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Here's a fun fact for you. His geist, the flayed man, is actually based off a picture from the sourcebook! If you have a copy see if you can find which one. :D
I did take some liberties with his powers, but I feel they added to the story and how overpowered Paale was supposed to feel. The girls won thanks to Natasha's undead strength and Dawn's illusion powers, but it was also dumb luck and Paale's overconfidence working against him. Sin eaters can absorb injury by spending ectoplasm, but they also need it to use their ghostly abilities. Paale used too much of it trying to terrify the girls and was unable to heal himself when Natasha managed to get the upper hand in their fight. ","writing":"Simoni and Natasha are in a hotel room at the start, Arja and her father being across the street at some government function in some small country somewhere in South America. After Natasha wakes up and has 'breakfast', Simoni helps her try on her new sari, just finishing getting it on as the power goes out in the building. \n\nAs the power goes out Natasha sees something coming through the wall behind Simoni, a creature that looks like nothing short of a flayed human skin pierced with needles. It has wide empty eye sockets and a mouth stretched obscenely wide. She pushes Simoni out of the way, going full on predator as her eyes glow and her fangs elongate, telling the creature to back off... which surprisingly it does. Simoni, however, seems unable to see it. \n\nAfter it retreats the emergency lights come on, revealing a sickly looking man in the corner of the room. He seems surprised at Natasha's presence however: \n\n[i]\"Says here two Indian girls... you're dressed right, but you're sure as hell not Indian...\" he mutters, \"Well, whatever. He said two girls and I could do what I damn well please with 'em before I kill 'em. Good enough for me.\"[/i]\n\nThe man introduces himself as 'Paale, with two As', and quite bluntly tells them he's been sent to kill them, then smacks his hands into the walls, generating a milky white substance that causes the entire room to begin shaking. Poltergeist phenomena erupts throughout the room as lamps, the TV, and everything that isn't nailed down begins to careen around the place, smashing into everything. \n\nNatasha taunts him, saying that he's just some two-bit medium and that she's more in touch with death than he'll ever be, but he just sneers, summoning the apparition that came before and causing it to wrap around his body. He vanishes just as Natasha sees that the ghost is actually coming out of him, as if it's a part of his body. \n\nNatasha tries to get Simoni out of the building by diving out a window, but the glass moves like rubber, bouncing the two girls through their hotel room door and into the hallway. After they land Simoni is pounced by a terrified Dawn. Simoni asks if she can teleport them out, but Dawn replies that something is blocking her. She can teleport within the building, but can't actually get outside. \n\nPaale taunts them, throwing out threats while staying hidden, while Dawn reveals that she and Nelen had fought him before back in America. Paale is a serial killer, and one of the assassins hired by Franklin Fullmoon to hunt down Arja and Simoni. Dawn tries frantically to remember how Nelen defeated him, while Paale decides to toy with the girls some more. \n\n[i]\"Meal? Hah, I wonder what you would think of my blood...\" he muses, \"But then, you don't have a damn clue what I am... Well, this is too fun to stop so soon, so lemme tell you girls a little ghost story... Once upon a time there was a very very bad man named Patrick, Patrick liked nothing more than taking little girls and twisting their arms and legs right off, but then one day Patrick made a mistake and the police caught up with him... then Patrick went straight to the gas chamber and the people were happy again... cute story right?\" he taunts, \"Well... before Patrick died all the way he met The Flayed Man, and he offered Patrick a deal...\" \n\nThen Natasha hears footsteps coming down the hallway and sees him again, his skin pale as bone and his eyes gone, a pair of wide empty holes in their place. \"He made Patrick into Paale, burrowed a hole right into his soul and made himself at home, and turned him into a Sin-Eater... but sins don't taste so good, so I stick to little girls like I always have.\" he grins wide, his teeth sharp now, like a sharks. \"So c'mon if you think you're tough enough little bloodsucker.\" he laughs, waving at her, \"Come and play...\"[/i]\n\nPaale reveals that he's a Sin-Eater, a man with a geist living inside his soul, granting him it's deathly powers in exchange for a physical body to use in the living world. Natasha striking right back, saying that she's already encountered a Sin Eater once before, and that she took her apart. He taunts the girls before trying to slice them up by turning his arms into huge blades, Dawn teleporting them away as she remembers how she and Nelen stopped him. After getting to the end of the hallway she uses her Wonderland Eyes to force a vision on Paale, making him believe he's surrounded by the ghosts of all the girls he killed over his career as a serial killer. Paale's geist fights against it, but it gives Natasha enough time to mortally wound him. \n\nShe dives onto Paale, driving her fangs and claws into his body as Simoni uses her wind to knock his legs out from under him. When he lands on the floor Dawn teleports above him, driving her claws into his eyes. Paale tries to fight back, but he'd used up much of his supernatural powers transforming his body and terrorizing the girls, leaving him unable to defend himself when Natasha drives her fangs into his jugular. \n\nAfter he dies, the electricity comes back on. Nelen and Arja appear, apparently having noticed the power had gone out and, fearing the worst, had tried to get back inside but had been unable to do so. Arja and Simoni begin to pack as Natasha reluctantly goes back to hiding in the trunk she came to the hotel in while Nelen muses to himself, wondering what else Franklin will throw at them if Paale, a supernatural serial killer cannibal, had been just the first... then he throws a fit when he finds out that Paale's poltergeist trick had smashed his Xbox 360 that he'd lent to Simoni.","writing_bbcode_parsed":"Simoni and Natasha are in a hotel room at the start, Arja and her father being across the street at some government function in some small country somewhere in South America. After Natasha wakes up and has 'breakfast', Simoni helps her try on her new sari, just finishing getting it on as the power goes out in the building.
