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What with Keenie, Collin and Cleetus becoming stuck on earth and embracing sin.
But it turns out that an angel is not truly fallen until they do something really, terribly, bad...

Art by GK", "writing": "It was late at night, foggy and cold, when the fallen angel trio rolled up to an old and rusted motel. Their journey around the country in search of salvation had been long and fruitless but with every stop had come a clue, with every stop had come a bit more hope, and now they were sure that they would see heaven again soon. \n\nIn preparation of their return to eden they had shed their sins, from cutting out drugs and drink, to preying daily again. Cleetus and Keenie found this easy to do and their once damaged halos had already started to quickly regenerate however it was Collin who was struggling. His halo was by far the most damaged out of the three and he did not sit with the others up front. He preferred the darkness at the back of the van where he could grind his teeth impatiently and fondle himself inappropriately in some small form of privacy. \n\nOnce the van had been parked they all fluttered out. Keenie still wore her ragged and revealing dress but it had been cleaned recently and she was meaning to buy something more modest when tomorrow came. Cleetus meanwhile looked the most presentable, with overalls and an ironed shirt. You would have never guessed that in the months prior he was getting into fights and shaking people down for money. Collin however was just as deceptive as always. He wore the same outfit that he had fallen to earth in, and it was indeed clean looking, but once you got close and started to pay attention you could see the fraying of fibres and the smell of something wrong. \n\nCletus took care of checking in and paying as he looked the closest to a human. All he had to do was hide his wings and walk on the ground like a normal person and everybody thought him a dwarf, or a child.\n\nTheir room was surprisingly clean and the single, double wide bed was big enough for the three small cherubs to sleep comfortably without even having to rub shoulders. Keenie got comfortable right away by fluttering into the bathroom for a shower. Collin meanwhile sat himself down just outside, no hint to subtly that he was listening to her every move and hoping she would invite him in. Cleetus meanwhile checked himself over once more and brushed his hair before departing. He would be gone all night but if the rumours were true then he would return with a way back into heaven. \n\nAs soon as he had left the room grew quiet. The ticking of a clock. The muffed sound of water raining down in the room over. And the ragged breathing of Collin pressing his ear against the wall. Minutes would pass without change, until suddenly the water turned off. Collin scrambled away as soon as he heard and laid himself down on the bed. \n\nHe waited and then watched as Keenie fluttered out of the bathroom with a long towel covering her down to the ankles. Collin drank it all in, the bare shoulders and slender hooves, the wet hair and healthy glow to her cheeks. 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Both the ones that were lit up under flicking bulbs, and the ones that were hidden around the corner. From them he gathered some of Keenie’s favourite little drinks. Cranberry punch, orange and lime, anything tropical and sweet. Along with them he went to the more hidden machines and purchased the strongest alcohol they had. Tiny little bottles of vodka that burned like gasoline. With everything in hand he cracked open the bottles, poured out some of the sweet liquid, and then filled them back up with the vodka. \n\nIn his mind, Collin did not believe he was doing anything wrong. Keenie had drunk booze before, he thought, she needed to unwind and she would surely relax and have fun, he told himself. There was not a single ounce of doubt that he was doing the right thing. \n\nAfter discarding the vodka bottles and finding some snacks he returned to the room as quick as his wings could carry him. He entered the room with a smile once again and after placing the bottles down on a small table in the centre of the room, he fluttered over to the mini-bar to get some more stuff. Namely, a large bowl that they normally keep packets of snacks in, a bottle of the strongest red wine they had on offer, and some cheese. Which was a lucky find. \n\nBy now Keenie had been growing quite curious. She watched as he emptied the bowl out and gave it a wipe before cracking open all the fruit drinks and pouring them together into the bowl. He then popped the wine and filled two glasses half full with it. Lastly on a large plate he put out the biscuits and cheese and little snack items. Collin even went the extra mile by cleaning up all the empty bottles and wrappers and, for now, tossing them onto the bed so it would be easier to clean up later. True to his world, he had managed to get an entire selection of party themed food and drink together in minutes. \n\nHe then told her that the fruit punch was so they had something more ‘modest’ to drink between sips of wine. Keenie loved the idea. Red wine was a holy concept after all, used in churches all over the world, and the consideration of having something non-alcoholic to cut it with was sweet. At least that is what she thought. \nCollin had the biggest smile as she took two large sips of wine and then a mouthful of the fruit punch. The sweet burning of the vodka was masked by the sips of strong wine and the mixed flavours of the punch. Keenie took