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LIGHTENINGBURST© is 951237", "writing": "In a local pub there was a poker game going on in the back nobody complain much, Just one Odie. “So let me get this straight\" sad Nermal looking at Odie “You’re in love\". “Ya\" Odie replied “I thought it was impossible to, until I met her. Will not literally met her but I saw her\".\" Will\" said Arlene” don't be shy tell us all about it\" “Ya it has been way better than the time you tripped on your own tail\". “Garfield\"! “I was only joking with him Arlene\". “Sorry about Garfield tonight guys he's just a little angry lately. So either way can you tell us the story Odie\". \"Oh yeah\" said Odie” it all began yesterday\". “I was walking down the sidewalk when I saw the most gorgeous thing in my life. It was a beautiful poodle with fur white as snow. First I was a little shy when I saw her. I first said hey what your name is after coming up to her and saying a nice hello. She told me her name was Loual. What a nice named I sad. I told her my name is Odie. She giggled a little bit when I said that. She said to me that she was new to the neighborhood. Didn't know anyone really. Then she told me she had a boyfriend one. Really brave dog was with the fire department. She then told me her boyfriend sadly passed away involved in a burning building. I said to her that really is sad. I hard to lose a loved one in your life I said to her. And I told her I had to leave. I said if you need anything just give me a call. When I left I gave her a little hug. And then I started to leave back home. A couple of days pass and we knew more and more about ourselves. She loved slow quiet nights and jazz perfect for me. I asked her if she seen one else. She gave me a choir know when she said she's having trouble making friends around here. I said maybe one is all you need. She agreed I wasn't ready to tell her my love. I thought it was easier to stay friends my opinion. Sadly I was very very wrong that night. The next day I was going to confess my love. I had some roses in my hand I took from Mrs. Feeney's I knew she was going to blame it on Garfield anyways\". “Whit\" sad Garfield “That was you. Jon was blaming me for hours about that! Thanks a lot Odie\". “Anyways\" sad Odie” I was heading to her house, I was all excited to tell her my true love this and that her and I should be happy together. I was in front of her house when I saw something that made my heart sink. She was talking to another dog. And I don't mean just one of those little dogs, this one was huge. This guy had mussels. I'm guessing he was originally 20 pounds but with those muscles I'm guessing he was 75. I can't up to him and say excuse me but you’re talking to my girl. He then turned around and stared at me. He said to me I'm sorry bud. But I'm talking to her so wait in line. I then sad to him don't be so rude. He then turnaround again and stick the middle finger right up in my face. Then he said, until you have a body as strong as mine you're not allowed to talk to her. Then he grabs me with one hand while flexing his other arm showing off the Lola. Then he towed me over the fence laughing. I feel so humiliated. She was my love and I was just tossed aside bison over bound muscular beagle. So here we are now I'm talking about my problems in the middle of our game\". They were silent after they heard Odie's story. Then one by one they went back to their game. The game is finished and everybody left Odie was about leave the table head to the bar to get him a drink. He was then grabbed on the arm by Garfield the only person besides Odie that stayed. “Odie\" sad Garfield well still holding his arm \" I need I tell you something important\" \" Will\" Sad Odie \" unless you're here to tell me you're the one who ate my food last night I'm not in the mood\" \" No it's not that I'll tell you when we get home okay I promise I tell you the secret and you will get your girl back. Trust me on this one I can make everything right\".\n\nThat night Garfield wasn't kidding. I went home with him; we went to the basement I asked my first why we were going down here. Then he turned on the light to reveal a case filled with bodybuilder trophies. I asked him what's with all the trophies, and then he told me the truth. “The thing is Odie I wasn't always fat. Bike in the 90s I was a serious bodybuilder. I want to use trophies in various tournaments around the world. I was named Mr. Universe when I when do you can be in the Mr. Universe competition in Paris. Yes sir I was one buff sexy cat, when I heard about your problems during our game I was actually sorry for you. I think it's not right for you to be treated like that even know why kick you. I always think that's wrong with me. So I decided to teach you my secrets so you can have what I used to, the body that can make a woman's heart melt\". First I was completely surprised that Garfield used bin a bodybuilder. When I fart in my head that it will be perfect. I can get a beautiful body and my love Loual back. I have nothing to lose. I need my body in shape anyways. Even know I was a skinny little pup. I still needed to train. So that night I agreed. Garfield was going to teach me his skills how he became a professional bodybuilder. And I was going to get my love back and show that beagle whose boss. For