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This is a WIP of my next Sonic story. I'm happy with what I've written so far, but I'm really annoyed because I CAN'T FINISH IT! ><;;;\n\nSo, obviously, if you're down here, you've read the whole thing... so it's not exactly a spoiler to say that what happens in this chapter is that Princess Sally gains weak magical abilities from the accident. The dormant mystical abilities of the Acorn bloodline become active in her, allowing her to cast weak magic... Move small to medium sized objects, conjure small objects out of the air, create a blast of energy that can vaporize a SWATbot (but will use all her energy and likely render her unconscious), and some hypnosis. Bunnie, however, is turned into a sleeper agent and spy for Naugus. Her new crystal limbs have a variety of new powers, but she loses her superstrength. She is also unaware of her bond to Naugus, as the best traitor is a person who has no idea that she's a traitor. Naugus can take her mind over at any moment, turning her into a helpless slave... Which will come into later storylines.\n\nHonestly, this chapter is gonna be roughly twice as long as it is now, with the only major sex sequence being the one with Naugus brainwashing Bunnie. Everything else will be mostly exposition and character development, but GOD, I'm having trouble with it. \n\nPLEASE CONTACT ME IMMEDIATELY IF YOU WANT TO HELP ME OUT!!!!\n\n", "description_bbcode_parsed": "Okay, folks...  This is a WIP of my next Sonic story.  I'm happy with what I've written so far, but I'm really annoyed because I CAN'T FINISH IT! ><;;;

So, obviously, if you're down here, you've read the whole thing... so it's not exactly a spoiler to say that what happens in this chapter is that Princess Sally gains weak magical abilities from the accident.  The dormant mystical abilities of the Acorn bloodline become active in her, allowing her to cast weak magic...  Move small to medium sized objects, conjure small objects out of the air, create a blast of energy that can vaporize a SWATbot (but will use all her energy and likely render her unconscious), and some hypnosis.  Bunnie, however, is turned into a sleeper agent and spy for Naugus.  Her new crystal limbs have a variety of new powers, but she loses her superstrength.  She is also unaware of her bond to Naugus, as the best traitor is a person who has no idea that she's a traitor.  Naugus can take her mind over at any moment, turning her into a helpless slave...  Which will come into later storylines.

Honestly, this chapter is gonna be roughly twice as long as it is now, with the only major sex sequence being the one with Naugus brainwashing Bunnie.  Everything else will be mostly exposition and character development, but GOD, I'm having trouble with it.

PLEASE CONTACT ME IMMEDIATELY IF YOU WANT TO HELP ME OUT!!!!

