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  đŸ’–đŸ’–", "writing": "[t][b]The Tickle Monster![/b]đŸ˜±[/t]\n\nEvelyn sighed, another horrible day of school over and time to go home. She made her way to the exit, keeping her head down, trying to look small and unimportant, not wanting to attract any attention, she just wanted to get out and be alone. But fate that day was not so obliging as she unexpectedly collided with somebody walking the other way. \n\nBoth girls fell backwards on their bottoms, each losing their clutched books and other possessions. There was a short chorus of laughter, as the few people still in the halls laughed, but otherwise took little notice. \n\n“I-I’m sorry, pardon me
.” “It was my fault
.” “Not looking where I was going
” “So stupid of me
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. Your lines aren’t that bad
. Is that a finch?” Evelyn in turn was shocked herself. She did not know this girl
 did not want to know, but she could not stop talking. \n\nBefore either of the girls realized it, they were outside at the sidewalk intersection. When did they get outside, neither could say? But Triela didn’t want them to go their separate ways. “I’m sorry, I never said my name. I’m TriEEEEP!” The Vixen shrieked as she slumped to her knees, tearing up and holding her bottom. \n\nUnnoticed by either of them, Triela’s twin sister had come up from behind and pulled her sister's tail. “Hey Tree, I’m late for baseball practice. Save me some cookies or Toby will eat them all. I’m Silvia, by the way, nice to meet you, but I have to run, bye!” She then dashed off. \n\nStartled as she was, Evelyn found herself helping the poor vixen up. “S-so your name is Tree? I’m Evelyn, but please call me Elly,” she flushed. \n\nTriela composed herself and said her name properly this time
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 just a bit, I did. Is Toby your brother? 
I guess you have to go home now
” Elly said not knowing why she was asking. \n\n“Yes, younger brother, but he won’t be home yet.” Then after a long pause she managed to say
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I mean I wanted to a-ask if you wanted to come to my place for c-cookies. But I understand if....iff you don't....” she whimpered. \n\nThis was truly turning out to be a day of first, as Evelyn later found herself in the other girl's home. The two of them were sitting on the floor and talking over cookies and milk. She found out that Triela not only liked drawing, but also long walks in the woods, swimming with her family and that she had not one but four other sisters, and a brother. She was just going to ask Triela what it was like living in such a large family when something caught her eye and she stiffened. \n\nShe thought she saw the tip of a tail over the couch. “Uhhh Tree,” she said in a small voice. Didn’t you say we were alone?” \n\nTriela had taken a big bite of cookie and hurried to swallow it and took a drink of milk. She sat the glass down and started to reply, “Yeah wh..” \n\n“RAWR!” \n\nThis boy suddenly jumped over the couch like some feral beast and tackled Triela. Elly heard her scream “NOOOOO” but blinked stunned and dumbfounded at the scene before her and Triela was laughing hysterically.\n\n“The Tickle Monster will get you my pretty. TickleTickleTickleTickle!” The boy cackled with mantic glee as Triela rolled around on the floor this way and that trying to get away.\n\n“HAHAHAHA EEEEE HAHAHASHATOP IT HAHAHA, NOOOOAHAHA TAOBYAH AHAH.”\n\nShe was laughing so hard, Elly could not make out a single word and this went on for a full minute before she managed to squeal,...”SSSSTTTOOOPPP AHAHAHA SSSTOOOPPP GONNA
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 are
you
 okay
eeep!”\n\nShe saw the boy turn to her with an evil glint in his eyes like some over the top anime villain. “Another victim for The Tickle Monster! BWAHAHAHAHA” \n\nEvelyn, petrified with fear of being tickled, barely had time to let out a squeal before Toby pounced on her and started tickling ferociously and without mercy. “TickleTickleTickleTickle!” \n\n“EEEE AHAHAHAAHANNOOOOO HAHAHAHAHA, CANTAHAHAHACAN’T BREATH HAHAHAHAA *GASP* AHAHAHAAH”!\n\nPoor Evelyn was laughing so hard and Triela was completely out of it, powerless to stop her little brother from his goal of ticking the girls senseless; however, it was all too much for Evelyn as she passed out taking Toby by surprise. \n\n“Hey
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Evelyn sighed, another horrible day of school over and time to go home. She made her way to the exit, keeping her head down, trying to look small and unimportant, not wanting to attract any attention, she just wanted to get out and be alone.  But fate that day was not so obliging as she unexpectedly collided with somebody walking the other way.

Both girls fell backwards on their bottoms, each losing their clutched books and other possessions. There was a short chorus of laughter, as the few people still in the halls laughed, but otherwise took little notice.

“I-I’m sorry, pardon me….” “It was my fault….”  “Not looking where I was going…” “So stupid of me…. *sob*”

And when both girls sobbed at the same time, they both realized at that moment they both sounded so stupid because they were both saying and doing the same things as each other. So funny was the realization that they both awkwardly chuckled for the briefest of moments and continued to pick up their things until they both reached for the same sketch book.

