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Still no word on the -brothers-", "writing": "Sparkle sat at the base of the tree nervously, her top hat pulled down over her head, but she was mumbling to herself, whimpering every now and then and shaking her head, much to the confusion of Sugar and Shine.\n\"Sparkle...Spark...?\" Sugar asked quietly, kneeling down next to her sister. Sparkle wasn't listening though. She was in a state of shock, it seemed, rocking back and forth against the tree where she sat.\n\"I think she's gone and finally lost it. Like, she's totally mental. \"Shine said quietly. Sugar, however, didn't pay any attention. Of all her siblings, Sparkle did seem the most unstable, but at the same time, she was the most stable. That only made sense in her head, though.\n\"Sparkle....Spark...can you tell me whats wrong? What has frightened you? Sparkle?\" Sugar asked quietly. Something was definitely wrong, Spark was rarely worried, unless there was good reason to be, and now she was huddled like a frightened child under the large dead tree she'd sat down under. It took a few minutes, but eventually, she looked up, silently, and bit her lower lip.\n\"I..I'm...I, I'm sorry...I'm sorry you guys...we walked right into it...wasn't even paying attention...walked right into it, wasn't paying attention. \"Sparkle mumbled quietly to herself, shaking her head. Sugar shot a glance towards Shine, as if Shine might have a clue to the wolf's cryptic words, but she gave no response in the nature Sugar had hoped for.\n\"Like...what are you talkin' about Omigosh, speak, like, english.\" The bubbly wolf sighed. Spark took a deep breath and closed her eyes.\n\"...Vexing circle. We walked into a Vexing Circle.\" Sparkle mumbled quietly, standing up and dusting herself off. Sugar tilted her head to one side, before her eyes lit up with curiosity.\n\"A vexing circle?! Is that...is that magical property of some kind? Some sort of malicious ground?\" Sugar asked, her voice raising with eagerness. Magic was the one thing Sugar knew nothing about in the entire world, and it tickled her to no end to find what little traces of knowledge she could on the subject.\n\nSparkle gave a deep sigh and knelt down to the ground again, beckoning to her siblings to do the same, although Shine refused, Sugar sat down instantly. Sparkle tugged her tophat off and held it up, and almost immediately, three brightly glowing globes of light whipped out, and surrounded the three, circling slowly. Sugar's eyes grew even larger, but Shine simply sighed.\n\"Like, this is pretty n' all, but it's like, getting late, or like, early, or whatever, and I'm so getting tired of- \"\n\"Hush.\" Sparkle, snapped, tossing her fingers towards the other wolf. The effects of the spell were instant- Shine's voice vanishing in her throat, leaving her without a sound Sugar looked up, but only for a second, and back to Spark, who was clearing leaves around from the dusty, dirty ground below.\n\"Ok. Blair Witch Project. It's an old movie, buncha kids, err, teens, go out, lookin' for this witch right? They can't find her, but they get lost in the woods, and weird shit starts happenin' to them. Uh....so uh...that's a vexing circle, right? There's uh....circles uh....It's like this. \"Sparkle explained, when she saw Sugar wasn't comprehending what she was trying to say. She drew a large circle on the ground, whimpering as she did so, and then drew several small X's inside of it.\n\"A vexing circle, essentially, creates a uh...it's a uh....fuck....fuck...it's...Ok. Basically, there's only one way into a forest. You can only get half way before your going out of a forest. Vexing circle, makes it so you never get half way. That's...it's bad magic. It's...it's real bad...and we're dead in the middle of it. We're right, fuck square in the middle of nowhere, and that's where we stay. See, see the X's here? Ok...so in the movie, right, they uh...they kids, right? The kids walked, and they walked...\" Sparkle explained, drawing a line from one of the X's to another.