another two sips and a mouthful of punch before reaching for the snacks. Biscuits, granola, cheese, a lot of dry and thirsty options that would surely make her reach for even more juice to wet herself with. \n\nCollin felt proud about himself, a deep sense of pride in helping his friend relax and unwind after such a long and stressful van ride. He watched her intently, while sipping his own wine and fruit juice much more slowly. It would not be long before her head would spin. Not long after that she would take a nap. And then he could pour the juice down her throat and have her anyway he wanted. She was such a heavy sleeper after all, even more so when she was drunk. All those nights alone with her in the van had taught him that much, and so much more. Like how she would not wake up even when her pretty hooves are tucked behind her halo.\n\nHis plans however derailed quickly as Keenie noticed that she was getting tipsy way too quickly for a few sips of wine. Collin tried to come up with an excuse, blaming her new found sobriety as having shed her resistances to the substance but she was less than convinced. \n\nAs Keenie pushed the wine away and slowed down with the drinking, Collin’s sweat turned cold. He had been so patient with his cravings and desires but they had been growing stronger by the minute. In that desperation began to press the attack, by putting on his sweetest face and distracting Keenie with talk of how much fun the road trip had been. She responded well but as she put down her glass of fruit punch and turned her eyes away, Collin’s desperation grew. \n\nWith no other choice coming to mind, Collin moved forward and suddenly kissed Keenie. It was surprising to her but she did not push him away and so he continued to kiss her. Collin thought that she had to be at least tipsy by now, and quite relaxed. Breaking the kiss he brought up the idea of them spending one last night together, as they would be unable to enjoy such things when they return to heaven. The idea was innocent enough and the kiss was almost romantic but Keenie refused. She simply was not in the mood for it. \n\nAll at once Collin’s desperation turned to anger. He called back that whenever she was in the mood he would give it to her, so why can she not do the same. This was their one last chance to do anything together after all. But still Keenie refused. She did not like how he had been acting for a while and did not want to feed into, what she thought, was a small obsession. \n\nKeenie got up and fluttered into the air. She told him that she was going to go for a walk and that he should maybe do the same but as she turned her head towards the door, Collin grabbed her wrist. He begged her to stay, that he would take anything she could offer. Even if it was just a taste of her or her smell. He was frantic, all wide eyes and sweating feathers. And of course Keenie refused. \n\nAs she tried to pull away from him, he latched on tighter. Collin refused to let her slip away, not when he was so close to getting a piece of her. But as he begged and tried to make offers, Keenie only got less and less interested in being around him at all. As they argued they began to spin around in the air, wings a flutter and feathers scattering. Keenie would pull harder and harder and Collin would grab her more and more until they began to lose control and the spin turned into a tumble. \n\nEventually Keenie broke free from his grasp and while Collin went spinning onto the sofa, Keenie went flying backwards onto the bed. A loud clack sounded out as she landed and just like that it all went quiet. Collin sat panting heavily, his head dizzy, and his erection throbbing. He had no idea what just happened but his interest in Keenie had not reduced the slightest. With a flap of his wings he picked himself up. With a flutter he went over to the bed. And there he found her lying face down with blood staining the blankets. \n\nHe realised that as she had landed, her head had hit the glass wine bottle that he tossed away before. Collin was unsure if she was even breathing. Sure, an angel was tough. Their Purity was like a shield that protected them against much, even dirt and discomfort, but if she was bleeding then it must have been a hard hit. Collin however, did not care. He swept the garbage away and headed straight to Keenie. \n\nCollin went straight for her tail and pulled her over to the middle of the bed. He then went under her dress and pulled her panties away. His hands shook, his breath was hot and there was drool running down his chin but under it all was a calm focus. In an instant he threw her panties away. In moments he was on top of her. And within some seconds more he had claimed what he wanted. The second that he felt her angelic heat wrap around him he came but he did not stop moving for a second. One release was nothing, he desired more, and more, hours of it. Days. The rest of his extremely long life would not even be enough. \n\nAs the minutes ticked by there was nothing else in the universe that mattered. He had gotten what he wanted. And he thanked the Father above for the fact that Keenie, while fallen, was still an angel. It meant that her Purity was keeping her body hot, wet, and comfortable to mate with even without a single drop of arousal. It was the nature of things, that all things made in heaven are perfect and could do things mortals could only dream of. Not to mention, Collin loved that his own Purity would keep him hard and energetic for as long as he damn well wanted. It all felt so right, so proper. Like he had been chosen to do this, that the