days on end I trained my hardest. First I thought I was not going to go anywhere with his secrets. But Garfield told me to keep pushing through and I did. Within 2 1/2 months my muscles were starting to grow. Garfield was happy to see progress. And I was too. From that point on I can pushing my weight limit harder. At first I was only lifting 10 and 20 pounds. But after I saw my muscles growing I knew it I had to train harder. Then I found the bench press Garfield used to use back in his bodybuilding days. The maximum weight limit on it was 500 pounds. So I started with 50. Then I moved up to 100 then 150. Even know my body screamed in agony and being tired of this constant training I knew it I had to continue. If I stop now I will loss Loual for good. She will be at the mercy of that beagle. Just the horrible thought of seeing the disgusting dog naked doing it with my girl send me nightmares down my spine. I guess you can say that's what drove me to train my body like this. But I didn't care as long as she was mine again I don't care what happened to that beagle.\n\nFive years had passed and by that point I didn't know what my body looks like. I pacifically said to Garfield to remove every mirror in the house so it will be a big surprise when I finally see my reflection again. After the five years passed Garfield came out of the full length mirror covered by a sheet. “So\" Garfield said very eager to remove the sheet. “Are you ready to see the new you Odie\". “Yes I am ready\". Then Garfield remove the sheet, I close my eyes when he did it and when I open slowly I could see a masterpiece. When I first look my reflection I was shocked to see my new body. I was gorgeous beautifully sculpted arms with perfect peaks. Legs were so strong the veins were popping in them. In my chest and stomach were amazing. My pecks expanded revealing each individual pack. My nipples even though this is strain I love how hard they were. My stomach was the best part. The fat I originally had melted away, and what was left was a beautiful six pack. I start to rub my new body. I was wearing underwear when I was worshiping me. Then I felt my bone get awfully hard. Garfield of course stop me before I could feel it. “Sorry Odie just waiting till you get your girl back. And let her do the work for you down there\". I agreed with him I will wait until Loula can treat it. “Will thank you for all your training Garfield. But now I have to face my destiny and beet that beagle. And when back my love\". And with that I was out I walked up the stairs and try am open the basement door I walked out of the house going to Loual place to see if she was still there and see if that beagle was there with her.\n\nWhen I got there I open the gate politely let myself in and closes the gate behind me and start heading to the porch. I knocked on the door and when it opened I saw that ugly disgusting beagle on the other side. Instead of saying hello or anything like that he just says “What the fuck are you doing here\". I stayed my ground I said right to his face “I’m here to see my girlfriend\". “Oh no you don't\" he said in anger” she's mine not yours. In fact I was getting ready to see her in her bed\". When I heard that statement I was crushed again. But I wasn't going to let him stop me. “Really\" I sad” Well you can't call me over the fence anymore because eyeing the week little pup I used to be\". To show him I wasn't lying to him I flex my bicep. He was actually a little shocked to see that I grew so quickly. He then fills my bicep. “Wow\" he said “that’s pretty nice. You know if I didn't hated you I want to say keep up the good work. But I'm way stronger than you. If you don't believe me check out this bitching biceps\"! Indeed he wasn't lying he did have bigger biceps. But still that didn't stop me from punching him in his face. Was trying to get backed up I kept kicking his arms so we can stay down to the ground. Then I found a baseball bat in the corner. I wasn't even thinking when I grabbed it and starting pummeling his face into the floor. Even though I didn't hire as big as muscles as he did it took about five or ten good swings until I cracked his head open killing him. After the 10th hit I solve all the running out of the bedroom completely nude. She screamed as she saw the beagle’s dead body lying on the floor. She looked look and was shocked to see who the person who killed him was. “Oh God\" she said “what the hell did you do to my brother you bastard\"! When I heard that I dropped the bat. This whole time they were related. At the moment I felt like an idiot are you committed manslaughter for no reason. I looked up to her and I said “I’m so sorry I didn't mean to. Please forgive me I didn't mean to kill him\". But I knew that she wasn't going to forgive me. “No\" she said in a low whisper, then yelling at me with \" I am calling the police! I hope you get the chair for what you done\"! “No you don't\" I sat at her. I grabbed her by her arm drag her back to her bedroom. I mean we start taking off my pants and underwear revealing my big monster cock. I pushed her onto the bed and I ram my cock right into her pussy. She screamed as my cock was too big for her. I muffled her with the pill right beside as I was suffocating her I kept ramming her over and over again. After 10 minutes of this enjoyable feeling I find no we was right to shoot. With a big yell I let it all out in her. And then when I remove the pillow to tell it I was all over, when I notice I killed her. I was so sad the only person that I loved in this world and on the one who killed her. I knew I couldn't live with myself. But I didn't kill myself instead I lived a new life.