\n\"But the problem, is that when your in a vexing circle, you can't get out. So uh, we're walking, and we get to this X here, and the area turns. Like, north, becomes east, east becomes south, south becomes west, west becomes north. Whole area shifts the fuck around. North will always face north, but suddenly, north is behind you, and when it faces north again, north is to the right, you know? So, it confuses you. The longer your in a fucking vexing circle, the more it messes with your head. You start seein' stuff, start hearing stuff. Crazy stuff, you know. Most of it has nothing to do with the magic, most of it is just...panic, and hunger, and, it's a trap. It's like a snare trap for a witch.\" Sparkle explained nervously, biting at her lower lip. Sugar studied the diagram for a moment or two and closed her eyes before she adjusted the glasses over her muzzle.\n\"Options. \" She sad solemnly. Sparkle bit her lower lip and sighed.\n\"Uh....Options....yeah.....well...Well...well we gotta....we can uh....options. \"Sparkle mumbled quietly to herself.\n\"We...we we gotta...gotta break the circle...or at least, figure out how to get out of it. If we get separated I'll probably never see you guys again. Probably...and uh...if uh...if we don't break the circle, I'm never gonna see Spice again. In order to break the circle, we gotta find the circle's focus point...there's one in every circle....trick is, finding it. It's...It's gonna be hard without being able to consult my book. Sugar, I need your help her.\" Sparkle whimpered. Sugar smiled. She asked flat out smiled, and nodded her head.\n\"OK! What can I do? What do you want me to do!?\" She asked, her tail giving a wag. Sparkle raised an eyebrow.\n\"First, I need to help keep Shine calm.\" She sighed, and stood up, While Sugar gave Sparkle a quizzled look.\n\"Alright Shine. Listen up and listen good. Me, Sparkle, your sister. I'm a witch. Real thing. None of this hocus pocus, on stage stuff, I mean I sling fireballs from my paws, I can fly on a broom, I cast spells. You know, magic. REAL, magic. You understand? We are in trouble. This, is serious, because we, WILL die, if you don't listen to me, ok? You can't talk right now. The reason is, I just cursed you. I took away your voice so I could concentrate, ok? That what I did, I'm going to give it back to you, but you have to keep it together. Don't freak out, I nee, I need your help here.\" Sparkle said nervously, and snapped her fingers. Shine, who had been rubbing at her throat, and trying disparately, to say anything, slowly, looked towards her older sister curiously.\n\"....how...did you like, totally...do that?\" She growled. Sparkle gave a sigh.\n\"I'm a witch. I cast spells. I cast curses. I am a witch.\"\n\"...W...witches....t, that stuff, is like T.v. and junk. \"\n\"Shine, it's very important you listen to me now. Ok. I'm a witch. I can use magic. Ok.\"\n\"...no...no that's no ok. Since when are you a witch?! SINCE WHEN?!\"\n\"Since I was eight...or nine. Doesn't really matter, look we just- \"\n\"NO! NO! What...I wanna go home?! Why did you bring me out here?! OMIGWD! You're gonna take my soul, or some junk, aren't you?! OMIGAWD THAT'S WHAT THIS IS?! YOU REALLY ARE GONNA KILL ME!!! OMIGAWD!!\" Shine shrieked, and with that, she turned heel, and ran as fast as she could.\n\"NO!!! SHINE, DON'T RUN!! SNARE!!\" Sparkle shrieked, tossing her arm out towards her sister. Before Shine could get to far, weeds and vines snaked out of the ground, and wrapped around her legs, bringing her down to the ground with a solid THUD, rotting her to the spot.\n\"LEGGO ME! YOU CAN'T HAVE MY SOUL! I DON'T WANNA DIE! STOP IT!! LEMME GO! SOMEBODY HELP!!\" Shine shrieked, but no one answered her plea.\n\"YANK!\" Sparkle snapped, with a growl, pulling her arm from Shine firmly, as if she were pulling a rope. Suddenly, Shine went flying through the air, pulled by an invisible tether that had magically wrapped itself around her chest and the two wolves collided together. Meanwhile, Sugar sat by the base of the tree, her tail wagging wildly, as she watched real magic being put to applicable use.