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", "writing": "Chapter 1: Whispers in the Ponyville Twilight\nThe familiar cobblestones of Ponyville were usually a comfort to Shining Armor, a reminder of the peaceful kingdom he was sworn to protect. Tonight, however, each clatter of his hooves seemed to echo too loudly in the twilight air. He’d concocted a flimsy excuse about inspecting the town’s perimeter defenses – a task usually delegated – all for this clandestine meeting. His heart, a veteran of countless battles, now hammered with a different kind of anticipation, a nervous rhythm that was both exhilarating and terrifying.\nHe found Nathan waiting by the old whispering willow near the edge of the Everfree Forest, a spot they’d cautiously agreed upon through a series of discreetly passed notes that spoke of \"shared tactical interests.\" Nathan was a Kirin, his scales a beautiful mosaic of jade and obsidian, his mane like spun moonlight. He was taller than Shining Armor, with intelligent, gentle eyes that held a depth Shining Armor found himself increasingly drawn to. The sight of him, cloaked partially by the willow’s drooping branches, sent a jolt of warmth through the Captain of the Guard.\n\"You made it,\" Nathan's voice was a soft baritone, like the rustle of ancient leaves, a stark contrast to the usual cheerful tones of Ponyville.\n\"Wouldn't miss it,\" Shining Armor replied, trying for a casual tone that didn't quite mask his relief and nervousness. He glanced around, his guard instincts on high alert. \"Is this spot… secure enough?\"\nNathan nodded. \"As secure as any can be for us, I suppose. The ponies of this town seem to prefer the lights and laughter of the square after dusk.\"\nThey settled under the willow, the fireflies beginning their nightly dance around them. For a while, they spoke of trivial things – the weather, the latest news from their respective (and very different) communities. Shining Armor learned more about the serene, reclusive life of the Kirin in the Peaks of Peril, while Nathan listened with fascination to tales of Canterlot and the duties of the Royal Guard.\nBut the unspoken hung heavy between them. It was Shining Armor who finally broke the surface.\n\"Nathan,\" he began, his voice lower, more serious. \"About… us. These meetings.\" He looked at the Kirin, whose amber eyes were fixed on him with a patient understanding. \"I value them. More than I probably should. More than is… wise.\"\nNathan’s expression softened. \"I feel the same, Shining Armor. These moments with you are… a rare light.\"\n\"But where can this go?\" Shining Armor asked, the fear that was his constant companion tightening his chest. \"I am who I am. A Prince, Captain of the Guard. My life is… scrutinized. And you are… not a pony.\" He said it gently, but the truth of their difference was a chasm between them. \"If anypony knew… if She knew…\" He didn't need to specify Princess Celestia. The potential fallout was catastrophic.\n\"I understand the risks you face,\" Nathan said quietly, his gaze unwavering. \"And I would never ask you to jeopardize your life, your position. But… the thought of not seeing you again, of not sharing these conversations… it is a desolate one.\"\nShining Armor felt a pang of guilt mixed with a fierce surge of affection. \"I don't want that either. But we have to be so careful. Every step, every word.\" He sighed, the weight of his responsibilities pressing down. \"Can we even… can this be a relationship, with so much secrecy, so much at stake?\"\nNathan reached out a scaled hand, gently resting it on Shining Armor’s foreleg. The touch was warm, reassuring. \"Perhaps,\" he said softly, \"we find out one careful step at a time. As long as we both understand the path, and walk it together, for as long as we are able.\"\nShining Armor looked into those earnest amber eyes and felt a flicker of hope. It was a dangerous hope, a fragile thing, but it was there. \"Together,\" he agreed, his voice barely a whisper.\nChapter 2: The Princess's Perception\nPrincess Celestia, ruler of Equestria, had seen millennia unfold. She had witnessed the rise and fall of stars, the shifting of continents, and the subtle, often imperceptible, changes in the hearts of her ponies. And lately, she had noticed a distinct change in her Captain of the Royal Guard, Shining Armor.\nHe was still diligent, still honorable, but there was a new tension about him, a distracted air that occasionally clouded his usually sharp focus. He was more prone to quiet introspection, his gaze sometimes drifting to distant horizons. There were more requests for \"personal time,\" more \"late-night inspections\" in areas that rarely required his direct oversight. His smiles, while still present for his family and friends, sometimes didn’t quite reach his eyes when discussing official matters.\nCelestia was no fool. She knew the signs of a heart preoccupied, of a secret carefully guarded. She had seen it countless times before, in courtiers, in common ponies, even, long ago, in herself.\nHer initial concern had been for his well-being, and for the security of the kingdom. Was he under some duress? Was there a threat she was unaware of? But her gentle, indirect inquiries yielded nothing alarming in the traditional sense. His performance of duties, when focused, was still exemplary. His loyalty, she felt instinctively, remained unwavering.\nIt was Luna, with her nightly sojourns through the dream realm, who inadvertently provided a clearer, if still veiled, insight. \"Our good Captain seems to be having rather… vivid dreams, sister,\" Luna had commented one morning, a knowing glint in her sapphire eyes. \"Not of battles, but of… moonlit forests and eyes like amber.\"\nCelestia had merely nodded, a thoughtful expression on her face. She began to piece things together – the subtle shifts in Shining Armor, Luna's observations, a few hushed, almost untraceable whispers from her most discreet informants about a reclusive Kirin sometimes seen near Ponyville's outskirts.\nThe Princess felt a pang, not of disapproval, but of a complex empathy. She understood the weight of secrets, the burden of a love that defied convention. For Celestia, too, carried a secret within her ancient heart – a memory of a love from a bygone era, a connection with a being from a realm far beyond Equestria, a love that had been joyous, profound, and ultimately, heartbreakingly impossible to sustain openly in a world not yet ready for such unions. It was a secret she had guarded for centuries, a quiet ache that had shaped her understanding of the myriad forms love could take.\nShe saw Shining Armor’s struggle, his fear, and she recognized it. She knew the societal pressures, the fear of judgment, the potential for scandal. And so, Princess Celestia, who could have summoned her Captain and demanded an explanation with a single word, chose silence. She would watch, she would wait. Her own past had taught her that some hearts needed the space to find their own way, even if that path was shrouded in shadows. For now, his secret was safe with her, shielded by her own hidden understanding.\nChapter 3: A Starlit Confession\nThe pressure of their secrecy was immense, but the moments Shining Armor spent with Nathan were like oases of peace in the desert of his anxieties. He yearned to give Nathan more, to show him the depth of his feelings in a way that their furtive meetings under Ponyville’s willow couldn’t allow. He decided to arrange something truly special, a proper date, far from any prying eyes.\nAfter meticulous planning, involving feigning a multi-day reconnaissance mission to a remote mountain range (a mission so strategically obscure that no other guard would question its necessity for the Captain alone), Shining Armor led Nathan to a hidden crystal cave system he’d discovered years ago. The entrance was concealed behind a waterfall, and inside, the walls shimmered with naturally occurring gemstones that cast a soft, ethereal glow, reflecting in an underground lake as still as glass.\nHe’d gone to great lengths. A soft blanket was spread near the lake’s edge, laden with delicacies he’d carefully acquired – sweet sun-dried fruits from the Crystal Empire, rare moonflower nectar Nathan had once mentioned enjoying, and even a selection of polished gemstones that glowed with their own inner light, adding to the cave’s magical ambiance.\nNathan’s amber eyes widened as he took in the scene, a look of pure wonder on his face. \"Shining Armor… this is… breathtaking.\"\n\"I wanted…\" Shining Armor began, feeling a blush creep up his muzzle. \"I wanted to show you something beautiful. Something just for us.\"\nThey settled on the blanket, the only sounds the gentle drip of water from stalactites and their own soft breaths. For a long while, they simply enjoyed the food, the atmosphere, and each other’s presence. The oppressive weight of secrecy seemed to lift in this secluded sanctuary.\nFinally, Shining Armor turned to Nathan, his heart full. \"Nathan,\" he said, his voice earnest. \"Being here with you, like this… it’s everything. These past few months, getting to know you… you’ve brought something into my life I didn’t even realize was missing.\" He took a deep breath. \"What I’m trying to say is… I like you, Nathan. A lot. More than just like. My feelings for you are… they’re strong. And real.\"\nNathan’s gaze softened, a gentle smile gracing his lips. He reached out, his scaled hand covering Shining Armor’s hoof. \"Oh, Shining Armor,\" he murmured, his voice thick with emotion. \"I feel the same. From our very first meeting, there was something… a connection. You are brave, and kind, and you carry so much for others. Being with you, even in secret, has become the most precious part of my days. I… I am falling in love with you, Shining Armor.\"\nThe confession hung in the luminous air, as radiant as the crystals surrounding them. Shining Armor felt tears well in his eyes. \"I’m falling in love with you too, Nathan,\" he whispered, his voice choked with a happiness so profound it almost hurt.\nIn the heart of the crystal cave, far from the judgment of the world, they held each other, two souls from different worlds, bound by a love that was as unexpected as it was true. The fear of discovery still lingered in the back of Shining Armor’s mind, but for this perfect, stolen moment, it was eclipsed by the overwhelming joy of their mutual confession.