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And once again it was written from my friend [iconname]NeoDacsoft[/iconname] to help make it as a comic script!\n\nThis story was almost plan to make it as a comic... to commission from bbmbbf... but it has to be rejected... because the story was kind of long and expensive to make... So dacsoft decided to make his own comic project feat. Fiona and Rouge in Swingers, instead.\n\nSo there you go... enjoy this story the battle between Rouge and Fiona! Enjoy. ;)\n\n ", "description_bbcode_parsed": "This is a comic script from last year. And once again it was written from my friend  \r\n\t\t\t\t\t\r\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\r\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\r\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\r\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\r\n\t\t\t\t\t\t
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  to help make it as a comic script!

This story was almost plan to make it as a comic... to commission from bbmbbf... but it has to be rejected... because the story was kind of long and expensive to make... So dacsoft decided to make his own comic project feat. Fiona and Rouge in Swingers, instead.

So there you go... enjoy this story the battle between Rouge and Fiona! Enjoy. ;)

  ", "writing": "comic title: Battle of the bitches\nscript by: GSH Original story by: Robthe1st\n\npage 1: \n\nframe 1: rouge and fiona are fighting, fiona tears at rouges clothing\nfiona: \"how do you like that, bitch!\"\n\nframe 2: they start pushing at each other\n\nframe 3: fiona tears at rouges breast plate and removes it,exposing one of rouges breasts\n\nframe 4: fiona tears at rouges other breast plate, exposing her other breast\n\npage 2: \n\nframe 1: rouge chops fiona on the back of the neck,\n\nframe 2: fiona is knocked out on to her knees (her ass and pussy are visible to the viewer)\n\nframe 3: rouge picks fiona's unconscious body off of the ground (rouge has fiona over her shoulder)\n\nrouge: \"I'm gonna have some fun with this foxy bitch!\" (grin on her face)\n\nframe 4: rouge kicks open the door to her apartment with fiona slumped over her shoulder\n\npage 3:\n\nframe 1: rouge enters her bedroom with fiona slumped over her shoulder\n\nrouge : \"I can't wait to play with you!\"\n\nframe 2: rouge throws fiona's unconscious body on her bed (fiona is on her stomach)\n\nframe 3: rouge spreads fiona's legs (with a smile on her face) exposing fiona's tight tender pink cunt and tight anus\n\nrouge: \"you don't know what your in for…I'll show you how dirty I can be!\"\n\nframe 4: rouge grabs a dildo and puts the tip against fiona's tight cunt\n\nrouge: \"she's gonna be a tight fit!\"\n\npage 4:\n\nframe 1: rouge inserts the dildo in fiona's pussy all the way, fiona stirs slightly\n\nrouge: \"I know what will wake you up!\"\n\nframe 2: rouge grabs another dildo and tries to enter fiona's tight anus, but is unable\n\nrouge: \"sure not lacking any tightness here….I know what will do the trick\"\n\nframe 3: rouge grabs some lubrication and rubs it in fiona's anus\n\nframe 4: rouge thrust the second dildo hard into fiona's anus….fiona's wakes her eyes wide…\n\nfiona: \"wha…what the fuck!!!\"\n\npage 5: \n\nframe 1: fiona looks back at rouge with an expression of ecstasy on her face\n\nfiona: \" this…this isn't over rouge…but for now lets just enjoy each other..ok\"\n\nframe 2: rouge has both her hands on the dildo's and is thrusting them both in fiona's holes\n\nfiona: \"oh fuck….oh fuck faster, rouge faster!!\"\n\nframe 3: rouge continues thrusting the dildo's in fiona\n\nfiona: \" I…I'm gonna…gonna cum!!!\"\n\nframe 4: rouge still continues thrusting the dildo's in fiona's holes, fiona's cum is leaking out of her pussy\n\npage 6:\n\nframe 1: rouge tongues fiona's pussy, licking her cum up, as she thrusts the dildo's in fiona\n\nrouge: \"mmmmm fiona…you taste sooo good!!\"\n\nframe 2: fiona's face is locked in ecstasy as rouge continues to lick at her cum leaking cunt\n\nframe 3: they stop… rouge and fiona are now standing (fiona's cunt is still leaking her cum)\n\nrouge : \"i've got and idea that will please the both of us\" (grin on her face)\n\nframe 4: they are facing away from each other…ass to ass…rouge inserts both ends of the dildo in her and fiona's cunts\n\npage 7:\n\nframe 1: rouge inserts another dildo in both of their asses\n\nrouge : \"oh yeah this feels great\"\n\nfiona: (licking her lips) \"here too\"\n\nframe 2: they both push back on the dildo's, they are screwing each other\n\nframe 3: shadow is at rouge's apartment door…he is knocking at it…no answer\n\nshadow: \"I'll investigate\"\n\nframe 4: he walks towards the half open bedroom door and peers in\n\n\npage 8:\n\nframe 1: rouge and fiona are looking at shadow (they are still screwing each other)… shadows is embarrassed.. but then says... \n\nshadow: \"mind if I join in girls\"\n\nshadow: (speech bubble below his other one) (thinking) \"oh man a threesome..this is a first for me!