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They mess with your head a lot. So much that even when Spark and Spice finally find each other- it is not a happy reunion.", "description_bbcode_parsed": "Vexing Circles are bad. They mess with your head a lot. So much that even when Spark and Spice finally find each other- it is not a happy reunion.", "writing": "Sparkle and Sugar wandered quietly through the forest. The sun had risen and it was now about mid day. Shine had run off somewhere, and Sparkle had no specific desire to attempt to locate her. Nor did she have any specific hope that she would even if she tried. Things were looking less and less fortunate for the siblings.\n\"Tell me...tell me about your hat again.\" Sugar asked, as they marched long. She was dressed in a pair of jeans, and a grey, cashmere sweater that clung to her body as she walked. Sparkle was dressed in her typical attire. Black pants, a purple vest with a black shirt underneath and a black top hat that she rarely parted from. She sighed quietly at the remark, but knew what Sugar was trying to do. Trying to keep from panicking. They hadn't eaten anything in two day, the woods all looked the same, they'd barely slept, and Sparkle herself was beginning to think she wasn't going to get out of the woods alive. She gave a dark sigh and tugged the hat from her skull, looking at it curiously.\n\"Dazzler gave it to me, shortly after she adopted me. It's her old stage hat, when she used to wear one. Said I looked good in it....best thing I'd ever heard from anyone for some reason- so I took it. Happily. I'd uh...been studying magic since you got me that book from the library...when I was fifteen...shit....no...sixteen....was it...doesn't matter. I was young. And if I knew then, what I know now, I probably would have scared myself with what I did.\" Sparkle explained as they trudged along the forest. Every tree looked the same. Leaves scattered under their feet as they padded aimlessly.\n\"What did you discover?\" Sugar asked. Sparkle Shook her head.\n\"I took the weaving of a bag of holding, undid it, and then painted it black, and then put it back together inside my hat, but it wouldn't work the way you'd think it'd work. I took the weaving that made the bag, and re-enchanted it, to make it chaotic in nature. Ok, lemme back track. First of all, you can't enchant something twice. It doesn't really work. You need to disenchant it, and then enchant it again. That only works sometimes. What -I- did was enchant the same thing multiple times. Which is WRONG. I mean, it's...impossible...Uhh....The hat...What I did...ok. Basically, I created a small pocket dimension, and put it into the hat's interior. THEN, I created a weave of balance along the exterior to keep that dimension in check. But in order to make it so I could place things inside and take them out, I created a chaos weave enchantment to place inside the weave of balance I'd already created. And THEN in order to keep the chaos weave from getting out of control- because Chaos magic is impossible to control- ergo, Chaos- I introduce a balance enchantment. So, long story short. Hat. Turned the inside of the hat into a second dimension. THAT alone is fucking difficult as shit to accomplish. The portal to said dimension resides in the hat. The portal is laced with Balance, chaos, and then more balance, which have no business being together what so ever. I rewrote rules that were solid. I mean like, like If I made some discovery that acids and bases could go together and form a cure for cancer...I dunno. \" Sparkle sighed, tossing up her paws. \"Point is, my hat can hold a lot of things in a very little space. I'm pretty sure it's indestructible...It's one of my most treasured possessions....hey what about you?\" Spark asked suddenly. Sugar kept walking along behind her younger sister.\n\n\"About me?\"\n\"Yeah. Tell me about yourself, your job right now...what have you been up to?\" Sparkle asked. Sugar gave a sigh.\n\"Well...Right now, I'm working in the biology lab at the college. We're studying viral effects on other different virii. It's complicated.\" Sugar sighed. Spark gave a grin.\n\"So did you talk to him?\" She asked. Sugar frowned.\n\"Talked to who? What are you-\"\n\"There's a boy. Another professor, perhaps? Yeah that's right, there's someone there that you like.\" Sparkle grinned. She didn't even have to cast a glance over her shoulder to catch her older sister's blush.\n\"How dare you. There is absolutely no one in my lab that I have any sort of desire to...to...