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Will have original upload dates posted in the description.", "count": "1177", "submission_left_submission_id": "3159019", "submission_left_file_name": "4747160_Speedy526745_c1.doc", "submission_right_submission_id": "3159026", "submission_right_file_name": "4747169_Speedy526745_c2.doc" }, { "pool_id": "89798", "name": "Portal Panic", "description": "A co-op story by myself and Hexus telling the tail of two big, strange mares being thrown into a world neither of them know amidst a catastrophe.", "count": "19", "submission_left_submission_id": "3159019", "submission_left_file_name": "4747160_Speedy526745_c1.doc", "submission_right_submission_id": "3159026", "submission_right_file_name": "4747169_Speedy526745_c2.doc" } ], "description": "[b]Original Post Date:[/b] May 21, 2017\n\nChapter 4 of 13\n\n[b]Cover:[/b] [url=https://inkbunny.net/s/3159004]Portal Panic Cover[/url]\n[b]First:[/b] [url=https://inkbunny.net/s/3159016]Portal Panic: Intro[/url]\n[b]Prev:[/b] [url=https://inkbunny.net/s/3159019]Portal Panic: Chapter C1[/url]\n[b]Next:[/b] [url=https://inkbunny.net/s/3159026]Portal Panic: Chapter C2[/url]\n\nAnd with that we now have our other protagonist! ", "description_bbcode_parsed": "Original Post Date: May 21, 2017

Chapter 4 of 13

Cover: Portal Panic Cover
First: Portal Panic: Intro
Prev: Portal Panic: Chapter C1
Next: Portal Panic: Chapter C2

