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It was long one, but she finally had it done. She closed her eyes and calmed herself. Soon she had familiar sensation. She twisted little her ears and she was sure about it.\n[i]\"I better go now to be on time.\"[/i] she thought herself. She stood up and picked a towel from her closet. But soon she realize, better check first that her \"patient\" won't be needing her for a moment or soon.\nShe looked inside her training room and saw Splinter in a middle of it meditating.\n[i]\"I hope he is in a long and deep trance.\"[/i] she calmed herself. She felt wrong to go without telling him to not worry for her absence.\nShe left quietly outside of her burrow and run by the sewer. Soon she ended up at the old sewer section. There was a blanket covering a rusted doorway. She moved the blanket and entered to the doorway. The corridor was dark but at the end of it were light.\nEnd of the corridor was revealed a little ope place with a pool. Water was clear and it moved slowly and small openings on the roof let enough light to see clearly and yet same time it was well hidden from other people.\nNot a moment too soon Annie-Maria smelled the rain falling. Drops of water stared to fall from the openings on the roof, like a shower.\nShe undressed and moved in to the pool.\nWater was cold but she didn't care. It reached to her waist near the edge of the pool, but once getting to the center the floor raised so the water reached to ankles.\nOnce at the center, Annie-Maria could feel the raindrops fall on her. She closed her eyes and let her mind relax and stared with moving slowly but still exactly. This was part of the [i]Sui-Ren[/i] she learned in Japan. This maneuver was well taught and helpful to her. This way she could settled her body and mind. Ignoring old wounds and discovering something new in herself.\nThough this time there was more need to discovering. All her actions, all her emotions, something wasn't right. She have never feel something like she felt now. Every move she made was like desperate call for answers. And yet every drop that fell on her was like pitch saying \"the obvious\". Moments later, Annie-Maria stops and tries to catch a breath.\n\n[i]\"Am I forgetting something? What is wrong with me?\"[/i]\nThe rain turned calm and only few drops were falling down.\nAnnie-Maria, eyes closed, knew what to do and took deep breath. She focused and listened... One drop, one sound... Silence... Nothing more, nothing else. No...\nWait!? There was something between silence. Breathing...? no, a presence. She is not alone. Annie-Maria opened her eyes and turn to look... Splinter?!\n\nShe couldn't believe it. He stands there, ...in this place, ...and he saw her naked.\nRealizing this Annie-Maria moved quickly to other corner, were water was deeper, but not deep enough. She had to kneel down to cover her body.\n[i]\"Naze?\"[/i] she cried in her mind.\n[i]\"Why is this happening?\"[/i] her face was red for embarrassment. She wished water would have be more deeper to hide her hole body.\n\n\"Annie-Maria?\" she heard him calling. Before anyone of them could said another word, it stared to rain more harder. All the water fell in from the openings. No one were able to hear each other.\nAnnie-Maria bend her head down. Splinter may not be able to see or hear her caused the rain, but... still. She felt weak. This is not how she would had wanted things go. Her body felt like some knifes are cutting her inside. She tried to confess herself that it was the cold water. But... then... why is she feeling like this? Why there is no answer?\n\n\"Annie-Maria?\" She roused her head by that voice. It sounded worried and it came close to her. She turned a little and saw Splinter. He had took his clothes off and now he stood next to her. All soaked and wet by the water that fell on his fur. Annie-Maria couldn't take eyes off him. If there was some kind of attraction to him before, now it was overwhelming her.\n\n\"Forgive me. I didn't want to scare you like this.\" Splinter said bending down to her. He reached his hand to hold her cheek. She was trembling. Her eyes quickly turned away from him. Splinter thought his actions had obviously hurt her. He put his hand down and stud up.\n\n\"[i]Gomenasai[/i].\" he said head turned away.\n\"I did not want to hurt you this way. I should go.\" He walked away from her. Annie-Maria looked how the rain covered him when he moved to the center and then he would walk to the edge and will be gone.\n\n\"No!\" she cried and grabbed on his back.\n\"Please...*sob*... Don't go. I can't stand it.*sob*\"\n\nSplinter hold still and felt her hands on his back. Her sodding stinted his heart like a needle. Water felling to his face like telling him to turn to Annie-Maria. He did so and turned to look at her. She was looking down, both hands now holding her sods and hiccups. Splinter reached his hand to her chin and lift her look towards him. Her eyes were in tears. Even with all the water that was falling on her he could see how much she was feeling the pain.\nSplinter moved his hand to her cheek. She trembled but not like before. Annie-Maria hold his hand. It was harm and gentle. Letting it caressed her. \n\nSplinter moved his other hand slowly towards her neck. Touching her softly and reaching her other cheek. He pulled her closer to him. Closer to have her lips closer to his. Annie-Maria felt Splinters warm breathing teasing her lips. She forgot everything and gave up to his kiss.\n\nIt was sweet and yet it felt like it burned the chest. Every moment, the kiss turned tense and hot. Annie-Maria's moved her hands towards Splinters chest, letting them feel his soaked furry muscles. It made Splinter pull her body closer and kiss her more deeply. Couple of time their lips had to separate to catch a breath, and quickly they joined back to continue their passionate moment. The rain kept falling down on them. But it didn't bothered them, nor their kiss.\n\nAnnie-Maria wrapped her arms around Splinters neck, wishing he won't ever stop. Yet Splinter had her closer and couldn't get enough of her lips.\n\nSoon they had to separated for good. Both of them wished to have more, but they had to hold themselves from that lust.\nJust when Annie-Maria's lips were removed from Splinter, she heard a something...\n\n[i]\"Aishiteru.\"[/i]\n\nThe rain finally stopped. Annie-Maria opened her eyes and looked at Splinter who looked back at her with a gentle smile.\n\n\"Is everything alright?\" he asked. It seemed like the kiss left her little dreamy.\n\"Mm...\" came from her. Then she snapped out of it.\n\"Wha...what? Oh, yes. I...\" She turned little away from him.\n\"...I think we should go back now.\" Annie-Maria said and walked to the edge where the clothes were. Splinter just followed her.\n\nAnnie-Maria stepped out of the pool and took her towel to dry herself. While dressing herself, she noticed that Splinter didn't brought towel for himself. When he stepped out, Annie-Maria offered her own.\n\"Here. So you won't catch a cold.\" she said head turned other way. Splinter chuckled.\n\"[i]Domo[/i].\"\n\nMeanwhile when Splinter dried himself, Annie-Maria tided her feet. Once she picked other two bandages and her [i]haramaki[/i], she stud still thinking...\n\n\"That word... Where have I heard it before? Why...? When she kept thinking, she remembered to hear it maybe once or twice when she was young. Maybe it was her father, who whispered that word to her mother some of the night when she spied on them.\nBut then, training in the Japan she never got a chance or opportunity to ask her [i]sensei[/i] about it. Sure she might have tell her, but now...\nShe knew it meant something. Something important, but ...what?\n\nShe woke up from her thoughts once she felt Spilnter's hand on her shoulder.\n\"Shall we go?\" he said all dressed. Annie- Maria smiled and nodded to him. Splinter stretched his arm to her and she grabbed on him with little blush on her face. And so, they walked back home.\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Under the rain