\"\n\"Fuck. Sugar, lemme tell you something hun. You keep denying yourself the things you want the most, and you'll never get anywhere in life. Sure, bury yourself in work, sure never look at that boy you wanna talk to. You maybe the sister who has the most money, but I'm undeniably richer then yo-\" Sparkle trailed off. She'd twisted around to look her sister in the eye, but now she was staring off into the distance, her jaw slowly going slack. Sugar stammered, shaking her head with a growing snarl in her throat, but she paused when she noticed Sparks glare into the distance. Spark was looking at something behind her. For a moment, Sugar wasn't sure whether she should turn around, or remain still, but Sparkle made the choice for her.\n\"Vanish!\" She barked, and Sugar gave a yelp, feeling a cool shivery sensation running through her body. She'd disappeared! She was still there, of course, but she'd become completely transparent!\n\"Spark what- \" She yelped, but Sparkle pushed her aside with a forceful jolt, staring quietly at whatever it was she was looking at- and that's when Sugar turned around and gasped.\n\nSpice was walking towards them. She was wearing her baggy cameo pants and a white shirt, but she looked like she'd been fighting. A lot. Which didn't make any sense, since the forest was empty.\n\"Spice...\" Spark said cautiously, watching the other wolf approach. She had her sword drawn, dragging it across the ground as she staggered towards her twin.\n\"Yer not real...none o' this is fucking real...sick o' this place...real sick of it...\" Spice mumbled as she trudged forwards towards her sister. Sparkle was beginning to dislike the way she was glaring at her.\n\"Spice....sweetie...It's me. It's Spark.\"\n\"Yeeeeeah. Sssssspark. Just like the one before. Gonna stab me in the back too? Huh? I'm gonna cut my way outta here....you'll see....stand aside or else...\" Spice snarled. Sparkle bit her lower lip. There was a one in a million chance that Spice and her would run into each other in a Vexing Circle. Really the odds were astronomical...it must have had something to do with their twin-sense.\n\"Spiiiice. It's me. It's Sparky...your sister. I'm really here, this isn't- \" Sparkle began, but yelped when Spice suddenly rushed towards her, swinging her sword with the deadly accuracy of a trained expert. She missed- due to lack of food, sleep, or both, but she only managed to slide through Sparkle's vest and shirt- she was unscathed.\n\"S, Stop! Spice, You're gonna kill me!\" Sparkle whimpered, leaping backwards to avoid the blade. Spice gave a low, tired growl.\n\"That's the idea.\" She hissed, and drove the sword forwards with a furious thrust. This time Sparkle had no choice but to Blink, the wolf instantly disappearing as Spice sliced her sword though the air were Sparkle had been standing moments ago. She reappeared next to her on her left, but Spice was trained in movement. The moment she cause the flash of Spark out of her peripheral vision she tossed out a sharp kick, catching the other wolf in the gut.\n\"ACK..S, Spice, it's me!\" Sparkle whimpered, stumbling back, both her arms crossing her stomach. Spice either wasn't listening, or didn't care. She turned towards Spark and unleashed a fury of harsh, deadly swings with her katana, slashing wildly, in the air, aiming for Sparkle's vitals. Sparkle, to her credit, dodged most of them. Either through a series of blinks, and carefully timed ducks and weaves. She wasn't a martial artist like Spice, but she was a twin, and she knew better then anyone how Spice though- and the mental process in which she used to decipher where to next blow should be. She did get slashed across the belly though. A light cut that barely nicked her fur, and didn't bleed much- but it hurt. Spice wasn't screwing around. She was trying to kill her, out right. Sparkle frowned a moment, bit her lower lip, and left back, conjuring a sharp burst of flames to her paw. Typical fireball spell. It wouldn't kill the crazed wolf, but it should slow her down.\n\"Spice! Knock it off!\" Sparkle snarled, projecting the flame towards her twin sibling. Spice, even though she was caught off guard by the blast of fire, sliced it in two with a clean slash of her sword, the fire ball melting away into the blade. Sparkle frowned. She knew that was going to happen, but she'd hoped somewhere deep inside of her, that Spice would be too tired, or too slow to avoid the blast. Sparkle had spent an entire year enchanting Spice's weapon of choice for her. The katana blade her martial art's master gave her was lined with mystic runes of Sparkle's creation along the blade, as was protected from magical sources, as was it's wielder. That said, the rune closest to the hilt of the sword suddenly turned red, glowing faintly with the absorbed energy of Sparkle's magic.