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", "writing": "Sugar had bought a castle or something off the market. She'd originally, asked Sparkle to come along to check for any magical, or super natural presence, considering she was a witch. Spice was also selected, due to her martial arts training, and quick reflexes, -not to mention she was on vacation from her duties and bored. Shine came along, because it was a family outing, and she too was bored. This is the car ride that ensued.\n\n\n\"So, like, anyway, I'm gonna be in this movie! Isn't that like, totally awesome!? I play this teacher, who's like, totally a spy for like, some British agency or some junk. So, like I totally have to like, start talking with like, a British accent.\" Shine explained happily, her tail flickering about wildly in the backseat of the car. Sparkle glared out the windows, watching the dead and black trees whip by as they traveled along. She was doing her absolute very best to ignore everything coming out of Shine's mouth, but it was getting harder, and harder and harder to do so.\n\"So, like, I think I like, need to read up on like, Britain and some junk, but I don't like books too much. You know, all that reading is totally hard on my brain. I wish there was, like a place, so that I could like, just rent books instead of buying them, you know? And when I was finished with them, I could totally give them back? Oh, mi, gawd, that is a brilliant idea! I am so totally a genius! It'll be like a movie rental store, only instead, you can rent books! That's genius, it'll totally be for like smart people!\" Shine squealed.\n\"Stop talking.\" Spark groaned.\n\"And we'll like, totally turn a profit, cause like, we'll like, surprise people with it! We'll totally say, like, the books are free, but if they don't return them on time, we'll charge a fee!\" Shine squealed happily, her eyes wide with the new prospect churning in her head.\n\"You're hurting me.\" Sparkle whined. Shine, however, twisted towards her elder sister and gave a snort.\n\"You're just jealous cause I thought of it first, and I'm like, totally gonna make thousands of dollars n' stuff. I'm gonna be a millionaire. \"Shine grinned, sticking her tongue out at her sister. Sparkle's eye twitched involuntarily.\n\"I think I'll call it, like, Books for rent! That's a good name, right?\" Shine grinned. Sparkle, twisted around in her seat, paws clenched, and raised towards Shine's throat.\n\"IT'S CALLED A LIBARARY!! THEY EXIST! THEY'VE EXISTED FOR A WHILE NOW! REMAIN STILL SO THAT I MAY CHOKE THE STUPID FROM YOUR HEAD!!\" Spark shrieked. Spice chuckled quietly in the front seat while the can trudged along through the dark forest. Shine blinked a moment or two, ears twitching as the word \"Library\" struck a cord somewhere in her head.\n\"...I thought, like, those were only in schools n' junk. You mean they've got em out side of schools too?\"\n\"Yes. Shine. There are librarys that exist outside of school. If you say \"like\" one more time, I will beat you to death with a thesaurus.\" Spark hissed quietly. Shine rolled her eyes and waved a paw at her sibling in a dismissive manner.\n\"Hahaha, suuuure Sparky. Sounds like you need to spend more time in one of your \"Libraries\" everybody knows dinosaurs are extinct.\"\n\"You are a testament to all that is wrong with society. Surely you are aware of that Shine? You are like the Anti-Christ of intelligence. Being near you, is draining my own IQ.\" Sparkle snarled. Shine rolled her eyes and reached over, patting her sister on the knee.\n\"Oh don't be so grouchy! Come on Sparky, show me one of your cute little magic tricks! It'll help pass the time! Shine beamed. Sparkle, nodded her head slowly.\n\"Oh, I've got a doozy for ya sis. First, we'll need you in a blindfold, and then I need to be holding a Louisville Slugger...\" Sparkle growled. At this point, Spice, who was in the front passenger seat burst into giggles, while Sugar- in the drivers seat, merely sighed, and continued along the forgotten forest road. Spark gave a snarl to her siblings in front of her.\n\"And just WHAT is so funny? Why the hell am I in the BACKSEAT next to HER anyway?! You've lost your minds if you think I am incapable of sibling homicide.\" Sparkle snarled. Spice shook her head with a grin.