\n\"NO! GET OFF ME! LET ME GO! I HATE YOU!\" Shine shrieked, kicking and flailing wildly, catching Spark in the jaw with a wild punch. Spark growled, doing her best to subdue her sister but only caught another blo to the stomach.\n\"AHHH, SHINE! JUST CALM DOWN! I'm not gonna eat your soul!! I won't! JUST RELAX!\"\n\"NO! LIKE, GET OFF! I DON'T WANNA BE USED IN A SPELL! NO MORE CURSES!! \"\n\"I'M TRYING TO HELP YOU!\" Sparkle snarled and yelped, when Shine caught her in the face with an elbow. Struggling to get free, the other wolf got to her feet, and took a nervous few steps back.\n\"FREAKS! Y, YOU'RE A FAMILY OF FREAKS! FUCK THIS! FUCK THIS FOREST, FUCK THE STUPID CASTLE, FUCK WITCHES! IF I'D KNOWN YOU WERE A WITCH I WOULD HAVE HELPED DAD KILL YOU!\"\nThey stared. They stared at each other for a long time, as silence filled the forest, and Shine bite her lower lip.\n\"S...Sparky....I didn't mean ....I didn't mean to say that.\" She mumbled quietly. Sparkle was trying to say something, but instead she just pointed a finger at her sibling, who, turned around, and quickly ran away before anything else could be said. Shine was gone, and Sparkle couldn't find the words to call her back. Quietly, she staggered back over to Sugar, who looked like she wanted to say something but held her muzzle shut. Sparkle bent down and grabbed her hat, reached into it, and fished out what looked like a flask. Sugar found her voice.\n\"I...don't think that will be particularly useful given the current situation. \"She said, her voice quiet, but stern like usual. She cast a side glance at the girl, and then back to the flask in her paws.\n\"I need this.\" She said hoarsely. Sugar shook her head.\n\"I...I don't think you do. \"\n\"Then I really....REALLY want it.\" Sparkle hissed. Sugar gently nodded her head, but instead Sparkle sat down at the base of the tree, and buried her muzzle in her paws, crying silent tears. She's just let two sisters die tonight.\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Sparkle sat at the base of the tree nervously, her top hat pulled down over her head, but she was mumbling to herself, whimpering every now and then and shaking her head, much to the confusion of Sugar and Shine.
"Sparkle...Spark...?" Sugar asked quietly, kneeling down next to her sister. Sparkle wasn't listening though. She was in a state of shock, it seemed, rocking back and forth against the tree where she sat.
"I think she's gone and finally lost it. Like, she's totally mental. "Shine said quietly. Sugar, however, didn't pay any attention. Of all her siblings, Sparkle did seem the most unstable, but at the same time, she was the most stable. That only made sense in her head, though.
"Sparkle....Spark...can you tell me whats wrong? What has frightened you? Sparkle?" Sugar asked quietly. Something was definitely wrong, Spark was rarely worried, unless there was good reason to be, and now she was huddled like a frightened child under the large dead tree she'd sat down under. It took a few minutes, but eventually, she looked up, silently, and bit her lower lip.
"I..I'm...I, I'm sorry...I'm sorry you guys...we walked right into it...wasn't even paying attention...walked right into it, wasn't paying attention. "Sparkle mumbled quietly to herself, shaking her head. Sugar shot a glance towards Shine, as if Shine might have a clue to the wolf's cryptic words, but she gave no response in the nature Sugar had hoped for.
"Like...what are you talkin' about Omigosh, speak, like, english." The bubbly wolf sighed. Spark took a deep breath and closed her eyes.
"...Vexing circle. We walked into a Vexing Circle." Sparkle mumbled quietly, standing up and dusting herself off. Sugar tilted her head to one side, before her eyes lit up with curiosity.
"A vexing circle?! Is that...is that magical property of some kind? Some sort of malicious ground?" Sugar asked, her voice raising with eagerness. Magic was the one thing Sugar knew nothing about in the entire world, and it tickled her to no end to find what little traces of knowledge she could on the subject.