\"\n\nrouge: \"as long as you put your big cock in my first\"\n\nframe 2: (the girls have stopped screwing each other) rouge grabs shadows cock and starts sucking on it..(shadow has his eyes closed) fiona is sucking on shadows balls, she puts her finger in his anus\n\nshadow: \"ohh rouge your mouth is sooo soft\"\n\nrouge: (thinking) \"think my mouths soft try my pussy\" ( grin on her face)\n\nframe 3: the girls continue sucking shadow…fiona still has her finger in his ass (motion lines around fiona's finger)\n\nshadow: \" yeah fiona…that feels so fucking good…and rouge don't stop!\"\n\nframe 4: the girls continue their same actions\n\nshadow: \"don't stop…i..I…can't hold it…i'm…I'm gonna CUM!!!\"\n\npage 9:\n\nframe 1: the girls are both facing towards shadows penis…he is spraying cum on both of their faces and tits\n\nframe 2: shadow continues to shoot cum all over the girls, the girls are rubbing their cum covered tits\n\nframe 3: both of the girls take some of shadows cum and are rubbing it in their cunts\n\nframe 4: they take some more of shadows cum and are both bent over away from him rubbing his cum in their asses shadow continues to spray his cum all over the girls asses\n\nrouge: \"your cum is so hot shadow\"\n\nfiona: \"cover me\" (she is licking her lips)\n\n\npage 10: \n\nframe 1: shadow has stopped spraying cum on the girls asses… rouge whispers in fiona's ear\n\nrouge to fiona: \"i've got an idea\"\n\nframe 2: rouge gets on her knees (doggystyle position) fiona gets on top of her (on her stomach), both of the girls cum covered asses are lined up facing shadow… shadows mouth is open..drooling\n\nshadow: \"so hot!…so hot!\"\n\nframe 3: shadow rubs his penis in both of the girls cunts starting with rouge, then fiona\n\nshadow: \"now who wants it first\"\n\nrouge: \"don't you remember. me I want it!!\" (she is licking her lips)\n\nframe 4: shadow enters rouge's cunt with a groan\n\npage 11:\n\nframe 1: shadow pulls out and enters fiona's cunt\n\nframe 2: he enters rouge's cunt\n\nframe 3: shadow pull out and enters fiona's cunt \n\nframe 4: while shadow is screwing fiona.. he still his finger in fiona's ass\n\npage 12:\n\nframe 1: shadow is still screwing fiona's cunt, he takes his finger out of fiona's ass and is licking it…\n\nshadow: \"fiona…you taste soo good!\"\n\nrouge: \"try mine next\"\n\nframe 2: \"shadow enters rouge's cunt with his finger in her ass\n\nframe 3: he takes his finger out of rouge's ass and tastes it…\n\nshadow: \"you taste just as good!!\"\n\nframe 4: he slows screwing rouge's cunt\n\nshadow: \"I can't hold on any longer…\n\npage 13:\n\nframe 1: he pulls out and cums all over the girls asses and cunts… they both let out a moan\n\nrouge: \"Wow shadow you sure had a huge load!\"\n\nshadow: (grin on his face) (thinking) \"got another surprise for ya girls\"\n\nframe 2: he quickly inserts fiona's ass and cums (subframe within frame 2, internal shot showing shadows penis cuming in fiona's ass)\n\nframe 3: he pulls out of fiona's ass he is still shooting cum\n\nframe 4: shadow quickly inserts rouge's ass and fills her (subframe within frame 4 internal shot showing shadows penis cuming in rouge's ass)\n\npage 14:\n\nframe 1: shadow pulls out of rouge's ass still shooting his cum\n\nframe 2: fiona gets off of rouge and starts licking his anus as he shoots cum all over rouge's butt\n\nshadow: \"i've got some more cum just for you rouge\"\n\nframe 3: shadow is inside rouge's pussy…and is cuming again (subframe within frame 3 showing shadows penis cumin inside rouge's pussy) rouge's face light up with glee\n\nrouge: \"yeah fill me up with your hot sticky cum shadow!!!\"\n\nframe 4: shadow continues to fill rouge's pussy his his cum…it is leaking out of her pussy\n\npage 15:\n\nframe 1: shadow pulls out of rouge's pussy and sprays her ass and pussy a final time\n\nframe 2: an exhausted shadow falls on top of rouge\n\nfiona/rouge: \"wow shadow you sure fucked our brain's out!\"\n\nshadow: \"I gave it my all…just for you girls\" (satisfied look on his face)\n\nframe 3: they all conk out on the bed….the girls asses are covered in shadows cum…..shadow has a satisfied grin on his face as he sleeps\n\nframe 4: title: \"a few hours later\" fiona wakes up and is looking at shadow and rouge\n\npage 16: \n\nframe 1: fiona goes to rouge's bathroom and grabs rouge's shower curtain as clothing\n\nframe 2: she kisses shadow on the lips\n\nfiona: \"you were great shadow\"\n\nframe 3: fiona kisses rouge on the lips\n\nfiona: \"next time I will win the battle…and I'll be good this time!\"\n\nframe 4: shot showing fiona leaving rouge's apartment\n\npage 17:\n\nframe 1: rouge opens her eyes…she is lying sideways on the bed…\n\nrouge: \"see you again my bitch!\" (smug grin on her face)\n\ntitle: (bottom of frame 1) \"END?\"\n\nframe 2: rouge is on her back fiona is on her knees on top of rouge, shadows penis is sandwiched between both of the girls counts. shadow has his eyes closed in complete heaven, the girls are both looking back at him..licking their lips\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "comic title: Battle of the bitches
script by: GSH   Original story by: Robthe1st

