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The door is cracked open with steam coming out.\n\nPanel 2: Inside of the bathroom we see Ash naked and taking a shower.\n\nPanel 3: Ash is stepping out of the shower and putting on a fancy bathrobe.\n\nPanel 4: Ash is staring at the fourth wall with a confident look on his\nface.\n\nAsh Ketchum: So... you ready for the night of your life?\n\nNarration: This is Ash Ketchum, the new world champion and the reigning\nmonarch of Galar and it looks like he's about to have a special night with\nsomeone but who?\n\n\n\nPage 2: 4 panels\n\nPanel 1: We see an image of the outside of the Ketchum's house at night.\n\nNarraton: Well before we can answer that question we'll need to go back to\nwhere it all started back to when Ash return home from the Alola region.\n\nPanel 2: Ash and Delia are in the living room. Ash is sitting on the couch\nand Delia is sitting in the chair. There are cups of tea on the table in\nfront of them both.\n\nDelia Ketchum: Ash sweetie I think it's time we finally have the talk.\n\nAsh Ketchum: Sure mom, what is it you want to talk about?\n\nDelia Ketchum: Ash, what I'm about to tell is something that can only be\ndiscuss between a mother and her son only. Trust me you'll be glad Pikachu\nisn't here to hear any of this, that's why I send him and Mimey to stay at\nprofessor Oak's lab for the night.\n\nPanel 3: The scene is focused on Delia with her arms crossed, and giving\noff a firm expression on her face.\n\nDelia Ketchum: Ash, I am proud of how much you have accomplished and I\nsupport you choices in life but I don't want you to live a life of pokemon\nbattles alone.\n\nAsh Ketchum (off-screen): Wait, you're not telling me to quit pokemon\nbattles are you ?\n\nDelia Ketchum: No Ash, I'm saying it's time for you to explore the world of\nwomen.\n\nAsh Ketchum (off-screen): What?\n\nDelia Ketchum: I'm not going to let my only son run around the world\nwithout a girl or two in his life and as you're mother...\n\nPanel 4: Delia is standing up in front of the fireplace showing off a table\nfull of bottles of lube, sex toys, a flashlight sex toy, and a stack of\nporno DVD's. Ash has a shocked expression on his face.\n\nDelia Ketchum: It's my job to teach you everything to know about sex and\nhow to pick up girls.\n\nAsh Ketchum (yelling): Mom were in the world did you get all that stuff.\n\nDelia Ketchum: Now drop your pants mister, your training starts now.\n\nAsh Ketchum (yelling): WHAT!!!\n\n\n\nPage 3: 4 panels\n\nPanel 1: We see a image of the Vermilion City gym.\n\nNarration: After months of Delia's training Ash was ready to put his new\nskills to the test and it looks like he has found his first target.\n\nPanel 2: We see a shower room. Visquez is walking in naked and holding a\ntowel.\n\nVisquez: What a day, after that last battle with Ash I've really worked up\na sweat.\n\nPanel 3: Visquez is now taking a shower. Visquez looks relaxed while\nrubbing her body. The shower room is filled with a thick layer of steam\nfrom the hot water. Behind Visquez a shadowy figure in the shape of ash's\nbody naked is standing behind her hidden in the steam.\n\nVisquez: Aww that feels so much better.\n\nPanel 4: the Shadowy figure reveals to be Ash naked, grabbing Visquez from\nbehind by her breasts. Visquez has a shocked expression on her face while\nblushing. Ash has a happy expression on his face.\n\nVisquez (yelling): AAHH, who is Ash! What are you doing here?\n\nAsh Ketchum: Hey Visquez, I'm just here to claim my prize.\n\nVisquez: Prize! What are you talking abou...aah.\n\n\n\nPage 4: 4 panels\n\nPanel 1: Visquez looks down as she can see Ash's hand fingering her pussy.\nVisquez is blushing and has a frustrated expression on her face trying not\nto give into pleasure. Ash's other hand is foundling one of Visquez's\nbreast.\n\nAsh Ketchum: You Visquez, you're my prize.\n\nVisquez: Dammit, I am not your trophy.\n\nViquez (thought bubble): Trying to resist but he's hitting all the right\nspots.\n\nPanel 2: Visquez is bending down with her hands on the shower room wall.\nAsh is rubbing Visques butt cheeks as he is about to put his dick into\nVisquez's pussy. Visquez is breathing hard.\n\nAsh Ketchum: I can tell you like that, now for the best part.\n\nPanel 3: Ash is now fucking Visquez in her pussy. Ash has a happy\nexpression on his face. Visquez is still blushing and has a frustrated\nexpression on her face.\n\nAsh Ketchum (yelling): YEAH!\n\nVisquez (yelling): OH ARCEUS!