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Following after the strange blue creature, Raph was led to his target. \n\nKC was waiting in the doorway as Bloo returned home and Bloo dropped the dead creature at KC’s feet. “That’s not what I sent you out for,” KC growled, kicking the ‘gift’ away. \n\n“Grape,” Bloo chirped, diving after the dead animal. \n\n“You’re not giving that to him,” KC reached out and grabbed Bloo by the nape of his neck. “And stop calling him Grape, that’s not his name.” He threw Bloo down in the dirt and crossed his arms over his chest. “Get out there and find me another kid or I’ll remove your collar and throw you out with the trash.”\n\nBloo chirped in sorrow as it collected itself up off the ground and stood there watching as KC slammed the door closed. It stood staring at the door for a few more minutes then raced over to pick the dead animal up. Bloo gulped it down like a snake with a mouse then rushed off to do KC’s bidding. \n\nRaph waited and watched Bloo run down the street then jumped down to walk up to the door and knocked. \n\nKC answered the door and paused when he saw Raph, “Can I help you?”\n\nWithout a word Raph punched KC in the beak. The mercenary staggered back into the room, covering his nose. Raph stepped in, “How do you like being sucker punched?”\n\n“I don’t like it at all,” KC answered, his hand still covering his bleeding nose. “That hurt. Why would you do that?”\n\n“You’re really gonna hate what I’m gonna do next,” Raph growled as he lunged for KC but KC had other plans. \n\nHe dodged Raph’s fist by dropping to the floor then he kicked up, landing his foot in Raph’s gut. Raph staggered back but recovered in time to avoid KC’s next attack. KC’s hand grazed Raph’s shoulder as Raph turned. Capturing KC’s arm by the wrist, Raph then pulled it behind KC’s back. \n\n“You’re gonna pay for what you did to Donny,” Raph rumbled while twisting KC’s arm. \n\n“Donny?” KC turned his head to look at Raph. “Raph?” Confusion washed over his face, “Was it really that long ago or did you grow up fast?”\n\n“I grew up fast,” Raph answered.\n\nRaph continued to pull up on KC’s pinned arm, thinking he had the upper hand but KC wasn’t so easily overcome. He moved through the pain, bringing his free arm up and back to elbow Raph in the jaw. The blow was hard enough to cause Raph to let go and KC turned to face Raph. \n\n“I don’t know your story, kid, maybe I’ll get it out of you one day but there is one thing that I already know.”\n\n“Yeah, what’s that?” Raph asked, rubbing his jaw while circling KC.\n\n“You died,” KC answered. Raph paused and KC laughed. “I can see it in your eyes. I’ve seen it often enough that I can recognize it now.” He smiled and tilted his head to the side, “Tell me. Did it leave an empty feeling inside to learn that there is nothing after this life is finished, just darkness?”\n\n“That’s what it must have been like for you,” Raph pulled his sai from their holsters. “But, when I died I felt nothing but peace. The traumatic part was when I was wrenched away from it to return to the land of the living.”\n\n“Well then,” KC smiled. “Let me have the honors of sending you back.”\n\nKC lunged at Raph while pulling daggers from his belt and their weapons clashed. Raph glared into the eyes of the monster who had haunted his nightmares for years and felt only loathing. Rage burned in his belly as they grappled. \n\n“By the way,” KC grinned up at Raph. “That ass was ni~ce,” he hissed. “Has he let you tap it yet?”\n\nKC’s words lit a fire in Raph and he roared in anger. \n\n“I guess not,” KC chuckled, then put on a fake pouty face. “Is that really why you’re angry? A little sexually frustrated?”\n\nRaph was fuming at this point but instead of making him falter, like KC had planned, it made him more determined. Raph was larger and stronger than KC and was soon able to wrench the daggers from his opponent’s hands. He then lurched forward and head butted KC in the beak, staggering him back as fresh blood started to ooze from his nose. \n\nRaph spun and kicked KC on the side of his head, sending him to the ground. Before KC had the chance to recover, Raph dropped his foot down on KC’s chest. \n\nKC gasped out as the wind was forced from his lungs and his heart forgot to beat for a few lingering seconds. \n\nNot wanting to give KC any chances, Raph dropped down bringing his sai towards KC’s chest, needing the momentum to break through the hard upper plastron, but KC turned, taking the blow in his arm. The force of the blow sent his sai in to the bone. Raph jerked his sai free, twisting as he did to cause as much damage as possible while arching his other sai towards KC’s head but he only managing to strike air. \n\nDespite his injuries, KC still had fight in him and weapons on him. His hand emerged with a metal claw and he buried the spikes into Raph’s right shoulder muscle. Raph punched KC in the beak again, snapping his head back and causing it to strike the floor. \n\nRaph pulled away from KC the metal claw, still lodged in his shoulder, slipped free of KC’s hand. KC rolled to try to get to his feet but Raph kicked his carapace, knocking him back down. Ignoring the pain in his shoulder and fueled by his rage, Raph rolled KC back to his carapace. \n\n“You took what was supposed to be mine,” Raph said through gritted teeth. “I’ll make you pay for what you did to Donny.”