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Not only is the mouse so small she is often mistaken for a child (despite being older than him), but she is something of an extreme masochist. To the point that she wants the ram to break her. After one bad incident involving her roommate, he can see she is at the end of her rope, and decides to finally give her what she wants. And then some.\n\n- - - - -\n\nA massive thank you to my top tier subscribers:\n[fa]booleangemini352[/fa] | Sedyna | [fa]Kaden22[/fa] | [fa]jafferroshak[/fa] | RoleplayCentral | [fa]Tierr[/fa] | [fa]akinkyyfox[/fa] | Anon\n\nIf you would like early access to my stories, polls, monthly commission raffles, weekly previews and updates, behind the scenes talks, and other bonus content, please consider subscribing to my [url=https://subscribestar.adult/xp_author]SubscribeStar[/url]", "description_bbcode_parsed": "As promised, a shorter story... than the last one, at least (don't worry, only 6k this time).

Warren has an unusual girlfriend. Not only is the mouse so small she is often mistaken for a child (despite being older than him), but she is something of an extreme masochist. To the point that she wants the ram to break her. After one bad incident involving her roommate, he can see she is at the end of her rope, and decides to finally give her what she wants. And then some.

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If you would like early access to my stories, polls, monthly commission raffles, weekly previews and updates, behind the scenes talks, and other bonus content, please consider subscribing to my SubscribeStar", "writing": "\n[center][b]The Day She Breaks[/b][/center]\n[center]By XP Author[/center]\n\nWarren saw the small mouse just up ahead. The ram smiled, jogging up a little bit, crouching down just behind her. He reached out to tap her shoulder gently. \"Hey there, little girl. Are you lost? Do you need me to help you find your parents?\"\n\nThe girl turned around, looking up at him... then scowled. \"You know, one of these days, you're going to say that and I'm just going to punch you in the dick.\"\n\nHe laughed at his girlfriend. \"Nah, you like riding it too much for that.\"\n\nTiffany huffed at him. \"But you only ever use half of it, so you could spare to have it broken a little.\" That made him laugh a little more. She was actually a few months older than he was, but she had something of a double whammy against her. Not only was she a dwarf mouse, but she was even short for that, complications from her being an albino, too. Not even reaching four feet tall, and quite thin and having almost no chest, she looked like she was only 10 or 11, not just turned 20. A fact that she hated, especially since even showing her ID no one ever seemed to believe her, thinking it was just a kid with a fake. The two had been dating for a little over a year now, and it was still common for people to give him strange looks whenever they flirted. Didn't help that he was nearly twice her height.\n\nHe stood back up again, towering over her as always. Unlike his girlfriend, Warren was quite tall, at just over six feet. Not a giant, but he felt like it beside her sometimes. He reached down, wiggling his fingers. \"Well, c'mon, Tiff. I'll make it up to you with some coffee.\"\n\nShe sighed, shaking her head. \"I can't. I have to get to work soon. Late shift... again.\"\n\nHe winced. \"Big oof. So probably won't be coming around tonight?\"\n\nShe shook her head again, her snow white hair shifting side-to-side behind her. \"Probably not.\" Her head tilted up, pinkish-red eyes locking onto his brown. \"Though who knows? Maybe I'll be done enough that you'll finally break me if I do?\"\n\nHe laughed softly, patting her head gently. She both loved and hated when he did that. \"We'll see. But I can probably add a new scar or two.\"\n\nShe huffed at him. \"You'd better!\" Despite her somewhat abrasive and sometimes crass attitude, she was very much the submissive in their relationship. Despite their size difference, though that played into it for her since she was also quite the masochist, too. She had introduced him to all of that. Slowly at first, with some light BDSM, cuffs, spanking, then escalating into whips and choking, and even knife-play. She had quite the array of scars hidden under her clothing from their fun. What she desperately wanted was for him to just go all the way and fully break her, shoving every last inch of himself into her while wrecking her little body, and she had not hidden that. He still wasn't quite at the level where he was ready to go so far that he would potentially kill her... but he wasn't fully against the idea anymore. Something that had surprised him when he came to that realization.\n\n\"Well, I'll keep my hopes up. Just in case.\" He gave her a wave. \"I'd say have fun, but I know better.\" She hated her job at the grocery store. Even being relegated to a register in full uniform, most people still treated her like she was a child that shouldn't be there. Didn't help that the uniform was still baggy on her, even though it was the smallest size they had. Between that and her slipping grades and lessening enthusiasm for classes, she said he was the only good thing she still had going for her these days. He was happy to at least be that for the cute woman, even if he couldn't be more.\n\n[center]* * *[/center]\n\nWarren was only just starting to doze off when he heard his phone make a chime. He groaned, rolling over in bed and fumbling around to find the thing in the dark. When he found it, he winced as the screen came on a bit too bright. He saw the time, just after one in the morning. There were only a few people that would text him this late, and he could write off most of them. Opening the texts, he saw it was from Tiffany. A very simple and short one. \"[i]You up? Can I come over?[/i]\"\n\nHe smirked slightly, typing out a quick reply. \"[i]Sure. Come on over.[/i]\" He could always make time for his girlfriend. Rolling out of bed, he yawned a little, scratching his bare ass as he liked to sleep naked. He did put some pants on, just a pair of shorts. Mostly because he figured he'd have to answer the door. He still hadn't found a replacement roommate after his last one moved out a few months ago. He had hoped that Tiff might be able to move in with him, but the company that owned the dorm buildings didn't allow coed roommates. Probably for the best. He knew that he would be fucking her too much to get anything else done if they were together that much.\n\nHer dorm was a few buildings down, so it probably wouldn't take her very long to get here if she was coming from there. He made his way into the kitchen, starting a pot of coffee. He had a feeling he was going to need it, and she could probably use some after work, if she hadn't already had some. The ram yawned again, stretching his arms up a little. He was still a bit toned, but not nearly as much as when he was in high school. He had wanted to be a baseball player, but was told he just didn't have the skills for it. He hadn't bothered to keep up the old training exercise since then. Though Tiff tended to give him a pretty good work out these days.\n\nHis ears perked up as he heard the light knock on the door. When he opened it, he saw her standing in the hallway, still wearing the ill-fitting shirt from the store she worked at. He smiled down at her. \"Well, hey there little girl. Are you here to-\" He was going to make a joke about girlscout cookies, but then saw the expression on her face. She was on the verge of tears. He dropped the joke immediately. \"Hey... what's going on?\" She didn't say anything, just got right up next to him and threw her arms around his middle, clinging to him. The tears started the moment she was against him. He closed the door and reached down to hold her. \"Hey! W-what's wrong? What happened?\"\n\nShe sniffed. \"It's... all gone...\"\n\nHe frowned, still confused. \"What's all gone?\"\n\n\"E-everything!\" She clung to his brown fur tight, and he could feel her shaking. \"M-my laptop, my TV, my... everything! I-It's... fucking gone!\"\n\nHe was still confused. \"Wait, what? How? Did the dorm evict you or something? Don't they give a notice about that?\"\n\nShe gripped his fur tighter, almost hard enough to pull it out. \"I... it was fucking Julie! That... that cunt! She fucking stole everything!\" She was talking so fast and crying at the same time, he was having trouble following what she was saying.\n\n\"She... what?\" Julie was her roommate, and he knew the vixen was a bit of a bitch, but... \"How? Wait, c'mon in and sit down.\" He gently led her further inside, getting her to sit down on one of the chairs. He crouched down in front of her, reaching out to hold her hand, and she gave it a hard squeeze. But she seemed to calm down a little. \"Now, what happened?\"\n\nTiff took a shaky breath and let it out slowly. \"I... came home from work, and one of my neighbors, that bitchy cheerleader Dani? She said she was surprised I was still there. Thought she was just being her usual cunty self, but she said that a bunch of people were moving things out of my dorm since this afternoon. L-like movers. Loading it all up into Julie's car and a big van or something. And then they were all just gone.\" She squeezed his hand tighter. \"And... yeah. Went inside, and everything's just... gone. The place is cleaned out. They even fucking took my clothes!