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I know, my grammar, sentences... all that stuff... can be improved, but my lack of english doesn't do miracles ^·^'

Part 1 | Part 2 --->", "writing": "So, this story begins with our little friend Zander, the raccoon, when he was only 6 years old.\n\nHe never really had a friend because of his attitude. He always acted as an adult, and didn't give a shit of what others thought of him, even his family.\n\nWhen he ran from school, he used to go hunting with a group of adults dedicated to that, to try and capture some animals to eat, just for himself, instead of helping them for the society. Thanks to that he learned to fight for himself and to survive. Sometimes he got luck and didn't get caught, and sometimes he did, and was returned to school with a huge reprimand by the teachers and the hunters, for losing their time for carrying him to school, where he had to be since the first minute.\n\nHis teachers and parents couldn't handle him, he was always in trouble. Zander always thought he was mature enough for leaving school, so that's the reason he always give when they caught him.\n\nOne day, his parents got a talk with his teachers, because Zander scratched the face from another kid while fighting, marking the face with scars thanks to his claws. The educators gave them an option to try to change his behaviour. They proposed to try to scare him by threatening to send him to a foster home. So, once they were at home, they told him what the teachers proposed, to start changing his attitude if he didn't want to leav his home, and make him realize how tough it could be.\n-Fuck you if you dare to do that - replied to them. After that response, they didn't know what to do. His aggressiveness was increasing every day, so they had no other chance to call social services, thinking that was the only option they could take.\n\nSome days after, the workers of that entity shown at their home and evaluated Zander. Their conclusion was clear for them, he needed to reform, so they took him into a reformatory to try to improve his behaviour.\n\n- You are letting them to take me there? Fine, fuck you all, you're dead to me you bastards! - screamed while he was getting pulled from his home.\n\nThe travel to the institution took almost three hours, elapsed with silence. It was placed in a cold plains, surrounded by mountains. There was no other thing around there, except for trees and grass. In a certain way, Zander liked that place, far away from society. But he didn't know that it was not gonna be that easy as he thought in first place.\n\nHe entered that building aside the assistants that take him from home. They make Zander know where was all he needed to know, bedrooms, bathrooms, dining room, the garden... All those things.\n\nThey take him to his bedroom, which he will share with another three boys, bigger than him all of them. The room was big, with 4 closets and 4 individual beds, one for each kid.\n\nHe knew what was going to happen when the adults leave him alone with them. But he didn't care. He just went to his bed, put his bag on it, jump on it and lay down. The assistants left saying goodbye, with no response from the raccoon. Zander got surprised by not being bullied from the roommates, but he didn't care much, he thought they may were the typical group of nerds that stays locked at home, but they were there with him, so something they had to have.\n\nDinner time was just ahead, and everyone was called to dining room. It was a huge dining room, four huge tables, two on each side of the room with lots of empty chairs, and there were a lot of kids.\n\nDining time was a battleground, same for dine. Food was very rationalized, and there wasn't much for anyone, so all of them was fighting each other to get more food to eat.\n-Oh, they really care about us - though ironically. He turned his head to a side, and he saw a little munk. He didn't had much on his plate. Zander saw his face, was afraid, and the other guys of the house knew that, so they were always getting his food, leaving him almost nothing, making him starve all the day long. Zander thought at first that he must start to grow up and defend what it's from him, even being that short, and almost two years younger.\n\nHe tried to have his dinner in peace, putting his claws on the neck of whoever tried to steal his food.\n\nAfter eating, they let them play on the garden alone, without supervision. They know that those will not run away, because they would get lost. He went outside, with the idea to take a short nap, so he sat under a tree, protecting him from the sun under the shadow. It was a bit cold, but you could get burnt from the sun. But a sound was pissing him off. Incorporates looking towards the noise, and saw that chipmunk from before, being bullied by a pair of bigger guys, may they were nine or ten years old. With a face of not caring at all, he turned to lay down.\nThe munk was being bullied, they were stepping on his tail, pushing him while still on it, making him fall and getting hurt, screaming and yelling. They started to laugh at him. Zander was really getting pissed off, all that noise was getting him angry for not letting him sleep a while. He standed up, and went towards them.\n-Shut that fucking fat mouth of yours, that shitty voice of you can hurt anyone's ears - shouted at them. They left the munk, and start walking towards him. \n-So, first day here and you think you can talk to us like that? - said one of them while walking. Zander couldn't resist any longer those two, something he doesn't like at all it's someone thinking to be superior to another. They stand in front of each other. Zander looked at them in silence, right in the eyes, without blinking. They look each other, were confused because of that glance and silence.\n-You lost your tongue? - said one of them while touching Zander's nose.\nThat was it, the last thing that make him couldn't resist to act. He grabbed the boy hand and bitted the finger that was touching his nose. He bitted with so much anger that he cutted it off. He made a lot of force, and one of his fangs broke when touched the bone. He didn't care much about his fang, minus about the finger he had on his mouth.\nThat boy was crying of pain, the other couldn't believe it, and both ran towards the building. Zander spitted the finger out. He knew he would go to an isolation room, or something worst, but he didn't care.\n-Try to defend yourself - said to the munk that was hiding behind a tree, while passing his tongue through the broken fang. \n\nNo one saved the munk before. The young rodent was thankfully, but scared because of the violent action. Zander turned to the tree where was lying, and tried to had a sleep before they come for him.\n\nIt took the assistans a while to reach to Zander. They grabbed him violently and took him to an isolated room, just as he thought it would happen.\n\nThat room was depressing, dark, wet, with just a mattress, and without sheets to cover from the cold.\n\nThat night he wasn't able to dine, neither to eat the next day. But that night he saw a brown furry arm going through the food hole. He grabbed it.\n-I think I know this little arm, what you have got there? - opened his paw. It was part of a meal from the dine that he took secretly to the raccoon.\n-You eat that, you're too skinny and little - said to the animal. But him just dropped it to the floor and ran away. Zander didn't hesitate and ate it. He started to think while eating the piece of food that the chipmunk brought to him. The same thing happened the next day at lunch.\n\nThe night in that hole was cold. He started to shiver. Those nights in that place can be the coldest thing on earth, so, he grabbed that old mattress and went to the corner that was the most far away from the window, put it on top of him while he made a ball to keep the warmness.", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "So, this story begins with our little friend Zander, the raccoon, when he was only 6 years old.

