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Peace! After all that happened in the Tournament of Power, the last thing such an important entity like the God of Destruction could do was to sit, and relax knowing that each and every single universe had been restored and there wouldn't be any problems in the near future... Or so he thought until a strong light appeared in front of him. Who could be interrupting him? And who could be interrupting him now? Most of the Gods of Destruction would be taking a rest right after all that happened. Beerus could only think of one that wouldn't, and truth be told, it was the only live being that right now he didn't want to see. Unfortunately for him, it was his brother, Champa.\n\n-Brother! How's it going?- He said in a mocking tone\n\n-You! What are you doing here!- The God of Destruction of Universe 7 didn't bother in saying hi to his brother\n\n-Just wandering around and thought I could go and see my stupid brother-\n\n-Stupid? Are you serious? May I remind you that it is thanks to me that you're still alive? You should be thankful to me!-\n\n-It is also thanks to you that I got erased in the first place, so yeah, you're stupid-Beerus got angry, how could he have such an ungrateful brother? How could he still think it was better than him? Well, if we wanted to see the difference between them again, he was going to have it.\n\n-If you really wanna call me stupid, you have to prove you're better than me.\n\n-Oh? What are you suggesting?- Champa said.\n\n-What about a series of competitions? The loser is the real stupid here- Beerus said with a smirk on his face.\n\n-Oh, you're on! And you're going down!- Champa said. They were both eager to do this series of competitions, but... what could they do? What in the universe could they do? They both sat next to each other, thinking on what to do silently, until Beerus came up with the idea for the first competition.\n\n-I got it, whoever gets the tastiest drink from their universe wins- Beerus said as he ran away\n\n-Hey, that's cheating- Champa said as he left as well. Both Gods of Destruction had left, and it took them hours to get back. Beerus had a large chocolate shake while Champa had a large strawberry shake. Large is not a proper word to describe the amount of liquid in those glasses for they could perfectly hold at least two liters, and they were full.\n\n\f-Come on, is that the best you can do? You just took my idea and changed the flavor- Champa said in an angry tone.\n\n-How can you be so sure that you are not the one copying me- Said Beerus, who was also angry. They both growled at each other for a moment and then Champa said:\n\n-I guess we can call this a tie, but I have an idea for a better competition than yours, the one that drinks what they brought first wins- Said Champa, which Beerus agreed to. At the count of three, both Gods of Destruction started drinking their shakes as quickly as possible. It took them only seconds to finish their drinks... and unfortunately, they both finished at the same time. Without a single second of difference! Of course they started to argue about who did it first or second, but they didn't seem to reach an agreement, so the games went on. Who could hold their breath for longer... Who could win three games of rock, paper, scissors in a row... The day kept going and all the competitions were getting tied. As they kept going, the shakes they had drunk already planned their way out of their bodies. None of them said that they were starting to need to pee, but it started to become a problem when they were fighting each other on who could drink as much water without stopping. Which Beerus won.\n\n-Ha! see? Looks like you're the stupid one after all- Said Beerus.\n\n-It isn't fair, I want a rematch! Said Champa extremely furious. And even though he hadn't realized, he was grabbing his groin with both hands.\n\n-No thanks, To be honest, I could go to the bathroom, and guessing by your childish gesture, I believe you have to as well-\n\nAlthough Champa got even angrier when his brother mentioned his urge, it gave him a nice idea about what to do in order to beat him.\n\n-I got it, the one that goes the longest without peeing will be the absolute winner!-.\n\nBeerus couldn't believe his brother's words. What the hell is he trying to do?\n\n-Why on earth would I do that? It's just ridiculous- Beerus said and Champa only\n\nsmirked while saying:\n\n-What? Afraid your baby bladder won't be as strong as mine?-\n\n-Even if we did this, I would definitely defeat you, after all you're the one doing gross things to hold it in-\n\n-Then why don't you defeat me as you say, the worst thing that could happen is that you make a mess and I have a reason to laugh at you for the next hundred years!-\n\n\fBeerus hesitated for a moment, but after his brother's taunts became even louder, he said.\n\n-Fine, you're on, prepare to embarrass yourself-\n\nAs they both progressed, Champa couldn't stop himself from grabbing his groin. To Beerus, this was a gross gesture to do, but he knew that he'd end up doing it if things stayed the same.\n\nBeerus and Champa both sat next to each other as they only cared about holding it in. Champa couldn't take his hands off his flesh, while Beerus could feel his twitching. Ten minutes went by as their desperation wasn't growing as quickly as they wanted to. They both wanted the other to wet himself as quickly as possible so they wouldn't need to hold it that longer. Even though it wasn't so bad at the moment, it was annoying. Beerus came up with an idea to make it harder. He left without telling Champa anything. Once he was alone, Champa grabbed his flesh harder as he began doing a potty dance. It was that bad, but he didn't want his brother to know how full his bladder actually was. Beerus did the same on his time alone as well. Time he used to get a drink he had taken from Earth. The last time he drank it, it made him need to go quickly, something humans called ``Coffee''. Beerus was hopping from foot to foot as he walked with two cups of coffee, one for each one of them. As he returned, he almost caught Champa in his potty dance, but he managed to stop just in time.\n\n-What is that?- Champa said, seeing the cups filled with a liquid he couldn't recognize.