\"\n\nHe shook his head. \"Are you sure it was her?\" He knew Julie was a bit of a bitch, but that? \"Have you tried calling her?\"\n\nShe scowled at him. \"Of course I fucking have!\"\n\nHe held up a hand defensively. \"Hey, just making sure!\"\n\nShe sighed slightly. \"Y-yeah... I know. Sorry.\" She cleared her throat, sniffling a little. \"When I called, some robovoice thing said 'I'm sorry this person isn't expecting calls from this number.' That fucking bitch blocked me!\"\n\nThat made him wince. \"Fuck...\"\n\nShe nodded. \"I thought she'd been stealing from me for a few weeks now. Little stuff.\" She fully expected him to make a 'little' joke there, but he knew better than to joke at a time like this.\n\n\"Why would she steal all of your stuff like that? Other than being a psycho bitch?\"\n\nTiff sighed. \"Because she's a druggy addict waste, that's why. Meth. Or... heroin. I dunno. One of those. Caught her stoned out of her ass a few times. She was usually pretty much a lump when like that, which meant she wasn't bitching about anything, so I ignored it...\" Her little ears fell back a little. \"My own fault for not reporting it sooner, y'know? But she threatened to tell everyone about my... She threatened to say that I was self-harming and suicidal if I told anyone about her drug habit. With all the scars and marks you leave, they'd probably believe her.\" She slumped a little. \"Worse, they'd probably accuse you of being abusive or something...\"\n\nHe winced again. He placed his hand on her shoulder gently. \"Hey... thank you for protecting me, but you didn't have to do that.\" He hated that he was somehow responsible for her putting up with all that, even if only in part. Especially how it turned out. \n\nShe tilted forward a little, and he caught her so she could just lean against him, her head on his shoulder. \"This is all just so... fucked.\"\n\nHe kept his arms around her, holding her close. She was still shaking a little. \"You can stay here tonight.\" He didn't care about the rules, he wasn't leaving her to sleep on the floor if her bed was gone.\n\nShe nodded slowly. \"Thanks... Though n-no... not in the mood for...\"\n\nHe shook his head, giving her a gentle squeeze. \"No, I know. But I will still be holding you all night.\"\n\nShe actually managed a soft laugh, if a sad one. \"Good. You'd better...\" She slumped a little bit more against him. \"That or you can just... hurt me. Like, actually just hurt me... not sexy. Just... make me hurt...\"\n\nHe shook his head. \"Not happening.\" He shifted a little so he could pick her up, though he grunted a little. She might be small, but she wasn't [i]that[/i] small. She still clung around his shoulders to let him carry her. \"Tonight, you're getting soft hugs and loving holds. We'll worry about hurting you some other time. When you're not so...\" He wasn't sure of the right word.\n\n\"Desperate for it?\"\n\nHe shook his head. \"In a better head-space for it.\" Once he was in the bedroom, he gently set her down on the edge of the bed. \"I only hurt you when you can enjoy it. So tonight is only gentle dom cuddling his adorable girlfriend.\" He reached out to gently wipe some of the tears off of her cheek. \"Gotta make sure you know you still have [i]something[/i] good in this world.\"\n\nShe managed another slight laugh, and even a faint smile. \"Yeah... thank you...\"\n\nHe nodded, getting himself up onto the bed and pulling her close against him so they could do the cuddling. \"Of course.\" He gently pat her head, running fingers through her white hair. \"You know I love you, little girl?\"\n\nShe scoffed, but nodded, snuggling her head up against his shoulder. \"Yeah... I do. Ya big, lanky dick waffle.\" He couldn't help but laugh at that. Her insulting him meant she was at least feeling slightly better. \"And I love you, too...\" He smiled, holding her up against him. They laid like that for the rest of the night, even if they didn't really sleep much more than a doze. They never did drink the coffee he made.\n\n[center]* * *[/center]\n\nWarren whistled, hearing that slight cave-like echo around him in the empty room. \"You weren't kidding.\" Her dorm was completely empty. No furniture, no decorations on the walls, not even any shelves. Everything had been taken. He walked further in, looking into the kitchen. \"Well, she didn't take the stove.\"\n\nTiff scoffed as she closed the door behind her. \"That's because it's literally attached.\" She walked over and pointed to a spot near the sink. \"She took the minifridge, though. And that was provided by the dorms.\"\n\n\"Jeez.\" He glanced into one of the rooms, the one that had been Tiff's. It was just as empty as everything else. There were marks on the walls that made clear outlines where shelves had been resting against them.\n\nTiff leaned against one of the walls. \"Yeah... couldn't even have left me a clean pair pants.\" The mouse was still wearing her pants from the day before, but had desperately wanted to get out of her work shirt. So now she wore one of his t-shirts, the thing so huge on her it was almost like a dress that hung down past her knees. \"She even took the dirty clothes. Though I have a feeling the dirty panties were more for the guys that helped her move.\"\n\nWarren chuckled. \"I didn't think you wore panties.\"\n\nShe scoffed again. \"That's only when I'm coming to visit you. I wear them when I'm at work.\" She let out a soft sigh. \"Though... I guess that won't matter anymore.\"\n\nThe ram nodded, setting down the duffel bag he had been holding. He reached down and rested his hand on her shoulder. \"You're sure about this, Tiff? You know there's no... undoing this...\"\n\nShe sighed, nodding to him. \"Yeah. I'm sure.\" She pushed off of the wall. \"I can't recover from this.\" She motioned around at the empty place. \"I'm barely making enough to even pay for rent. I can't afford to buy a new bed and wardrobe and laptop...\" He was about to say that he could help, but he was kind if in the same boat. He didn't have much money to give to her to help. She turned her head up to look at him, her pinkish eyes serious. \"What about you? You think you can go all the way with it this time?\"\n\nHe nodded, moving his hand to rub against her face gently. \"Yeah. I think I can.\" He saw that she was at the end of her rope, and if this what would make her happy, then he was willing to finally cross that last line.\n\nShe leaned into his hand a little. \"Good. Just so long as you're not just doing this for me... I want you to enjoy it, too..\"\n\nHe nodded. \"I think I will...\" He smiled a little sheepishly. \"I'm... oddly looking forward to it, actually... Is that weird?\"\n\nShe chuckled softly. \"Yes, but so are we.\" She turned her head to kiss his hand. \"Now, stop being so fucking sweet!\"\n\nHe laughed at that. \"I can be sweet and break you at the same time, little girl.\" He pat her head again. \"But how about you strip down for me first. Show me all those lovely scars I've given you.\"\n\nShe grunted, scowling a little as he pat her head again. \"Fine.\" She reached down and started pulling up the huge shirt. \"But you better be adding more!\" The huge t-shirt was pulled up and over her head, her torso exposed to him. Being albino, her little body was covered in pure white fur. Though there were little lines along her belly and chest where he had cut, whipped, and even bitten her, with more along her arms and legs. Her back had the most marks, mostly from the thin whip she had made him use on her. The first time he went a little too hard, leaving her back a bloody mess. But she had been cumming pretty hard from it, and he came pretty hard from it at the time, too. It's when he learned just how far she wanted him to go with her. And today they were going to finally go there.\n\n\"Going to be hard to leave scars if you can't heal anymore...\" Her tail and right ear flicked a little at that, her blush visible through her fur. She hastily continued undressing. Her pants fell away easily, exposing those little legs of hers to him, and all the little marks on her thighs. She wore an adorable set of pink panties that were clearly made for a girl much younger than her. The only thing she could find in her size. He felt his cock throb in his pants as he watched her push the panties down, kicking them to the side with the rest of her clothing. He could already smell her arousal. She wanted this.\n\nShe put her hands on her hips. \"Well. You're turn, big mister. Or are you just going to stare at me all day?\"\n\nHe let out a snort. \"I'll do a lot more than stare, kid.\" She scowled at him, but he just laughed. His own shirt was lifted up, though he almost got his curved horns stuck in his haste. Soon, it was off and cast to the side, leaving his chest exposed. His fur was a coffee brown, and a little longer and coarser than the mouse's. His jeans were next, dropped and kicked to the side, leaving him in just his briefs. Her eyes were fixed upon the tent in the front, her mouth opening a little when he pulled them down to let the nine inches spring free for her to see. Naturally, the tiny girl's man was that impressively big. He had never gotten more than half of it into her before, even that much. Today, she wanted all of it.\n\nShe reached up, stroking one of her tiny hands along the shaft. \"I guess I don't need to work you hard today...