\n\nPanel 4: A close up of Ash's dick fucking Visquez pussy.\n\n\n\nPage 5: 4 panels\n\nPanel 1: Ash continues to fuck Visquez bend over but is also holding up one\nof Visquez's legs.\n\nAsh Ketchum: Aww, your pussy is as tight as your musicals, I love it.\n\nPanel 2: Ash is fucking Visquez in the pinball wizard sex position. Both\nAsh and Visquez have happy expressions on her faces.\n\nVisquez: I-I can't hold it in anymore, your cock feels amazing.\n\nAsh Ketchum: That's what I like to hear.\n\nPanel 3: Ash is sitting down on the shower room floor with his legs crossed\nwhile fucking Visquez in a reverse cowgirl sex position.\n\nAsh Ketchum: Visquez, I'm getting close, where do you want it?\n\nVisquez: Inside, I want it inside me.\n\nAsh Ketchum: As you wish.\n\nPanel 4: We see Ash's dick cumming inside Visquez's pussy with cum\nsquirting out. Visquez has reached climax with a happy expression on her\nface.\n\nAsh Ketchum and Visquez (yelling); AAAHHH!!!\n\n\n\nPage 6: 3 panels\n\nPanel 1: Visquez is laying on the shower room floor breathing hard and cum\noozing out of her pussy. Visquez has a happy expression on her face.\n\nVisquez: Wow, that was amazing. It felt like 10,000 volts coursing thru my\nbody.\n\nPanel 2: Ash is standing up with his hands on his hip and his dick is still\nhard covered with its own cum. Visquez is on her knees looking at Ash's\ndick with joy.\n\nAsh Ketchum: Hey Visquez, care to clean me off with your mouth?\n\nVisquez: Yes, yes, anything for you, I just can't get enough.\n\nPanel 3: Visquez is happily sucking on Ash's dick. Ash has one of his hands\non Visquez's head like if he was petting a animal.\n\nAsh Ketchum: Good Girl.\n\nVisquez: Mmmh.\n\nNarration: After successfully subduing or in this case seducing the gym\nleader Visquez Ash then decided to continue this new journey of love making\nalong with the path of becoming a pokemon master.\n\n\n\nPage 7: 4 panels\n\nPanel 1: We see an outside view of a pokemon center at night.\n\nNarration: But Ash wasn't just going to run around and screw any girl at\nrandom. He needs to feel like he's earned the right to do so. What better\nway then to target girls he recently beat in a pokemon battle.\n\nPanel 2: Kricketina is answers the door from the room she staying in at the\npokemon center. Ash was standing at the the room door facing Kricketina.\nBoth Kricketina and Ash are both happy to see each other.\n\nKricketina Kylie: Well this is a surprise what brings you here Ash? I was\nactually about to head back to shinnoh...\n\nPanel 3: Ash grabs Kricketina by her arms and french kisses Kricketina\nhard. Kricketina is blushing and has a surprise expression on her face.\n\nKricketina Kylie: Mmmh?\n\nPanel 4: The room door is then shut and a do not disturb door sign swings\nlightly on the door handle showing the door was closed fast.\n\n\n\nPage 8: 4 panels\n\nPanel 1: Ash and Kricketina are both naked except Kricktina is wearing her\nglasses and stockings. Ash and Kricketina are laying in bed together in the\nsixty-nine sex position with Kricketina on top sucking on Ash's dick and\nAsh licking Kricketina's pussy.\n\nPanel 2: A close up of Kricketina sucking on Ash's dick while also giving\nhim a hand job.\n\nPanel 3: Ash and Kricketina are still in the sixty-nine sex position. from\nthe position of view we see Ash holding Kricketina's pussy open while\nlicking it. Kricketina is looking over her shoulder in Ash's direction.\n\nKricketina Kylie: Oooh Ash, you're amazing. Your dick is delicious and your\ntongue feels so good.\n\nPanel 4: A close up of Ash with Kricketina's butt close to his face.\n\nAsh Ketchum: Don't get too excited, this is just a warm up.\n\nKricketina Kylie: Oh!\n\nAsh Ketchum: It's time to get series.\n\n\n\nPage 9: 4 panels\n\nPanel 1: We see Ash laying on the bed on his back holding Kricketina by her\narms as he fucks her in the reverse cowgirl sex position. Ash and\nKricketina both show there enjoying the sex.\n\nKricketina Kylie: Ooh yes, don't stop.\n\nPanel 2: Kricketina is now on her back with ash holding her legs up by the\nher ankles spread like a V as he continues to fuck her.\n\nKricketina Kylie: More Ash, give me more.\n\nPanel 3: Ash is now fucking Kricketina in a upside down sex position. Ash\nlooks like he's about to climax. Kricketina has a happy expression on her\nface.\n\nAsh Ketchum: Get ready Kricketina, About to cum.\n\nKricketina Kylie: Do it Ash, make me your love bug.