", "writing": "\tKnothole Village rang with the sounds of battle: screams, grunts, impacts, explosions and shouts. The evil sorcerer, Ixis Naugus, had attacked the village for reasons unknown. The battle raged desperately as the Freedom Fighters attempted to repel him from the borders of the Village. It was a plan that had been in place for a year, but no one had expected to ever use. \n\n\tAfter accruing a rogues gallery of magic-based enemies, the Freedom Fighters had realized that they could not defeat any one of them in a straight fight in an emergency. Using research, they had created a plan to use a Power Ring and a ritual learned from a spellbook left by the wizard Lazarr to forcibly \"evict\" a magical intruder from Knothole permanently.\n\n\tSally, Nicole, and Rotor now worked frantically to finish the ritual, while Sonic, Tails, Antoine, and Bunnie attacked Naugus to distract him and prevent him from doing any damage to the village.\n\n\t\"C'mon, Naugus!\" Sonic crowed, backflipping away from a green burst of energy, \"You couldn't hit the broad side of a barn!\"\n\n\t\"Sonic, sugah, y'all are gettin' lazy. Ya need to brush up on yer smack talk, if y'all are usin' such old cliches,\" Bunnie remarked, firing her arm-cannon at Naugus, peppering him with energy bolts.\n\n\t\"I'm not at my best today! I haven't had time to write new material!\" Sonic grumbled in reply, delivering a solid kick to Naugus' stomach, doubling him over.\n\n\t\"I'LL SLAUGHTER YOU ALL!\" Naugus shouted, enraged. His threat washed over the Freedom Fighters with little to no reaction. They had heard too many death threats over the years to be bothered. Tails slipped in and performed a solid jab to Naugus' ribs before leaping back to get out of the way of the sorcerer's retaliation.\n\n\t\"Yeah, yeah, yeah, you'll swallow our souls, whatever, we've heard it all before,\" Tails grunted, rolling aside as a searing burst of energy scorched the grass where he had been standing a moment before. In the days and months that had passed, Tails had been training in fighting techniques with both Sally and Sonic, and had improved immensely.\n\n\t\"It's ready! Get clear!!!\" Sally suddenly called, moving out into the open from her hiding place, holding a Power Ring in one hand and Lazarr's spellbook in the other. The combatant Freedom Fighters leapt away from Ixis Naugus as Sally aimed the Ring at him.\n\n\t\"Intruder upon our sacred soil, whose wrath doth make his blood boil...\" chanted Sally, reading out of the book.\n\n\t\"That spell... NO!!!\" Naugus growled, turning to face the Princess.\n\n\t\"Let thou from this place be vanished, and from the borders of Knothole forever BANISHED!\" Sally finished, crossing her fingers. The Freedom Fighters had a bad track record where magic was concerned and there was no guarantee the spell would even work. For a moment, it seemed her fears were justified as nothing happened.\n\n\tBut then a vortex of swirling energy opened behind Naugus, a roaring noise filled the air, and a powerful whipping wind kicked up. Naugus roared in rage, his feet skidding backward as he was drawn into the portal. He pointed at Sally, his green eyes blazing with hatred.\n\n\t\"I may go... But you will DIE!!!\" he shouted. A bolt of pure green energy erupted from his fingertip, flying through the air. The world seemed to slow as Sonic gasped Sally's name. He accelerated, running towards the Princess, but before he could get to her, a second figure leapt in the way. Bunnie Rabbot sprung forward, tackling Sally, twisting in midair to get between the Princess and the energy bolt. \n\n\tSonic had only experienced the sensation of being too slow a few times in his life. One of the luxuries of having super-speed meant that you always arrived early or at the nick of time. But even with his accelerated perception, the world around him moving so slowly that time seemed to be frozen, he knew there was no way he could make it in time. It did not stop him from trying, as he leapt forward, his powerful leg muscles propelling him into the air.\n\n\tIn his hyperaccelerated state, Sonic was able to see everything as it happened with perfect clarity. The bolt struck Bunnie first, impacting against her metallic shoulder. Bunnie's fur stood on end, her eyes going wide in shock. Her entire body stiffened as her mouth opened into a little \"o.\" Like a charge of electricity, the green energy crackled, spreading across her body, and down her hand, into Sally, cradled protectively against her chest. The momentum of Bunnie's tackle and the additional force of the bolt of magic knocked Sally off her feet, even as her mouth opened in a silent scream, her entire body beginning to convulse as if she were being shocked. The Power Ring flashed bright in her grip.\n\n\tThen Sonic slowed to normal speed and it was over. Sally and Bunnie hit the ground, still locked together. Antoine screamed his wife's name in terror, while Sonic did the same for Sally. He ran forward and knelt beside the girls, one his best friend, the other the love of his life. Neither moved.\n\n*****\n\n\tSally moaned as she slowly awakened. Her head pounded, her body ached, and she felt horrible from her bones to her fur. She slowly opened her large blue eyes to see Sonic standing over her, his eyes filled with worry and relief. She looked around slowly, recognizing Dr. Quack's clinic. She was in one of the hospital beds, an IV connected to her arm, slowly dripping saline solution.