\" She cried out when he smacked her hand away, then cried out again when he grabbed her hair and yanked her head forward.\n\nHe pressed her face right up against the base of his shaft. \"Lick it anyway. Just to be sure.\" She saw the shiver run through her as he shifted into dominant mode. Without question, she opened her mouth and slid her tongue out, running it along the base of his shaft. The thing twitched against her mouth almost threateningly. When she got to the tip, she paid it some extra attention, licking all around the head. She wrapped her mouth around it, bobbing her head just a little. She could barely take any of it into her mouth, but she tried anyway.\n\nHer hand slid down between her legs, rubbing at herself. He let her for a few seconds, then lifted his knee and jammed it into her belly, hard enough that she grunted and had to grip at his hip to keep from falling over. \"I didn't say you could touch yourself. Little slut.\" He rested his hand on her head, but this time instead of patting her, he gripped at one of her ears hard. \"So me your fingers, though.\" She held up her hand, only to winced as he yanked her ear. \"Your other hand!\" She held up her other hand, the one that had been between her legs this time. He saw the remains of her juices upon her fingers. \"So wet already. You want to feel me ripping you open that badly?\" She nodded, making an affirmative noise, muffled slightly by the cock still in her mouth.\n\nHe tilted his head. \"Well, in that case.\" He pulled himself out of her mouth. He let her take a gasp of air, then grabbed her shoulder and shoved her back. She yelped, stumbling over herself and collapsing onto the hard wood floor with a slight smack. \"Spread those little legs for me. Let me see just how horny you are.\" She did as he said, shifting to spread her legs for him and expose her little pussy for him to see. She also reached down, not to rub herself, but to spread the lips a little, letting her juices slowly drool out. He chuckled a little. \"So wet already. And just why?\" Of course he knew, but he liked to play this part up.\n\nShe did, too, getting into the shaming. \"B-because I'm a little slut for you?\"\n\nHe frowned, moving over closer, only to suddenly slap her face. She cried out as he struck her hard enough for the sound to echo a little around them. \"No, you're a little slut for yourself.\" He gripped her hair and yanked her head forward. \"Because you love to be used as nothing but a tight hole, isn't that right?\"\n\nShe panted, wincing a little as he dragged her forward by her hair. \"Y-yes! I-I'm just... just a hole f-for you to fuck...\"\n\nHe frowned at her, gripping her chin this time. \"And a whore for pain. You love when I hurt you, don't you?\" She nodded slightly, then cried out as he threw her head down. \"Say it! Tell me what a disgusting little degenerate you are.\"\n\nShe panted harder. \"Y-yes! I'm... I'm just a worthless piece of meat t-to be... be hurt and cut up!\" She watched him walk away, going over to the duffel bag and start rummaging around in the things inside. \"I-I want it! I want you to... to hurt me... bad... a-and... and break me... more than ever!\" She watched as he slowly pulled out each item and set it down. A pair of hard metal cuffs, a small thin whip, a wooden paddle, a gag, a choke collar, and finally, a long blade. She had given him each and every one of those things, and they had all been used on her at some point. The knife was the newest in the collection, an extremely sharp thing, with a finger guard and a heavy blade measuring almost a foot in length. It also had quite the heft to it. Warren was pretty sure it was a bowie knife... or close enough to it.\n\nHe looked over at the small mouse, seeing her shivering where he left her. Her legs trembled a little, her pussy almost drooling with her arousal now. He looked into her eyes, seeing her almost pleading with him. It made his cock twitch in excitement. \"Well, you're already so turned on. I don't think I'm going to need to use most of these.\" She let out a whimper. \"Oh, don't worry. I'm still going to hurt you worse than you've ever felt before.\" That made her whimper again, a desperate, begging sound. \"Do you want that?\"\n\nShe nodded quickly, her eyes looking to the tools laid out on the floor. \"Y-yes! I... I want it so badly.\" She looked back at him, slowly crawling her way closer to him on all fours. \"Please! H-hurt me! Break me! M-make me bleed and scream!\" She was so different when she got like this. No longer the somewhat abrasive small woman that threw out insults, but a pleading, quivering mess of arousal and lustful greed.\n\nHe held up the tools one by one, as if examining them. It was more to prolong how long before he did anything, torture in and of itself for her. The gag was first. \"Hmm... no, I want to hear your moans and screams.\" He set that down and picked up the whip. \"Maybe, but will be hard to aim it while I'm ripping your tiny cunt open.\" That made her gasp and moan, and he glanced to make sure she still wasn't touching herself. The paddle was next. \"Nope. Will be breaking your backside enough.\" He held up the cuffs next. \"This could work, though.\" He had purposefully left the knife untouched... for now.\n\nHe looked at her, holding the cuffs up. \"Sit down and turn around. Hands behind your back.\" She nodded, doing as he said. Just as she was putting her hands behind herself, he grabbed her arm, yanking it painfully behind her. He clicked the cuff onto her wrist and tightened it as much as he could. \"Other hand.\" She nodded, and yelped when he yanked that hand back as well, binding it like the other. It left her hands locked behind her, the cuffs tight enough they were already making her fingers feel a little numb.\n\nHe grabbed the back of her head and pulled her close, tilting her face to look up at him. He leaned down close, whispering into her ear, his voice softer, more his normal. \"Last chance to change your mind, Tiff. Once we go past this... I won't be holding back anything.\"\n\nShe panted heavily still, looking at him with desperation. \"I want it.\" Her voice was also softer, but it was also filled with her desperation. \"No holding back. No safewords... no stopping until I'm... gone.\"\n\n\"Of course, my sweet little meat puppet.\" He smiled, leaning down to kiss her forehead gently. One of the last gentle things he would do to her. \"I love you.\" He brought his hand around, showing he had also picked up the knife, pressing the edge against her flat chest. It took almost nothing from him to slowly draw a thin line against her, cutting into her flesh. She cried out and tensed up as blood started to slowly seep out of the thin line. The cut was shallow, and it stung quite a bit.\n\nIt also left her trembling and gasping against him. \"F-fuck...\" She leaned back against him, her tail twitching about.\n\nHe smirked, reaching a hand around and pressing his fingers against her pussy, feeling how drenched it was. \"Did you nearly cum from just that?\" She nodded quickly. \"But you didn't cum?\" She shook her head, then cried out when he slowly slid the edge against her again, this time right across her right breast, just missing the nipple by a hair's breath. \"Don't hold it back anymore. Let it go freely. Cum as hard as you can.\" She gasped and panted, whimpering. \"This is the last day you'll ever be able to. Because I'm going to be snuffing your worthless life soon.\"\n\nThat was all it took for her to not hold back. She cried out loud, her pussy suddenly gushing against his fingers. \"Yes! D-do it! End my useless life!\" She begged him, her body trembling and shaking against him. It was the first time either of them had said the words they had been dancing around for the last few hours. It surprised even her just how much she wanted it, cumming so hard from the thought alone.\n\nHe sat down behind her, his cock straining and desperate for attention now. It felt like he was harder than he ever had been, the thing angrily demanding to be used. \"Not yet. I promised to break this tiny cunt.\" He moved his hand up against her belly, feeling the blood in her fur, then pulled her back until she was in his lap. His cock sat between her legs, throbbing threateningly at her. The tip hovered somewhere above her navel, giving her an idea just how deep it was going to be inside of her. \"Say it. Say what you want more than anything else. More than breathing or living.\"\n\nHer fingers trembled a little, wanting to reach out and grab that cock and shove it inside of her. But she was not the one in control, her hands still locked behind her. So she just rubbed herself against the base of his shaft. \"I want you to fuck me! I-I want this cock as deep as it can go! B-break my tiny cunt, rip me open and cum into my guts!\"\n\nHe smiled. \"Good girl.\" He set the knife down so he could take hold of her by her legs and lift her up, until his tip was poking at her sodden lips. He hesitated for a moment, savoring the last time he would get to feel her against him like this. He pushed whatever doubt he had out of his mind, and yanked her down, ramming himself into her as deep as he could. She screamed for him, nearly cumming yet again as his cock spread her lips painfully wide, his shaft, ramming against the back of her overstretched tunnel in one go. This was as much as he could normally do, barely half of himself inside. Today he would change that.