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Only enough to leave Ponyville, but not so be able to support herself. \n\n\tFluttershy looked through the bags, and began to put the contents away. “So Trixie…um if you want tonight…We can go to a restaurant for dinner. If you don’t want to its fine…I’ll just make something…” Fluttershy said in her usual soft tone. \n\n\tTrixie thought about this. Fluttershy has been very kind to her these past days. Kinder than anypony she has come by. She smiles with a giggle. “I would love to Fluttershy. I can’t wait.” Trixie said with a comforting smile.\n\n\t“Oh how wonderful! Tell you what, you go out and do whatever you wish to do today until tonight. I’ll take care of the animals. Just come back by 7.” Fluttershy said in a slightly excited tone.\n\n\t“Ok Fluttershy. See you tonight.” She walks towards the door, giving Angel a carrot before she leaves, then walks out the door.\n\n\t“Wow…she really has changed a lot.” Fluttershy thought to herself with a smile as she began to take care of the animals. “For somepony who seemed so mean at first…” \n\n========\n\n\tTrixie came back to the cottage ten minutes before Fluttershy said to meet here and went into her cart. She put down her saddlebags and emptied one out, boxing up a present. When it was time, she went back into the cottage to meet Fluttershy. She was inside waiting for her. “Oh there you are. Are you ready?” Fluttershy asked.\n\n\t“Yes I am.” Trixie said with a warm smile.\n\n\t“Ok. Well let’s go.” Fluttershy said as the two left the cottage and walked to the restaurant. It was a pretty quiet walk there. They arrived a few minutes later, getting a table and sitting down. The waiter comes by and gives them their menus. Fluttershy puts her menu down a bit when she reads it to look to see if Trixie has decided which she hasn’t. “Get whatever you like. Don’t worry about price.” She smiles warmly as she returns to her menu.\n\n\tTrixie continues to look through her menu, still trying to decide. She looks at Fluttershy with a smile before finally making her decision. The waiter comes back and takes their orders, leaving the two alone. “This is a pretty nice restaurant. I can’t remember the last time I was in one like this.” Trixie says in a saddened tone.\n\n\t“What happened to you?” Fluttershy asked. “Oh I’m sorry. If that’s a personal question or…”\n\n\t“No it’s an appropriate question Fluttershy.” Trixie said with a slight sigh, and then continues, “When Twilight showed her magic was far more superior than mine that night, the word got around quickly that I was a fake. Nopony wanted to see me perform anymore.”\n\n\t“Oh my goodness you poor thing.” Fluttershy said in a saddened tone.\n\n\t“I managed. And I’m glad you took me in” Trixie said with a smile. Fluttershy’s hospitality really gave her a whole different view on ponies in this town. It showed her that with a little kindness they can be really nice ponies.\n\n\t“I couldn’t just leave you there, especially in the Everfree forest. Who knows what could have happened to you.” Fluttershy said as the waiter came back with their food. Placing stuffed mushrooms and peppers in the center and giving each of them plates of buttered and seasoned pasta. The plates look fairly fancy with the garnishes and detail on each of them.\n\n\t“Gosh Fluttershy are you sure you can afford all of this?” Trixie asked.\n\n\t“It’s not that much. Besides, I think you deserve it.” Fluttershy said with a friendly smile. Trixie smiles as the two begin to eat. It was a nice dinner. Filled with laughs and talk between the two for hours. When they were about ready to leave, Trixie placed a small box in front of Fluttershy. “What’s this?” Fluttershy asked in question.\n\n\t“It’s a gift I got you.” Trixie said with a smile.\n\n\tFluttershy opened it to reveal a small necklace. It had a beautiful emerald surrounded by gold that swirled around it, keeping it in place without hiding its beauty. “Oh my. It’s beautiful. Thank you so much Trixie.” Fluttershy said with a warm smile as she put the necklace on. “How do I look?”\n\n\t“Beautiful.” Trixie said, admiring how she looked. The two head back to the cottage, happily walking with each other. When they got there, Fluttershy opened the door as the two walked in. “Thank you for dinner tonight Fluttershy. It was nice.”