universe conspired to allow him to get everything he wanted. And as he bit into her ear, forced her bleeding head into the bed, and used her body, the last of his halo dissolved. \n\nThe Father was merciful and heaven can forgive many, many things. The way he had treated Keenie in the past, the many times he had used her while she was unconscious, the violence towards her, all these sins could be removed in time. What could not be forgiven was that deep down, Collin truly did not see Keenie as anything more than a piece of meat right at that moment. He had led a friend to slaughter, and was holding the knife with a smile. It was right then, as his halo vanished, that he became Fallen. \n\nA Fallen angel is a rare concept, so much so that there are many misconceptions about how they work. For one, an angel that is kicked out of heaven is only counted as Tarnished. Once they had become Tarnished, every sin that they did would break and damage the halo but as long as even one tiny little speck of it remained, they were allowed to come back to heaven. It was truely merciful as even years of alcohol, greed, rough sex and lying could not dissolve a halo completely. No, to truly remove the halo, to truly fall you needed to go far worse than mortal sin. You needed to become demonic.\n\nCollin was too lost in his sinful pleasures to notice the changes. His body grew bigger and stronger. His fur changed colour as horns sprouted from his head. All these physical changes ached but they also felt good, like a very satisfying stretch after being constrained for so very long. His bigger frame and stronger form also meant that Keenie only felt even better. And although he had lost the angelic Purity, he had gained the Fallen Angels Depravity. A unique blessing, or curse, based on the sin that caused him to turn. The exact effect of such a thing depended on what sins caused it to manifest but in that moment, it was clearly lust more than pride that won the spot. \n\nCollin put everything into his enjoyment of Keenie. And it was only the knocking on the door and angry shouting of Cleetus that he realised that he had been violating her the entire night without pause.\n\nKeenie was still alive. And when she did wake up again she found Collin chained up and bolted to the wall, while an angry Cleetus stood with his golden crossbow in hand and several claw marks down his face. She was confused and her head hurt something bad but as she learned what Collin had done she did not react with anger. It was pity instead that filled her heart. Cleetus did not understand why but she blamed herself for the actions of her now Fallen friend. That, if she had just let him have one more ride with her then maybe he would have been fine and they could have all gone to heaven again. \n\nCollin was quick to agree with her of course, he pressed onto her guilt and mocked the fact that her selfish choices meant he could never go back with them. He even told them to get going and return to heaven without him, that was all they cared about after all. Collin did mean these words but it was Keenie’s reply that surprised him. She did not want to leave. Keenie truly felt guilty about this whole situation and the very idea of abandoning her friend on top was just too much.\n\nMaybe it was the long night draining some of his seemingly endless lust, maybe it was the centuries of friendship they all shared but Collin felt a twinge in his soul. He was not sure if it was regret, respect or love but it only lasted a moment.\n\nIt was decided. Keenie would stay on earth, to help guide Collin back to the righteous path. Cleetus did not like the idea of it of course but with him gaining a way to contact heaven last night, they could return at any time if Collin proved too much to handle. Cleetus did not show it as well but he did harbour some regrets too. He was their leader and he had to shoulder at least some responsibility for not keeping all of this in check.\n\nWith Collin now acting calmly again, they let him out of the chains. He spoke with a mocking tone half the time but did thank them all the same. Surprisingly, the air between them did not hold much awkwardness and as they got breakfast together and started to plan out a route it even felt like they were working together well. Up until Collin started to make advances towards Keenie again. Cleetus was just about ready to get the chains but Keenie accepted his advances. It surprised Collin for sure and Cleetus even more so but she explained that the last time she did not give him a few minutes of fun… Things went badly. Her Purity did mean that any sex between them would be comfortable and pleasurable, even without arousal, so she had made up her mind in letting him relive himself when he needed her. The rule of course was that Keenie got to decide for how long he could play and where they would go. \n\nCollin could not accept fast enough and he even promised to be on his best behaviour if she could truly keep such a deal going. It seemed almost reasonable and the effect of calming Collin was instantly noticeable but Cleetus did not trust it. \n\nSomething about this new Collin felt… Different somehow.\nOnly time would tell what those differences were. ", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "It was late at night, foggy and cold, when the fallen angel trio rolled up to an old and rusted motel. Their journey around the country in search of salvation had been long and fruitless but with every stop had come a clue, with every stop had come a bit more hope, and now they were sure that they would see heaven again soon.