\n\nHe lifted her up a little, only to slam her back down again, ramming himself against her cervix. She cried out, leaning back against him so she didn't fall off of his lap when he started to slam himself up into her over and over. He could feel how tight she was squeezing around him every time he struck deep like this, her juices running down the length of his shaft and down to his balls. \"So fucking small.\" He rammed up again. \"So fucking tight!\" He struck again, feeling her trembling and squirming from the pain. \"Take! It! ALL!\" He said each word through grit teeth, ramming upwards as a punctuation to each.\n\nWith the last, he felt something inside of her tear. The mouse in his grip suddenly screamed in agony, cumming harder than ever before as his cock ripped through and sank further than it ever had. He also cried out, his grip on her legs tight as he held her. The feeling of her womb suddenly around him was too much for him, and he came just as hard as she was. He shifted his grip to instead wrap his arms around her middle, clinging to her and humping his hips upwards with every heavy blast. He could feel her lower belly pushing out just a little when he thrust upwards, right where he was striking inside of her. He also felt the warm blood slowly drooling down his shaft along with her juices and the jizz leaking out of her quivering, ruined hole.\n\nHe let her ride her massive orgasm out, just holding onto her as she thrashed and squirmed against him. \"F~fuck!\" She finally shouted, almost collapsing back against him, twitches making her shiver and shake in his lap. \"S-so... so much...\" She took deep, gasping breathes.\n\nHe smirked, his hand sliding away from her. \"Only just the start.\" He brought his hand back, holding the knife again. He pressed it up against her belly, scratching at her with the dangerous tip. \"I promised I would break you.\" He cut slowly, opening a thin line just below her navel, making her whimper and quiver even more, and making her cunt squeeze him harder. \"You are going to be just a bloody pile of meat, filled with my cum.\"\n\nShe gasped and panted. \"Oh... gods yes...\" She whimpered again. \"Please... please cut me... cut me more... n-not... not little ones anymore. Cut me open! Please slice my stupid little belly open! Gut this worthless girl like a fish!\"\n\n\"Begging for your end while cumming so hard?\" She nodded quickly. He leaned forward and kissed the edge of her ear. \"Good girl. Now cum even harder.\" He pressed the blade into her again, this time deep enough that it did fully cut into her belly. He slowly dragged it to the side as she screamed in agony again. Yet even as he split her flat little stomach open, she was clamping around him, doing just as he ordered and cumming harder than ever. Blood started to gush out of the wound, pouring down her body and onto the floor. When the wound was wide enough, things started to escape, loops of her intestines starting to spill free.\n\nIt was the most painful thing she had ever felt in her life. Sudden coldness invading her insides, while simultaneously feeling like everything was on fire, with a strange tugging feeling. And her orgasm seemed to only keep going because of it. \"Oh gods.... oh gods... it's... it's happening!\" She whined, then cried out again.\n\nHe spoke into her ear again, making his voice a little harder. \"You doubted I would keep my promise?\" She gasped slightly, whimpering a little... but nodding. \"Mmm. Naughty little bitch.\" He held onto her middle, just above where he had cut. \"You'll need to be punished for that!\" She whimpered again, only to scream as he jammed her down again. His cock pushed hard against her womb, stretching the filled little sack even more. His cock was still hard as steel, ready for more, and he still had several more inches to get into her. And he had promised them all to her. He rammed up harder and harder, making more of her insides fall out of the gaping wound in her belly. Something tore again, and he ripped through the final barrier, his cock slipping out into her guts.\n\nShe screamed yet again, but her orgasm had not faded yet, this new pain only making it strike again. But she also felt the effects of so much of her blood running out of her, and all the internal damage. She panted and gasped and moaned, her tail laying limp against his leg, only twitching a little instead of thrashing. \"D-do... it... please.\" She whimpered again. \"Please end my miserable life! K-kill me... Snuff me out like the worthless whore I am!\"\n\nHe smiled a little, bringing the knife up to poke under her chin. He whispered into her ear, his voice soft again. \"You're not just some worthless whore. You're [i]my[/i] worthless little whore.\" She let out a soft breath, nodding. \"I love you, Tiff. Now die cumming on my cock.\"\n\nShe shivered. \"I love you, too! Please do i-\" He cut her words off, not by stabbing her in the neck like she had thought he would. Instead, he brought his hand around, and suddenly rammed it into the side of her head. It struck her temple, piercing right through her skull and slicing into her brain. The tip exited the other side of her head and a splash of blood and little bone fragments. He had thought this would have been a much faster way to kill her than cutting her neck open. Instead, she suddenly started to go completely wild on his lap. He had to grip at her middle as she started to flail about and thrash against him. She was also squeezing harder than ever as she went through the biggest orgasm yet.\n\n\"FUCK!\" He held onto her and just rode it out. He felt her leaking more and more around his cock, even as she squeezed so hard it felt like she might rip it off. Even her guts seemed to be trying to milk him, every one of her muscles clenching and reclenching constantly. Her mouth hung open, tongue hanging freely as she made incoherent babbling sounds and moans. As her head flopped about, he saw the look in her eyes... different looks in each eye. The one on the right, where he had stabbed, was lazily drifted to the side, a little blood leaking from it in place of a tear. The left was staring straight ahead and twitching, the pupil only a pinprick among the pinkish red, dominated even more as it quickly became bloodshot.\n\nWhat he didn't see in those eyes was any kind of focus. Whatever was left of her mind was lost in the overwhelming pleasure wracking her tiny body. He saw nothing but lust. He grit his teeth as he held onto her, thrusting up into her again and again as she thrashed and quivered and babbled. \"Fuck... take it all!\" He cried out as her dying body milked him of a second load. He came even harder this time, and it was somehow a larger load than the first. His balls emptied everything they had as he blasted her insides with heavy shot after shot. So much and so hard that several of the shots leaked out of the hole in her belly, drooling with her blood onto the floor. He was sure he came a third time, too, unable to restrain himself inside of her like this. He hoped that at least some part of her could feel this final gift he gave her.\n\nShe continued to shiver and shake against him for a while, but the thrashing soon died down. He held onto her the whole time, her cunt still squeezing against him, her destroyed womb quivering, her insides shifting constantly. When he was sure she was finally starting to fade away, he gripped the handle of the knife and yanked the blade free. Her head and whole body jerked, clenching one final time. Then she went completely limp against him. He held onto her, breathing heavily. Eventually, he leaned forward and let her go. She fell forward, her head smacking the ground hard and bouncing slightly, leaving a splat of blood from the holes in her head. He normally would have caught her, but she would have liked to be mishandled like that.\n\nLast was extracting his cock from her. It had started to deflate, but it still took a hard tug to pull himself free of her ruined cunt. He sat back, taking a few breaths. He was going to need to wash all of her blood off of him. His whole front side was almost coated in it. But he had towels in the duffel bag, too. For now, he just looked at Tiffany, his now very dead girlfriend. His cum oozed out of her gaping hole, more from the hole in her belly. She lay in a pool of her blood, quite a bit of her intestines having fallen out, also coated in his spunk. Her mouth was still open, tongue limp and drooped to the floor, eyes looking in two different directions. Yet he still thought she was so sexy, even ruined like this.\n\nHe... thought he should feel sadder... he was going to really miss her. He figured it would hit him later, once the high of this faded and reality set in. But for now... he needed to get himself cleaned up. He would leave here here like this, in a pile of her own blood and guts, leaking his cum from her completely ruined cunt, a goofy, lustful look frozen onto her face. Whoever finally came to look would find her like this, in such a shameful position. She would have liked that, he thought. He really was going to miss her. She had taught him how to be a brutal, but loving sadist. He would need to find another masochist girlfriend. Someone else that would beg him to break her... eventually.\n\n[center]* * *[/center]", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "
The Day She Breaks