Sparkle gave a deep sigh and knelt down to the ground again, beckoning to her siblings to do the same, although Shine refused, Sugar sat down instantly. Sparkle tugged her tophat off and held it up, and almost immediately, three brightly glowing globes of light whipped out, and surrounded the three, circling slowly. Sugar's eyes grew even larger, but Shine simply sighed.
"Like, this is pretty n' all, but it's like, getting late, or like, early, or whatever, and I'm so getting tired of- "
"Hush." Sparkle, snapped, tossing her fingers towards the other wolf. The effects of the spell were instant- Shine's voice vanishing in her throat, leaving her without a sound Sugar looked up, but only for a second, and back to Spark, who was clearing leaves around from the dusty, dirty ground below.
"Ok. Blair Witch Project. It's an old movie, buncha kids, err, teens, go out, lookin' for this witch right? They can't find her, but they get lost in the woods, and weird shit starts happenin' to them. Uh....so uh...that's a vexing circle, right? There's uh....circles uh....It's like this. "Sparkle explained, when she saw Sugar wasn't comprehending what she was trying to say. She drew a large circle on the ground, whimpering as she did so, and then drew several small X's inside of it.
"A vexing circle, essentially, creates a uh...it's a uh....fuck....fuck...it's...Ok. Basically, there's only one way into a forest. You can only get half way before your going out of a forest. Vexing circle, makes it so you never get half way. That's...it's bad magic. It's...it's real bad...and we're dead in the middle of it. We're right, fuck square in the middle of nowhere, and that's where we stay. See, see the X's here? Ok...so in the movie, right, they uh...they kids, right? The kids walked, and they walked..." Sparkle explained, drawing a line from one of the X's to another.
"But the problem, is that when your in a vexing circle, you can't get out. So uh, we're walking, and we get to this X here, and the area turns. Like, north, becomes east, east becomes south, south becomes west, west becomes north. Whole area shifts the fuck around. North will always face north, but suddenly, north is behind you,  and when it faces north again, north is to the right, you know? So, it confuses you. The longer your in a fucking vexing circle, the more it messes with your head. You start seein' stuff, start hearing stuff. Crazy stuff, you know. Most of it has nothing to do with the magic, most of it is just...panic, and hunger, and, it's a trap. It's like a snare trap for a witch."  Sparkle explained nervously, biting at her lower lip. Sugar studied the diagram for a moment or two and closed her eyes before she adjusted the glasses over her muzzle.
"Options. " She sad solemnly. Sparkle bit her lower lip and sighed.
"Uh....Options....yeah.....well...Well...well we gotta....we can uh....options. "Sparkle mumbled quietly to herself.
"We...we we gotta...gotta break the circle...or at least, figure out how to get out of it. If we get separated I'll probably never see you guys again. Probably...and uh...if uh...if we don't break the circle, I'm never gonna see Spice again. In order to break the circle, we gotta find the circle's focus point...there's one in every circle....trick is, finding it. It's...It's gonna be hard without being able to consult my book. Sugar, I need your help her." Sparkle whimpered. Sugar smiled. She asked flat out smiled, and nodded her head.
"OK! What can I do? What do you want me to do!?" She asked, her tail giving a wag. Sparkle raised an eyebrow.
"First, I need to help keep Shine calm."  She sighed, and stood up, While Sugar gave Sparkle a quizzled look.
"Alright Shine. Listen up and listen good. Me, Sparkle, your sister. I'm a witch. Real thing. None of this hocus pocus, on stage stuff, I mean I sling fireballs from my paws, I can fly on a broom, I cast spells. You know, magic. REAL, magic. You understand? We are in trouble. This, is serious, because we, WILL die, if you don't listen to me, ok? You can't talk right now. The reason is, I just cursed you. I took away your voice so I could concentrate, ok? That what I did, I'm going to give it back to you, but you have to keep it together. Don't freak out, I nee, I need your help here." Sparkle said nervously, and snapped her fingers. Shine, who had been rubbing at her throat, and trying disparately, to say anything, slowly, looked towards her older sister curiously.