He never really had a friend because of his attitude. He always acted as an adult, and didn't give a shit of what others thought of him, even his family.

When he ran from school, he used to go hunting with a group of adults dedicated to that, to try and capture some animals to eat, just for himself, instead of helping them for the society. Thanks to that he learned to fight for himself and to survive. Sometimes he got luck and didn't get caught, and sometimes he did, and was returned to school with a huge reprimand by the teachers and the hunters, for losing their time for carrying him to school, where he had to be since the first minute.

His teachers and parents couldn't handle him, he was always in trouble. Zander always thought he was mature enough for leaving school, so that's the reason he always give when they caught him.

One day, his parents got a talk with his teachers, because Zander scratched the face from another kid while fighting, marking the face with scars thanks to his claws. The educators gave them an option to try to change his behaviour. They proposed to try to scare him by threatening to send him to a foster home. So, once they were at home, they told him what the teachers proposed, to start changing his attitude if he didn't want to leav his home, and make him realize how tough it could be.
-Fuck you if you dare to do that - replied to them. After that response, they didn't know what to do. His aggressiveness was increasing every day, so they had no other chance to call social services, thinking that was the only option they could take.

Some days after, the workers of that entity shown at their home and evaluated Zander. Their conclusion was clear for them, he needed to reform, so they took him into a reformatory to try to improve his behaviour.

- You are letting them to take me there? Fine, fuck you all, you're dead to me you bastards! - screamed while he was getting pulled from his home.

The travel to the institution took almost three hours, elapsed with silence. It was placed in a cold plains, surrounded by mountains. There was no other thing around there, except for trees and grass. In a certain way, Zander liked that place, far away from society. But he didn't know that it was not gonna be that easy as he thought in first place.

He entered that building aside the assistants that take him from home. They make Zander know where was all he needed to know, bedrooms, bathrooms, dining room, the garden... All those things.

They take him to his bedroom, which he will share with another three boys, bigger than him all of them. The room was big, with 4 closets and 4 individual beds, one for each kid.