By XP Author


Warren saw the small mouse just up ahead. The ram smiled, jogging up a little bit, crouching down just behind her. He reached out to tap her shoulder gently. "Hey there, little girl. Are you lost? Do you need me to help you find your parents?"

The girl turned around, looking up at him... then scowled. "You know, one of these days, you're going to say that and I'm just going to punch you in the dick."

He laughed at his girlfriend. "Nah, you like riding it too much for that."

Tiffany huffed at him. "But you only ever use half of it, so you could spare to have it broken a little." That made him laugh a little more. She was actually a few months older than he was, but she had something of a double whammy against her. Not only was she a dwarf mouse, but she was even short for that, complications from her being an albino, too. Not even reaching four feet tall, and quite thin and having almost no chest, she looked like she was only 10 or 11, not just turned 20. A fact that she hated, especially since even showing her ID no one ever seemed to believe her, thinking it was just a kid with a fake. The two had been dating for a little over a year now, and it was still common for people to give him strange looks whenever they flirted. Didn't help that he was nearly twice her height.

He stood back up again, towering over her as always. Unlike his girlfriend, Warren was quite tall, at just over six feet. Not a giant, but he felt like it beside her sometimes. He reached down, wiggling his fingers. "Well, c'mon, Tiff. I'll make it up to you with some coffee."

She sighed, shaking her head. "I can't. I have to get to work soon. Late shift... again."

He winced. "Big oof. So probably won't be coming around tonight?"

She shook her head again, her snow white hair shifting side-to-side behind her. "Probably not." Her head tilted up, pinkish-red eyes locking onto his brown. "Though who knows? Maybe I'll be done enough that you'll finally break me if I do?"

He laughed softly, patting her head gently. She both loved and hated when he did that. "We'll see. But I can probably add a new scar or two."

She huffed at him. "You'd better!" Despite her somewhat abrasive and sometimes crass attitude, she was very much the submissive in their relationship. Despite their size difference, though that played into it for her since she was also quite the masochist, too. She had introduced him to all of that. Slowly at first, with some light BDSM, cuffs, spanking, then escalating into whips and choking, and even knife-play. She had quite the array of scars hidden under her clothing from their fun. What she desperately wanted was for him to just go all the way and fully break her, shoving every last inch of himself into her while wrecking her little body, and she had not hidden that. He still wasn't quite at the level where he was ready to go so far that he would potentially kill her... but he wasn't fully against the idea anymore. Something that had surprised him when he came to that realization.

"Well, I'll keep my hopes up. Just in case." He gave her a wave. "I'd say have fun, but I know better." She hated her job at the grocery store. Even being relegated to a register in full uniform, most people still treated her like she was a child that shouldn't be there. Didn't help that the uniform was still baggy on her, even though it was the smallest size they had. Between that and her slipping grades and lessening enthusiasm for classes, she said he was the only good thing she still had going for her these days. He was happy to at least be that for the cute woman, even if he couldn't be more.

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Warren was only just starting to doze off when he heard his phone make a chime. He groaned, rolling over in bed and fumbling around to find the thing in the dark. When he found it, he winced as the screen came on a bit too bright. He saw the time, just after one in the morning. There were only a few people that would text him this late, and he could write off most of them. Opening the texts, he saw it was from Tiffany. A very simple and short one. "You up? Can I come over?"

He smirked slightly, typing out a quick reply. "Sure. Come on over." He could always make time for his girlfriend. Rolling out of bed, he yawned a little, scratching his bare ass as he liked to sleep naked. He did put some pants on, just a pair of shorts. Mostly because he figured he'd have to answer the door. He still hadn't found a replacement roommate after his last one moved out a few months ago. He had hoped that Tiff might be able to move in with him, but the company that owned the dorm buildings didn't allow coed roommates. Probably for the best. He knew that he would be fucking her too much to get anything else done if they were together that much.

Her dorm was a few buildings down, so it probably wouldn't take her very long to get here if she was coming from there. He made his way into the kitchen, starting a pot of coffee. He had a feeling he was going to need it, and she could probably use some after work, if she hadn't already had some. The ram yawned again, stretching his arms up a little. He was still a bit toned, but not nearly as much as when he was in high school. He had wanted to be a baseball player, but was told he just didn't have the skills for it. He hadn't bothered to keep up the old training exercise since then. Though Tiff tended to give him a pretty good work out these days.

His ears perked up as he heard the light knock on the door. When he opened it, he saw her standing in the hallway, still wearing the ill-fitting shirt from the store she worked at. He smiled down at her. "Well, hey there little girl. Are you here to-" He was going to make a joke about girlscout cookies, but then saw the expression on her face. She was on the verge of tears. He dropped the joke immediately. "Hey... what's going on?" She didn't say anything, just got right up next to him and threw her arms around his middle, clinging to him. The tears started the moment she was against him. He closed the door and reached down to hold her. "Hey! W-what's wrong? What happened?"

She sniffed. "It's... all gone..."

He frowned, still confused. "What's all gone?"

"E-everything!" She clung to his brown fur tight, and he could feel her shaking. "M-my laptop, my TV, my... everything! I-It's... fucking gone!"

He was still confused. "Wait, what? How? Did the dorm evict you or something? Don't they give a notice about that?"

She gripped his fur tighter, almost hard enough to pull it out. "I... it was fucking Julie! That... that cunt! She fucking stole everything!" She was talking so fast and crying at the same time, he was having trouble following what she was saying.

"She... what?" Julie was her roommate, and he knew the vixen was a bit of a bitch, but... "How? Wait, c'mon in and sit down." He gently led her further inside, getting her to sit down on one of the chairs. He crouched down in front of her, reaching out to hold her hand, and she gave it a hard squeeze. But she seemed to calm down a little. "Now, what happened?"

