anyone in a long time.
\t He wrapped his hands around my back gently, carefully putting me into a comfortable position.
\tI won't deny that when we first met, I hated it when he touched me, but not anymore.
\t“You sure you're up to this. You look really tired.”
\t“Y-yeah, I'm fine. Go ahead.”
\tSonic smiled gently, and slowly inserted himself into me. It defiantly hurt, like it always did. But he was gentle, never going too fast or too deep unless I wanted him too.
\tHe pressed his lips against my neck, and slowly began to move up against me. His soft moans entered my ears, causing myself to get turned on.
\t“Shadow, c-can I g-go a bit faster?” I nodded and Sonic smiled.
\tSoon his body went faster against mine, and his voice grew a bit louder. The deeper her went, the tighter my hands grabbed onto his back.
\tAt first it was really painful, but like always, my body got use to it and it began to felt good.
\t“Ahhh~” I hated it when he managed to get me to shout out like that, but Sonic was very skilled at finding my sensitive spot. And whenever he did that, he made sure to always go there. “C-can y-you not ahhh...do that?!”
\t“S-sorry. C-can't help it.”
\tI glared at him, but Sonic wasn't threatened by me. Instead he kissed me tenderly, sending a wave of pleasure throughout my entire body.
\t It was his kisses that I longed and loved the most. I closed my eyes and inserted my tongue into his mouth, causing both of us to moan. \t
\tAs we did that, Sonic began to move fast into me. He parted from my lips and put his face back into my neck. It took me a moment to realize that our bodies were tensing up against each other.
\tSonic bit into my neck, clearly trying to stop himself from moaning. It didn't work, and in just a few seconds, I was lucky enough to here his wonderful voice in my ear. yelling out my name.
\tIt felt like his cock had grown inside me, and it was harder for my body to take it in. Still, it was pleasurable, so much that I wrapped my legs along his waste. That position always made it easier for the one on top.
\t“Ahhh~Shadow...I~I'm close...”
\t“M-me too.”
\tSonic's speed increased. I couldn't help but begin to moan along with him. In an instant, I felt us both cum at the same time. Sonic quickly kissed me before he came, and we ended up yelling into each other's mouth.
\tWhen we finally were finished, Sonic parted from me and laid his head into the pillow panting. We still held each other tightly, but I could hear small whimpers coming from him.
\tLike always after doing this, we both realized our horrible mistakes.


Silver's Pov
\tI don't know why Shadow told Mephiles. It would've been better if he said nothing to him, then he wouldn't have to go through this. But after Sonic and him found out what I'd seen, I guessed he became guilty.
\tThe words filthy, loathing,bastard, and lies kept coming into my ears, most of them being said by Mephiles. I guess I couldn't really have blamed him much. He loves Shadow more then anything, and this was truly the ultimate betrayal. Shadow was surprisingly calm though, only yelling whenever there was some crash.
\tAs I kept listening, I heard Sonic come in. He stayed against the wall as I just stared at the ceiling.
\t“Silver,” he said cooly.
\t“Yes?” I asked, not even looking up to him.
\t“We need to talk.”
\t“There's nothing to talk about. I get why you did it. I deserved it.”
\t“How can you say that?!” he said, finally breaking his calmness.
\tI sat halfway up from the couch, and looked to him. “I forgive you Sonic, and Shadow. I don't blame you for what you did. After all, you've always had feelings for each other right?”
\t“Well yes but-”
\tI laid back down. “Don't worry. Things will be fine. Mephiles and Shadow will make up soon like they always do. “
\tHe was silent for a moment. I just kicked my feet up and down, still trying to here everything Shadow and Mephiles were saying.
\t“This isn't like you Silver....”
\tI pulled my head up back to him. “What do you mean?”
\t“Usually if something like this happened, you'd get all emotional and we'd be fighting like they are. Why aren't you like that?”
\tI sat up, and put my knees to my face, still looking at Sonic. He couldn't do the same however, which did hurt me a little.
\t“I don't know really. Maybe because I always suspected you guys were attracted to each other.”
I tilted my head and smiled. “But it's alright. We can make it through this, can't we?”
\tSonic didn't answer my question, which caused my heart to almost stop. “Silver....I don't think we can.” My eyes widened. “The truth is, I've always loved Shadow even before you and I met. But when I learned he went with Mephiles, I felt like my life was almost over.”
\t“Are you saying I was a rebound?”
\t“K-kind off. But don't get me wrong, I do care for you...” He looked back to me.“I'm sorry Silver...I didn't mean to lead you on these past six months.”
\tShouldn't I have been crying when hearing him say that, or at least go into a fit a range? That would've been the right reaction, yet I was just silent. “Silver?” he asked concernedly. I didn't answer back, but instead stood up and headed to the door.
\t“I-I need to go out for a while Sonic....I-I'll be back later.”
\t“Silver! Wait! I-I didn't say that I didn't love you.”
\t“Bye...”
\t“Silver!” But I ran out before he could finish.


\tI was defiantly growing up. I didn't cry, or let my anger get to me at all. Blaze would've been so proud. However, that was just a lie. I was crying now, screaming into the ground like I'd just lost everything; which maybe I really did.
\tI could hear things break around me because of my powers, and glass cracked from the lamps in the street.  “Dammit... Dammit.... Dammit! Dammit! Dammit! Why?! Why did you do this to me?! To us?!”
\tI kept repeating the same things over to myself, hoping that Sonic would come to me and hold me tightly, telling me that it was all just a cruel joke.
\tBut he didn't come, and I knew he wasn't going to.
\t I had lost something that I thought was great, and I wasn't ever going to get it back.
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