\n\"That's something shy of good. \"Sparkle whimpered, as Spice took aim for a moment, and slashed her sword- a large burst of energy exploded from the blade. Magical energy that was stored in the sword, and took on it's shape- something that slammed directly into Sparkle's chest.\nIt was magical energy, of course, something that sparkle had discovered she was extremely resilient to, but it still knocked the wind out of her! The wolf went stumbling backwards, whimpering loudly as the fight took a turn for the worst.\n\n\n\n\"SPICE! You have to LISTEN TO ME! I'm not an illusion! I'm real! I'm really here! I'm your sister damn it!\" Sparkle whimpered, but Spice wasn't listening. The martial artist was backing the witch up, up, up, until Sparkle felt her back brush against a large tree behind her.\n\"Fuck me, Spice! Y, you're really going to kill me! I'm real! We've found each other!\" Sparkle whimpered. Spice raced forward, standing her sister through the stomach with the sword...or at least she thought she did. She she'd managed to do, was stab her sword deep into the tree in front of her- but Sparkle wasn't there. She'd teleported, or blinked, or vanished or something. \n\nFor a second, Spice frowned, trying to figure out what had happened, but she didn't have long. Out of seemingly no where, Sparkle blindsided her, tackling her from the side and into the dirty, leaf covered ground below, the two of them tumbling over one and other- before Spark let out a scream. The idea of the tackle had been to get her away from that sword- but Sparkle knew better then anyone that Spice ALWAYS had more then one blade on her. The wolf had pulled free a small dagger sized knife. A throwing blade of swords- and stabbed her in the shoulder with it. Immediately, Sparkle's arm began to gush a warm, crimson life fluid, her blood splattering all over Spice's arm and paws. For a moment, the pain blinded her, forcing her to take a deep breath and try and focus- but it just wasn't happening. Spice had her on the ground, trapped under the wolf's weight, and she was straddling Sparkle's hips. In her paws was another knife- quite similar to the one that was sticking out of Sparkle's arm. She had it raised high, over Spark's head, and quite ready to bring it down and end the charade. Sparkle gave a sharp gasped, closed her eyes, and reached up, wrapping both her paws around Spice's middle, and both of them vanished with a puff of purple smoke.\n\nSparkle shrieked as she tumbled though the air, next to Spice who was STILL trying to stab her. When Spark had grabbed Spice she had teleported them straight up. Directly up into the air, and nor gravity was taking it's course. The two of them were falling towards the earth below, and Sparkle was trying to hold onto Spice to keep her too close to get any good stabs in with her knife. As they plummeted to near certain doom, Sparkle twisted her body as best she could, until she was over top Spice as they fell.\nCRACK! A tree limb snapped as Spice slammed into it, the two of them descending slower as more and more Limbs broke their fall. CRACK! Another, CRACK another still!! And finally, With Sparkle clinging tightly to Spice, they slammed into the ground, Spice landing on her back with Spark slamming into Spice's front. She bounced from impact, when twirling through the air, and landed sprawled on the ground, her breathing coming out in slow, shallow gasps of pain.\n\"F...fff...AHHhhhh.....FUCK...ME!\" Spark groaned meekly, trying to sit up. She couldn't, and instead just lay where she was, trying to catch her breath.\n\"There is NO way I shoulda lived through that. \"Sparkle whimpered, coughing quietly as she struggled to get to her feet, tripped and stumbled back onto her ass with a whimper.\n\"HMmmmm....ahhhh\" Sparkle mumbled quietly, as she reached for her hat. It had fallen off and landed hear the tree during their fight, but seemed relatively unharmed. Quietly, Sparkle pulled free her flask of alcohol, and took a long, passionate drink.\n\"Spice is back...I'm not dead.....'s good day. \"She murmured.\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Sparkle and Sugar wandered quietly through the forest. The sun had risen and it was now about mid day. Shine had run off somewhere, and Sparkle had no specific desire to attempt to locate her. Nor did she have any specific hope that she would even if she tried. Things were looking less and less fortunate for the siblings.