\n\n\t\"Sally! You're okay!\" he said, smiling, \"...ARE you okay?\"\n\n\t\"Nnnf.... H-Head hurts...\" Sally groaned, struggling to remember how to speak. Sonic gently took her hand and frowned.\n\n\t\"You've been unconscious for about two days... There was... an accident, and you were caught in it,\" Sonic explained, shaking his head. Sally pressed a hand against her forehead, as if trying to exert pressure to make her memory function properly.\n\n\t\"I... I remember... Naugus... The spell...\" Sally trailed off, her voice hoarse from disuse. She moaned softly and shook her head, as Sonic sat down in the seat beside her, reaching up to hold her hand.\n\n\t\"The spell worked. Naugus was evicted from Knothole Village. Spotters caught sight of him prowling around about ten miles out from the village, but it's as if there's an invisible barrier that he can't pass through,\" Sonic informed her, smiling gently, \"He gave up after a few hours and vanished.\"\n\n\t\"G-Good... What about... BUNNIE?!\" Sally exclaimed suddenly, bolting upright. She immediately regretted the action, as intense pain lanced through her skull, making it throb powerfully. She groaned and clutched her temples, leaning forward as Sonic braced her.\n\n\t\"Whoa!!! Don't sit up like that! You've been through a huge shock,\" Sonic said, frowning as he brushed a lock of crimson hair out of her face.\n\n\t\"Where's Bunnie? Is she okay? She got in the way and...\" Sally trailed off at the expression on Sonic's face. He looked to the side, the smile fading away.\n\n\t\"...She's alive... But... Naugus's spell did something to her,\" said the hedgehog slowly, running a hand through his blue quills, \"...Nicole thinks that the spell was designed to convert her into crystal... Kinda like what he did to King Max a few years ago.\"\n\n\t\"Y-You mean... Bunnie is....\" Sally whimpered, her eyes tearing up.\n\n\t\"What? No! No, she's not a statue... But... Well, maybe you should see for yourself,\" Sonic said. He stepped to the side, letting Sally get a clear look at the bed next to her.\n\n\tBunnie Rabbot lay there, seemingly asleep. Her chest rose and fell slowly with her breath. Her hair, normally meticulously groomed and braided (Bunnie's only acknowledgement of her early career as the Knothole hairdresser), hung loose and down to her back in a halo. But what drew Sally's gaze and caused her to gasp was Bunnie's limbs.\n\n\tIt was as if someone had taken a look at Bunnie's robotic arm, and decided to cut a massive green gemstone into the same general shape, before attaching it to the rabbit herself. The stone arm was seamless, containing none of the panels, circuitry, or hydraulics that her former limb possessed. It melded seamlessly into her flesh, the same way her metallic arm did.\n\n\t\"Wh-What...?\" Sally asked, unable to find the words.\n\n\t\"Dr. Quack, Rotor, and Nicole have been working non-stop to figure out what happened. As far as they can tell, all of the metal in Bunnie's body has been transmuted into a kind of organic crystal... All of the cybernetics, the robotics, everything. Under the covers, her legs are like this too... as are all of the various bits and pieces of roboticized material inside her,\" Sonic explained, \"...Don't ask me what 'organic crystal' means.\"\n\n\tSally stared at her best friend for a minute before looking to Sonic and asking, \"I-Is she...?\"\n\n\t\"She's...\" Sonic trailed off for a moment, \"...She's comatose, Sal. She's completely unresponsive. She's breathing on her own, and the monitors are pickin' up all kinds of brain waves, but she won't wake up. Nicole thinks...\"\n\n\t\"I think I'm more qualified to tell Sally what I think than you are, Sonic,\" said a second voice, although not unkindly. Sally looked up to see the lynx smiling wide at her.\n\n\t\"I cannot tell you how happy I am to see you awake and unharmed, Sally...\" Nicole said, sounding as if she meant every word. She gently pulled Sally into an embrace, and surprised, Sally returned it.\n\n\t\"Thank you... But what about Bunnie?\" she asked. Nicole sighed heavily.\n\n\t\"Ironically, it may have been her robotic limbs that saved her life. The spell must have been designed to convert whatever substance it impacted into a carbon-based crystal through subatomic...\" Nicole trailed off and cleared her throat, one of the new affectations she had begun to use to seem more like a real, living Mobian, \"...I apologize, the exact science doesn't quite matter. Anyway, because her limbs are inorganic, while the rest of her body is organic, the spell would not affect both parts of her. It only converted her inorganic parts into crystal, leaving everything else safe.\" \n\n*****\n\n\tBunnie slowly opened her eyes, groaning as her head pounded. She sat up, trying to remember what had happened to give her such an incredible headache. It did not take her long to realize several strange things.\n\n\tFirst, her robotic left arm, which she had lifted to cradle her forehead, was no longer robotic. In fact, it was flesh and fur. She gasped in shock, bolting upright into a sitting position. The second thing she noticed was that her legs had been changed back to normal as well. She looked around in confusion, coming to her third realization, she was stark nude.