\n\n\t“You’re welcome Trixie.” Fluttershy said letting out a soft yawn. As Trixie walked past her to go up into her room, she locked lips with her to much of Fluttershy’s shock. When Trixie broke the kiss, she showed a lustful smile. Fluttershy didn’t know how to even respond. Is this really how she felt about her? “Um Trixie I…”\n\n\t“I don’t know if you feel the same way Fluttershy but…I love you.” She locks lips with her again, surprising Fluttershy again. This time, Fluttershy closed her eyes and began to kiss her back much to Trixie’s delight. The two headed upstairs and into Fluttershy’s room, onto the bed. Before they fell asleep, Trixie whispered to Fluttershy. “I love you…you have done more for me and treated me better than anypony ever did.”\n\n\tAt first Fluttershy didn’t know how to respond. She thought about it for a little bit before responding. “I love you too Trixie.” Fluttershy said as the two fell asleep.\n\n=======\n\n\tTrixie woke up the next morning to see that Fluttershy was still sound asleep next to her. She smiled, then noticed where one of her hoofs were when she was about to move. It was mere inches away from her slit. “Out of all the places it had to be right there…” Trixie said as she carefully tried to move away, then noticing how she was sleeping. Her legs are spread apart, giving her a full view of her treats and slit. “Oh my…” She continues to stare there, feeling herself grow wet. After a few minutes, she reaches a hoof down, beginning to rub her clit, letting out soft moans. “I must be crazy.” She thought to herself as she continued to do this, checking occasionally for any signs of Fluttershy waking up. She looked and still saw she was asleep. She quieted herself down to be sure she wouldn’t wake her. \n\n\tUnknown to Trixie, she was actually waking up. “What is she doing?” Fluttershy thought to herself, still half asleep. She felt something warm begin to come to her hoof. It was wet. “Is she…doing what I think she is? Oh my…” The wet feeling continued to come to her hoof. She began to feel herself get turned on by this. “Oh my…Is this really doing this for me?” She thought to herself once again.\n\n\tTrixie continued to stare down there. Noticing Fluttershy getting wet. “Is she…Getting turned on by this?” Trixie thought, as she continued to rub her clit. It was then that she got a mischievous thought. She stopped, and got up from the bed.\n\n\t“What is she doing?” Fluttershy thought feeling her get off the bed. It was then that she felt something at her slit. She let out a soft moan, waking up fully and seeing that Trixie is eating her out. “Trixie what are you…oh my…” Fluttershy said as she continued to moan out in pleasure.\n\n\tTrixie smirked, seeing she was enjoying this. She dipped her tongue in, licking her inner walls. Fluttershy continued to moan out loudly, much to Trixie’s worry. She stopped for a moment. “Maybe you shouldn’t be too loud Fluttershy. Somepony might get suspicious.”\n\n\t“Don’t worry. It’s still pretty early and nopony can hear us over the roosters.” Fluttershy said as a rooster began to crow loudly. Trixie smirked and continued to lap at her slit.\n\n\tHearing Fluttershy let out the cutest moans she has ever heard made her turned on even more as she felt herself grow even wetter. Fluttershy lets out a sharp cry a few moments later as she reaches her climax. Her juices coating her mouth as she licks them up. As her climax recedes, Trixie hops back onto the bed, spreading her legs out. Fluttershy blushes deeply looking down there. “Um…tell me if you want me to stop…” Fluttershy said as she began to give her the same treatment. Licking at her slit slowly. Trixie began to let out soft moans. Her tongue going into her slowly, looking for her g-spot. Trixie began to let out louder moans the further she went.\n\n\t“Am I really doing this?” Fluttershy thought as she continued to lick at her slit. Trixie continued to moan out louder as she continued to go into her. 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\tTrixie came back with groceries again as Fluttershy welcomed her back with lunch. “Here’s your sandwich.” Fluttershy handed her a daisy sandwich. Trixie put the saddlebags down and began to eat. Fluttershy ate her own while looking at her. She smiled at her and continued eating. Something has changed in Trixie the past couple of days, and Fluttershy has noticed it. Trixie was lowering her ego. She was becoming nicer.