\nChapter 4: The Weight of Knowing Eyes\nThe romantic interlude in the crystal cave had solidified their bond, but it also amplified Shining Armor’s awareness of the precariousness of their situation. Their love was a precious, secret flame, and he felt an ever-increasing responsibility to protect it, and Nathan, from the winds of discovery. Hiding their relationship was becoming a monumental effort, a constant exercise in vigilance, misdirection, and carefully constructed alibis.\nHe knew, deep down, that this level of secrecy wasn't sustainable. The stolen moments, however beautiful, were still just that – stolen. And the fear of exposure was a constant, gnawing companion.\nLately, another layer of anxiety had been added to his burden: Princess Celestia.\nIt wasn’t anything overt. The Princess was, as always, gracious, wise, and seemingly benevolent. But Shining Armor, his senses heightened by his own duplicity, began to notice subtle shifts in her interactions with him. Her gaze seemed to linger a moment longer than usual during their briefings. Her questions about his well-being, his patrols, his \"special projects,\" while phrased with her customary gentleness, felt more pointed, more… knowing.\n\"Captain,\" she might say, her voice serene, \"you seem to be spending a great deal of time ensuring the security of our more… remote borders. Is there a particular concern I should be aware of?\" Or, \"Shining Armor, you appear rather tired these days. Are you certain you are taking adequate rest?\"\nEach seemingly innocent inquiry sent a jolt of panic through him. Was she testing him? Did she suspect? Or worse, did she know? He found himself over-analyzing every word, every glance, searching for hidden meanings, for signs of impending doom. The Princess, who had always been a figure of comfort and authority, was slowly transforming in his mind into a potential inquisitor.\nHe’d catch her watching him during courtly functions, a thoughtful, almost melancholic expression on her face that he couldn’t decipher. It wasn’t accusatory, not exactly, but it was… attentive. Intensely attentive. He started to feel like a colt caught with his hoof in the cookie jar, even when he was simply standing at his post.\n\"She's watching me more, Nathan,\" he confided during one of their hurried meetings, his voice hushed. \"I don't know what she suspects, but she's definitely… nosier. More focused on me than usual.\"\nNathan listened patiently, his amber eyes filled with concern. \"Perhaps she is simply worried for you, Shining Armor. You carry many burdens.\"\n\"Maybe,\" Shining Armor conceded, though a knot of dread remained in his stomach. \"But it feels different. It feels like she’s looking through me, right into my secrets.\" He was torn. Part of him, the part that yearned for honesty, almost wished she would just confront him. Another, much larger part, was terrified of that very eventuality. The Queen's increased attention was a constant, unnerving reminder that the walls of their secret world were perilously thin.\nChapter 5: The Princess's Understanding\nThe summons came on a crisp autumn morning. A royal page delivered a simple, unadorned scroll: \"Captain Shining Armor, your presence is requested in my private study at your earliest convenience. Princess Celestia.\"\nShining Armor’s blood ran cold. Her private study. Not the throne room, not for a routine briefing. This was different. This was serious. This was it. The moment he had been dreading for months had finally arrived.\nHis walk through the sunlit corridors of the Canterlot castle felt like a march to his own execution. Every guard he passed, every tapestry depicting heroic Equestrian deeds, seemed to mock him. He, Captain of the Royal Guard, caught in a secret, forbidden love.\nHe reached the ornate doors of Celestia’s study and hesitated, his hoof trembling slightly as he knocked.\n\"Enter,\" came the calm, familiar voice from within.\nShining Armor pushed the door open and stepped inside. Princess Celestia was standing by the large bay window, gazing out over the sprawling gardens. She turned as he entered, her expression unreadable. The room, usually a place of warmth and scholarly pursuit, felt like a tribunal.\n\"Captain,\" she said, her voice soft, yet carrying an undeniable authority. \"Thank you for coming so promptly.\"\n\"Your Highness,\" he managed, his throat dry. He stood at attention, bracing himself.\nCelestia gestured to a comfortable chair. \"Please, Shining Armor, sit. This is not a formal inquiry.\"\nHe sat, though he doubted he could relax. The Princess moved to her desk, but didn't sit behind it. Instead, she leaned against its edge, her gaze kind, yet piercing.\n\"Shining Armor,\" she began, her voice gentle. \"I have been… concerned about you lately. You seem to carry a heavy weight.\"\nHe swallowed hard. \"I… I have been under some stress, Your Highness. The duties of the Guard…\"\nCelestia held up a delicate hoof. \"Please. Let us dispense with the formalities we both know are not the heart of the matter.\" Her eyes softened. \"I know about Nathan, Shining Armor.\"\nThe words, spoken so calmly, hit him with the force of a physical blow. Terror, stark and absolute, seized him. He could only stare at her, his mind blank, his carefully rehearsed defenses crumbling to dust. This was the end. His career, his honor, his love – all forfeit.\nSeeing the sheer panic in his eyes, Celestia’s expression filled with a profound empathy. \"Shining Armor,\" she said, her voice laced with a surprising tenderness. \"Look at me.\"\nHe forced his gaze to meet hers. He expected anger, disappointment, condemnation. Instead, he saw… understanding.\n\"Love,\" Celestia said softly, \"is a powerful and often unpredictable magic. It does not always adhere to the boundaries we set, or the expectations society places upon us.\" She paused, a wistful, almost sad smile touching her lips. \"There are matters of the heart that transcend species, rank, and even the laws of kingdoms.\"\nShining Armor stared, bewildered. This was not the reaction he had braced himself for.\n\"I will not pretend,\" Celestia continued, \"that your situation is without… complications. Equestria, for all its harmony, can be slow to accept that which is different. And your position does indeed carry certain expectations.\"\n\"I… I understand, Your Highness,\" he stammered, still reeling. \"I am prepared to accept the consequences.\"\nCelestia shook her head gently. \"The only consequence I wish to discuss today, Shining Armor, is the toll this secrecy is taking on you. You are a good and honorable pony. You have served Equestria with unwavering loyalty. To see you so burdened by fear… it pains me.\"\nShe sighed, a sound that seemed to carry the weight of ages. \"Long ago, I too knew a love that defied the conventions of the time. A love that had to remain hidden, for the sake of peace, for the sake of understanding that was not yet present in the world.\" Her eyes held a distant sorrow that Shining Armor had never seen before. \"I understand the weight of such a secret, Captain. And I understand the courage it takes to love in the face of such obstacles.\"\nTears welled in Shining Armor’s eyes, tears of shock, of confusion, and of an overwhelming, unexpected relief. \"You… you don't… disapprove?\"\n\"Disapprove?\" Celestia’s smile was genuine now, warm and reassuring. \"My dear Shining Armor, my primary wish is for the happiness and well-being of my subjects, especially those as devoted as yourself. Your private life, as long as it does not compromise your duties or the safety of this kingdom, is your own. Nathan… from what I have discerned, he is a gentle soul. He brings you happiness, does he not?\"\nShining Armor could only nod, speechless.\n\"Then that is what matters,\" Celestia said firmly. \"The path ahead may not be easy. There will be whispers, perhaps. Challenges. But you will not face them alone. And you will not face them with my condemnation.\" She stepped forward, placing a comforting hoof on his shoulder. \"Live your life with honor, Shining Armor. Love with courage. And know that your Princess… understands.\"\nA wave of gratitude so immense it was almost painful washed over Shining Armor. The fear that had been his constant companion for so long began to recede, replaced by a fragile, burgeoning hope. He had expected ruin, but had found compassion. In the understanding eyes of his Queen, he saw not an end, but a new, albeit challenging, beginning.\n\n\n\n\nChapter 5\n Now that shiny armor don't have to hide anything. Due to the simple fact that now the Queen know all about what he is all about. He decided to meet Nathan somewhere secretly. It's something that he been wanting to do with Nathan for quite a while. Since he began to like him very well. But he knew in spite of how much the queen was accepting him and his new ways. There was some things that even a queen might frown upon. So these are the things that he keep more deep secret and also watching over his back making sure that none of the royal guards are following him anywhere. \n\n\n It was a quiet and cool even deep into a mysterious place outside of the normal wrenches of the carefree Castle as well outside of the reaches of the village of ponyville. He led Nathan slowly to a very secret area. He was guaranteed that no one knew about this area. And with his heart kind of conflicted about what he was about to allow to happen. He was not certain about it. But in his heart he knew this is something that he wanted but he wasn't quite sure with Nathan was going to go through with it after all they are two different species and he wasn't quite sure Nathan was ready for it. \n\n\n As I was walking Nathan noticed that shiny armor as a nickname applies most of the time was not wearing any type of protective armor like he normally would. Nathan didn't see anything mysterious about it but he was curious about the fact that shiny armor is not fully in his normal attire. He was curious to ask but at the same time he didn't want to ruin anything either after all shining armor can be a little bit hard to understand and sensitive in some areas. \n\n\n “I can see you staring at me. You've been staring at me since day one. You know I'm not ashamed at it. I guess in your world you're probably not used to seeing anything like me. Well I sure in your world you got