\n\n\tShe sat in what appeared to be a blank void. There was no ground, per se, but she was sitting on it nonetheless. There was just a lack of everything, as if the world had ceased to exist, leaving a faint gray mist in its place. Bunnie climbed to her feet, blinking as she did not hear the familiar clank of metal or whir of hydraulics.\t\n\n\t\"Hmmm... How interesting...\" a deep, sibilant voice suddenly hissed from somewhere behind her. Bunnie gasped and whirled around, bringing her fists up as she slipped into a defensive fighting stance.\n\n\t Ixis Naugus slinked out of the mists, his crimson eyes glittering with malice. His black cloak flowed behind him, as if blown by wind despite the air being perfectly still. Bunnie gasped and backed away. She prided herself on being the second-best fighter in Knothole Village (the best being of course, Sonic), but Naugus was an enemy far outside her weight class, particularly without her robotic limbs.\n\n\t\"I thought I felt a faint tug on my ethereal form. I followed it... and here you are. I'm surprised to see you're still alive...\" Naugus purred, his voice deceptively friendly. Bunnie was not fooled.\n\n\t\"Wh-Where am Ah? What am Ah doin' here? S-Stay back!\" she growled, unable to stop from stammering in fear. She knew that without her limbs, she was powerless to stop Naugus from doing anything he wanted with her.\n\n\t\"We're in your mind, my dear, or more specifically, your dreams. It seems my spell to turn you into a crystal statue had an unintended effect of tying your essence to mine... Unintended, but not unwelcome...\" Naugus replied, \"You are now bound to me... Much as King Maximillion Acorn was once bound to me.\"\n\n\t\"No... No Ah'm not!\" Bunnie growled angrily, \"Ah don't know what ya're doin' here, but ya better get out now!!!\"\n\n\t\"Empty threats, my dear Bunnie Rabbot. I'M the one with the power here. Your mind is nothing but an open book, ripe for me to read... or rewrite... as I so choose,\" Naugus laughed, \"From here, I can learn everything you know about your friends... and make you into my own little slave.\"\n\n\t\"NO!\" Bunnie yelped, \"Yer lyin'!!!\"\n\n\t\"Am I?\" Naugus said lightly. He gestured with his large axe-hand, and the mists swirled and parted\n\n****\n\n\tBunnie gasped as her length erected, pulsing and twitching against her will. She shook her head, feeling blood rush into her member, making it swell with every beat of her heart. The rabbit brushed a lock of hair out of her eyes and glared at Naugus.\n\n\t\"If y'all th-think makin' mah todger hard is gonna make me yer slave, then yer nuttier than my aunt's pecan pie,\" Bunnie growled defiantly.\n\n\t\"Oh, no, my sweet little girl, I'm just getting started. Why don't we delve deep into your subconscious, and see what secret desires lurk there... I can make them all come true...\" Naugus purred. He gestured and the mists parted once more, revealing another image. It was of Bunnie again, arching her back in orgasmic pleasure as her shaft erupted over and over. She was crying out in delight for the one person she loved... but it was NOT Antoine. \n\n\t\"Oho! So, while you have devoted your life to the coyote, it seems your heart desires another... You lust for him...\" Naugus slipped behind her, his voice a deep sibilant murmur, as if the devil himself was whispering into her ear. Bunnie shook her head, even as her phallus twitched at the sight.\n\n\t\"Ah th-think yer mistakin' love for lust, moron... Ah love Antoine... but...\" she trailed off.\n\n\t\"You lust for Sonic the Hedgehog...\" Naugus finished the sentence for her, \"...I can make him yours. Once I rule Mobius as its god, I can give you all of your heart's desires... You will rule instead of your friend, Princess Sally. You will be admired by millions as my avatar. Anything you want will be yours...\"\n\n\tIn this state, Bunnie was incapable of self-deception. Since Naugus could see into her deepest thoughts and desires, he could project them in front of her. She watched as images paraded before her of everything she had ever wanted becoming true. She was tempted. She longed to make it true...\n\n\t\"NO! Ah'm not yer plaything, Naugus!!! Ah'm a Freedom Fighter, an' until Mobius is free of all who'd destroy or conquer it, Ah'll BE a Freedom Fighter!!!\" she growled.\n\n\t\"Ah, Bunnie, my dear Bunnie... I'm afraid you're under the delusion that I'm giving you a choice. Haven't I made it clear that I control your mind already? You're already my slave, you just haven't realized it yet,\" Naugus said, sounding slightly disappointed.\n\n****\n\n\tBunnie cried out in utter orgasmic pleasure as her cock began to convulse, firing thick, pearly blasts into the air. She could not fight any longer. Naugus's influence was too strong, and the pleasure was too great. She screamed in delight as her inner walls spasmed around her crystal-self's length, feeling her entire body convulsing with each ejaculation. \n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "\tKnothole Village rang with the sounds of battle: screams, grunts, impacts, explosions and shouts.  The evil sorcerer, Ixis Naugus, had attacked the village for reasons unknown.  The battle raged desperately as the Freedom Fighters attempted to repel him from the borders of the Village.  It was a plan that had been in place for a year, but no one had expected to ever use.