\n\nI burn down the house to cover my tracks and the police font to be died in the fire. I was left off the hook. That's when I became more of a troublemaker I had someone tattooed a kill and rape counter on my arm. Also ask in the tattoo my phone number on my dick he agreed. It felt good having that ink pressed against my bone. What it bad I was now a badass killer. I go whore houses and cause trouble usually getting kicked out. But want ty let me stay that's when I become more rotten. I have sex with every girl dog there. And one of them wants to come home with me for a little extra love that's when I do my dirties deed. I'm not going to tell you the details, let's just say that you haven't been seen cents. I still can't forget that night though maybe that's why I keep doing what I'm doing. He got so bad that I asked the tattoo guy replace dogs with cats for my rape and kill counter so I won't have the guts to tell everyone I killed my own kind. But that's what love does you can drive a person so crazy that they don't even know who they are anymore. The End", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "In a local pub there was a poker game going on in the back nobody complain much, Just one Odie. “So let me get this straight" sad Nermal looking at Odie “You’re in love". “Ya" Odie replied “I thought it was impossible to, until I met her. Will not literally met her but I saw her"." Will" said Arlene” don't be shy tell us all about it" “Ya it has been way better than the time you tripped on your own tail". “Garfield"! “I was only joking with him Arlene". “Sorry about Garfield tonight guys he's just a little angry lately. So either way can you tell us the story Odie". "Oh yeah" said Odie” it all began yesterday". “I was walking down the sidewalk when I saw the most gorgeous thing in my life. It was a beautiful poodle with fur white as snow. First I was a little shy when I saw her. I first said hey what your name is after coming up to her and saying a nice hello. She told me her name was Loual. What a nice named I sad. I told her my name is Odie. She giggled a little bit when I said that. She said to me that she was new to the neighborhood. Didn't know anyone really. Then she told me she had a boyfriend one. Really brave dog was with the fire department. She then told me her boyfriend sadly passed away involved in a burning building. I said to her that really is sad. I hard to lose a loved one in your life I said to her. And I told her I had to leave. I said if you need anything just give me a call. When I left I gave her a little hug. And then I started to leave back home. A couple of days pass and we knew more and more about ourselves. She loved slow quiet nights and jazz perfect for me. I asked her if she seen one else. She gave me a choir know when she said she's having trouble making friends around here. I said maybe one is all you need. She agreed I wasn't ready to tell her my love. I thought it was easier to stay friends my opinion. Sadly I was very very wrong that night. The next day I was going to confess my love. I had some roses in my hand I took from Mrs. Feeney's I knew she was going to blame it on Garfield anyways". “Whit" sad Garfield “That was you. Jon was blaming me for hours about that! Thanks a lot Odie". “Anyways" sad Odie” I was heading to her house, I was all excited to tell her my true love this and that her and I should be happy together. I was in front of her house when I saw something that made my heart sink. She was talking to another dog. And I don't mean just one of those little dogs, this one was huge. This guy had mussels. I'm guessing he was originally 20 pounds but with those muscles I'm guessing he was 75. I can't up to him and say excuse me but you’re talking to my girl. He then turned around and stared at me. He said to me I'm sorry bud. But I'm talking to her so wait in line. I then sad to him don't be so rude. He then turnaround again and stick the middle finger right up in my face. Then he said, until you have a body as strong as mine you're not allowed to talk to her. Then he grabs me with one hand while flexing his other arm showing off the Lola. Then he towed me over the fence laughing. I feel so humiliated. She was my love and I was just tossed aside bison over bound muscular beagle. So here we are now I'm talking about my problems in the middle of our game". They were silent after they heard Odie's story. Then one by one they went back to their game. The game is finished and everybody left Odie was about leave the table head to the bar to get him a drink. He was then grabbed on the arm by Garfield the only person besides Odie that stayed. “Odie" sad Garfield well still holding his arm " I need I tell you something important" " Will" Sad Odie " unless you're here to tell me you're the one who ate my food last night I'm not in the mood" " No it's not that I'll tell you when we get home okay I promise I tell you the secret and you will get your girl back. Trust me on this one I can make everything right".