some form of creatures that similar to me. Maybe some ponies or horses maybe you call it something different. I know a little bit about it.”shining armor said to nathan. As they suddenly stopped by a tree. Nathan looked around put that down towards the ground as shining armor stared at him.”go ahead spit it out it's like you about it's like you is about to melt. By curiosity or whatever it is that's going on in your mind right now and Nathan.!”shining armor you sounding like he is a little bit irritated. But at the same time patient as he can be. It's obvious that shining armor it is ready to try this thing that he been wanting to try. But both of them is so nervous it's hard for them to express their feelings. \n“I don't know what I was thinking the other day. I guess I let too much come out my mouth at once. I thought that I was speaking in a way that the queen wouldn't understand. But I guess she's a little bit more smarter than when I give her credit for.”shining armor looked back at him.”my sister is not stupid. Many people think that she may act all cheerful and she may have a very cheerful demeanor but you're very believed that she is very skilled very. How else do you think that she able to keep all her guards in check. Luna learned that the hard way. But then again it's hard to understand hard too. Two sisters who is polar opposite of each other but still respect each other in one way or another.”he sat down near the tree and looked it back at Nathan. Nathan looked down at shiny armor and he seen shiny armor horse hood. He tried not to look at it. It's not the first time I mean he always able to see it. But it was clearly showing a little bit more than normal. Something that pretty much bother him a little bit. But not too much. \n “You know something shiny armor. I don't know what it is about most of the inhabits here. But I tried my best not to look what I don't belong. But it's hard not to look when almost everyone here is pretty much naked as they can be.”Nathan said something a little bit irritating.”natural form and that's what you're trying to say. We don't believe in the same principle as you do. Why cover up it's not necessarily necessary. In most that do cover up is only for show not because of they really think it's necessary have any moral standards about it. How we see it is nature unfortunately I don't think that's how you see it and that's why you freaking out again.” Shiny armor begin to smile at him and laugh a little bit. Nathan felt embarrassed because it's clearly now on that shiny armor is pretty much recognizing that Nathan have something going for him. \n\n\n “I bet you all of the bits in the world that you probably want to do something to me. Like Mount me I can tell I know when somebody liked me. I can tell it by a mile away. Look I'm all up for it. But the problem is what you do to one you have to be able to receive and I doubt very seriously you can take me. I mean just look at you I think I might rip you apart.”shining armor got up and started to examine Nathan backside.”it is definitely not the size and I'm used to. I mean I'm used to doing ponies like Big Mac and other bigger ponies. You're not even a pony. Or anything in that nature. I don't know.”shining armor lift up his hind leg and showed Nathan all of his pony hood. Nathan eyes got a little bit bigger here in shining armor talk like this is a little bit unusual for Nathan. He didn't think that shining armor was even going to start to communicate like this.\n\n\n “You know you're a lot bigger than what I thought. I don't know I think I can take you on. If it means that I can have my fun as well. I do like you a lot. I think I can take you.”Nathan was sounding a little bit confident. But shiny armor was not convinced.”look no defense nathan. I don't want you to end up somewhere that you have to get treated for your back end. Look I am definitely saying this I am kind of horny right now thanks to you. I tell you what we make a side deal all right. I'll let you mount if you give me some pleasure in between my legs. I'm not inspecting you to fit this thing in you. But do something to make it you know do what it does then you can have your fun. Is that a deal or what?”shiny armor said it and kind of a sarcastic way but the same time he really meant what he said. Nathan took him on his deal as he began to undress his self shining armor looked at Nathan body. \n “Finally your natural self. Not covering anything. Wow you look a little bit sexy I had to say. I was assuming that you would look something different. But I guess we all got our fixed.”it appears that shiny armor really likes Nathan body. Shiny armor walk over to Nathan body a little bit and begin to smell it.”I like a strong stallion. You smell very powerful. You're making me more and more wanting you. You know what not I'm going to stick to my standards.”shining armor shot down. And he spread it his legs.”come over here and show me what you got big stallion.”\n\n\n Nathan walked over nervously completely nude as he approached shiny armor he can tell that shiny armor is pretty much up for wherever Nathan has in store. But he knows if he wants the prize this pony backside. Think he going to have to really give him some pleasure to the point that he gives into him. But Nathan realized how in the world he was going to do that without proper equipment. He didn't know how they did it here. But nevertheless he kneel down and begin to places and on the very hard cock of shiny armor. \n\n\n As you begin to touch they're very hard cock of shiny armor he can feel his own begin to rise into full standard. The first thing he did was start to rub it with his hand. Shining armor looked at him with a disgusted work”he's at the best you can do. Come on be more adventurous.”he said in a sarcastic way. Nathan looked it up at him and realize normal stuff is not going to please this pony. So he decided to try something different. Moving closer to the cock of shiny armor he sat down spreading his leg allowing shining armor cock rest gently against his even though it was a lot more bigger. When his cock landing on his chest\nIt is about up to his nipples almost. He can't believe how big this individual is. Nevertheless Nathan begin to slowly close his legs. And began to try to grind it.. shining armor looked it down at him. As Nathan begin to grind he grabbed shining armor cock and begin to squeeze it as hard as he could with his warm hands. Giving him a very rough hand job. Shining armor looked it down at him was a shock. And as an automatic response he began to hump him as he was trying to give him a hand job creating a very unusual feeling for shiny armor. \n\n\n“I don't know but your front paws are a lot more warmer than those than I ever seen. I mean I never felt anything like this a lot better then the usual that I ever felt. Keep it up.”Nathan noticed that the sarcasm was beginning to change more into a more friendly tone. As a intensifying rubbing kept going and getting more stronger by the second. Nathan finally can get shining armor up to the point that he was beginning to drip from his cock. And it didn't take long before shining armor begin to spray Nathan all over his face with his warm seed covering Nathan face and hands with thick and warm and gooey seed. Then Nathan stopped realizing that he was a complete mess. Shiny armor look back down at him again to smile. \n\n\n “Boy you look just like the way I like them nice and creamy he said.”shining armor begin to resisting himself so his mouth can be aimed at Nathan face. Before you know it he was licking all of the seed off of Nathan and cleaning him up. Nathan never felt anything like this before he tried to control his self as a pony was giving him a pretty much a body job by now. After then as promised shiny armor allow Nathan to mount him. He kneel down giving Nathan full access to him. Nathan walked up to shining armor backside. The smell of stallion is up in the air. Nathan is ready but he noticed that he's guy is not ready. Nathan felt embarrassed. As he try his best to get himself back ready it just wasn't. He knew he didn't want to blow this opportunity. And he needed to be able to get ready before shining armor realize that he's nowhere near capable at this moment. \n \n Nathan begin to push yourself against shining armor heated and hot butthole. Nathan can feel warm air does cruising out of the back side of him. As is member begin to respond finally to what was going on. Without hesitation Nathan begin to push into shiny armor but quickly learned it wasn't going to happen. He can feel sharp pain coming up quickly letting him know that this is not happening. In pain Nathan pull back out shining armor notice it. \n\n\n “What's wrong stallion not able to handle a more stronger and powerful stallion than yourself.”it's sarcasm came back as quickly as it left. I was shiny armor realized that Nathan could not penetrate him. But nevertheless shiny armor turned around and position himself so he can help Nathan out. He put Nathan manhood inside of his mouth and begin to suck on it as hard as he can. Getting it as wet and sloppy as you can possibly could. Once it was sloppy enough. Shining armor stood up a little bit and begin to grind against him. Knock alone when shining armor it felt like that he was about to release he position himself anyway that he can squirt his seed all over Nathan cock making it very sticky and very lubricated. \n\n\n “Down there stallion. You should be good to go you should be able to ride and rock and roll by now. Now let's get this party started.”shining armor said turning back around Nathan looked down at his lower side and realize how much that shiny armor really did to him. He look like a white lollipop now. But nevertheless. He mounted shiny armor and was able to fit in this time without having too much of a problem. I guess between all of the fluids that was on him he will not have a problem of poking inside of the stallion but. \n\n\n They've been beginning to poke slowly before he begins to speed it up. Slamming him each time that he could. Pushing himself deeper into shiny armor. Shining armor making all kinds of weird noises add Nathan was thrusting in him. Even sometimes surprising even by sounding like a pure horse. Only to intensify things even worse. And when shining armor can feel that Nathan was about to come. Shining armor slammed