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Was he happy? To you to judge.", "description_bbcode_parsed": "This is what five thousand year old Shadow got for his two tousandth birthday. Was he happy? To you to judge.", "writing": "I've seen Sonic do some pretty crazy things. Hell, in his last life, he was even a female doctor. And, before that, he was racer. A race car racer. I want to officially call him nuts and be done with it.\n\nUnfortunately, he has that uncanny ability to get under your skin and never get out. Along with the one that involves him cranking up the volume with every life that goes by.\n\nAnd this, this has to be the craziest idea he's ever had. One that is likely to drive me up the wall without even trying.\n\nI'm bound to develop some horrible puns by the end of this lifetime. Along with a horrible, horrible tendency of wearing pants.\n\nChaos damn it. Who the fuck is in charge of deciding what Sonic becomes? I can handle him being a racer, or a soldier. Hell, I don't even mind raising him.\n\nBut not a dancer. Not a freaking choreographer.\n\nCertainly when I know exactly what he's capable of.\n\nOh fucking Chaos...\n\nI half want to rip him off that pole right now and show him what it's like to tempt me.\n\nBut I will probably risk my hide, along with this particular Sonic's trust. I haven't exactly met him yet. So turning him on so bad that he can only whimper and squirm should be the last thing on my mind.\n\nBut try to get your mind out of the gutter when he's just all over that pole and he actually looks like he's putting on a show.\n\nHell, he's even got that look in his eyes. That inviting look that reminds me that every time I dominate him, I'm not the one in control. I'm nothing more than a pet on a leash, a fish on a line, and my real master always reels me in for another round.\n\nPlease don't bite your lip. Please don't look like you do when we...\n\nChaos, did he have to? I know it's probably out of concentration, but still.\n\nI need a seat. And some ice. My temperature never raises this high.\n\nLuckily, there's a bench nearby, and...\n\nOh fuck.\n\nHow the hell is he even managing that?! I know he's flexible, but come on!\n\nThen again, this one did train specifically for dancing. He's bound to be extremely flexible, possibly even more than the original.\n\nDon't shiver, Shadow. You are in control of your emotions and your body. You have learned to be calm no matter the....\n\nAaaand he's putting his back against that pole while holding himself upside down. How he's doing this is beyond me. All I know is that he looks like a cabaret dancer and it's not making my system relax.\n\nThe music isn't helping, either.\n\nThe inventor of sultry music should be shot. I'm volunteering to be the one with the gun.\n\nWhy oh why does he have to look like he's making love?\n\nAnd why is it so hot in here?\n\nAll that's missing are the moans. Those oh so sweet moans that just fuel me further.\n\nTo think that all I'd have to do...\n\nNo. No. You are a master of yourself, Shadow. You have much more control than this. You can do this. You can be stronger than the primal urge you're feeling.\n\nMy body is not agreeing with me. At. All.\n\nIf he doesn't stop dancing soon...\n\n\"Liked what you saw?\"\n\nI feel my head jerk up, and notice the lack of music. When the hell did it end?\n\nLong enough for him to grab a towel and a bottle of water.\n\nI missed seeing him bend over for them.\n\nGet your fucking mind out of the gutter, Shadow!\n\nIs he actually smirking?\n\n\"Guess you did if it's got you speechless. You interested in learning how to dance?\"\n\nI'd rather have you on the nearest mattress while being stark-naked.\n\nI swallow, \"Not exactly.\"\n\nLose the smirk, Sonic. You're not making things any easier with it.\n\n\"Then?\"\n\n\"You could say a friend dragged me to a club, and I wanted to know who taught them.\"\n\nHe's laughing?\n\n\"Got curious, then? Sorry it's not a woman.\"\n\nI was actually expecting you since some of the moves I saw were pretty close to what I saw when you were a hero, but you don't need to know that.\n\nAnd you don't need to know that I'm actually both happy and disturbed that you've decided to make dancing a career. Along with the fact that my body is completely out of whack right now and screaming for you like an oath to the gods.\n\n\"That the only reason you came here?\"\n\nI'm not even sure, anymore. Should I step out?\n\nI still have to find a way to near him.\n\n\"I guess it is,\" I say while standing. My body is calming down. Thank Chaos.\n\n\"Mind if I ask you a question, though?\"\n\nWant me to scramble your thoughts so bad, you won't even remember your own name?\n\nGet a grip, Shadow.\n\n\"What is it?\"\n\n\"I'm not the type to ask anyone to join my classes, but I rarely see people like you. Along with that, my classes mostly consist of females. I need a few males for a couple classes. What do you say? I won't charge you.\"\n\nDo I get to dance with the teacher?\n\nWhat did I say about the bad puns?\n\n\"I have time.\"\n\nAt least the grateful smile doesn't change.\n\nI'm going to regret this, aren't I?\n\n\"Thanks. The class will be at five tomorrow. See you then?\"\n\nI shake the hand he's holding out. At least I'm getting more time with him.\n\n\"See you tomorrow,\" I say before turning around to leave.\n\n\"By the way...\"\n\nAnd turn around at the sing-song tone, only to be met by a smirk and eyes that hold a mischievous sparkle.\n\nThere's the heat again.\n\n\"You got a name to go with that body of yours?\"\n\nWhat the fuck? Who taught him to be that flirtatious? This is not fair.\n\n\"Shadow.\"\n\nAnd you better remember it, 'cause you'll be screaming it one day.\n\n\"Sonic.\"\n\nAnd I'll be swallowing it from those moving lips of yours. You're going to regret playing with me, Sonic. You're going to regret this badly.", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "I've seen Sonic do some pretty crazy things. Hell, in his last life, he was even a female doctor. And, before that, he was racer. A race car racer. I want to officially call him nuts and be done with it.

