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Those who didn't hand out candy would get a few eggs thrown at their doorstep. Although there were always those who just took advantage of the night to do mischief.\n\n\nHowever, one way or another, Halloween was something that excited everyone.\n\n\n“Can we go home now?”\n\n\nWell, maybe not everyone.\n\n\nShadow the hedgehog had his arms crossed and a bored expression. No, he wasn't even wearing a costume. Still, people mistook him for Sonic. Maybe that's why Shadow was so bitter.\n\n\n“But it's still early! Big brother! Don't be boring!” Eclipse said. The alien waves his fists in the air like a child. Eclipse was wearing a Deadpool costume for the occasion. “Just look at our little ones! They still have plenty of energy to keep asking for candy!”\n\n\nEclipse was referring to the 4 Dark Arms, all of them in their little ghost costumes, jumping up and down while talking in their own alien language.\n\n\n“Awww~ You guys are so cute~” Eclipse said while smiling and shaking his butt in excitement. “Mickey! Get out the camera!”\n\n\nThe last member of the group, Mickey Ross, in a Spiderman costume rolled his eyes with an amused smile. “Eclipse, we’ve already taken over 50 pictures. Give the camera a break.” Although the monkey shared his boyfriend’s excitement to a certain extent, as he found the little aliens very adorable.\n\n\nUnlike other people who saw the group and walked away, they didn’t want to get close to strange creatures.\n\n\nBut the peace of the streets was interrupted by a series of screams, they weren’t screams of excitement nor the light screams of classic Halloween scares. They were screams of true terror. Although a wave of laughter could be heard as well.\n\n\nSoon the source of the screams of terror could be seen. “KEEEEN! GEEOOFFREEEEY! DADDYHHH!” Elias Acorn, the leader of the Acorn Kingdom, was running down the street. Although he didn’t look like a king at all. Elias was running in only his pink underoos with pictures of baby items on them, the underwear was soaked. In fact, Elias was leaving a thin golden trail behind him as he cried in fear. “HELP! THE GHOSTS ARE COMING FOR ME! THEY GIVE WEDGIES AND SPANKS!” Elias screamed.\n\n\nMickey sees the young ruler rushing over. “We must help him.”\n\n\nShadow sighs. “Fine.” The black hedgehog sticks a foot out in the way.\n\n\nElias tripped over Shadow’s foot, going flying and flipping through the air several times. “Gyaaaahhhhh!” People watched as Elias ran through the air screaming until he hit his face against a lamppost. The young ruler slowly slid down to the ground. Mickey gave Shadow a disapproving look while Eclipse and the people around laughed while pointing at Elias.\n\n\n---\n\n\nElias was put in a Barbie diaper and given a bottle of milk to help him relax.\n\n\n“Why did you bring those things?” Mickey asked Eclipse for having all those things with him. But Eclipse just looked away and laughed mischievously.\n\n\nShadow preferred to get straight to the main topic. “So, what happened to you that you ended up running around the street like a scared baby?”\n\n\nElias put down the bottle with an adorable ‘pop’. “There were rumors that reached the palace guards and I heard about a place where ghosts attack people. I talked to Geoffrey about going to investigate and solve the problem personally. But then…”\n\n\n“Geoffrey was teasing you until you two made a bet about going to that place, facing the supposed ghosts and as a result you have been humiliated, maybe you also have some kind of punishment from Geoffrey.” Mickey said, guessing how it all happened. Elias’ guilty look confirmed that this was how things were. “I told you to stop making bets with Geoffrey and the children.” The monkey told the young prince, starting to scold him like a father with a small child.\n\n\nEclipse had an idea upon hearing everything and took Shadow aside. “Brother! I have a great plan! I need you to take the Dark Arms home with you and take care of them.”\n\n\nShadow narrowed his eyes, not liking the idea of ​​being a babysitter. “Why should I do that?”\n\n\n“Because if Mickey and I go to that supposedly haunted place, Mickey will get scared by the ghosts or by the place itself, then I will comfort him and take care of him in my arms.” Eclipse gets excited just imagining his boyfriend coming into his arms, so much so that he starts shaking his butt. “He might ask me to sleep together.”\n\n\n“...” Shadow’s stern look doesn’t waver as he listens to his brother.\n\n\nEclipse sighs. “Fine. If you do this I’ll give you half of my candy and I’ll take care of taking down the Halloween decorations.” Eclipse offers his older brother.\n\n\nAfter that bribe Shadow agreed. When Mickey finished scolding Elias they split up. The prince was sent to Antoine and Bunnie's home to be taken care of, Antoine and his strong paternal instinct taking good care of the prince. Shadow took everyone's candy and returned home with the Dark Arms with the excuse that they shouldn't go to abandoned places.\n\n\n“Why did we give almost all the candy to my brother?” Eclipse said, eating a handful of candy he had taken.\n\n\nMickey decided to save his handful of candy for later. “We're going to a place that has been abandoned for years, do you really want to fill your candy with dust or whatever nasty stuff could be there?”\n\n\nEclipse accepted the reasoning and together with Mickey they headed towards the place of the rumors. This time it wasn't a place that had conveniently appeared for Halloween, the old building was real and people could go there on any day of the year. But it's in October when people pay more attention to those things or try to scare others.\n\n\nThe couple arrived at the place in question. There was a front garden with dead grass, cans and bottles that people had thrown around. Following the small path was the building, which had large black stains, slightly cracked walls, with quite a few cobwebs and moss growing on it. The front door had long since ceased to exist and all the windows were smashed.\n\n\n“Is this the place? Maybe Elias saw some homeless people or rats.” Eclipse said looking at the facade of the building. “What happened in this place?”\n\n\n“I’m not very informed. But it seems that this place was the victim of a fire years ago.” Mickey takes out his phone and turns on the flashlight. “Ready to go in?”\n\n\nEclipse turns on his own flashlight. “Before we do, aren’t you nervous? Do you need me to hold your hand or something?” The alien moves his eyebrows up and down.\n\n\n“It would be better to have our hands free in case we find someone inside who isn’t very friendly.” The monkey said and moved forward, entering the abandoned building first. “Don’t stay behind.”\n\n\nThe interior didn’t improve. It was some sort of reception area with burnt remains of a desk, broken furniture, quite a bit more cobwebs and traces of vandalism like things painted on the walls. There was even an old, stained and torn painting.\n\n\nThe monkey walks over and runs a hand along one of the walls. “This looks worse than it is, the structure doesn’t seem too damaged, I think we can check upstairs in case we don’t find anything downstairs.”