\n\n-This will make this worse- Beerus said to him as he grabbed one of the cups and handed the other one to his brother, who reluctantly drank it when he saw his brother doing it as well. Time kept passing as both of them started to fidget in place. Beerus and Champa were looking at each other to see if their brother was closer than then to wetting himself.\n\n-He! Squirming that much already?- Said Champa, looking at his brother, who\n\ncouldn't stop himself from grabbing his groin as well. Even though he considered that\n\ndisgusting, he was sure that if he didn't do it he'd lose it sooner than expected.\n\n-Says the one who is jumping around- Said Beerus, who couldn't think straight due\n\nto the desperation he was feeling.\n\n\f-I bet you would like to go pee right now and stop feeling so bad- Said Champa as\n\nBeerus simply said:\n\n-Yeah, sure, and I bet you'd like to let out a waterfall right in the toilet- Said Beerus, which only made Champa squirm in desperation. Beerus also jumped around because of his own comment, which made him think that speaking of water was a bad idea.\n\nAs an hour passed, Beerus and Champa couldn't stop themselves from doing a full potty dance. First the shakes, then the water from the previous competition and now the coffee, it was too much to handle for both of them. Both Gods of Destruction couldn't do anything but jump from foot to foot with their hands on their groins. They were both close to wetting themselves, but they couldn't, not now, not yet. What if the other wanted to call it a tie just when they chose to give up? or what if they both lost it at the same time? None of them could risk it. They both did as much as possible to hold it in. Champa was concentrating on holding it as much as possible. He could feel all the urine sloshing inside of his bladder. Going down his urethra and staying in the tip of his member. He could feel a lot of it in the tip, and then he gasped when he felt more, which pushed the amount of urine in the tip on and directly on his underwear. He had leaked. He chose not to tell his brother and hoped that he had leaked as well. Beerus was having a bad time as well. His own flesh was twitching like mad and he could feel himself close to having some several leaks, but for now he was dry. He wasn't sure how long that would last though.\n\nMinutes felt like years for them as the coffee they had drunk had already made his way to their bladders. Filling them even faster that they could take. They both felt at the same time how some spurts of urine escaped their bodies and soaked the fabric of their underwear. Beerus could feel himself close to losing control right on the spot. On Champa's side, the leaks had forced their way to their pants, showing a little, but noticeable wet spot on his pants. Beerus noticed this and made sure to tease him about it:\n\n-It looks like I will win! just look at your pants. You're just a baby who can't control his bladder-\n\n-Shut up! Just because I had a leak it doesn't mean that I've lost... Yet- Said Champa, actually contemplating the idea of losing. Beerus looked like he was doing\n\n\fbetter, he actually smiled confident at his victory. but it was then when he had a strong wave of desperation which caused him to bend over that he realized that he couldn't claim victory as his just yet.\n\nAs minutes passed, leaks were not unstoppable for both Beerus and Champa, it was just too much for them. Both were facing the same situation. They were grabbing themselves and bending over as leaks were constantly damping their underwear and seeping to their pants.\n\n-No, No, No!- Said Champa as he felt the little drops becoming a little spurt, and then a small trickle that Champa could barely stop. Beerus on his side had his tail curled in one of his legs, which even though alleviated some of the pressure, wasn't enough to prevent him from spurting. It was in this terrible situation for both, that everything finished suddenly. A wave of desperation hit Champa, one that was too much for him. Tears rolled down his eyes as all the contents of his bladder bursted out of him, soaking his pants completely. Champa sat as the mess kept going on. Beerus wasn't so happy of having won, it would have been nice if the sight of his brother wetting himself hadn't stimulated his own bladder. Even though he made a last effort to hold it, he could only reduce it to a small trickle, which hurted him, so he decided not to keep going on holding it and let it all out, sitting next to Champa. The puddles combined in a big one that pooled against them. Soaking them completely. -I guess I'm the loser- Champa said between moanings of pure bliss.\n\n-That's what you get for challenging me! I won... but I have to be honest, it doesn't feel so good- Said Beerus, looking at the mess they were still doing. It took them several minutes to go on. Beerus noticed something once he was done and it was that his brother hadn't finished yet, even though he had begun first. He must have been holding a seriously big amount of urine. Champa was done after another three minutes and once he was done, he just sighed and quickly recovered his mocking tone as he said to his brother:\n\n-I swear I'll defeat you next time!- Beerus was surprised, did Champa really want to do this all again? Even though he wasn't sure about wanting to relive all this problem again, something was attracting him to do so, something... Made him feel that it was gonna be fun.\n\n-We'll see about that! If I beated you once I can beat you over and over-\n\n\f-Yeah, sure, stupid! I'm gonna win next time, however, I'm off, I have to go change myself, and I recommend you to do the same- Champa said, waving to his brother with that mischievous grin of always. Beerus only saw Champa get to Vados and leave, hoping that the next time they do another holding competition wouldn't be soon.\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "It was a normal day in god?s land. Peace! After all that happened in the Tournament of Power, the last thing such an important entity like the God of Destruction could do was to sit, and relax knowing that each and every single universe had been restored and there wouldn't be any problems in the near future... Or so he thought until a strong light appeared in front of him. Who could be interrupting him? And who could be interrupting him now? Most of the Gods of Destruction would be taking a rest right after all that happened. Beerus could only think of one that wouldn't, and truth be told, it was the only live being that right now he didn't want to see. Unfortunately for him, it was his brother, Champa.