his self against him cause of Nathan to go all the way in. And would not move. Nathan tried to pull back but shining armor had him pined against that tree. He was not going nowhere. \n\n\n\n\n“Hold on stallion you're not going anywhere until I have milk every single drop out of you. You ain't finished until I tell you stallion.”shining armor said as his back and it's pushed deep against Nathan cock into the point that he is cock deep. Was shiny armor but against Nathan lower in they think can feel all kinds of feelings. It is very warm inside of shining armor. And it's very moist as well. A little bit sticky also. As Nathan can fill his self cumming Nathan can feel it. He is releasing as much as he can. As shiny armor is pretty much not letting go. Once Nathan thought that he was finished shiny arm is still would not release him. Pushing himself deeper upon Nathan grinding him and grinding him moving back and forth back and forth. Nathan begin to lightly hit him on the back end. Trying to tell him that he couldn't release anymore. But shining armor look back at him and kept on doing it what he was doing regardless of Nathan protesting. \n\n\n Finally after some time shining armor move back allowing Nathan cock to exit from his backside. Nathan collapsed down to the ground as shiny armor looked it back at him as Nathan seed was falling from shining armor backside. Shiny armor gave him a smile. \n\n\n “We got to do this again sometime. The next time I make sure that you are good and ready. That way it won't end so quickly. I'm used to my mates the last and a little bit longer than this. It's all right this is your first time. I pretty sure it was some training you'll be good to go.”\n \n\n\n Shining armor walked over to him and sat down and rested beside him. At Nathan was trying to get his composer back. After all it that was some intense mating that he ever felt in his whole entire life. He start to question himself if he made the right decision. And also he questioned himself about where or not he should have picked shiny armor in in the first place. \n\n\n The end of the story.", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Chapter 1: Whispers in the Ponyville Twilight
The familiar cobblestones of Ponyville were usually a comfort to Shining Armor, a reminder of the peaceful kingdom he was sworn to protect. Tonight, however, each clatter of his hooves seemed to echo too loudly in the twilight air. He’d concocted a flimsy excuse about inspecting the town’s perimeter defenses – a task usually delegated – all for this clandestine meeting. His heart, a veteran of countless battles, now hammered with a different kind of anticipation, a nervous rhythm that was both exhilarating and terrifying.
He found Nathan waiting by the old whispering willow near the edge of the Everfree Forest, a spot they’d cautiously agreed upon through a series of discreetly passed notes that spoke of "shared tactical interests." Nathan was a Kirin, his scales a beautiful mosaic of jade and obsidian, his mane like spun moonlight. He was taller than Shining Armor, with intelligent, gentle eyes that held a depth Shining Armor found himself increasingly drawn to. The sight of him, cloaked partially by the willow’s drooping branches, sent a jolt of warmth through the Captain of the Guard.
"You made it," Nathan's voice was a soft baritone, like the rustle of ancient leaves, a stark contrast to the usual cheerful tones of Ponyville.
"Wouldn't miss it," Shining Armor replied, trying for a casual tone that didn't quite mask his relief and nervousness. He glanced around, his guard instincts on high alert. "Is this spot… secure enough?"
Nathan nodded. "As secure as any can be for us, I suppose. The ponies of this town seem to prefer the lights and laughter of the square after dusk."
They settled under the willow, the fireflies beginning their nightly dance around them. For a while, they spoke of trivial things – the weather, the latest news from their respective (and very different) communities. Shining Armor learned more about the serene, reclusive life of the Kirin in the Peaks of Peril, while Nathan listened with fascination to tales of Canterlot and the duties of the Royal Guard.
But the unspoken hung heavy between them. It was Shining Armor who finally broke the surface.
"Nathan," he began, his voice lower, more serious. "About… us. These meetings." He looked at the Kirin, whose amber eyes were fixed on him with a patient understanding. "I value them. More than I probably should. More than is… wise."
Nathan’s expression softened. "I feel the same, Shining Armor. These moments with you are… a rare light."
"But where can this go?" Shining Armor asked, the fear that was his constant companion tightening his chest. "I am who I am. A Prince, Captain of the Guard. My life is… scrutinized. And you are… not a pony." He said it gently, but the truth of their difference was a chasm between them. "If anypony knew… if She knew…" He didn't need to specify Princess Celestia. The potential fallout was catastrophic.
"I understand the risks you face," Nathan said quietly, his gaze unwavering. "And I would never ask you to jeopardize your life, your position. But… the thought of not seeing you again, of not sharing these conversations… it is a desolate one."
Shining Armor felt a pang of guilt mixed with a fierce surge of affection. "I don't want that either. But we have to be so careful. Every step, every word." He sighed, the weight of his responsibilities pressing down. "Can we even… can this be a relationship, with so much secrecy, so much at stake?"
Nathan reached out a scaled hand, gently resting it on Shining Armor’s foreleg. The touch was warm, reassuring. "Perhaps," he said softly, "we find out one careful step at a time. As long as we both understand the path, and walk it together, for as long as we are able."
Shining Armor looked into those earnest amber eyes and felt a flicker of hope. It was a dangerous hope, a fragile thing, but it was there. "Together," he agreed, his voice barely a whisper.
Chapter 2: The Princess's Perception
Princess Celestia, ruler of Equestria, had seen millennia unfold. She had witnessed the rise and fall of stars, the shifting of continents, and the subtle, often imperceptible, changes in the hearts of her ponies. And lately, she had noticed a distinct change in her Captain of the Royal Guard, Shining Armor.
He was still diligent, still honorable, but there was a new tension about him, a distracted air that occasionally clouded his usually sharp focus. He was more prone to quiet introspection, his gaze sometimes drifting to distant horizons. There were more requests for "personal time," more "late-night inspections" in areas that rarely required his direct oversight. His smiles, while still present for his family and friends, sometimes didn’t quite reach his eyes when discussing official matters.
Celestia was no fool. She knew the signs of a heart preoccupied, of a secret carefully guarded. She had seen it countless times before, in courtiers, in common ponies, even, long ago, in herself.
Her initial concern had been for his well-being, and for the security of the kingdom. Was he under some duress? Was there a threat she was unaware of? But her gentle, indirect inquiries yielded nothing alarming in the traditional sense. His performance of duties, when focused, was still exemplary. His loyalty, she felt instinctively, remained unwavering.
It was Luna, with her nightly sojourns through the dream realm, who inadvertently provided a clearer, if still veiled, insight. "Our good Captain seems to be having rather… vivid dreams, sister," Luna had commented one morning, a knowing glint in her sapphire eyes. "Not of battles, but of… moonlit forests and eyes like amber."
Celestia had merely nodded, a thoughtful expression on her face. She began to piece things together – the subtle shifts in Shining Armor, Luna's observations, a few hushed, almost untraceable whispers from her most discreet informants about a reclusive Kirin sometimes seen near Ponyville's outskirts.
The Princess felt a pang, not of disapproval, but of a complex empathy. She understood the weight of secrets, the burden of a love that defied convention. For Celestia, too, carried a secret within her ancient heart – a memory of a love from a bygone era, a connection with a being from a realm far beyond Equestria, a love that had been joyous, profound, and ultimately, heartbreakingly impossible to sustain openly in a world not yet ready for such unions. It was a secret she had guarded for centuries, a quiet ache that had shaped her understanding of the myriad forms love could take.
She saw Shining Armor’s struggle, his fear, and she recognized it. She knew the societal pressures, the fear of judgment, the potential for scandal. And so, Princess Celestia, who could have summoned her Captain and demanded an explanation with a single word, chose silence. She would watch, she would wait. Her own past had taught her that some hearts needed the space to find their own way, even if that path was shrouded in shadows. For now, his secret was safe with her, shielded by her own hidden understanding.
Chapter 3: A Starlit Confession
The pressure of their secrecy was immense, but the moments Shining Armor spent with Nathan were like oases of peace in the desert of his anxieties. He yearned to give Nathan more, to show him the depth of his feelings in a way that their furtive meetings under Ponyville’s willow couldn’t allow. He decided to arrange something truly special, a proper date, far from any prying eyes.
After meticulous planning, involving feigning a multi-day reconnaissance mission to a remote mountain range (a mission so strategically obscure that no other guard would question its necessity for the Captain alone), Shining Armor led Nathan to a hidden crystal cave system he’d discovered years ago. The entrance was concealed behind a waterfall, and inside, the walls shimmered with naturally occurring gemstones that cast a soft, ethereal glow, reflecting in an underground lake as still as glass.
He’d gone to great lengths. A soft blanket was spread near the lake’s edge, laden with delicacies he’d carefully acquired – sweet sun-dried fruits from the Crystal Empire, rare moonflower nectar Nathan had once mentioned enjoying, and even a selection of polished gemstones that glowed with their own inner light, adding to the cave’s magical ambiance.