\n\n\nEclipse watches disappointedly as his boyfriend walks fearlessly and checks a room. “Aren’t you even a little scared? Maybe a nervous potty dance? A butt shake?” The alien rushes to follow the monkey.\n\n\nBut unnoticed by either of them, there was half a head peeking through the ceiling. The shadowy figure’s red eyes fixate on their new intruders.\n\n\n---\n\n\nMickey watches curiously as several rooms were spacious and had remains of several beds. “I think this place was some sort of orphanage. There are too many beds in one room for it to be a hotel or an inn.”\n\n\nEclipse was pouting. “We’re in this horrible place where there are supposedly ghosts. How is a cute boy like you not scared? Spider sense?”\n\n\n“What does that have to do with being scared?” Mickey questioned, turning to look at his boyfriend. “As for ghosts, well… where I come from we have a very popular saying: ‘There’s no need to fear the dead, it’s the living you have to be careful of.’\n\n\n“Booooo.” Eclipse said disappointed. “It’s the same, ghosts don’t exist.”\n\n\nIt was the monkey’s turn to be confused. “Eclipse… there are literally places known to have ghosts, there are even other mythical beings.”\n\n\n“I saw them on TV while I was learning about this planet, that’s all fake.” Eclipse kicked a shabby stuffed animal that was on the floor.\n\n\nMickey rolled his eyes. “You should show more respect.” The monkey walks over and bends down to pick up the stuffed animal the alien kicked, checking it out.\n\n\nEclipse was going to respond to that but shut up when he saw something to amuse himself with, a light blue stripe sticking out of his boyfriend's pants, the red back of the Spider-man costume making the color pop. With a smile the alien walks over to the monkey with his hands outstretched and pinching the air in anticipation. (If I can't comfort Mickey when he freaks out, I can at least hear his adorable squeal at having his underoos ride up his butt.)\n\n\nWhat neither of them saw was the spectral shadow that descended from the ceiling. The ghost reaches out his hands, reaching through the Deadpool costume and grabbed the disrespectful alien's underwear and gave him a wedgie inside the costume!\n\n\n“WEEEK!” Eclipse yelped, standing on his toes as his butt was forced up. “My underwear is attacking me!”\n\n\nMickey stands up with the stuffed animal in his hand and turns to look at his boyfriend. “I understand that underwear can give you a natural wedgie. But you’re overreacting.”\n\n\n“N-It’s not that!” Eclipse said sweating, he could feel the once comfortable fabric being forced up and into his butt. The ghost let go of the alien, who fell face first onto the floor with his butt in the air.\n\n\nMickey sighs. “This isn’t the best place to take a nap, this floor hasn’t been cleaned in years.”\n\n\nEclipse stands up with a dirty face and small tears forming in his eyes. “I’m serious!” He said, as he tried to fish his underwear over his costume to get it out of his butt. “Dammit, I can’t get it off.”\n\n\nMickey heads to the bedroom door, still holding the stuffed animal. “Fine, I’ll give you the privacy to fix those ‘terrible wedgies’ while I check somewhere else.”\n\n\n“It’s only fun to watch you act like that when you do it with someone else!” Eclipse told his boyfriend. Once he was alone he began to take off his costume.\n\n\nThe Deadpool suit was one piece with a front zipper up to the neck, so Eclipse practically had to strip to get his underwear in place properly. After removing his arms the costume fell down in a bunch around Eclipse’s thighs, leaving the alien standing in his hot pink underwear with images of Beauty and the Beast, which had gotten into his butt and was hanging slightly.\n\n\n“There’s no way this is natural.” Eclipse said grumpily as he arranged his underwear back into place. “There, all nice and comfy.” With everything in place Eclipse leaned down to pick up his costume.\n\n\nThe ghost took advantage of this moment to give the alien a hard spank on the butt! *SPANK*\n\n\n“OWW!” Eclipse jumps up holding his butt, he almost trips over his own costume. “Mickey! Don’t just come and do-!!” Eclipse turns around, expecting to see his boyfriend. But he was alone in the room. This made the alien gulp and felt a slight tremor in his bladder. “M-Mickey! This isn’t funny!” Eclipse lifts up his costume and still undressed rushes out of the room.\n\n\nThe ghost being invisible followed Eclipse, intruders must be punished.\n\n\nEclipse found Mickey looking through some old books. “I demand an apology!” He exclaims as he puts his costume back on.\n\n\nMickey closes the book, sneezing lightly from the dust. “What?\n\n\n“Don’t pretend to be innocent, you hit my butt!” The alien said pointing at his own butt.\n\n\n“Eclipse, this is not the time or place to be naughty.” The monkey said, then began to reach for a book that was on top of an old bookshelf. Eclipse watched as Mickey's underwear rocketed up his back. “YEEE-!!” Mickey's scream was cut short when his head hit the bookshelf, which broke.\n\n\nEclipse began to shake at the sight of Mickey floating in the middle of nowhere by a wedgie. Not even his boyfriend's Cinderella underoos helped his nerves.\n\n\nThe ghost spun hard, spinning Mickey around like a helicopter propeller and then launching him into a wall. The monkey crashed into the wall and slowly slid to the ground with his underwear hanging out of his pants.\n\n\n“F-f-fa-fa-fa-fan…” Eclipse was shaking, unable to say a word.\n\n\nAt that moment the ghost showed itself as a dark shadow stretching out with glowing red eyes. “ROOOOOAAAARGH!” The ghost roared loudly in the alien's face.\n\n\nThe color drained from Eclipse and he turned into a colorful puddle on the ground like in a cartoon. “YEEEEAAAAAAAAAKKK!!!” Eclipse screamed, he was so scared that his costume exploded leaving him in only his increasingly wet underwear.\n\n\nEclipse grabbed Mickey by the tail and ran out of the room. The alien was so scared that instead of heading for the main entrance he ran to the opposite side, dragging his boyfriend with him to the backyard of the building.\n\n\nEclipse hid behind a dead tree, sucking his thumb and hugging Mickey. The monkey hadn’t noticed anything, his eyes were rolling around seeing imaginary bats and drool dripping from his derpy smile.\n\n\nEclipse stops sucking his thumb and peeks out to see the building, the ghost doesn’t seem to have followed them there. “It’s real! Ghosts are real!” He hides again. “What should I do now!? I don’t have a vacuum cleaner with me or a ray gun!” Eclipse grabs Mickey by the shoulders and starts shaking him. “Mickey! Mickey! Wake up! Tell me you have some special weapon in your tight pants!” The alien then slaps the monkey.\n\n\n“Bluuh!” That seemed to do the trick, the monkey’s eyes stopped rolling. Mickey strokes his cheek. “Ow. Why did you do that? I’m fine with wedgies. But the punches are completely out of place.”\n\n\n“Don’t tell me you didn’t notice the ghost!?” Eclipse looks around to make sure they’re still safe. “It’s a wedgie ghost! He wants to catch us and rip our matching underwear to put on his trophy wall!”