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So meh, Poetry.\n\n\n\n\nOh I guess this might make more sense to those that have performed pieces of Prose or Poetry, but there is a recitir or the Title after a short pause following the conclusion of the Piece.\n\nHelps to bring it full circle. Ahahahahahah SEE what I did there? lolololoololol\n\nI guess it should also be noted, a source of inspiriation is eastern philosphy and Yin Yang\n\nYin/Yang are also, often (as in idiomatic English) refered to as Heaven and Earth.\n\nWhich are often represented by Blue and Green. . . .\n\n\nin the more literal sense, NO he didn't die, he's having his life flash before his eyes following his \"brush with death\" worded differently to be more poetry-y,\n\n it helps the linguistics flow \n\nblossoms as a flower, under the tree.\n\n. . . free\n\n\nHA HA HA one words three syllabels broken up to give the rhyme scheme for the following three lines EAT THAT MRS BLACKSTONE HA HA HA HA (my brit and Am lit HS teacher) AND preservation of the HYPHENATION of which is often used in literature as synonymous with ELIPSIS\n\n\nTAKE THAT", "description_bbcode_parsed": "Just....something of an interesting challenge to self.

A poem of flow-of-conscious form and muse,

I found it interesting to write with a tone of somber relfection, a mindset of Pensive without grim ( Though I know most will find this "dark" or "grim" mayhap even "emo" [ugh, i've never related to emo or the druggery it envisions, so please, do not point the switch of that branch towards me, else find yourself the bait, in place] but it really isn't)


In anycase, this is more for me than anything but I guess this is an art website. So meh, Poetry.




Oh I guess this might make more sense to those that have performed pieces of Prose or Poetry, but there is a recitir or the Title after a short pause following the conclusion of the Piece.

Helps to bring it full circle. Ahahahahahah SEE what I did there? lolololoololol

I guess it should also be noted, a source of inspiriation is eastern philosphy and Yin Yang

Yin/Yang are also, often (as in idiomatic English) refered to as Heaven and Earth.

Which are often represented by Blue and Green. . . .


in the more literal sense, NO he didn't die, he's having his life flash before his eyes following his "brush with death" worded differently to be more poetry-y,

 it helps the linguistics flow

blossoms as a flower, under the tree.

. . . free


HA HA HA one words three syllabels broken up to give the rhyme scheme for the following three lines EAT THAT MRS BLACKSTONE HA HA HA HA (my brit and Am lit HS teacher) AND preservation of the HYPHENATION of which is often used in literature as synonymous with ELIPSIS


TAKE THAT", "writing": "Sapphire of wisdom, doth shine on his right,\n\nVerdance of growth, left, yearning for light,\n\nDi chromacia, brilliant, living, innocent of night,\n\ntwain these gems, grim's arrow gave plight,\n\nDys Chromacia, life, color, soul, gone from sight,\n\nDys Chronist, \n\nTacet,\n\nGrey,\n\nOur might gives pause,\n\nTo rest,\n\na repose to surrender,\n\nSifting from cause,\n\nYield upon thy pride tender,\n\nTremulous whisper of reflections,\n\nEcho a shimmer,\n\nof Joys, with jest and boast did you shun,\n\nalone in the winter, glimmers the warmth,\n\nrecall now, late from life, self and desire,\n\nOf what you graced upon others, \n\nAnd miseried return, To thy:\n\nEgo,\n\nPride,\n\nArrogancing away,\n\nYou gave to yourself a gift of all you could Want,\n\nIn Death, finding now, gravest of dismay,\n\nNever seeking that which you Need,\n\nToo late, \n\n late, \n\n\n far gone,\n \n[center]far behind,[/center]\n\n[right] and far,[/right]\n\n\n\n\n\n\n[right]far,[/right]\n\n[right]a[/right]\n[right]w[/right]\n[right]a[/right]\n[right]y[/right]\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Sapphire of wisdom, doth shine on his right,

Verdance of growth, left, yearning for light,

Di chromacia, brilliant, living, innocent of night,

twain these gems, grim's arrow gave plight,

Dys Chromacia, life, color, soul, gone from sight,

Dys Chronist,

Tacet,

Grey,

Our might gives pause,

To rest,

a repose to surrender,

Sifting from cause,

Yield upon thy pride tender,

Tremulous whisper of reflections,

Echo a shimmer,

of Joys, with jest and boast did you shun,

alone in the winter, glimmers the warmth,

recall now, late from life, self and desire,

Of what you graced upon others,

And miseried return, To thy:

Ego,

Pride,

Arrogancing away,

You gave to yourself a gift of all you could Want,

In Death, finding now, gravest of dismay,

Never seeking that which you Need,

Too late,

          late,


             far gone,
 
far behind,


and far,







far,


a

w

a

y

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