And with that we now have our other protagonist! ", "writing": "-----------------------------------------------------------O1-------------------------------------------------------------\n\n>''Isn't it great?''\n\n>The voice echoed loud and true despite the absorbent padding along the ceiling.\n\n>It petered out with no response besides the water lapping gently at the edges of the massive moon pool that dominated the room.\n\n>Floodlights perched over a large doorway illuminated a lone, human figure.\n\n>He looked to either side, eyeballing a walkway encircling the inside rim of the domed chamber. \n\n>Just in front of him, stabbing into the darker center of the room, was a concrete pier extending from the door and walkway behind him.\n\n>Water splashed turbulently at the edges of the pier, going from inky black in the shadows to crystal clear whenever it spilled over the surface.\n\n>The sprawling moon pool was thick with alien strands; glowing blue lures that wavered back and forth under the slow current just outside of the floodlights\n\n>In the middle of them, a small island sat with a spiraling cone and two bizarre trees sprouting from a thick tangle of more strands.\n\n>The man arrived at the end of the pier and tapped his foot impatiently.\n\n>A pair of outcroppings backed by hardened plates pitched forward from beneath the waves, flicking water across the small sea.\n\n>The two massive ears were definitely trained on him now.\n\n>''I know you can hear me.''\n\n>The distinct beat of his shoes was joined by bubbles drifting to the surface, ruffling the disturbed pool further.\n\n>The spire reached higher and higher as the island hoisted itself upwards.\n\n>A gray, equine body slid from the depths, stopping when the surface lapped at the withers.\n\n>Water ran from the bushy strands of her mane, their tips still glowing as they draped across her forehead.\n\n>It splashed onto a darker plate of chitinous gray and below it, snaggleteeth poked out from a tight-lipped crevice.\n\n>The island opened its eyes, two electric blue spotlights coming to focus on the lone figure on the dock.\n\n>They groggily blinked at him.\n\n>Crocodilian nostrils flared in a deep sigh.\n\n>A menacing cavern slowly opened below them, teeth backlit by an electric blue from the throat.\n\n''Yes?''\n\n>The handler was clearly nonplussed at the rumbling, girlish voice.\n\n>''I know you're tired from the sparring, but you weren't listening at all, were you?''\n\n>The ears moved back, guiltily flicking water behind her.\n\n``Um, maybe...\"\n\n>The kaiju trailed off, massive form freezing in place.\n\n>The sea of swaying, twinkling lights around her suddenly ducked below the water with a whoosh.\n\n>''Something wrong with your tail?''\n\n>The kaiju turned her head side to side, searching for something.\n\n>The pair of drooping antennae opened their petals, exposing glowing cores.\n\n>The man looked between them in confusion while the equine monstrosity scanned the lapping waves.\n\n>\"Orchid?\"\n\n>A visible shiver ran down her body.\n\n>He started to step backwards as her eyes roved over him without stopping like he wasn't even there.\n\n>''What?s wrong?''\n\n>There came a rumble, deep and coursing.\n\n>The hallmark of tons of moving water.\n\n>An alien current slipped between her dangling tail strands.\n\n>She ducked her head below the water, searching in the darkened chamber until her projected searchlight fell across a strange object lurking in the waves.\n\n>She was staring at a ball floating just under the surface, trying to make sense of its deep, shimmering blue. \n\n>Slipping around its edges were confusing visions of the rest of the chamber that surrounded it.\n\n>The edges rippled and wavered with every passing second, like it was struggling to maintain its composure.\n\n>She could feel a pull coming from it.\n\n>Curious, she reached forward.\n\n>A flurry of bubbles escaped her jaws in a watery yelp as suction gripped at her hoof and part of the attached foreleg.\n\n>Suppressing the instinct to instantly pull back, her eyes widened further.\n\n>It wasn?t the suddenness that shocked her but what was inside the hole.\n\n>Besides the water rushing over her missing forehoof was nothing but a cool breeze and a tingling sensation.\n\n>She waved the limb around to find something solid to touch.\n\n>\"Orchid!\"\n\n>The domesticated kaiju snapped her view upwards to where a voice was calling over the water.\n\n>\"Get away, it?s another breach!\"\n\n>The many strands of her tail wound together, splitting and flattening out at the end into a fluke.\n\n>The mock whale?s tail beat up and down and the kaiju tore herself away.\n\n>Having lost its prize, the sphere started to fluctuate.\n\n>Pieces of it flared outwards like a miniature star.\n\n>The water stopped flowing as it spun out on its own and disappeared.\n\n>A tingle ran along her antennae as they jolted upright.\n\n>She followed them with a turn of her head.\n\n>Another void rested on the water.\n\n>This one was 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Breach in the den!''\n\n>The designated kaiju keeper turned away from the intercom and locked eyes with her.\n\n>Orchid reached a hoof outwards towards the figure, distorted by the turbulent water, her voice mixing with equal parts air and water as she gave one last cry.\n\n>She was dragged into it, swallowed up by the swirling mass.\n\n>The orb dissipated, spinning out into a cloud of bubbles without a trace of the kaiju creature.\n\n>The only sound that remained were siren claxons and a lone figure staring into the depths as the water gradually resettled. \n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "-----------------------------------------------------------O1-------------------------------------------------------------

>''Isn't it great?''

>The voice echoed loud and true despite the absorbent padding along the ceiling.

>It petered out with no response besides the water lapping gently at the edges of the massive moon pool that dominated the room.

>Floodlights perched over a large doorway illuminated a lone, human figure.

>He looked to either side, eyeballing a walkway encircling the inside rim of the domed chamber.

>Just in front of him, stabbing into the darker center of the room, was a concrete pier extending from the door and walkway behind him.

>Water splashed turbulently at the edges of the pier, going from inky black in the shadows to crystal clear whenever it spilled over the surface.

>The sprawling moon pool was thick with alien strands; glowing blue lures that wavered back and forth under the slow current just outside of the floodlights

>In the middle of them, a small island sat with a spiraling cone and two bizarre trees sprouting from a thick tangle of more strands.

>The man arrived at the end of the pier and tapped his foot impatiently.

>A pair of outcroppings backed by hardened plates pitched forward from beneath the waves, flicking water across the small sea.