\n\"Cause yer funny, that's why.\" She snickered. Spark narrowed her eyes.\n\"Won't be funny when I stuff my cane up your butt. Will it? Will it be funny then Spice? Come on, bitch, I wanna see you giggle!\" Spark hissed. Shine giggled quietly, shaking her head.\n\"See? She's so grouchy, all the time. Sparkle, when's the last time you got laid?\" Shine squeaked, forcing Spice to double over in laughter.\n\"Cause, like a nice thick cock always does the trick when I feel grouchy. Have you had a nice thick cock lately Sparky?\"\n\"I am going to jump out of the car. Please don't attempt to restrain me. Thank you. \" Sparkle whined softly, reaching for the handle to the door. Shine rolled her eyes.\n\"Well, look, if you NEED a weenie, I'd be willing to give you the number to one of my friends. He's not picky, so he'd be perfect for you.\"\n\"Scratch that. I'm tossing you out of the car. Please disregard any advice you may have heard about \"Tuck and roll.\" Spark growled, her paws twisting into tight, furious fists. Shine didn't notice.\n\"Alright, I heard some like, rumors, that like, you might be a lesbian. Which is sad, really, cause there are some really decent boys out there. Like good looking n' junk. I'll introduce you to some if you like, totally wanna get better?\" Shine smiled. Sparkle rubbed the bridge of her nose. She was doing it on purpose. There was no way on earth anyone was that dumb. It just wasn't possible.\n\"Shine, while I appreciate your attempts to give me six different cases of syphilis- like you, I think I'll pass.\" Sparkle groaned.\n\"What's a syphilis?\"\n\"A great pick up line. Next time your in a bar, smile at a cute boy and say \"Hi, I have syphilis! Wanna come back to my place?\"\" Sparkle quipped. Shine's muzzle took on a far away look and her eyes widened.\n\"Omigawd! Will that really get me boys?!\" She asked.\n\"You have to PROMISE me to bring me with you, if you actually go ahead and do that.\"\n\"Omigawd, totally! We'll go like, clubbing or some junk! We'll be like sisters!\"\n\"We ARE sisters.\"\n\"Omigawd for serious?! Get OUT! No WAY! US! It's like we have the same mom or some junk?!\n\"Stop it.\"\n\"Seriously?! US?! SISTERS?! YOU AND ME SPARKY?!\n\"Stop it.\"\n\"Hey, Spice?! Did you know we were sisters?! ME and Sparky are Sister's! Holy crap! Sugar did you know that?! \"\n\"SPICE I SWEAR TO GOD I'LL FILL YOUR BED WITH SCORPIONS IF YOU DON'T KNOCK THAT OFF!\" Sparkle hollered. Sugar gave a groan, leaning forward on the steering wheel, while Spice struggled to breathe, listening to the banter in the back seat, and Shine just looked confused.\n\"I...I'm Shine- that's Spice.\" She explained slowly, as if Sparkle wasn't all there. The other wolf gave a tired sigh and buried her head in her paws.\n\"You're like an intelligence vampire. You're just sucking my IQ directly out of my head. Stop it. \"\n\"I thought zombies ate brains. \" Shine whimpered. Sparkle sighed.\n\"Not brains, IQ, you fuck factory.\"\n\"No no Sparky, Zombies eat brains. Everybody knows that. \"Shine explained. Sparkle's eye twitched.\n\"Stop the car. I'm having an aneurysm.\" She whined. Shine quickly began shaking her paws, up and down, squeaking and squeeling with glee.\n\"Omigawd, Omigawd! I saw this on ER! I can fix an aneurysm! First, we need to boil some water, and then tear up some sheets!\" She squealed.\n\"S, sthop...Stop...stop you guys, I'm gonna die!\" Spice laughed in the front seat. Sparkle turned towards her younger sister, and glared an angry, angry glare. Shine didn't notice.\n\"Hey guys, when we like get to the castle- I totally get to be queen. That's cool, right? Guys? Queen, right? Oh mi, gawd, I'll get to tell my friends I got to be queen of a real castle! That is so awesome! I mean, I'll get a cape, and a crown, and one of those stick thingies they have and I'll get to knight people, and fight with monsters, And get some squire boys, and royal horsies, with great big peenies to fill my tight little-\n\"HUSH!\" Sparkle snapped, a bright white burst of energy filling the car and illuminating the dark, dead forest outside. Shine blinked, opened her muzzle in confusion, but no words came out. Sparkle, sighed deeply, leaned back against her chair and closed her eyes. Peace, and quiet, at last.