Tiff took a shaky breath and let it out slowly. "I... came home from work, and one of my neighbors, that bitchy cheerleader Dani? She said she was surprised I was still there. Thought she was just being her usual cunty self, but she said that a bunch of people were moving things out of my dorm since this afternoon. L-like movers. Loading it all up into Julie's car and a big van or something. And then they were all just gone." She squeezed his hand tighter. "And... yeah. Went inside, and everything's just... gone. The place is cleaned out. They even fucking took my clothes!"

He shook his head. "Are you sure it was her?" He knew Julie was a bit of a bitch, but that? "Have you tried calling her?"

She scowled at him. "Of course I fucking have!"

He held up a hand defensively. "Hey, just making sure!"

She sighed slightly. "Y-yeah... I know. Sorry." She cleared her throat, sniffling a little. "When I called, some robovoice thing said 'I'm sorry this person isn't expecting calls from this number.' That fucking bitch blocked me!"

That made him wince. "Fuck..."

She nodded. "I thought she'd been stealing from me for a few weeks now. Little stuff." She fully expected him to make a 'little' joke there, but he knew better than to joke at a time like this.

"Why would she steal all of your stuff like that? Other than being a psycho bitch?"

Tiff sighed. "Because she's a druggy addict waste, that's why. Meth. Or... heroin. I dunno. One of those. Caught her stoned out of her ass a few times. She was usually pretty much a lump when like that, which meant she wasn't bitching about anything, so I ignored it..." Her little ears fell back a little. "My own fault for not reporting it sooner, y'know? But she threatened to tell everyone about my... She threatened to say that I was self-harming and suicidal if I told anyone about her drug habit. With all the scars and marks you leave, they'd probably believe her." She slumped a little. "Worse, they'd probably accuse you of being abusive or something..."

He winced again. He placed his hand on her shoulder gently. "Hey... thank you for protecting me, but you didn't have to do that." He hated that he was somehow responsible for her putting up with all that, even if only in part. Especially how it turned out.

She tilted forward a little, and he caught her so she could just lean against him, her head on his shoulder. "This is all just so... fucked."

He kept his arms around her, holding her close. She was still shaking a little. "You can stay here tonight." He didn't care about the rules, he wasn't leaving her to sleep on the floor if her bed was gone.

She nodded slowly. "Thanks... Though n-no... not in the mood for..."

He shook his head, giving her a gentle squeeze. "No, I know. But I will still be holding you all night."

She actually managed a soft laugh, if a sad one. "Good. You'd better..." She slumped a little bit more against him. "That or you can just... hurt me. Like, actually just hurt me... not sexy. Just... make me hurt..."

He shook his head. "Not happening." He shifted a little so he could pick her up, though he grunted a little. She might be small, but she wasn't that small. She still clung around his shoulders to let him carry her. "Tonight, you're getting soft hugs and loving holds. We'll worry about hurting you some other time. When you're not so..." He wasn't sure of the right word.

"Desperate for it?"

He shook his head. "In a better head-space for it." Once he was in the bedroom, he gently set her down on the edge of the bed. "I only hurt you when you can enjoy it. So tonight is only gentle dom cuddling his adorable girlfriend." He reached out to gently wipe some of the tears off of her cheek. "Gotta make sure you know you still have something good in this world."

She managed another slight laugh, and even a faint smile. "Yeah... thank you..."

He nodded, getting himself up onto the bed and pulling her close against him so they could do the cuddling. "Of course." He gently pat her head, running fingers through her white hair. "You know I love you, little girl?"

She scoffed, but nodded, snuggling her head up against his shoulder. "Yeah... I do. Ya big, lanky dick waffle." He couldn't help but laugh at that. Her insulting him meant she was at least feeling slightly better. "And I love you, too..." He smiled, holding her up against him. They laid like that for the rest of the night, even if they didn't really sleep much more than a doze. They never did drink the coffee he made.

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Warren whistled, hearing that slight cave-like echo around him in the empty room. "You weren't kidding." Her dorm was completely empty. No furniture, no decorations on the walls, not even any shelves. Everything had been taken. He walked further in, looking into the kitchen. "Well, she didn't take the stove."

Tiff scoffed as she closed the door behind her. "That's because it's literally attached." She walked over and pointed to a spot near the sink. "She took the minifridge, though. And that was provided by the dorms."

"Jeez." He glanced into one of the rooms, the one that had been Tiff's. It was just as empty as everything else. There were marks on the walls that made clear outlines where shelves had been resting against them.

Tiff leaned against one of the walls. "Yeah... couldn't even have left me a clean pair pants." The mouse was still wearing her pants from the day before, but had desperately wanted to get out of her work shirt. So now she wore one of his t-shirts, the thing so huge on her it was almost like a dress that hung down past her knees. "She even took the dirty clothes. Though I have a feeling the dirty panties were more for the guys that helped her move."

Warren chuckled. "I didn't think you wore panties."

She scoffed again. "That's only when I'm coming to visit you. I wear them when I'm at work." She let out a soft sigh. "Though... I guess that won't matter anymore."

The ram nodded, setting down the duffel bag he had been holding. He reached down and rested his hand on her shoulder. "You're sure about this, Tiff? You know there's no... undoing this..."

She sighed, nodding to him. "Yeah. I'm sure." She pushed off of the wall. "I can't recover from this." She motioned around at the empty place. "I'm barely making enough to even pay for rent. I can't afford to buy a new bed and wardrobe and laptop..." He was about to say that he could help, but he was kind if in the same boat. He didn't have much money to give to her to help. She turned her head up to look at him, her pinkish eyes serious. "What about you? You think you can go all the way with it this time?"

He nodded, moving his hand to rub against her face gently. "Yeah. I think I can." He saw that she was at the end of her rope, and if this what would make her happy, then he was willing to finally cross that last line.

She leaned into his hand a little. "Good. Just so long as you're not just doing this for me... I want you to enjoy it, too.."

He nodded. "I think I will..." He smiled a little sheepishly. "I'm... oddly looking forward to it, actually... Is that weird?"

She chuckled softly. "Yes, but so are we." She turned her head to kiss his hand. "Now, stop being so fucking sweet!"

He laughed at that. "I can be sweet and break you at the same time, little girl." He pat her head again. "But how about you strip down for me first. Show me all those lovely scars I've given you."

She grunted, scowling a little as he pat her head again. "Fine." She reached down and started pulling up the huge shirt. "But you better be adding more!" The huge t-shirt was pulled up and over her head, her torso exposed to him. Being albino, her little body was covered in pure white fur. Though there were little lines along her belly and chest where he had cut, whipped, and even bitten her, with more along her arms and legs. Her back had the most marks, mostly from the thin whip she had made him use on her. The first time he went a little too hard, leaving her back a bloody mess. But she had been cumming pretty hard from it, and he came pretty hard from it at the time, too. It's when he learned just how far she wanted him to go with her. And today they were going to finally go there.

"Going to be hard to leave scars if you can't heal anymore..." Her tail and right ear flicked a little at that, her blush visible through her fur. She hastily continued undressing. Her pants fell away easily, exposing those little legs of hers to him, and all the little marks on her thighs. She wore an adorable set of pink panties that were clearly made for a girl much younger than her. The only thing she could find in her size. He felt his cock throb in his pants as he watched her push the panties down, kicking them to the side with the rest of her clothing. He could already smell her arousal. She wanted this.

She put her hands on her hips. "Well. You're turn, big mister. Or are you just going to stare at me all day?"

He let out a snort. "I'll do a lot more than stare, kid." She scowled at him, but he just laughed. His own shirt was lifted up, though he almost got his curved horns stuck in his haste. Soon, it was off and cast to the side, leaving his chest exposed. His fur was a coffee brown, and a little longer and coarser than the mouse's. His jeans were next, dropped and kicked to the side, leaving him in just his briefs. Her eyes were fixed upon the tent in the front, her mouth opening a little when he pulled them down to let the nine inches spring free for her to see. Naturally, the tiny girl's man was that impressively big. He had never gotten more than half of it into her before, even that much. Today, she wanted all of it.