\n\n“You’ve beat me up,” K.C. said in a daze. “We even?”\n\n“Not even close.” Knowing it would be harder to pierce through the thick upper plastron, Raph focused on the softer bridge on the side. Raph pushed the tip of his sai through the sensitive bridge on KC’s left side. Once he pressed through the cartilage like shell, he slowly pressed into the soft insides. “I’m gonna make you suffer.”\n\n“I’m not done yet,” KC grunted. “You’re not gonna get to savor this.” His right hand shot up as he rolled and drove a spike into Raph’s left side, twisting it as he tried to sit up.\n\nRaph brought his left hand up and managed to send his sai into KC’s writs, causing KC’s hand to open before he had the chance to pull the spike back out. \n\nWith his sai still through KC’s writs, Raph pulled K.C.’s arm up then straddled KC while shifting the sai to his right hand. Raph then continued to stab into KC’s right side with his other sai. Raph’s left side screamed in pain, the spike shifting with each stroke. \n\nBlood oozed from KC’s mouth and nose but his eyes stayed locked with Raph’s. “You ever kill someone before, boy?”\n\nRaph didn’t answer, just continued to stab KC’s left side. \n\n“I will haunt your dreams forever,” KC laughed, his voice weak and gruff. “I’ve seen meaner men than you traumatized by the act of taking a life. I die with the joy of knowing that I damaged both you and your precious Donny for life.” \n\n“Donny will sleep better at night knowing that he will never have to face you again.” Raph leaned in. “And, I will take comfort in knowing that I saved others from ever becoming your victim.”\n\n“I may have done some awful things in my life,” K.C. gurgled out. “But I had fun doing it.”\n\nHe laughed as his eyes lost focused and continued to laugh as his life drained from him. Raph moved to stand, his foot slipping on the pool of blood and jostling the spike still in his side. He grunted in pain and had to lean over KC’s body while he waited for his head to stop spinning. \n\n“Kaaaay…Seee…?”\n\nRaph turned to see Bloo standing in the door way, holding the hand of a child. The child took one look at the carnage and screamed. He pulled his hand free of Bloo’s and bolted away as fast as his little legs would carry him. \n\nBloo didn’t care about the child, and ran into the room to kneel next to KC. The odd creature let out a long and sorrowful chirp as it brought its hand up to touch KC’s face. \n\nRaph managed to move off of KC and watched while Bloo rushed over to get a first aid kit. Bloo hurried back over to KC’s side and started to scoop the blood off the ground in an attempt to put it back, the whole time continuing with his mournful trills and chirps. \n\n“Bloo,” Raph knelt down next to Bloo. “You don’t have to serve him anymore.”\n\nBloo turned and hissed at Raph.\n\n“You’re free Bloo,” Raph said. \n\nBloo ignored him and tried to get KC to drink something. \n\nRaph sighed then reached up to touch Bloo’s collar. “You don’t need this anymore.” With a simple tug, Raph pulled the collar off of Bloo’s neck. “You’ll soon realize that there is nothing you can do for him.”\n\nHis intentions were to set Bloo free in a symbolic way, to show Bloo that it was no longer a pet but he had no idea what the collar really was. Bloo’s eyes went wide and a soft chirp escaped him before he fell forward. Raph sat there holding the collar unsure of what had happened. “Bloo?” Raph reached over and shook him. “Bloo?”\n\nRaph could feel the tingle of magic in the collar as he held it in his hand. He tried putting the collar back around Bloo’s neck but nothing happened. “No,” Raph choked out. “I didn’t want you to die. Please.”\n\n“I’m sorry,” Raph whispered as he reached up to close Bloo’s eyes. \n\nAs he stood, Raph grabbed the cloth and pulled it off of KC to take with him to present to the Daimyo. He headed for the door but before he stepped through a sound caused him to pause. Raph turned back to look at the two dead bodies on the floor then looked around the room. “Is someone there?”\n\nHe stood listening for a moment and he heard the noise again. \n\nHe rushed to the back room and he could feel the tingle of magic as he stepped through the door into the familiar room. His eyes fell on the bed that once held Donny and a lump formed in his throat. 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KC was waiting in the doorway as Bloo returned home and Bloo dropped the dead creature at KC’s feet. “That’s not what I sent you out for,” KC growled, kicking the ‘gift’ away.