In preparation of their return to eden they had shed their sins, from cutting out drugs and drink, to preying daily again. Cleetus and Keenie found this easy to do and their once damaged halos had already started to quickly regenerate however it was Collin who was struggling. His halo was by far the most damaged out of the three and he did not sit with the others up front. He preferred the darkness at the back of the van where he could grind his teeth impatiently and fondle himself inappropriately in some small form of privacy.

Once the van had been parked they all fluttered out. Keenie still wore her ragged and revealing dress but it had been cleaned recently and she was meaning to buy something more modest when tomorrow came. Cleetus meanwhile looked the most presentable, with overalls and an ironed shirt. You would have never guessed that in the months prior he was getting into fights and shaking people down for money. Collin however was just as deceptive as always. He wore the same outfit that he had fallen to earth in, and it was indeed clean looking, but once you got close and started to pay attention you could see the fraying of fibres and the smell of something wrong.

Cletus took care of checking in and paying as he looked the closest to a human. All he had to do was hide his wings and walk on the ground like a normal person and everybody thought him a dwarf, or a child.

Their room was surprisingly clean and the single, double wide bed was big enough for the three small cherubs to sleep comfortably without even having to rub shoulders. Keenie got comfortable right away by fluttering into the bathroom for a shower. Collin meanwhile sat himself down just outside, no hint to subtly that he was listening to her every move and hoping she would invite him in. Cleetus meanwhile checked himself over once more and brushed his hair before departing. He would be gone all night but if the rumours were true then he would return with a way back into heaven.

As soon as he had left the room grew quiet. The ticking of a clock. The muffed sound of water raining down in the room over. And the ragged breathing of Collin pressing his ear against the wall. Minutes would pass without change, until suddenly the water turned off. Collin scrambled away as soon as he heard and laid himself down on the bed.

He waited and then watched as Keenie fluttered out of the bathroom with a long towel covering her down to the ankles. Collin drank it all in, the bare shoulders and slender hooves, the wet hair and healthy glow to her cheeks. Such details only lasted a moment as her Purity would very quickly evaporate the water and correct her hair back into place. As was the nature of angels, even a tarnished one, they were always clean and they were always beautiful.

Keenie grabbed the book she had been reading the past few days and took to the sofa on the other end of the room. She wanted to relax, to let the heat of the shower and quiet ambiance of the room soak into her. But this proved to be futile as she could feel Collin staring at her quite intensely. She glanced at him and turned up an eyebrow questioningly but she already knew the answer. He wanted sex. That was the only thing he seemed to care about nowadays and while she would not mind, it had started to become more of a chore.
She turned her eyes away. Opening up her book. And tried to focus on herself for the time being. But sure enough as soon as she had stopped giving Collin more than a minute of attention he became restless. The young angel fluttered over to her and sat himself down on the other end of the sofa before leaning in closer and told her up front what his desires were.