\t“Thank you Fluttershy.” She smiles as she eats. Having worked for five days, she has obtained a pretty decent amount of bits. Only enough to leave Ponyville, but not so be able to support herself.

\tFluttershy looked through the bags, and began to put the contents away. “So Trixie…um if you want tonight…We can go to a restaurant for dinner. If you don’t want to its fine…I’ll just make something…” Fluttershy said in her usual soft tone.

\tTrixie thought about this. Fluttershy has been very kind to her these past days. Kinder than anypony she has come by. She smiles with a giggle. “I would love to Fluttershy. I can’t wait.” Trixie said with a comforting smile.

\t“Oh how wonderful! Tell you what, you go out and do whatever you wish to do today until tonight. I’ll take care of the animals. Just come back by 7.” Fluttershy said in a slightly excited tone.

\t“Ok Fluttershy. See you tonight.” She walks towards the door, giving Angel a carrot before she leaves, then walks out the door.

\t“Wow…she really has changed a lot.” Fluttershy thought to herself with a smile as she began to take care of the animals. “For somepony who seemed so mean at first…”

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\tTrixie came back to the cottage ten minutes before Fluttershy said to meet here and went into her cart. She put down her saddlebags and emptied one out, boxing up a present. When it was time, she went back into the cottage to meet Fluttershy. She was inside waiting for her. “Oh there you are. Are you ready?” Fluttershy asked.

\t“Yes I am.” Trixie said with a warm smile.

\t“Ok. Well let’s go.” Fluttershy said as the two left the cottage and walked to the restaurant. It was a pretty quiet walk there. They arrived a few minutes later, getting a table and sitting down. The waiter comes by and gives them their menus. Fluttershy puts her menu down a bit when she reads it to look to see if Trixie has decided which she hasn’t. “Get whatever you like. Don’t worry about price.” She smiles warmly as she returns to her menu.

\tTrixie continues to look through her menu, still trying to decide. She looks at Fluttershy with a smile before finally making her decision. The waiter comes back and takes their orders, leaving the two alone. “This is a pretty nice restaurant. I can’t remember the last time I was in one like this.” Trixie says in a saddened tone.

\t“What happened to you?” Fluttershy asked. “Oh I’m sorry. If that’s a personal question or…”

\t“No it’s an appropriate question Fluttershy.” Trixie said with a slight sigh, and then continues, “When Twilight showed her magic was far more superior than mine that night, the word got around quickly that I was a fake. Nopony wanted to see me perform anymore.”

\t“Oh my goodness you poor thing.” Fluttershy said in a saddened tone.

\t“I managed. And I’m glad you took me in” Trixie said with a smile. Fluttershy’s hospitality really gave her a whole different view on ponies in this town. It showed her that with a little kindness they can be really nice ponies.

\t“I couldn’t just leave you there, especially in the Everfree forest. Who knows what could have happened to you.” Fluttershy said as the waiter came back with their food. Placing stuffed mushrooms and peppers in the center and giving each of them plates of buttered and seasoned pasta. The plates look fairly fancy with the garnishes and detail on each of them.

\t“Gosh Fluttershy are you sure you can afford all of this?” Trixie asked.

\t“It’s not that much. Besides, I think you deserve it.” Fluttershy said with a friendly smile. Trixie smiles as the two begin to eat. It was a nice dinner. Filled with laughs and talk between the two for hours. When they were about ready to leave, Trixie placed a small box in front of Fluttershy. “What’s this?” Fluttershy asked in question.

\t“It’s a gift I got you.” Trixie said with a smile.

\tFluttershy opened it to reveal a small necklace. It had a beautiful emerald surrounded by gold that swirled around it, keeping it in place without hiding its beauty. “Oh my. It’s beautiful. Thank you so much Trixie.” Fluttershy said with a warm smile as she put the necklace on. “How do I look?”

\t“Beautiful.” Trixie said, admiring how she looked. The two head back to the cottage, happily walking with each other.  When they got there, Fluttershy opened the door as the two walked in. “Thank you for dinner tonight Fluttershy. It was nice.”

\t“You’re welcome Trixie.” Fluttershy said letting out a soft yawn. As Trixie walked past her to go up into her room, she locked lips with her to much of Fluttershy’s shock. When Trixie broke the kiss, she showed a lustful smile. Fluttershy didn’t know how to even respond. Is this really how she felt about her? “Um Trixie I…”

\t“I don’t know if you feel the same way Fluttershy but…I love you.” She locks lips with her again, surprising Fluttershy again. This time, Fluttershy closed her eyes and began to kiss her back much to Trixie’s delight. The two headed upstairs and into Fluttershy’s room, onto the bed. Before they fell asleep, Trixie whispered to Fluttershy. “I love you…you have done more for me and treated me better than anypony ever did.”

