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Bucking hell...” Rainbow Dash flopped onto a low, overhanging cloud over Ponyville.\n\n\tShe couldn't believe it. She had been planning on visiting Fluttershy this morning, but had spotted Twilight Sparkle of all ponies going inside.\n\n\tDash had watched the whole exchange, making sure she was not seen, and what she saw made her feel both REALLY turned on, and REALLY desperate.\n\n\t“Seriously... How the heck could that Egghead get it on with Shy before I could... I mean, I could tell she wasn't thinking right and all that, but still. I should tell Rarity, but that would hurt Fluttershy a lot.” She flopped onto her back and looked up into the sky. She would be loyal to her friends and let them figure things out without interference. \n\n\t“Shy and Rare have their date tonight, and here I am, being a voyeur with Shy and Twi...” She grinned. “Still, that was so hot watching them.” She glanced and saw a few other Pegasus Ponies flying around. \n\n\tThis was not the time to clop, no matter now much she wanted too. And believe me, she REALLY wanted to clop right about now. She was still wet from the show earlier and dripping a little.\n...\n\n\tDoctor Whoof was walking along on the ground below felt a few drops of 'rain' on his back. He looked up and saw only small, fluffy clouds in the sky. With a shrug, he walked on.\n...\n\n\t“Oh Daaashie.” A familiar, bubbly and happy voice called out from a cloud above Rainbow Dash's cloud.\n\n\tDash looked up and saw the ever happy Pinkie Pie. “Hey Pinkie. “What's up?”\n\n\t“I am silly. Why don't you come up here with me? This cloud us catching a cooly cool breeze.”\n\n\tDash chuckled and flew up, landing next to Pinkie Pie.\n\n\tPinkie fluttered her wings happily as the light breeze blew through her mane. “See? Nice and cool. Should help you cool down some. Wink wink nudge nudge.”\n\n\t“Huh?” Dash blushed a little. “What are you talking about?”\n\n\t“Well duh. I could smell you from up here. You must have been roasting in the sun or working out or something. You're all sweaty.” She sat up, her ears perking up as well. “Oh, I know. Let's go swimming.” She shot off, leaving a pink streak behind her.\n\n\tDash laughed and followed. By Celestia, she loved flying with Pinky. She didn't know nearly as many stunts, but the former Earth Pony was certainly fast and tricky in the air.\n\n\tNot quite as fast as Rainbow Dash, but Pinkie Pie was more agile, and had the potential to learn most of Dash's tricks.\n\n\tThe pair flew from Ponyville and approached the mountains. \n\n\tDash caught up to Pinkie. “Hey Pinkie. Where are we going? Those are the Dragon Tooth Mountains.”\n\n\t“Oh I know.” Pinkie flashed a toothy smile. “I found this super sweet lake that's hidden and can only be reached by flying. Try to keep up.”\n\n\tDash looked ahead and saw the narrow crevasse in the side of the shear mountain cliff. It was taller than it was wide, and Pinkie turned sideways to fly through.\n\n\tDash did the same, not wanting to be outdone by her overly energetic friend.\n\n\tAt the speeds they were flying, Dash was worried that they would crash in this dark cave.\n\n\tBut that didn't happen. The opening only took a few seconds to pass through. It then opened into a beautiful lake, hidden INSIDE the mountain.\n\n\tLarge crystals supported the ceiling and walls, and reflected light from a number of small openings, making the place shine with all the colors of the rainbow.\n\n\t“Oh wow...” Dash was in total awe and the pair of Pegasus flew and landed on a fine, crystal sand beach. “How did you find this place? It's awesome.”\n\n\t“I know, right? I found it when I saw that hole in the mountain and wondered what was in it. It was so narrow I had to fly sideways. I'm glad I went fast because I would have crashed and gotten stuck and that would have been no fun.”\n\n\t“Then you found this. Do any other Ponies know about this place?”\n\n\tPinkie shook her head as she stretched her body and wings. “Well, the only hoof prints I've seen on this beach are mine, and now yours. I'm guessing we're the only ones.”