That night Garfield wasn't kidding. I went home with him; we went to the basement I asked my first why we were going down here. Then he turned on the light to reveal a case filled with bodybuilder trophies. I asked him what's with all the trophies, and then he told me the truth. “The thing is Odie I wasn't always fat. Bike in the 90s I was a serious bodybuilder. I want to use trophies in various tournaments around the world. I was named Mr. Universe when I when do you can be in the Mr. Universe competition in Paris. Yes sir I was one buff sexy cat, when I heard about your problems during our game I was actually sorry for you. I think it's not right for you to be treated like that even know why kick you. I always think that's wrong with me. So I decided to teach you my secrets so you can have what I used to, the body that can make a woman's heart melt". First I was completely surprised that Garfield used bin a bodybuilder. When I fart in my head that it will be perfect. I can get a beautiful body and my love Loual back. I have nothing to lose. I need my body in shape anyways. Even know I was a skinny little pup. I still needed to train. So that night I agreed. Garfield was going to teach me his skills how he became a professional bodybuilder. And I was going to get my love back and show that beagle whose boss. For days on end I trained my hardest. First I thought I was not going to go anywhere with his secrets. But Garfield told me to keep pushing through and I did. Within 2 1/2 months my muscles were starting to grow. Garfield was happy to see progress. And I was too. From that point on I can pushing my weight limit harder. At first I was only lifting 10 and 20 pounds. But after I saw my muscles growing I knew it I had to train harder. Then I found the bench press Garfield used to use back in his bodybuilding days. The maximum weight limit on it was 500 pounds. So I started with 50. Then I moved up to 100 then 150. Even know my body screamed in agony and being tired of this constant training I knew it I had to continue. If I stop now I will loss Loual for good. She will be at the mercy of that beagle. Just the horrible thought of seeing the disgusting dog naked doing it with my girl send me nightmares down my spine. I guess you can say that's what drove me to train my body like this. But I didn't care as long as she was mine again I don't care what happened to that beagle.

Five years had passed and by that point I didn't know what my body looks like. I pacifically said to Garfield to remove every mirror in the house so it will be a big surprise when I finally see my reflection again. After the five years passed Garfield came out of the full length mirror covered by a sheet. “So" Garfield said very eager to remove the sheet. “Are you ready to see the new you Odie". “Yes I am ready". Then Garfield remove the sheet, I close my eyes when he did it and when I open slowly I could see a masterpiece. When I first look my reflection I was shocked to see my new body. I was gorgeous beautifully sculpted arms with perfect peaks. Legs were so strong the veins were popping in them. In my chest and stomach were amazing. My pecks expanded revealing each individual pack. My nipples even though this is strain I love how hard they were. My stomach was the best part. The fat I originally had melted away, and what was left was a beautiful six pack. I start to rub my new body. I was wearing underwear when I was worshiping me. Then I felt my bone get awfully hard. Garfield of course stop me before I could feel it. “Sorry Odie just waiting till you get your girl back. And let her do the work for you down there". I agreed with him I will wait until Loula can treat it. “Will thank you for all your training Garfield. But now I have to face my destiny and beet that beagle. And when back my love". And with that I was out I walked up the stairs and try am open the basement door I walked out of the house going to Loual place to see if she was still there and see if that beagle was there with her.