\tAt first Fluttershy didn’t know how to respond. She thought about it for a little bit before responding. “I love you too Trixie.” Fluttershy said as the two fell asleep.

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\tTrixie woke up the next morning to see that Fluttershy was still sound asleep next to her.  She smiled, then noticed where one of her hoofs were when she was about to move. It was mere inches away from her slit. “Out of all the places it had to be right there…” Trixie said as she carefully tried to move away, then noticing how she was sleeping. Her legs are spread apart, giving her a full view of her treats and slit. “Oh my…” She continues to stare there, feeling herself grow wet. After a few minutes, she reaches a hoof down, beginning to rub her clit, letting out soft moans. “I must be crazy.” She thought to herself as she continued to do this, checking occasionally for any signs of Fluttershy waking up. She looked and still saw she was asleep. She quieted herself down to be sure she wouldn’t wake her.

\tUnknown to Trixie, she was actually waking up. “What is she doing?” Fluttershy thought to herself, still half asleep. She felt something warm begin to come to her hoof. It was wet. “Is she…doing what I think she is? Oh my…” The wet feeling continued to come to her hoof. She began to feel herself get turned on by this. “Oh my…Is this really doing this for me?” She thought to herself once again.

\tTrixie continued to stare down there. Noticing Fluttershy getting wet. “Is she…Getting turned on by this?” Trixie thought, as she continued to rub her clit. It was then that she got a mischievous thought. She stopped, and got up from the bed.

\t“What is she doing?” Fluttershy thought feeling her get off the bed. It was then that she felt something at her slit. She let out a soft moan, waking up fully and seeing that Trixie is eating her out. “Trixie what are you…oh my…” Fluttershy said as she continued to moan out in pleasure.

\tTrixie smirked, seeing she was enjoying this. She dipped her tongue in, licking her inner walls. Fluttershy continued to moan out loudly, much to Trixie’s worry. She stopped for a moment. “Maybe you shouldn’t be too loud Fluttershy. Somepony might get suspicious.”

\t“Don’t worry. It’s still pretty early and nopony can hear us over the roosters.” Fluttershy said as a rooster began to crow loudly. Trixie smirked and continued to lap at her slit.

\tHearing Fluttershy let out the cutest moans she has ever heard made her turned on even more as she felt herself grow even wetter. Fluttershy lets out a sharp cry a few moments later as she reaches her climax. Her juices coating her mouth as she licks them up. As her climax recedes, Trixie hops back onto the bed, spreading her legs out. Fluttershy blushes deeply looking down there. “Um…tell me if you want me to stop…” Fluttershy said as she began to give her the same treatment. Licking at her slit slowly. Trixie began to let out soft moans. Her tongue going into her slowly, looking for her g-spot. Trixie began to let out louder moans the further she went.

\t“Am I really doing this?” Fluttershy thought as she continued to lick at her slit. Trixie continued to moan out louder as she continued to go into her. Trixie took a look at her wings, seeing that they are erect, she giggles to herself. After a few moments she lets out a sharp cry as her fluids cover Fluttershy’s tongue as she came hard. They both lay on the bed, panting.

\t“That was…great.” Trixie said as she locked lips with her. After about 10 minutes, Fluttershy shoots up, remembering something.

\t“Oh my goodness I completely forgot. I have to meet Rarity at the spa today! Oh I hope she won’t be too mad at me for being late.” Fluttershy said as she grabs a few things. “I’ll be back in a few hours ok Trixie? We’ll have lunch together. Take care of the animals please.”

\t“Alright Fluttershy. Have fun.” Trixie said with a smile, getting up from the bed slowly.

\t“Oh thank you Trixie.” Fluttershy said, going up to her to give her another kiss. “I’ll be back later.” She left the room, leaving the house in a hurry. Trixie began to clean up their mess, and then started taking care of the animals. Being happy as ever right now.

\t“I’m never want to leave.” Trixie said happily as she continued to help the animals.

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