\n\n\nMickey started working on getting the wedgie out of his butt as he listened to his boyfriend. “I guess some of what you said is true, you wouldn’t strip naked to do a prank like that.” He said after noticing Eclipse’s lack of clothing.\n\n\n“This is serious! We need a ghost-catching team!” The alien said scared. “You’re a nerd! You must have something to take on ghosts and ninjas!”\n\n\n“What’s the connection between… forget it.” Mickey finished tucking his underwear back into his spider-man pants. “I’ve never met a ghost before… but maybe we can do something about this place.” Mickey shows Eclipse the old stuffed animal, he had been holding onto it ever since they found it.\n\n\nThe ghost was watching from a window on the top floor of the building. He seemed to be upset as he watched the intruders but was unable to get to them. Ever since he woke up in his unlife his spirit hasn’t been able to leave the building, he wasn’t even able to go out into the garden. His soul was tied to that place.\n\n\nThe ghost dissolved into the shadows. He would wait for those intruders to finish plotting their stuff and when they came in again, they wouldn’t get out so easily.\n\n\n---\n\n\nThe boys made a plan and gathered the few things they could collect in that backyard. There was no assurance that Mickey’s idea would work. But they had nothing else.\n\n\nEclipse looks at the door in fear. “Are you sure about this?”\n\n\nMickey gulps, looking tense. “No… there are a lot of beliefs and theories surrounding ghosts, there are supposedly different kinds of ghosts too. So we can only hope for the best.”\n\n\n“If that ghost catches us and turns us into his wedgie slaves I’m going to spank you until your ass is like a baboon.” Eclipse said to calm his nerves. Once he felt prepared enough, he took his boyfriend’s hand. “Chaos control!” They both disappeared in a flash of light.\n\n\n---\n\n\nEclipse and Mickey fell into one of the rooms of the abandoned building, raising a cloud of dust, both of them began to cough loudly.\n\n\n“*COF COF COF* Couldn’t we get to a better place standing up?” Mickey complained as he wiped his face.\n\n\n“Cruaaj! I can’t use teleportation as well as my older brother, I was literally created to nullify his powers!” Eclipse defended himself as he spat to the side. “Ugh! I think I swallowed something!” “Gross!”\n\n\nThe boys only stopped their complaints when they saw something similar to smoke emerging from the floorboards and starting to gather into a sphere in the center of the room.\n\n\n“I told you it was a ghost!” Eclipse screamed, feeling his bladder shaking again.\n\n\nAnd he wasn’t the only one, Mickey was also scared now that he saw the ghost. “Run!”\n\n\nBoth boys hurriedly ran out of the room and took opposite directions in the hallway to force the ghost to only follow one of them.\n\n\nUnfortunately for Eclipse his path took him to the end of the hallway with only 2 options, hide in a room or jump out the window.\n\n\n“You’re not running away this time.” It was too late, the ghost was behind him!\n\n\n“GYYYYAAAAHH-OOUUUUWWWHHH!!” What started as a scream of fear turned into a high pitched, unmanly squeal as Eclipse felt his Disney princess underoos burn his butt as it climbed all the way up. “WEDGIEEEEK!”\n\n\n“I won’t let anyone else escape again!” The ghost said in an angry voice. “I won’t be alone again! You guys will be stuck here forever!” The ghost began to bounce the alien on the wedgie, causing his underwear to stretch further.\n\n\n“NOOOO! I want my big brother! I want to see my little Dark Arms! I WANT MY MOMMY! WUAAAAHHHHHH!!” Eclipse began to cry for help from Shadow and his non-existent mother. The fear was only momentarily outweighed by the pain in his butt as the ghost bounced him.\n\n\nMickey had managed to escape, making it all the way to the stairs to go down to the ground floor. “Did he really bring us to the top floor of all places?” The monkey hurried down the stairs. He could already hear Eclipse’s screams, recognizing that particular tone. “More wedgies.” The ghost sure had a funny sense of humor.\n\n\nMickey made it to the lobby of the building and got to work gathering pieces of wood. “Hold on a second, Eclipse! I need 2 or 3 minutes.” The monkey said as he got to work.\n\n\nOnce the alien’s underwear had become a thin pink line between his buttocks the ghost decided to change tactics. The ghost summoned an extra pair of ghostly hands that grabbed Eclipse’s underwear by the front.\n\n\n“NOO! Squeaky no! Anything but a squ-eeeeEEEEEKK!” The alien felt his nether regions being rubbed with wire instead of his comfortable underwear. That’s not right! Underoos are cute and comfortable! This shouldn’t be happening to him! “Waaahh! Stop! Please stop!” Eclipse pleaded as he writhed in the air.\n\n\nBut the ghost showed no mercy, rhythmically tugging at the alien’s underwear giving him an intense wedgie to remember for a lifetime. Forward, backward, forward, backward; the pink fabric with the cute design stretched like a cape or an apron, reaching lengths that went past the alien’s head.\n\n\nEclipse could do nothing but cry pathetically, his bottom had gone numb and his bladder had released, dripping onto the floor beneath him. Not even the constant sight of Belle and Beast comforted him, it was more like they were laughing at him.\n\n\n“IT’S READY!!” Mickey screamed as loud as his lungs would allow.\n\n\nThe ghost stopped torturing Eclipse, he had almost forgotten about the other intruder. “Your friend should have run away when he had the chance and left you here.” The ghost said in a voice so malicious it could drip venom.\n\n\nThe ghost gave Eclipse a monstrous wedgie, covering the alien’s face completely. The alien could do nothing but scream which were muffled by the underwear stretched over his face.\n\n\nThe ghost didn't want to give the alien a chance to escape, so he grabbed the alien's tail and dragged the alien with him. They both flew down the hallway and down the stairs. The ghost's eyes lit up with a red glow when he saw the monkey in the desolate reception area and he lunged like a wild animal in its direction.\n\n\nMickey watched the ghost approach as he dragged Eclipse along. The supernatural entity formed a large hand to catch the monkey. Mickey closed his eyes and crossed his arms in front of him preparing for impact... but it never came.\n\n\nThe ghost had stopped dead in its tracks when something else in the room caught his attention, something that wasn't there before. \"What... what is this?\" The ghost's voice was no longer malicious. Confusion, curiosity, and a strange peace was replacing it.\n\n\nOn a wall, just below the old reception painting, using old planks, a small altar was built. There was the old teddy bear, some dandelions picked from the backyard, and some candy Mickey had brought with him.\n\n\nThe ghost dropped Eclipse and slowly began to approach the shrine, as he did so the darkness that had been surrounding him began to fade away until his original form was revealed. He was a raccoon mobian, looking 7 or 8 years old and wearing clothes from the first half of the 20th century. His body was almost translucent.