\n\"Huh....Sparkle, did you just cast a...\" Spice asked slowly. Spark gave a quiet whine.\n\"Yes.\" She groaned. Sugar and Spice looked at each other slowly, and Spice peered back into the seat behind her, where Shine was wildly trying to get words to come from her pretty little muzzle- but she wasn't doing a good job.\n\"So...we're not hiding the \"witch\" thing from her any longer?\"\n\"Oh, I don't know about that. I think she just talked so much her voice gave out...zat what happened lil sis? Can't talk anymore? Voice don't work?\" Sparkle asked slowly, while Shine's eyes grew wide, her lips flapping helplessly- but she found to no avail any speech.\nSpice grinned and glanced at Sugar slowly, who was still driving the car at a snails pace through the twisting turning woods.\n\"Heeheehee, you owe me one hundred bucks...told ya she'd snap.\" Spice grinned. Spark gave a quiet snarl.\n\"...Spice...Sugar....I'm going to go ahead and assume, that my entire trip in the back seat, nest to Shine, wasn't some sort of experiment on Sugar's part, to get me to use magic under duress. \" Sparkle hissed. Spice giggled, shaking her head.\n\"Naw, Sugs, jus wanted ta' see how long it'd take you to flip out n' cast and spell n' shit while you were pissed off.\" She snickered. Sparkle slowly nodded her head, leaning in close to wedge herself between the two front seats and quietly peered at her siblings.\n\"Sugar. You know for a fact, that all you had to do was ask me, and I'd cast whatever you wanted me to...on Shine. Please ask me to kill Shine. Spice. Betting on your own sister. Shame on you. I hate you. Both of you. All of you. I hate all of you. \"Sparkle growled, sitting back into her seat and pouting. Spice giggled.\n\"Sure does seem like you need some weenie Sparkle!\" Spice giggled- and yelped when her sister tried to choke her to death with her own seat belt. The next few minutes, after the attempted homicide, was spent in silence, until the car gave a groan, sputtered, choked, and ran out of gas...\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Sugar had bought a castle or something off the market. She'd originally, asked Sparkle to come along to check for any magical, or super natural presence, considering she was a witch. Spice was also selected, due to her martial arts training, and quick reflexes, -not to mention she was on vacation from her duties and bored. Shine came along, because it was a family outing, and she too was bored. This is the car ride that ensued.


"So, like, anyway, I'm gonna be in this movie! Isn't that like, totally awesome!? I play this teacher, who's like, totally a spy for like, some British agency or some junk. So, like I totally have to like, start talking with like, a British accent." Shine explained happily, her tail flickering about wildly in the backseat of the car. Sparkle glared out the windows, watching the dead and black trees whip by as they traveled along. She was doing her absolute very best to ignore everything coming out of Shine's mouth, but it was getting harder, and harder and harder to do so.
"So, like, I think I like, need to read up on like, Britain and some junk, but I don't like books too much. You know, all that reading is totally hard on my brain. I wish there was, like a place, so that I could like, just rent books instead of buying them, you know? And when I was finished with them, I could totally give them back? Oh, mi, gawd, that is a brilliant idea! I am so totally a genius! It'll be like a movie rental store, only instead, you can rent books! That's genius, it'll totally be for like smart people!" Shine squealed.
"Stop talking." Spark groaned.
"And we'll like, totally turn a profit, cause like, we'll like, surprise people with it! We'll totally say, like, the books are free, but if they don't return them on time, we'll charge a fee!" Shine squealed happily, her eyes wide with the new prospect churning in her head.
"You're hurting me." Sparkle whined. Shine, however, twisted towards her elder sister and gave a snort.
"You're just jealous cause I thought of it first, and I'm like, totally gonna make thousands of dollars n' stuff. I'm gonna be a millionaire. "Shine grinned, sticking her tongue out at her sister. Sparkle's eye twitched involuntarily.
