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Not even Ribbon could avoid this one for too long.", "description_bbcode_parsed": "Original Post Date: May 21, 2017

Chapter 14 of 13?

Cover: Portal Panic Cover
First: Portal Panic: Intro
Prev: Portal Panic: Epilogue
Next: Portal Panic: Bonus Chapter R2

Surprise!  Not even Ribbon could avoid this one for too long.", "writing": "====Portal Panic: Ribbon====[center]\n[/center]\n-----------------------------------------------------------R1--------------------------------------------------------------\n\n>For Ribbon, it was all a blur.\n\n>One moment, she was diligently keeping an eye out for her caregiver's return.\n\n>The next, she was picking herself up off of an unknown city street.\n\n>The earth pony filly started dusting herself off.\n\n>First was her maroon coat, with the most debris appearing on her left side.\n\n>Next, she brushed her seafoam green mane and tail, bits and pieces falling to the street below.\n\n>Finally, she tended to her namesake, the huge red bow bouncing in earnest as she dusted it off.\n\n>The buildings on either side of the street were too tall for her to look over.\n\n>That is, if she wanted to avoid damaging them.\n\n``Why are all the buildings broken?''\n\n>Her maroon hooves stomped an even bigger crater into the pavement as she turned her whole body, craning her neck at all the funny looking structures.\n\n>Some residents had started carefully filing out, summoned by the shaking.\n\n>She finally looked down, having taken in enough of the skyline that she could see.\n\n>What greeted her eyes was a large pothole filled with indiscernible rock.\n\n``I thought the roads didn't do that anymore...''\n\n>She then noticed the crowd of people forming along the nearby sidewalks.\n\n>Instead of rearing her head back in a panic, she lowered her head towards one of the crowds.\n\n>Most of the crowd scattered to a safe distance, save for one curious soul.\n\n>A little girl was staring at the filly in wonder.\n\n>Her mother was insistently tugging on her arm, but she refused to budge.\n\n>Ribbon got her head low enough, chin resting on the ravaged pavement.\n\n>Two massive yellow eyes locked onto the curious girl.\n\n>They wouldn't know it, but they were the same age.\n\n``Hi!''\n\n>It was gentle enough to avoid overloading the young child's ears.\n\n>''Hi...''\n\n>The mother had stopped trying to pull away her daughter, and stared at the filly, slackjawed.\n\n>''You're pretty...''\n\n>Ribbon lowered her muzzle to the ground, flustered.\n\n``Thanks! You look so adorabl--''\n\n>She felt something latch onto her nose.\n\n>The little girl had pushed herself into the maroon muzzle, hugging as much fur as her small form would allow.\n\n>''You're a pretty pony!''\n\n>The mother wore a face that described her internal conflict.\n\n>She was torn between d'awwing at the scene and getting her daughter to safety.\n\n>More of the bystanders drew closer at the heartwarming scene, fully convinced that the oversized filly wasn't here to harm them.\n\n>Ribbon smiled.\n\n>She wanted to do something to show she appreciated the hug, but with what she had in mind, where they were now was too risky.\n\n>She slowly pulled her face away, nudging for the little girl to follow her.\n\n>The child took off like a rocket after the face, the mother reluctantly giving chase.\n\n>Ribbon again lowered her head, this time above a previously untouched section of roadway.\n\n>She soon felt that familiar feeling of the girl hugging her nose once more.\n\n``Now I can hug you back.''\n\n>She got on her haunches, flank landing firmly in her impact crater.\n\n>Up came one of her forehooves, casting a shadow over the girl\n\n>People feared for the worst, some opting to sprint out into the street for her.\n\n>The hoof meanwhile traveled overhead safely.\n\n>Ribbon rested it behind the girl, and gently pressed it against her snout.\n\n>The girl gave a yelp of half surprise, half joy when she was pressed between the two walls of fur.\n\n>Those would-be heroes backed off after realizing her intentions.\n\n>Conversations broke out amongst the spectators as the hug continued.\n\n>''It's just a... giant filly.''\n\n>''How... normal.''\n\n>''I know, right?''\n\n>''This one's the most normal one that's appeared so far.''\n\n>''You think she's related to any of them?''\n\n>''Hopefully not that third one.''\n\n>''Oh yeah, for sure.''\n\n>A series of flashing lights caught everyone's attention.\n\n>The mother gently pulled her child away as a fire engine pushed through the crowd.\n\n>This particular vehicle had a few dents at the corners near the front and back.\n\n>''Bye bye giant pony...''\n\n``Bye bye little girl.''\n\n>Ribbon looked at the girl with that same smile.\n\n>The girl returned it as she clasped her mother's hand.\n\n>''Do you have... a name?''\n\n``Yes. Ribbon.''\n\n>''Hi Ribbon, I'm Suzie!''\n\n>The filly noticed the engine had taken center stage in front of her form.\n\n>Out of the cabin hopped a firefighter.\n\n>Soon, the whole crew was looking on in awe.\n\n>''So, why did we take this call again?''\n\n>''Why do you think?''\n\n>''Woah, another one? Must be our lucky day!''\n\n>''Or unlucky.''\n\n>''Don't be such a downer! Last one saved us; I've got my hopes up.''\n\n>''Just sayin'.''\n\n``Excuse me?''\n\n>The side conversations dropped as the filly pulled her head up from the ground.\n\n``I think... I'm lost. I was wondering if... if you've seen Gabby.''\n\n>The engine's driver took point on this one.\n\n>''Who?''\n\n>Ribbon tried again, using her forehooves to gesture a bit.\n\n``You know, Gabby! Purple hair, purple fur; wait, can you even call that fur? Anyway, weird antennae-thingies coming out of her head behind her ears, long tail that isn't made out of hair, have you seen her?''\n\n>The firefighters looked at each other, dumbstruck.\n\n>''No way...''\n\n>''It can't be.''\n\n>''How?''\n\n>''What are the odds?''\n\n>Ribbon trained her yellow eyes on the crew.\n\n``What's wrong?''\n\n>The driver spoke up to her again.\n\n>''Gabby, that was her name, right?''\n\n``Yep!''\n\n>''I think.... She's the one who got our truck off the roof.''\n\n>The filly beamed.\n\n``That sounds like something she'd do!''\n\n>''Ribbon, was it? We were on call at the time and--''\n\n>''Not to mention scared out of our minds!''\n\n>''Quiet, you! Anyway, we were responding to an emergency, so we had to leave before we could see where she went...''\n\n>Ribbon's ears drooped a bit.\n\n>''That, was a few hours back.''\n\n>One of the other firemen piped up.\n\n>''The radio's been abuzz with something like a giant monster fight? Like, something out of a terrible B-movie. Sounds like she might have been involved.''\n\n>The filly bolted to her hooves in a hurry, causing a tremor that set off car alarms and knocked everyone off their feet.\n\n``Where was that? How do I get there?''\n\n>The driver picked himself up, using the truck for support.\n\n>''Last bit I remember hearing suggests it was at the bay area.''\n\n>He pointed down the street behind him.\n\n>''You'll need to go that way until you see a park. It's about 30 blocks or so from here. Once you see it, any of the streets to your left will take you straight to the bay.''\n\n>Ribbon crouched down and pushed her muzzle against the crew as a way of thanking them.\n\n``Thank you so much!''\n\n>The crew all tipped their hats.\n\n>''No problem, ma'am. Now, if you'll excuse us...''\n\n>Everyone piled into the fire engine.\n\n>One swift u-turn later, it charges off down the street, taking the first right turn that it can.\n\n>Ribbon stood to her full height, unintentionally intimidating the bystanders who had gotten so close to her.\n\n``Go this way until I see a park. Got it.''\n\n>The crowd in her way dispersed, allowing her safe travel.\n\n>She looked down around her and waved.\n\n``Uh, goodbye everyone! Hope to see ya again!''\n\n>She then got to walking, her steps gently shaking the surroundings.\n\n>As she traveled into the distance, little Suzie was enthusiastically waving from the sidewalk.\n\n>''Bye bye Ribbon!''\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "====Portal Panic: Ribbon====