"Tell me...tell me about your hat again." Sugar asked, as they marched long. She was dressed in a pair of jeans, and a grey, cashmere sweater that clung to her body as she walked. Sparkle was dressed in her typical attire. Black pants, a purple vest with a black shirt underneath and a black top hat that she rarely parted from. She sighed quietly at the remark, but knew what Sugar was trying to do. Trying to keep from panicking. They hadn't eaten anything in two day, the woods all looked the same, they'd barely slept, and Sparkle herself was beginning to think she wasn't going to get out of the woods alive. She gave a dark sigh and tugged the hat from her skull, looking at it curiously.
"Dazzler gave it to me, shortly after she adopted me. It's her old stage hat, when she used to wear one. Said I looked good in it....best thing I'd ever heard from anyone for some reason- so I took it. Happily.  I'd uh...been studying magic since you got me that book from the library...when I was fifteen...shit....no...sixteen....was it...doesn't matter. I was young. And if I knew then, what I know now,  I probably would have scared myself with what I did." Sparkle explained as they trudged along the forest. Every tree looked the same. Leaves scattered under their feet as they padded aimlessly.
"What did you discover?" Sugar asked. Sparkle Shook her head.
"I took the weaving of a bag of holding, undid it, and then painted it black, and then put it back together inside my hat, but it wouldn't work the way you'd think it'd work. I took the weaving that made the bag, and  re-enchanted it, to make it chaotic in nature. Ok, lemme back track. First of all, you can't enchant something twice. It doesn't really work. You need to disenchant it, and then enchant it again. That only works sometimes. What -I- did was enchant the same thing multiple times. Which is WRONG. I mean, it's...impossible...Uhh....The hat...What I did...ok. Basically, I created a small pocket dimension, and put it into the hat's interior. THEN, I created a weave of balance along the exterior to keep that dimension in check. But in order to make it so I could place things inside and take them out, I created a chaos weave enchantment to place inside the weave of balance I'd already created. And THEN in order to keep the chaos weave from getting out of control- because Chaos magic is impossible to control- ergo, Chaos- I introduce a balance enchantment.  So, long story short. Hat. Turned the inside of the hat into a second dimension. THAT alone is fucking difficult as shit to accomplish. The portal to said dimension resides in the hat. The portal is laced with Balance, chaos, and then more balance, which have no business being together what so ever. I rewrote rules that were solid. I mean like, like If I made some discovery that acids and bases could go together and form a cure for cancer...I dunno. " Sparkle sighed, tossing up her paws. "Point is, my hat can hold a lot of things in a very little space. I'm pretty sure it's indestructible...It's one of my most treasured possessions....hey what about you?" Spark asked suddenly. Sugar kept walking along behind her younger sister.

"About me?"
"Yeah. Tell me about yourself, your job right now...what have you been up to?" Sparkle asked. Sugar gave a sigh.
"Well...Right now, I'm working in the biology lab at the college. We're studying viral effects on other different virii. It's complicated." Sugar sighed. Spark gave a grin.
"So did you talk to him?" She asked. Sugar frowned.
"Talked to who? What are you-"
"There's a boy. Another professor, perhaps? Yeah that's right, there's someone there that you like." Sparkle grinned. She didn't even have to cast a glance over her shoulder to catch her older sister's blush.
"How dare you. There is absolutely no one in my lab that I have any sort of desire to...to..."
