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Sometimes it doesn't lead anywhere interesting though, or I have ideas about some interesting things that could happen later, but no idea how to get there.\n\nThis story is kind of an example of that. Back when I first started writing out my stories, I wanted to try and make one involving Nick and Joseph together, since I rarely use that combination. I figured skinny dipping might be a good idea, given Joseph's proclivity for being naked and Nick's adventurousness. So I came up with this idea where the four boys come across a private pool on a hot day, and came up with an excuse for Jason and Jake to leave, and even had a good excuse for why Joseph would get naked.\n\nThe problems started when I tried to figure out how to get Nick naked. I thought maybe a race where his boxers were holding him back would help, along with seeing how free and relaxed Joseph looks. But even then, I had problems figuring out where I would go with the story after that. I didn't want it getting too sexual, and even if I did, I couldn't imagine Nick going along with it. I just couldn't think of anything interesting that would work in a text-based format. Also around this time, my mind started wandering to other stories, and I lost interest in this one. So in the end, this just wound up getting abandoned. The last time this story was modified was on February 9, 2020; 7 months ago.\n\nWho knows, maybe I'll revisit the idea sometime later. But for right now, I'm just going to post it in my scraps as-is.", "description_bbcode_parsed": "Usually when I decide to create a story, I just come up with a situation and try to let the characters' personalities drive what happens. Sometimes it doesn't lead anywhere interesting though, or I have ideas about some interesting things that could happen later, but no idea how to get there.

This story is kind of an example of that. Back when I first started writing out my stories, I wanted to try and make one involving Nick and Joseph together, since I rarely use that combination. I figured skinny dipping might be a good idea, given Joseph's proclivity for being naked and Nick's adventurousness. So I came up with this idea where the four boys come across a private pool on a hot day, and came up with an excuse for Jason and Jake to leave, and even had a good excuse for why Joseph would get naked.

The problems started when I tried to figure out how to get Nick naked. I thought maybe a race where his boxers were holding him back would help, along with seeing how free and relaxed Joseph looks. But even then, I had problems figuring out where I would go with the story after that. I didn't want it getting too sexual, and even if I did, I couldn't imagine Nick going along with it. I just couldn't think of anything interesting that would work in a text-based format. Also around this time, my mind started wandering to other stories, and I lost interest in this one. So in the end, this just wound up getting abandoned. The last time this story was modified was on February 9, 2020; 7 months ago.