\n\nPanel 4: Ash's climax inside Kricketina's pussy with cum squirting out.\n\nAsh Ketchum and Kricketina Kylie (yelling): AAAHHH!\n\n\n\nPage 10: 3 panels\n\nPanel 1: We see a close up of Ash's dick pulling out of Kricketina's pussy\nwith cum oozing out.\n\nOff-screen: Awww\n\nPanel 2: Ash is now laying on his back laying his head on a pillow and his\nhands behind his head. Kricketina is laying on top of Ash's body cuddling\nwith him. Ash has a happy expression on his face. Kricketina is looking\ncozy as she lays happily on top of Ash.\n\nKricketina Kylie: That was incredible. I feel like a Butterfree after it\nevolved.\n\nAsh Ketchum: Glad you got to enjoy it before you had head back to shinnoh.\n\nPanel 3: Kricketina is now sitting up next to Ash. Kricketina is happily\ngiving Ash a hand job. Ash has a happy expression on his face.\n\nKricketina Kylie: Actually I was thinking of staying a little bit longer at\nleast for round two how about it?\n\nAsh Ketchum: Sure but lets do some role play this time.\n\nKricketina Kylie: Anything for you Ash.\n\nAsh Ketchum: Alright then Kricketina, use swallow.\n\nPanel 4: Ash continues to lay on the bed while watching Kricketina Fucking\nhim happily.\n\nNarration: Another successful hook up for our hero but Ash Ketchum wasn't\ndone just yet.\n\nAsh Ketchum: Now use bounce.\n\nKricketina Kyle: AAAHHH YES!.\n\n\n\nPage 12: 4 panels\n\nPanel 1: Ash and Korrina are together in a locker room with no pants on.\nAsh has Korrina bend over with her hands on a locker as Ash fucks her in\nthe ass.\n\nNarration: Ash continue his goal to add more and more girls to his harem.\n\nKorrina: T-this is wrong b-but it feels so right.\n\nAsh Ketchum: You can say that again!\n\nPanel 2: Ash and Korrina are now fully naked. Korrina is laying on her back\non a locker room bench while Ash fucks her in her pussy while holding up\nKorrina's legs spread.\n\nKrrina: Oooh yes, I think this might be my favorite sex position.\n\nPanel 3: Ash and Marnie are in an ally together in Spikemuth. Ash has his\npants down while Marnie is only wearing her shoes and jacket. Marnie' back\nis up against the wall as Ash fucks her in her pussy while holding up one\nof Marnies legs.\n\nMarnie: T-This is not a good place to do this Ash. W-What if someone sees\nus?\n\nMarnie: Aww!\n\nAsh Ketchum: Come on, the idea of someone seeing us or not is kinda hot.\n\nPanel 4: Marinie is pen to a metal wire fence in front of her holding on to\nthe fence Ash happily fucks her pussy .Marnie's breast are pressed up to\nthe fence.\n\nMarnie: Oooh Arceus, don't stop.\n\nNarration: Ash continue on this path all the way to the World Coronation\nSeries.\n\n\n\nPage 13: 3 panels\n\nPanel 1: We see the outside of Hotel Ionia at sunset and it's snowing.\n\nNarration: Which brings us back to today. After a day celebrating and\nceremonies Ash finally gets some time to himself and with a special someone\nbut who?...lets find out.\n\nPanel 2: Ash is wearing the fancy bathrobe and talking to someone that's\noff-screen.\n\nAsh Ketchum: So... you ready for the night of your life?\n\nOff-screen: Oh Yes.\n\nPanel 3: Over on the bed we see Bea, Drasna, Iris, and Cynthia, all\ntogether naked and sitting together on the bed doing sexy poses while\nlooking at the fourth wall. Drasna is wearing her necklace with the fangs\nbeing between her breasts.\n\nCynthia: We've been waiting all day for you so don't keep us waiting any\nlonger and come join us already.\n\nOff-screen: With pleasure.\n\nPanel 4: Ash is now naked, laying on the bed with his hands behind his head\nas he enjoys watching Bea, Iris and Cynthia, licking his dick together. Bea\nis on the left side of the bed. 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Ash looks surprised with\nBea suddenly putting her pussy on his face.\n\nBea: That's right and we're not just going to sit by while you get to have\nall the fun.\n\nAsh Ketchum: Mmmmh!\n\nPanel 3: Cynthia is now behind Drasna, holder her by the hips and wearing a\nstrap-on.Cynthia is about to fuck Drasna in her butt while Drasna is still\nfucking Ash. Iris now on Drasna's side still fondling her breast. Drasna\nhas a shocked expression on her face while Iris looks happy.\n\nCynthia: Bea and Iris is right, we all came here to have a good time with\nAsh together and that's what were going to do and beside I was going to do\nthis to who ever fucked Ash first anyway so enjoy.\n\nIris: Yeah Cynthia, let her have it.\n\nDrasna: W-Wait a second, let's talk about this.