-Brother! How's it going?- He said in a mocking tone

-You! What are you doing here!- The God of Destruction of Universe 7 didn't bother in saying hi to his brother

-Just wandering around and thought I could go and see my stupid brother-

-Stupid? Are you serious? May I remind you that it is thanks to me that you're still alive? You should be thankful to me!-

-It is also thanks to you that I got erased in the first place, so yeah, you're stupid-Beerus got angry, how could he have such an ungrateful brother? How could he still think it was better than him? Well, if we wanted to see the difference between them again, he was going to have it.

-If you really wanna call me stupid, you have to prove you're better than me.

-Oh? What are you suggesting?- Champa said.

-What about a series of competitions? The loser is the real stupid here- Beerus said with a smirk on his face.

-Oh, you're on! And you're going down!- Champa said. They were both eager to do this series of competitions, but... what could they do? What in the universe could they do? They both sat next to each other, thinking on what to do silently, until Beerus came up with the idea for the first competition.

-I got it, whoever gets the tastiest drink from their universe wins- Beerus said as he ran away

-Hey, that's cheating- Champa said as he left as well. Both Gods of Destruction had left, and it took them hours to get back. Beerus had a large chocolate shake while Champa had a large strawberry shake. Large is not a proper word to describe the amount of liquid in those glasses for they could perfectly hold at least two liters, and they were full.