When I got there I open the gate politely let myself in and closes the gate behind me and start heading to the porch. I knocked on the door and when it opened I saw that ugly disgusting beagle on the other side. Instead of saying hello or anything like that he just says “What the fuck are you doing here". I stayed my ground I said right to his face “I’m here to see my girlfriend". “Oh no you don't" he said in anger” she's mine not yours. In fact I was getting ready to see her in her bed". When I heard that statement I was crushed again. But I wasn't going to let him stop me. “Really" I sad” Well you can't call me over the fence anymore because eyeing the week little pup I used to be". To show him I wasn't lying to him I flex my bicep. He was actually a little shocked to see that I grew so quickly. He then fills my bicep. “Wow" he said “that’s pretty nice. You know if I didn't hated you I want to say keep up the good work. But I'm way stronger than you. If you don't believe me check out this bitching biceps"! Indeed he wasn't lying he did have bigger biceps. But still that didn't stop me from punching him in his face. Was trying to get backed up I kept kicking his arms so we can stay down to the ground. Then I found a baseball bat in the corner. I wasn't even thinking when I grabbed it and starting pummeling his face into the floor. Even though I didn't hire as big as muscles as he did it took about five or ten good swings until I cracked his head open killing him. After the 10th hit I solve all the running out of the bedroom completely nude. She screamed as she saw the beagle’s dead body lying on the floor. She looked look and was shocked to see who the person who killed him was. “Oh God" she said “what the hell did you do to my brother you bastard"! When I heard that I dropped the bat. This whole time they were related. At the moment I felt like an idiot are you committed manslaughter for no reason. I looked up to her and I said “I’m so sorry I didn't mean to. Please forgive me I didn't mean to kill him". But I knew that she wasn't going to forgive me. “No" she said in a low whisper, then yelling at me with " I am calling the police! I hope you get the chair for what you done"! “No you don't" I sat at her. I grabbed her by her arm drag her back to her bedroom. I mean we start taking off my pants and underwear revealing my big monster cock. I pushed her onto the bed and I ram my cock right into her pussy. She screamed as my cock was too big for her. I muffled her with the pill right beside as I was suffocating her I kept ramming her over and over again. After 10 minutes of this enjoyable feeling I find no we was right to shoot. With a big yell I let it all out in her. And then when I remove the pillow to tell it I was all over, when I notice I killed her. I was so sad the only person that I loved in this world and on the one who killed her. I knew I couldn't live with myself. But I didn't kill myself instead I lived a new life.

I burn down the house to cover my tracks and the police font to be died in the fire. I was left off the hook. That's when I became more of a troublemaker I had someone tattooed a kill and rape counter on my arm. Also ask in the tattoo my phone number on my dick he agreed. It felt good having that ink pressed against my bone. What it bad I was now a badass killer. I go whore houses and cause trouble usually getting kicked out. But want ty let me stay that's when I become more rotten. I have sex with every girl dog there. And one of them wants to come home with me for a little extra love that's when I do my dirties deed. I'm not going to tell you the details, let's just say that you haven't been seen cents. I still can't forget that night though maybe that's why I keep doing what I'm doing. He got so bad that I asked the tattoo guy replace dogs with cats for my rape and kill counter so I won't have the guts to tell everyone I killed my own kind. But that's what love does you can drive a person so crazy that they don't even know who they are anymore. The End", "pools_count": 0, "title": "New Submission", "deleted": "f", "public": "t", "mimetype": "image/jpeg", "pagecount": "1", "rating_id": "2", "rating_name": "Adult", "ratings": [ { "content_tag_id": "4", "name": "Sexual Themes", "description": "Erotic imagery, sexual activity or arousal", "rating_id": "2" }, { "content_tag_id": "5", "name": "Strong Violence", "description": "Strong violence, blood, serious injury or death", "rating_id": "2" } ], "submission_type_id": "12", "type_name": "Writing - Document", "guest_block": "t", "friends_only": "f", "comments_count": "0", "views": "166" }