\n\nPanel 4: Cynthia shoves the strap-on into Drasna butt with a big smile on\nher face. Drasna has a shocked expression on her face feeling the\nstrap-on's dildo being shoved inside her butt. 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Bea looks down to Ash.\n\nAsh Ketchum: Thanks for the save ladies but I'm done just laying around,\nit's time to get this party really started.\n\n\n\nPage 17: 4 panels\n\nPanel 1: Both Ash and Cynthia are on their knees on the bed holding Drasna\nup with her front facing up and holding her from each end. Cynthia is\nfucking Drasna's pussy with the strap-on while Ash is fucking Drasna in her\nmouth.\n\nPanel 2: Ash is fucking Bea upside down in a butter churner sex position.\n\nAsh Ketchum: Ah man Bea, I can't believe I've finally have you.\n\nBea: You trained very h-hard to get we're you are today so you've earned\nyour prize.\n\nPanel 3: Ash is fucking Iris in a spider sex position.\n\nIris: Oh Ash, why didn't we do stuff like this back when we traveled\ntogether.\n\nAsh Ketchum: You know I just was thinking the same thing.\n\nPanel 4: Ash and Drasna is double penetrating Cynthia with Ash fucking\nCynthia's pussy and Drasna fucking Cynthia's butt with her own strap-on.\nCynthia is blushing and has a pleasureful look on her face. Drasna has a\nhappy expression on her face from anal fucking Cynthia back.\n\nDrasna: Payback time.\n\nAsh Ketchum: Wow I can't believe I'm having sex with a champion.\n\nCynthia: I can't believe I'm having sex with the world champion.\n\nCynthia: aah! so good.\n\nPage 18: 4 panels\n\n\n\nPanel 1: Ash is fucking Cynthia in a folding chair sex position.\n\nPanel 2 Drasna is laying on the floor fucking Bea in the cowgirl sex\nposition with the strap-on. Iris is sitting on Drasna's face getting her\npussy licked by Drasna's\n\nPanel 3: Ash is fucking Iris in a doggy style sex position with both Ash\nand Iris facing the fourth wall.\n\nPanel 4: Bea and Drasna press their pussy's together with Ash's dick\nsandwich in between rubbing it up and down with their pussy.\n\n\n\nPage 19: 4 panels\n\nPanel 1: Ash sits on the side of the bed fucking Bea in the reverse cowgirl\nsex position. Both Ash and Bea climax together with Ash cumming inside\nBea's pussy with cum squirting out of her.\n\nBea: AAAHHH!!!\n\nPanel 2: Drasna is laying on her side with Ash fucking her in her pussy\nwhile holding up one of her legs, pointing up to the ceiling. Ash and\nDrasna both climax together with Ash cumming inside Drasna's pussy with cum\nsquirting out of her.\n\nDrasna: AAAHHH!!!\n\nPanel 3: Ash is fucking Cynthia in a doggy style sex position. Ash and\nCynthia both climax together with Ash cumming inside Cynthia's pussy with\ncum squirting out of her.\n\nCynthia: AAAHHH!!!\n\nPanel 4: Iris is laying on her back with Ash holding her legs and fucking\nher pussy. Ash and Iris both climax together with Ash cumming inside Iris's\nPussy with cum squirting out of her.\n\nIris: AAAHHH!!!\n\n\n\nPage 20: 3 panels\n\nPanel 1: In the hallway outside of Ash's room Delia stands close in front\nof the door with one hand on the door and having a proud expression on her\nface.\n\nDelia Ketchum: Hmm music to my ears.\n\nDelia Ketchum: I'm so proud of you Ash, you've came along way and now you\ngot yourself some special people in your life and to all the ladies in\nAsh's life please take good care of him, he's worth it\n\nPanel 2: Deila is walking down the hall, away from the door to Ash's room.\n\nDeila Ketchum: Now that just leaves one question...\n\nPanel 3: Back in the room, Ash lays asleep on the bed with Cynthia and Iris\ncuddle with him on his left and Drasna and Bea cuddles with him on his\nright. Everyone is asleep with happy expressions on there faces\n\nDeila Ketchum (off-screen): Like how many grandchildren I will have.\n\n\nTHE END",
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For Palcomix.com
Written By: RainbowSnake
Date: 6/27/2023
Title: Ash's Hidden Ability
Parody: Pokemon
Theme: sex, harem, orgy, storytelling, seduction, muscles, yuri, strap-on,
Characters: Ash Ketchum, Delia Ketchum, Visquez, Kricketina Kylie, Bea,
Korrina, Marnie, Drasna, Iris, and Cynthia,
Note: The comic well have narration boxes in either corners of the panels
Number of pages: 20
Page 1: 4 panels
Panel 1: We see an image of the bathroom door in the hotel room of Hotel
Ionia. The door is cracked open with steam coming out.
Panel 2: Inside of the bathroom we see Ash naked and taking a shower.