\n\n\nMickey helped Eclipse get up and undo the atomic wedgie. They both looked at the ghost boy who was now in front of the makeshift altar. The monkey gulped before breaking the silence. “You… do you remember your name? … Do you know what you’re doing here?”\n\n\nThe ghost boy was quiet for a few moments, then turned around looking sad. “I passed away in this place…”\n\n\n“Huuuuhh.” Eclipse felt like he was going to faint.\n\n\n“My name is Julian… I was always in this place… I was always sick, so I could never leave the room.” Julian said, memories of his life becoming clearer now that he was calm. “I was always in my bed, with no one to keep me company. All I could do was watch out the window at the other kids… that was until tragedy struck. There was a fire and I… *sniff sniff* I was left behind, with the flames spreading around me.”\n\n\nMickey slowly approached the ghost boy. “I know you must have suffered a lot. But things aren’t going to get better if you stay in this place.”\n\n\n“I never wanted to stay here. All I wanted was to make friends and play!” Julian was on the verge of tears. “But everyone stayed away from this place for so many years! And the people who came after that were mean!”\n\n\nMickey tried to pat Julian’s head but his hand went right through. “I’m sorry to hear that, it seems people haven’t been very nice to this place. Maybe that’s been affecting you?”\n\n\n“I don’t know.” The ghost looked regretful. “I didn’t mean to scare anyone, I just wanted some company.”\n\n\n“Well, we are here now.” The monkey said wanting to cheer up the ghost boy. “We could talk for a while.”\n\n\n“You’re not serious!?” Eclipse exclaimed, wanting to run away from that place.\n\n\nJulian seemed to cheer up with that. “Really? And would you tell me about the things outside?”\n\n\nMickey smiled softly and nodded his head before sitting down on the floor.\n\n\n---\n\n\nThe sense of time seemed to have vanished in that abandoned building. Mickey was talking to Julian about how many things had changed, like video games, the heroes who save the world and the villains who threaten it.\n\n\nMeanwhile Eclipse managed to get some sleep, making sure to stay away from the ghost. But when the sun came up the rays filtered in, reaching the alien’s face and waking him up. Eclipse wasn’t very happy to see that the ghost thing wasn’t a nightmare.\n\n\n“Hearing so many things about the world has been really exciting and scary at the same time.” Julian said as he floated around above the small makeshift altar.\n\n\n*Yaaaawn~* Mickey lets out a long yawn from having spent the whole night talking to the ghost. “You can be sure that’s true.”\n\n\nJulian floats upside down smiling softly. “Still, I feel pretty happy. I don’t think I’ve ever had a talk with a friend like that with anyone in my life.”\n\n\nSuddenly the ghost’s disembodied body began to glow brightly surprising everyone!\n\n\nEclipse hid behind Mickey. “What’s going on!? He’s going to attack us again!?”\n\n\n“I-I don’t know!” Mickey had to cover his eyes from the glow. “But I don’t think it’s the same as before!”\n\n\nThe glow emerges from the abandoned building, erasing any shadows that were there. But just as it started the light suddenly went out. Now that it seemed safe for the eyes to see Eclipse and Mickey uncovered their eyes, amazed by what they saw.\n\n\nJulian was now in color and had small wings sprouting from his back. Julian himself was surprised, turning around a couple of times looking at his wings in amazement.\n\n\n“What just happened?” Eclipse said very confused. “He's an angel now?”\n\n\n“I don't think that's the case.” Mickey said, although he didn't know what was happening either.\n\n\n“I see it! Can't you guys see the road?” Julian said with a big smile of excitement, looking at an open space, quite bright and with a few clouds. “Thank you very much friends! I can finally get out of this place and go to a better place!”\n\n\nMickey and Eclipse could only see a moldy wall.\n\n\n“Bye! And again thank you very much!” Julian said and then left. Although to his friends it looked as if he had vanished into thin air.\n\n\nAfter a few moments of silence Eclipse spoke. “What did we just see?”\n\n\n“I think he's gone to the afterlife or wherever ghosts go…” Mickey said as he continued to look at the wall. “I hope no one else is trapped in this place like him.”\n\n\nEclipse crosses his arms and sticks out his tongue in mockery. “If that ghost dares, don’t think I’m scared of them.” He said despite still wearing only his Disney princess undergarments. “I can take on 10 or 100 of them! And I n-!!” The alien stopped bragging when a hand suddenly landed on his shoulder, a white hand. “KYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!”\n\n\nEclipse ran off so fast that he made a hole in the wall of the building leaving his silhouette. The people who were out and about cleaning up their yards or starting to take down Halloween decorations were shocked to see an alien running around in his pink Beauty and the Beast underwear while leaving a wet trail behind him and screaming for his older brother.\n\n\nThat was ironic, since it was Shadow the Hedgehog himself who had placed his gloved hand on Eclipse’s shoulder.\n\n\nThe hedgehog looked at the hole in the wall and then at the monkey. “I came to see why you two hadn’t returned during the night.” Shadow sighs lightly. “Can you tell me what they did here to spend the night in this place without warning?”\n\n\nMickey strokes his neck with a nervous smile. “It’s a long story. Maybe we could go back home, calm Eclipse down and talk about it over breakfast?” Shadow nodded in agreement. “By the way, how did you find this place?” The monkey asks curiously, the hedgehog not around when Elias gave them the directions to get there.\n\n\n“I asked a man in a store.” Shadow answered. “I asked him about an abandoned place with ghost stories and he said the closest place was the old abandoned mini hospital.”\n\n\nMickey turned really pale, his pupils shrank, his fur stood on end, and every muscle in his body tensed up. “H-H-H-Hospital!?”\n\n\n“It seems so, this place t-”\n\n\n“GWAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!” Mickey jumped up with his costume falling to pieces and ran out the same way Eclipse did, making a hole in the wall.\n\n\nPeople now saw a monkey running and screaming in his Cinderella underoos leaving a second wet trail thanks to him losing control of his bladder. Before long Mickey managed to catch up to Eclipse, so people could now see the couple running scared in their matching underwear.\n \nShadow walked out of the building and slapped his face with the palm of his hand. “Mickey, I know you’re scared of hospitals. But you already spent the whole night here!” The hedgehog started walking home, he wasn’t in a hurry to get there and take care of those 2 big babies.", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "The streets were filled with people in costumes, mostly children and teenagers, who went from house to house asking for candy. Those who didn't hand out candy would get a few eggs thrown at their doorstep. Although there were always those who just took advantage of the night to do mischief.


