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living room and collected his things when suddenly he heard a noise and turned to see twilights bag had fallen over and books spilling out onto the floor, he smiled as he picked up her bag and placing the books back in her bag when one of them caught his eye, “hmm pony anatomy, I guess I could give this a read.” he thought to himself as he set down twilight’s bag and opened up the book.\n\nTurning to the first page he saw a photo taped in place of the first picture of the book, the photo was of a nude pony’s body, the fur was purple, and her tail had a familiar color, “wait, is that? Twilight?” he asked himself as his manhood stirs, he flipped another page to see her spreading her pussy lips, chance bit his lip and he quickly ran into the bathroom as his member strained against his pants, closing the door he quickly unzipped his pants, he sat down on the toilet lid as he slid down his pants and briefs letting his member spring to attention, “ dang it’s been begging all day for this.” he told himself as he quickly grasped the head of his member and slowly gliding it down his shaft.\n\nHe slowly flipped through the pages as he continued to move his hand up and down give out some gasps as he closed his eyes imagining Twilight herself was on him “ mmm Twilight.” he said softly as he dropped the book as he slowly moved the hand to his balls and continued to stroke his member as his other hand slowly fondled his balls.\n\nChance panted as he increased his hand's speed as he basked in the pleasure he was getting from all this. suddenly, the door opens revealing Twilight rubbing her eyes, Chance quickly froze as he saw her open her eyes wide and red fills her face, then she saw her personal book on the floor and gave a big mischievous grin, \"so? Do you like what you see? what to see the real thing?\" she asked lifting up her skirt showing that she wasn't wearing panties, Chance blushed bright red as his tip leaked pre, \" oh let me get that for you.\" she told him letting go of her skirt and ripping open her buttoned-up shirt revealing that she had no bra on.\n\nher breast wasn't as small as Applejack's or Rainbow Dashes, but they were easy enough to hide, \"I hope you like them.\" she smiled as she walked in front of him and slowly lowered herself on her knees, \"shouldn't we take this in the living room or your bedroom? AH!\" he asked before she gave his shaft a nice big lick from base to tip, \"and let my dad or mom catches? no way.\" she told him as she used her magic to turn on the water as she placed her breast on his shaft and slowly moved them up and down his shaft as her tung laps at the rim of his tip, they both moaned as Chances tip squirted out pre on her tongue causing her to drink the sweet-tasting pre.\n\nshe moans loudly before shoving half of his member into her mouth and grasping the lower part of his shaft, she gave off the mixed sounds of moans, slurping, and gulping as her head bobbed up and down and her hand strokes the lower half of his member, her tongue constantly swirling around his member, suddenly Chance grabbed onto both sides of her head and bucked his hips pushing his member deep into her throat, \"oh gawd that feels good.\" he exclaimed as he started to thrust into her mouth causing his balls to slap against her chin, Twilight moans loudly as she enjoys the feeling of her throat being filled by his thick member.\n\nshe moaned watching his reaction with each thrust when suddenly he slammed into her and released his load down her throat, she moaned as she felt his seamen flowing into her stomach, \"oh s-sorry.\" Chance spoke slowly pulling his member out of her muzzle, \" it's ok, I rather enjoyed that.\" she said with a smile, \"and it seems your still wanting more.\" she said grinning ear to ear, without skipping a beat, she stood up and slipped off her skirt, \"come and get some more.\" she said leaning on the counter and lifting her tail to the side showing off her fine holes to him, \"come on we don't have all night.\" she said lightly wiggling her rear as he stood up his boner now a raging inferno that only she could put out.\n\nChance's heart races as he approached her and lightly grabbed a hold of her waist, \"Twilight t-this is my first time.\" he said as his member's tip poked her nethers, \" it's ok, this is my first time too.\" she spoke out, Chance gave an audible gulp as he pushed his tip-in with a wet pop, \"oh yeah, come on, take my virginity.\" Twilight declared as she wiggled a bit, without warning he slammed into her breaking her hymen causing her to gasp out loud, her virgin blood slowly coats his thick shaft as they got used to each other, \"ok Chance, I’m ready.\" Twilight told him lustfully, Chance started to thrust hard into her, his balls slapping against her legs.\n\n\"oh gawd yeah.\" she screamed as his head hit her cervix with each thrust inward, he quickly raised his right hand and smacked her ass hard and popped the thumb of his left hand into her tight pucker and pulled, \" no don't, I already feel like I’m going to be split in half.\" she screamed as he pounds her raw, his stallion-hood threatening to penetrate her womb, \"I'm sorry, I can't hold it much longer.\" he exclaimed as his thrusting picked up speed as he removed his thumb, \" oh give it to me, don't you dare pull out.\" she screamed in bliss.\n\nChance moaned out as he shoved his stallion-hood deep as he could into her marehood, his jizz gushed out into her filling up her uterus and vaginal passage, “Oh gawd yes, fill me up Chance, fill me all up.” she moaned as her walls squeezed around his member milking every last drop from his stallion-hood, “ oh gawd, so good I can’t stop.” chance exclaimed as he quickly pulled his length out of her with a loud pop, he slowly slid his stallion-hood’s tip up till it met her tight pucker, “Chance? What are you do? EEK!! NO, NOT THERE!!!” twilight exclaimed as he slammed his shaft deep into her tight ass, “mm so tight.” Chance exclaimed as he started to buck his hips fast and hard making twilight’s eyes go wide and narrow.\n\nChance moaned as he thrusts into twilight’s tight ass, she grunts as the feeling of his balls slapping against her ass, he quickly groped her breast as wet slapping sounds echoed in the bathroom, twilight pants as she let out a moan and slowly pushed back into the thrusts, “ok, I admit its, mmm it amazing once you get used to it, if there’s a next time, don’t forget the lube.” she exclaimed as Chance started thrusting rapidly, twilight gasped as she felt Chance slam into her ass one last time, twilight screams in ecstasy as Chance pumped thick ropes of his jizz deep into her rear, “mmm yeah, ok that's it, your sleeping with me tonight.” she exclaimed as Chance moaned pulling his member out of her.\n\n“Wait!? What about your mom and dad?” he asked as he stumbled back onto the toilet, “I told a white lie, they live in Canterlot, and we live in Ponyville.” she said with a grin, using her magic she quickly turned off the water then motioned him to follow as she walked out of the room, Chance followed close behind with a great big smile on his face as he watched her booty move back and forth in a hypnotic way, before he knew it they were at her bedroom door, “ come on in.” she said giving him a wink as she stepped inside, she wiggled her but side to side as she crawled up on to the bed and under the covers, “you coming Chance?” she spoke as she pated the bed behind her.\n\n“ well, alright.” he spoke as he walked over to the bed and slipped under the covers, his hard-on poking her in the but, “mmm well now, put it in.” twilight said with a smile, Chance nodded and slowly pushed his member deep into her, “mmm, good now leave it in until morning.” she said moaning a bit as her butt connected to his crotch, “yes my love.” he told her as they both yawned and went to sleep. \n\n[right]To Be Continued [/right]", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Chance smiled as he slowly laid her down on her bed, “ sleep tight beautiful twilight.” he spoke softly as he tucked her in, then slowly walked back to the living room and collected his things when suddenly he heard a noise and turned to see twilights bag had fallen over and books spilling out onto the floor, he smiled as he picked up her bag and placing the books back in her bag when one of them caught his eye, “hmm pony anatomy, I guess I could give this a read.” he thought to himself as he set down twilight’s bag and opened up the book.