Panel 3: Ash is stepping out of the shower and putting on a fancy bathrobe.
Panel 4: Ash is staring at the fourth wall with a confident look on his
face.
Ash Ketchum: So... you ready for the night of your life?
Narration: This is Ash Ketchum, the new world champion and the reigning
monarch of Galar and it looks like he's about to have a special night with
someone but who?
Page 2: 4 panels
Panel 1: We see an image of the outside of the Ketchum's house at night.
Narraton: Well before we can answer that question we'll need to go back to
where it all started back to when Ash return home from the Alola region.
Panel 2: Ash and Delia are in the living room. Ash is sitting on the couch
and Delia is sitting in the chair. There are cups of tea on the table in
front of them both.
Delia Ketchum: Ash sweetie I think it's time we finally have the talk.
Ash Ketchum: Sure mom, what is it you want to talk about?
Delia Ketchum: Ash, what I'm about to tell is something that can only be
discuss between a mother and her son only. Trust me you'll be glad Pikachu
isn't here to hear any of this, that's why I send him and Mimey to stay at
professor Oak's lab for the night.
Panel 3: The scene is focused on Delia with her arms crossed, and giving
off a firm expression on her face.
Delia Ketchum: Ash, I am proud of how much you have accomplished and I
support you choices in life but I don't want you to live a life of pokemon
battles alone.
Ash Ketchum (off-screen): Wait, you're not telling me to quit pokemon
battles are you ?
Delia Ketchum: No Ash, I'm saying it's time for you to explore the world of
women.
Ash Ketchum (off-screen): What?
Delia Ketchum: I'm not going to let my only son run around the world
without a girl or two in his life and as you're mother...
Panel 4: Delia is standing up in front of the fireplace showing off a table
full of bottles of lube, sex toys, a flashlight sex toy, and a stack of
porno DVD's. Ash has a shocked expression on his face.
Delia Ketchum: It's my job to teach you everything to know about sex and
how to pick up girls.
Ash Ketchum (yelling): Mom were in the world did you get all that stuff.
Delia Ketchum: Now drop your pants mister, your training starts now.
Ash Ketchum (yelling): WHAT!!!
Page 3: 4 panels
Panel 1: We see a image of the Vermilion City gym.
Narration: After months of Delia's training Ash was ready to put his new
skills to the test and it looks like he has found his first target.
Panel 2: We see a shower room. Visquez is walking in naked and holding a
towel.
Visquez: What a day, after that last battle with Ash I've really worked up
a sweat.
Panel 3: Visquez is now taking a shower. Visquez looks relaxed while
rubbing her body. The shower room is filled with a thick layer of steam
from the hot water. Behind Visquez a shadowy figure in the shape of ash's
body naked is standing behind her hidden in the steam.
Visquez: Aww that feels so much better.
Panel 4: the Shadowy figure reveals to be Ash naked, grabbing Visquez from
behind by her breasts. Visquez has a shocked expression on her face while
blushing. Ash has a happy expression on his face.
Visquez (yelling): AAHH, who is Ash! What are you doing here?
Ash Ketchum: Hey Visquez, I'm just here to claim my prize.
Visquez: Prize! What are you talking abou...aah.
Page 4: 4 panels
Panel 1: Visquez looks down as she can see Ash's hand fingering her pussy.
Visquez is blushing and has a frustrated expression on her face trying not
to give into pleasure. Ash's other hand is foundling one of Visquez's
breast.
Ash Ketchum: You Visquez, you're my prize.
Visquez: Dammit, I am not your trophy.
Viquez (thought bubble): Trying to resist but he's hitting all the right
spots.
Panel 2: Visquez is bending down with her hands on the shower room wall.
Ash is rubbing Visques butt cheeks as he is about to put his dick into
Visquez's pussy. Visquez is breathing hard.
Ash Ketchum: I can tell you like that, now for the best part.
Panel 3: Ash is now fucking Visquez in her pussy. Ash has a happy
expression on his face. Visquez is still blushing and has a frustrated
expression on her face.
Ash Ketchum (yelling): YEAH!
Visquez (yelling): OH ARCEUS!
Panel 4: A close up of Ash's dick fucking Visquez pussy.
Page 5: 4 panels
Panel 1: Ash continues to fuck Visquez bend over but is also holding up one
of Visquez's legs.
Ash Ketchum: Aww, your pussy is as tight as your musicals, I love it.
Panel 2: Ash is fucking Visquez in the pinball wizard sex position. Both
Ash and Visquez have happy expressions on her faces.
Visquez: I-I can't hold it in anymore, your cock feels amazing.
Ash Ketchum: That's what I like to hear.
Panel 3: Ash is sitting down on the shower room floor with his legs crossed
while fucking Visquez in a reverse cowgirl sex position.
Ash Ketchum: Visquez, I'm getting close, where do you want it?
Visquez: Inside, I want it inside me.