He knew what was going to happen when the adults leave him alone with them. But he didn't care. He just went to his bed, put his bag on it, jump on it and lay down. The assistants left saying goodbye, with no response from the raccoon. Zander got surprised by not being bullied from the roommates, but he didn't care much, he thought they may were the typical group of nerds that stays locked at home, but they were there with him, so something they had to have.

Dinner time was just ahead, and everyone was called to dining room. It was a huge dining room, four huge tables, two on each side of the room with lots of empty chairs, and there were a lot of kids.

Dining time was a battleground, same for dine. Food was very rationalized, and there wasn't much for anyone, so all of them was fighting each other to get more food to eat.
-Oh, they really care about us - though ironically. He turned his head to a side, and he saw a little munk. He didn't had much on his plate. Zander saw his face, was afraid, and the other guys of the house knew that, so they were always getting his food, leaving him almost nothing, making him starve all the day long. Zander thought at first that he must start to grow up and defend what it's from him, even being that short, and almost two years younger.

He tried to have his dinner in peace, putting his claws on the neck of whoever tried to steal his food.

After eating, they let them play on the garden alone, without supervision. They know that those will not run away, because they would get lost. He went outside, with the idea to take a short nap, so he sat under a tree, protecting him from the sun under the shadow. It was a bit cold, but you could get burnt from the sun. But a sound was pissing him off. Incorporates looking towards the noise, and saw that chipmunk from before, being bullied by a pair of bigger guys, may they were nine or ten years old. With a face of not caring at all, he turned to lay down.
The munk was being bullied, they were stepping on his tail, pushing him while still on it, making him fall and getting hurt, screaming and yelling. They started to laugh at him. Zander was really getting pissed off, all that noise was getting him angry for not letting him sleep a while. He standed up, and went towards them.
-Shut that fucking fat mouth of yours, that shitty voice of you can hurt anyone's ears - shouted at them. They left the munk, and start walking towards him.
-So, first day here and you think you can talk to us like that? - said one of them while walking. Zander couldn't resist any longer those two, something he doesn't like at all it's someone thinking to be superior to another. They stand in front of each other. Zander looked at them in silence, right in the eyes, without blinking. They look each other, were confused because of that glance and silence.
-You lost your tongue? - said one of them while touching Zander's nose.
That was it, the last thing that make him couldn't resist to act. He grabbed the boy hand and bitted the finger that was touching his nose. He bitted with so much anger that he cutted it off. He made a lot of force, and one of his fangs broke when touched the bone. He didn't care much about his fang, minus about the finger he had on his mouth.
That boy was crying of pain, the other couldn't believe it, and both ran towards the building. Zander spitted the finger out. He knew he would go to an isolation room, or something worst, but he didn't care.
-Try to defend yourself - said to the munk that was hiding behind a tree, while passing his tongue through the broken fang.

No one saved the munk before. The young rodent was thankfully, but scared because of the violent action. Zander turned to the tree where was lying, and tried to had a sleep before they come for him.

It took the assistans a while to reach to Zander. They grabbed him violently and took him to an isolated room, just as he thought it would happen.

That room was depressing, dark, wet, with just a mattress, and without sheets to cover from the cold.

That night he wasn't able to dine, neither to eat the next day. But that night he saw a brown furry arm going through the food hole. He grabbed it.
-I think I know this little arm, what you have got there? - opened his paw. It was part of a meal from the dine that he took secretly to the raccoon.
-You eat that, you're too skinny and little - said to the animal. But him just dropped it to the floor and ran away. Zander didn't hesitate and ate it. He started to think while eating the piece of food that the chipmunk brought to him. The same thing happened the next day at lunch.

The night in that hole was cold. He started to shiver. Those nights in that place can be the coldest thing on earth, so, he grabbed that old mattress and went to the corner that was the most far away from the window, put it on top of him while he made a ball to keep the warmness.", "pools_count": 0, "title": "Zander's Origins - P1", "deleted": "f", "public": "t", "mimetype": "image/jpeg", "pagecount": "1", "rating_id": "2", "rating_name": "Adult", "ratings": [ { "content_tag_id": "5", "name": "Strong Violence", "description": "Strong violence, blood, serious injury or death", "rating_id": "2" } ], "submission_type_id": "12", "type_name": "Writing - Document", "guest_block": "f", "friends_only": "f", "comments_count": "3", "views": "181" }