However, one way or another, Halloween was something that excited everyone.


“Can we go home now?”


Well, maybe not everyone.


Shadow the hedgehog had his arms crossed and a bored expression. No, he wasn't even wearing a costume. Still, people mistook him for Sonic. Maybe that's why Shadow was so bitter.


“But it's still early! Big brother! Don't be boring!” Eclipse said. The alien waves his fists in the air like a child. Eclipse was wearing a Deadpool costume for the occasion. “Just look at our little ones! They still have plenty of energy to keep asking for candy!”


Eclipse was referring to the 4 Dark Arms, all of them in their little ghost costumes, jumping up and down while talking in their own alien language.


“Awww~ You guys are so cute~” Eclipse said while smiling and shaking his butt in excitement. “Mickey! Get out the camera!”


The last member of the group, Mickey Ross, in a Spiderman costume rolled his eyes with an amused smile. “Eclipse, we’ve already taken over 50 pictures. Give the camera a break.” Although the monkey shared his boyfriend’s excitement to a certain extent, as he found the little aliens very adorable.


Unlike other people who saw the group and walked away, they didn’t want to get close to strange creatures.


But the peace of the streets was interrupted by a series of screams, they weren’t screams of excitement nor the light screams of classic Halloween scares. They were screams of true terror. Although a wave of laughter could be heard as well.


Soon the source of the screams of terror could be seen. “KEEEEN! GEEOOFFREEEEY! DADDYHHH!” Elias Acorn, the leader of the Acorn Kingdom, was running down the street. Although he didn’t look like a king at all. Elias was running in only his pink underoos with pictures of baby items on them, the underwear was soaked. In fact, Elias was leaving a thin golden trail behind him as he cried in fear. “HELP! THE GHOSTS ARE COMING FOR ME! THEY GIVE WEDGIES AND SPANKS!” Elias screamed.


Mickey sees the young ruler rushing over. “We must help him.”


Shadow sighs. “Fine.” The black hedgehog sticks a foot out in the way.


Elias tripped over Shadow’s foot, going flying and flipping through the air several times. “Gyaaaahhhhh!” People watched as Elias ran through the air screaming until he hit his face against a lamppost. The young ruler slowly slid down to the ground. Mickey gave Shadow a disapproving look while Eclipse and the people around laughed while pointing at Elias.


---


Elias was put in a Barbie diaper and given a bottle of milk to help him relax.


“Why did you bring those things?” Mickey asked Eclipse for having all those things with him. But Eclipse just looked away and laughed mischievously.


Shadow preferred to get straight to the main topic. “So, what happened to you that you ended up running around the street like a scared baby?”


Elias put down the bottle with an adorable ‘pop’. “There were rumors that reached the palace guards and I heard about a place where ghosts attack people. I talked to Geoffrey about going to investigate and solve the problem personally. But then…”


“Geoffrey was teasing you until you two made a bet about going to that place, facing the supposed ghosts and as a result you have been humiliated, maybe you also have some kind of punishment from Geoffrey.” Mickey said, guessing how it all happened. Elias’ guilty look confirmed that this was how things were. “I told you to stop making bets with Geoffrey and the children.” The monkey told the young prince, starting to scold him like a father with a small child.


Eclipse had an idea upon hearing everything and took Shadow aside. “Brother! I have a great plan! I need you to take the Dark Arms home with you and take care of them.”


Shadow narrowed his eyes, not liking the idea of ​​being a babysitter. “Why should I do that?”


“Because if Mickey and I go to that supposedly haunted place, Mickey will get scared by the ghosts or by the place itself, then I will comfort him and take care of him in my arms.” Eclipse gets excited just imagining his boyfriend coming into his arms, so much so that he starts shaking his butt. “He might ask me to sleep together.”


“...” Shadow’s stern look doesn’t waver as he listens to his brother.


Eclipse sighs. “Fine. If you do this I’ll give you half of my candy and I’ll take care of taking down the Halloween decorations.” Eclipse offers his older brother.


After that bribe Shadow agreed. When Mickey finished scolding Elias they split up. The prince was sent to Antoine and Bunnie's home to be taken care of, Antoine and his strong paternal instinct taking good care of the prince. Shadow took everyone's candy and returned home with the Dark Arms with the excuse that they shouldn't go to abandoned places.


“Why did we give almost all the candy to my brother?” Eclipse said, eating a handful of candy he had taken.


Mickey decided to save his handful of candy for later. “We're going to a place that has been abandoned for years, do you really want to fill your candy with dust or whatever nasty stuff could be there?”


Eclipse accepted the reasoning and together with Mickey they headed towards the place of the rumors. This time it wasn't a place that had conveniently appeared for Halloween, the old building was real and people could go there on any day of the year. But it's in October when people pay more attention to those things or try to scare others.


The couple arrived at the place in question. There was a front garden with dead grass, cans and bottles that people had thrown around. Following the small path was the building, which had large black stains, slightly cracked walls, with quite a few cobwebs and moss growing on it. The front door had long since ceased to exist and all the windows were smashed.


“Is this the place? Maybe Elias saw some homeless people or rats.” Eclipse said looking at the facade of the building. “What happened in this place?”


“I’m not very informed. But it seems that this place was the victim of a fire years ago.” Mickey takes out his phone and turns on the flashlight. “Ready to go in?”


Eclipse turns on his own flashlight. “Before we do, aren’t you nervous? Do you need me to hold your hand or something?” The alien moves his eyebrows up and down.


“It would be better to have our hands free in case we find someone inside who isn’t very friendly.” The monkey said and moved forward, entering the abandoned building first. “Don’t stay behind.”