\n\n\tDash smiled. “I could live here, it's so awesome.”\n\n\t“But then our friends would never be able to reach you.” Pinkie poked her friend in the ribs. “Come on, the water is really nice.” She then jumped into the air, spun a few times before curling into a ball. “PONYBALL!!!”\n\n\tDash got soaked by the splash. She laughed as she shook the water off her wings. “Think you can outdo me?”\n\n\tPinkie Pie surfaced and beamed. “Come on in. The water is fine.”\n\n\tDash grinned her cocky grin and flew up, performing the same spin as Pinkie Pie, but also flipping at the same time.\n\n\tRather than a big splash, Dash hit the water with barely a ripple created.\n\n\t“Oh wow. That was Dasherific.” Pinkie clapped after Dash surfaced. \n\n\t“Yea, I know.” She patted her puffed out chest. “I'm the best.” She sighed as she lay back and floated, looking up at the ceiling. “Ahh... This feel so awesome.”\n\n\tIt was rare for Dash to actually dunk herself in water, usually preferring to take a dip in a cloud. Still, she had to admit, this felt wonderful.\n\n\tPinkie swam circles around Dash for a little while.\n\n\tDash became aware Pinkie had suddenly stopped splish splashing around and glanced. “What's up Pinkie?”\n\n\t“Um... Well...”\n\n\t“Well what?” Dash swam over. “Are you ok? You look, I dunno... Not yourself.”\n\n\tPinkie snickered. “Of course I'm myself. When I'm happy, when I'm sad, when I'm confused, I'm always myself.”\n\n\tDash nodded her understanding. Crazy Pinkie may be, but she was a damn good friend. “So, what's bugging you?”\n\n\t“Um... I don't know how to say this...”\n\n\t“Spit it out. If you hold it in, you'll explode.”\n\n\t“Then explode again?”\n\n\tDash and Pinkie laughed.\n\n\t“Oh Pinkie, you are so random. That's one of the things I love about you.”\n\n\t“L...” Pinkie froze for just a second, her eyes wide.\n\n\t“Pinkie?”\n\n\t“Oh... Um... Yea, There's things about you I love too.” She looked down as she swam backwards to the soft beach.\n\n\t“Ok, I know some thing's bugging you now Pinkie.” Dash swam to shore as well. She glanced at Pinkie while she was still dripping wet.\n\n\tHer mane and tail were strait, but that would never last. Her coat clung tight to her body. She did have a light athletic build, and was slim. This was a mystery, considering the amount of baked goods she tended to eat in a day.\n\n\tPinkie looked at Dash, at her dripping body. “I... I actually love a lot of things about you...”\n\n\tDash felt strange. Pinkie was acting... odd. Not a bad odd, or her usual random odd. She was just acting odd. Then it clicked. “You... You love ME?” Her voice cracked a little on that last word.\n\n\tPinkie nodded, her eyes never leaving Dash's eyes. “I do love you Dashie. Not just because you're fast and can do all those stunts and are great at pranking ponies. I love you because you're beautiful and smart and fun.”\n\n\t“Beautiful?” Dash blushed. Nopony had ever called her beautiful before.\n\n\t“You are. You really are.” Pinkie shook off, becoming the usual fluffy looking pink pony. “That's only 1 of the many reasons why I love you.”\n\n\tDash was feeling a little flustered. “I... I don't know what to say Pinkie.”\n\n\t“It's ok of you don't love me Dashie. I... I just had to tell you how I felt.” Pinkie swirled a forehoof nervously in the sand, face down, but eyes still watching Rainbow Dash.\n\n\tRainbow Dash didn't know what to think. “I like you Pinkie, lots. You're my best friend...” She shook herself off. “Um, I mean, I've always preferred mares and all that...”\n\n\t“And you've always wanted Rarity. I know. She's untouchable. Nopony will ever be good enough for her unless it's a male version of her.”\n\n\tDash chuckled. “You'd think so, wouldn't you? Untouchable Rarity?”\n\n\tPinkie blinked. “What are you saying... You... You finally... you and Rarity?”\n\n\t“Nope.” Dash replied quickly. “I wouldn't stand a chance getting rarity now.”\n\n\t“So, you're still available?”\n\n\t“Uh... I guess I am...”\n\n\tGlomp! Hug! “So am I. I mean, if you wanna be with somepony... I'm available, and I really do love you.” She released the hug and stepped back.