Unfortunately, he has that uncanny ability to get under your skin and never get out. Along with the one that involves him cranking up the volume with every life that goes by.

And this, this has to be the craziest idea he's ever had. One that is likely to drive me up the wall without even trying.

I'm bound to develop some horrible puns by the end of this lifetime. Along with a horrible, horrible tendency of wearing pants.

Chaos damn it. Who the fuck is in charge of deciding what Sonic becomes? I can handle him being a racer, or a soldier. Hell, I don't even mind raising him.

But not a dancer. Not a freaking choreographer.

Certainly when I know exactly what he's capable of.

Oh fucking Chaos...

I half want to rip him off that pole right now and show him what it's like to tempt me.

But I will probably risk my hide, along with this particular Sonic's trust. I haven't exactly met him yet. So turning him on so bad that he can only whimper and squirm should be the last thing on my mind.

But try to get your mind out of the gutter when he's just all over that pole and he actually looks like he's putting on a show.

Hell, he's even got that look in his eyes. That inviting look that reminds me that every time I dominate him, I'm not the one in control. I'm nothing more than a pet on a leash, a fish on a line, and my real master always reels me in for another round.

Please don't bite your lip. Please don't look like you do when we...

Chaos, did he have to? I know it's probably out of concentration, but still.

I need a seat. And some ice. My temperature never raises this high.

Luckily, there's a bench nearby, and...

Oh fuck.

How the hell is he even managing that?! I know he's flexible, but come on!

Then again, this one did train specifically for dancing. He's bound to be extremely flexible, possibly even more than the original.

Don't shiver, Shadow. You are in control of your emotions and your body. You have learned to be calm no matter the....

Aaaand he's putting his back against that pole while holding himself upside down. How he's doing this is beyond me. All I know is that he looks like a cabaret dancer and it's not making my system relax.

The music isn't helping, either.

The inventor of sultry music should be shot. I'm volunteering to be the one with the gun.

Why oh why does he have to look like he's making love?

And why is it so hot in here?

All that's missing are the moans. Those oh so sweet moans that just fuel me further.

To think that all I'd have to do...

No. No. You are a master of yourself, Shadow. You have much more control than this. You can do this. You can be stronger than the primal urge you're feeling.

My body is not agreeing with me. At. All.

If he doesn't stop dancing soon...

"Liked what you saw?"

I feel my head jerk up, and notice the lack of music. When the hell did it end?

Long enough for him to grab a towel and a bottle of water.

I missed seeing him bend over for them.

Get your fucking mind out of the gutter, Shadow!

Is he actually smirking?

"Guess you did if it's got you speechless. You interested in learning how to dance?"

I'd rather have you on the nearest mattress while being stark-naked.

I swallow, "Not exactly."

Lose the smirk, Sonic. You're not making things any easier with it.

"Then?"

"You could say a friend dragged me to a club, and I wanted to know who taught them."

He's laughing?

"Got curious, then? Sorry it's not a woman."

I was actually expecting you since some of the moves I saw were pretty close to what I saw when you were a hero, but you don't need to know that.

And you don't need to know that I'm actually both happy and disturbed that you've decided to make dancing a career. Along with the fact that my body is completely out of whack right now and screaming for you like an oath to the gods.

"That the only reason you came here?"

I'm not even sure, anymore. Should I step out?

I still have to find a way to near him.

"I guess it is," I say while standing. My body is calming down. Thank Chaos.

"Mind if I ask you a question, though?"

Want me to scramble your thoughts so bad, you won't even remember your own name?

Get a grip, Shadow.

"What is it?"

"I'm not the type to ask anyone to join my classes, but I rarely see people like you. Along with that, my classes mostly consist of females. I need a few males for a couple classes. What do you say? I won't charge you."

Do I get to dance with the teacher?

What did I say about the bad puns?

"I have time."

At least the grateful smile doesn't change.

I'm going to regret this, aren't I?

"Thanks. The class will be at five tomorrow. See you then?"

I shake the hand he's holding out. At least I'm getting more time with him.

"See you tomorrow," I say before turning around to leave.

"By the way..."

And turn around at the sing-song tone, only to be met by a smirk and eyes that hold a mischievous sparkle.

There's the heat again.

"You got a name to go with that body of yours?"

What the fuck? Who taught him to be that flirtatious? This is not fair.

"Shadow."

And you better remember it, 'cause you'll be screaming it one day.

"Sonic."

And I'll be swallowing it from those moving lips of yours. You're going to regret playing with me, Sonic. You're going to regret this badly.", "pools_count": 0, "title": "Loop - Dancer", "deleted": "f", "public": "t", "mimetype": "application/msword", "pagecount": "1", "rating_id": "1", "rating_name": "Mature", "ratings": [ { "content_tag_id": "2", "name": "Nudity", "description": "Nonsexual nudity exposing breasts or genitals (must not show arousal)", "rating_id": "1" } ], "submission_type_id": "12", "type_name": "Writing - Document", "guest_block": "t", "friends_only": "f", "comments_count": "4", "views": "407" }