"Fuck. Sugar, lemme tell you something hun. You keep denying yourself the things you want the most, and you'll never get anywhere in life. Sure, bury yourself in work, sure never look at that boy you wanna talk to. You maybe the sister who has the most money, but I'm undeniably richer then yo-" Sparkle trailed off. She'd twisted around to look her sister in the eye, but now she was staring off into the distance, her jaw slowly going slack. Sugar stammered, shaking her head with a growing snarl in her throat, but she paused when she noticed Sparks glare into the distance. Spark was looking at something behind her. For a moment, Sugar wasn't sure whether she should turn around, or remain still, but Sparkle made the choice for her.
"Vanish!" She barked, and Sugar gave a yelp, feeling a cool shivery sensation running through her body. She'd disappeared! She was still there, of course, but she'd become completely transparent!
"Spark what- " She yelped, but Sparkle pushed her aside with a forceful jolt, staring quietly at whatever it was she was looking at- and that's when Sugar turned around and gasped.

Spice was walking towards them. She was wearing her baggy cameo pants and a white shirt, but she looked like she'd been fighting. A lot. Which didn't make any sense, since the forest was empty.
"Spice..." Spark said cautiously, watching the other wolf approach. She had her sword drawn, dragging it across the ground as she staggered towards her twin.
"Yer not real...none o' this is fucking real...sick o' this place...real sick of it..." Spice mumbled as she trudged forwards towards her sister. Sparkle was beginning to dislike the way she was glaring at her.
"Spice....sweetie...It's me. It's Spark."
"Yeeeeeah. Sssssspark. Just like the one before. Gonna stab me in the back too? Huh? I'm gonna cut my way outta here....you'll see....stand aside or else..." Spice snarled. Sparkle bit her lower lip. There was a one in a million chance that Spice and her would run into each other in a Vexing Circle. Really the odds were astronomical...it must have had something to do with their twin-sense.
"Spiiiice. It's me. It's Sparky...your sister. I'm really here, this isn't- " Sparkle began, but yelped when Spice suddenly rushed towards her, swinging her sword with the deadly accuracy of a trained expert. She missed- due to lack of food, sleep, or both, but she only managed to slide through Sparkle's vest and shirt- she was unscathed.
"S, Stop! Spice, You're gonna kill me!" Sparkle whimpered, leaping backwards to avoid the blade. Spice gave a low, tired growl.
"That's the idea." She hissed, and drove the sword forwards with a furious thrust. This time Sparkle had no choice but to Blink, the wolf instantly disappearing as Spice sliced her sword though the air were Sparkle had been standing moments ago. She reappeared next to her on her left, but Spice was trained in movement. The moment she cause the flash of Spark out of her peripheral vision she tossed out a sharp kick, catching the other wolf in the gut.
"ACK..S, Spice, it's me!" Sparkle whimpered, stumbling back, both her arms crossing her stomach. Spice either wasn't listening, or didn't care. She turned towards Spark and unleashed a fury of harsh, deadly swings with her katana, slashing wildly, in the air, aiming for Sparkle's vitals. Sparkle, to her credit, dodged most of them. Either through a series of blinks, and carefully timed ducks and weaves. She wasn't a martial artist like Spice, but she was a twin, and she knew better then anyone how Spice though- and the mental process in which she used to decipher where to next blow should be. She did get slashed across the belly though. A light cut that barely nicked her fur, and didn't bleed much- but it hurt.  Spice wasn't screwing around. She was trying to kill her, out right. Sparkle frowned a moment, bit her lower lip, and left back, conjuring a sharp burst of flames to her paw. Typical fireball spell. It wouldn't kill the crazed wolf, but it should slow her down.
"Spice! Knock it off!" Sparkle snarled, projecting the flame towards her twin sibling. Spice, even though she was caught off guard by the blast of fire, sliced it in two with a clean slash of her sword, the fire ball melting away into the blade. Sparkle frowned. She knew that was going to happen, but she'd hoped somewhere deep inside of her, that Spice would be too tired, or too slow to avoid the blast. Sparkle had spent an entire year enchanting Spice's weapon of choice for her. The katana blade her martial art's master gave her was lined with mystic runes of Sparkle's creation along the blade, as was protected from magical sources, as was it's wielder. That said, the rune closest to the hilt of the sword suddenly turned red, glowing faintly with the absorbed energy of Sparkle's magic.