\n\n\tDash looked Pinkie Pie over. Rarity was untouchable. Always had been, and even more so now. Pinkie Pie was starting to grow out of her cute phase and actually starting to mature physically. Sure, she'd always be cute because she was all pink, but she would have a mature cuteness about her.\n\n\t“How about... We enjoy our private swim date together.” Dash finally said, smiling. “First date and all.”\n\n\tPinkie's eyes lit up. “You mean it? You consider this our first date?”\n\n\t“Sure. Why not? I man, we're alone and all that. Why not call this a date?”\n\n\tThe Pink Pegasus smiled and splashed Dash. “Then it's a swim date.”\n\n\t“Oh, that was sneaky.” Dash laughed and splashed Pinkie back.\n\n\tAs far as first dates go, these two had a lot of fun Swimming, floating lazily in the water, splashing each other, laying on the crystal beach and basking in the reflected rays of the sun. It was the best first date Pinkie had ever had. Actually, this was the first date Pinkie had ever had.\n...\n\n\tWhile two Pegasus Ponies were enjoying each others company, a certain farm pony was not being very happy.\n\n\tHer unhappiness was directed at her big brother, Big Macintosh.\n\n\tWell, more so at some out of town pony named Peach Schnapps.\n\n\tApplejack had walked into the barn to get a tool she had needed to a job, and heard some giggling and rustling in the hay loft.\n\n\tShe found a very flustered pair of ponies hiding in the hay.\n\n\tPeach Schnapps was a slender little Unicorn Pony, with a light peach colored coat and a reddish peach mane and tail. She was a very cute little thing for sure. Her cutie mark was a moonshine jug with a peach on the front.\n\n\t“What in tarnation? Big Macintosh? What do ya'll think yer doin'?”\n\n\t“Uh...” Big Mac was never one for many words, and an angry little sister just made him unable to speak.\n\n\t“An you, Peach. Ya think you can just come in here and snatch up mah big bro? You dun got him drunk an' seduced him, didn't ya?”\n\n\tPeach Schnapps was blushing brightly. “Miss. AJ, please understand. Big Mac and I, we've... We've been seeing each other for a few months now. I told him we should tell you...”\n\n\t“Oh really? Then why didn't ya?”\n\n\t“Ya'll gonna just get mad.” Big Mac spoke up. “An' Ah ain't drunk.”\n\n\tApplejack stepped right up and sniffed their breaths. Big Mac had only a light hint of peach on his breath, and it most certainly was NOT from drinking the alcoholic version of peach schnapps.\n\n\tPeach on the other hoof, just smelled like peaches, with a tiny hint of alcohol, due mostly to her profession of making peach based booze.\n\n\t“Neither of ya are drunk...” She stepped back. “So what now?”\n\n\t“Ah'm older than ya'll lil' sis. Ah can choose who Ah wanna be with if Ah so choose.”\n\n\t“Gosh darn it Big Mac...” Applejack hated being put in her place. Her big brother was right. She had no right to interfere in his romantic life. It was not like he was dodging his chores to make out with this mare. He had already taken care of them and had a few hours to burn before afternoon chores needed to start. “Fine. “Ya'll have fun, but Ah dun wanna smell nuthin' funny in the hey, if'n ya'll catch mah drift.” She glared at her brother and marefriend before storming off in a huff.\n\n\t(Ah can't believe he gone got himself a filly. She's a year younger than me fer cryin out loud. But... she is sweet, and even Fluttershy wasn't shy around her the first time they met.) AJ calmed down as she approached the orchard. (Shame really... Ah was kinda takin' a shine to the lil darlin mahself. Guess Ah'll just have to be content with mah own two hooves fer now.)\n\n\tWith that, Applejack reached the stump she was wanting to remove, and only now remembered she had forgotten the tool she needed.\n\n\t“Ah fer cryin' out loud...” She stormed back to get the chain and axe.\n...\n\nTo Be Continued...?\n...\n\nAuthour's Note:\nNot a clopfic, but grounds for future shipping and clopfic material. \n","writing_bbcode_parsed":"Author: Annonymouse
MLP:FiM is property of Hasbro. This is a free fan-fiction, not to be sold or traded for any money, goods or services.