The interior didn’t improve. It was some sort of reception area with burnt remains of a desk, broken furniture, quite a bit more cobwebs and traces of vandalism like things painted on the walls. There was even an old, stained and torn painting.


The monkey walks over and runs a hand along one of the walls. “This looks worse than it is, the structure doesn’t seem too damaged, I think we can check upstairs in case we don’t find anything downstairs.”


Eclipse watches disappointedly as his boyfriend walks fearlessly and checks a room. “Aren’t you even a little scared? Maybe a nervous potty dance? A butt shake?” The alien rushes to follow the monkey.


But unnoticed by either of them, there was half a head peeking through the ceiling. The shadowy figure’s red eyes fixate on their new intruders.


---


Mickey watches curiously as several rooms were spacious and had remains of several beds. “I think this place was some sort of orphanage. There are too many beds in one room for it to be a hotel or an inn.”


Eclipse was pouting. “We’re in this horrible place where there are supposedly ghosts. How is a cute boy like you not scared? Spider sense?”


“What does that have to do with being scared?” Mickey questioned, turning to look at his boyfriend. “As for ghosts, well… where I come from we have a very popular saying: ‘There’s no need to fear the dead, it’s the living you have to be careful of.’


“Booooo.” Eclipse said disappointed. “It’s the same, ghosts don’t exist.”


It was the monkey’s turn to be confused. “Eclipse… there are literally places known to have ghosts, there are even other mythical beings.”


“I saw them on TV while I was learning about this planet, that’s all fake.” Eclipse kicked a shabby stuffed animal that was on the floor.


Mickey rolled his eyes. “You should show more respect.” The monkey walks over and bends down to pick up the stuffed animal the alien kicked, checking it out.


Eclipse was going to respond to that but shut up when he saw something to amuse himself with, a light blue stripe sticking out of his boyfriend's pants, the red back of the Spider-man costume making the color pop. With a smile the alien walks over to the monkey with his hands outstretched and pinching the air in anticipation. (If I can't comfort Mickey when he freaks out, I can at least hear his adorable squeal at having his underoos ride up his butt.)


What neither of them saw was the spectral shadow that descended from the ceiling. The ghost reaches out his hands, reaching through the Deadpool costume and grabbed the disrespectful alien's underwear and gave him a wedgie inside the costume!


“WEEEK!” Eclipse yelped, standing on his toes as his butt was forced up. “My underwear is attacking me!”


Mickey stands up with the stuffed animal in his hand and turns to look at his boyfriend. “I understand that underwear can give you a natural wedgie. But you’re overreacting.”


“N-It’s not that!” Eclipse said sweating, he could feel the once comfortable fabric being forced up and into his butt. The ghost let go of the alien, who fell face first onto the floor with his butt in the air.


Mickey sighs. “This isn’t the best place to take a nap, this floor hasn’t been cleaned in years.”


Eclipse stands up with a dirty face and small tears forming in his eyes. “I’m serious!” He said, as he tried to fish his underwear over his costume to get it out of his butt. “Dammit, I can’t get it off.”


Mickey heads to the bedroom door, still holding the stuffed animal. “Fine, I’ll give you the privacy to fix those ‘terrible wedgies’ while I check somewhere else.”


“It’s only fun to watch you act like that when you do it with someone else!” Eclipse told his boyfriend. Once he was alone he began to take off his costume.


The Deadpool suit was one piece with a front zipper up to the neck, so Eclipse practically had to strip to get his underwear in place properly. After removing his arms the costume fell down in a bunch around Eclipse’s thighs, leaving the alien standing in his hot pink underwear with images of Beauty and the Beast, which had gotten into his butt and was hanging slightly.


“There’s no way this is natural.” Eclipse said grumpily as he arranged his underwear back into place. “There, all nice and comfy.” With everything in place Eclipse leaned down to pick up his costume.


The ghost took advantage of this moment to give the alien a hard spank on the butt! *SPANK*


“OWW!” Eclipse jumps up holding his butt, he almost trips over his own costume. “Mickey! Don’t just come and do-!!” Eclipse turns around, expecting to see his boyfriend. But he was alone in the room. This made the alien gulp and felt a slight tremor in his bladder. “M-Mickey! This isn’t funny!” Eclipse lifts up his costume and still undressed rushes out of the room.


The ghost being invisible followed Eclipse, intruders must be punished.


Eclipse found Mickey looking through some old books. “I demand an apology!” He exclaims as he puts his costume back on.


Mickey closes the book, sneezing lightly from the dust. “What?


“Don’t pretend to be innocent, you hit my butt!” The alien said pointing at his own butt.


“Eclipse, this is not the time or place to be naughty.” The monkey said, then began to reach for a book that was on top of an old bookshelf. Eclipse watched as Mickey's underwear rocketed up his back. “YEEE-!!” Mickey's scream was cut short when his head hit the bookshelf, which broke.


Eclipse began to shake at the sight of Mickey floating in the middle of nowhere by a wedgie. Not even his boyfriend's Cinderella underoos helped his nerves.


The ghost spun hard, spinning Mickey around like a helicopter propeller and then launching him into a wall. The monkey crashed into the wall and slowly slid to the ground with his underwear hanging out of his pants.


“F-f-fa-fa-fa-fan…” Eclipse was shaking, unable to say a word.


At that moment the ghost showed itself as a dark shadow stretching out with glowing red eyes. “ROOOOOAAAARGH!” The ghost roared loudly in the alien's face.


The color drained from Eclipse and he turned into a colorful puddle on the ground like in a cartoon. “YEEEEAAAAAAAAAKKK!!!” Eclipse screamed, he was so scared that his costume exploded leaving him in only his increasingly wet underwear.


Eclipse grabbed Mickey by the tail and ran out of the room. The alien was so scared that instead of heading for the main entrance he ran to the opposite side, dragging his boyfriend with him to the backyard of the building.


Eclipse hid behind a dead tree, sucking his thumb and hugging Mickey. The monkey hadn’t noticed anything, his eyes were rolling around seeing imaginary bats and drool dripping from his derpy smile.


Eclipse stops sucking his thumb and peeks out to see the building, the ghost doesn’t seem to have followed them there. “It’s real! Ghosts are real!” He hides again. “What should I do now!? I don’t have a vacuum cleaner with me or a ray gun!” Eclipse grabs Mickey by the shoulders and starts shaking him. “Mickey! Mickey! Wake up! Tell me you have some special weapon in your tight pants!” The alien then slaps the monkey.