“Grape,” Bloo chirped, diving after the dead animal.

“You’re not giving that to him,” KC reached out and grabbed Bloo by the nape of his neck. “And stop calling him Grape, that’s not his name.” He threw Bloo down in the dirt and crossed his arms over his chest. “Get out there and find me another kid or I’ll remove your collar and throw you out with the trash.”

Bloo chirped in sorrow as it collected itself up off the ground and stood there watching as KC slammed the door closed. It stood staring at the door for a few more minutes then raced over to pick the dead animal up. Bloo gulped it down like a snake with a mouse then rushed off to do KC’s bidding.

Raph waited and watched Bloo run down the street then jumped down to walk up to the door and knocked.

KC answered the door and paused when he saw Raph, “Can I help you?”

Without a word Raph punched KC in the beak. The mercenary staggered back into the room, covering his nose. Raph stepped in, “How do you like being sucker punched?”

“I don’t like it at all,” KC answered, his hand still covering his bleeding nose. “That hurt. Why would you do that?”

“You’re really gonna hate what I’m gonna do next,” Raph growled as he lunged for KC but KC had other plans.

He dodged Raph’s fist by dropping to the floor then he kicked up, landing his foot in Raph’s gut. Raph staggered back but recovered in time to avoid KC’s next attack. KC’s hand grazed Raph’s shoulder as Raph turned. Capturing KC’s arm by the wrist, Raph then pulled it behind KC’s back.

“You’re gonna pay for what you did to Donny,” Raph rumbled while twisting KC’s arm.  

“Donny?” KC turned his head to look at Raph. “Raph?” Confusion washed over his face, “Was it really that long ago or did you grow up fast?”

“I grew up fast,” Raph answered.

Raph continued to pull up on KC’s pinned arm, thinking he had the upper hand but KC wasn’t so easily overcome. He moved through the pain, bringing his free arm up and back to elbow Raph in the jaw. The blow was hard enough to cause Raph to let go and KC turned to face Raph.

“I don’t know your story, kid, maybe I’ll get it out of you one day but there is one thing that I already know.”

“Yeah, what’s that?” Raph asked, rubbing his jaw while circling KC.

“You died,” KC answered. Raph paused and KC laughed. “I can see it in your eyes. I’ve seen it often enough that I can recognize it now.” He smiled and tilted his head to the side, “Tell me. Did it leave an empty feeling inside to learn that there is nothing after this life is finished, just darkness?”

“That’s what it must have been like for you,” Raph pulled his sai from their holsters. “But, when I died I felt nothing but peace. The traumatic part was when I was wrenched away from it to return to the land of the living.”

“Well then,” KC smiled. “Let me have the honors of sending you back.”

KC lunged at Raph while pulling daggers from his belt and their weapons clashed. Raph glared into the eyes of the monster who had haunted his nightmares for years and felt only loathing. Rage burned in his belly as they grappled.

“By the way,” KC grinned up at Raph. “That ass was ni~ce,” he hissed. “Has he let you tap it yet?”

KC’s words lit a fire in Raph and he roared in anger.

“I guess not,” KC chuckled, then put on a fake pouty face. “Is that really why you’re angry? A little sexually frustrated?”

Raph was fuming at this point but instead of making him falter, like KC had planned, it made him more determined. Raph was larger and stronger than KC and was soon able to wrench the daggers from his opponent’s hands. He then lurched forward and head butted KC in the beak, staggering him back as fresh blood started to ooze from his nose.

Raph spun and kicked KC on the side of his head, sending him to the ground. Before KC had the chance to recover, Raph dropped his foot down on KC’s chest.

KC gasped out as the wind was forced from his lungs and his heart forgot to beat for a few lingering seconds.

Not wanting to give KC any chances, Raph dropped down bringing his sai towards KC’s chest, needing the momentum to break through the hard upper plastron, but KC turned, taking the blow in his arm. The force of the blow sent his sai in to the bone. Raph jerked his sai free, twisting as he did to cause as much damage as possible while arching his other sai towards KC’s head but he only managing to strike air.

Despite his injuries, KC still had fight in him and weapons on him. His hand emerged with a metal claw and he buried the spikes into Raph’s right shoulder muscle. Raph punched KC in the beak again, snapping his head back and causing it to strike the floor.

Raph pulled away from KC the metal claw, still lodged in his shoulder, slipped free of KC’s hand. KC rolled to try to get to his feet but Raph kicked his carapace, knocking him back down. Ignoring the pain in his shoulder and fueled by his rage, Raph rolled KC back to his carapace.

“You took what was supposed to be mine,” Raph said through gritted teeth. “I’ll make you pay for what you did to Donny.”

“You’ve beat me up,” K.C. said in a daze. “We even?”

“Not even close.” Knowing it would be harder to pierce through the thick upper plastron, Raph focused on the softer bridge on the side. Raph pushed the tip of his sai through the sensitive bridge on KC’s left side. Once he pressed through the cartilage like shell, he slowly pressed into the soft insides. “I’m gonna make you suffer.”