...
A/N: No comments on spelling or grammar please. See my profile for details.
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WARNING: This chapter is foreshadowing for some future shipping. Fluttershy x Rarity. Dash x Pinkie. Big Mac x Peach Schnapps. Applejack x whoever / whatever (unless I bring in somepony for her, who knows).
Oh yea, I wrote a 'one shot' short story called Pink Pegasus... I'll be using that as 'canon' for this story. Read it so you won't be too confused about Pinkie Pie being a Pegasus.
Peach Schnapps is my OC from Feeling Peachy Keen (unpublished at this time).
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Dominant Species.
5.5
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\t“Fluttershy and Rarity, then Fluttershy and Twilight... Bucking hell...” Rainbow Dash flopped onto a low, overhanging cloud over Ponyville.
\tShe couldn't believe it. She had been planning on visiting Fluttershy this morning, but had spotted Twilight Sparkle of all ponies going inside.
\tDash had watched the whole exchange, making sure she was not seen, and what she saw made her feel both REALLY turned on, and REALLY desperate.
\t“Seriously... How the heck could that Egghead get it on with Shy before I could... I mean, I could tell she wasn't thinking right and all that, but still. I should tell Rarity, but that would hurt Fluttershy a lot.” She flopped onto her back and looked up into the sky. She would be loyal to her friends and let them figure things out without interference.
\t“Shy and Rare have their date tonight, and here I am, being a voyeur with Shy and Twi...” She grinned. “Still, that was so hot watching them.” She glanced and saw a few other Pegasus Ponies flying around.
\tThis was not the time to clop, no matter now much she wanted too. And believe me, she REALLY wanted to clop right about now. She was still wet from the show earlier and dripping a little.
...
\tDoctor Whoof was walking along on the ground below felt a few drops of 'rain' on his back. He looked up and saw only small, fluffy clouds in the sky. With a shrug, he walked on.
...
\t“Oh Daaashie.” A familiar, bubbly and happy voice called out from a cloud above Rainbow Dash's cloud.
\tDash looked up and saw the ever happy Pinkie Pie. “Hey Pinkie. “What's up?”
\t“I am silly. Why don't you come up here with me? This cloud us catching a cooly cool breeze.”
\tDash chuckled and flew up, landing next to Pinkie Pie.
\tPinkie fluttered her wings happily as the light breeze blew through her mane. “See? Nice and cool. Should help you cool down some. Wink wink nudge nudge.”
\t“Huh?” Dash blushed a little. “What are you talking about?”
\t“Well duh. I could smell you from up here. You must have been roasting in the sun or working out or something. You're all sweaty.” She sat up, her ears perking up as well. “Oh, I know. Let's go swimming.” She shot off, leaving a pink streak behind her.
\tDash laughed and followed. By Celestia, she loved flying with Pinky. She didn't know nearly as many stunts, but the former Earth Pony was certainly fast and tricky in the air.
\tNot quite as fast as Rainbow Dash, but Pinkie Pie was more agile, and had the potential to learn most of Dash's tricks.
\tThe pair flew from Ponyville and approached the mountains.
\tDash caught up to Pinkie. “Hey Pinkie. Where are we going? Those are the Dragon Tooth Mountains.”
\t“Oh I know.” Pinkie flashed a toothy smile. “I found this super sweet lake that's hidden and can only be reached by flying. Try to keep up.”
\tDash looked ahead and saw the narrow crevasse in the side of the shear mountain cliff. It was taller than it was wide, and Pinkie turned sideways to fly through.
\tDash did the same, not wanting to be outdone by her overly energetic friend.
\tAt the speeds they were flying, Dash was worried that they would crash in this dark cave.
\tBut that didn't happen. The opening only took a few seconds to pass through. It then opened into a beautiful lake, hidden INSIDE the mountain.
\tLarge crystals supported the ceiling and walls, and reflected light from a number of small openings, making the place shine with all the colors of the rainbow.
\t“Oh wow...” Dash was in total awe and the pair of Pegasus flew and landed on a fine, crystal sand beach. “How did you find this place? It's awesome.”