\tAfter accruing a rogues gallery of magic-based enemies, the Freedom Fighters had realized that they could not defeat any one of them in a straight fight in an emergency.  Using research, they had created a plan to use a Power Ring and a ritual learned from a spellbook left by the wizard Lazarr to forcibly "evict" a magical intruder from Knothole permanently.

\tSally, Nicole, and Rotor now worked frantically to finish the ritual, while Sonic, Tails, Antoine, and Bunnie attacked Naugus to distract him and prevent him from doing any damage to the village.

\t"C'mon, Naugus!" Sonic crowed, backflipping away from a green burst of energy, "You couldn't hit the broad side of a barn!"

\t"Sonic, sugah, y'all are gettin' lazy.  Ya need to brush up on yer smack talk, if y'all are usin' such old cliches," Bunnie remarked, firing her arm-cannon at Naugus, peppering him with energy bolts.

\t"I'm not at my best today!  I haven't had time to write new material!" Sonic grumbled in reply, delivering a solid kick to Naugus' stomach, doubling him over.

\t"I'LL SLAUGHTER YOU ALL!" Naugus shouted, enraged.  His threat washed over the Freedom Fighters with little to no reaction.  They had heard too many death threats over the years to be bothered.  Tails slipped in and performed a solid jab to Naugus' ribs before leaping back to get out of the way of the sorcerer's retaliation.

\t"Yeah, yeah, yeah, you'll swallow our souls, whatever, we've heard it all before," Tails grunted, rolling aside as a searing burst of energy scorched the grass where he had been standing a moment before.  In the days and months that had passed, Tails had been training in fighting techniques with both Sally and Sonic, and had improved immensely.

\t"It's ready!  Get clear!!!" Sally suddenly called, moving out into the open from her hiding place, holding a Power Ring in one hand and Lazarr's spellbook in the other.  The combatant Freedom Fighters leapt away from Ixis Naugus as Sally aimed the Ring at him.

\t"Intruder upon our sacred soil, whose wrath doth make his blood boil..." chanted Sally, reading out of the book.

\t"That spell...  NO!!!" Naugus growled, turning to face the Princess.