\f-Come on, is that the best you can do? You just took my idea and changed the flavor- Champa said in an angry tone.

-How can you be so sure that you are not the one copying me- Said Beerus, who was also angry. They both growled at each other for a moment and then Champa said:

-I guess we can call this a tie, but I have an idea for a better competition than yours, the one that drinks what they brought first wins- Said Champa, which Beerus agreed to. At the count of three, both Gods of Destruction started drinking their shakes as quickly as possible. It took them only seconds to finish their drinks... and unfortunately, they both finished at the same time. Without a single second of difference! Of course they started to argue about who did it first or second, but they didn't seem to reach an agreement, so the games went on. Who could hold their breath for longer... Who could win three games of rock, paper, scissors in a row... The day kept going and all the competitions were getting tied. As they kept going, the shakes they had drunk already planned their way out of their bodies. None of them said that they were starting to need to pee, but it started to become a problem when they were fighting each other on who could drink as much water without stopping. Which Beerus won.

-Ha! see? Looks like you're the stupid one after all- Said Beerus.

-It isn't fair, I want a rematch! Said Champa extremely furious. And even though he hadn't realized, he was grabbing his groin with both hands.

-No thanks, To be honest, I could go to the bathroom, and guessing by your childish gesture, I believe you have to as well-

Although Champa got even angrier when his brother mentioned his urge, it gave him a nice idea about what to do in order to beat him.

-I got it, the one that goes the longest without peeing will be the absolute winner!-.

Beerus couldn't believe his brother's words. What the hell is he trying to do?

-Why on earth would I do that? It's just ridiculous- Beerus said and Champa only

smirked while saying:

-What? Afraid your baby bladder won't be as strong as mine?-

-Even if we did this, I would definitely defeat you, after all you're the one doing gross things to hold it in-

-Then why don't you defeat me as you say, the worst thing that could happen is that you make a mess and I have a reason to laugh at you for the next hundred years!-

\fBeerus hesitated for a moment, but after his brother's taunts became even louder, he said.

-Fine, you're on, prepare to embarrass yourself-

As they both progressed, Champa couldn't stop himself from grabbing his groin. To Beerus, this was a gross gesture to do, but he knew that he'd end up doing it if things stayed the same.

Beerus and Champa both sat next to each other as they only cared about holding it in. Champa couldn't take his hands off his flesh, while Beerus could feel his twitching. Ten minutes went by as their desperation wasn't growing as quickly as they wanted to. They both wanted the other to wet himself as quickly as possible so they wouldn't need to hold it that longer. Even though it wasn't so bad at the moment, it was annoying. Beerus came up with an idea to make it harder. He left without telling Champa anything. Once he was alone, Champa grabbed his flesh harder as he began doing a potty dance. It was that bad, but he didn't want his brother to know how full his bladder actually was. Beerus did the same on his time alone as well. Time he used to get a drink he had taken from Earth. The last time he drank it, it made him need to go quickly, something humans called ``Coffee''. Beerus was hopping from foot to foot as he walked with two cups of coffee, one for each one of them. As he returned, he almost caught Champa in his potty dance, but he managed to stop just in time.

-What is that?- Champa said, seeing the cups filled with a liquid he couldn't recognize.

-This will make this worse- Beerus said to him as he grabbed one of the cups and handed the other one to his brother, who reluctantly drank it when he saw his brother doing it as well. Time kept passing as both of them started to fidget in place. Beerus and Champa were looking at each other to see if their brother was closer than then to wetting himself.

-He! Squirming that much already?- Said Champa, looking at his brother, who

couldn't stop himself from grabbing his groin as well. Even though he considered that

disgusting, he was sure that if he didn't do it he'd lose it sooner than expected.

-Says the one who is jumping around- Said Beerus, who couldn't think straight due

to the desperation he was feeling.

