I've been wanting to upload stories I've written for quite some time, but I don't know if my writing skill is any good (as I don't read stories... ^_^;). So I made a short story for this commission as a sort of trial, to get an idea from people how well I rank. Heavy criticism is welcome!
Sorry if some of the content isn't to your preference. I'm in a bit of a pussy grabbing mood right now. XP
Oni had been a gigolo for a couple months now to help pay the hefty rent. He was enjoying it, and from the moans of his clients, so were they! But then, the armature sex worker received an unusual proposal from one of his clients; to be a private stripper at a hen do. Oni leap at the chance, and the money.
However, afterwards he started to doubt himself. He had the package, but his body was unremarkable; he was slim, but no definition (besides his pecs!) He knew the better he looked, the more tips would be tucked into what little cloths he'd be wearing, so he decided to look for a pick-me-up.
In his browsing he found just what he was looking for: a 'protein' soft drink. 'Unleash the inner man! Promotes quick development of the male physique!' The tag line read. There were a few disclaimers and warning that followed, but Oni wasn't concerned about the small print.
The drinks quickly arrived in the post, just it time for the event. The kitsune wasted no time and took a big swig of the mysterious concoction. Surprised at the sweet taste, he continued to take more sips of the bubbly beverage. As he felt cool refreshment trickle down his throat, he felt another sensation tingling across his body. It felt like his whole body was being massaged, moulded into shape. Before his very eyes, his body began to change, his muscles extruding and taking shape. Within moments, the slim stomach was replaced with washboard abs, followed by a 0% fat athletic body. The fox knew his junk wouldn't be the only thing bulging tonight, with the amount of tips he'd receive now!
Oni continued to finish off the his moreish drink. He didn't realise the other changes that were happening. The lusty vulpine figured this wasn't going to be a 'no touching' party, and expected that 'dancing' would only be half the job. The thought of all the things he'd get up to with a harem of ladies around him excited the young fox; maybe he'd woo the bride-to-be and cause her to have seconds thoughts!
As he fantasised in his libido daydream, he could feel his shaft getting harder; what he didn't realise was it had been growing bigger too! When he finally snapped to, by the looming figure from his cock, he stood there in amazement. It really meant every part of the male body!
As he admired himself in the bathroom mirror, any doubts he had about the night had all but vanished beneath his mighty manhood. His only concern now was if the ladies would be able to take such a beast. However, with all the excitement of his new figure, and what was to come, he failed to notice that the tingling across his body hadn't stopped!
It was only when his large pecs grew even larger, obstructing the view of his throbbing cock, did he realise what was going on. Every muscle in his body began to bulge out more and more, his frame feeling heavier and stiffer as the weight of muscle piled on. His balls mimicked his body, swelling in size, reaching the floor as the continued to spread, lifting him off the floor of the narrow room. His large shaft followed suit, getting fatter as it grew in length with each pulse.
Eventually the tingling subsided, and so did his transformation. It was nothing but a relief that his flat had high ceilings. The adventurous kitsune enjoyed receiving his erotic body, and would have enjoyed getting even bigger! But any more growth, and he would have been greeted with an invoice for fixing the roof.
Only now did Oni decide to check the fine print, after everything had happened. 'Drink in moderation', 'Excessive amounts of testosterone can lead to advance stages of development.' Well, he was a horny beast! And he did drink the hole can. He couldn't help but wonder the results if he ordered the 'extra strong' instead of the 'mild' strength...
But that would be for another night!
The bathroom mirror was no longer doing him justice. He was ready to greet the ladies! As soon as he figured out how he was going move, and fit through the door...
However, afterwards he started to doubt himself. He had the package, but his body was unremarkable; he was slim, but no definition (besides his pecs!) He knew the better he looked, the more tips would be tucked into what little cloths he'd be wearing, so he decided to look for a pick-me-up.
In his browsing he found just what he was looking for: a 'protein' soft drink. 'Unleash the inner man! Promotes quick development of the male physique!' The tag line read. There were a few disclaimers and warning that followed, but Oni wasn't concerned about the small print.
The drinks quickly arrived in the post, just it time for the event. The kitsune wasted no time and took a big swig of the mysterious concoction. Surprised at the sweet taste, he continued to take more sips of the bubbly beverage. As he felt cool refreshment trickle down his throat, he felt another sensation tingling across his body. It felt like his whole body was being massaged, moulded into shape. Before his very eyes, his body began to change, his muscles extruding and taking shape. Within moments, the slim stomach was replaced with washboard abs, followed by a 0% fat athletic body. The fox knew his junk wouldn't be the only thing bulging tonight, with the amount of tips he'd receive now!
Oni continued to finish off the his moreish drink. He didn't realise the other changes that were happening. The lusty vulpine figured this wasn't going to be a 'no touching' party, and expected that 'dancing' would only be half the job. The thought of all the things he'd get up to with a harem of ladies around him excited the young fox; maybe he'd woo the bride-to-be and cause her to have seconds thoughts!
As he fantasised in his libido daydream, he could feel his shaft getting harder; what he didn't realise was it had been growing bigger too! When he finally snapped to, by the looming figure from his cock, he stood there in amazement. It really meant every part of the male body!
As he admired himself in the bathroom mirror, any doubts he had about the night had all but vanished beneath his mighty manhood. His only concern now was if the ladies would be able to take such a beast. However, with all the excitement of his new figure, and what was to come, he failed to notice that the tingling across his body hadn't stopped!
It was only when his large pecs grew even larger, obstructing the view of his throbbing cock, did he realise what was going on. Every muscle in his body began to bulge out more and more, his frame feeling heavier and stiffer as the weight of muscle piled on. His balls mimicked his body, swelling in size, reaching the floor as the continued to spread, lifting him off the floor of the narrow room. His large shaft followed suit, getting fatter as it grew in length with each pulse.
Eventually the tingling subsided, and so did his transformation. It was nothing but a relief that his flat had high ceilings. The adventurous kitsune enjoyed receiving his erotic body, and would have enjoyed getting even bigger! But any more growth, and he would have been greeted with an invoice for fixing the roof.
Only now did Oni decide to check the fine print, after everything had happened. 'Drink in moderation', 'Excessive amounts of testosterone can lead to advance stages of development.' Well, he was a horny beast! And he did drink the hole can. He couldn't help but wonder the results if he ordered the 'extra strong' instead of the 'mild' strength...
But that would be for another night!
The bathroom mirror was no longer doing him justice. He was ready to greet the ladies! As soon as he figured out how he was going move, and fit through the door...
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