Ash Ketchum: As you wish.
Panel 4: We see Ash's dick cumming inside Visquez's pussy with cum
squirting out. Visquez has reached climax with a happy expression on her
face.
Ash Ketchum and Visquez (yelling); AAAHHH!!!
Page 6: 3 panels
Panel 1: Visquez is laying on the shower room floor breathing hard and cum
oozing out of her pussy. Visquez has a happy expression on her face.
Visquez: Wow, that was amazing. It felt like 10,000 volts coursing thru my
body.
Panel 2: Ash is standing up with his hands on his hip and his dick is still
hard covered with its own cum. Visquez is on her knees looking at Ash's
dick with joy.
Ash Ketchum: Hey Visquez, care to clean me off with your mouth?
Visquez: Yes, yes, anything for you, I just can't get enough.
Panel 3: Visquez is happily sucking on Ash's dick. Ash has one of his hands
on Visquez's head like if he was petting a animal.
Ash Ketchum: Good Girl.
Visquez: Mmmh.
Narration: After successfully subduing or in this case seducing the gym
leader Visquez Ash then decided to continue this new journey of love making
along with the path of becoming a pokemon master.
Page 7: 4 panels
Panel 1: We see an outside view of a pokemon center at night.
Narration: But Ash wasn't just going to run around and screw any girl at
random. He needs to feel like he's earned the right to do so. What better
way then to target girls he recently beat in a pokemon battle.
Panel 2: Kricketina is answers the door from the room she staying in at the
pokemon center. Ash was standing at the the room door facing Kricketina.
Both Kricketina and Ash are both happy to see each other.
Kricketina Kylie: Well this is a surprise what brings you here Ash? I was
actually about to head back to shinnoh...
Panel 3: Ash grabs Kricketina by her arms and french kisses Kricketina
hard. Kricketina is blushing and has a surprise expression on her face.
Kricketina Kylie: Mmmh?
Panel 4: The room door is then shut and a do not disturb door sign swings
lightly on the door handle showing the door was closed fast.
Page 8: 4 panels
Panel 1: Ash and Kricketina are both naked except Kricktina is wearing her
glasses and stockings. Ash and Kricketina are laying in bed together in the
sixty-nine sex position with Kricketina on top sucking on Ash's dick and
Ash licking Kricketina's pussy.
Panel 2: A close up of Kricketina sucking on Ash's dick while also giving
him a hand job.
Panel 3: Ash and Kricketina are still in the sixty-nine sex position. from
the position of view we see Ash holding Kricketina's pussy open while
licking it. Kricketina is looking over her shoulder in Ash's direction.
Kricketina Kylie: Oooh Ash, you're amazing. Your dick is delicious and your
tongue feels so good.
Panel 4: A close up of Ash with Kricketina's butt close to his face.
Ash Ketchum: Don't get too excited, this is just a warm up.
Kricketina Kylie: Oh!
Ash Ketchum: It's time to get series.
Page 9: 4 panels
Panel 1: We see Ash laying on the bed on his back holding Kricketina by her
arms as he fucks her in the reverse cowgirl sex position. Ash and
Kricketina both show there enjoying the sex.
Kricketina Kylie: Ooh yes, don't stop.
Panel 2: Kricketina is now on her back with ash holding her legs up by the
her ankles spread like a V as he continues to fuck her.
Kricketina Kylie: More Ash, give me more.
Panel 3: Ash is now fucking Kricketina in a upside down sex position. Ash
looks like he's about to climax. Kricketina has a happy expression on her
face.
Ash Ketchum: Get ready Kricketina, About to cum.
Kricketina Kylie: Do it Ash, make me your love bug.
Panel 4: Ash's climax inside Kricketina's pussy with cum squirting out.
Ash Ketchum and Kricketina Kylie (yelling): AAAHHH!
Page 10: 3 panels
Panel 1: We see a close up of Ash's dick pulling out of Kricketina's pussy
with cum oozing out.
Off-screen: Awww
Panel 2: Ash is now laying on his back laying his head on a pillow and his
hands behind his head. Kricketina is laying on top of Ash's body cuddling
with him. Ash has a happy expression on his face. Kricketina is looking
cozy as she lays happily on top of Ash.
Kricketina Kylie: That was incredible. I feel like a Butterfree after it
evolved.
Ash Ketchum: Glad you got to enjoy it before you had head back to shinnoh.
Panel 3: Kricketina is now sitting up next to Ash. Kricketina is happily
giving Ash a hand job. Ash has a happy expression on his face.
Kricketina Kylie: Actually I was thinking of staying a little bit longer at
least for round two how about it?
Ash Ketchum: Sure but lets do some role play this time.
Kricketina Kylie: Anything for you Ash.
Ash Ketchum: Alright then Kricketina, use swallow.
Panel 4: Ash continues to lay on the bed while watching Kricketina Fucking
him happily.