“I’m not done yet,” KC grunted. “You’re not gonna get to savor this.” His right hand shot up as he rolled and drove a spike into Raph’s left side, twisting it as he tried to sit up.

Raph brought his left hand up and managed to send his sai into KC’s writs, causing KC’s hand to open before he had the chance to pull the spike back out.

With his sai still through KC’s writs, Raph pulled K.C.’s arm up then straddled KC while shifting the sai to his right hand. Raph then continued to stab into KC’s right side with his other sai. Raph’s left side screamed in pain, the spike shifting with each stroke.  

Blood oozed from KC’s mouth and nose but his eyes stayed locked with Raph’s. “You ever kill someone before, boy?”

Raph didn’t answer, just continued to stab KC’s left side.

“I will haunt your dreams forever,” KC laughed, his voice weak and gruff. “I’ve seen meaner men than you traumatized by the act of taking a life. I die with the joy of knowing that I damaged both you and your precious Donny for life.”

“Donny will sleep better at night knowing that he will never have to face you again.” Raph leaned in. “And, I will take comfort in knowing that I saved others from ever becoming your victim.”

“I may have done some awful things in my life,” K.C. gurgled out. “But I had fun doing it.”

He laughed as his eyes lost focused and continued to laugh as his life drained from him. Raph moved to stand, his foot slipping on the pool of blood and jostling the spike still in his side. He grunted in pain and had to lean over KC’s body while he waited for his head to stop spinning.

“Kaaaay…Seee…?”

Raph turned to see Bloo standing in the door way, holding the hand of a child. The child took one look at the carnage and screamed. He pulled his hand free of Bloo’s and bolted away as fast as his little legs would carry him.

Bloo didn’t care about the child, and ran into the room to kneel next to KC. The odd creature let out a long and sorrowful chirp as it brought its hand up to touch KC’s face.

Raph managed to move off of KC and watched while Bloo rushed over to get a first aid kit. Bloo hurried back over to KC’s side and started to scoop the blood off the ground in an attempt to put it back, the whole time continuing with his mournful trills and chirps.

“Bloo,” Raph knelt down next to Bloo. “You don’t have to serve him anymore.”

Bloo turned and hissed at Raph.

“You’re free Bloo,” Raph said.

Bloo ignored him and tried to get KC to drink something.

Raph sighed then reached up to touch Bloo’s collar. “You don’t need this anymore.” With a simple tug, Raph pulled the collar off of Bloo’s neck. “You’ll soon realize that there is nothing you can do for him.”

His intentions were to set Bloo free in a symbolic way, to show Bloo that it was no longer a pet but he had no idea what the collar really was. Bloo’s eyes went wide and a soft chirp escaped him before he fell forward. Raph sat there holding the collar unsure of what had happened. “Bloo?” Raph reached over and shook him. “Bloo?”

Raph could feel the tingle of magic in the collar as he held it in his hand. He tried putting the collar back around Bloo’s neck but nothing happened. “No,” Raph choked out. “I didn’t want you to die. Please.”

“I’m sorry,” Raph whispered as he reached up to close Bloo’s eyes.

As he stood, Raph grabbed the cloth and pulled it off of KC to take with him to present to the Daimyo. He headed for the door but before he stepped through a sound caused him to pause. Raph turned back to look at the two dead bodies on the floor then looked around the room. “Is someone there?”

He stood listening for a moment and he heard the noise again.

He rushed to the back room and he could feel the tingle of magic as he stepped through the door into the familiar room. His eyes fell on the bed that once held Donny and a lump formed in his throat. He stood with his eyes transfixed on the bed but a soft coo snapped him out of his trance.

He turned and saw a baby bundled up in a bassinet. Yellow eyes in a sea of black looked up at him and dripped with black tears. White drool dripped from the side of its mouth as it sucked its tongue.

Raph bent down and pulled the swaddle back to reveal that the orange faced baby had markings like KC and faded down into a blue body.

“Well, I can’t leave you here,” Raph sighed and picked the baby up. As he stood, the loss of blood and his injuries caught up with him and he staggered. With a grunt he willed his body to work and turned to leave with the baby in his arms.

Raph made it out to the street before falling to his knees. He was losing energy quickly and he wasn’t sure if he was going to make it to the Daimyo’s estate.

“Are you alright?” a man asked, walking up to Raph. “You need a doctor.”

Raph looked up to see Kluh, the fighter who Mikey beat back in their first nexus tournament. He was in his smaller form at the moment but Raph knew that he was able to grow to over three times his size in a matter of seconds.

“KC,” Raph grunted out. “I killed him.” Using his last reserves of strength, Raph placed the baby safly on the ground before he blacked out.
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