Annie- Maria had just finished her work and took a deep breath. It was long one, but she finally had it done. She closed her eyes and calmed herself. Soon she had familiar sensation. She twisted little her ears and she was sure about it.
"I better go now to be on time." she thought herself. She stood up and picked a towel from her closet. But soon she realize, better check first that her "patient" won't be needing her for a moment or soon.
She looked inside her training room and saw Splinter in a middle of it meditating.
"I hope he is in a long and deep trance." she calmed herself. She felt wrong to go without telling him to not worry for her absence.
She left quietly outside of her burrow and run by the sewer. Soon she ended up at the old sewer section. There was a blanket covering a rusted doorway. She moved the blanket and entered to the doorway. The corridor was dark but at the end of it were light.
End of the corridor was revealed a little ope place with a pool. Water was clear and it moved slowly and small openings on the roof let enough light to see clearly and yet same time it was well hidden from other people.
Not a moment too soon Annie-Maria smelled the rain falling. Drops of water stared to fall from the openings on the roof, like a shower.
She undressed and moved in to the pool.
Water was cold but she didn't care. It reached to her waist near the edge of the pool, but once getting to the center the floor raised so the water reached to ankles.
Once at the center, Annie-Maria could feel the raindrops fall on her. She closed her eyes and let her mind relax and stared with moving slowly but still exactly. This was part of the Sui-Ren she learned in Japan. This maneuver was well taught and helpful to her. This way she could settled her body and mind. Ignoring old wounds and discovering something new in herself.
Though this time there was more need to discovering. All her actions, all her emotions, something wasn't right. She have never feel something like she felt now. Every move she made was like desperate call for answers. And yet every drop that fell on her was like pitch saying "the obvious". Moments later, Annie-Maria stops and tries to catch a breath.

"Am I forgetting something? What is wrong with me?"
The rain turned calm and only few drops were falling down.
Annie-Maria, eyes closed, knew what to do and took deep breath. She focused and listened... One drop, one sound... Silence... Nothing more, nothing else. No...
Wait!? There was something between silence. Breathing...? no, a presence. She is not alone. Annie-Maria opened her eyes and turn to look... Splinter?!