“Bluuh!” That seemed to do the trick, the monkey’s eyes stopped rolling. Mickey strokes his cheek. “Ow. Why did you do that? I’m fine with wedgies. But the punches are completely out of place.”


“Don’t tell me you didn’t notice the ghost!?” Eclipse looks around to make sure they’re still safe. “It’s a wedgie ghost! He wants to catch us and rip our matching underwear to put on his trophy wall!”


Mickey started working on getting the wedgie out of his butt as he listened to his boyfriend. “I guess some of what you said is true, you wouldn’t strip naked to do a prank like that.” He said after noticing Eclipse’s lack of clothing.


“This is serious! We need a ghost-catching team!” The alien said scared. “You’re a nerd! You must have something to take on ghosts and ninjas!”


“What’s the connection between… forget it.” Mickey finished tucking his underwear back into his spider-man pants. “I’ve never met a ghost before… but maybe we can do something about this place.” Mickey shows Eclipse the old stuffed animal, he had been holding onto it ever since they found it.


The ghost was watching from a window on the top floor of the building. He seemed to be upset as he watched the intruders but was unable to get to them. Ever since he woke up in his unlife his spirit hasn’t been able to leave the building, he wasn’t even able to go out into the garden. His soul was tied to that place.


The ghost dissolved into the shadows. He would wait for those intruders to finish plotting their stuff and when they came in again, they wouldn’t get out so easily.


---


The boys made a plan and gathered the few things they could collect in that backyard. There was no assurance that Mickey’s idea would work. But they had nothing else.


Eclipse looks at the door in fear. “Are you sure about this?”


Mickey gulps, looking tense. “No… there are a lot of beliefs and theories surrounding ghosts, there are supposedly different kinds of ghosts too. So we can only hope for the best.”


“If that ghost catches us and turns us into his wedgie slaves I’m going to spank you until your ass is like a baboon.” Eclipse said to calm his nerves. Once he felt prepared enough, he took his boyfriend’s hand. “Chaos control!” They both disappeared in a flash of light.


---


Eclipse and Mickey fell into one of the rooms of the abandoned building, raising a cloud of dust, both of them began to cough loudly.


“*COF COF COF* Couldn’t we get to a better place standing up?” Mickey complained as he wiped his face.


“Cruaaj! I can’t use teleportation as well as my older brother, I was literally created to nullify his powers!” Eclipse defended himself as he spat to the side. “Ugh! I think I swallowed something!” “Gross!”


The boys only stopped their complaints when they saw something similar to smoke emerging from the floorboards and starting to gather into a sphere in the center of the room.


“I told you it was a ghost!” Eclipse screamed, feeling his bladder shaking again.


And he wasn’t the only one, Mickey was also scared now that he saw the ghost. “Run!”


Both boys hurriedly ran out of the room and took opposite directions in the hallway to force the ghost to only follow one of them.


Unfortunately for Eclipse his path took him to the end of the hallway with only 2 options, hide in a room or jump out the window.


“You’re not running away this time.” It was too late, the ghost was behind him!


“GYYYYAAAAHH-OOUUUUWWWHHH!!” What started as a scream of fear turned into a high pitched, unmanly squeal as Eclipse felt his Disney princess underoos burn his butt as it climbed all the way up. “WEDGIEEEEK!”


“I won’t let anyone else escape again!” The ghost said in an angry voice. “I won’t be alone again! You guys will be stuck here forever!” The ghost began to bounce the alien on the wedgie, causing his underwear to stretch further.


“NOOOO! I want my big brother! I want to see my little Dark Arms! I WANT MY MOMMY! WUAAAAHHHHHH!!” Eclipse began to cry for help from Shadow and his non-existent mother. The fear was only momentarily outweighed by the pain in his butt as the ghost bounced him.


Mickey had managed to escape, making it all the way to the stairs to go down to the ground floor. “Did he really bring us to the top floor of all places?” The monkey hurried down the stairs. He could already hear Eclipse’s screams, recognizing that particular tone. “More wedgies.” The ghost sure had a funny sense of humor.


Mickey made it to the lobby of the building and got to work gathering pieces of wood. “Hold on a second, Eclipse! I need 2 or 3 minutes.” The monkey said as he got to work.


Once the alien’s underwear had become a thin pink line between his buttocks the ghost decided to change tactics. The ghost summoned an extra pair of ghostly hands that grabbed Eclipse’s underwear by the front.


“NOO! Squeaky no! Anything but a squ-eeeeEEEEEKK!” The alien felt his nether regions being rubbed with wire instead of his comfortable underwear. That’s not right! Underoos are cute and comfortable! This shouldn’t be happening to him! “Waaahh! Stop! Please stop!” Eclipse pleaded as he writhed in the air.


But the ghost showed no mercy, rhythmically tugging at the alien’s underwear giving him an intense wedgie to remember for a lifetime. Forward, backward, forward, backward; the pink fabric with the cute design stretched like a cape or an apron, reaching lengths that went past the alien’s head.


Eclipse could do nothing but cry pathetically, his bottom had gone numb and his bladder had released, dripping onto the floor beneath him. Not even the constant sight of Belle and Beast comforted him, it was more like they were laughing at him.


“IT’S READY!!” Mickey screamed as loud as his lungs would allow.


The ghost stopped torturing Eclipse, he had almost forgotten about the other intruder. “Your friend should have run away when he had the chance and left you here.” The ghost said in a voice so malicious it could drip venom.


The ghost gave Eclipse a monstrous wedgie, covering the alien’s face completely. The alien could do nothing but scream which were muffled by the underwear stretched over his face.


The ghost didn't want to give the alien a chance to escape, so he grabbed the alien's tail and dragged the alien with him. They both flew down the hallway and down the stairs. The ghost's eyes lit up with a red glow when he saw the monkey in the desolate reception area and he lunged like a wild animal in its direction.


Mickey watched the ghost approach as he dragged Eclipse along. The supernatural entity formed a large hand to catch the monkey. Mickey closed his eyes and crossed his arms in front of him preparing for impact... but it never came.


The ghost had stopped dead in its tracks when something else in the room caught his attention, something that wasn't there before. "What... what is this?" The ghost's voice was no longer malicious. Confusion, curiosity, and a strange peace was replacing it.


On a wall, just below the old reception painting, using old planks, a small altar was built. There was the old teddy bear, some dandelions picked from the backyard, and some candy Mickey had brought with him.