He used her own words while he did so. Phrases that were common to her like, “fooling around,” or “passing the time,” as well as, “Helping him unwind.” She rolled her eyes at him in reply and politely turned him down. It was not without reason. They were going back to heaven soon, and as such an angel needed to cut out intoxications and addictions. Collin knew this but he whined anyway, claiming that they had not done anything in days. In reply, Keenie reminded him that when they were back in heaven they would have to wait far, far, longer. She then turned her attention back to her book.

Collin turned sour. And while Keenie sensed something off, when she turned her eyes back to him she only found him smiling. He was not shaking, or grinding his teeth, or twitching either. He looked calm again. And then he said that he agreed with her. Collin apologised for being so forward and explained that he only wanted to spend their remaining time together having fun like they used to. Keenie in turn softened a little and apologised in turn for being so cold. She was worried that returning to heaven might require more than modest living and clean diets.
Collin let out a meek little laugh and then sprung up with a flutter of his wings. He excitedly brought forth the idea that they should have a celebration, to remember all the good times on earth, and the eventual returning to heaven alike. A modest party, with fruit juice and prayer at midnight.

Keenie was taken back from his change in attitude. And she let her guard down because of it.

She told him that it was an excellent idea but also that getting such items together at this late hour, without being seen by humans, was going to prove difficult. Collin scoffed and told her to wait right where she was as he figured it all out for her. With that, he fluttered right out of the door. Keenie indeed stayed where she sat and began to read her book again. Party or not, having Collin stop sniffing around her for a while was always a blessing.

Collin meanwhile was not as cheerful as he once appeared. He fluttered along the dark corridors and balconies of the motel with a seething, scheming, mind. For months it had always been the same. Whenever they found a hotel or motel to rest at, Keenie would stay in the roomie and get drunk while Cleetus would go out to get money. It was Collin who would explore around them, figure out how to deal with room service, and find the best ways to make what little supplies they had go as far as possible. With such prior knowledge grasped like a keen blade he made his way efficiently down to the vending machines. Both the ones that were lit up under flicking bulbs, and the ones that were hidden around the corner. From them he gathered some of Keenie’s favourite little drinks. Cranberry punch, orange and lime, anything tropical and sweet. Along with them he went to the more hidden machines and purchased the strongest alcohol they had. Tiny little bottles of vodka that burned like gasoline. With everything in hand he cracked open the bottles, poured out some of the sweet liquid, and then filled them back up with the vodka.

In his mind, Collin did not believe he was doing anything wrong. Keenie had drunk booze before, he thought, she needed to unwind and she would surely relax and have fun, he told himself. There was not a single ounce of doubt that he was doing the right thing.

After discarding the vodka bottles and finding some snacks he returned to the room as quick as his wings could carry him. He entered the room with a smile once again and after placing the bottles down on a small table in the centre of the room, he fluttered over to the mini-bar to get some more stuff. Namely, a large bowl that they normally keep packets of snacks in, a bottle of the strongest red wine they had on offer, and some cheese. Which was a lucky find.

By now Keenie had been growing quite curious. She watched as he emptied the bowl out and gave it a wipe before cracking open all the fruit drinks and pouring them together into the bowl. He then popped the wine and filled two glasses half full with it. Lastly on a large plate he put out the biscuits and cheese and little snack items. Collin even went the extra mile by cleaning up all the empty bottles and wrappers and, for now, tossing them onto the bed so it would be easier to clean up later. True to his world, he had managed to get an entire selection of party themed food and drink together in minutes.

He then told her that the fruit punch was so they had something more ‘modest’ to drink between sips of wine. Keenie loved the idea. Red wine was a holy concept after all, used in churches all over the world, and the consideration of having something non-alcoholic to cut it with was sweet. At least that is what she thought.
Collin had the biggest smile as she took two large sips of wine and then a mouthful of the fruit punch. The sweet burning of the vodka was masked by the sips of strong wine and the mixed flavours of the punch. Keenie took another two sips and a mouthful of punch before reaching for the snacks. Biscuits, granola, cheese, a lot of dry and thirsty options that would surely make her reach for even more juice to wet herself with.