Turning to the first page he saw a photo taped in place of the first picture of the book, the photo was of a nude pony’s body, the fur was purple, and her tail had a familiar color, “wait, is that? Twilight?” he asked himself as his manhood stirs, he flipped another page to see her spreading her pussy lips, chance bit his lip and he quickly ran into the bathroom as his member strained against his pants, closing the door he quickly unzipped his pants, he sat down on the toilet lid as he slid down his pants and briefs letting his member spring to attention, “ dang it’s been begging all day for this.” he told himself as he quickly grasped the head of his member and slowly gliding it down his shaft.

He slowly flipped through the pages as he continued to move his hand up and down give out some gasps as he closed his eyes imagining Twilight herself was on him “ mmm Twilight.” he said softly as he dropped the book as he slowly moved the hand to his balls and continued to stroke his member as his other hand slowly fondled his balls.

Chance panted as he increased his hand's speed as he basked in the pleasure he was getting from all this. suddenly, the door opens revealing Twilight rubbing her eyes, Chance quickly froze as he saw her open her eyes wide and red fills her face, then she saw her personal book on the floor and gave a big mischievous grin, "so? Do you like what you see? what to see the real thing?" she asked lifting up her skirt showing that she wasn't wearing panties, Chance blushed bright red as his tip leaked pre, " oh let me get that for you." she told him letting go of her skirt and ripping open her buttoned-up shirt revealing that she had no bra on.

her breast wasn't as small as Applejack's or Rainbow Dashes, but they were easy enough to hide, "I hope you like them." she smiled as she walked in front of him and slowly lowered herself on her knees, "shouldn't we take this in the living room or your bedroom? AH!" he asked before she gave his shaft a nice big lick from base to tip, "and let my dad or mom catches? no way." she told him as she used her magic to turn on the water as she placed her breast on his shaft and slowly moved them up and down his shaft as her tung laps at the rim of his tip, they both moaned as Chances tip squirted out pre on her tongue causing her to drink the sweet-tasting pre.

