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I wish to credit my friend Sugi-chan, whom this work would not have been completed without his help.


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He read this carefully as he walked back to the information desk.\n\nAt the Information desk Maddison and a Bulldog named Willie were working on a busy but steady day as there weren't any major problems that took place during the day.\n\nAfter a while though Willie was regretting the lunch he had eaten. and told Maddison ``I am going to the bathroom, don't leave the information desk, and just help them with the map.''\n\nMaddison nodded and kept working for a few minutes. It was at that moment that the three girls, Maura, Sabrina, and Stani. The three came up to Maddison for answers. He hoped he wouldn't disappoint the beautiful three.\n\n``Excuse me,'' Maura began, ``We have some questions we would like to have answers?'' She asked the red tabby.\n\n``Well, you came to the right place, this is the information desk, how can I help you three.'' Maddison asked the girls, trying to keep a professional composure.\n\n``Well, there's this dance thing being held here on campus, can you spill some beans about getting in?'' Maura asked trying to nod and flirt to show off her charm to the young cat at the desk. Sabrina and Stani knew it wouldn't work but said nothing.\n\n``Oh the dance!'' Maddison replied excited, Yes the Social is happening this Saturday, before christmas. he then held up a pair of tickets to the three. ``You can pick them up at the bank over there.'' he pointed to a small row of glass teller screens ``I got these as a gift, I didn't expect a girl to ask me out, well I might as well, I hope you three get dates, I guess we should meet up!'' He replied very enthusiastic to them. \n\nSabrina interrupted them ``Mom says we all can go and gave me money to buy your tickets.'' \n\n``Excellent, Thank you for your help mister.'' Maura smiled and waved to the cat. He couldn't help but smile at the three girls, they seemed so cute.\n\nAt the teller's desk, a tired looking Brown Labrador was taking care of payments to a student over classes. ``Good, make sure you pay on time next time.'' was the advice she gave a very annoyed pig. \n\nWhen the three walked up Sabrina was nugged up first by Maura. \n\n``How can I help you.'' she asked the Cat.\n\n``M-me, well, uh..'' Sabrina tried but was a little intimidated.\n\n``I'm waiting, can't help ya if you won't speak.'' The Labrador replied.\n\n``Epp!'' Sabrina freaked in a shiver,\n\n``My friend wants to buy tickets to the dance happening this Saturday.'' Maura cut in, ``She has a ticket, she wants one for me and my friend.'' she them pointed to Stani whom nodded. \n\nThe Labrador looked at the pair then turned to Sabrina. ``Is that true?'' Sabrina then squeeked but nodded slowly. \n\nThe Labrador shook her head, ``You girls know it's Thursday right?'' \n\n``Oh come on, are you telling us we're late!'' Maura protested with a hint of anger flaring in her bright blue eyes. \n\n``Keep your skirt on I haven't finished young lady!'' the Labrador replied angrily to the checkered giant rabbit. Before calmly turning back to the black cat.\n\n``I have 15 tickets left, Idealistically you three should have bought them earlier but I will let it slide, if you have a ticket show me, if not show me your student IDs.'' she added turning tp the fox and rabbit. \n\nSabrina showed her ticket and the Labrador nodded in approval, Maura and Stani handed their IDs. \n\n``Who's buying?'' The Labrador asked.\n\n``I...... Am!'' Sabrina struggled handing her credit card to the dog in the window.\n\n``Easy kitty, I'll take care of it.'' The Labrador replied taking the card, processing the purchase wondering how this black cat functioned in society. \n\n``Ok you two, here you go.'' The lab handed the Credit Card back to Sabrina, and both IDs with Tickets to Maura and Stani, ``All 3 of you are now on the list, take good care of your tickets, but it's a formal gathering... so you three better dress up. She finished eyeing Stani with an unwelcome puzzled look as if rejected the idea the fox could dress nicely. \n\n``T-t-thank you!'' Sabrina blurted out and then walked fast away from the teller. Maura and Stani followed. \n\n``I didn't like the look that woman gave me,'' Stani started with Maura and Sabrina, ``also how formal is this dance.'' Stani asked wondering what kind of thing she was getting into.\n\n``Well, it's a formal dance and well,'' Maura started.\n\n``Mother wants us to wear this kind of outfit.'' Sabrina finished showing the same picture on her cellphone.\n\nStani studded the picture only for her spirits to drop.\n\n``A-are you kidding me! I am to be dolled up like this?'' Stani replied in anger not liking the idea.\n\n``But we are going to have our dresses matched from our measurements so they can properly fit.'' Sabrina added to reassure Stani that it would all be ok. Stani wasn't pleased.\n\n``So for this dance I am going to get felt and measured by a total stranger to wear some uncomfortable dress in aweful high heels and don't you girls know how uncomfortable those things are!'' Stani ranted angrily to the girls.\n\n``Aw please come with us Stani we need the ride and I don't think we can handle this alone, pretty please please please!'' Maura begged making a sad bunny face to the protesting fox. The sad eyes were too much for the fox to resist.\n\nStani sighed in defeat. ``Ok fine, I will doll up with you two, I used to go to functions like this back in Norway and they weren't really fun. But I guess I can go with you with some ground rules.'' Stani finished to the girls.\n\n``Yay! we're going to the dance!'' Maura celebrated hugging the Fox excited.\n\n``Well we will be a little basic in appearance, I won't want too much make-up if that is your concern.'' Sabrina added.\n\n``well that's a relief, we three better get these outfits before they run out.'' Stani added walking the pair to her Mini. \n\n``I have the address have you a GPS?'' asked the Cat.\n\n``You bet your asteroid kid.'' Stani joked with a grin which caused Maura to chuckle but Sabrina to pause confused.\n\n``I don't understand why would I bet an asteroid?'' Sabrina asked puzzled buckling her seat belt.\n\n``It's a joke I saw in a movie, I will explain it when we are out of the car.'' Stani commented buckling up and once all 3 were ready She drove them to the dress shop\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Merry Christmas Mister Hertlem