page 1:

frame 1: rouge and fiona are fighting, fiona tears at rouges clothing
fiona: "how do you like that, bitch!"

frame 2: they start pushing at each other

frame 3: fiona tears at rouges breast plate and removes it,exposing one of rouges breasts

frame 4: fiona tears at rouges other breast plate, exposing her other breast

page 2:

frame 1: rouge chops fiona on the back of the neck,

frame 2: fiona is knocked out on to her knees (her ass and pussy are visible to the viewer)

frame 3: rouge picks fiona's unconscious body off of the ground (rouge has fiona over her shoulder)

rouge: "I'm gonna have some fun with this foxy bitch!" (grin on her face)

frame 4: rouge kicks open the door to her apartment with fiona slumped over her shoulder

page 3:

frame 1: rouge enters her bedroom with fiona slumped over her shoulder

rouge : "I can't wait to play with you!"

frame 2: rouge throws fiona's unconscious body on her bed (fiona is on her stomach)

frame 3: rouge spreads fiona's legs (with a smile on her face) exposing fiona's tight tender pink cunt and tight anus

rouge: "you don't know what your in for…I'll show you how dirty I can be!"

frame 4:  rouge grabs a dildo and puts the tip against fiona's tight cunt

rouge: "she's gonna be a tight fit!"

page 4:

frame 1: rouge inserts the dildo in fiona's pussy all the way, fiona stirs slightly

rouge: "I know what will wake you up!"

frame 2: rouge grabs another dildo and tries to enter fiona's tight anus, but is unable

rouge: "sure not lacking any tightness here….I know what will do the trick"

frame 3: rouge grabs some lubrication and rubs it in fiona's anus

frame 4: rouge thrust the second dildo hard into fiona's anus….fiona's wakes her eyes wide…

fiona: "wha…what the fuck!!!"

page 5:

frame 1: fiona looks back at rouge with an expression of ecstasy on her face

fiona: " this…this isn't over rouge…but for now lets just enjoy each other..ok"

frame 2: rouge has both her hands on the dildo's and is thrusting them both in fiona's holes

fiona: "oh fuck….oh fuck faster, rouge faster!!"

frame 3: rouge continues thrusting the dildo's in fiona

fiona: " I…I'm gonna…gonna cum!!!"

frame 4: rouge still continues thrusting the dildo's in fiona's holes, fiona's cum is leaking out of her pussy

page 6:

frame 1: rouge tongues fiona's pussy, licking her cum up, as she thrusts the dildo's in fiona

rouge: "mmmmm fiona…you taste sooo good!!"

frame 2: fiona's face is locked in ecstasy as rouge continues to lick at her cum leaking cunt

frame 3: they stop… rouge and fiona are now standing (fiona's cunt is still leaking her cum)

rouge : "i've got and idea that will please the both of us" (grin on her face)

frame 4: they are facing away from each other…ass to ass…rouge inserts both ends of the dildo in her and fiona's cunts

page 7:

frame 1: rouge inserts another dildo in both of their asses

rouge : "oh yeah this feels great"

fiona: (licking her lips) "here too"

frame 2: they both push back on the dildo's, they are screwing each other

frame 3: shadow is at rouge's apartment door…he is knocking at it…no answer

shadow: "I'll investigate"

frame 4: he walks towards the half open bedroom door and peers in


page 8:

frame 1: rouge and fiona are looking at shadow (they are still screwing each other)… shadows is embarrassed.. but then says...

shadow: "mind if I join in girls"

shadow: (speech bubble below his other one)  (thinking) "oh man a threesome..this is a first for me!"