Narration: Another successful hook up for our hero but Ash Ketchum wasn't
done just yet.
Ash Ketchum: Now use bounce.
Kricketina Kyle: AAAHHH YES!.
Page 12: 4 panels
Panel 1: Ash and Korrina are together in a locker room with no pants on.
Ash has Korrina bend over with her hands on a locker as Ash fucks her in
the ass.
Narration: Ash continue his goal to add more and more girls to his harem.
Korrina: T-this is wrong b-but it feels so right.
Ash Ketchum: You can say that again!
Panel 2: Ash and Korrina are now fully naked. Korrina is laying on her back
on a locker room bench while Ash fucks her in her pussy while holding up
Korrina's legs spread.
Krrina: Oooh yes, I think this might be my favorite sex position.
Panel 3: Ash and Marnie are in an ally together in Spikemuth. Ash has his
pants down while Marnie is only wearing her shoes and jacket. Marnie' back
is up against the wall as Ash fucks her in her pussy while holding up one
of Marnies legs.
Marnie: T-This is not a good place to do this Ash. W-What if someone sees
us?
Marnie: Aww!
Ash Ketchum: Come on, the idea of someone seeing us or not is kinda hot.
Panel 4: Marinie is pen to a metal wire fence in front of her holding on to
the fence Ash happily fucks her pussy .Marnie's breast are pressed up to
the fence.
Marnie: Oooh Arceus, don't stop.
Narration: Ash continue on this path all the way to the World Coronation
Series.
Page 13: 3 panels
Panel 1: We see the outside of Hotel Ionia at sunset and it's snowing.
Narration: Which brings us back to today. After a day celebrating and
ceremonies Ash finally gets some time to himself and with a special someone
but who?...lets find out.
Panel 2: Ash is wearing the fancy bathrobe and talking to someone that's
off-screen.
Ash Ketchum: So... you ready for the night of your life?
Off-screen: Oh Yes.
Panel 3: Over on the bed we see Bea, Drasna, Iris, and Cynthia, all
together naked and sitting together on the bed doing sexy poses while
looking at the fourth wall. Drasna is wearing her necklace with the fangs
being between her breasts.
Cynthia: We've been waiting all day for you so don't keep us waiting any
longer and come join us already.
Off-screen: With pleasure.
Panel 4: Ash is now naked, laying on the bed with his hands behind his head
as he enjoys watching Bea, Iris and Cynthia, licking his dick together. Bea
is on the left side of the bed. Iris is on the right side of the bed.
Cynthia is laying in the middle near the end of the bed.
Ash Kecthum: Okay ladies so who would like to go first?
Page 14: 4 panels
Panel 1: Drasna's lower body from her butt down is standing on the bed over
Ash with her legs spread. Ash is looking up at Drasna with a happy
expression on his face.
Drasna: I think I'll be the one to first.
Ash Ketchum: Well that go right a head.
Panel 2: Drasna is now on her knees bringing her pussy ever closer to Ash's
dick. Bea and Iris are looking at Dransna and pouting that they didn't get
to go first. Iris is doing that pouting thing where you puff up your cheek.
Drasna is in her normal cheerful mood.
Iris: I wanted to go first.
Bea: Oh come on Drasna.
Drasna: Sorry ladies but you heard him, he's all mine.
Ash Ketchum: Don't worry girls you'll all get your turns.
Drasna: Will see after I get done with you.
Panel 3: Ash is having sex with Drasna with Drasna on top. Ash and Drasna
both have happy expressions on their faces. Ash holds Drasna by her hips.
Drasna: Oooh yes, this feels amazing.
Ash Ketchum: Same here, your pussy feels so nice.
Drasna: Haha Ash, you make this old dragon feel like a young hatchling.
Panel 4: Drasna is now has her hand on Ash arms like she holding him down
as she fucks Ash even faster with a aggressively happy expression on her
face. Ash looks like he's about to cum form Drasna hard thrusting.
Drasna: And hatchlings need to eat so give me that milk already.
Ash Ketchum: Aah easy there Drasna save some for everyone.
Page 15: 4 panels
Panel 1: Iris surprises Drasna as she grabs her breasts from behind and
fondle them.
Iris: Not so fast, you're not going to keep Ash all to yourself.
Drasna: Oh my, I guess you couldn't wait your turn then huh?
Panel 2: Bea sits on Ash's face while blushing. Ash looks surprised with
Bea suddenly putting her pussy on his face.
Bea: That's right and we're not just going to sit by while you get to have
all the fun.
Ash Ketchum: Mmmmh!
Panel 3: Cynthia is now behind Drasna, holder her by the hips and wearing a
strap-on.Cynthia is about to fuck Drasna in her butt while Drasna is still
fucking Ash. Iris now on Drasna's side still fondling her breast. Drasna
has a shocked expression on her face while Iris looks happy.