Nathan’s amber eyes widened as he took in the scene, a look of pure wonder on his face. "Shining Armor… this is… breathtaking."
"I wanted…" Shining Armor began, feeling a blush creep up his muzzle. "I wanted to show you something beautiful. Something just for us."
They settled on the blanket, the only sounds the gentle drip of water from stalactites and their own soft breaths. For a long while, they simply enjoyed the food, the atmosphere, and each other’s presence. The oppressive weight of secrecy seemed to lift in this secluded sanctuary.
Finally, Shining Armor turned to Nathan, his heart full. "Nathan," he said, his voice earnest. "Being here with you, like this… it’s everything. These past few months, getting to know you… you’ve brought something into my life I didn’t even realize was missing." He took a deep breath. "What I’m trying to say is… I like you, Nathan. A lot. More than just like. My feelings for you are… they’re strong. And real."
Nathan’s gaze softened, a gentle smile gracing his lips. He reached out, his scaled hand covering Shining Armor’s hoof. "Oh, Shining Armor," he murmured, his voice thick with emotion. "I feel the same. From our very first meeting, there was something… a connection. You are brave, and kind, and you carry so much for others. Being with you, even in secret, has become the most precious part of my days. I… I am falling in love with you, Shining Armor."
The confession hung in the luminous air, as radiant as the crystals surrounding them. Shining Armor felt tears well in his eyes. "I’m falling in love with you too, Nathan," he whispered, his voice choked with a happiness so profound it almost hurt.
In the heart of the crystal cave, far from the judgment of the world, they held each other, two souls from different worlds, bound by a love that was as unexpected as it was true. The fear of discovery still lingered in the back of Shining Armor’s mind, but for this perfect, stolen moment, it was eclipsed by the overwhelming joy of their mutual confession.
Chapter 4: The Weight of Knowing Eyes
The romantic interlude in the crystal cave had solidified their bond, but it also amplified Shining Armor’s awareness of the precariousness of their situation. Their love was a precious, secret flame, and he felt an ever-increasing responsibility to protect it, and Nathan, from the winds of discovery. Hiding their relationship was becoming a monumental effort, a constant exercise in vigilance, misdirection, and carefully constructed alibis.
He knew, deep down, that this level of secrecy wasn't sustainable. The stolen moments, however beautiful, were still just that – stolen. And the fear of exposure was a constant, gnawing companion.
Lately, another layer of anxiety had been added to his burden: Princess Celestia.
It wasn’t anything overt. The Princess was, as always, gracious, wise, and seemingly benevolent. But Shining Armor, his senses heightened by his own duplicity, began to notice subtle shifts in her interactions with him. Her gaze seemed to linger a moment longer than usual during their briefings. Her questions about his well-being, his patrols, his "special projects," while phrased with her customary gentleness, felt more pointed, more… knowing.
"Captain," she might say, her voice serene, "you seem to be spending a great deal of time ensuring the security of our more… remote borders. Is there a particular concern I should be aware of?" Or, "Shining Armor, you appear rather tired these days. Are you certain you are taking adequate rest?"
Each seemingly innocent inquiry sent a jolt of panic through him. Was she testing him? Did she suspect? Or worse, did she know? He found himself over-analyzing every word, every glance, searching for hidden meanings, for signs of impending doom. The Princess, who had always been a figure of comfort and authority, was slowly transforming in his mind into a potential inquisitor.
He’d catch her watching him during courtly functions, a thoughtful, almost melancholic expression on her face that he couldn’t decipher. It wasn’t accusatory, not exactly, but it was… attentive. Intensely attentive. He started to feel like a colt caught with his hoof in the cookie jar, even when he was simply standing at his post.
"She's watching me more, Nathan," he confided during one of their hurried meetings, his voice hushed. "I don't know what she suspects, but she's definitely… nosier. More focused on me than usual."
Nathan listened patiently, his amber eyes filled with concern. "Perhaps she is simply worried for you, Shining Armor. You carry many burdens."
"Maybe," Shining Armor conceded, though a knot of dread remained in his stomach. "But it feels different. It feels like she’s looking through me, right into my secrets." He was torn. Part of him, the part that yearned for honesty, almost wished she would just confront him. Another, much larger part, was terrified of that very eventuality. The Queen's increased attention was a constant, unnerving reminder that the walls of their secret world were perilously thin.
Chapter 5: The Princess's Understanding
The summons came on a crisp autumn morning. A royal page delivered a simple, unadorned scroll: "Captain Shining Armor, your presence is requested in my private study at your earliest convenience. Princess Celestia."
Shining Armor’s blood ran cold. Her private study. Not the throne room, not for a routine briefing. This was different. This was serious. This was it. The moment he had been dreading for months had finally arrived.
His walk through the sunlit corridors of the Canterlot castle felt like a march to his own execution. Every guard he passed, every tapestry depicting heroic Equestrian deeds, seemed to mock him. He, Captain of the Royal Guard, caught in a secret, forbidden love.
He reached the ornate doors of Celestia’s study and hesitated, his hoof trembling slightly as he knocked.
"Enter," came the calm, familiar voice from within.
Shining Armor pushed the door open and stepped inside. Princess Celestia was standing by the large bay window, gazing out over the sprawling gardens. She turned as he entered, her expression unreadable. The room, usually a place of warmth and scholarly pursuit, felt like a tribunal.
"Captain," she said, her voice soft, yet carrying an undeniable authority. "Thank you for coming so promptly."
"Your Highness," he managed, his throat dry. He stood at attention, bracing himself.
Celestia gestured to a comfortable chair. "Please, Shining Armor, sit. This is not a formal inquiry."
He sat, though he doubted he could relax. The Princess moved to her desk, but didn't sit behind it. Instead, she leaned against its edge, her gaze kind, yet piercing.
"Shining Armor," she began, her voice gentle. "I have been… concerned about you lately. You seem to carry a heavy weight."
He swallowed hard. "I… I have been under some stress, Your Highness. The duties of the Guard…"
Celestia held up a delicate hoof. "Please. Let us dispense with the formalities we both know are not the heart of the matter." Her eyes softened. "I know about Nathan, Shining Armor."
The words, spoken so calmly, hit him with the force of a physical blow. Terror, stark and absolute, seized him. He could only stare at her, his mind blank, his carefully rehearsed defenses crumbling to dust. This was the end. His career, his honor, his love – all forfeit.
Seeing the sheer panic in his eyes, Celestia’s expression filled with a profound empathy. "Shining Armor," she said, her voice laced with a surprising tenderness. "Look at me."
He forced his gaze to meet hers. He expected anger, disappointment, condemnation. Instead, he saw… understanding.
"Love," Celestia said softly, "is a powerful and often unpredictable magic. It does not always adhere to the boundaries we set, or the expectations society places upon us." She paused, a wistful, almost sad smile touching her lips. "There are matters of the heart that transcend species, rank, and even the laws of kingdoms."
Shining Armor stared, bewildered. This was not the reaction he had braced himself for.
"I will not pretend," Celestia continued, "that your situation is without… complications. Equestria, for all its harmony, can be slow to accept that which is different. And your position does indeed carry certain expectations."
"I… I understand, Your Highness," he stammered, still reeling. "I am prepared to accept the consequences."
Celestia shook her head gently. "The only consequence I wish to discuss today, Shining Armor, is the toll this secrecy is taking on you. You are a good and honorable pony. You have served Equestria with unwavering loyalty. To see you so burdened by fear… it pains me."
She sighed, a sound that seemed to carry the weight of ages. "Long ago, I too knew a love that defied the conventions of the time. A love that had to remain hidden, for the sake of peace, for the sake of understanding that was not yet present in the world." Her eyes held a distant sorrow that Shining Armor had never seen before. "I understand the weight of such a secret, Captain. And I understand the courage it takes to love in the face of such obstacles."
Tears welled in Shining Armor’s eyes, tears of shock, of confusion, and of an overwhelming, unexpected relief. "You… you don't… disapprove?"
"Disapprove?" Celestia’s smile was genuine now, warm and reassuring. "My dear Shining Armor, my primary wish is for the happiness and well-being of my subjects, especially those as devoted as yourself. Your private life, as long as it does not compromise your duties or the safety of this kingdom, is your own. Nathan… from what I have discerned, he is a gentle soul. He brings you happiness, does he not?"
Shining Armor could only nod, speechless.
"Then that is what matters," Celestia said firmly. "The path ahead may not be easy. There will be whispers, perhaps. Challenges. But you will not face them alone. And you will not face them with my condemnation." She stepped forward, placing a comforting hoof on his shoulder. "Live your life with honor, Shining Armor. Love with courage. And know that your Princess… understands."
A wave of gratitude so immense it was almost painful washed over Shining Armor. The fear that had been his constant companion for so long began to recede, replaced by a fragile, burgeoning hope. He had expected ruin, but had found compassion. In the understanding eyes of his Queen, he saw not an end, but a new, albeit challenging, beginning.