She reached up, stroking one of her tiny hands along the shaft. "I guess I don't need to work you hard today..." She cried out when he smacked her hand away, then cried out again when he grabbed her hair and yanked her head forward.

He pressed her face right up against the base of his shaft. "Lick it anyway. Just to be sure." She saw the shiver run through her as he shifted into dominant mode. Without question, she opened her mouth and slid her tongue out, running it along the base of his shaft. The thing twitched against her mouth almost threateningly. When she got to the tip, she paid it some extra attention, licking all around the head. She wrapped her mouth around it, bobbing her head just a little. She could barely take any of it into her mouth, but she tried anyway.

Her hand slid down between her legs, rubbing at herself. He let her for a few seconds, then lifted his knee and jammed it into her belly, hard enough that she grunted and had to grip at his hip to keep from falling over. "I didn't say you could touch yourself. Little slut." He rested his hand on her head, but this time instead of patting her, he gripped at one of her ears hard. "So me your fingers, though." She held up her hand, only to winced as he yanked her ear. "Your other hand!" She held up her other hand, the one that had been between her legs this time. He saw the remains of her juices upon her fingers. "So wet already. You want to feel me ripping you open that badly?" She nodded, making an affirmative noise, muffled slightly by the cock still in her mouth.

He tilted his head. "Well, in that case." He pulled himself out of her mouth. He let her take a gasp of air, then grabbed her shoulder and shoved her back. She yelped, stumbling over herself and collapsing onto the hard wood floor with a slight smack. "Spread those little legs for me. Let me see just how horny you are." She did as he said, shifting to spread her legs for him and expose her little pussy for him to see. She also reached down, not to rub herself, but to spread the lips a little, letting her juices slowly drool out. He chuckled a little. "So wet already. And just why?" Of course he knew, but he liked to play this part up.

She did, too, getting into the shaming. "B-because I'm a little slut for you?"

He frowned, moving over closer, only to suddenly slap her face. She cried out as he struck her hard enough for the sound to echo a little around them. "No, you're a little slut for yourself." He gripped her hair and yanked her head forward. "Because you love to be used as nothing but a tight hole, isn't that right?"

She panted, wincing a little as he dragged her forward by her hair. "Y-yes! I-I'm just... just a hole f-for you to fuck..."

He frowned at her, gripping her chin this time. "And a whore for pain. You love when I hurt you, don't you?" She nodded slightly, then cried out as he threw her head down. "Say it! Tell me what a disgusting little degenerate you are."

She panted harder. "Y-yes! I'm... I'm just a worthless piece of meat t-to be... be hurt and cut up!" She watched him walk away, going over to the duffel bag and start rummaging around in the things inside. "I-I want it! I want you to... to hurt me... bad... a-and... and break me... more than ever!" She watched as he slowly pulled out each item and set it down. A pair of hard metal cuffs, a small thin whip, a wooden paddle, a gag, a choke collar, and finally, a long blade. She had given him each and every one of those things, and they had all been used on her at some point. The knife was the newest in the collection, an extremely sharp thing, with a finger guard and a heavy blade measuring almost a foot in length. It also had quite the heft to it. Warren was pretty sure it was a bowie knife... or close enough to it.

He looked over at the small mouse, seeing her shivering where he left her. Her legs trembled a little, her pussy almost drooling with her arousal now. He looked into her eyes, seeing her almost pleading with him. It made his cock twitch in excitement. "Well, you're already so turned on. I don't think I'm going to need to use most of these." She let out a whimper. "Oh, don't worry. I'm still going to hurt you worse than you've ever felt before." That made her whimper again, a desperate, begging sound. "Do you want that?"

She nodded quickly, her eyes looking to the tools laid out on the floor. "Y-yes! I... I want it so badly." She looked back at him, slowly crawling her way closer to him on all fours. "Please! H-hurt me! Break me! M-make me bleed and scream!" She was so different when she got like this. No longer the somewhat abrasive small woman that threw out insults, but a pleading, quivering mess of arousal and lustful greed.

He held up the tools one by one, as if examining them. It was more to prolong how long before he did anything, torture in and of itself for her. The gag was first. "Hmm... no, I want to hear your moans and screams." He set that down and picked up the whip. "Maybe, but will be hard to aim it while I'm ripping your tiny cunt open." That made her gasp and moan, and he glanced to make sure she still wasn't touching herself. The paddle was next. "Nope. Will be breaking your backside enough." He held up the cuffs next. "This could work, though." He had purposefully left the knife untouched... for now.

He looked at her, holding the cuffs up. "Sit down and turn around. Hands behind your back." She nodded, doing as he said. Just as she was putting her hands behind herself, he grabbed her arm, yanking it painfully behind her. He clicked the cuff onto her wrist and tightened it as much as he could. "Other hand." She nodded, and yelped when he yanked that hand back as well, binding it like the other. It left her hands locked behind her, the cuffs tight enough they were already making her fingers feel a little numb.

He grabbed the back of her head and pulled her close, tilting her face to look up at him. He leaned down close, whispering into her ear, his voice softer, more his normal. "Last chance to change your mind, Tiff. Once we go past this... I won't be holding back anything."

She panted heavily still, looking at him with desperation. "I want it." Her voice was also softer, but it was also filled with her desperation. "No holding back. No safewords... no stopping until I'm... gone."

"Of course, my sweet little meat puppet." He smiled, leaning down to kiss her forehead gently. One of the last gentle things he would do to her. "I love you." He brought his hand around, showing he had also picked up the knife, pressing the edge against her flat chest. It took almost nothing from him to slowly draw a thin line against her, cutting into her flesh. She cried out and tensed up as blood started to slowly seep out of the thin line. The cut was shallow, and it stung quite a bit.

It also left her trembling and gasping against him. "F-fuck..." She leaned back against him, her tail twitching about.

He smirked, reaching a hand around and pressing his fingers against her pussy, feeling how drenched it was. "Did you nearly cum from just that?" She nodded quickly. "But you didn't cum?" She shook her head, then cried out when he slowly slid the edge against her again, this time right across her right breast, just missing the nipple by a hair's breath. "Don't hold it back anymore. Let it go freely. Cum as hard as you can." She gasped and panted, whimpering. "This is the last day you'll ever be able to. Because I'm going to be snuffing your worthless life soon."

That was all it took for her to not hold back. She cried out loud, her pussy suddenly gushing against his fingers. "Yes! D-do it! End my useless life!" She begged him, her body trembling and shaking against him. It was the first time either of them had said the words they had been dancing around for the last few hours. It surprised even her just how much she wanted it, cumming so hard from the thought alone.

He sat down behind her, his cock straining and desperate for attention now. It felt like he was harder than he ever had been, the thing angrily demanding to be used. "Not yet. I promised to break this tiny cunt." He moved his hand up against her belly, feeling the blood in her fur, then pulled her back until she was in his lap. His cock sat between her legs, throbbing threateningly at her. The tip hovered somewhere above her navel, giving her an idea just how deep it was going to be inside of her. "Say it. Say what you want more than anything else. More than breathing or living."

Her fingers trembled a little, wanting to reach out and grab that cock and shove it inside of her. But she was not the one in control, her hands still locked behind her. So she just rubbed herself against the base of his shaft. "I want you to fuck me! I-I want this cock as deep as it can go! B-break my tiny cunt, rip me open and cum into my guts!"