she moans loudly before shoving half of his member into her mouth and grasping the lower part of his shaft, she gave off the mixed sounds of moans, slurping, and gulping as her head bobbed up and down and her hand strokes the lower half of his member, her tongue constantly swirling around his member, suddenly Chance grabbed onto both sides of her head and bucked his hips pushing his member deep into her throat, "oh gawd that feels good." he exclaimed as he started to thrust into her mouth causing his balls to slap against her chin, Twilight moans loudly as she enjoys the feeling of her throat being filled by his thick member.

she moaned watching his reaction with each thrust when suddenly he slammed into her and released his load down her throat, she moaned as she felt his seamen flowing into her stomach, "oh s-sorry." Chance spoke slowly pulling his member out of her muzzle, " it's ok, I rather enjoyed that." she said with a smile, "and it seems your still wanting more." she said grinning ear to ear, without skipping a beat, she stood up and slipped off her skirt, "come and get some more." she said leaning on the counter and lifting her tail to the side showing off her fine holes to him, "come on we don't have all night." she said lightly wiggling her rear as he stood up his boner now a raging inferno that only she could put out.

Chance's heart races as he approached her and lightly grabbed a hold of her waist, "Twilight t-this is my first time." he said as his member's tip poked her nethers, " it's ok, this is my first time too." she spoke out, Chance gave an audible gulp as he pushed his tip-in with a wet pop, "oh yeah, come on, take my virginity." Twilight declared as she wiggled a bit, without warning he slammed into her breaking her hymen causing her to gasp out loud, her virgin blood slowly coats his thick shaft as they got used to each other, "ok Chance, I’m ready." Twilight told him lustfully, Chance started to thrust hard into her, his balls slapping against her legs.

"oh gawd yeah." she screamed as his head hit her cervix with each thrust inward, he quickly raised his right hand and smacked her ass hard and popped the thumb of his left hand into her tight pucker and pulled, " no don't, I already feel like I’m going to be split in half." she screamed as he pounds her raw, his stallion-hood threatening to penetrate her womb, "I'm sorry, I can't hold it much longer." he exclaimed as his thrusting picked up speed as he removed his thumb, " oh give it to me, don't you dare pull out." she screamed in bliss.

Chance moaned out as he shoved his stallion-hood deep as he could into her marehood, his jizz gushed out into her filling up her uterus and vaginal passage, “Oh gawd yes, fill me up Chance, fill me all up.” she moaned as her walls squeezed around his member milking every last drop from his stallion-hood, “ oh gawd, so good I can’t stop.” chance exclaimed as he quickly pulled his length out of her with a loud pop, he slowly slid his stallion-hood’s tip up till it met her tight pucker, “Chance? What are you do? EEK!! NO, NOT THERE!!!” twilight exclaimed as he slammed his shaft deep into her tight ass, “mm so tight.” Chance exclaimed as he started to buck his hips fast and hard making twilight’s eyes go wide and narrow.

Chance moaned as he thrusts into twilight’s tight ass, she grunts as the feeling of his balls slapping against her ass, he quickly groped her breast as wet slapping sounds echoed in the bathroom, twilight pants as she let out a moan and slowly pushed back into the thrusts, “ok, I admit its, mmm it amazing once you get used to it, if there’s a next time, don’t forget the lube.” she exclaimed as Chance started thrusting rapidly, twilight gasped as she felt Chance slam into her ass one last time, twilight screams in ecstasy as Chance pumped thick ropes of his jizz deep into her rear, “mmm yeah, ok that's it, your sleeping with me tonight.” she exclaimed as Chance moaned pulling his member out of her.

“Wait!? What about your mom and dad?” he asked as he stumbled back onto the toilet, “I told a white lie, they live in Canterlot, and we live in Ponyville.” she said with a grin, using her magic she quickly turned off the water then motioned him to follow as she walked out of the room, Chance followed close behind with a great big smile on his face as he watched her booty move back and forth in a hypnotic way, before he knew it they were at her bedroom door, “ come on in.” she said giving him a wink as she stepped inside, she wiggled her but side to side as she crawled up on to the bed and under the covers, “you coming Chance?” she spoke as she pated the bed behind her.

“ well, alright.” he spoke as he walked over to the bed and slipped under the covers, his hard-on poking her in the but, “mmm well now, put it in.” twilight said with a smile, Chance nodded and slowly pushed his member deep into her, “mmm, good now leave it in until morning.” she said moaning a bit as her butt connected to his crotch, “yes my love.” he told her as they both yawned and went to sleep.

To Be Continued
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