"....how...did you like, totally...do that?" She growled. Sparkle gave a sigh.
"I'm a witch. I cast spells. I cast curses. I am a witch."
"...W...witches....t, that stuff, is like T.v. and junk. "
"Shine, it's very important you listen to me now. Ok. I'm a witch. I can use magic. Ok."
"...no...no that's no ok. Since when are you a witch?! SINCE WHEN?!"
"Since I was eight...or nine. Doesn't really matter, look we just- "
"NO! NO! What...I wanna go home?! Why did you bring me out here?! OMIGWD! You're gonna take my soul, or some junk, aren't you?! OMIGAWD THAT'S WHAT THIS IS?! YOU REALLY ARE GONNA KILL ME!!! OMIGAWD!!" Shine shrieked, and with that, she turned heel, and ran as fast as she could.
"NO!!! SHINE, DON'T RUN!! SNARE!!" Sparkle shrieked, tossing her arm out towards her sister. Before Shine could get to far, weeds and vines snaked out of the ground, and wrapped around her legs, bringing her down to the ground with a solid THUD, rotting her to the spot.
"LEGGO ME! YOU CAN'T HAVE MY SOUL! I DON'T WANNA DIE! STOP IT!! LEMME GO! SOMEBODY HELP!!" Shine shrieked, but no one answered her plea.
"YANK!" Sparkle snapped, with a growl, pulling her arm from Shine firmly, as if she were pulling a rope. Suddenly, Shine went flying through the air, pulled by an invisible tether that had magically wrapped itself around her chest and the two wolves collided together. Meanwhile, Sugar sat by the base of the tree, her tail wagging wildly, as she watched real magic being put to applicable use.
"NO! GET OFF ME! LET ME GO! I HATE YOU!" Shine shrieked, kicking and flailing wildly, catching Spark in the jaw with a wild punch. Spark growled, doing her best to subdue her sister but only caught another blo to the stomach.
"AHHH, SHINE! JUST CALM DOWN! I'm not gonna eat your soul!! I won't! JUST RELAX!"
"NO! LIKE, GET OFF! I DON'T WANNA BE USED IN A SPELL! NO MORE CURSES!! "
"I'M TRYING TO HELP YOU!" Sparkle snarled and yelped, when Shine caught her in the face with an elbow. Struggling to get free, the other wolf got to her feet, and took a nervous few steps back.
"FREAKS! Y, YOU'RE A FAMILY OF FREAKS! FUCK THIS! FUCK THIS FOREST, FUCK THE STUPID CASTLE, FUCK WITCHES! IF I'D KNOWN YOU WERE A WITCH I WOULD HAVE HELPED DAD KILL YOU!"
They stared. They stared at each other for a long time, as silence filled the forest, and Shine bite her lower lip.
"S...Sparky....I didn't mean ....I didn't mean to say that." She mumbled quietly. Sparkle was trying to say something, but instead she just pointed a finger at her sibling, who, turned around, and quickly ran away before anything else could be said. Shine was gone, and Sparkle couldn't find the words to call her back. Quietly, she staggered  back over to Sugar, who looked like she wanted to say something but held her muzzle shut. Sparkle bent down and grabbed her hat, reached into it, and fished out what looked like a flask. Sugar found her voice.
"I...don't think that will be particularly useful given the current situation. "She said, her voice quiet, but stern like usual. She cast a side glance at the girl, and then back to the flask in her paws.
"I need this." She said hoarsely. Sugar shook her head.
"I...I don't think you do. "
"Then I really....REALLY want it." Sparkle hissed. Sugar gently nodded her head, but instead Sparkle sat down at the base of the tree, and buried her muzzle in her paws, crying silent tears. She's just let two sisters die tonight.
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