rouge: "as long as you put your big cock in my first"

frame 2:  (the girls have stopped screwing each other) rouge grabs shadows cock and starts sucking on it..(shadow has his eyes closed) fiona is sucking on shadows balls, she puts her finger in his anus

shadow: "ohh rouge your mouth is sooo soft"

rouge: (thinking) "think my mouths soft try my pussy" ( grin on her face)

frame 3: the girls continue sucking shadow…fiona still has her finger in his ass (motion lines around fiona's finger)

shadow: " yeah fiona…that feels so fucking good…and rouge don't stop!"

frame 4: the girls continue their same actions

shadow: "don't stop…i..I…can't hold it…i'm…I'm gonna CUM!!!"

page 9:

frame 1: the girls are both facing towards shadows penis…he is spraying cum on both of their faces and tits

frame 2:  shadow continues to shoot cum all over the girls, the girls are rubbing their cum covered tits

frame 3: both of the girls take some of shadows cum and are rubbing it in their cunts

frame 4: they take some more of shadows cum and are both bent over away from him rubbing his cum in their asses shadow continues to spray his cum all over the girls asses

rouge: "your cum is so hot shadow"

fiona: "cover me" (she is licking her lips)


page 10:

frame 1: shadow has stopped spraying cum on the girls asses… rouge whispers in fiona's ear

rouge to fiona: "i've got an idea"

frame 2: rouge gets on her knees (doggystyle position) fiona gets on top of her (on her stomach), both of the girls  cum covered asses are lined up facing shadow… shadows mouth is open..drooling

shadow: "so hot!…so hot!"

frame 3: shadow rubs his penis in both of the girls cunts starting  with rouge, then fiona

shadow: "now who wants it first"

rouge: "don't you remember. me I want it!!" (she is licking her lips)

frame 4: shadow enters rouge's cunt with a groan

page 11:

frame 1: shadow pulls out and enters fiona's cunt

frame 2: he enters rouge's cunt

frame 3: shadow pull out and enters fiona's cunt

frame 4: while shadow is screwing fiona.. he still his finger in fiona's ass

page 12:

frame 1: shadow is still screwing fiona's cunt, he takes his finger out of fiona's ass and is licking it…

shadow: "fiona…you taste soo good!"

rouge: "try mine next"

frame 2: "shadow enters rouge's cunt with his finger in her ass

frame 3: he takes his finger out of rouge's ass and tastes it…

shadow: "you taste just as good!!"

frame 4: he slows screwing rouge's cunt

shadow: "I can't hold on any longer…

page 13:

frame 1: he pulls out and cums all over the girls asses and cunts… they both let out a moan

rouge: "Wow shadow you sure had a huge load!"

shadow: (grin on his face) (thinking) "got another surprise for ya girls"

frame 2: he quickly inserts fiona's ass and cums (subframe within frame 2, internal shot showing shadows penis cuming in fiona's ass)

frame 3: he pulls out of fiona's ass he is still shooting cum

frame 4: shadow quickly inserts rouge's ass and fills her (subframe within frame 4 internal shot showing shadows penis cuming in rouge's ass)

page 14:

frame 1: shadow pulls out of rouge's ass still shooting his cum

frame 2: fiona gets off of rouge and starts licking his anus as he shoots cum all over rouge's butt

shadow: "i've got some more cum just for you rouge"

frame 3: shadow is inside rouge's pussy…and is cuming again (subframe within frame 3 showing shadows penis cumin inside rouge's pussy) rouge's face light up with glee

rouge: "yeah fill me up with your hot sticky cum shadow!!!"

frame 4: shadow continues to fill rouge's pussy his his cum…it is leaking out of her pussy

page 15:

frame 1: shadow pulls out of rouge's pussy and sprays her ass and pussy a final time

frame 2: an exhausted shadow falls on top of rouge

fiona/rouge: "wow shadow you sure fucked our brain's out!"

shadow: "I gave it my all…just for you girls" (satisfied look on his face)

frame 3: they all conk out on the bed….the girls asses are covered in shadows cum…..shadow has a satisfied grin on his face as he sleeps

frame 4: title: "a few hours later"     fiona wakes up and is looking at shadow and rouge

page 16:

frame 1: fiona goes to rouge's bathroom and grabs rouge's shower curtain as clothing

frame 2: she kisses shadow on the lips

fiona: "you were great shadow"

frame 3: fiona kisses rouge on the lips

fiona: "next time I will win the battle…and I'll be good this time!"

frame 4: shot showing fiona leaving rouge's apartment

page 17:

frame 1: rouge opens her eyes…she is lying sideways on the bed…

rouge: "see you again my bitch!" (smug grin on her face)

title: (bottom of frame 1) "END?"

frame 2: rouge is on her back fiona is on her knees on top of rouge, shadows penis is sandwiched between both of the girls counts. shadow has his eyes closed in complete heaven, the girls are both looking back at him..licking their lips

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