"I think I'll call it, like, Books for rent! That's a good name, right?" Shine grinned. Sparkle, twisted around in her seat, paws clenched, and raised towards Shine's throat.
"IT'S CALLED A LIBARARY!! THEY EXIST! THEY'VE EXISTED FOR A WHILE NOW! REMAIN STILL SO THAT I MAY CHOKE THE STUPID FROM YOUR HEAD!!" Spark shrieked. Spice chuckled quietly in the front seat while the can trudged along through the dark forest. Shine blinked a moment or two, ears twitching as the word "Library" struck a cord somewhere in her head.
"...I thought, like, those were only in schools n' junk. You mean they've got em out side of schools too?"
"Yes. Shine. There are librarys that exist outside of school. If you say "like" one more time, I will beat you to death with a thesaurus." Spark hissed quietly. Shine rolled her eyes and waved a paw at her sibling in a dismissive manner.
"Hahaha, suuuure Sparky. Sounds like you need to spend more time in one of your "Libraries" everybody knows dinosaurs are extinct."
"You are a testament to all that is wrong with society. Surely you are aware of that Shine? You are like the Anti-Christ of intelligence. Being near you, is draining my own IQ." Sparkle snarled. Shine rolled her eyes and reached over, patting her sister on the knee.
"Oh don't be so grouchy! Come on Sparky, show me one of your cute little magic tricks! It'll help pass the time! Shine beamed. Sparkle, nodded her head slowly.
"Oh, I've got a doozy for ya sis. First, we'll need you in a blindfold, and then I need to be holding a Louisville Slugger..." Sparkle growled. At this point, Spice, who was in the front passenger seat burst into giggles, while Sugar- in the drivers seat, merely sighed, and continued along the forgotten forest road. Spark gave a snarl to her siblings in front of her.
"And just WHAT is so funny? Why the hell am I in the BACKSEAT next to HER anyway?! You've lost your minds if you think I am incapable of sibling homicide." Sparkle snarled. Spice shook her head with a grin.
"Cause yer funny, that's why." She snickered. Spark narrowed her eyes.
"Won't be funny when I stuff my cane up your butt. Will it? Will it be funny then Spice? Come on, bitch, I wanna see you giggle!" Spark hissed. Shine giggled quietly, shaking her head.
"See? She's so grouchy, all the time. Sparkle, when's the last time you got laid?" Shine squeaked, forcing Spice to double over in laughter.
"Cause, like a nice thick cock always does the trick when I feel grouchy. Have you had a nice thick cock lately Sparky?"
"I am going to jump out of the car. Please don't attempt to restrain me. Thank you. " Sparkle whined softly, reaching for the handle to the door. Shine rolled her eyes.
"Well, look, if you NEED a weenie, I'd be willing to give you the number to one of my friends. He's not picky, so he'd be perfect for you."
"Scratch that. I'm tossing you out of the car. Please disregard any advice you may have heard about "Tuck and roll." Spark growled, her paws twisting into tight, furious fists. Shine didn't notice.
"Alright, I heard some like, rumors, that like, you might be a lesbian. Which is sad, really, cause there are some really decent boys out there. Like good looking n' junk. I'll introduce you to some if you like, totally wanna get better?" Shine smiled. Sparkle rubbed the bridge of her nose. She was doing it on purpose. There was no way on earth anyone was that dumb. It just wasn't possible.
"Shine, while I appreciate your attempts to give me six different cases of syphilis- like you, I think I'll pass." Sparkle groaned.
"What's a syphilis?"
"A great pick up line. Next time your in a bar, smile at a cute boy and say "Hi, I have syphilis! Wanna come back to my place?"" Sparkle quipped. Shine's muzzle took on a far away look and her eyes widened.
"Omigawd! Will that really get me boys?!" She asked.
"You have to PROMISE me to bring me with you, if you actually go ahead and do that."
"Omigawd, totally! We'll go like, clubbing or some junk! We'll be like sisters!"
"We ARE sisters."
"Omigawd for serious?! Get OUT! No WAY! US! It's like we have the same mom or some junk?!