\t"Let thou from this place be vanished, and from the borders of Knothole forever BANISHED!" Sally finished, crossing her fingers.  The Freedom Fighters had a bad track record where magic was concerned and there was no guarantee the spell would even work.  For a moment, it seemed her fears were justified as nothing happened.

\tBut then a vortex of swirling energy opened behind Naugus, a roaring noise filled the air, and a powerful whipping wind kicked up.  Naugus roared in rage, his feet skidding backward as he was drawn into the portal.  He pointed at Sally, his green eyes blazing with hatred.

\t"I may go... But you will DIE!!!" he shouted.  A bolt of pure green energy erupted from his fingertip, flying through the air.  The world seemed to slow as Sonic gasped Sally's name.  He accelerated, running towards the Princess, but before he could get to her, a second figure leapt in the way.  Bunnie Rabbot sprung forward, tackling Sally, twisting in midair to get between the Princess and the energy bolt.

\tSonic had only experienced the sensation of being too slow a few times in his life.  One of the luxuries of having super-speed meant that you always arrived early or at the nick of time.  But even with his accelerated perception, the world around him moving so slowly that time seemed to be frozen, he knew there was no way he could make it in time.  It did not stop him from trying, as he leapt forward, his powerful leg muscles propelling him into the air.

\tIn his hyperaccelerated state, Sonic was able to see everything as it happened with perfect clarity.  The bolt struck Bunnie first, impacting against her metallic shoulder.  Bunnie's fur stood on end, her eyes going wide in shock.  Her entire body stiffened as her mouth opened into a little "o."  Like a charge of electricity, the green energy crackled, spreading across her body, and down her hand, into Sally, cradled protectively against her chest.  The momentum of Bunnie's tackle and the additional force of the bolt of magic knocked Sally off her feet, even as her mouth opened in a silent scream, her entire body beginning to convulse as if she were being shocked.  The Power Ring flashed bright in her grip.

\tThen Sonic slowed to normal speed and it was over.  Sally and Bunnie hit the ground, still locked together.  Antoine screamed his wife's name in terror, while Sonic did the same for Sally.  He ran forward and knelt beside the girls, one his best friend, the other the love of his life.  Neither moved.

*****

\tSally moaned as she slowly awakened.  Her head pounded, her body ached, and she felt horrible from her bones to her fur.  She slowly opened her large blue eyes to see Sonic standing over her, his eyes filled with worry and relief.  She looked around slowly, recognizing Dr. Quack's clinic.  She was in one of the hospital beds, an IV connected to her arm, slowly dripping saline solution.

\t"Sally!  You're okay!" he said, smiling, "...ARE you okay?"

\t"Nnnf....  H-Head hurts..." Sally groaned, struggling to remember how to speak.  Sonic gently took her hand and frowned.

\t"You've been unconscious for about two days...  There was...  an accident, and you were caught in it," Sonic explained, shaking his head.  Sally pressed a hand against her forehead, as if trying to exert pressure to make her memory function properly.

\t"I...  I remember... Naugus...  The spell..." Sally trailed off, her voice hoarse from disuse.  She moaned softly and shook her head, as Sonic sat down in the seat beside her, reaching up to hold her hand.

\t"The spell worked.  Naugus was evicted from Knothole Village.  Spotters caught sight of him prowling around about ten miles out from the village, but it's as if there's an invisible barrier that he can't pass through," Sonic informed her, smiling gently, "He gave up after a few hours and vanished."

\t"G-Good...  What about...  BUNNIE?!" Sally exclaimed suddenly, bolting upright.  She immediately regretted the action, as intense pain lanced through her skull, making it throb powerfully.  She groaned and clutched her temples, leaning forward as Sonic braced her.

\t"Whoa!!!  Don't sit up like that!  You've been through a huge shock," Sonic said, frowning as he brushed a lock of crimson hair out of her face.

\t"Where's Bunnie?  Is she okay?  She got in the way and..." Sally trailed off at the expression on Sonic's face.  He looked to the side, the smile fading away.