She couldn't believe it. He stands there, ...in this place, ...and he saw her naked.
Realizing this Annie-Maria moved quickly to other corner, were water was deeper, but not deep enough. She had to kneel down to cover her body.
"Naze?" she cried in her mind.
"Why is this happening?" her face was red for embarrassment. She wished water would have be more deeper to hide her hole body.

"Annie-Maria?" she heard him calling. Before anyone of them could said another word, it stared to rain more harder. All the water fell in from the openings. No one were able to hear each other.
Annie-Maria bend her head down. Splinter may not be able to see or hear her caused the rain, but... still. She felt weak. This is not how she would had wanted things go. Her body felt like some knifes are cutting her inside. She tried to confess herself that it was the cold water. But... then... why is she feeling like this? Why there is no answer?

"Annie-Maria?" She roused her head by that voice. It sounded worried and it came close to her. She turned a little and saw Splinter. He had took his clothes off and now he stood next to her. All soaked and wet by the water that fell on his fur. Annie-Maria couldn't take eyes off him. If there was some kind of attraction to him before, now it was overwhelming her.

"Forgive me. I didn't want to scare you like this." Splinter said bending down to her. He reached his hand to hold her cheek. She was trembling. Her eyes quickly turned away from him. Splinter thought his actions had obviously hurt her. He put his hand down and stud up.

"Gomenasai." he said head turned away.
"I did not want to hurt you this way. I should go." He walked away from her. Annie-Maria looked how the rain covered him when he moved to the center and then he would walk to the edge and will be gone.

"No!" she cried and grabbed on his back.
"Please...*sob*... Don't go. I can't stand it.*sob*"

Splinter hold still and felt her hands on his back. Her sodding stinted his heart like a needle. Water felling to his face like telling him to turn to Annie-Maria. He did so and turned to look at her. She was looking down, both hands now holding her sods and hiccups. Splinter reached his hand to her chin and lift her look towards him. Her eyes were in tears. Even with all the water that was falling on her he could see how much she was feeling the pain.
Splinter moved his hand to her cheek. She trembled but not like before. Annie-Maria hold his hand. It was harm and gentle. Letting it caressed her. 

Splinter moved his other hand slowly towards her neck. Touching her softly and reaching her other cheek. He pulled her closer to him. Closer to have her lips closer to his. Annie-Maria felt Splinters warm breathing teasing her lips. She forgot everything and gave up to his kiss.

It was sweet and yet it felt like it burned the chest. Every moment, the kiss turned tense and hot. Annie-Maria's moved her hands towards Splinters chest, letting them feel his soaked furry muscles. It made Splinter pull her body closer and kiss her more deeply. Couple of time their lips had to separate to catch a breath, and quickly they joined back to continue their passionate moment. The rain kept falling down on them. But it didn't bothered them, nor their kiss.

Annie-Maria wrapped her arms around Splinters neck, wishing he won't ever stop. Yet Splinter had her closer and couldn't get enough of her lips.

Soon they had to separated for good. Both of them wished to have more, but they had to hold themselves from that lust.
Just when Annie-Maria's lips were removed from Splinter, she heard a something...

"Aishiteru."

The rain finally stopped. Annie-Maria opened her eyes and looked at Splinter who looked back at her with a gentle smile.

"Is everything alright?" he asked. It seemed like the kiss left her little dreamy.
"Mm..." came from her. Then she snapped out of it.
"Wha...what? Oh, yes. I..." She turned little away from him.
"...I think we should go back now." Annie-Maria said and walked to the edge where the clothes were. Splinter just followed her.

Annie-Maria stepped out of the pool and took her towel to dry herself. While dressing herself, she noticed that Splinter didn't brought towel for himself. When he stepped out, Annie-Maria offered her own.
"Here. So you won't catch a cold." she said head turned other way. Splinter chuckled.
"Domo."

Meanwhile when Splinter dried himself, Annie-Maria tided her feet. Once she picked other two bandages and her haramaki, she stud still thinking...

"That word... Where have I heard it before? Why...? When she kept thinking, she remembered to hear it maybe once or twice when she was young. Maybe it was her father, who whispered that word to her mother some of the night when she spied on them.
But then, training in the Japan she never got a chance or opportunity to ask her sensei about it. Sure she might have tell her, but now...
She knew it meant something. Something important, but ...what?

She woke up from her thoughts once she felt Spilnter's hand on her shoulder.
"Shall we go?" he said all dressed. Annie- Maria smiled and nodded to him. Splinter stretched his arm to her and she grabbed on him with little blush on her face. And so, they walked back home.
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