"Stop it."
"Seriously?! US?! SISTERS?! YOU AND ME SPARKY?!
"Stop it."
"Hey, Spice?! Did you know we were sisters?! ME and Sparky are Sister's! Holy crap! Sugar did you know that?! "
"SPICE I SWEAR TO GOD I'LL FILL YOUR BED WITH SCORPIONS IF YOU DON'T KNOCK THAT OFF!" Sparkle hollered. Sugar gave a groan, leaning forward on the steering wheel, while Spice struggled to breathe, listening to the banter in the back seat, and Shine just looked confused.
"I...I'm Shine- that's Spice." She explained slowly, as if Sparkle wasn't all there. The other wolf gave a tired sigh and buried her head in her paws.
"You're like an intelligence vampire. You're just sucking my IQ directly out of my head. Stop it. "
"I thought zombies ate brains. " Shine whimpered. Sparkle sighed.
"Not brains, IQ, you fuck factory."
"No no Sparky, Zombies eat brains. Everybody knows that. "Shine explained. Sparkle's eye twitched.
"Stop the car. I'm having an aneurysm." She whined. Shine quickly began shaking her paws, up and down, squeaking and squeeling with glee.
"Omigawd, Omigawd! I saw this on ER! I can fix an aneurysm! First, we need to boil some water, and then tear up some sheets!" She squealed.
"S, sthop...Stop...stop you guys, I'm gonna die!" Spice laughed in the front seat. Sparkle turned towards her younger sister, and glared an angry, angry glare. Shine didn't notice.
"Hey guys, when we like get to the castle- I totally get to be queen. That's cool, right? Guys? Queen, right? Oh mi, gawd, I'll get to tell my friends I got to be queen of a real castle! That is so awesome! I mean, I'll get a cape, and a crown, and one of those stick thingies they have and I'll get to knight people, and fight with monsters, And get some squire boys, and royal horsies, with great big peenies to fill my tight little-
"HUSH!" Sparkle snapped, a bright white burst of energy filling the car and illuminating the dark, dead forest outside. Shine blinked, opened her muzzle in confusion, but no words came out. Sparkle, sighed deeply, leaned back against her chair and closed her eyes. Peace, and quiet, at last.
"Huh....Sparkle, did you just cast a..." Spice asked slowly. Spark gave a quiet whine.
"Yes." She groaned. Sugar and Spice looked at each other slowly, and Spice peered back into the seat behind her, where Shine was wildly trying to get words to come from her pretty little muzzle- but she wasn't doing a good job.
"So...we're not hiding the "witch" thing from her any longer?"
"Oh, I don't know about that. I think she just talked so much her voice gave out...zat what happened lil sis? Can't talk anymore? Voice don't work?" Sparkle asked slowly, while Shine's eyes grew wide, her lips flapping helplessly- but she found to no avail any speech.
Spice grinned and glanced at Sugar slowly, who was still driving the car at a snails pace through the twisting turning woods.
"Heeheehee, you owe me one hundred bucks...told ya she'd snap." Spice grinned. Spark gave a quiet snarl.
"...Spice...Sugar....I'm going to go ahead and assume, that my entire trip in the back seat, nest to Shine, wasn't some sort of experiment on Sugar's part, to get me to use magic under duress. " Sparkle hissed. Spice giggled, shaking her head.
"Naw, Sugs, jus wanted ta' see how long it'd take you to flip out n' cast and spell n' shit while you were pissed off." She snickered. Sparkle slowly nodded her head, leaning in close to wedge herself between the two front seats and quietly peered at her siblings.
"Sugar. You know for a fact, that all you had to do was ask me, and I'd cast whatever you wanted me to...on Shine. Please ask me to kill Shine. Spice. Betting on your own sister. Shame on you. I hate you. Both of you. All of you. I hate all of you. "Sparkle growled, sitting back into her seat and pouting. Spice giggled.
"Sure does seem like you need some weenie Sparkle!" Spice giggled- and yelped when her sister tried to choke her to death with her own seat belt. The next few minutes, after the attempted homicide, was spent in silence, until the car gave a groan, sputtered, choked, and ran out of gas...
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