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 As the campus, early in the morning, was active as a red tabby cat, named Maddison, was hard at work answering phone calls, connecting calls, and directing visitors and students to the rooms they wanted to attend to. His focus was on performing a good job, and yet, the events of the week would change things.

Upon taking his first 15 minute break, he walked by his campus mailbox, which really was more a little cubby with his name taped on it. The cat, dressed in a smart looking tan suit and tie for work, noticed a white envelope inside said cubby. Puzzled he grabbed the envelope labeled ``to Maddison'' with a heart drawn by his name. As if opening a bomb he carefully opened the letter, finding by surprise a ticket for the dance, and a love letter. He read this carefully as he walked back to the information desk.

At the Information desk Maddison and a Bulldog named Willie were working on a busy but steady day as there weren't any major problems that took place during the day.

After a while though Willie was regretting the lunch he had eaten. and told Maddison ``I am going to the bathroom, don't leave the information desk, and just help them with the map.''

Maddison nodded and kept working for a few minutes. It was at that moment that the three girls, Maura, Sabrina, and Stani. The three came up to Maddison for answers. He hoped he wouldn't disappoint the beautiful three.

``Excuse me,'' Maura began, ``We have some questions we would like to have answers?'' She asked the red tabby.

``Well, you came to the right place, this is the information desk, how can I help you three.'' Maddison asked the girls, trying to keep a professional composure.

``Well, there's this dance thing being held here on campus, can you spill some beans about getting in?'' Maura asked trying to nod and flirt to show off her charm to the young cat at the desk. Sabrina and Stani knew it wouldn't work but said nothing.

``Oh the dance!'' Maddison replied excited, Yes the Social is happening this Saturday, before christmas. he then held up a pair of tickets to the three. ``You can pick them up at the bank over there.'' he pointed to a small row of glass teller screens ``I got these as a gift, I didn't expect a girl to ask me out, well I might as well, I hope you three get dates, I guess we should meet up!'' He replied very enthusiastic to them.

Sabrina interrupted them ``Mom says we all can go and gave me money to buy your tickets.''