\t"...She's alive...  But...  Naugus's spell did something to her," said the hedgehog slowly, running a hand through his blue quills, "...Nicole thinks that the spell was designed to convert her into crystal...  Kinda like what he did to King Max a few years ago."

\t"Y-You mean... Bunnie is...." Sally whimpered, her eyes tearing up.

\t"What? No!  No, she's not a statue...  But... Well, maybe you should see for yourself," Sonic said.  He stepped to the side, letting Sally get a clear look at the bed next to her.

\tBunnie Rabbot lay there, seemingly asleep.  Her chest rose and fell slowly with her breath.  Her hair, normally meticulously groomed and braided (Bunnie's only acknowledgement  of her early career as the Knothole hairdresser), hung loose and down to  her back in a halo.  But what drew Sally's gaze and caused her to gasp was Bunnie's limbs.

\tIt was as if someone had taken a look at Bunnie's robotic arm, and decided to cut a massive green gemstone into the same general shape, before attaching it to the rabbit herself.  The stone arm was seamless, containing none of the panels, circuitry, or hydraulics that her former limb possessed.  It melded seamlessly into her flesh, the same way her metallic arm did.

\t"Wh-What...?" Sally asked, unable to find the words.

\t"Dr. Quack, Rotor, and Nicole have been working non-stop to figure out what happened.  As far as they can tell, all of the metal in Bunnie's body has been transmuted into a kind of organic crystal...  All of the cybernetics, the robotics, everything.  Under the covers, her legs are like this too... as are all of the various bits and pieces of roboticized material inside her," Sonic explained, "...Don't ask me what 'organic crystal' means."

\tSally stared at her best friend for a minute before looking to Sonic and asking, "I-Is she...?"

\t"She's..." Sonic trailed off for a moment, "...She's comatose, Sal.  She's completely unresponsive.  She's breathing on her own, and the monitors are pickin' up all kinds of brain waves, but she won't wake up.  Nicole thinks..."

\t"I think I'm more qualified to tell Sally what I think than you are, Sonic," said a second voice, although not unkindly.  Sally looked up to see the lynx smiling wide at her.

\t"I cannot tell you how happy I am to see you awake and unharmed, Sally..." Nicole said, sounding as if she meant every word.  She gently pulled Sally into an embrace, and surprised, Sally returned it.

\t"Thank you...  But what about Bunnie?" she asked.  Nicole sighed heavily.

\t"Ironically, it may have been her robotic limbs that saved her life.  The spell must have been designed to convert whatever substance it impacted into a carbon-based crystal through subatomic..." Nicole trailed off and cleared her throat, one of the new affectations she had begun to use to seem more like a real, living Mobian,  "...I apologize, the exact science doesn't quite matter.  Anyway, because her limbs are inorganic, while the rest of her body is organic, the spell would not affect both parts of her.  It only converted her inorganic parts into crystal, leaving everything else safe."

*****

\tBunnie slowly opened her eyes, groaning as her head pounded.  She sat up, trying to remember what had happened to give her such an incredible headache.  It did not take her long to realize several strange things.

\tFirst, her robotic left arm, which she had lifted to cradle her forehead, was no longer robotic.  In fact, it was flesh and fur.  She gasped in shock, bolting upright into a sitting position.  The second thing she noticed was that her legs had been changed back to normal as well.  She looked around in confusion, coming to her third realization, she was stark nude.

\tShe sat in what appeared to be a blank void.  There was no ground, per se, but she was sitting on it nonetheless.  There was just a lack of everything, as if the world had ceased to exist, leaving a faint gray mist in its place.  Bunnie climbed to her feet, blinking as she did not hear the familiar clank of metal or whir of hydraulics.\t

\t"Hmmm...  How interesting..." a deep, sibilant voice suddenly hissed from somewhere behind her.  Bunnie gasped and whirled around, bringing her fists up as she slipped into a defensive fighting stance.