"That's something shy of good. "Sparkle whimpered, as Spice took aim for a moment, and slashed her sword- a large burst of energy exploded from the blade. Magical energy that was stored in the sword, and took on it's shape- something that slammed directly into Sparkle's chest.
It was magical energy, of course, something that sparkle had discovered she was extremely resilient to, but it still knocked the wind out of her! The wolf went stumbling backwards, whimpering loudly as the fight took a turn for the worst.



"SPICE! You have to LISTEN TO ME! I'm not an illusion! I'm real! I'm really here! I'm your sister damn it!" Sparkle whimpered, but Spice wasn't listening. The martial artist was backing the witch up, up, up, until Sparkle felt her back brush against a large tree behind her.
"Fuck me, Spice! Y, you're really going to kill me! I'm real! We've found each other!" Sparkle whimpered. Spice raced forward, standing her sister through the stomach with the sword...or at least she thought she did. She she'd managed to do, was stab her sword deep into the tree in front of her- but Sparkle wasn't there. She'd teleported, or blinked, or vanished or something.  

For a second, Spice frowned, trying to figure out what had happened, but she didn't have long. Out of seemingly no where, Sparkle blindsided her, tackling her from the side and into the dirty, leaf covered ground below, the two of them tumbling over one and other- before Spark let out a scream. The idea of the tackle had been to get her away from that sword- but Sparkle knew better then anyone that Spice ALWAYS had more then one blade on her. The wolf had pulled free a small dagger sized knife. A throwing blade of swords- and stabbed her in the shoulder with it. Immediately, Sparkle's arm began to gush a warm, crimson life fluid, her blood splattering all over Spice's arm and paws. For a moment, the pain blinded her, forcing her to take a deep breath and try and focus- but it just wasn't happening. Spice had her on the ground, trapped under the wolf's weight,  and she was straddling Sparkle's hips. In her paws was another knife- quite similar to the one that was sticking out of Sparkle's arm. She had it raised high, over Spark's head, and quite ready to bring it down and end the charade.  Sparkle gave a sharp gasped, closed her eyes, and reached up, wrapping both her paws around Spice's middle, and both of them vanished with a puff of purple smoke.

Sparkle  shrieked as she tumbled though the air, next to Spice who was STILL trying to stab her. When Spark had grabbed Spice she had teleported them straight up.  Directly up into the air, and nor gravity was taking it's course. The two of them were falling towards the earth below, and Sparkle was trying to hold onto Spice to keep her too close to get any good stabs in with her knife. As they plummeted to near certain doom, Sparkle twisted her body as best she could, until she was over top Spice as they fell.
CRACK! A tree limb snapped as Spice slammed into it, the two of them descending slower as more and more Limbs broke their fall. CRACK! Another, CRACK another still!! And finally, With Sparkle clinging tightly to Spice, they slammed into the ground, Spice landing on her back with Spark slamming into Spice's front. She bounced from impact, when twirling through the air, and landed sprawled on the ground, her breathing coming out in slow, shallow gasps of pain.
"F...fff...AHHhhhh.....FUCK...ME!" Spark groaned meekly, trying to sit up. She couldn't, and instead just lay where she was, trying to catch her breath.
"There is NO way I shoulda lived through that. "Sparkle whimpered, coughing quietly as she struggled to get to her feet, tripped and stumbled back onto her ass with a whimper.
"HMmmmm....ahhhh" Sparkle mumbled quietly, as she reached for her hat. It had fallen off and landed hear the tree during their fight, but seemed relatively unharmed. Quietly, Sparkle pulled free her flask of alcohol, and took a long, passionate drink.
"Spice is back...I'm not dead.....'s good day. "She murmured.
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