``Excellent, Thank you for your help mister.'' Maura smiled and waved to the cat. He couldn't help but smile at the three girls, they seemed so cute.

At the teller's desk, a tired looking Brown Labrador was taking care of payments to a student over classes. ``Good, make sure you pay on time next time.'' was the advice she gave a very annoyed pig.

When the three walked up Sabrina was nugged up first by Maura.

``How can I help you.'' she asked the Cat.

``M-me, well, uh..'' Sabrina tried but was a little intimidated.

``I'm waiting, can't help ya if you won't speak.'' The Labrador replied.

``Epp!'' Sabrina freaked in a shiver,

``My friend wants to buy tickets to the dance happening this Saturday.'' Maura cut in, ``She has a ticket, she wants one for me and my friend.'' she them pointed to Stani whom nodded.

The Labrador looked at the pair then turned to Sabrina. ``Is that true?'' Sabrina then squeeked but nodded slowly.

The Labrador shook her head, ``You girls know it's Thursday right?''

``Oh come on, are you telling us we're late!'' Maura protested with a hint of anger flaring in her bright blue eyes.

``Keep your skirt on I haven't finished young lady!'' the Labrador replied angrily to the checkered giant rabbit. Before calmly turning back to the black cat.

``I have 15 tickets left, Idealistically you three should have bought them earlier but I will let it slide, if you have a ticket show me, if not show me your student IDs.'' she added turning tp the fox and rabbit.

Sabrina showed her ticket and the Labrador nodded in approval, Maura and Stani handed their IDs.

``Who's buying?'' The Labrador asked.

``I...... Am!'' Sabrina struggled handing her credit card to the dog in the window.

``Easy kitty, I'll take care of it.'' The Labrador replied taking the card, processing the purchase wondering how this black cat functioned in society.

``Ok you two, here you go.'' The lab handed the Credit Card back to Sabrina, and both IDs with Tickets to Maura and Stani, ``All 3 of you are now on the list, take good care of your tickets, but it's a formal gathering... so you three better dress up. She finished eyeing Stani with an unwelcome puzzled look as if rejected the idea the fox could dress nicely.

``T-t-thank you!'' Sabrina blurted out and then walked fast away from the teller. Maura and Stani followed.

``I didn't like the look that woman gave me,'' Stani started with Maura and Sabrina, ``also how formal is this dance.'' Stani asked wondering what kind of thing she was getting into.

``Well, it's a formal dance and well,'' Maura started.

``Mother wants us to wear this kind of outfit.'' Sabrina finished showing the same picture on her cellphone.

Stani studded the picture only for her spirits to drop.

``A-are you kidding me! I am to be dolled up like this?'' Stani replied in anger not liking the idea.

``But we are going to have our dresses matched from our measurements so they can properly fit.'' Sabrina added to reassure Stani that it would all be ok. Stani wasn't pleased.

``So for this dance I am going to get felt and measured by a total stranger to wear some uncomfortable dress in aweful high heels and don't you girls know how uncomfortable those things are!'' Stani ranted angrily to the girls.

``Aw please come with us Stani we need the ride and I don't think we can handle this alone, pretty please please please!'' Maura begged making a sad bunny face to the protesting fox. The sad eyes were too much for the fox to resist.

Stani sighed in defeat. ``Ok fine, I will doll up with you two, I used to go to functions like this back in Norway and they weren't really fun. But I guess I can go with you with some ground rules.'' Stani finished to the girls.

``Yay! we're going to the dance!'' Maura celebrated hugging the Fox excited.

``Well we will be a little basic in appearance, I won't want too much make-up if that is your concern.'' Sabrina added.

``well that's a relief, we three better get these outfits before they run out.'' Stani added walking the pair to her Mini.

``I have the address have you a GPS?'' asked the Cat.

``You bet your asteroid kid.'' Stani joked with a grin which caused Maura to chuckle but Sabrina to pause confused.

``I don't understand why would I bet an asteroid?'' Sabrina asked puzzled buckling her seat belt.

``It's a joke I saw in a movie, I will explain it when we are out of the car.'' Stani commented buckling up and once all 3 were ready She drove them to the dress shop

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