He smiled. "Good girl." He set the knife down so he could take hold of her by her legs and lift her up, until his tip was poking at her sodden lips. He hesitated for a moment, savoring the last time he would get to feel her against him like this. He pushed whatever doubt he had out of his mind, and yanked her down, ramming himself into her as deep as he could. She screamed for him, nearly cumming yet again as his cock spread her lips painfully wide, his shaft, ramming against the back of her overstretched tunnel in one go. This was as much as he could normally do, barely half of himself inside. Today he would change that.

He lifted her up a little, only to slam her back down again, ramming himself against her cervix. She cried out, leaning back against him so she didn't fall off of his lap when he started to slam himself up into her over and over. He could feel how tight she was squeezing around him every time he struck deep like this, her juices running down the length of his shaft and down to his balls. "So fucking small." He rammed up again. "So fucking tight!" He struck again, feeling her trembling and squirming from the pain. "Take! It! ALL!" He said each word through grit teeth, ramming upwards as a punctuation to each.

With the last, he felt something inside of her tear. The mouse in his grip suddenly screamed in agony, cumming harder than ever before as his cock ripped through and sank further than it ever had. He also cried out, his grip on her legs tight as he held her. The feeling of her womb suddenly around him was too much for him, and he came just as hard as she was. He shifted his grip to instead wrap his arms around her middle, clinging to her and humping his hips upwards with every heavy blast. He could feel her lower belly pushing out just a little when he thrust upwards, right where he was striking inside of her. He also felt the warm blood slowly drooling down his shaft along with her juices and the jizz leaking out of her quivering, ruined hole.

He let her ride her massive orgasm out, just holding onto her as she thrashed and squirmed against him. "F~fuck!" She finally shouted, almost collapsing back against him, twitches making her shiver and shake in his lap. "S-so... so much..." She took deep, gasping breathes.

He smirked, his hand sliding away from her. "Only just the start." He brought his hand back, holding the knife again. He pressed it up against her belly, scratching at her with the dangerous tip. "I promised I would break you." He cut slowly, opening a thin line just below her navel, making her whimper and quiver even more, and making her cunt squeeze him harder. "You are going to be just a bloody pile of meat, filled with my cum."

She gasped and panted. "Oh... gods yes..." She whimpered again. "Please... please cut me... cut me more... n-not... not little ones anymore. Cut me open! Please slice my stupid little belly open! Gut this worthless girl like a fish!"

"Begging for your end while cumming so hard?" She nodded quickly. He leaned forward and kissed the edge of her ear. "Good girl. Now cum even harder." He pressed the blade into her again, this time deep enough that it did fully cut into her belly. He slowly dragged it to the side as she screamed in agony again. Yet even as he split her flat little stomach open, she was clamping around him, doing just as he ordered and cumming harder than ever. Blood started to gush out of the wound, pouring down her body and onto the floor. When the wound was wide enough, things started to escape, loops of her intestines starting to spill free.

It was the most painful thing she had ever felt in her life. Sudden coldness invading her insides, while simultaneously feeling like everything was on fire, with a strange tugging feeling. And her orgasm seemed to only keep going because of it. "Oh gods.... oh gods... it's... it's happening!" She whined, then cried out again.

He spoke into her ear again, making his voice a little harder. "You doubted I would keep my promise?" She gasped slightly, whimpering a little... but nodding. "Mmm. Naughty little bitch." He held onto her middle, just above where he had cut. "You'll need to be punished for that!" She whimpered again, only to scream as he jammed her down again. His cock pushed hard against her womb, stretching the filled little sack even more. His cock was still hard as steel, ready for more, and he still had several more inches to get into her. And he had promised them all to her. He rammed up harder and harder, making more of her insides fall out of the gaping wound in her belly. Something tore again, and he ripped through the final barrier, his cock slipping out into her guts.

She screamed yet again, but her orgasm had not faded yet, this new pain only making it strike again. But she also felt the effects of so much of her blood running out of her, and all the internal damage. She panted and gasped and moaned, her tail laying limp against his leg, only twitching a little instead of thrashing. "D-do... it... please." She whimpered again. "Please end my miserable life! K-kill me... Snuff me out like the worthless whore I am!"

He smiled a little, bringing the knife up to poke under her chin. He whispered into her ear, his voice soft again. "You're not just some worthless whore. You're my worthless little whore." She let out a soft breath, nodding. "I love you, Tiff. Now die cumming on my cock."

She shivered. "I love you, too! Please do i-" He cut her words off, not by stabbing her in the neck like she had thought he would. Instead, he brought his hand around, and suddenly rammed it into the side of her head. It struck her temple, piercing right through her skull and slicing into her brain. The tip exited the other side of her head and a splash of blood and little bone fragments. He had thought this would have been a much faster way to kill her than cutting her neck open. Instead, she suddenly started to go completely wild on his lap. He had to grip at her middle as she started to flail about and thrash against him. She was also squeezing harder than ever as she went through the biggest orgasm yet.

"FUCK!" He held onto her and just rode it out. He felt her leaking more and more around his cock, even as she squeezed so hard it felt like she might rip it off. Even her guts seemed to be trying to milk him, every one of her muscles clenching and reclenching constantly. Her mouth hung open, tongue hanging freely as she made incoherent babbling sounds and moans. As her head flopped about, he saw the look in her eyes... different looks in each eye. The one on the right, where he had stabbed, was lazily drifted to the side, a little blood leaking from it in place of a tear. The left was staring straight ahead and twitching, the pupil only a pinprick among the pinkish red, dominated even more as it quickly became bloodshot.

What he didn't see in those eyes was any kind of focus. Whatever was left of her mind was lost in the overwhelming pleasure wracking her tiny body. He saw nothing but lust. He grit his teeth as he held onto her, thrusting up into her again and again as she thrashed and quivered and babbled. "Fuck... take it all!" He cried out as her dying body milked him of a second load. He came even harder this time, and it was somehow a larger load than the first. His balls emptied everything they had as he blasted her insides with heavy shot after shot. So much and so hard that several of the shots leaked out of the hole in her belly, drooling with her blood onto the floor. He was sure he came a third time, too, unable to restrain himself inside of her like this. He hoped that at least some part of her could feel this final gift he gave her.

She continued to shiver and shake against him for a while, but the thrashing soon died down. He held onto her the whole time, her cunt still squeezing against him, her destroyed womb quivering, her insides shifting constantly. When he was sure she was finally starting to fade away, he gripped the handle of the knife and yanked the blade free. Her head and whole body jerked, clenching one final time. Then she went completely limp against him. He held onto her, breathing heavily. Eventually, he leaned forward and let her go. She fell forward, her head smacking the ground hard and bouncing slightly, leaving a splat of blood from the holes in her head. He normally would have caught her, but she would have liked to be mishandled like that.

Last was extracting his cock from her. It had started to deflate, but it still took a hard tug to pull himself free of her ruined cunt. He sat back, taking a few breaths. He was going to need to wash all of her blood off of him. His whole front side was almost coated in it. But he had towels in the duffel bag, too. For now, he just looked at Tiffany, his now very dead girlfriend. His cum oozed out of her gaping hole, more from the hole in her belly. She lay in a pool of her blood, quite a bit of her intestines having fallen out, also coated in his spunk. Her mouth was still open, tongue limp and drooped to the floor, eyes looking in two different directions. Yet he still thought she was so sexy, even ruined like this.

He... thought he should feel sadder... he was going to really miss her. He figured it would hit him later, once the high of this faded and reality set in. But for now... he needed to get himself cleaned up. He would leave here here like this, in a pile of her own blood and guts, leaking his cum from her completely ruined cunt, a goofy, lustful look frozen onto her face. Whoever finally came to look would find her like this, in such a shameful position. She would have liked that, he thought. He really was going to miss her. She had taught him how to be a brutal, but loving sadist. He would need to find another masochist girlfriend. Someone else that would beg him to break her... eventually.

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