>The two massive ears were definitely trained on him now.

>''I know you can hear me.''

>The distinct beat of his shoes was joined by bubbles drifting to the surface, ruffling the disturbed pool further.

>The spire reached higher and higher as the island hoisted itself upwards.

>A gray, equine body slid from the depths, stopping when the surface lapped at the withers.

>Water ran from the bushy strands of her mane, their tips still glowing as they draped across her forehead.

>It splashed onto a darker plate of chitinous gray and below it, snaggleteeth poked out from a tight-lipped crevice.

>The island opened its eyes, two electric blue spotlights coming to focus on the lone figure on the dock.

>They groggily blinked at him.

>Crocodilian nostrils flared in a deep sigh.

>A menacing cavern slowly opened below them, teeth backlit by an electric blue from the throat.

''Yes?''

>The handler was clearly nonplussed at the rumbling, girlish voice.

>''I know you're tired from the sparring, but you weren't listening at all, were you?''

>The ears moved back, guiltily flicking water behind her.

``Um, maybe..."

>The kaiju trailed off, massive form freezing in place.

>The sea of swaying, twinkling lights around her suddenly ducked below the water with a whoosh.

>''Something wrong with your tail?''

>The kaiju turned her head side to side, searching for something.

>The pair of drooping antennae opened their petals, exposing glowing cores.

>The man looked between them in confusion while the equine monstrosity scanned the lapping waves.

>"Orchid?"

>A visible shiver ran down her body.

>He started to step backwards as her eyes roved over him without stopping like he wasn't even there.

>''What?s wrong?''

>There came a rumble, deep and coursing.

>The hallmark of tons of moving water.

>An alien current slipped between her dangling tail strands.

>She ducked her head below the water, searching in the darkened chamber until her projected searchlight fell across a strange object lurking in the waves.

>She was staring at a ball floating just under the surface, trying to make sense of its deep, shimmering blue.

>Slipping around its edges were confusing visions of the rest of the chamber that surrounded it.

>The edges rippled and wavered with every passing second, like it was struggling to maintain its composure.

>She could feel a pull coming from it.

>Curious, she reached forward.

>A flurry of bubbles escaped her jaws in a watery yelp as suction gripped at her hoof and part of the attached foreleg.

>Suppressing the instinct to instantly pull back, her eyes widened further.

>It wasn?t the suddenness that shocked her but what was inside the hole.

>Besides the water rushing over her missing forehoof was nothing but a cool breeze and a tingling sensation.

>She waved the limb around to find something solid to touch.

>"Orchid!"

>The domesticated kaiju snapped her view upwards to where a voice was calling over the water.

>"Get away, it?s another breach!"

>The many strands of her tail wound together, splitting and flattening out at the end into a fluke.

>The mock whale?s tail beat up and down and the kaiju tore herself away.

>Having lost its prize, the sphere started to fluctuate.

>Pieces of it flared outwards like a miniature star.

>The water stopped flowing as it spun out on its own and disappeared.

>A tingle ran along her antennae as they jolted upright.

>She followed them with a turn of her head.

>Another void rested on the water.

>This one was bigger.

>Much bigger.

``Uh oh,'' the kaiju squeaked, and the water roared around her, sweeping her inside the mysterious ball.

>As she sank, she kicked with everything she had.

>Her tail thrashed, bringing her ear just high enough to hear over the rapidly forming whirlpool.

>''Breach! Breach in the den!''

>The designated kaiju keeper turned away from the intercom and locked eyes with her.

>Orchid reached a hoof outwards towards the figure, distorted by the turbulent water, her voice mixing with equal parts air and water as she gave one last cry.

>She was dragged into it, swallowed up by the swirling mass.

>The orb dissipated, spinning out into a cloud of bubbles without a trace of the kaiju creature.

>The only sound that remained were siren claxons and a lone figure staring into the depths as the water gradually resettled.

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