-----------------------------------------------------------R1--------------------------------------------------------------

>For Ribbon, it was all a blur.

>One moment, she was diligently keeping an eye out for her caregiver's return.

>The next, she was picking herself up off of an unknown city street.

>The earth pony filly started dusting herself off.

>First was her maroon coat, with the most debris appearing on her left side.

>Next, she brushed her seafoam green mane and tail, bits and pieces falling to the street below.

>Finally, she tended to her namesake, the huge red bow bouncing in earnest as she dusted it off.

>The buildings on either side of the street were too tall for her to look over.

>That is, if she wanted to avoid damaging them.

``Why are all the buildings broken?''

>Her maroon hooves stomped an even bigger crater into the pavement as she turned her whole body, craning her neck at all the funny looking structures.

>Some residents had started carefully filing out, summoned by the shaking.

>She finally looked down, having taken in enough of the skyline that she could see.

>What greeted her eyes was a large pothole filled with indiscernible rock.

``I thought the roads didn't do that anymore...''

>She then noticed the crowd of people forming along the nearby sidewalks.

>Instead of rearing her head back in a panic, she lowered her head towards one of the crowds.

>Most of the crowd scattered to a safe distance, save for one curious soul.

>A little girl was staring at the filly in wonder.

>Her mother was insistently tugging on her arm, but she refused to budge.

>Ribbon got her head low enough, chin resting on the ravaged pavement.

>Two massive yellow eyes locked onto the curious girl.

>They wouldn't know it, but they were the same age.

``Hi!''

>It was gentle enough to avoid overloading the young child's ears.

>''Hi...''

>The mother had stopped trying to pull away her daughter, and stared at the filly, slackjawed.

>''You're pretty...''

>Ribbon lowered her muzzle to the ground, flustered.