Collin felt proud about himself, a deep sense of pride in helping his friend relax and unwind after such a long and stressful van ride. He watched her intently, while sipping his own wine and fruit juice much more slowly. It would not be long before her head would spin. Not long after that she would take a nap. And then he could pour the juice down her throat and have her anyway he wanted. She was such a heavy sleeper after all, even more so when she was drunk. All those nights alone with her in the van had taught him that much, and so much more. Like how she would not wake up even when her pretty hooves are tucked behind her halo.

His plans however derailed quickly as Keenie noticed that she was getting tipsy way too quickly for a few sips of wine. Collin tried to come up with an excuse, blaming her new found sobriety as having shed her resistances to the substance but she was less than convinced.

As Keenie pushed the wine away and slowed down with the drinking, Collin’s sweat turned cold. He had been so patient with his cravings and desires but they had been growing stronger by the minute. In that desperation began to press the attack, by putting on his sweetest face and distracting Keenie with talk of how much fun the road trip had been. She responded well but as she put down her glass of fruit punch and turned her eyes away, Collin’s desperation grew.

With no other choice coming to mind, Collin moved forward and suddenly kissed Keenie. It was surprising to her but she did not push him away and so he continued to kiss her. Collin thought that she had to be at least tipsy by now, and quite relaxed. Breaking the kiss he brought up the idea of them spending one last night together, as they would be unable to enjoy such things when they return to heaven. The idea was innocent enough and the kiss was almost romantic but Keenie refused. She simply was not in the mood for it.

All at once Collin’s desperation turned to anger. He called back that whenever she was in the mood he would give it to her, so why can she not do the same. This was their one last chance to do anything together after all. But still Keenie refused. She did not like how he had been acting for a while and did not want to feed into, what she thought, was a small obsession.

Keenie got up and fluttered into the air. She told him that she was going to go for a walk and that he should maybe do the same but as she turned her head towards the door, Collin grabbed her wrist. He begged her to stay, that he would take anything she could offer. Even if it was just a taste of her or her smell. He was frantic, all wide eyes and sweating feathers. And of course Keenie refused.

As she tried to pull away from him, he latched on tighter. Collin refused to let her slip away, not when he was so close to getting a piece of her. But as he begged and tried to make offers, Keenie only got less and less interested in being around him at all. As they argued they began to spin around in the air, wings a flutter and feathers scattering. Keenie would pull harder and harder and Collin would grab her more and more until they began to lose control and the spin turned into a tumble.

Eventually Keenie broke free from his grasp and while Collin went spinning onto the sofa, Keenie went flying backwards onto the bed. A loud clack sounded out as she landed and just like that it all went quiet. Collin sat panting heavily, his head dizzy, and his erection throbbing. He had no idea what just happened but his interest in Keenie had not reduced the slightest. With a flap of his wings he picked himself up. With a flutter he went over to the bed. And there he found her lying face down with blood staining the blankets.

He realised that as she had landed, her head had hit the glass wine bottle that he tossed away before. Collin was unsure if she was even breathing. Sure, an angel was tough. Their Purity was like a shield that protected them against much, even dirt and discomfort, but if she was bleeding then it must have been a hard hit. Collin however, did not care. He swept the garbage away and headed straight to Keenie.

Collin went straight for her tail and pulled her over to the middle of the bed. He then went under her dress and pulled her panties away. His hands shook, his breath was hot and there was drool running down his chin but under it all was a calm focus. In an instant he threw her panties away. In moments he was on top of her. And within some seconds more he had claimed what he wanted. The second that he felt her angelic heat wrap around him he came but he did not stop moving for a second. One release was nothing, he desired more, and more, hours of it. Days. The rest of his extremely long life would not even be enough.

As the minutes ticked by there was nothing else in the universe that mattered. He had gotten what he wanted. And he thanked the Father above for the fact that Keenie, while fallen, was still an angel. It meant that her Purity was keeping her body hot, wet, and comfortable to mate with even without a single drop of arousal. It was the nature of things, that all things made in heaven are perfect and could do things mortals could only dream of. Not to mention, Collin loved that his own Purity would keep him hard and energetic for as long as he damn well wanted. It all felt so right, so proper. Like he had been chosen to do this, that the universe conspired to allow him to get everything he wanted. And as he bit into her ear, forced her bleeding head into the bed, and used her body, the last of his halo dissolved.