Chapter 5
        Now that shiny armor don't have to hide anything. Due to the simple fact that now the Queen know all about what he is all about. He decided to meet Nathan somewhere secretly. It's something that he been wanting to do with Nathan for quite a while. Since he began to like him very well. But he knew in spite of how much the queen was accepting him and his new ways. There was some things that even a queen might frown upon. So these are the things that he keep more deep secret and also watching over his back making sure that none of the royal guards are following him anywhere.


                It was a quiet and cool even deep into a mysterious place outside of the normal wrenches of the carefree Castle as well outside of the reaches of the village of ponyville. He led Nathan slowly to a very secret area. He was guaranteed that no one knew about this area. And with his heart kind of conflicted about what he was about to allow to happen. He was not certain about it. But in his heart he knew this is something that he wanted but he wasn't quite sure with Nathan was going to go through with it after all they are two different species and he wasn't quite sure Nathan was ready for it.


        As I was walking Nathan noticed that shiny armor as a nickname applies most of the time was not wearing any type of protective armor like he normally would. Nathan didn't see anything mysterious about it but he was curious about the fact that shiny armor is not fully in his normal attire. He was curious to ask but at the same time he didn't want to ruin anything either after all shining armor can be a little bit hard to understand and sensitive in some areas.


        “I can see you staring at me. You've been staring at me since day one. You know I'm not ashamed at it. I guess in your world you're probably not used to seeing anything like me. Well I sure in your world you got some form of creatures that similar to me. Maybe some ponies or horses maybe you call it something different. I know a little bit about it.”shining armor said to nathan. As they suddenly stopped by a tree. Nathan looked around put that down towards the ground as shining armor stared at him.”go ahead spit it out it's like you about it's like you is about to melt. By curiosity or whatever it is that's going on in your mind right now and Nathan.!”shining armor you sounding like he is a little bit irritated. But at the same time patient as he can be. It's obvious that shining armor it is ready to try this thing that he been wanting to try. But both of them is so nervous it's hard for them to express their feelings.
“I don't know what I was thinking the other day. I guess I let too much come out my mouth at once. I thought that I was speaking in a way that the queen wouldn't understand. But I guess she's a little bit more smarter than when I give her credit for.”shining armor looked back at him.”my sister is not stupid. Many people think that she may act all cheerful and she may have a very cheerful demeanor but you're very believed that she is very skilled very. How else do you think that she able to keep all her guards in check. Luna learned that the hard way. But then again it's hard to understand hard too. Two sisters who is polar opposite of each other but still respect each other in one way or another.”he sat down near the tree and looked it back at Nathan. Nathan looked down at shiny armor and he seen shiny armor horse hood. He tried not to look at it. It's not the first time I mean he always able to see it. But it was clearly showing a little bit more than normal. Something that pretty much bother him a little bit. But not too much.
        “You know something shiny armor. I don't know what it is about most of the inhabits here. But I tried my best not to look what I don't belong. But it's hard not to look when almost everyone here is pretty much naked as they can be.”Nathan said something a little bit irritating.”natural form and that's what you're trying to say. We don't believe in the same principle as you do. Why cover up it's not necessarily necessary. In most that do cover up is only for show not because of they really think it's necessary have any moral standards about it. How we see it is nature unfortunately I don't think that's how you see it and that's why you freaking out again.” Shiny armor begin to smile at him and laugh a little bit. Nathan felt embarrassed because it's clearly now on that shiny armor is pretty much recognizing that Nathan have something going for him.