Who knows, maybe I'll revisit the idea sometime later. But for right now, I'm just going to post it in my scraps as-is.", "writing": ">Nick (12), his brother Jake (8), Jason (13), and Jason's brother Joseph (10) are walking through the neighborhood on their way home from the park.\n>It's the early afternoon in the middle of summer.\n>Nick wipes the sweat from his forehead.\n>\"Fuck, why's it gotta be so hot?\"\n>\n>\"Hey, I think we can cut through here.\"\n>There was a house with a FOR SALE sign in the front yard.\n>It's a good chance that nobody's living there, so it should be fine to walk through.\n>The boys walked around the side of the house and encountered a gate.\n>\"Think we can hop over it?\"\n>Jason looked through a nearby window.\n>The house was completely empty inside.\n>\"Yeah, nobody's here. Let's go.\"\n>Nick gave Jake a boost over the gate, then Jospeh jumped and climbed over it.\n>As Nick started making his way over, he heard Joseph.\n>\"Woah! Guys, come check this out!\"\n>Jason was the last one over the gate, and they all went to see what Joseph found.\n>There was an in-ground pool in the back yard. Filled, clean, and fully operational.\n>Joseph was giddy with excitement.\n>\"We can go swimming! Nobody even lives here, so it's like our own private pool.\"\n>Jason wasn't as enthusiastic about it.\n>\"Eh, man I just want to go back home and relax. Get something to eat and sit in front of the AC.\"\n>\"Aww, come on! Please? I really wanna swim.\"\n>\"Well what are we supposed to do about Jake? You know he can't swim without his floats. Let's just go home and get inside where it's cool.\"\n>Joseph lowered his head and looked at the ground. It looked like he would not get to go swimming today.\n>But then Nick piped up: \"Hey, I could stay here and swim with him.\"\n>Jason turned to face Nick \"You sure? What about your brother?\"\n>\"Well, you could babysit him for me. You guys are both heading back to your house anyways, right?\"\n>Jason stood and thought for a moment. He and Jake have never had much interaction without Nick or Joseph around.\n>\"Alright then, if that's what you want to do. Come on Jake.\"\n>Jason walked over to the fence and took a peek over it. The lot on the other side looked safe to cross.\n>He gave Jake a boost over the fence and then hopped up on top of it himself. Then he looked back at Nick and Joseph.\n>He waved and and said \"See ya!\" right before he hopped down on the other side.\n>Now that they were gone, Nick kicked his shoes off and began pulling off his shirt.\n>\"Well, since we don't have our swim trunks, I guess we can just swim in our underwear.\"\n>He threw his shirt to the side and pulled down his shorts.\n>Just as he was stepping out of them, he saw Joseph run past him completely bare-ass naked.\n>Joseph jumped and pulled his legs close to his body as the splashed into the water.\n>As he resurfaced, he saw Nick standing at the edge in his boxers.\n>\"What the hell, man. I said keep your underwear on.\"\n>\"I didn't wear underwear today.\"\n>\"What!? Why not?\"\n>\"Because it's hot.\"\n>Nick grunted and shook his head.\n>\"Well, dude, you can't just swim around naked. What if someone sees you?\"\n>\"We're in a fenced in yard behind an empty house. Who's gonna see me?\"\n>Nick crossed his arms and tried to think of a comeback, but Joseph had a point.\n>\"...Alright, fine. But I'm keeping mine on.\"\n>Nick sat down on the edge and dipped his legs in. The water felt cool, but not too cold.\n>Then he pushed off of the edge and jumped in. The cool sensation surrounded his body and immediately began to rejuvenate him.\n>He returned to the surface and took a deep breath.\n>\"Ah, that's a lot better.\"\n\n>After swimming for a while\n>\"Hey Nick, wanna have a race?\"\n>\"Alright, sure.\"\n>\"Come over here.\"\n>Nick and Joseph swim to the far side of the pool and hold on to the edge.\n>\"Okay, so first one to the other side wins. Ready?\"\n>They both put their feet against the wall.\n>\"Go!\"\n>Both boys kick off of the wall for an initial boost.\n>As they are gliding across the pool, Nick feels his boxers falling down.\n>He reaches back, grabs the waistband, and pulls them back up.\n>He lost a little speed from doing this, but he can still catch up.\n>Nick starts using his arms and legs to take big strokes.\n>But he feels his knees getting caught on his underwear.\n>He surfaces from the water and wipes his eyes.\n>Joseph is already at the finish.\n>\"Hah, I win!\"\n>Nick felt frustrated.", "writing_bbcode_parsed": ">Nick (12), his brother Jake (8), Jason (13), and Jason's brother Joseph (10) are walking through the neighborhood on their way home from the park.
>It's the early afternoon in the middle of summer.
>Nick wipes the sweat from his forehead.
>"Fuck, why's it gotta be so hot?"
>
>"Hey, I think we can cut through here."
>There was a house with a FOR SALE sign in the front yard.
>It's a good chance that nobody's living there, so it should be fine to walk through.
>The boys walked around the side of the house and encountered a gate.
>"Think we can hop over it?"
>Jason looked through a nearby window.
>The house was completely empty inside.
>"Yeah, nobody's here. Let's go."
>Nick gave Jake a boost over the gate, then Jospeh jumped and climbed over it.
>As Nick started making his way over, he heard Joseph.
>"Woah! Guys, come check this out!"
>Jason was the last one over the gate, and they all went to see what Joseph found.
>There was an in-ground pool in the back yard. Filled, clean, and fully operational.
>Joseph was giddy with excitement.
>"We can go swimming! Nobody even lives here, so it's like our own private pool."
>Jason wasn't as enthusiastic about it.
>"Eh, man I just want to go back home and relax. Get something to eat and sit in front of the AC."
>"Aww, come on! Please? I really wanna swim."
>"Well what are we supposed to do about Jake? You know he can't swim without his floats. Let's just go home and get inside where it's cool."
>Joseph lowered his head and looked at the ground. It looked like he would not get to go swimming today.
>But then Nick piped up: "Hey, I could stay here and swim with him."
>Jason turned to face Nick "You sure? What about your brother?"
>"Well, you could babysit him for me. You guys are both heading back to your house anyways, right?"
>Jason stood and thought for a moment. He and Jake have never had much interaction without Nick or Joseph around.
>"Alright then, if that's what you want to do. Come on Jake."
>Jason walked over to the fence and took a peek over it. The lot on the other side looked safe to cross.
>He gave Jake a boost over the fence and then hopped up on top of it himself. Then he looked back at Nick and Joseph.
>He waved and and said "See ya!" right before he hopped down on the other side.
>Now that they were gone, Nick kicked his shoes off and began pulling off his shirt.
>"Well, since we don't have our swim trunks, I guess we can just swim in our underwear."
>He threw his shirt to the side and pulled down his shorts.
>Just as he was stepping out of them, he saw Joseph run past him completely bare-ass naked.
>Joseph jumped and pulled his legs close to his body as the splashed into the water.
>As he resurfaced, he saw Nick standing at the edge in his boxers.
>"What the hell, man. I said keep your underwear on."
>"I didn't wear underwear today."
>"What!? Why not?"
>"Because it's hot."
>Nick grunted and shook his head.
>"Well, dude, you can't just swim around naked. What if someone sees you?"
>"We're in a fenced in yard behind an empty house. Who's gonna see me?"
>Nick crossed his arms and tried to think of a comeback, but Joseph had a point.
>"...Alright, fine. But I'm keeping mine on."
>Nick sat down on the edge and dipped his legs in. The water felt cool, but not too cold.
>Then he pushed off of the edge and jumped in. The cool sensation surrounded his body and immediately began to rejuvenate him.
>He returned to the surface and took a deep breath.
>"Ah, that's a lot better."

>After swimming for a while
>"Hey Nick, wanna have a race?"
>"Alright, sure."
>"Come over here."
>Nick and Joseph swim to the far side of the pool and hold on to the edge.
>"Okay, so first one to the other side wins. Ready?"
>They both put their feet against the wall.
>"Go!"
>Both boys kick off of the wall for an initial boost.
>As they are gliding across the pool, Nick feels his boxers falling down.
>He reaches back, grabs the waistband, and pulls them back up.
>He lost a little speed from doing this, but he can still catch up.
>Nick starts using his arms and legs to take big strokes.
>But he feels his knees getting caught on his underwear.
>He surfaces from the water and wipes his eyes.
>Joseph is already at the finish.
>"Hah, I win!"
>Nick felt frustrated.", "pools_count": 0, "title": "Unfinished Story", "deleted": "f", "public": "t", "mimetype": "text/plain", "pagecount": "1", "rating_id": "1", "rating_name": "Mature", "ratings": [ { "content_tag_id": "2", "name": "Nudity", "description": "Nonsexual nudity exposing breasts or genitals (must not show arousal)", "rating_id": "1" } ], "submission_type_id": "12", "type_name": "Writing - Document", "guest_block": "f", "friends_only": "f", "comments_count": "0", "views": "134" }