\t“I know, right? I found it when I saw that hole in the mountain and wondered what was in it. It was so narrow I had to fly sideways. I'm glad I went fast because I would have crashed and gotten stuck and that would have been no fun.”
\t“Then you found this. Do any other Ponies know about this place?”
\tPinkie shook her head as she stretched her body and wings. “Well, the only hoof prints I've seen on this beach are mine, and now yours. I'm guessing we're the only ones.”
\tDash smiled. “I could live here, it's so awesome.”
\t“But then our friends would never be able to reach you.” Pinkie poked her friend in the ribs. “Come on, the water is really nice.” She then jumped into the air, spun a few times before curling into a ball. “PONYBALL!!!”
\tDash got soaked by the splash. She laughed as she shook the water off her wings. “Think you can outdo me?”
\tPinkie Pie surfaced and beamed. “Come on in. The water is fine.”
\tDash grinned her cocky grin and flew up, performing the same spin as Pinkie Pie, but also flipping at the same time.
\tRather than a big splash, Dash hit the water with barely a ripple created.
\t“Oh wow. That was Dasherific.” Pinkie clapped after Dash surfaced.
\t“Yea, I know.” She patted her puffed out chest. “I'm the best.” She sighed as she lay back and floated, looking up at the ceiling. “Ahh... This feel so awesome.”
\tIt was rare for Dash to actually dunk herself in water, usually preferring to take a dip in a cloud. Still, she had to admit, this felt wonderful.
\tPinkie swam circles around Dash for a little while.
\tDash became aware Pinkie had suddenly stopped splish splashing around and glanced. “What's up Pinkie?”
\t“Um... Well...”
\t“Well what?” Dash swam over. “Are you ok? You look, I dunno... Not yourself.”
\tPinkie snickered. “Of course I'm myself. When I'm happy, when I'm sad, when I'm confused, I'm always myself.”
\tDash nodded her understanding. Crazy Pinkie may be, but she was a damn good friend. “So, what's bugging you?”
\t“Um... I don't know how to say this...”
\t“Spit it out. If you hold it in, you'll explode.”
\t“Then explode again?”
\tDash and Pinkie laughed.
\t“Oh Pinkie, you are so random. That's one of the things I love about you.”
\t“L...” Pinkie froze for just a second, her eyes wide.
\t“Pinkie?”
\t“Oh... Um... Yea, There's things about you I love too.” She looked down as she swam backwards to the soft beach.
\t“Ok, I know some thing's bugging you now Pinkie.” Dash swam to shore as well. She glanced at Pinkie while she was still dripping wet.
\tHer mane and tail were strait, but that would never last. Her coat clung tight to her body. She did have a light athletic build, and was slim. This was a mystery, considering the amount of baked goods she tended to eat in a day.
\tPinkie looked at Dash, at her dripping body. “I... I actually love a lot of things about you...”
\tDash felt strange. Pinkie was acting... odd. Not a bad odd, or her usual random odd. She was just acting odd. Then it clicked. “You... You love ME?” Her voice cracked a little on that last word.
\tPinkie nodded, her eyes never leaving Dash's eyes. “I do love you Dashie. Not just because you're fast and can do all those stunts and are great at pranking ponies. I love you because you're beautiful and smart and fun.”
\t“Beautiful?” Dash blushed. Nopony had ever called her beautiful before.
\t“You are. You really are.” Pinkie shook off, becoming the usual fluffy looking pink pony. “That's only 1 of the many reasons why I love you.”
\tDash was feeling a little flustered. “I... I don't know what to say Pinkie.”
\t“It's ok of you don't love me Dashie. I... I just had to tell you how I felt.” Pinkie swirled a forehoof nervously in the sand, face down, but eyes still watching Rainbow Dash.
\tRainbow Dash didn't know what to think. “I like you Pinkie, lots. You're my best friend...” She shook herself off. “Um, I mean, I've always preferred mares and all that...”
\t“And you've always wanted Rarity. I know. She's untouchable. Nopony will ever be good enough for her unless it's a male version of her.”
\tDash chuckled. “You'd think so, wouldn't you? Untouchable Rarity?”