        “I bet you all of the bits in the world that you probably want to do something to me. Like Mount me I can tell I know when somebody liked me. I can tell it by a mile away. Look I'm all up for it. But the problem is what you do to one you have to be able to receive and I doubt very seriously you can take me. I mean just look at you I think I might rip you apart.”shining armor got up and started to examine Nathan backside.”it is definitely not the size and I'm used to. I mean I'm used to doing ponies like Big Mac and other bigger ponies. You're not even a pony. Or anything in that nature. I don't know.”shining armor lift up his hind leg and showed Nathan all of his pony hood. Nathan eyes got a little bit bigger here in shining armor talk like this is a little bit unusual for Nathan. He didn't think that shining armor was even going to start to communicate like this.


        “You know you're a lot bigger than what I thought. I don't know I think I can take you on. If it means that I can have my fun as well. I do like you a lot. I think I can take you.”Nathan was sounding a little bit confident. But shiny armor was not convinced.”look no defense nathan. I don't want you to end up somewhere that you have to get treated for your back end. Look I am definitely saying this I am kind of horny right now thanks to you. I tell you what we make a side deal all right. I'll let you mount if you give me some pleasure in between my legs. I'm not inspecting you to fit this thing in you. But do something to make it you know do what it does then you can have your fun. Is that a deal or what?”shiny armor said it and kind of a sarcastic way but the same time he really meant what he said. Nathan took him on his deal as he began to undress his self shining armor looked at Nathan body.
        “Finally your natural self. Not covering anything. Wow you look a little bit sexy I had to say. I was assuming that you would look something different. But I guess we all got our fixed.”it appears that shiny armor really likes Nathan body. Shiny armor walk over to Nathan body a little bit and begin to smell it.”I like a strong stallion. You smell very powerful. You're making me more and more wanting you. You know what not I'm going to stick to my standards.”shining armor shot down. And he spread it his legs.”come over here and show me what you got big stallion.”