\t Ixis Naugus slinked out of the mists, his crimson eyes glittering with malice.  His black cloak flowed behind him, as if blown by wind despite the air being perfectly still.  Bunnie gasped and backed away.  She prided herself on being the second-best fighter in Knothole Village (the best being of course, Sonic), but Naugus was an enemy far outside her weight class, particularly without her robotic limbs.

\t"I thought I felt a faint tug on my ethereal form.  I followed it... and here you are.  I'm surprised to see you're still alive..." Naugus purred, his voice deceptively friendly.  Bunnie was not fooled.

\t"Wh-Where am Ah?  What am Ah doin' here?  S-Stay back!" she growled, unable to stop from stammering in fear.  She knew that without her limbs, she was powerless to stop Naugus from doing anything he wanted with her.

\t"We're in your mind, my dear, or more specifically, your dreams.  It seems my spell to turn you into a crystal statue had an unintended effect of tying your essence to mine...  Unintended, but not unwelcome..." Naugus replied, "You are now bound to me...  Much as King Maximillion Acorn was once bound to me."

\t"No...  No Ah'm not!" Bunnie growled angrily, "Ah don't know what ya're doin' here, but ya better get out now!!!"

\t"Empty threats, my dear Bunnie Rabbot.  I'M the one with the power here.  Your mind is nothing but an open book, ripe for me to read... or rewrite... as I so choose," Naugus laughed, "From here, I can learn everything you know about your friends... and make you into my own little slave."

\t"NO!" Bunnie yelped, "Yer lyin'!!!"

\t"Am I?" Naugus said lightly.  He gestured with his large axe-hand, and the mists swirled and parted

****

\tBunnie gasped as her length erected, pulsing and twitching against her will.  She shook her head, feeling blood rush into her member, making it swell with every beat of her heart.  The rabbit brushed a lock of hair out of her eyes and glared at Naugus.

\t"If y'all th-think makin' mah todger hard is gonna make me yer slave, then yer nuttier than my aunt's pecan pie," Bunnie growled defiantly.

\t"Oh, no, my sweet little girl, I'm just getting started.  Why don't we delve deep into your subconscious, and see what secret desires lurk there...  I can make them all come true..." Naugus purred.  He gestured and the mists parted once more, revealing another image.  It was of Bunnie again, arching her back in orgasmic pleasure as her shaft erupted over and over.  She was crying out in delight for the one person she loved... but it was NOT Antoine.

\t"Oho!  So, while you have devoted your life to the coyote, it seems your heart desires another...  You lust for him..." Naugus slipped behind her, his voice a deep sibilant murmur, as if the devil himself was whispering into her ear.  Bunnie shook her head, even as her phallus twitched at the sight.

\t"Ah th-think yer mistakin' love for lust, moron...  Ah love Antoine... but..." she trailed  off.

\t"You lust for Sonic the Hedgehog..." Naugus finished the sentence for her, "...I can make him yours.  Once I rule Mobius as its god, I can give you all of your heart's desires...  You will rule instead of your friend, Princess Sally.  You will be admired by millions as my avatar.  Anything you want will be yours..."

\tIn this state, Bunnie was incapable of self-deception.  Since Naugus could see into her deepest thoughts and desires, he could project them in front of her.  She watched as images paraded before her of everything she had ever wanted becoming true.  She was tempted.  She longed to make it true...

\t"NO!  Ah'm not yer plaything, Naugus!!!  Ah'm a Freedom Fighter, an' until Mobius is free of all who'd destroy or conquer it, Ah'll BE a Freedom Fighter!!!" she growled.

\t"Ah, Bunnie, my dear Bunnie... I'm afraid you're under the delusion that I'm giving you a choice.  Haven't I made it clear that I control your mind already?  You're already my slave, you just haven't realized it yet," Naugus said, sounding slightly disappointed.

****

\tBunnie cried out in utter orgasmic pleasure as her cock began to convulse, firing thick, pearly blasts into the air.  She could not fight any longer.  Naugus's influence was too strong, and the pleasure was too great.  She screamed in delight as her inner walls spasmed around her crystal-self's length, feeling her entire body convulsing with each ejaculation.  

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