Cynthia: Bea and Iris is right, we all came here to have a good time with
Ash together and that's what were going to do and beside I was going to do
this to who ever fucked Ash first anyway so enjoy.
Iris: Yeah Cynthia, let her have it.
Drasna: W-Wait a second, let's talk about this.
Panel 4: Cynthia shoves the strap-on into Drasna butt with a big smile on
her face. Drasna has a shocked expression on her face feeling the
strap-on's dildo being shoved inside her butt. Drasna's eyes are open for
this scene.
Drasna (yelling): AAAHHH!
Page 16: 3 panels
Panel 1: Ash continues to lay flat on his back on the bed licking Bea's
pussy while Drasna fucks him. Iris is sitting on Ash's stomach while
fondling Drasna's breasts. Cynthia continues to fuck Drasna's butt with the
strap-on. Everyone shows they all feel sexual pleasure from the orgy.
Panel 2: Cynthia continues to fuck Drasna in her but. Iris is sucking on
one of Drasna's breasts while still foundling the other one. Drasna looks
like she is enjoying herself.
Cynthia: So Drasna, are you going to play nice and share?
Drasna: Oooh yes I well just don't stop pounding my ass.
Panel 3: Ash lifts Bea's butt up a little so he can talk. Bea's pussy is
dripping wet. Bea looks down to Ash.
Ash Ketchum: Thanks for the save ladies but I'm done just laying around,
it's time to get this party really started.
Page 17: 4 panels
Panel 1: Both Ash and Cynthia are on their knees on the bed holding Drasna
up with her front facing up and holding her from each end. Cynthia is
fucking Drasna's pussy with the strap-on while Ash is fucking Drasna in her
mouth.
Panel 2: Ash is fucking Bea upside down in a butter churner sex position.
Ash Ketchum: Ah man Bea, I can't believe I've finally have you.
Bea: You trained very h-hard to get we're you are today so you've earned
your prize.
Panel 3: Ash is fucking Iris in a spider sex position.
Iris: Oh Ash, why didn't we do stuff like this back when we traveled
together.
Ash Ketchum: You know I just was thinking the same thing.
Panel 4: Ash and Drasna is double penetrating Cynthia with Ash fucking
Cynthia's pussy and Drasna fucking Cynthia's butt with her own strap-on.
Cynthia is blushing and has a pleasureful look on her face. Drasna has a
happy expression on her face from anal fucking Cynthia back.
Drasna: Payback time.
Ash Ketchum: Wow I can't believe I'm having sex with a champion.
Cynthia: I can't believe I'm having sex with the world champion.
Cynthia: aah! so good.
Page 18: 4 panels
Panel 1: Ash is fucking Cynthia in a folding chair sex position.
Panel 2 Drasna is laying on the floor fucking Bea in the cowgirl sex
position with the strap-on. Iris is sitting on Drasna's face getting her
pussy licked by Drasna's
Panel 3: Ash is fucking Iris in a doggy style sex position with both Ash
and Iris facing the fourth wall.
Panel 4: Bea and Drasna press their pussy's together with Ash's dick
sandwich in between rubbing it up and down with their pussy.
Page 19: 4 panels
Panel 1: Ash sits on the side of the bed fucking Bea in the reverse cowgirl
sex position. Both Ash and Bea climax together with Ash cumming inside
Bea's pussy with cum squirting out of her.
Bea: AAAHHH!!!
Panel 2: Drasna is laying on her side with Ash fucking her in her pussy
while holding up one of her legs, pointing up to the ceiling. Ash and
Drasna both climax together with Ash cumming inside Drasna's pussy with cum
squirting out of her.
Drasna: AAAHHH!!!
Panel 3: Ash is fucking Cynthia in a doggy style sex position. Ash and
Cynthia both climax together with Ash cumming inside Cynthia's pussy with
cum squirting out of her.
Cynthia: AAAHHH!!!
Panel 4: Iris is laying on her back with Ash holding her legs and fucking
her pussy. Ash and Iris both climax together with Ash cumming inside Iris's
Pussy with cum squirting out of her.
Iris: AAAHHH!!!
Page 20: 3 panels
Panel 1: In the hallway outside of Ash's room Delia stands close in front
of the door with one hand on the door and having a proud expression on her
face.
Delia Ketchum: Hmm music to my ears.
Delia Ketchum: I'm so proud of you Ash, you've came along way and now you
got yourself some special people in your life and to all the ladies in
Ash's life please take good care of him, he's worth it
Panel 2: Deila is walking down the hall, away from the door to Ash's room.
Deila Ketchum: Now that just leaves one question...
Panel 3: Back in the room, Ash lays asleep on the bed with Cynthia and Iris
cuddle with him on his left and Drasna and Bea cuddles with him on his
right. Everyone is asleep with happy expressions on there faces
Deila Ketchum (off-screen): Like how many grandchildren I will have.
THE END",
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