The ghost dropped Eclipse and slowly began to approach the shrine, as he did so the darkness that had been surrounding him began to fade away until his original form was revealed. He was a raccoon mobian, looking 7 or 8 years old and wearing clothes from the first half of the 20th century. His body was almost translucent.


Mickey helped Eclipse get up and undo the atomic wedgie. They both looked at the ghost boy who was now in front of the makeshift altar. The monkey gulped before breaking the silence. “You… do you remember your name? … Do you know what you’re doing here?”


The ghost boy was quiet for a few moments, then turned around looking sad. “I passed away in this place…”


“Huuuuhh.” Eclipse felt like he was going to faint.


“My name is Julian… I was always in this place… I was always sick, so I could never leave the room.” Julian said, memories of his life becoming clearer now that he was calm. “I was always in my bed, with no one to keep me company. All I could do was watch out the window at the other kids… that was until tragedy struck. There was a fire and I… *sniff sniff* I was left behind, with the flames spreading around me.”


Mickey slowly approached the ghost boy. “I know you must have suffered a lot. But things aren’t going to get better if you stay in this place.”


“I never wanted to stay here. All I wanted was to make friends and play!” Julian was on the verge of tears. “But everyone stayed away from this place for so many years! And the people who came after that were mean!”


Mickey tried to pat Julian’s head but his hand went right through. “I’m sorry to hear that, it seems people haven’t been very nice to this place. Maybe that’s been affecting you?”


“I don’t know.” The ghost looked regretful. “I didn’t mean to scare anyone, I just wanted some company.”


“Well, we are here now.” The monkey said wanting to cheer up the ghost boy. “We could talk for a while.”


“You’re not serious!?” Eclipse exclaimed, wanting to run away from that place.


Julian seemed to cheer up with that. “Really? And would you tell me about the things outside?”


Mickey smiled softly and nodded his head before sitting down on the floor.


---


The sense of time seemed to have vanished in that abandoned building. Mickey was talking to Julian about how many things had changed, like video games, the heroes who save the world and the villains who threaten it.


Meanwhile Eclipse managed to get some sleep, making sure to stay away from the ghost. But when the sun came up the rays filtered in, reaching the alien’s face and waking him up. Eclipse wasn’t very happy to see that the ghost thing wasn’t a nightmare.


“Hearing so many things about the world has been really exciting and scary at the same time.” Julian said as he floated around above the small makeshift altar.


*Yaaaawn~* Mickey lets out a long yawn from having spent the whole night talking to the ghost. “You can be sure that’s true.”


Julian floats upside down smiling softly. “Still, I feel pretty happy. I don’t think I’ve ever had a talk with a friend like that with anyone in my life.”


Suddenly the ghost’s disembodied body began to glow brightly surprising everyone!


Eclipse hid behind Mickey. “What’s going on!? He’s going to attack us again!?”


“I-I don’t know!” Mickey had to cover his eyes from the glow. “But I don’t think it’s the same as before!”


The glow emerges from the abandoned building, erasing any shadows that were there. But just as it started the light suddenly went out. Now that it seemed safe for the eyes to see Eclipse and Mickey uncovered their eyes, amazed by what they saw.


Julian was now in color and had small wings sprouting from his back. Julian himself was surprised, turning around a couple of times looking at his wings in amazement.


“What just happened?” Eclipse said very confused. “He's an angel now?”


“I don't think that's the case.” Mickey said, although he didn't know what was happening either.


“I see it! Can't you guys see the road?” Julian said with a big smile of excitement, looking at an open space, quite bright and with a few clouds. “Thank you very much friends! I can finally get out of this place and go to a better place!”


Mickey and Eclipse could only see a moldy wall.


“Bye! And again thank you very much!” Julian said and then left. Although to his friends it looked as if he had vanished into thin air.


After a few moments of silence Eclipse spoke. “What did we just see?”


“I think he's gone to the afterlife or wherever ghosts go…” Mickey said as he continued to look at the wall. “I hope no one else is trapped in this place like him.”


Eclipse crosses his arms and sticks out his tongue in mockery. “If that ghost dares, don’t think I’m scared of them.” He said despite still wearing only his Disney princess undergarments. “I can take on 10 or 100 of them! And I n-!!” The alien stopped bragging when a hand suddenly landed on his shoulder, a white hand. “KYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!”


Eclipse ran off so fast that he made a hole in the wall of the building leaving his silhouette. The people who were out and about cleaning up their yards or starting to take down Halloween decorations were shocked to see an alien running around in his pink Beauty and the Beast underwear while leaving a wet trail behind him and screaming for his older brother.


That was ironic, since it was Shadow the Hedgehog himself who had placed his gloved hand on Eclipse’s shoulder.


The hedgehog looked at the hole in the wall and then at the monkey. “I came to see why you two hadn’t returned during the night.” Shadow sighs lightly. “Can you tell me what they did here to spend the night in this place without warning?”


Mickey strokes his neck with a nervous smile. “It’s a long story. Maybe we could go back home, calm Eclipse down and talk about it over breakfast?” Shadow nodded in agreement. “By the way, how did you find this place?” The monkey asks curiously, the hedgehog not around when Elias gave them the directions to get there.


“I asked a man in a store.” Shadow answered. “I asked him about an abandoned place with ghost stories and he said the closest place was the old abandoned mini hospital.”


Mickey turned really pale, his pupils shrank, his fur stood on end, and every muscle in his body tensed up. “H-H-H-Hospital!?”


“It seems so, this place t-”


“GWAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!” Mickey jumped up with his costume falling to pieces and ran out the same way Eclipse did, making a hole in the wall.


People now saw a monkey running and screaming in his Cinderella underoos leaving a second wet trail thanks to him losing control of his bladder. Before long Mickey managed to catch up to Eclipse, so people could now see the couple running scared in their matching underwear.
 
Shadow walked out of the building and slapped his face with the palm of his hand. “Mickey, I know you’re scared of hospitals. But you already spent the whole night here!” The hedgehog started walking home, he wasn’t in a hurry to get there and take care of those 2 big babies.", "pools_count": 0, "title": "The Halloween plan went wrong.", "deleted": "f", "public": "t", "mimetype": "text/plain", "pagecount": "1", "rating_id": "1", "rating_name": "Mature", "ratings": [ { "content_tag_id": "2", "name": "Nudity", "description": "Nonsexual nudity exposing breasts or genitals (must not show arousal)", "rating_id": "1" } ], "submission_type_id": "12", "type_name": "Writing - Document", "guest_block": "t", "friends_only": "f", "comments_count": "0", "views": "82" }