The Father was merciful and heaven can forgive many, many things. The way he had treated Keenie in the past, the many times he had used her while she was unconscious, the violence towards her, all these sins could be removed in time. What could not be forgiven was that deep down, Collin truly did not see Keenie as anything more than a piece of meat right at that moment. He had led a friend to slaughter, and was holding the knife with a smile. It was right then, as his halo vanished, that he became Fallen.

A Fallen angel is a rare concept, so much so that there are many misconceptions about how they work. For one, an angel that is kicked out of heaven is only counted as Tarnished. Once they had become Tarnished, every sin that they did would break and damage the halo but as long as even one tiny little speck of it remained, they were allowed to come back to heaven. It was truely merciful as even years of alcohol, greed, rough sex and lying could not dissolve a halo completely. No, to truly remove the halo, to truly fall you needed to go far worse than mortal sin. You needed to become demonic.

Collin was too lost in his sinful pleasures to notice the changes. His body grew bigger and stronger. His fur changed colour as horns sprouted from his head. All these physical changes ached but they also felt good, like a very satisfying stretch after being constrained for so very long. His bigger frame and stronger form also meant that Keenie only felt even better. And although he had lost the angelic Purity, he had gained the Fallen Angels Depravity. A unique blessing, or curse, based on the sin that caused him to turn. The exact effect of such a thing depended on what sins caused it to manifest but in that moment, it was clearly lust more than pride that won the spot.

Collin put everything into his enjoyment of Keenie. And it was only the knocking on the door and angry shouting of Cleetus that he realised that he had been violating her the entire night without pause.

Keenie was still alive. And when she did wake up again she found Collin chained up and bolted to the wall, while an angry Cleetus stood with his golden crossbow in hand and several claw marks down his face. She was confused and her head hurt something bad but as she learned what Collin had done she did not react with anger. It was pity instead that filled her heart. Cleetus did not understand why but she blamed herself for the actions of her now Fallen friend. That, if she had just let him have one more ride with her then maybe he would have been fine and they could have all gone to heaven again.

Collin was quick to agree with her of course, he pressed onto her guilt and mocked the fact that her selfish choices meant he could never go back with them. He even told them to get going and return to heaven without him, that was all they cared about after all. Collin did mean these words but it was Keenie’s reply that surprised him. She did not want to leave. Keenie truly felt guilty about this whole situation and the very idea of abandoning her friend on top was just too much.

Maybe it was the long night draining some of his seemingly endless lust, maybe it was the centuries of friendship they all shared but Collin felt a twinge in his soul. He was not sure if it was regret, respect or love but it only lasted a moment.

It was decided. Keenie would stay on earth, to help guide Collin back to the righteous path. Cleetus did not like the idea of it of course but with him gaining a way to contact heaven last night, they could return at any time if Collin proved too much to handle. Cleetus did not show it as well but he did harbour some regrets too. He was their leader and he had to shoulder at least some responsibility for not keeping all of this in check.

With Collin now acting calmly again, they let him out of the chains. He spoke with a mocking tone half the time but did thank them all the same. Surprisingly, the air between them did not hold much awkwardness and as they got breakfast together and started to plan out a route it even felt like they were working together well. Up until Collin started to make advances towards Keenie again. Cleetus was just about ready to get the chains but Keenie accepted his advances. It surprised Collin for sure and Cleetus even more so but she explained that the last time she did not give him a few minutes of fun… Things went badly. Her Purity did mean that any sex between them would be comfortable and pleasurable, even without arousal, so she had made up her mind in letting him relive himself when he needed her. The rule of course was that Keenie got to decide for how long he could play and where they would go.

Collin could not accept fast enough and he even promised to be on his best behaviour if she could truly keep such a deal going. It seemed almost reasonable and the effect of calming Collin was instantly noticeable but Cleetus did not trust it.

Something about this new Collin felt… Different somehow.
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