Looking at each other again, Triela said, “S-sorry, is this ours. I thought it was mine. They both glanced at the page that the book fell open to. “I guess this is yours. Your line work looks way better than mine.

“What am I doing,” Triela thought to herself, scared to find herself opening up to a stranger.

“T-thank you…. Then this must b-be yours…. Your lines aren’t that bad…. Is that a finch?”  Evelyn in turn was shocked herself. She did not know this girl… did not want to know, but she could not stop talking.

Before either of the girls realized it, they were outside at the sidewalk intersection. When did they get outside, neither could say? But Triela didn’t want them to go their separate ways. “I’m sorry, I never said my name. I’m TriEEEEP!”   The Vixen shrieked as she slumped to her knees, tearing up and holding her bottom.

Unnoticed by either of them, Triela’s twin sister had come up from behind and pulled her sister's tail. “Hey Tree, I’m late for baseball practice. Save me some cookies or Toby will eat them all. I’m Silvia, by the way, nice to meet you, but I have to run, bye!” She then dashed off.

Startled as she was, Evelyn found herself helping the poor vixen up. “S-so your name is Tree? I’m Evelyn, but please call me Elly,” she flushed.

Triela composed herself and said her name properly this time… “t-that was my twin sister, Silvia…. But I suppose you got that.”

“Yeah… just a bit, I did. Is Toby your brother? …I guess you have to go home now…” Elly said not knowing why she was asking.

“Yes, younger brother, but he won’t be home yet.” Then after a long pause she managed to say…”uhmmm would you like some cookies?  …I mean I wanted to a-ask if you wanted to come to my place for c-cookies. But I understand if....iff you don't....” she whimpered.

This was truly turning out to be a day of first, as Evelyn later found herself in the other girl's home. The two of them were sitting on the floor and talking over cookies and milk. She found out that Triela not only liked drawing, but also long walks in the woods, swimming with her family and that she had not one but four other sisters, and a brother. She was just going to ask Triela what it was like living in such a large family when something caught her eye and she stiffened.

She thought she saw the tip of a tail over the couch. “Uhhh Tree,” she said in a small voice. Didn’t you say we were alone?”

Triela had taken a big bite of cookie and hurried to swallow it and took a drink of milk. She sat the glass down and started to reply, “Yeah wh..”

“RAWR!”

This boy suddenly jumped over the couch like some feral beast and tackled Triela. Elly heard her scream “NOOOOO” but blinked stunned and dumbfounded at the scene before her and Triela was laughing hysterically.

“The Tickle Monster will get you my pretty. TickleTickleTickleTickle!” The boy cackled with mantic glee as Triela rolled around on the floor this way and that trying to get away.

“HAHAHAHA EEEEE HAHAHASHATOP IT HAHAHA, NOOOOAHAHA TAOBYAH AHAH.”

She was laughing so hard, Elly could not make out a single word and this went on for a full minute before she managed to squeal,...”SSSSTTTOOOPPP AHAHAHA SSSTOOOPPP GONNA… GONNA  PEE.”

Toby knew better than to take it that far and let go over his older sister with a satisfied look on his face as a disheveled Triela laid there for a moment gasping for breath before sitting up and looking for all the world like a girl who just had her soul sucked out of her.

Finding her voice, Elly managed, “Ughhh… are…you… okay…eeep!”

She saw the boy turn to her with an evil glint in his eyes like some over the top anime villain. “Another victim for The Tickle Monster! BWAHAHAHAHA”

Evelyn, petrified with fear of being tickled, barely had time to let out a squeal before Toby pounced on her and started tickling ferociously and without mercy.  “TickleTickleTickleTickle!”

“EEEE AHAHAHAAHANNOOOOO HAHAHAHAHA, CANTAHAHAHACAN’T BREATH HAHAHAHAA *GASP* AHAHAHAAH”!

Poor Evelyn was laughing so hard and Triela was completely out of it, powerless to stop her little brother from his goal of ticking the girls senseless; however, it was all too much for Evelyn as she passed out taking Toby by surprise.

“Hey… are you okay? I’ve stopped, see, I’ve stopped” he says as he tries shaking her wake panicking. “OH MY GOD I KILLED HER" then suddenly WHACK!"  Toby was sees stars and holding his head as he was pulled back by the scruff of his neck

"What have I told you about bothering your sisters like that when they have company over, young man." Fortunately for the girls, Henrietta came home early.

A moment later, Evelyn opened her eyes. A recovered Triela was dabbing her head with a wet washcloth, and she could hear an angry person nearby. She had come around just in time to see a beautiful white furred vixen scolding Toby. It was obvious this had to be their mother from the way Toby was cowering. “Mom! She’s awake,'' Triela announced, confirming it.

Henrietta turned her attention to Evelyn and stooped down and hugged the girl tightly.  "Oh, you poor dear, did my inconsiderate son frighten you. That’s just unacceptable,” then gently kiss her on the forehead. To Henrietta’s dismay this was again too much for Evelyn, having just woken the young girl blushed and passed out again.

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