\f-I bet you would like to go pee right now and stop feeling so bad- Said Champa as

Beerus simply said:

-Yeah, sure, and I bet you'd like to let out a waterfall right in the toilet- Said Beerus, which only made Champa squirm in desperation. Beerus also jumped around because of his own comment, which made him think that speaking of water was a bad idea.

As an hour passed, Beerus and Champa couldn't stop themselves from doing a full potty dance. First the shakes, then the water from the previous competition and now the coffee, it was too much to handle for both of them. Both Gods of Destruction couldn't do anything but jump from foot to foot with their hands on their groins. They were both close to wetting themselves, but they couldn't, not now, not yet. What if the other wanted to call it a tie just when they chose to give up? or what if they both lost it at the same time? None of them could risk it. They both did as much as possible to hold it in. Champa was concentrating on holding it as much as possible. He could feel all the urine sloshing inside of his bladder. Going down his urethra and staying in the tip of his member. He could feel a lot of it in the tip, and then he gasped when he felt more, which pushed the amount of urine in the tip on and directly on his underwear. He had leaked. He chose not to tell his brother and hoped that he had leaked as well. Beerus was having a bad time as well. His own flesh was twitching like mad and he could feel himself close to having some several leaks, but for now he was dry. He wasn't sure how long that would last though.

Minutes felt like years for them as the coffee they had drunk had already made his way to their bladders. Filling them even faster that they could take. They both felt at the same time how some spurts of urine escaped their bodies and soaked the fabric of their underwear. Beerus could feel himself close to losing control right on the spot. On Champa's side, the leaks had forced their way to their pants, showing a little, but noticeable wet spot on his pants. Beerus noticed this and made sure to tease him about it:

-It looks like I will win! just look at your pants. You're just a baby who can't control his bladder-

-Shut up! Just because I had a leak it doesn't mean that I've lost... Yet- Said Champa, actually contemplating the idea of losing. Beerus looked like he was doing

\fbetter, he actually smiled confident at his victory. but it was then when he had a strong wave of desperation which caused him to bend over that he realized that he couldn't claim victory as his just yet.

As minutes passed, leaks were not unstoppable for both Beerus and Champa, it was just too much for them. Both were facing the same situation. They were grabbing themselves and bending over as leaks were constantly damping their underwear and seeping to their pants.

-No, No, No!- Said Champa as he felt the little drops becoming a little spurt, and then a small trickle that Champa could barely stop. Beerus on his side had his tail curled in one of his legs, which even though alleviated some of the pressure, wasn't enough to prevent him from spurting. It was in this terrible situation for both, that everything finished suddenly. A wave of desperation hit Champa, one that was too much for him. Tears rolled down his eyes as all the contents of his bladder bursted out of him, soaking his pants completely. Champa sat as the mess kept going on. Beerus wasn't so happy of having won, it would have been nice if the sight of his brother wetting himself hadn't stimulated his own bladder. Even though he made a last effort to hold it, he could only reduce it to a small trickle, which hurted him, so he decided not to keep going on holding it and let it all out, sitting next to Champa. The puddles combined in a big one that pooled against them. Soaking them completely. -I guess I'm the loser- Champa said between moanings of pure bliss.

-That's what you get for challenging me! I won... but I have to be honest, it doesn't feel so good- Said Beerus, looking at the mess they were still doing. It took them several minutes to go on. Beerus noticed something once he was done and it was that his brother hadn't finished yet, even though he had begun first. He must have been holding a seriously big amount of urine. Champa was done after another three minutes and once he was done, he just sighed and quickly recovered his mocking tone as he said to his brother:

-I swear I'll defeat you next time!- Beerus was surprised, did Champa really want to do this all again? Even though he wasn't sure about wanting to relive all this problem again, something was attracting him to do so, something... Made him feel that it was gonna be fun.

-We'll see about that! If I beated you once I can beat you over and over-

\f-Yeah, sure, stupid! I'm gonna win next time, however, I'm off, I have to go change myself, and I recommend you to do the same- Champa said, waving to his brother with that mischievous grin of always. Beerus only saw Champa get to Vados and leave, hoping that the next time they do another holding competition wouldn't be soon.

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