``Thanks!  You look so adorabl--''

>She felt something latch onto her nose.

>The little girl had pushed herself into the maroon muzzle, hugging as much fur as her small form would allow.

>''You're a pretty pony!''

>The mother wore a face that described her internal conflict.

>She was torn between d'awwing at the scene and getting her daughter to safety.

>More of the bystanders drew closer at the heartwarming scene, fully convinced that the oversized filly wasn't here to harm them.

>Ribbon smiled.

>She wanted to do something to show she appreciated the hug, but with what she had in mind, where they were now was too risky.

>She slowly pulled her face away, nudging for the little girl to follow her.

>The child took off like a rocket after the face, the mother reluctantly giving chase.

>Ribbon again lowered her head, this time above a previously untouched section of roadway.

>She soon felt that familiar feeling of the girl hugging her nose once more.

``Now I can hug you back.''

>She got on her haunches, flank landing firmly in her impact crater.

>Up came one of her forehooves, casting a shadow over the girl

>People feared for the worst, some opting to sprint out into the street for her.

>The hoof meanwhile traveled overhead safely.

>Ribbon rested it behind the girl, and gently pressed it against her snout.

>The girl gave a yelp of half surprise, half joy when she was pressed between the two walls of fur.

>Those would-be heroes backed off after realizing her intentions.

>Conversations broke out amongst the spectators as the hug continued.

>''It's just a... giant filly.''

>''How... normal.''

>''I know, right?''

>''This one's the most normal one that's appeared so far.''

>''You think she's related to any of them?''

>''Hopefully not that third one.''

>''Oh yeah, for sure.''

>A series of flashing lights caught everyone's attention.

>The mother gently pulled her child away as a fire engine pushed through the crowd.

>This particular vehicle had a few dents at the corners near the front and back.

>''Bye bye giant pony...''

``Bye bye little girl.''

>Ribbon looked at the girl with that same smile.

>The girl returned it as she clasped her mother's hand.

>''Do you have... a name?''

``Yes.  Ribbon.''

>''Hi Ribbon, I'm Suzie!''

>The filly noticed the engine had taken center stage in front of her form.

>Out of the cabin hopped a firefighter.

>Soon, the whole crew was looking on in awe.

>''So, why did we take this call again?''

>''Why do you think?''

>''Woah, another one?  Must be our lucky day!''

>''Or unlucky.''

>''Don't be such a downer!  Last one saved us; I've got my hopes up.''

>''Just sayin'.''

``Excuse me?''

>The side conversations dropped as the filly pulled her head up from the ground.

``I think... I'm lost.  I was wondering if... if you've seen Gabby.''

>The engine's driver took point on this one.

>''Who?''

>Ribbon tried again, using her forehooves to gesture a bit.

``You know, Gabby!  Purple hair, purple fur; wait, can you even call that fur?  Anyway, weird antennae-thingies coming out of her head behind her ears, long tail that isn't made out of hair, have you seen her?''

>The firefighters looked at each other, dumbstruck.

>''No way...''

>''It can't be.''

>''How?''

>''What are the odds?''

>Ribbon trained her yellow eyes on the crew.

``What's wrong?''

>The driver spoke up to her again.

>''Gabby, that was her name, right?''

``Yep!''

>''I think.... She's the one who got our truck off the roof.''

>The filly beamed.

``That sounds like something she'd do!''

>''Ribbon, was it?  We were on call at the time and--''

>''Not to mention scared out of our minds!''

>''Quiet, you!  Anyway, we were responding to an emergency, so we had to leave before we could see where she went...''

>Ribbon's ears drooped a bit.

>''That, was a few hours back.''

>One of the other firemen piped up.

>''The radio's been abuzz with something like a giant monster fight?  Like, something out of a terrible B-movie.  Sounds like she might have been involved.''

>The filly bolted to her hooves in a hurry, causing a tremor that set off car alarms and knocked everyone off their feet.

``Where was that?  How do I get there?''

>The driver picked himself up, using the truck for support.

>''Last bit I remember hearing suggests it was at the bay area.''

>He pointed down the street behind him.

>''You'll need to go that way until you see a park.  It's about 30 blocks or so from here.  Once you see it, any of the streets to your left will take you straight to the bay.''

>Ribbon crouched down and pushed her muzzle against the crew as a way of thanking them.

``Thank you so much!''

>The crew all tipped their hats.

>''No problem, ma'am.  Now, if you'll excuse us...''

>Everyone piled into the fire engine.

>One swift u-turn later, it charges off down the street, taking the first right turn that it can.

>Ribbon stood to her full height, unintentionally intimidating the bystanders who had gotten so close to her.

``Go this way until I see a park.  Got it.''

>The crowd in her way dispersed, allowing her safe travel.

>She looked down around her and waved.

``Uh, goodbye everyone!  Hope to see ya again!''

>She then got to walking, her steps gently shaking the surroundings.

>As she traveled into the distance, little Suzie was enthusiastically waving from the sidewalk.

>''Bye bye Ribbon!''

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