\tPinkie blinked. “What are you saying... You... You finally... you and Rarity?”
\t“Nope.” Dash replied quickly. “I wouldn't stand a chance getting rarity now.”
\t“So, you're still available?”
\t“Uh... I guess I am...”
\tGlomp! Hug! “So am I. I mean, if you wanna be with somepony... I'm available, and I really do love you.” She released the hug and stepped back.
\tDash looked Pinkie Pie over. Rarity was untouchable. Always had been, and even more so now. Pinkie Pie was starting to grow out of her cute phase and actually starting to mature physically. Sure, she'd always be cute because she was all pink, but she would have a mature cuteness about her.
\t“How about... We enjoy our private swim date together.” Dash finally said, smiling. “First date and all.”
\tPinkie's eyes lit up. “You mean it? You consider this our first date?”
\t“Sure. Why not? I man, we're alone and all that. Why not call this a date?”
\tThe Pink Pegasus smiled and splashed Dash. “Then it's a swim date.”
\t“Oh, that was sneaky.” Dash laughed and splashed Pinkie back.
\tAs far as first dates go, these two had a lot of fun Swimming, floating lazily in the water, splashing each other, laying on the crystal beach and basking in the reflected rays of the sun. It was the best first date Pinkie had ever had. Actually, this was the first date Pinkie had ever had.
...
\tWhile two Pegasus Ponies were enjoying each others company, a certain farm pony was not being very happy.
\tHer unhappiness was directed at her big brother, Big Macintosh.
\tWell, more so at some out of town pony named Peach Schnapps.
\tApplejack had walked into the barn to get a tool she had needed to a job, and heard some giggling and rustling in the hay loft.
\tShe found a very flustered pair of ponies hiding in the hay.
\tPeach Schnapps was a slender little Unicorn Pony, with a light peach colored coat and a reddish peach mane and tail. She was a very cute little thing for sure. Her cutie mark was a moonshine jug with a peach on the front.
\t“What in tarnation? Big Macintosh? What do ya'll think yer doin'?”
\t“Uh...” Big Mac was never one for many words, and an angry little sister just made him unable to speak.
\t“An you, Peach. Ya think you can just come in here and snatch up mah big bro? You dun got him drunk an' seduced him, didn't ya?”
\tPeach Schnapps was blushing brightly. “Miss. AJ, please understand. Big Mac and I, we've... We've been seeing each other for a few months now. I told him we should tell you...”
\t“Oh really? Then why didn't ya?”
\t“Ya'll gonna just get mad.” Big Mac spoke up. “An' Ah ain't drunk.”
\tApplejack stepped right up and sniffed their breaths. Big Mac had only a light hint of peach on his breath, and it most certainly was NOT from drinking the alcoholic version of peach schnapps.
\tPeach on the other hoof, just smelled like peaches, with a tiny hint of alcohol, due mostly to her profession of making peach based booze.
\t“Neither of ya are drunk...” She stepped back. “So what now?”
\t“Ah'm older than ya'll lil' sis. Ah can choose who Ah wanna be with if Ah so choose.”
\t“Gosh darn it Big Mac...” Applejack hated being put in her place. Her big brother was right. She had no right to interfere in his romantic life. It was not like he was dodging his chores to make out with this mare. He had already taken care of them and had a few hours to burn before afternoon chores needed to start. “Fine. “Ya'll have fun, but Ah dun wanna smell nuthin' funny in the hey, if'n ya'll catch mah drift.” She glared at her brother and marefriend before storming off in a huff.
\t(Ah can't believe he gone got himself a filly. She's a year younger than me fer cryin out loud. But... she is sweet, and even Fluttershy wasn't shy around her the first time they met.) AJ calmed down as she approached the orchard. (Shame really... Ah was kinda takin' a shine to the lil darlin mahself. Guess Ah'll just have to be content with mah own two hooves fer now.)
\tWith that, Applejack reached the stump she was wanting to remove, and only now remembered she had forgotten the tool she needed.
\t“Ah fer cryin' out loud...” She stormed back to get the chain and axe.
...
To Be Continued...?
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Authour's Note:
Not a clopfic, but grounds for future shipping and clopfic material.
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