As the power goes out Natasha sees something coming through the wall behind Simoni, a creature that looks like nothing short of a flayed human skin pierced with needles. It has wide empty eye sockets and a mouth stretched obscenely wide. She pushes Simoni out of the way, going full on predator as her eyes glow and her fangs elongate, telling the creature to back off... which surprisingly it does. Simoni, however, seems unable to see it.
After it retreats the emergency lights come on, revealing a sickly looking man in the corner of the room. He seems surprised at Natasha's presence however:
"Says here two Indian girls... you're dressed right, but you're sure as hell not Indian..." he mutters, "Well, whatever. He said two girls and I could do what I damn well please with 'em before I kill 'em. Good enough for me."
The man introduces himself as 'Paale, with two As', and quite bluntly tells them he's been sent to kill them, then smacks his hands into the walls, generating a milky white substance that causes the entire room to begin shaking. Poltergeist phenomena erupts throughout the room as lamps, the TV, and everything that isn't nailed down begins to careen around the place, smashing into everything.
Natasha taunts him, saying that he's just some two-bit medium and that she's more in touch with death than he'll ever be, but he just sneers, summoning the apparition that came before and causing it to wrap around his body. He vanishes just as Natasha sees that the ghost is actually coming out of him, as if it's a part of his body.
Natasha tries to get Simoni out of the building by diving out a window, but the glass moves like rubber, bouncing the two girls through their hotel room door and into the hallway. After they land Simoni is pounced by a terrified Dawn. Simoni asks if she can teleport them out, but Dawn replies that something is blocking her. She can teleport within the building, but can't actually get outside.
Paale taunts them, throwing out threats while staying hidden, while Dawn reveals that she and Nelen had fought him before back in America. Paale is a serial killer, and one of the assassins hired by Franklin Fullmoon to hunt down Arja and Simoni. Dawn tries frantically to remember how Nelen defeated him, while Paale decides to toy with the girls some more.
"Meal? Hah, I wonder what you would think of my blood..." he muses, "But then, you don't have a damn clue what I am... Well, this is too fun to stop so soon, so lemme tell you girls a little ghost story... Once upon a time there was a very very bad man named Patrick, Patrick liked nothing more than taking little girls and twisting their arms and legs right off, but then one day Patrick made a mistake and the police caught up with him... then Patrick went straight to the gas chamber and the people were happy again... cute story right?" he taunts, "Well... before Patrick died all the way he met The Flayed Man, and he offered Patrick a deal..."
Then Natasha hears footsteps coming down the hallway and sees him again, his skin pale as bone and his eyes gone, a pair of wide empty holes in their place. "He made Patrick into Paale, burrowed a hole right into his soul and made himself at home, and turned him into a Sin-Eater... but sins don't taste so good, so I stick to little girls like I always have." he grins wide, his teeth sharp now, like a sharks. "So c'mon if you think you're tough enough little bloodsucker." he laughs, waving at her, "Come and play..."
Paale reveals that he's a Sin-Eater, a man with a geist living inside his soul, granting him it's deathly powers in exchange for a physical body to use in the living world. Natasha striking right back, saying that she's already encountered a Sin Eater once before, and that she took her apart. He taunts the girls before trying to slice them up by turning his arms into huge blades, Dawn teleporting them away as she remembers how she and Nelen stopped him. After getting to the end of the hallway she uses her Wonderland Eyes to force a vision on Paale, making him believe he's surrounded by the ghosts of all the girls he killed over his career as a serial killer. Paale's geist fights against it, but it gives Natasha enough time to mortally wound him.
She dives onto Paale, driving her fangs and claws into his body as Simoni uses her wind to knock his legs out from under him. When he lands on the floor Dawn teleports above him, driving her claws into his eyes. Paale tries to fight back, but he'd used up much of his supernatural powers transforming his body and terrorizing the girls, leaving him unable to defend himself when Natasha drives her fangs into his jugular.
After he dies, the electricity comes back on. Nelen and Arja appear, apparently having noticed the power had gone out and, fearing the worst, had tried to get back inside but had been unable to do so. Arja and Simoni begin to pack as Natasha reluctantly goes back to hiding in the trunk she came to the hotel in while Nelen muses to himself, wondering what else Franklin will throw at them if Paale, a supernatural serial killer cannibal, had been just the first... then he throws a fit when he finds out that Paale's poltergeist trick had smashed his Xbox 360 that he'd lent to Simoni.","pools_count":0,"title":"Part 1.5: Blood Drinker, Sin Eater","deleted":"f","public":"t","mimetype":"text/rtf","pagecount":"1","rating_id":"2","rating_name":"Adult","ratings":[{"content_tag_id":"5","name":"Strong Violence","description":"Strong violence, blood, serious injury or death","rating_id":"2"}],"submission_type_id":"12","type_name":"Writing - Document","guest_block":"t","friends_only":"f","comments_count":"0","views":"13","sales_description":null,"forsale":"f","digitalsales":"f","printsales":"f","digital_price":""}