        Nathan walked over nervously completely nude as he approached shiny armor he can tell that shiny armor is pretty much up for wherever Nathan has in store. But he knows if he wants the prize this pony backside. Think he going to have to really give him some pleasure to the point that he gives into him. But Nathan realized how in the world he was going to do that without proper equipment. He didn't know how they did it here. But nevertheless he kneel down and begin to places and on the very hard cock of shiny armor.


        As you begin to touch they're very hard cock of shiny armor he can feel his own begin to rise into full standard. The first thing he did was start to rub it with his hand. Shining armor looked at him with a disgusted work”he's at the best you can do. Come on be more adventurous.”he said in a sarcastic way. Nathan looked it up at him and realize normal stuff is not going to please this pony. So he decided to try something different. Moving closer to the cock of shiny armor he sat down spreading his leg allowing shining armor cock rest gently against his even though it was a lot more bigger. When his cock landing on his chest
It is about up to his nipples almost. He can't believe how big this individual is. Nevertheless Nathan begin to slowly close his legs. And began to try to grind it.. shining armor looked it down at him. As Nathan begin to grind he grabbed shining armor cock and begin to squeeze it as hard as he could with his warm hands. Giving him a very rough hand job. Shining armor looked it down at him was a shock. And as an automatic response he began to hump him as he was trying to give him a hand job creating a very unusual feeling for shiny armor.


“I don't know but your front paws are a lot more warmer than those than I ever seen. I mean I never felt anything like this a lot better then the usual that I ever felt. Keep it up.”Nathan noticed that the sarcasm was beginning to change more into a more friendly tone. As a intensifying rubbing kept going and getting more stronger by the second. Nathan finally can get shining armor up to the point that he was beginning to drip from his cock. And it didn't take long before shining armor begin to spray Nathan all over his face with his warm seed covering Nathan face and hands with thick and warm and gooey seed. Then Nathan stopped realizing that he was a complete mess. Shiny armor look back down at him again to smile.


        “Boy you look just like the way I like them nice and creamy he said.”shining armor begin to resisting himself so his mouth can be aimed at Nathan face. Before you know it he was licking all of the seed off of Nathan and cleaning him up. Nathan never felt anything like this before he tried to control his self as a pony was giving him a pretty much a body job by now. After then as promised shiny armor allow Nathan to mount him. He kneel down giving Nathan full access to him. Nathan walked up to shining armor backside. The smell of stallion is up in the air. Nathan is ready but he noticed that he's guy is not ready. Nathan felt embarrassed. As he try his best to get himself back ready it just wasn't. He knew he didn't want to blow this opportunity. And he needed to be able to get ready before shining armor realize that he's nowhere near capable at this moment.
        
        Nathan begin to push yourself against shining armor heated and hot butthole. Nathan can feel warm air does cruising out of the back side of him. As is member begin to respond finally to what was going on. Without hesitation Nathan begin to push into shiny armor but quickly learned it wasn't going to happen. He can feel sharp pain coming up quickly letting him know that this is not happening. In pain Nathan pull back out shining armor notice it.


        “What's wrong stallion not able to handle a more stronger and powerful stallion than yourself.”it's sarcasm came back as quickly as it left. I was shiny armor realized that Nathan could not penetrate him. But nevertheless shiny armor turned around and position himself so he can help Nathan out. He put Nathan manhood inside of his mouth and begin to suck on it as hard as he can. Getting it as wet and sloppy as you can possibly could. Once it was sloppy enough. Shining armor stood up a little bit and begin to grind against him. Knock alone when shining armor it felt like that he was about to release he position himself anyway that he can squirt his seed all over Nathan cock making it very sticky and very lubricated.


        “Down there stallion. You should be good to go you should be able to ride and rock and roll by now. Now let's get this party started.”shining armor said turning back around Nathan looked down at his lower side and realize how much that shiny armor really did to him. He look like a white lollipop now. But nevertheless. He mounted shiny armor and was able to fit in this time without having too much of a problem. I guess between all of the fluids that was on him he will not have a problem of poking inside of the stallion but.


        They've been beginning to poke slowly before he begins to speed it up. Slamming him each time that he could. Pushing himself deeper into shiny armor. Shining armor making all kinds of weird noises add Nathan was thrusting in him. Even sometimes surprising even by sounding like a pure horse. Only to intensify things even worse. And when shining armor can feel that Nathan was about to come. Shining armor slammed his self against him cause of Nathan to go all the way in. And would not move. Nathan tried to pull back but shining armor had him pined against that tree. He was not going nowhere.




“Hold on stallion you're not going anywhere until I have milk every single drop out of you. You ain't finished until I tell you stallion.”shining armor said as his back and it's pushed deep against Nathan cock into the point that he is cock deep. Was shiny armor but against Nathan lower in they think can feel all kinds of feelings. It is very warm inside of shining armor. And it's very moist as well. A little bit sticky also. As Nathan can fill his self cumming Nathan can feel it. He is releasing as much as he can. As shiny armor is pretty much not letting go. Once Nathan thought that he was finished shiny arm is still would not release him. Pushing himself deeper upon Nathan grinding him and grinding him moving back and forth back and forth. Nathan begin to lightly hit him on the back end. Trying to tell him that he couldn't release anymore. But shining armor look back at him and kept on doing it what he was doing regardless of Nathan protesting.


        Finally after some time shining armor move back allowing Nathan cock to exit from his backside. Nathan collapsed down to the ground as shiny armor looked it back at him as Nathan seed was falling from shining armor backside. Shiny armor gave him a smile.


        “We got to do this again sometime. The next time I make sure that you are good and ready. That way it won't end so quickly. I'm used to my mates the last and a little bit longer than this. It's all right this is your first time. I pretty sure it was some training you'll be good to go.”
        


        Shining armor walked over to him and sat down and rested beside him. At Nathan was trying to get his composer back. After all it that was some intense mating that he ever felt in his whole entire life. He start to question himself if he made the right decision. And also he questioned himself about where or not he should have picked shiny armor in in the first place.


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